Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake – Chapter 24 (Part 1)

Hello….Its Jessie again…I read only half of comments..will reply soon…and Thanks a ton for the support and love…and wishes for my lappy…It is lucky I should say but still deprived
with some hardware..but I will manage posting my articles in every least chance I get…Here is the next one..The 2nd part of this is done…will post when possible…I myself feel bad to say so..but thats the truth…ok…Dont forget to share your precious views…Love you all

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Chapter 24 (Part 1)

Arjun saw preeti looking his face with a expectation.,”you weren’t there…he came back”,she said meekly pressing her lips not to cry before him….Arjun sat comprehending her words..That was something which he never thought about.,which had no place in his mind even as a doubt…Faizal left the college when he finished his MBA..then how and why??Arjun shook his head in confusion…

“Arjun…I came to Delhi a year back when I was confirmed about my posting,I thought Radz would be staying with Neil and went to share the news…On the way, I saw someone being chased .,it was Faizal and unaware of anything happening around I ran to help him.,at one point, when I thought the car will hit him, the car abruptly stopped and Radz got down,I couldn’t hear anything but I saw her in a inebriated state warning him…She din’t notice me….Faizal told me that Radz held some past grudges against him,I din’t believe it.,Yaar…we know her isn’t…..I met Neil…..He said he was staying alone and Radz stayed with Preeti in hostel….the reasons Radz gave was baseless…and the most shocking one was Neil wasn’t aware of Radz consuming alcohol…We confronted Preeti ..She said.,Faizal was troubling her..and Radz asked not to inform Neil as he may indulge in fight and risk his career… We tried to handle the issue.,but we got to know Vivek was in favor of Faizal…Faizal had tricked our vivek…he paid for his masters and Vivek got lured with his money…Tasting the new found luxuries through Faizal,Vivek believed him…We all know,Vivek already disliked Radz for her naughty behavior,it favored Faizal…When I met Vivek he uttered rubbish about her…Radz’s habit of drinking fueled Vivek’s hatred..When Vivek accused her that she cheated you,Radz slapped him..Neil tried to convince him..But it went in vain..I guess that when you would have called him..”,Prakash looked Arjun…

“Why do speak like Vivek was righetous..he had no saintly qualities to get your concern..He is a traitor…I trusted him like a brother what he did…”,Preeti vent out her anger listening Prakash… Arjun looked her confused….

“I will tell you Bhai..You know isn’t it was last year of Bachelors for me and Masters for Radhu and Neil..that year Vivek joined our univ along with Faizal…Vivek ignored Radhu but behaved normal with us.. inspite of all this issues with Faizal,Vivek never let go his friendship with Faizal..And Faizal..what not he did…bhai..he used to scare me…Every now and then,once he came to my room just to tarnish my name and only after that Radhu stayed with me…..As per dorm rules,she wasn’t allowed in mid semester,and she bribed the officials for that…Vivek made a issue of it…He din’t even think that was for my safety..He blindly believed Faizal’s words against Radhu…Neil bhaiya and Samrat uncle took the charge when she was about get suspended… It din’t go well with those two…Samrat uncle scolded Radhu before us..That day she chased him in car…After that for few days things seem to be normal and we went conscious on semesters overlooking that idiot…I stayed there even after my exams just for Radhu’s exams to get over..
…Faizal threw a party for Vivek’s birthday…I did a biggest mistake of accepting Vivek’s invite…Radhu did warn me…We went without informing anyone and Radhu waited in parking…I remember,that I drank what Vivek gave me.,within minutes I felt dizzy…I called Radhu….but no use..I felt someone dragging me and I was in a back seat of a car…I could see everything but couldn’t respond…Suddenly our car hit with something and It was Radhu’s vehicle…Faizal tried to hit Radhu but she hit him and pulled me out..”,Preeti stopped and looked Arjun with teary eyed…

“Bhai..that Faizal is nothing but..a beast !!..He hit Radhu with a log.,and tried to.. to…get me..on the middle of the road…”,she bit her lips to control herself.,but her whole tremored involuntarily recalling the past… Neil turned around facing outside…Kavin held her hand….

