Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake – Chapter 26 (Part 2)

Hello…..Everyone..I said I will post immediately..but no..Din’t get lappy..so late entry..Hope you will like this part…Do share your valuable words..It keeps me connected…

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Chapter 26 (Part 2)

“What did Faizal do,”he asked in a stern voice…

She shook her head in repulsive,and finally gathered herself saying,”inside the car….he made…one of his men to….to….Arj..if not that accident…they would have….”,her words reflected her muddled thoughts…

“I shot him in thighs…he lost his…,(she saw Arjun)..so….he said he will ruin me…Arjun…he had planned it before….the cars had cameras and curtains on…we din’t know…Vivek saw him adjusting the camera…he rushed to Preeti’s vehicle..but he too was pushed inside..Prakash and Neil were brutally attacked….I saw them lying in blood when the vehicle moved….that car suddenly hit on something….else…he.. he asked one of his men to get my shirt off..while..he sat watching them to tie my hands..”she stopped when he rubbed her back…

She threw her arms around his waist and buried her face on his middle sobbing…His breath convulsed fathoming the intensity of the pain she experienced…her anguished cry was enough to dissolve him completely…He leaned over, covering her figure inside him and hugged her soft…..her grip turned hard and she hiccuped continuously scaring him..he recalled how she fainted in beach the other day….

“Enough..listen me..”,he tried to make her look him…”The men who targeted you in nariman point…are they the same?”,he asked after a minute….

She nodded negative after a minute…

“Don’t answer in haste..Try to remember”,he tucked her strands behind her ears..while she wiped her tears.,and turned around…”Are you ok?”..he rubbed her back slowly…

“I won’t forget anyone..”,she said looking the ceiling…

“Anything else”,he asked..He felt relieved that at least something was able to distract her…

She blinked for few secs and said,”Vivek is not bad..pls.dont punish him”….

“Am not going to punish anyone”,he said looking her…”This Tigress will do it…will you”,he asked patting her back…

She saw him intently….”What if he targets Preeti…I won’t”..

“That’s a lie….tell me…why Kavin hid her identity….don’t say you both hadn’t planned anything….in the worst case.,you want Faizal to face you first isn’t….then why to stay back….go by your plan…and Am with you!!!”,he said with his eyes locked to hers….

She got up and hugged him kneeling on the bed….he responded saying..,”Only if it’s always me…only me…!! We both..!! No one else…!!! I need a fair chance to giveback…is that ok”..

She listened him and kissed deep in his left cheek,she saw a tear to escape from his left eye as he held her close….she kissed his tear…”you weren’t at fault…You weren’t….”,she whispered with tears…..

“Jerry…fight with me pls…”he said in a low voice…

“No..Arjun..we had our own issues…Who saw this coming…No one of us is responsible…even Vivek…”,she held his chin…. “You are my strength..!!”,his teary eyes snapped to catch hers…

“You suffered a lot…”,he said with tears..

“May be my punishment…for pushing you from my life….for insulting your love”,she sniffed looking down..

“No….listen…I know the reason why you rejected my proposal..Neil sent me a mail,after a month….and that’s y I brushed off your talks on that.. ..forget the past…I don’t want you to remember that day…”,he said hurriedly…

She saw him shocked…”you know…??”…

“Yes….I was angry initially…After I got to know the reason..I planned..ummm…something else…I don’t have an ounce of anger on you after that….I promise…!! I knew you listen my conversation with Preeti… but you never spoke with me…one single word from you would have brought me down…but…. Preeti said you preferred to apologize to me in person…..Neil..gave an other idea…I thought to work on it…hmm….later my situations… I lost my track with everyone…after that you know…”,he said in a clear voice looking her face just inches away…..As always.,She listened him like a baby listening to its mom….He knew she will come up with an enquiry again..

He smiled when she asked…”Why so..you cut your ties..and had a fake name here..”

“Death threat…!! My dad met an accident planned for.me….the hitman was from southeast..he missed the target…but the person planned my murder was from here..!! India!! The assassin killed himself when got caught….”,he explained clearly…

She sat facing him….”But you were safe here?”

“I was asked to return after my bachelors…when I continued…dad asked me to hide my identity…since I was adamant to be here…Arjun Mehta…!!..the records were changed…well..you see ppl won’t risk in academics…so it went smooth…I came back to college dorm for safety purposes…guess..my dad was aware of this before…do you remember…a car to follow us when we all roam together..that Agra trip…”,he asked looking her face and she nodded after few mins…He wiped her tear stained cheeks..

