Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake – Chapter 25 (Part 3)

Hello….Its Jessie…Iam like Make hay while the sunshines…Post when you get laptop…lol….Love you all dears…this chap grew indeed loonggerr…I gave lot of complan to the characters I guess….Do share your precious reviews…And from here on the story gets on fast track…yep..all problems to solve one by one and ardhika…what will they do…who is real culprit and who isn’t…I wont pull longer..as all the knots are intertwined probably half way you all will guess…

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Chapter 25 (Part 3)

Radhika smiled at his confused face…”Mr.Mehra…I wouldn’t have believed my Mom if not I heard you,speaking with your sister on our wedding night…She was the reason you grew restless and I did hear every word you said to her..So..she asked you to marry Sam assuming her to be BS’s owner…wow!! What a family business !! and you married me on the same note..”she spoke crossing her legs before him..

“You did a mistake by threatening me in my family’s name…now…I have your sister in my hand…She needs me for claiming BS..Now she doesn’t need you..”,Radhika smiled humorless..

Arjun connected the dots of her behavior…the next day her anger..her silence while dealing with Preeti’s confusion..the way she spoke to him…about her company.. may be yesterday she got to know about him as ARM, thats y she barged in to meet his di….He rubbed his forehead…This had turned more problematic..Now..he got the reason for the word betrayal she mentioned… He saw her to order food in his mobile…

“So you knew things beforehand..”,he asked her furiously…

“Fried rice is okay isn’t”,she asked him back…

“Answer me..”,he growled in anger..

“A betrayer has no rights to get angry…he should smile…”,She irritated him..

“Don’t turn me a monster with your words.”,he said like a warning…She sat un flinched…

“Why din’t you ask me Radhika”,he sat next to her..

“Why you din’t ask me in Preet’s issue”,she countered back..

“I din’t believe vivek’s words..I wanted to check myself…If I had asked,in his words..you might have felt bad”,he said looking her face…

“Oh..Am now cool…you see”,she said sardonically….”You married me with the same doubts isn’t… but you question me back..”she shook her head…

“You din’t trust me then?”,he asked her back…”And..in preeti’s issue you wasn’t near me to ask…here…I was with you…in the same room…you din’t ask a word..”,he saw her..

“I heard you Arjun…what else is needed…oops…Mr.Mehra…”,she swiped the pics in his mobile… “Its all a drama…A day’s fun !..This point is where I got fooled..Marriage!! I was on cloud nine when you were hell bent to marry me…Silly me”,she said looking their marriage pics…She was about to delete he pulled his mobile back…

“Are you an Idiot..!! Am asking you the same…Why to marry a girl to get her company.. there is lots of other ways”,he snapped back..

“Yea…you could bed her…that’s what I ask you….You did use your brains in fooling me…was that a revenge..? I insulted you when you proposed,so you took this chance..is it like that?,”,she asked smiling…

“You are drunk?”,he asked shockingly and pulled her close..

“Don’t touch me…”,she pushed him.. “Scotch isn’t my choice”,she giggled..

A guy brought lunch from Prena’s place…. Arjun sat fathoming the entire happening…

“You checked my records in office?”,he asked.. she nodded positive and had her lunch…

“Its a spelling mistake”,he purposely said to get to know further…

Radhika smiled…”Then how your pay got credited in your bank account”,she saw him….

Arjun turned thoughtful and had his food in silence… “Good work Junior..! Behind my back..I would have been happy if you had asked”,he said finally..

“The same, If you would have said”,she said back… “I curse the moment I woke up that midnight…I came worrying on your health but you gave me a biggest shock…May be I deserved that..!! If not its my family,I would have had no qualms in being cheated by you…I would have happily stayed as a fool…”,she said with a lone tear..

