Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake (Prologue)


My Sweet Mistake..


“Its a Small Misunderstanding, Nandu” Arjun pleaded. Nandhini turned all angry towards Arjun and said “Its a Grave mistake u did.. U did disobey my words..
She isnt the girl whom I chose for you.. Do u think I dont have any rights in deciding your life.”

Arjun.” Nandu..Relax..Let me explain.. U are getting too hyper now a days..”

Nandini,” Now I got it.. Am getting too hyper because its My Revenge..not Yours.. why should u spoil ur life in this, isn’t Arjun..Thats y you choosed a girl of your choice and married when am not here..” she let a sigh and continued “I couldn’t believe is this the same Arjun who said he would do anything for my smile.. You forgot my pains.. Your Promise went floating in the air when u saw your girl,I think” Arjun went and sat on his knees near Nandini who just calmed a bit after pacing around the hotel room for nearly twenty minutes..He lifted his head to see Rana Kaka who was already looking Arjun with all his sympathy.. Arjun said ” Nandu.. Do u know who she is? I thought of giving u a surprise.After all its you who wanted me to marry in your absence.”
Nandini jerked his hand,” I dont care who she is.. Dont try to calm me Arjun.. You spoiled my plans. My efforts.. Is it for this I gave my all attention to you.I dont want to see your face.Just leave the girl behind,I will take care of what is to be done.. Throw her out of your life If u Want me back.. Thats it.. Is tat clear?”
She stood up and Turned towards Rana to say something but Arjun spoke “No.. I mean..Listen Nandhu..She is..” Before he could finish Nandini Yelled “Enough.. Throw her out !! From ur house..ur life..ur heart..”

Nandhini started explaining something to Rana, but Arjun was lost in his world of thoughts listening the words from Nandhini.. It pained to think to Throw his love Radhika..
Arjun couldn’t withstand it even though it is a word. This is not wat I expected, what Nandu di told.. From the night of marriage I was waiting to meet Nandini di to clear the air, but she isn’t listening. I did what she said n planned, How could I forget Radhika.. What s the need to throw her out of house and from my heart for this Revenge..’He was confused, his thoughts were broken When Nandhini again yelled to Rana Kaka to listen only her. Rana kaka Just nodded.. Arjun thought its time to speak., she is just angry that he asked her to stay in hotel. She dint let him speak from Yesterday night..His mobile vibrated with a message from Radhika..he smiled and saw Nandini n said..” but Nandu..”

Nandini, “not a word.. ” Arjun Smirked n continued ‘She is Radhika Khanna.. Khannaa!” Nandini had a confused look ” What..”
Arjun..”Yess.. Radhika Khanna.. Daughter of Samrat n Piyali Khanna..Future owner of Birdsong.. Apple of Samrat’s eye n now Radhika Arjun Mehra”
Arjun finally said in one go and gave Nandhini a Proud look.. Rana kaka’s mouth hung open. Arjun blinked his eyes as confirmation to his confused Nandini di n stood with his
hands in pockets.. Now Nandhini smiled little.His Mobile again vibrated with Radhika’s Picture..


So Guys..This is Jessie. And am trying a fan fiction for the first time. Share ur opinions n views abt this prologue..Pls do ignore Typos and grammatical errors.

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  1. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Swthrt am squealing in excitement. This is a dream come true for me, for long I have been wondering how wonderful would it be if u started writing and here u are with ur own ff, am dancing right now, doing the moonwalk in my bedroom.
    Am excited for this story waiting for the next one.
    Love u so so much ?????????

    1. Jessie

      Sweetheart.. am just squealing in happiness.. I got d first comment from u.. Yay!! Am so happy seeing ur excitement..moonwalk!! Wah..swthrt.. Thanks a ton.. will post u too???

  2. Sree_deeksha

    Hey Jessie..!! awsome start dear…. waiting for the next… luv u… update soon!!

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Deekshu..luv u dear.. Will post soon

  3. Catchy story ……..waiting fr next ….
    Plz be soon

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Shreya.. will post soon..

  4. i have always loved mmz ff..n yours is awesome.. go on…

    1. Jessie

      Thanks sona..will post d next one soon

  5. Brin

    Awesome start Jessie, eagerly waiting for the next update. πŸ™‚

    1. Jessie

      Thanks lot Brin.. Will post soon

  6. Haha dear jessie ..time to show my comment skills..first of all dear welcome to writer’s group ….a big hugggg …and now the ahh .chappy …smirk wohhoo radhika khanna ..awesome …and yeah i also wanted you to write …so like a good sweet girl …update next soon …ANd ARjun is in love with her …great ..iam loving it

    1. Jessie

      Yaar sammy.. bear hug.. Thanks 4 welcoming me.. will update soon.. a good girl…Am so happy u loved it.. Thanks a ton dear.. TC n loads of love

  7. S.v

    Jessie is this u baby ?? Oh my god arambamey asathala irukey super baby super. Radhika khannava ok arjun radhikava love pandran adhu super but still in revenge. U know what i wanted to ask u to write a ff coz i love ur comment so wanted to enjoy the ff so awesome dear. Romba nalla irukku. ???? i love u sooo soo much dear. Love u soo much . Jessie next part eppo sema start baby sema start. Jessie love u soo much

    1. Jessie

      Thanks a ton SV darling… naane.. idhu naane … andha prologue ezthunadum naane… kadhaiye ezhudha poradhum naane.. ??? lol.. u made me 2 laugh like anything.. partheengala.. I read ur mind n wrote one..Will post next one soon.. love u too dear…??ungal anbuku naan thalai vanangukiren..