“If you know about threats…you shouldn’t have stayed here.,2 years..!!”she shook her head…

“Someone cried when I said, I will leave”,he laid his head on her lap surprising her,and saw her face…”This gives a clear view..”,he smiled a little.. “and…now..don’t blame yourself…I was safe here…!! But not in London..So..,point over ruled…did you get that…”,he pulled her nose…

She sat rationalizing the events…..she smiled few mins later looking his face…”get up”she said…

“Get..THOSE.words back”,he said coiling her waist with his arms…

“That’s your fault..why din’t you say all this before marriage…”,she gave a nonchalant look..

“We were busy in car,doing other important things…isn’t…”,he winked at her and she rolled her eyes listening that…”Jerry…I thought to say after marriage…you did say…equal status weddings would be profit based..business alliance….!! Then how would I open up…what if you step back.. …or postpone our marriage…”,he adjusted his head saying and tried to look her face…

“Well planned???”,she saw him…

“No…definitely not…I din’t see few things coming….I was completely unaware…but see…My decision is the best…!! Whatever be the problem…
I need you under same roof to fight with me.,and I could convince you….”he nodded his head with a smile…

Her lips thinned listening that….how dare…he lays on her lap,saying all this to her face…beaming with pride…and she had millions of confusions about everything around them…

“Don’t breathe heavy..am losing control”,he chuckled and laughed a second later looking her expression….

“Get off my lap…I hate you….”,she tried to push his head…He laughed at her efforts, irritating her further…

“This is what I called lu ,she abruptly stopped and bit her lips…

“Tell that word….I will prove…!!.”,he said folding his sleeves….she was genuinely shocked with his mannerism…

What will he prove and how…..she looked around finding ways to get him off…her eyes widened when she felt his fingers brushing her middle and wetness to cover her navel….her fingers unconsciously clutched his figure and..she stooped over him as a reflex to his open mouth kisses on her middle..he raised his head a little,..”baby….”he husked and she hummed in response…

“This shirt is very transparent”,he laughed hard saying and she sat upright listening that…”I will prove…look here…”,he raised a finger and she twisted his finger…

“You are a devil …I tell you…get off..now…”,she pushed him with her might…

He got over her,rolling her completely down…and hurriedly unbuttoned her shirt…he leaned and said…,”Love has self control….lust doesn’t..”.,he kissed deep above her cleavage,and laughed when she gasped aloud..

“I don’t like this shirt…change it”,he said with his back to her.,arranging his shirt properly,looking the mirror…

“Then..I.will.wear.it,”,she got up abruptly and he turned around…She saw him starring her face,but his features turned mischievous as his eyes traveled down her neck line….unconsciously her hands clutched her shirt and he came forward…

“Ok then..”,he said and started to button her shirt..he pulled off the middle buttons saying,”it’s broken”..she gasped at his actions and slapped his palm…”Now its worth wearing only before me..”,he winked at her..”and..now..I like this shirt”..

“Arjun…”she screamed gritting her teeth..

“Yea..Its me..But baby you forgot I guess..Am I not.,Mr.Mehra”,he bent to her sitting form and held her chin looking him…his thumb caressed her skin over her throat…Her eyes met his softened orbs…he smiled…”Arjun..”..he pecked her lips…”get ready”,he left the room..

She murmured herself as she locked the door..
‘What not he does with me…I never imagined this side of Arjun’..She was embarrassed looking herself in mirror..she pulled her shirt together to cover herself…

“Radhika…shall I order lunch..”,he called aloud..He knocked her door…”Reply…am speaking with prena Aunt..”he said again….

She yelled a yes…and saw the clock,ready to strike 1… More than 4 hrs….she forgot the time…Neil….office….AND…she smiled relieved later thinking about the confusions that got cleared…she had poured everything she had about Faizal….which she has never said to anyone…only her Arjun needs to know it….the only person who holds the rights to punish Faizal for troubling her…torturing her..her fist unconsciously hit the walls thinking a part of her past…

She came afresh after a shower…she got ready thinking about him..’Arjun was never this out spoken..he gives only bits and pieces when its about him..even with her…this time..especially..in this one week…he behaved extremely opposite…out of his reserved character…now the only annoying issue is.,Mehras to have a hold on her properties.’..She saw him watching a news channel unaware of her presence behind her…

“I want to…”,her words trailed off when he raised his palm to her face..He increased the volume of that channel…

“Sh*t”,he cursed and tuned another one…She concentrated on the channel this time,and it was about a fire breakout in a steel firm….a belonging of Faizal’s dad’s…

“This belongs to Faizal…”she was cut in when he yelled sharp..

