Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake – Chapter 9

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Chapter -9

Arjun kept the phone aside., the words ‘Ajju bhaiya’ still lingered in his mind.. His mind was stuck with the thoughts and college incidents which only lead him against Radhika..

” Everyone is just a Toy for her..Arjun… I fear we lost our Preeti.” Vivek’s words flashed a second.. He sat in his bed with a thud..
‘how could I.. how could I forget it this soon.. why did I propose her like a fool,after what she did to preeti..’ He locked his hands behind his neck and sat stooped, thinking a part of him is still in love with her… He mentally cursed himself recalling his behavior… ‘May be my attentiveness in that
stupid project took a toll on my brain’ his mind convinced him with a mock.

” Yes..Kishore” he answered as he received a call..


“Okay… after an!” he replied glancing his wall clock..

He was in his kitchen, murmuring himself not to fall on her traps again.. “Not again Radhika” he gritted through his teeth, as he chopped veggies vigorously, only to cut his finger instead.. Not only a part of him, his whole was against his perception… He threw the knife aside,grabbed his car keys after dressing his wound…

He drove to prena’s place.. He doesn’t know in which flat she lives.. He flipped a thousand rupee note to the security over there and gave Radhika’s vehicle number..The security came after 10 mins nodding his negatively..

“Sir.. The car hasn’t been parked here” he said..

“Is there any other place for car parking for the owners here.. any nearby car shelter” he asked tapping his fingers on the wheel..

Security guy grinned widely, gesturing the ample vacant space.. Arjun glared him bad which made him to say “Sir..I know this madam.. white BMW car..She dint come still ..usually she comes by 7”

Arjun hummed in response before trying her number again.. “Have you seen her? Arrogant!”, he said as he scrolled for Raghav’s number..

“Yes sir.. She is so beautiful and…” security guy stopped abruptly looking Arjun’s warning look.. he extended another 1000 rupee note., his fore finger raised itself before the note implying a warning. Security gulped saying, ” I won’t sir.. not even to Bhabhiji”… he blinked looking the arrogant mannerism of the man behind the wheel..

A immediate smile shone in Arjun’s face listening,’Bhabhiji’ ..

“Hello..sir!” Raghav spoke

“Did Radhika come home?”, he asked as he reversed his car.

“No sir.”

“Is there any specific place she goes when she is upset?” he asked waiting for the reply..

“Yes..Beach..Baby ji comes to beac”

“Which one you are looking at?” he asked clearly knowing Raghav would be on a search.

“Ju.. Juh…” his voice broke expressing his fear..

“Okay.. Call me when you meet her..” he said more like a order.. He banged the steering wheel angrily.. The day’s evening flashed before him.. It’s almost 9.30.. almost 3 hrs she left the office.. he drove to nearest petrol bulk thoughtfully… he asked the guy while paying..”which is the fartheset beach view from the city.. I mean… from here… The guy saw him like a alien.. “I am new to this city..” Arjun reasoned realizing the meaning of that look…

“Marine drive..” a guy suggested from behind the one whom Arjun asked.. Arjun doesn’t want to look like a fool anymore.. he drove with that.. ‘Am I not new here and with the beaches Mumbai has., where am I going to find her.. Radhika is not a night person, and she is not the one to wander alone’.. his thoughts fueled those suppressed panic flames inside him. His vehicle gained a new momentum after that.. He desperately wanted to see her now.. all lively and naughty… somewhere his heart raced for her smile.. he felt an unknown anger raise inside him against her parents.. he saw tall buildings far away.. he quickly drove towards Nariman Point..



Preeti’s Residence…

Neil was preparing dinner with Preeti after attending back to back events in that weekend with her… Kavin withdrew himself looking Neil in his self.. His words played again as he saw Neil smiling as he tossed something in a pan..