“If not Radhu…I would have died then itself…He behaved like a animal..Radhu being badly hit was unable to move…thats when She took her pistol and threatened Faizal.,he din’t budge., I couldn’t stop his advance….I just heard gunshots..I thought he was dead..but no..he was alive….He just yelled high..Neil and Prakash bhaiya came there with that stupid Vivek…..”,Preeti said with disgusted face…

Arjun was almost lost listening her and he saw Preeti to controlling herself….She closed her eyes to calm her mind while tears silently dripped from the corners of her eyes…He was raged like a bull,controlling himself he sat silent…He snapped a look at Prakash seeking answers…

“We met Vivek that day to solve the issue..We couldn’t see Faizal anywhere.,it was a just by fluke,we guessed he may be at his flats..On the way to his flats,we saw Radhika aiming at Faizal, and to shoot him…She shot him on his thighs..and Faizal complained a attempt murder case..he even said Radz spiked Preeti’s drink..he cited all petty reasons and he was the victim,after all., so Case got filed…Neil took the blame instead of her…Samrat uncle intervened and solved the issue..We sent Preeti to her native,waiting for the burning issues to cool down a bit….Within a week,Preeti informed that her foster parents are planning to get her married to someone for the loan they borrowed…Kavin came to us on Preeti’s insistence…..We thought we would settle the dues and get her back here..But things worked the other way…

Before us Faizal paid the money and took Preeti with him…Vivek was so overwhelmed assuming that to be Faizal’s generosity….He din’t let us meet her…We literally got mad.,Arjun…Radz tears are still in my vision…She called Faizal in our presence saying,she will come with him…then it strike us that he was trying all this to get her…..We couldn’t plan anything at last moment.and it was some interior forest like area in Kerala..We din’t know anything there,..Kavin with our dept influence managed to get a inspector on our favor and promised to reach the spot..I kept msging the details….But if to say that everything happened for a reason, then I would say.,Vivek got to know Faizal’s true colors that day..Faizal spoke a deal with Preeti and when he took the photos morphed with Preeti’s image ,Vivek was completely shattered…This girl has been unnecessarily pulled into the issue.. It was only Radz who took the lead…She was aware of this before it seems…we weren’t!!..

We felt exhausted before Faizal….His father’s political influence spoke that day.. Surrounded by his men.,he gave the photo films,Photos and left Preeti too…Radz pushed her into a car assuring that she will come safe….We waited for Preeti to leave and Kavin to arrive…Vivek attended someone’s call in a haste,Faizal
hit him bad, and as a reflex his men began to thrash us…within minutes..Faizal took Radz with him…and his goons took Vivek and Preeti in another car…I saw all the three struggling and Vivek madly hitting everyone inside his vehicle,..We laid being brutally beaten…Before anyone could think about something, the goons vehicle hit with some mini tourist van, and Faizal’s car collided with a force, his vehicle halted after a mad dash but he was thrown down the pit at the force of hit… Preeti laid on road in a critical stage….Radz lost her conscious…”,Prakash sighed looking the ground…

“After an hour.,through Kavin we got to know Faizal was badly injured., recovery chances were least for him..and Vivek went in coma…Most of them in the tourist van along with few goons have lost their lives..The devil responsible for all this is alive… what a fate..!!”,Prakash said sagging on the couch…

“I think may be because of you Radhika was targeted …you should find the reason…”,Kavin spoke…

Arjun saw preeti to lay her head on Kavin’s shoulders…Arjun caressed her scars…”because of that accident”,he asked…

“Yeah..because of that…”,she said sullen…

“Arjun…who told you that Radzzie is responsible for this”,Neil asked impatiently…and gestured Kavin to take preeti to her room…

“Everyone is just a Toy for her..Arjun… I fear we lost our Preeti.”,Vivek’s words played afresh in his mind and Arjun parroted the same…