“Shut up..Just shut up..”..

Later it strike her…they were holding its shares…thats why he grew tensed..Next half an hour.,she saw him making numerous calls and scolding his associates but finally calmed down after a call he received….But what he said surprised her..

“Dad…what do you mean by a simple loss…this is planned…I could figure out…”..

What he listened,’god knows’..but she saw him to listen annoyed.,around 15 mins of convo he finally spoke only one word..”Ok..”..He called someone else and taunted to the worse scaring the sh*t out of her…Her Arjun..this is him!! He was like this years before…she compared the visible changes in his character…”Have your lunch”,she looked him startled when he placed a hotbox…

The guy who rolled with mischievous grin on her lap minutes before.,spoke in a gruff tone…well..she too was the same…A thought disturbed her and she finally asked,though he was still furious listening the same news.,

“Do you think.,Is it because of me…!Faizal planned..A loss ..for your company..”,she looked him with confusion..

“May be…Because of US.”..his sharp voice and stern look made her freeze…”Zip your mouth about this to Neil…they shouldn’t be involved anymore”,he said…

She was too hungry but wasn’t ready to eat without him….His agony was understandable..His dad is facing a loss because of them…may be her…She got out of her trance when he sat next to her….

“Don’t blame yourself…Might be they planned for something else..Profits..Moreover..he doesn’t know we are married.”,he said serving food for both…

She saw him surprised seeing him to serve food…

He asked back..what???

“If I would have been in your situation I wont behave like this”,she blurted her mind..

“Tha’ts the difference”,he raised a brow with a arrogant smirk..

She facepalmed herself…What was the need to open her mouth and earn this…..She saw him to eat fast…fast like participating in a race…She tried hard to control her itching tongue to snap him..

“Watch your plate”,she got alerted listening him….”you both did spoil my breakfast”,he got up instantly….

“You finished”,she shrieked hurriedly.,he came back with a water bottle from kitchen..

She had her food in silence after that…He was busy…like too busy even being here….all she could gather was, him to collect details without his dad’s knowledge…..

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She saw Neil to walk hurriedly towards his car when she got down…he walked to her…

“I did get details…things are fine…look for ongoing projects alone..”,he said hastily..”..well..I asked for a person to look after cheer beats…Mom will be assigning tomorrow…ok…now bye..I need to move..”,he hugged her and moved to Arjun….

She walked further,just few steps before birdsong..she stopped on her tracks and saw the building….Her mind clouded with fresh thoughts,What this has for her.,she doesn’t know…..but Arjun…!! She saw him as a complete business man today….he will never let go things….what if he decides, to keep his word he gave to his sister…she will be pushed to chose either one of them…Arjun or BS..no…Arjun or Sam…

“Di….you wait and watch…I have more plans…”,her eyes watered recalling those words… “why you left us”,she mumbled unconsciously..

She turned and saw the men to discuss something…Arjun leaning on his car,saw her side and stood straight when they noticed her to turn…He gestured a thumbs up and asked her to smile….She stood like a statue….”What’s wrong..”Neil mumbled..

Arjun Pointed his watch and waved a bye…”Nothing..and let her go”,he replied to Neil..

“Shut up”..Neil said and came in a slow jog to her..”Whats up Radzzie..forgot some thing..??”,he tried to sound cool…she saw Arjun…only him….

“Shall we get him inside our company”,Neil chose the words only to read her mind…

“Will it stay as ours”,she asked to him with eyes on Arjun…

“What nonsense….get in…we won’t let that happen…and do you think he will let you down..”,Neil held her chin to face him…

“He isn’t like us…don’t you know…Global business man..Targets..Assests..!”,her voice shook a notch down..

“Radzzie..stop arguing about him…We still don’t know why he is here….We may lose what we have in our hands..So.,lets work on this.”,he pointed the building…and walked along with her….The more he spoke she felt relieved and they discussed only about the lost contracts…After an hour, they came out of her cabin and Neil walked towards the elevator,while Radhika moved to another room in that corridor..
He was about to turn,but stopped listening Amit and Radhika to speak..

“Ma’am…I guess..I helped with details.”,Amit said politely..