“Now..its difficult…you made it difficult…we can’t be together”,she said with teary eyes.. “You shouldn’t have come back…you should have stayed back listening Vivek…I would have been happy in my world…You made me fly high…Every moment I spent with you..it will remain as scars now…the least happiness I had before is now no more….”,she sat speaking to him…

He got up without a word and came back with a sleeping pill, “Had scotch?”,he asked…

“Just few sips”,she responded in her self..

He smiled…”I came back for you…I can’t leave you..”and extended her a pill.. “You need to sleep…don’t you have lot to fight back?”,he asked her…She had it when she saw him to swallow one…

“I din’t sleep properly for past 3 days”,he sipped a glass of water…

“Tell me why you joined my company…what is your plan?”,she asked him..

“You love to find yourself isn’t.,so find it..”,he moved but stopped on his tracks when she pushed a glass down…

“Tell me”,she asked again..

“Clean it”,he ordered her… “Till you stay with me you need to listen me”,he said further… “So…you should clear your doubts by yourself ASAP”,he confused her…

“Means..I can leave you after that…”,she asked..

He smiled…”I won’t stop you if you want to”,he said… her eyes welled up unconsciously…

“You said you wont leave me”,she threw things,all around the hall…

“Radhika…Stop this”,he said sharp…

“Am gonna clean..Lemme break altogether”,she threw a plate..She took one of her photo frame and he yelled,”Ok..Keep it down…You don’t need to clean”..

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He held his forehead and pulled her to their room…”Sleep…Enough of everything!”,he locked the door…

He messaged to Neil and his guards and laid flat on his bed holding her wrist…”Why do you have sleeping pills”,she asked him..

“I took from your bag”,he said and covered her mouth with his palm…”I have set security alarms in door..so don’t try to sneak out..”he said lazily as he drifted into sleep…
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When he woke up it was past six and she laid on her stomach with her hand hung down the cot..

Arjun opened the door when Neil meesaged him..”She is still sleeping”,Arjun said in a dry voice..

“I know you have good abs..wear a shirt!”,Neil remarked as he peeped into Guest room and saw Radhika sleeping..”I couldn’t believe she had tablets from you…”,he said and Arjun glared him…”yes,Man…How she listened you?”,he asked again..

“That’s Love! Magic of Love!”,Arjun said as he wore a shirt…

“I could see that…”,Neil said looking the scattered pieces of plates and glasses on floor. “Now I believe…She is my Radzzie”,Neil smiled widely wiggling his brows…

“Neil…she may wake up”,Arjun pulled him to his bedroom….Neil’s jaw hit the floor looking the messy state of it..the couch was still wet… Arjun pulled her luggage and his from the cupboard..

“Neil…We are shifting to another place..For a week”,he said seriously…

“You wanna leave this heaven…how tidy it is…wow!! and btw when you come back the couch will be dry”,Neil said with his fingers sliding over the armrest of the couch…

“Ah…I have no energy to answer you…will kill you later…and she poured water,Man!”,Arjun shook his head while Neil laughed holding his stomach…

“Aww…My sweet Radzzie…If I was here I would have helped with weapons”,he said happily…

“Neil…Please”,Arjun said annoyed… “Neil…Listen…there is someone in BS against Khannas..I need your help…Thats why I called you..Here..this is the clients list details…As everyone believes JK associates isn’t the real rival of BS…They are just pawns…I won’t come to BS..as she already got me to be the worst….So Just for a week,Man…be with her…I will take in charge of your works If you want…I have no idea about Khanna Industries…but she is saying!!..Sunshine Resort..none knew its me…but she says correctly!!…I feel my head to blast..”,Arjun said holding his head..

“Thats y we asked you to postpone your marriage..and Radzzie is already up with JK associates news…and your cabin is totally ransacked on her orders..she did it on saturday..I spoke with Teji today…and Arjun…Let her work in her way…Give her pistol back…I have my guards man…Relax…and Piyali aunt knew isn’t..”,he asked checking the client details..