Preeti stopped on her tracks,”that was when he saw me to commit suicide…Radhu threatened my foster parents for forcing me..She said she will pay the dues.,but I shouldn’t be harmed till then..but my uncle got scared and decided to finish the marriage that day itself…When Faizal paid the money,they said about Radhu…I din’t want to go with Faizal,so I tried to cut my nerves…but I heard Vivek saying those…Assuming that you came.,I opened the door.,but caught with Faizal…”,Preeti said in a sad voice…”You had called then?”,She asked curiously…

Arjun nodded…The whole week I tried my best to reach him….I did hear your scream pleading Radhika you won’t go…with bits and pieces of info I got,I struggled myself not to believe what I heard…but your parents said Radhika took you against your will…the death certificate..a witness ..an old man said Radhika pushed you inside some car when you pleaded her…I want to know everything but I couldn’t..how to ask her..tell me….”Arjun smiled humorless…”The certificate confused me more”,he shook his head sighing disappointed…

Kavin smiled.,”We had no other go…Faizal is alive..but none of his gang knew what happened with the girls…There was lot of unclaimed corpses due to the accident..the accident was indeed too worse…so…we utilized it on our favor…we made records of one among those as Preeti..and asked to handover only if someone comes in search of her….We knew her foster family won’t bother…We weren’t aware of you.,so when we gotinfos about someone enquiring about Preeti.,we made all possibilities to keep the lie alive…but unfortunately you got the certificate…..I married her after a couple of months of that incident and later changed her name as Shalini in gazette records….Faizal din’t gain his conscious for 6 months..so it favored us..moreover the certificate you received wont have the original attestation..It’s Just to fool Faizal’s men…We thought we could find you..but you turned even more tough for us”,Kavin spoke holding Preeti’s shoulder.. “What you heard from Preeti’s family is just what Faizal asked them to say..Its not hard to guess you see..”,he continued..
“Neil…you should learn detective skills from Arjun yaar”,Kavin mocked him and looked Preeti..

Neil patted Kavin..”I was searching with Wrong sur name..”,he laughed..”all this problems took a toll on my brain…well…Lemme gift that university office assistant something”…

“You din’t know your friend’s surname”,Kavin mocked again…

“Who was interested on this khadoos senior”,Neil winked at Prakash..

“My Ajju bhaiya isn’t a khadoos”Preeti pouted..

“Prakash..she is changing sides man…! we need to find a new sister”,Neil slumped on Prakash

“I already got one..Samaira!!”.Prakash smiled wide..

“I have Radhika”,Kavin cheered..

“Am I a sisterless brother”,Neil pouted like a kid…

Arjun found the atmosphere to be bit abnormal,but Only Preeti to enjoy their banter…

“Preeti..you need some rest..”,Kavin said looking Neil…

“Neilu bhaiya…Don’t mock my Ajju bhai”,Preeti said before leaving the cabin…Neil pretended to turn thoughtful on her words and she smacked his arm..

“Well…Arjun..whats the issue between Faizal and You…why was Radzzie targeted..”,Neil asked impatiently when Preeti left the place.. Arjun shook his head in negative…

“Damn..!! what the hell stops you…and why can’t you accept me as a fellow friend…Do you know what It feels to see your sister being dragged into a van..we both got a ruthless treatment by those men…The fellow took her like a trophy…and ….she..the idiot was expecting you to contact even after that…”,Neil banged his fist on the table…

“That was something he himself din’t expect Neil..!..he said his situation too,so don’t blame him”,Prakash spoke for Arjun…

Ofcourse yes….If it is someone or something to be blamed it only the Situation…It happened only after he decided to stay aloof..his dad accident.,him being asked to stay away..,and here Radhika and Preeti suffered…Bad.,it never comes alone!..