The strong silence intrigued Neil, and he took few steps closer to listen them..

“Ma’am…Piyali ma’am left after an argument with Neil sir..”

“Where’s Teji”,she asked irritated…

“He took a day off..but am here..Ma’am how may I help you..I mean..in case..of any help..”,Amit stuttered to complete his sentence at her sudden glare on him…

She smiled a little and said,”Resign yourself..”

The guy floundered a little..then threw questions at her,later raised his voice..”on what basis you will dismiss me…”

“Did I say so….”,she asked in a cool voice…”A week time…I need your papers on table…make it fair…”,she spoke calmly..

“Only on your orders I ransacked Arjun’s cabin..”,Amit argued..

“That has nothing to do here…You just helped me in clearing a cabin of an ex employee”,the arrogance in her voice clearly echoed in that empty corridor…

“He resigned????!!”,Amit asked with mouth wide opened…

“Yes…!! and You’re Next!!”..She.walked away…

Neil shook his head laughing,as he took the elevator…He couldn’t contain himself after seeing Arjun…”Amit..that idiot asked any help.,and she says resign yourself….how can she be this sharp.,Man!”.he laughed…

“Amit..isn’t that cunning..”,Arjun said thoughtful…

“Oh really !!..”,Neil said Amit’s reply and continued.,”so.,it’s clear he is working for someone..isn’t..”

“Even then.,it isn’t confirmed….Uncle is not here..”,Arjun gave a displeased look..

“So what..Radzzie and myself has the POA..You got the note behind her decision isn’t..She will be fast..but not stupid…and Arjun..She purposely used Amit against you..so..Lets wait few days..”

“That gonna turn useless..Am just a employee like him..a common ego clash..nothing else”,Arjun said annoyed…

Neil thought a while..”Here..your house is cleaned…”,he gave the keys..

“Neill…tell me where Sam is”….Arjun asked him sharp…

“Let her come back…Raghav is with her..My guards are following..So..Pls..”,Neil said..

“Why the hell she fooled my guards then?”,Arjun gritted his teeth… “Do I look like an Idiot?? Its only because for Aunty I stayed silent…She scared everyone for few mins…Is she a brainless duck? I had explained things…Uncle is not here….Radh…Radhika..How would I face her if something happens to Sam….Listen Neil..! Warn her..!! My patience is only for Radhika….”

“That’s what I too say…Sam is just your sister in law..Don’t order around…Arjun..If you don’t know people better stay silent..just think…she din’t lamely whine or blame anyone..its 2 days and she is silent…not even a word to Radziee…lets see whats her perspective…..”,Neil tried to reason out..

“Damn the perspective…Its clear..their mom…She fills things against me…and is she inside..?”..Arjun asked looking the building…

“No..She turned disgraceful listening me to have shares of BS..at one point of argument.,she left in anger..,why did you want me to say it this soon..?”,Neil sighed…

“If Radhika has her own ways,then I too…and anyway..this will benefit us..”,Arjun wore his shades back and turned…

“Listen this and tell about voice clarity”,Neil gave a pen… “Have placed another one too.”..he smiled saying..”Radzzie will kill me for spying her”..

“No..Neil you got me wrong…this is not for her…I will tell you later..”,Arjun got into his vehicle…

“Anything about Faizal..”,Neil leaned to his door..

“I will handle”,Arjun smiled a assuring one..

Precap : Sam enquires about Arjun to Neil..and Radhika speaks to Nandhini about giving BS to Arjun..
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So..Say how this was…Pls Ignore my Typos and Grammatical errors…Take care and Loads of love to you all….

48 comments

  1. Chashni

    Jessie this was such a long chapter I have never read.the world best regular fan fiction posting award goes to my crazy jessie.nalla vachi seiyura.arjun radhika scenes was awesome.and andha difference scene radhika mokka vaangurathu super.oru chapter la romance,possessiveness,attitude,emotion,caring,love etc.great asusual theri baby

  2. Chashni

    And no need to strain yourself.take care of your health.post your story whenever time permits.love you.take care

    • Jessie

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      Long one!!! hehee..Chashini… complan ke wajah se…ena panna… Sam oda part pota odane lenghty aadiyuchu…. crazy Jessie…!! thank you..thank you * Imagine me to bow my head in all directions* vechu seirena..lol.. mokka vangradhu.. super le…my fav…Aaaaha….ellathayum note panni solliteenga..Nandrigal kodi…!! all emotions..yes…I am happy it had its reach… Chashu… enaku yen leave kudureenga..lol… lappy illana ena panuven..adhan odi odi post panen.. but am so happy with your concern..Really…thanks ma… aduthu naane leave poturuven…award a vapas vangirateenga… am happy with your caring words dear…love you loads TC ….stay happy….