“Neil..Don’t you think you are degrading yourself by back stabbing Radhika’s trust on you? … she will not neglect any of your words.. still.. you want to transfer the ownership when she isn’t here., I feel…. you are just utilizing her talent.. still you consider her as one of the staff as she is your working partner..”,Kavin replied to Neil when they met 4 days back in that cafe..

Kavin’s mind argued that he shouldn’t have spoke like that., after looking Neil. His face lost its color and warmth listening Kavin..After all, Neil consider them as his family.. Neil walked out silently from there.. Neil’s voice broke his thought bubble.

“Buddy.. what’s up?’ Neil called as he moved out from kitchen.

“Hey Neil..Nothing much” Kavin said in flat tone, looking from Neil to Preeti.

“Thanks Kavin”, Neil pulled his hand for a handshake confusing Kavin and hugged him..

“Am sorry yaar”, Kavin said shedding his hesitance.. “I shouldn’t have spoken so… but..”

“Relax.. Am not going to do any such., I will speak with Raadzie about this..Nothing will happen without her consent in Cheer Beats..Ok??!!” Neil assured him..

Kavin hugged him back “Thanks” he said aloud surprising Preeti and Neil..

“And you are gem man! I thought even my apologize won’t work ” Kavin said impressed by Neil’s nature..

“Hello Aunty!” Preethi attended Prena’s call for Neil.. Listening her worried voice, she immediately held the call in speaker.. Prena’s anxiety soon caught them too… Though everyone knew about Radhika, the uneasy atmosphere around her made them panic… Shooting questions to each other, finally Kavin decided to trace her location using his influence.

“I know, she is courageous, but I don’t want to take a chance..I will be happy even if I turn out to be a fool in this matter..” Kavin said before making some calls.. Neil felt a thin ray of happiness seep inside him amidst his stress, as he saw Kavin’s care and concern for Radhika..

“Yes.. he is right.. we know about Radhu.. But what if ..”Preeti stopped as Neil signaled Prena’s call was still active..

“Mom..we will get her…She will be safe..” Neil spoke trying his best to reduce her worries though he himself was..


Piyali was angrily pacing in her hallway taunting Samrat and Radhika time and again.. Radhika’s arrogance in executing her decisions,Samrat’s
nonchalant behavior towards her after Radhika’s arrival had its effect on Piyali’s taunts.. and now,hearing about Sam’s stay at Prena’s house, she fumed more.. She thought the girls completely prefer to stay away from her, their home..

“Will you please stop it?”, Samrat said annoyed.. “Don’t think..I can’t speculate what happened in my absence.. I could guess what you would have said about her, she made you to raise your hand in return.I don’t even want to speak about that.. You should be actually happy for Sam’s new partnership”

“Oh! You want me to be happy for a tie-up that happened without my consent.. … went there for completing the formalities without even informing me.. why Samrat? Did you think I will create a chaos if I had been informed”,Piyali tried to justify her anger.

Samrat was already frustrated with the events, and to the more, now, Radhika’s mobile got switched off which was active minutes before.. His paternal instincts triggered questions about her safety., his anxiousness made him to loose his reins on the words which he had held back.
“Yes..I did think….In fact,That’s the truth …You won’t let it happen thought it’s good for Sam, for It’s Radhika who brought this..Isn’t Piyali… Your Ego will not allow that..! Your Ego will blindfold you to get the picture on their distress they may face being in Birdsong.. I fear you will never let them to live their life.. I don’ daughters to suffer…And I don’t want to repeat my mistake again.For God’s sake, stay away from my kids..!.
” his voice raised more as a warning at the last note though he was yelling throughout his reply…

Piyali sat dumbstruck listening those..Samrat looked furious..He called Raghav to find about his princess’s whereabouts.. Servants stood devoid of any movement hearing their boss yell.. It had been always the opposite they witnessed.


Her fingers poked the little blue fur made teddy doll,in between the two pink ones.. The set has 3 teddy dolls with metallic alphabets ‘R’ ‘J’ ‘S’,plastered on their middle..