“I called you yesterday to inform that Faizal has got recovered…the issue is serious…Whats the use of being a Man.,when you can’t do anything to save the dignity of a woman especially your family….I felt this when Faizal misbehaved with them..you have no idea of the ordeals we three men went through…When I laid in blood, watching Radhika to be dragged into a van,I just prayed if she can’t be safe let her die..!! but shouldn’t face the hell Faizal had planned…..Vivek was stupid.,but the only good thing he did was, he made the accident happen…else we have no courage to guess what would have happened with Radhika and Preeti..”,Prakash bend forward supporting his palms covering his mouth…

Arjun sat froze listening them…”Believe me Prakash..I have no idea why Faizal behaved this worse.. May be he took it as revenge against me…I did fight for Radhika…”..Arjun said thoughtful…

Neil was almost in tears..he pushed the other door open and left the place…

“Preeti never spoke anything related to Faizal to us…It was just because of you she said all this….Neil would have felt offended…Don’t take him wrong..I doubt,even I can’t be like him..blindly supporting the people who never opens up anything to you..!!”,Prakash heaved a sigh as he got up… “It’s upto you Arjun…and Faizal is dangerous.!!..”,Prakash left the place…

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Arjun saw Neil looking the vast swimming pool of his hotel through the long straight windows from his cabin… He adjusted his throat…Neil just gave a side eyed look…

“Well..you never told me you own a hotel”,Arjun spoke looking his back…

“Because you din’t fake for a job here”,Neil sardonically remarked with out facing Arjun….

Silence occupied every second of the cold moments passing in between the furious gentlemen…

“Am…umm…Neil….I shouldn’t have raised my hand…and.I am sorry….”,Arjun said after a minute… “I was angry on you..listening Vivek’s words.. I did enquire in police station where Faizal lodged the complaint….but..everything turned me against you people isn’t”,he asked defeated…

” No Arjun…I could understand you…if only we had spoken this would have been avoided..”,Neil turned to face him

“You said if I stop speaking with preeti…Radhika would worry about me and contact me…so I thought why not to include you too”,Arjun chuckled…”but drastic turn of events…”,he shook his head…

“As though you listen me every single time…I plead you isn’t…you were in contact with us but not with Radzzie…did you listen that?”,Neil faked anger… “but Arjun…you need to know a lot…what she hides from me ….She will say to you…I know she will….!! She isn’t the same one…Vivek’s words are true for a extent..Atrocious..!!Yes…at times….can you believe she kept me away from all this…every time whenever I scold her that she lost you…I had seen her smiling…She learnt to hide her pain from me…My radziee..Who rushes to me for every single thing…would cry in my absence..take pills for sleep…and drink when I scold her …!! Until she came here she was like that….I wish she doesn’t turn that way again….find what bothers her this much….”,Neil said conveying his confusions and worries in a sad tone..his fingers rolling a paper weight….

“You think she will say to me?…She won’t…when it’s not you…then it’s not me too….Neil…don’t think that way…Am not important,more than you in her life…I knew that…!”Arjun held his shoulder….

“She is more a sister for me..I couldn’t see her like this…”,Neil’s voice constricted…

“I know…am sorry for being stupid…like really…I had hated you for roaming with her always..spoiling my time with her”,Arjun pressed his lips looking Neil…

Neil smiled a little,”Over possessive”,he muttered..

“Can’t help buddy”..Arjun smiled…

“Arjun..on the first day concert of cheer beats,she openly said me how much she wished you to watch it…something organized by her…I really felt dejected that I couldn’t make her wish happen…but..that was a surprise you were there”,Neil smiled…”but…it was six months back…you said 11 months back you came here…”,Neil looked him baffled…

Arjun heaved a sigh,”Clever..!! I did say…my situation!!…its my sister…Nandhini….That’s y I got to meet you people late…”,Arjun said…

“Oh!!…hope your sister is fine..”,Neil said to him…

“Some other time I Will say about her” Arjun looked Neil…

“OK..Raddzie has a derringer!! Have an eye…Faizal…I forgot to alert her..”,Neil spat in a rush as he received a call from his guard.