“Hmm..Sunshine Resort paper works were done by Agarwal..he says even Samrat uncle doesn’t know the buyer….He lost in a deal and we got through third parties..Its intriguing Man!!”Arjun said confused…

Neil snorted a laugh… “I will be with her…Relax…She will get the person fast….She found something I guess..Thats y she pushed Sam from BS…Okay..Lets see”,Neil tried moving away..”And Arjun…why are you behind her properties…Resort…and…”,Neil pressed his lips to control his smile…

Arjun thought it for real and said,”I din’t know It belongs to them…I will give it back”..

Neil laughed listening that…”She will kill you if you say this…So don’t say this”..

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She woke up as she felt someone caressing her hair..She smiled in sleep….”Neillll”,she smiled with closed eyes…

“Radzziieee”,he said back and she got up the next instant… “You din’t turn up today,I came home”,he said before she could ask and she hugged him tight…”Whats up Radzzie…”,he asked..

“I need to leave this place”,she said in his ears…

He rubbed her back,”Arjun had hired his own guards..so..its double way protection…will you adjust for few days…Else Sam will worry unnecessarily”,he whispered in a clear voice…

“But…”,she stopped when she saw Arjun arranging luggage in the hall..

“Where are you going?”,She yelled high being in Neil’s embrace and Neil closed his ears…

“Your husband won’t vanish without you.”,he said annoyed and rubbed his right ear…

She stood tired in that hallway looking the untidy floor…”Neil brought you Chat foods..”,Arjun said as he went out of the flat…She saw him confused…

“Any fight”,Neil asked her…

“He too insulted me”,she said like a complaint…

A tall muscular guy came and collected their luggage…”Heard that you are moving to another house he owns”,Neil said looking her baffled expression…She just nodded her head ..

After an half an hour, he saw her coming with Neil to the parking lot…

“I mailed him just to clear the confusion and that too after 2 months…don’t get confused…work on BS alone”,Neil said to her as they came to Arjun’s vehicle…

“Neil..someone followed me yesterday…Black Innova”,she said suddenly..

“They were My guards..you fooled them…I changed those idiots”,Neil said relaxing his muscles..

Neil waved when they left the place…
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The drive was in complete silence.,it was only him to look her side while she din’t bother to turn his way….she sat deeply thinking… She saw the security to salute and she smiled a little recalling the yesterday event…Arjun applied brakes and sat in silence for a minute….

“So..you won’t speak?”,he asked her… “Hmmm…This is something which am doing only for you…I never wanted you to meet my sister…I promised someone too…but its for your wish I brought you here…Don’t think I cant handle my di…and don’t try your stunts with guards here…Just like here, I have left two men for Sam too…”,he saw her face while she sat listening him looking her palms..

“So stubborn…!! I will show my way then”,he said before he got down…

She followed him inside the house..After formal greetings..she silently observed the atmosphere…

“She had her food di…Give for me alone”,she heard Arjun’s voice from kitchen…Two men carried their luggage to a room in first floor.,they din’t raise their head to see her…
She saw herself in mirror…Crumbled shirt and wrinkles in pants..She should have changed she thought…

“Shall I get you milk”,Rana asked her..She nodded a no politely and went upstairs… She went into the room their bags were arranged and came changing into light blue pyjamas.

“You are here..This is guest room..Ours is there..come”,Arjun came and took his bag…

“Am fine here…I’am a guest after all”,she said looking outside the window…

He laid next to her looking the ceiling.,he tried to pull her close,but she shoved his hand…”Don’t”,she said …

“Why did you cry?”,he asked turning to her side…She laid looking her foot…”I shouldn’t have said those isn’t”,he asked softly and she snapped a look at him…He pulled her close in spite of her protests..”But what you said in return….did I really behave so?”,he asked…

“Even now you do so…Leave me.. “,she said and pushed him..

“This is not what you called..Its my love for my..”,he said but was cut in..

“Nonsense…This isn’t your love…Its Lust..I repeat…Have you ever spoke anything other than this…Even today morning you dint bother to convince me..but you said…..”she saw him..