“I Miss You!”,Radhika said poking the middle one again,as fresh hot tears streamed down her cheeks…Preoccupied with thoughts about her business she drove to Nariman Point looking those giant buildings.. She forgot everything with the view before her.. Deep blue Sea waters and multi storey buildings with their heads high on its opposite.. She had another round of Chaat leaning on her car.. Its dark.. Too dark.. She thought to return home.. She switched on her mobile as she sat inside.. she noticed her watch missing and began searching it.. She completely tossed herself inside the vehicle to find it near back seat.. As she buckled her watch , her mobile beeped..she was surprised at the sight of Arjun’s name in Missed calls list.. A smile appeared on her doleful face..

Precap: Ardhika meet and Sam asking Radhika to leave Mumbai


There is a immediate continuation update of this chapter coming next.. Friends..Pls let me know your reviews..Thanks Again for ur support and encouraging words..Silent readers, love to hear from you about this chappy.. Do try to drop ur comments..

Take care and love u all loads πŸ™‚


  1. Aastha

    1st !!!!!!!!!!!!! This one was a lil confusing…….who is Vivek???? His statement followed by Arjun’s tot make me wonder if what Arjun has for her is real………Neil Kevin covo didn’t click T me….may b coz I missed sms chappys…….Samrat-Piyali…..mystery….Rads smile….loved it…..

    I tot Arjun finding Rads will b tere in this….😑…….anyways I’m not buggng u wth questions coz Ammu chechi will once again tease me…… that’s hw I am……smetes I read the last chappy f a book simply coz I cant control my eagerness……I know I ought to be slapped…….

      • Jessie


        Aastha.. glad that u said that.. well., in chap 3 I had said they were all frnds.. one more guy prakash is der.. kavin is not their friend.. jus preethi’s husband.. thats ok dear.. and Ardhika in next chap.. had got updated also.. no slapping.. may be u are tooo curious… Thanks dear..

  2. Gauri

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    Fantastic Jess πŸ™‚ best part where Samrat yelled at Piyali….high time she deserved it….Ajju Bhaiya …ok the preethi with Neil and the one Arjun is thinking about are they same ??? Arjun is all possessive about his girl…hmm I am loving that…and is J Jai….her brother and where is he ??? ok wont bore you more πŸ™‚ but dying to know the answers … come back soon with a rocking chapter πŸ™‚ love u

    • Jessie


      Thanks a lot Gauri.. Am honestly happy reading that.. yep.. same Preeti.. too possessive.. yes.. he is Jai.. their brother..last ques ka ans..pass.. ! πŸ˜‰ hope u wud have guessed.. I did wait for readers here to guess Jai., with that blue n J clues.. had posted yaar.. love u too.. πŸ™‚

  3. Bhargavi

    What’s the enmity between arjun and radhika. I didn’t understand that and please update faster dear. I am missing your ff so much. And you have some uniqueness as your story is completely different of what others are portraying. It’s too interesting

    • Jessie


      Hi Bhargavi.. Thanks for commenting! and thanks for the compliment dear.. am so happy.. why were u silent ? now that I had missed ur views.. had updated yaar… and right now, no enemity between Ardhika…

      • Bhargavi

        Sorry di, I am just mood of for few days so couldn’t comment on your updates. But from now on you can see my comment surely in your comment box

  4. Rossy

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    I don’t know jazzzzyyyy but why m angry on every one. They all are torturing radz…mentally…uuuggghhhh…i need to give some sense to piyali.. Though samrat gave a dose to piyali, she needs more…Arjun what is his problem man…no more nod for him…radhu go n find someone else…every one is cheating..waise jazzzzzy u know I can take that revenge on Arjun in my way…lol…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    • Jessie