  3. arti viswanathan

    Jessie jessie darling I liked ur written episode a lot dear…. So the things re getting clear between arjun and radhika……. I liked ur work jessie dear….tc loads of love jessie darling….

    • Jessie

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      Arti..Arti…. lalalala… am happy…. yes..clearance…old stock clearance…. thanks a ton darling….am glad you liked my work… TC and loads of love…Teddy huggss….love your support…Thank you….

    • Jessie

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      Mehreeennnnn……Thank you dear…..kabse intezaar kar rahi ho, aapne..mujhe bataya nahi…kyunnnnn….Thanks again for dropping in..glad to know about that..TC and do support dear…

  4. Viprida

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    Jesima, vandhutiya!! Vazhakam pola kalakita!! Konjam konjama elaa confusion-um clear aagudhu!! Firstly, Radhika’s mental trauma due to Faizal was penned very beautifully, then Arjun’s unconditional love for Radhika and not to forget naughtiness!! I was reminded of Vivek’s dialogue in Youth, “You, Naughty!”, when I was reading the chapter!! But, the best part was Arjun-Neil’s formal-informal bond. It was like they trusted each other, but they still didn’t tell each other everything and let the Sherlock Holmes in them do the finding!! Both are amazing in their own way, though!! And, their infinite love for Radhika and ridiculous protectiveness towards Sam was superb!! Finally, our Badass Bahu gave a very good treatment to Mr. Know-it-All or in his case, Show-It-All, Amit!! What’s with Piyali and her hatred towards Mehras and vice-versa and Sam’s kinda weird behaviour!! And, one last thing does Neil-Sam have a romantic track here?? I’m just curious!! By the way, a very interesting precap!! Looking forward to read the next one!! Please, post it soon!! Teddy hugs to you and take care happie day!!

    • Jessie

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      Vipu….Teddy hugs…Naane…!! kodana kodi Nandrigal…. yes…pazhasellam clear panren…pavam le new wed couple…am good girl you see…. !! Her trauma!! Thanks for pointing that one…you naughty dialogue..yessssssss…..Andha fashion show thana..lol… ArNeil part…inga vanga neenga..ungaluku naan chocolate kudukren….excellently said….I read that alone thrice..keen reader..!!! thanks for that….correct yaa..they are like that…Wow…Amit ke liye kitna acha tag…Show it all…know it all..correct…Claps…Claps to you… take a bow my lovely reader…you wrote that…you get the convos apt..thanks… Piyali one..will take time..Sam next chappy… Nesam we have yaar..not yet started… we need to give a love spark…will post soon….. and thanks again…love you loads…TC and stay happy..

  5. Brin

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    Awesome episode, I’m glad Radhika told the truth to Arjun about Faizal, will Arjun punish Faizal for trying to hurt Radhika, eagerly waiting for the next update, Jessie you nail it, well done. ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Jessie

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      Brinzzzeee….Thanks a lot dear… Arjun punishing we have time…. he will…. in his style..but we have more for Faizal…isn’t… will post it dear…Thanks again…love you loads….TC

  6. Chinmayi

    Jas dear,promise me, no mare troubles to radz from Faisal.. And plss give him painful death.. I mean very painful.. Those who plays with women’s respect should get the worst death..i am happy as some misunderstanding got cleared between ardhika.. Where is Sam? ..and take rest na dear, don’t risk your health to post regularly, we can wait bcoz we love you๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Jessie

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      Chinmayi…well Faizal has a re entry chaps later…! but not a very big one for her… done dear…will give him…you are right…they deserve a lot of pain before dying isnt…I agree that… yes dear…Ardhika has lots so few things are cleared…so that the misunderstanding gets solved a bit…
      Sam is safe….!! Thanks a ton my dear…will take rest..after tomo…then for four days..I will take leave..so sweet dear…I won’t…I promise…!! Love you too….Loads..and TC….