He smiled remembering his words which rubbed her bad..

“Hungry..for me and my property”,she said and saw his smile to disappear.. He gave a coldest stare at that…

“Watch your words”,he said..

“Truth hurts”,she smirked sardonically being in his embrace…

“Truth..!!and that’s Lust..!!…Its my fault Radhika”,he saw her to look somewhere…

He let her go and suddenly got over her shocking her..”Lemme show you what’s Lust…”,he cupped her face and planted wet kisses randomly…she felt her whole face to be wet…She just held him tight in response and his lips trailed down her neck line with open mouth kisses.,while his hands travelled fast inside her tops and stopped over her hip…he gently caressed the skin with his thumb and she moaned in pleasure when he kissed her lips….”I tried Jerry..but couldn’t show that”,he mumbled over hers..and slid down the other side..She began to hit him laying next,and he laughed holding her….

“You are pulling me down in turn”,he said when she rolled to the extreme end of the bed..

“I won’t sleep with you…I won’t”,she mumbled…

“Do you want to break your spine..I may fall on you”,he said sharp..

“Then leave me”,she pulled him to the edge…

“Competing with me”,he held her with force and locked her in his hold with his left leg over her….He enjoyed watching her cute angry antics..

“See..This is called lust”,she said at last to rile him up…”If its true love you should leave the hold”,she said to his face…

“Smart…but Junior.,Am I not your senior..!!”,he winked and said..”If its Lust it would Pain here, when I have my leg on you”,he pressed his leg a little over her thigh bone..and she audibly gasped…

“Trying your tricks with me?”,he asked looking her…

“You are a cheater”,she said looking his T-shirt..

“Let your dad say that…Now stay silent..Else..you have no idea what I will do…Control your tongue!”,he said to her face..

“That won’t change the fact that…”,she was cut in

“Yes..I own your properties..You are mine and everything of yours is mine…what will you do”,he asked…She thinned her lips in anger…

“I will show you”,she replied back..

“If you want it back…I will say a simple way”,he chuckled biting his cheeks..and saw her to look him…”Accept me..everything of mine will become yours”,he said…

“Am not like you”,she said defiantly..

“Back to square one…and I will get into action”,he said..

“I won’t leave you Mr.Mehra”,she said after a long silence…

“I too don’t want to leave you Mrs..Mehra”,he shook a little in mirth..

“Seems you have fun with my pain…I won’t let you win”,She said…

“I don’t want to win over you”,he said with closed eyes and inhaled her scent sharp..

“Don’t do that”,she retorted…

“Why ??Are you turning desperate”,he chuckled and she smacked him back..

“You are hitting me too much…I will get a payback time.”….he remarked in low voice…He was happy that at last she opened up…atleast she was speaking with him….be a retort… She responded..That was the reason he played along….

After a while he saw her starring the ceiling…..”Jerry….When you took scotch”,he asked..

She smiled sardonically getting his note..”I din’t speak in drink’s effect”..

“You already had a heavy head…I spoke harsh…heated argument…Forget it…”,he said and loosened his grip on her…

“Why to convince ourselves…I meant each word I said…!! I know you din’t at first but you too,at last”,she saw deep in his eyes….she averted her gaze to control her tears..

“Ssshh…”,he rubbed her back…”I din’t…I din’t…Pls…and whatever you said is right..I want to find the one who spoiled your mind and…”.he said…

“Its you.,only you…”,she mumbled before closing her lids….and snuggled into his embrace…Have I lost him? a doubt raised in her mind…Something was amiss in his eyes…her lips quivered at the thought of her fear to lose him…She had hurt him in her rage…She remembered Neil’s words to control her anger…how far,she tried to avoid the argument…she crooked her head down..