“What.!!..”Arjun asked in shock…his mobile vibrated with Nandhini’s name…

“I need to go”,Arjun said hastily…

“Ok…I will meet Radzie…she is off to her house…”,Neil followed in suit….

“May be to meet Sam”,Arjun said walking to elevator….Neil just hummed in response….he doesn’t want another chaos now…his mind somewhere alerted about Piyali….

“You seem to have guards around her”,Arjun mocked..

“No..just today.,Cause we couldn’t take risk after learning about Faizal..”,Neil adjusted his watch and walked swiftly before his staffs…Arjun smiled at his bossy mannerisms..

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Radhika pulled her car before the mansion….She felt annoyed…depressed….ignored…over all dejected listening and thinking about Arjun….he stayed as a puzzle even now….she wanted to blind trust him but everytime,her fate brought a new shade of him, like a news for her….Now…Neil too was in contact with him…his idea…her lips thinned at that…idiot..!! She wants to be care free now…to giggle like brainless…forget the pain…for few hours at least….Sam!! ..She got down wondering about the reason her calls to Sam remaining unanswered…she saw Sam’s car parked there..

She walked inside calling Sam’s name aloud… “Sam has left for some work..Charity function arrangements..”she turned listening piyali’s voice….

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So…how was it…Next part is done..but I split into two as the half of it got deleted by mistake… I did plan a double episode yesterday…..but wasnt able to ..Pls do ignore my Typos and grammatical errors…Am just posting the moment I get my wifi connection and lappy to work bit normal…so don’t feel offended if I suddenly take a leave…and Seasons of love…next week..may be… sorry for that…Loads of love to you all and Take care…

48 comments

  1. Jewel

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    jez, now everything get cleared, Faizel, i want to kill him, now he is back again, arjun make him pay for everything he did to ur love and sister. prakash, wished radhika and preeti to die than going through faizel’s torture, that part was really touching. Vivek, he is an idiot why he believed faizel, that leads to all this trouble, but even i am thankful to him for that accident, because of that faizel was in comma state. the part where arjun saying about raneil friendship i liked that a lot. he was angry with neil for snatching his time from rads, he is always possessive… i liked arjun preeti bond, and rads care on preeti a lot. she done a lot for preeti. and the friendship btwn all the people is amazing…. now i am scared of piyali, what drama she is going to create…. waiting for next part….

      • Jessie

        |Author

        Shonnaaaaaa….teddy hugs darling….prakash words…yes..am glad u said that ..shona…love u loads girl..Arjun is always possessive..oh god..yea..the friendship..I too love tat…prakash n Rads and radz n preeti is my fav..no scare when.Arjun is der…Piyali. .she will be in her form from 27th chapter…loads of love…have posted already…TC….

        Yesss…you are the first…yippeee!!! 🍫🍫🍫

    • Jessie

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      Thanks a lot kavina dear…Kavin is a guy isnt..and yes..in.one movie a kid name is kavin..I found it to go well with both the names….shalini and preeti…that’s how Kavin happened here….kavina…love u for the support and TC

  2. Dipika

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    Judwa behena kya baat hai you are on full mode.. Lol.. But honestly it was blockbuster and dhamakedar chapter… God i never thought that faizal will scoop ao low n make priti n radz suffered this bad…. He tried to hurt radz bad.. Then turn vivek against them…. N tht bl**dy mad vivek.. Don’t hav his own brain i guess… He spike priti’s drink.. N hits rads… God soooo much pain this girls went through.. So kavin is married to priti now…. Now finally truth came out n arjun kneq all.. But what rads is hiding tht neil mentioned.. M curious for tht.. I like the funny banter priti neil n kavin shared.. Lol.. Now i hope aradhika came on good terms n we can see more sizzling romance.. Lol.. Winking.. Haha.. So u hav wrote nxt part already thn post it soon.. Love u lots my darling twin.. 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Judwa behana….thanks a ton dear…am so happy..
      yep..faizal.is the bad boy….vivek.dint spike preeti drink…he did consider her like.a sis..that’s y that tussle at last…yep….kavin preeti..long ago I said…you ppl.forgot…she is preg now…..sizzling romance…hehe…I need to try for romance hehe….Neil.words…Will come up with further updates….glad u pointed ur likes….posted…next one…too…TC and loads of love