  7. Amore

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    Jessie you know what I adore most in this story??? its that there is no separation now. However i feel they still have long way to go and clear all these misunderstandings but one thing is certain that there is no ‘male ego’ issue and arjun will never give up on radhika. and when it comes to her i feel that radz will change nandini for her arjun… eager to read. post soon

    • Jessie

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      Amore…Love..!! Am glad to get your views dear..and yes..There wont be separation at all..I promised long back…I never thought of separating them here..so in future also it will continue……correct…long way…. yes dear…no male ego…!! wooo…my god..Am bowled over with your review now..but there will be one small twist there… not a big one… will post dear..TC and loads of love..am eager for your views dear..dont keep me away..

  8. Shree

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    ammaaaaa… llooonnnggg chappy.. loved it to the core.. after shades of radhika its shades of arjun.. lol.. ammaa.. look at him.. spolit breakfast aama.. loss.. gathering info.. jess i need to learn a lot from you.. im such a baby.. faizaalllllllll.. kill him now.. whats with sam? piyali too… her hatred for mehras.. lol amit.. bun on the face.. arneil be cool.. hehe

    seekrama vaa maa.. love you

    • Jessie

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      Shreeeee….Eeeeeeee….. long chappy…complan kuduten…Dinka chika…una parthale santhosam…Thank you pattu kutty…. yea…shades than..namekellam ethana shades…Arjuna vidalamo… ! spoilt breakfast.yea… baby..you..in what..lol…adi… Faizal a..kill… iruma..avanuku naan vechuruken….Sam is safe.Piyali nee parpa..lol… Amit.. parthuko..ipadi than resign panna solanum…..sema le..ava aduthu amit a ena panuvanu paru..aiyo Jess.silence…lol… thanks a ton dear…muaaahhhhh…love you loads….

    • Jessie

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      Hey ya Twinj fan..where were you…???Thanks for relaunching..now dont go…. no..i dont knw that ๐Ÿ˜‰ will update soon dear..Thanks a ton yaar….am so so glad you liked it…I did search your name in last chap..TC and Stay happy…. come back Sweet mistake cloud…

  9. Jewel

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    Jez, continues updates, girl how can u write like this,…. U r describing like, everything is happening infront of u, its beautiful. The first part, she is telling everything happened in past and he is consoling her, that part was really really beautiful. I love their love hate relationship. I loved every shades of their relationship. Love naughtiness, hatred everything. Actually I am addicted to ur story. Faizel, I want to kill him…… Tigress punish him for each and everything he done to u and ur friends…. Jez what happened to jai?? Is he died?? How?? Neil and arjun, their bond is different. They placed a recorder, Neil if she get to know r r finish man…. Amit, he got what he deserved…. This story is package of everything jez…. Loving this a lot….. Tc dear lov u….

    • Jessie

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      Shonaaaa….Teddy hugs… Thank you.!!!!!! thats one awesome appreciation dear..!! Am feeling happy… every shades..!! thats amazing..!! Now am relieved you know…It had the reach…Thanks for pointing those in particular… Addicted..!! hifi..me too..Like too much…. am glad dear..Faizal… yes..lets do it.. we all one team…!! Tigress..yep..he wants her to do that…. Shona..abt Jai after few chaps..And I love you girl…how you guessed those to be his words..Muaah…. Recorder…hahah..yes..but its not for RAdz..Arneil..yes… Amit… right ji… Now I feel I have done the work properly…Thank you..one bear hug..for that package word.. TC and loads of love…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hi Farjju…thanks a lot dear…. will post soon…TC and loads of love..Arneil…thanks for mentioning..Ek aur part hai next chap me…