“Shouldn’t cry while sleeping”,he said as he kissed her eyelids….She din’t open her eyes,instead wished to sleep with the wetness over her lids…the daylight will definitely bring lots against them…

“Have you been to Sunshine Resort”,he asked…”The resort we went,was that…I din’t get it from your dad…who told you Radhika”,he asked…

She pretended to be in sleep but was confused listening him…How her mom got to know then?..

He switched off the lights..and asked a second later…”You Slept Jerry?”…

“Yea”,she said unconsciously…he pulled her close to his chest and she placed her face comfortably…

“I feel someone to apologize in telepathy..was that you?”,he asked…She dint reply but he saw her to snuggle her face more into the sheets covering them….

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So…so….here ends the 25th chapter…..the next is almost done…but I don’t want to trouble you….lol….I will give a break from this sweet mistake cloud..what say.. continuous 6 chaps of sweet mistake…isn’t…I myself found surprising on my energy levels..that I posted it back to back…Thanks for the energy boosters you guys give….I thought of posting a OS and Seasons of Love before continuing this…may be a week gap…Am happy I got the lappy for full 2 hrs that am posting 2 updates today…Love you all loads…Take care….
Stay happy and healthy….

62 comments

  1. Priti

    What trouble we love it please don’t take such a long gap if you have completed it please post soon it is really amazing

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Oh…that’s s lovely…Priti….teddy hug for your support dear…will post when I get the laptop…TC and thanks a ton dear…

  2. Sulbi

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    My dear lovely lady… you cleared my ache… somehow atlast Arjun had controlled his love lady… Smart guy…

    I feel bad for Radhika… She was in confuse state…. May Arjun clear her all the doubts which arouse in her… Cute romance… Yup i was enjoying… You gave a double dhamaka treat… i was enjoying your episodes… anticipating for Season Of Love… Hug u jazz kutty for this treat… Tc baby doll…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Sulbi jaan…am glad I was able to….smart..!!
      well confusions leads to clarity isn’t….happy that you enjoyed…am so so overjoyed reading your comment…hugs to you…was in a bad mood….you lifted my spirits up…Teddy hug my sweet darling….love u loads…TC ..muaaahhhh…seasons of love…had written some…

  3. Shree

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    Lol Jess.. true that.. make hay while sun shines.. dance all night in the moonlight.. ade madri lappy vishyatla kuda.. Lol.. lost pani talitruka.. Dhool kelapu..

    Yep Complan nariya kudututa.. Radhika Dhool.. patasu.. Arjun no less.. wowowow.. security alarms.. dare you to sneak out.. enna oru purushan.. Chaaa.. Neil Lol.. good abs.. heaven.. sofa dry.. Lol.. Muuaaahh to my Dimple King.. this is omg!! He didn’t know it was theirs? Enna pesura Ivan? Uuffff.. Hehe.. I’m swaying listening to closer..

    Aahh.. serve food for me.. enna oru purushan.. vayiru valika pogudhu.. omg!! Pesita.. this husband and wife banter.. yappa.. it was cute.. he loves her do much.. misunderstanding konjam konjam aah clear agudu.. uufff..

    This was so very cute!! So much in love with it I am… Haha 6… No wonder Hangout la aalaye kaano.. Arjun be the secret of your energy aah Jess? Energy to writing.. hehe aati naa oduren.. adi vanga virumbala

    Ippo nalla rest edu.. meduva Post pannu.. love you too much 😍😘

    • Jessie

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      Shreeeee…..teddy hugs…..wow..dance ..naan ready….adi velupanga…heheeh…
      lappy…all of us have lappy na…so its quite easy…cousins isn’t…they will give… advantage of being with relatives…hehe…

      Dhool patasu..I like it…security alarm…you got it….yes…he don’t know… I hope you will like the way Arjun finds that one…yep..nalla purushan thane…lol…namala uruvaakna than undu…rofl….husband and wife banter…thank you…you love it…naan flying….enadhu 6??? Hangouts…!! Naan net pack podala…elder cousin mobile irundhu reply panren…am in travel.da…so.net pack is waste…apram…I told na….2 weeks busy…marandhutiya…..Arjun is secret??? Hahahah….. one guy can.never be a energy secret of mine…I bet that…lol….adikamaten…summa vanga…*captain style*… got super dooper comments so i was like i have to post.!!.DOT…how s you…..ok dear…will post….ellam lappyin seiyal….love you loads girl…TC….muahhhh