      Rozzzzzyyyy… angry on everyone.. Lets go to Mars for Peace.. πŸ˜‰ yep.. u are right she needs more.. will give her more.. no nod for Arjun? oh god.. read the next one.. Radhu is clever here..
      Yaar… Here Arjun is a good boy.. no revenge i tell you.. Am scared πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  5. Jnana

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    Thousand ruppess note for me? Very bad arjun…… πŸ˜ΏπŸ™€πŸ˜‹
    J for jai…. Bro? Then preethi are both same? Vivek?
    Piyali deserved it…… But poor one….. Don’t know what’s running in her mind…… Now I’m on a mission to search radhika as you did not mention about her whereabouts……. Neil….. Love him…….. Arjun too….. And you too……

    • Jessie


      Jnanaa.. glad to see u comment.. 2000 ruppees..! he jst checked the vehicle.. wasn’t tht enough… you are so generous… yes.. Jai., their brother.. same preeti.. vivek.. their frnd had mentioned about their group in chap 3.. Piyali..Poor one.. ! Lemme tell to samrat. πŸ˜‰ I had posted next one.. come back from ur mission.. me too.. wow!! Love u too dear..

  6. Jewel

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    Jessie… I have lot of questions… preeti working with radhika and Neil is same preeti Arjun thinking about?? What rads done with her?? Ardhika’s meeting in bs was unexpected na?? I mean during college time Arjun didn’t know that rads is samrat’s daughter, right?? Nandini is using Arjun for revenge?? And Rjs, j is jai?? Is he died?? Is that the reason for the problems btwn piyali and rads?? I know Jessie u will reveal everything in coming chapters bt I am eager to know these… This chapter is nice Jessie… Waiting for ardhika’s meet… Plz post soon

    • Jessie


      Jewel.. am ready to answer., yes same preethi.. she isnt working..Neil plans to transfer their ownership.. and preeti is their frnd… Rads doing.. that will be revealed later.. he doesnt know.. J for Jai.. now i have answered maximum of ques.. so 3 ques pass.. Yep.. and I guess by now, u wud have got an idea abt everyone characteristics.. Thanks a lot Jewel.. am really happy reading ur ques.. Ardhika meet,, next one.. and has got updated yaar.. πŸ™‚

  7. Sweetie

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    La la la.. πŸ˜‰ As the immediate continuation of this chapter is coming up,I just want to say I loved this chapter darling sister.. πŸ˜€ Love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

  8. Sathya

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    Ennama neenga ipdi confuse pandreengale ma….enaku onnume puriyala. One matum theliva therinjuthu..antha radhika pulla engayo poiduchu..ivanga ellarum theduraanga..ava ennada na avaloda watch eh theditu thiriyaara…correct ah?

    • Jessie


      Enama unga confusion.. sollungo.. lol.. u noticed oly watch part.. Ada pavame.. ava azhudhu azhudhu watch a tholachuta.. hehe next part update aachu..

  9. Dipika

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    My judawa behen sorry for coming late here actually aaj puja ki godbharai thi na so i was busy there ..chapppy ia fabulous… Why all r tend to torture my rads..n i loved whn neil calling her radzie…but y neil is behaviour is weird… J for jay na…n wht with precap.sam gonna say radz to leave.. Who was more excited whn she came…eger…pls fast u..muhha

    • Jessie


      Thanks a lot Mere Judwa behen.. yaa u told.. aaj hi update huwa yaar.. so no probs.. he calls him Radzzie.. Neil.. weird.. ?? yes.. Its jai.. yep.. ri8 abt sam.. had updated deepzz.. love u too πŸ™‚

  10. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww lovely episode. …your narration is outstanding my dearrrrr. …so sorry…I’m so late Latif nowdays….keep it up honeyyy. . Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling jesss…β™‘β™‘β™‘

    • Jessie


      Thanks a lot Roma di… late latif haha.. I know na di.. And am so happy that u give ur reviews though u are busy.. thanks for that.. Love u loads and bear hugs di.. πŸ™‚

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