  10. Sangee

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    Hey jessi…. It’s mee geet… ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜… I need a favour from you… Can u do that for me…. I assume u will not deny my wish so…. Iam asking…. Shall I kill that faizal on my own ๐Ÿ˜ pls let me kill him… Atleast I will help arjun to make faizal to encounter the worst death in the history ๐Ÿ”ซ๐Ÿ’ฃ๐Ÿ”จ๐Ÿ’‰๐Ÿ”ช๐Ÿ’Šโœ‚โœ’โœ๐Ÿ“๐Ÿ“Œ…. How dare he… ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
    What did he planed to rads and preeti… Avnuku sadarana punishment lam vendam… Lets refer karuda puranam… Kumbi pagam lam pathadu… Iam hello angry at him…. I he come front of me…. I will suck the last drop of blood from his body ๐Ÿ˜‹… Arggg… U made me as vamp now… Ok enough of vamp mode… Lemme toggle to human mode… Poor rads… This is what Neil was talking abt to arjun…. She did right by not saying this to him else Neil must be got hurt… Arjun is right his radika will understand him… Super rads… ๐Ÿ˜ tigress will do it. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Ardika neenga Kollreengala illa nan kolla tu ma oops Back to vamp mode.. ๐Ÿ‘ป..all MU are getting cleared one by one… Iam very very happy for them ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜… Clear view.๐Ÿ™ˆ. Important things in car.๐Ÿ™ˆ.. Loosing control ๐Ÿ™ˆ… Folding the sleeves ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ I too shocked with that mannerism… Dei sandaika da pora.. Sleeve lam fold panni ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜..jessi nee anga nikira ma… I think u have took some romance potion ๐Ÿ˜‰…nadathu nadathu….. Baby… Transparent shirt… Let me prove… Aduku Apparam nan Kanna muditen ma ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ
    Intha ranakalathulaum avanuku oru kudugalam kekudu…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜….pulled out the button ๐Ÿ˜ฎ…now I like this ๐Ÿ˜›… ๐Ÿ˜…Arjun have full rights to punish him… Yes… Again business man mode… Faizal is upto something I can clearly sense … ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ค..
    Arjun pacifying rads that she is not the reason behind that….super… Collecting details without his dad’s knowledge… Back to detective mode…. Intha thadava edavadu certificate pathu emanthu datha ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜œ…they shud not be involved anymore… ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘…rads still in confusion ๐Ÿ˜ต.. Ok let her take some time. . Amit…lol idu ku per dan reveetu he he he… Arneil conversation ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜… What is Sam abt to ๐Ÿ˜• they are spying rads… Avaluku Theriyatum Apparam irruku Unga luku ๐Ÿ˜‰ Arneil bonding sema ma… Sema epi ma waiting for next one.. Love you loads ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ˜˜ take care…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Geet chellam… vanga ma..enga poninga…OMG!!!!! Chill…plzz…enamo favor nu partha..kola pannanumamla… Vamp a…shock…enama neenga ipadi kovapadalama… After 27th Chap side by side Faizal ku count down starts…ok va..ingave armabichuten..last le parteengala..factory le fire…Karuda puranam and kumbi pagam..wow!! nalla iruke…Varuthuruvom… !! I understand…!! he did the worse…Ardhika ve kolluvanga ji..Ardhika understanding..yes..Clear view..he said about face…. am laughing at those emojis..hehhe…Romance potion..nooooooo……You too shock..lol…I too ji..Avan loverboy ji…athan kudugalam…. Arjun pacifying..yess…certificate…rofl…Geet….I laughed aloud reading that..aaamaa le….They are spying.but not rads…Arjun said it… Arneil ok va..done…Sema vimarsanam…Nandri…Nandri…Nandri….point pointa pinetenga….. loads of love..willpost Geet…TC

  11. Sulbi

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    Jazzzzz…. my darling…. such a long chapy…. wow loved it… dnt no frm whr to start…. each and every line made me to bow my head to you… you have some magic in your hands… whr shd i start?? Hmm… i think i have to copy and paste the entire chapy… ine confusion cleared…. am jumping hurraaaahh!!!! Such a lovely bonding… This is what MADE FOR EACH OTHER…

    Well… the way radhika pored out her inner feelings and arjun gave the assurance was fantabulous… and radhika wants to share only with him… ofcrz she owns him… and got license too… lol… wow… idhan da love… anga nikuringa jazz kutty… pinnitinga ponga… arjun wants his tigress to punsih them… warea wah… thats my smart guy…

    When radhika asked him y he havnt told anything before marriage… his answer was we were busy in car in something… hehehe… naughty guy… indha ranakalathulaiyum oru kudhukalam kekudhu… lovely part and that one was my fav… love you arjun… and ArNeil bond was trustworthy… they both care for sam… totally episode was awsme… kili kili kili… lol.. brindha master dialogue…

    Pakka paisa vasool… sema ma… keep rocking… you making me fall for you more and more by your magic words…. teddy hugssss…. love you my jazzzzzzziiiiii kutty… darling…. sweetheart…. stay happy forever… tc baby…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Sulbi jaan….Thanks a lot dear….magic a..thanks…periya varthai ma..am so happy you liked it da… MAde for each other!!! Best compliment..!! nejama… yes..only with him…. license..lol… yes..idhanda kaadhal..hehe.. ninuten..yay…!! yes he wants her to… kudhukalam..lol…your fav a!! super ma..Arneil yes….brinda master..heheh…ok da kanna.!! Awwwieee….falling for me..love you loads girl…Nandrigal kodi..like really..naan padichute iruken unoda commentsa…Jaan…TC..stay happy dear….Muaahhhh..once again thanks dear….