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Thanks a lot Bhargavi…I should thank you Readers dear…the comments did boost me a lot ..love your support…Teddy hug and TC

  4. Jewel

    Jewel

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    Jez, I loved the last part, after this much of fight, she is thinking did she lost him, I liked that a lot. They love each other a lot….. And Neil and Arjun I liked that too…… And who is that enemy, who know everything about khanna’s?? And u r correct they are complan boy and girl, hav lot of energy and they are energized us too. Waiting for nandu and rads part…. I loved this chapter…. Waiting for next one…. Next is seasons of love, and an os too waiting for that jez…. Thanks for continuous updates….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Shona….one keen reader you are…!! Thanks a lot dear… yep…they love ….and Arneil ke liye thanks….enemy…..you forgot….Reception epi had his name…prena asks to Samrat….!! I gave his intro long back…anyways…Rads and Arjun there….complan boy and girl…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜glad they energized you…nandu and radz…!! Okay…am glad you loved and enjoyed it….thanks a ton again…the comments are my complan drink….will post soon dear..may be tomorrow or Tuesday…TC and loads of love…stay happy….

  5. arti Viswanathan

    Jessie darling i loved it…. Radhika is still hurting arjun but he seems to be cool.. But later he was so angry with her… And there love is losing of each other….. I feel bad for arjun he is still cool and radhika should come to know him…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Arti…Arti…..thank you so much dear….Radz is the one is in pain isn’t…her properties have got acquired…that’s a shock for her isn’t…thats y and that’s the reason Arjun is also cool….yep..fear of losing is der as you said…love u loads dear..am happy with your views…TC…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Twinjfan…thanks a lot dear…..she still believes him..that was the reason she feared of losing him…am so glad at your support…and will post dear…TC and loads of love

  6. Anu-Annie

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    jess pie, this was awsmly awsm. To showed it very well. Their emotions, their worries, everything was there. And that mystry about the one was there too.

    And the double update was like an icing on the cake.

    pls don’t stop writing. y’know i wanna read what happens next. pls put others on a hold, if neccesaary. i can’t compromise with this one.

    post anything and everything you want but just don’t stop this.

    or else i am gonna get you by your hands {hehe}

    u no me. i can do anything. [evil smirk]

    ……….

    bubye. love ya soo veryyyy much for this, otherwise u ain’t that lovable. [kidding]

    keep writing. keep smiling. and keep drooling over Aham. I no u were doing just that while writing this part. drooling ovr his abs.

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Heyya…..My doll….how z you…Thanks a ton dear..Am glad you liked it and happy with your review… No compromise!!! hmmm..Ok then… will post before seasons of love… open demand..!! that too from my doll!! okay…I want Friendship and love update in return…what say??? evil smirk!!! Am scared *wink*

      Aint that lovable…Arghhhh….. *am getting angry now…* kidding!! I see…. hmmm…. Am still not convinced..may be that Ajana story may convince me… heheh….

      Aaahhh…drooling !! Meow!! Jess din’t drool..sachi muchi…One naughty doll you are….hahah over his abs..like really??I ask you girl..that was just one sentence and you pull my legs with it…anyways..Am happy with your presence here….so keep commenting and pull my legs to your hearts content…hahaha…Stay happy and blessed my dear doll…Love you loads…okay…I will think about drooling,just because my doll asks me to…. TC… Teddy hugs… Eat well and sleep well,dont bury yourself into your books…