  8. Rossy

    Ooooh my my Jessica Khanna…finally….its a dream come true moment…m jumping up to sky level n fell down….obviously on my bed…its superb darling…my jasu dear u don’t even imagine how much happy I am…n tu really surprised me this time…story posted before my prediction…i don’t want Arjun to be a puppet of nandini …no vengeance plzzzzzzzz…and update first chapter soon…u know m barely holding my patience when its u…yipeeeeee…hip hip hurrrray…..

    1. Jessie

      Rosie darling….. bear hug.. I was smiling reading ur comment..yup.. it was earlier than our revenge..Arjun not a puppet..! Am on cloud nine after ur comments.. love u tons Rosie..!! Will post soon

  9. Tara

    omg omg omg omg omggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg…………………………
    i cant just wait for the next part.. m so so so excited…
    u knw i was very sad when i watched mmz online last day.. i wanted to relive those moments…
    i feel ur ff will be the best…
    love u dear for this.. muahhh muahh l
    yippieee m so happy….
    post the next one soon… aaaaaaaaaaa cant wait..

    1. Jessie

      Hey Tara.. thanks for d lovely words.. the entire story will be different from original Mmz..I will make it clear in first chapter..glad tat u liked it..

      1. Tara

        never mind.. i want ardhika.. thats all

  10. Awesome start Jessie… trying to write something for our favourite Manmarzian… awesome… post soon n tc

    1. Jessie

      Yes dear.. thanks chandana.

  11. Shree

    Adra saka… naan vandutene… tantadoi… my love… my Jessie is here!! Oru valiya en kanavu palichiduchu… en request a kadavul in kadula potutar…

    This is insane.. haha.. he married Radhika.. says he loves her… Nandu angry… Rana kaka trying to calm it… Arjun saying she’s a Khanna.. Now Nandini will be happy… lol.. illa romba shock aayitalo… Rana ku adhuku mela shock…

    Idhu super.. seekrama post pannu

    Love you ??

    1. Jessie

      Vaa ma.. minnal.. unakaga vazhi mel vizhi vaithu waitinggg!!.thanks dear.. Nandini will be happy.. later shock.. kadavul nalavar pola..?? when I write it has 2 be like me oly.. Insane.. will take u insane world..! Love u girl…

  12. Sooper yaar ….nxt one update soon dear

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Faima.. will post soon

  13. Sathya

    Whooooooo jaaaazzzz…. What a surprise… Ha ha ha the long awaited thing had happened finally…. U became the writer now…. Hi fi jaaaazzzz…. Now coming to the chapter…. We used to say first impression is the best impression…n u proved it here… The first chappy becomes the best one for now…. So pls pls don’t delay more n post the next one soon… With rads intro…. N if rads is Khanna then what abt sam?

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Sathyaa.. hifi… love ur compliment.. Sam is also khanna.. will post soon

  14. Sangee

    super jessie waiting forthe next epi….wat Radika Khanna…
    is dis radikas idea? since she msged him?
    just a guess if not so sryyy

    1. Jessie

      Thanks sangee.. not her idea. She is Radhika khanna here.. will post d next one soon

  15. Gauri

    Radhika Khanna ….awesome what a start Jess….welcome …..and this was amazing ….just cant wait for the next part …next one pls make it longer…love u

    1. Jessie

      Thank u so much Gauri.. yea..sure.. will write longer.. Love u too

  16. Naaga

    Hi Jessie Story supera irukku ma ? continue pannu.

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Naaga.. kandipa panren..!

  17. Aadia

    Jessie……my dear girl..all i want to ask you is that,why so late?you had to do it earlier …plot is superb,Arjun loves Rads..and Radhika Khanna?pls update asap dear…

    1. Jessie

      Oh.. Tats so sweet.. Thank u and yes.. Have posted next one

  18. Goood start sooon πŸ™‚

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Neetz..

  19. interesting story…mindblowing ……..eagerly waiting next one.

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Subha ..

  20. Sweetie

    My darling sister,I’m dancing in happiness now..Wow!! I’m so happy to see your name in author’s section.. πŸ˜€ Lovely prologue yaar.. πŸ˜€ Please post first chappy soon,love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

    1. Jessie

      Manasaaaa.. U danced coz of me! wow!! Thanks a lot. Love u too..
      Has posted d next one

  21. Dipika

    Jessieeee darling first of all sooo sorry for coming late here dearryyy…..n who said its ur first was soooo fabulous tht i can’t believe u writing firat time..its so awsome….radhika khanna….ohhhh…seems soooo much twist ob there way…nandu wants revenge….. Its so interesting…. Pls first chappy soon…love u..muhha

  22. Jessie

    Deepzzzz… No sorry plz.. Thanks a ton for the lovely encouragement.. Glad that u liked..

    Love u too..

  23. JESSSSSSSSSSS……wowwwwwwwww……..awesoooooomeeee….what a prologue….like a arrow shot to direct target….our heart…..very interesting n lovely. ….so rads is samrat n piyali’s daughter n now arjun’s beloved wife….I’m so curious already to know the story of this marriage n upcoming revange n intense love story of ardhika. …keep it up honeyyy. …I didn’t know u r going to start this ff…missed lots of convo I guess…now I know…….love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug πŸ˜‰ β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ™‚

    1. Jessie

      Romaaa di.. bear hug…. I was awaiting for ur review.. thanks a ton… u made me happy…1st happy posted di… love u loads muaah

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