  12. Gauri

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    Jess you are just tooooooooo good to be described in one word….one place you wrote a tummy rolling comedy and here such a beautiful relationship is being penned in the most emotional way possible ….I feel like selling faisal of 50ps ….he is a loser….the way Arjun consoled her ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ahh that’s what a partner should be like ๐Ÿ™‚ awesome and mindblowing….in next update i will search for better words to praise you ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ love u

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Gauri….am happy with your words….Faizal ke liye..we will punish ya..Arjun consoling…yep..your are 100% correct about partner…glad you said your likes..thanks again…Gauri..your every word is best yaar..love you loads…TC and stay happy…

  13. Dipika

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    Judwa behena u r Awsomeeeee like every time yarrrrr.. U made me glued to the story like chewing gum.. Lol.. But honestly Imt wss splendid.. Now our tom n jerry turning into love birds.. Lol.. Faizak.. God.. Mujhe uska pata do.. I wanna beat him black n blue. He is one disgusting man.m waiting to arjun do this on behalf of me.. Precap sounds interesting.. Update soon.. Love you loads my swt JB
    ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ˜˜ ๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thanks a ton Judwa behna….chewing gum..haha…Deeepzzz…love you girl…. yes..Faizal is..bad boy… Tom and Jerry..yep…they will be… will post yaar… love you too dear….TC..

  14. Anu-Annie

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    aww… jess pi, this was so sweet and cute. just loved it. u showed very well, their love for each other and their trust too.

    loved the way Neil defended Sam.

    and our Radhu had to go through soo much. she’s such a sweetheart when it comes to her loved ones.

    u put that suspense again. why was Faisal after preeti and radhika. just coz of his argument with Arjun or the slap or something else too.

    [i can c ur devil mind turning. the chains r working and u r planning something evil. must beware my hero and heroine. don’t wat u r upto.]

    c i blabber a lot these days. and i write a much lengthier essay than urs. didn’t comment on the previous one. sry han. and late at this one too. sry again han.

    and and and thanx a tonne, a thousand tonnes tonne that u accepted my request and posted this one. love ya soooooo very much.

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Heyyya my doll…glad you loved it and pointed your likes….RAdz..yes dear..she is so sweet na..she defends for vivek too… Reason for Faizal after few chaps..Arjun will get into that….devil mind…*pout face*chains r working…rofl….evil..lol….me to achi hoon…lengthy than mine..heheh…. ok dear..I thought you missed..you did ask me na..so I searched you there….and loads of love to you dear..you aren’t blabbering… TC…Stay happy my doll…

  15. Aastha

    Jessie…. awesome chappy…
    ardhika moments and romance too lovely ….my favourite part..when Radhika spoked her heart out and Arjun being her strength to move on…. giving confidence to fight back….that’s true love…you’re too good in framing romantic scenes
    The way Radhika mocked Amit…haha….
    Neil Arjun spying on her…. now what’s Arjun up to…??
    Radz move of handing BS to Arjun…she provoking Nandini…hah

    Thanks for updating fastly…. sorry I am always late…you can name me..LCF (late commenting friend)
    Loads of love dear… take care…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Aastha dear….Her strength dialogue..claps…thank you…good one isn’t… yes..true love yes… romanantic..hehe…Amit deserves isnt wat say… Arjun…we will know dear.. yes,,, she is provoking Nandhu.. thanks for dropping in thought you catch late..seee.thats imp for me..your views…i wont worry abt first or last..only reviews from my readers..so thanks for giving me thatt…boost you know…I will give you someother sweet name…LAte se kya ..i too catch late..loads of love and TC

  16. Aasthu

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    Loved it…..Arjun is cool and naughty while handling Rads…..Faizal started…..Rads Amit confused…..didn’t understand…..please make it clear……I had sent you a msg….do read it….bye….goona sleep…….good morning dear…..๐Ÿ˜š

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Chinnnu…phir se confusion… well.,Rads asks Amit to resign himself…why? coz she suspects him..like he is cheating…..for reasons behind her decision we need to waiit…Saw you msg dear… thanks a lot for liking this one…Take care… love you loads…

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