  7. Gauri

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    Arjun is someone who knows how to control Radhika πŸ˜€ 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 this was fantastic…..yaar I am out of words so just understand my feelings….this is just mindblowing …Jess you write just Perfect…with a capital P loads of love darling 😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Gauri….. thanks a lot dear… yep..he is… am so glad you enjoyed reading….am reading your words again and again and am so so happy to the extent it could exceed…thanks a ton my friend….you are a true magician…your words in comments has the same magic like your updates.. loadss of love and TC and stay happy….Teddy hugs…

  8. Viprida Annuru

    Jessie darling, update ah potu thaakura!! But fantastic update it was!! It was kinda painful to see both of them spying on each other and finding out stuff in an absurd way, instead of asking each other. But, then who am I kidding, this is Arjun and Radhika we are talking about, so all these fights are meant to happen. You’ve made them look like Mr & Mrs Smith of Television!! But, at the end it was so good to see a ray of hope when both of them realizing that they’re missing & hurting each other!! And about the complan part, are you sure you gave it to them and didn’t drink it yourselves?? πŸ˜› Just kidding!! Thanks for the lovely amazing update!! Please rest for a while and update the next one leisurely!! Take care Happie day!!

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Vipu…. aama.. ellam ungalukaga than… cliff hanger a edhuku vidanumnu I brought it… thanks a lot dear… Mr.Mrs smith…!! well both knew the situation..thats why… the end!!! thanks and happy that you precisely pointed that….and Vipu.. why they din’t prefer to ask each other..will bring it as story proceeds…and Complan…!!! hahahah… You all gave me through words…!! I so love that comment of yours..am giggling….Thanks a ton dear…. am happy you enjoyed reading… oh sure!! will do it….Already am typing only…heheh… Love your support and concern….TC and loads of love…Happy week ahead…

  9. Dipika

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    Judwa behena what are u eating boost or something.. Lol.. This is mind blowing chapter… You rocked it darling… So big trail of
    😘😘 😘😘😘😘😘😘

  10. Dipika

    Dipika

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    M so in love with this.. Aradhika driving me crazy.. So who is this new enemy.. M all curious… Post it soon darling. N whr abt os.. U said na u will post it soon.. M waiting.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Deepzzzz…Judwa behana…thanks a ton darling…boost..no…hehe…am glad you loved it…new enemy..,after few chaps but still I already gave in REception epi….Prena asks…soon??? hmmm..ok..will try… OS…some more time…plsss…too tight schedule…will do definitely…love you loads..TC and teddy hugs

  11. Aastha

    Hey Jessie….
    Your story it’s cliffhanger !!!… couldn’t guess what would happen….
    Radhika wants to be be with Nandini…..why involving herself into trouble but truly it would be Nandini who will be going to suffer… after all Radhika is HATKE…!!!
    Oh !! Arjun there’s still time tell the truth to Radhika…she definitely would understand and help ….
    It’s relief Ardhika are atleast on talking terms ….

    Update soon…. love you dear…n take care…πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Aastha……oh wow! thanks a ton dear…. she did say Aastha..since he threatened with her family name…. yes…you are right….am happy you liked it dear…Abt Arjun…and this issue..I will pull it fast…. ok…. will post soon…TC and loads of love…Stay happy….

  12. Meen

    Meen

    |Registered Member

    Girl…..back to back amazing updates……wow…..simply wow……aradhika scenes were muuuuuha…..no Arjun don’t tell radhika anything….coz here I’m waiting for high power drama……love u…..muuuuuha

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Tesoro Mio….Grazie una tonnellata!! Am happy you enjoyed… high power drama…ok done…Jess notes that….love you loads.. Stay happy…TC…Thanks for droppingin

  13. Sweetie

    Sweetie

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    Finally our pair is together,koi naa,jagde toh chalthe rehthe hai naa.. πŸ˜‰ Seasons of love is your another story??Did you write any other?Please let me know if it is a yes..God!! I lost tracks of all of your stories yaar.. πŸ™
    Love you loads darling sis..Take care.. πŸ™‚

