MANMARZIYAN – thank you friend..! Episode 1


Hey guys..… so here is the first episode
link for prologue
I’m continuing the episode with the same names .. arjun radhika neil and sam… soryy for the confusion… I thought to something different but it would be better if I write the same names…
( another point radhika is a modern girl in this one… )
Happy reading

A big room is shown … looks like a cabin …. A desk which is fully messed up with files…. A girl is sleeping keeping her head on the desk….
“ utth…” (wake up )
A boy is trying to wake this girl…. But no response she was in deep slumber.
“utth daffer… utth..” ( wake up idiot…wake up..)
“sone de na yaar.. karoon bhi tho kya karoon…” ( let me sleep na .. what should I do now..)
“get upp..!!!” he shouts in her ear..
This girl jerks off and get up…
“idiot… raath bar yeh stupid sa presentation karti rahi…ab yeh rakshas mujhe sone bhi nahi de raha hain…” (Idiot I kept working on this stupid presentation whole night and now this devil is not even letting me to sleep..)
“what .. come again.. kal raat bhi aise hi soti rahi..” (yesterday also u were sleeping lyk this only..)
“shut up..!and let me sleep..”
“You shut up..! abhi presentation hain… wake up..!!”he starts shouting in her ears…
“aa.. idiot im gonna kill u …”
This girl starts running behind him….
“pehle pakad toh sahi..”he winks at that girl
“neil tu toh gaya aaj…” ( u will die in my hands neil.)
They both are running like idiots in the cabin.. this girl tries to catch him but bad luck he escapes every time….! Suddenly a girl enters the cabin
“sir you have…” she stops speaking as soon as she see them
This girl caught the boy by circling her arm around his neck by pulling him down and stars beating him …
“chasni .. chasni.. im sorry yaar.. chod de…” (chasni .. Im sorry leave me…)
They both are radhika and neil
The girl who came in adjusted her throat to bring them to normal world.. they both jerked off and came to normal position and both of them start setting their hair…
“yes tina…any work..??” his voice became stern again…
“yes sir meeting … both of u should be there in 10 min..”
“hmm.. I know .. you can go now..”
“ok sir..”
The girl started to leave
Tinas pov,
Aaj bhi ek naya poster.. I mean both of them will be in weird positions when ever I see them .. but whenever I ask radika the answer she gives is “WE R JST FRNZ..” common yaar Im not a small kid..i can understand . … but if in case they are really friends then they should be in Guinness world record as “BEST FRIENDS FOR EVER AND EVER..” lets see what will happen….
They attend the meeting and it was successful..
Now radhika was fully exhausted… she wanted to run away.. and sleep sleep and only sleep…. Neil noticed this…
“chalo chasni ghar chaltein hain…” (come chasni we will go home)
Radhika face brightened lyk LED light …
“come yaar I thought to run away..”
“I knew it..”
“don’t be so stupid.. no one will believe if they see the radhika mishra sitting silent wit out irritating anyone..”
Chalo lets leave ….. both of them were at the entrance of the office …. They were walking out … a man of 50’s entered … he was the one with whom they had meeting a while back
“so Mr. malhotra it was pleasure meeting you..”
“me too sir..”
“leaving home so early…?”
“why..? he will come with us or what…?”radhika whispered in neils ears…
He gives a glare to radhika
“yaa actually we did over time yesterday so she wanted to have rest..”
“oh.. so you people stay in the same house…?”
“Why is he interviewing you…?” again radhika whispered in his ears…
“well.. yes!”
“that’s great … I think its high time … ill leave take care Mrs.malhotra”
“mrs . malhotra…??” radhika shouted..
“well I jst said in advance..??”
“sir.. you have mistaken “neil
“Oops !sorry guys.. but u people really look like a couple..”
Both radhika and neil gave him a fake smile…
“ok then Mr. Malhotra … ill leave…”he went away
As soon as he moved out both raneil move towards the car and started to leave…

Precap: samaira entry…

That’s it for today guys.. hope you lyk it. please do comment ….. and thank you so much sathya di and Jessie for ur suggestions … criticism accepted…

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  1. Sooper story….
    Who are pairs here ardhika and nesam??

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank you faima … obviously that will be the pair I can’t imagine radhika with neil thanks again for commenting?

  2. Jessie

    Deekshu…. hey.. the pleasure is mine dear.. u know it rocks when reading those names… crazy fan yaar.. n btw wat a lovely opening… RaNeil bond is one awesome thing..loved it..Tina.. oh..babe they are gonna be in Guinness.. wat say..?
    Waiting 4 sam entry..loved last part..Thanks 4 holding on with original names..TC n loads of love

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank you so much …. loss of hugs from my side heads luv u… ????

  3. Myra

    Amazing episode…lovely start….glad you decided to switch over to the original names….seems more fun that way….nice beginning…eager for the next!

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank-you Myra …

  4. Brin

    Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank you Brin.. ??

  5. Sweetie

    I just loved it dear..Glad you started writing on the names of serial itself,crazy fans we are,so it would be a little difficult to get used to other names..I think Tina’s thought will come true like Guinness World Record will definitely hold RaNeil names as BEST FRIENDS FOREVER,what say.. 😀 Waiting for the next chapter..Really loved RaNeil bond.. 🙂 Stay blessed and take care.. 🙂

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank you so much sweetie … I my self don’t know what has gotten into me that time… but it’s better with their names only… thanks again.. lods of love from my side…

  6. Jewel

    nice chapter deeksha….raneil scenes are superb… please post next one soon…

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank you jewel I’ll try to post asap..! Take care … ?

  7. Rossy

    Oops …thanks dear for writing with original names..its awesome to see raneil bonding ..they are bff…WOW ?

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank you Di.. hope I can call u Di… I’m glad h liked it … n thanks for suggesting me…! ???

  8. Sammy

    raneil so funny .bring arjun soon

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank you Sammy … don’t worry arjun will enter with a dhamaka….

  9. Gauri

    Awesome Deeksha 🙂 loved it

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank u gauri Di… I’m a very big fan of ur FF… I’m glad u liked it..

  10. Sathya

    Nice episode deeksha…. It’s fun to watch raneil fighting in cabin n Tina’s thought is a common one… Glad that u changed the names… It looks so real when we read as ardhika n nesam… Thanks for taking the suggestions… ???

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank u sathya Di… I should be thank full to u..

  11. Really loved this raneil bond here n ppl r mistaking them as a couple. Love that they act childish and mature at the same time. Waiting for the next

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Giu Di… I’m so happy u liked it…! Luv u… ??

  12. Awesome 🙂

  13. S.v

    Super chashni and idiot are back. Its really nice to see their names. Sry yaar eek pagal fan hoon main so a bit possessive, and nice start next part soon .

    1. Sree_deeksha

      thank you so much SV im glad u liked it….

  14. _Ritu

    Superb dear…thnx for switching d names..coz we are die hard ArDhika and NeSam’s fan..loved RaNeil’s entry waiting for Sam nd Arjun to come in d picture…post soon…loads of love. 🙂

    1. Sree_deeksha

      thnaks ritu…

  15. Awesome, marvellous. ..keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads, muaaaaahhhhhh

    1. Sree_deeksha

      thnak you roma… love u too… keep reading…

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