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Manasssa…….My darling sis… thanks dear…yep…jagda hote rehte hain…pyaar bi ek taraf… yes…Seasons of love..just one chap posted….ok will give the links….love you loads…TC

  14. Kakali

    Kakali

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    Jessiiieeeeeee !!! superb part dear !!! i re-read it …. !!!! it’s beautiful.. specially Ardhika’s scenes… !!! awww !!! lot’s of love n bear hugg from me..*hug Jesie !!
    urghhh curiosity is increasing with hugh voltage drama.. !!! yeeiii n m gonna enjoy it with popcorn n chewing gum.. !!!
    waaa Radikhaaaa *pinch her cheeks…. !!!
    Love it dear !!! it’s semma semma kalakitta !!! Nanri dear !!! … ;-*

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Kakali…My surprise friend…Nandrigal Pala…. am so glad you enjoyed reading…Ardhika..!! thanks…ok..now I will have a note on it…. popcorn and chewing gum…I love popcorn too…pinch..!!! ok do it..Or shall i Ask Arjun to do it.. hehe…Love you loads and TC…bear hugs…… stay happy….

      • Kakali

        Kakali

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        Woooo Actually Jesieeee !!! plzz don’t laugh… m not a Tamilian… m learning 1 2 words from SR page n using it.. huhuhuhu … so i didn’t understand (Nandrigal Pala) mean.. !!
        yaaa yooo ready.. !!*Imagine Arjun pinching my cheeks.. awww *blush.. !!!

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Oh..not a prob dear…Well..Nandrigal pala means thanks a lot…you want Arjun to pinch yours..I thought of making Arjun to pinch Rad’z…you did say….pinch her…so who could..hehe…Love you dear…TC….chalo aRjun..pinch her cheeks but it shouldn’t pain.. πŸ˜‰
      ok na..

  15. Fanficoholic

    Fanficoholic

    |Registered Member

    Amazingggg di. I think u r on a posting spree. Thats good. I am really happy reading all these parts at once. Loved it. Srry fr the short and late comment

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Vaishuuuu….Thanks a lot dear.. glad that you read and you liked it too…. Thats ok dear…you are busy isn’t…Love you support…Love you loads…TC

  16. Aasthu

    Aasthu

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    oh that’s nyc………I liked ardhika at the end……..I always like them in embrace…….Rads sleeping with her head on Arjun’s chest which is her rightful place and Arjun’s arms over hers…..I love that……………..ohhh Jess u spoiled me……….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Chinnu…who is spoiling whom…I din’t write those details which you meant…Arjun’s chest her rightful place…wow..I missed to think that way…!!! loved it dear….Thanks a ton… am so happy you like it…. Naa…False accusation…I din’t spoil you..lol…Loads of love..TC my dear…

      • Aasthu

        Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        u r spoiling me…..I like all the ardhika scenes u write…….and I never get satisfied…….hehe…….love u too………and tc…………won’t u update Sweet Mistake soon???? do u know to edit pics????? I mean cut and paste 2 pics as 1??????

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Chinnu…Glad you like Ardhika scenes..not satisfied..my god..Jess runs…lol…Am not spoiling you..TC and loads of love..Sweet mistake updating…

  17. Roma

    Wowwww jesssss. ..it’s mind blowing and superbbb episode. ….congrats for completing 25 episodes. ….silver jubilee. …yippeeeeeeee. …loved ardhika moments. …soooooooo lovelyyyyy n awesoooooome. ……n neil also was very cuteeeee. …this story is really outstanding. ..n intriguing. …I’m so much in love with it….keep it up honeyyy. . Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Rommaaaaaaaaaa diiiiiii…..thanks a lot…YAY!!! Silver Jubliee…..Thanks a ton di…I was able to do this only because of the support from you all…am glad you liked the story…. thank you so much…. am so happy with your words…love you loads…muaahhhh…teddy hugs…TC di…

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