  3. Chinmayi

    Faisal is a devil. The girls had struggled a lot.. I like Neil’s care on Radz.. I too want a brother like him😕but not Neil😜 what an episode jas.. While reading about bad incident I was breathing heavily as if I was there… God jas ki lappy jaldi teek kardo na plssssss🙏🙏🙏

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Chinmayi….thanks a ton.dear…Neil jaise bhai….yaar.me too then..he is so good.na…but not Neil…clever you are….that’s a awesome compliment…I made it look to happen…wow…thanks again….it helps me….now jaadoo ki jhappis to you…. am so overwhelmed reading ur wish…love u girl…loads of love…TC…next one updated…do say how it was

  4. Myra

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    No problem jessie di….atleast u updated….oh my god, this was one hell of an episode….geez man, too much to come to terms with….preeti radhika…that was one gasping tale…faizal what kind of man is he?
    Idk….i feel a little miffed with arjun…..he wasnt there to support his sister and his love at a time, when they needed him the most…..and neil….awwieee, the chocolate boy….caring for everyone always…wish raddzzie hadnt shut him out…..

    Di, i am gonna go up and read this again…..too much to grasp!

    Hopefully, your lappy should recover soon…
    Update. Asap.
    Love you loads 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Heyya. …lil star…where were u….I did miss u here….thanks a lot dear…Faizal…he is a beast…and miffed with Arjun…why..he said his situation…hmmm…Neil…wooo…choco boy….yea…well why radz dint say to him…Will be in further ones…may be after 5 to 6 chaps ke baad…glad u pointed it…and…am happy dear…lappy…what to say…the hardware spares test my patience..thanks a ton dear am happy with ur words for my laptop…love you loads…TC…

  5. arti viswanathan

    Loved it jessie darling…. I think arjun is still overpocesssive now also about radhika… He wants to keep radhika and preeti both of them safe from vivek as well as faizal. That faizal should get punished for what he has done with both of them. Now its arjun’s turn to take revenge on faizal and vivek. They both should know no what bad things they have done….. Excellent jessie dear.. That’s why i love ur written episode so will be waiting for next episode…tc loads of love dear…

    • Jessie

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      Arti….Arti……thanks a ton darling….Arjun..yea..he is…well…vivek is not a bad boy…isn’t…he was lured by Faizal…he indeed helped by hitting the goons…the last part of FB has that….he got to know at last only…abt vivek..some.more to come…Arjun’s style of revenge…hmmm done..dona done..!! Thanks again…yay…am happy…TC and loads of love

  6. Shree

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    yey!! super apu!! bomb update!! kavin n preeti.. douche faizal.. devil vivek.. its all out.. i loved d banter.. lol haha..unna madriye ellame .. lol

    update soon di.. love you so much

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hehehe..bomb update…..dinka…chika…dinka….chika…..
      whistle….am happy at that…ena madiriye….Awwwieee…… thanks….😆😆😆😆love u girl….😘😘

  7. Brin

    |Registered Member

    Mind blowing episode, the truth is revealed to Arjun, but that Faizal is still alive, what will Arjun do to Faizal, eagerly waiting for the next update, Jessie you out done it with this story, well done. 🙂

  8. Sangee

    |Registered Member

    hey jess once again a super epi…keep going dear …waiting for next one..post soon..hugs and kisses…typing in lappy so no emoticons 🙁 comming to the epi iam dumbstruck dear…
    how dare is that faizal to do these things to preeti and rads arjun avana vidatha da..he shud pay for his deeds.. pk saying that he prayed that girls shud die…seriously i can imagine what they went through..even arjun is not with them…poor radika she have went through all these..
    after knowing all this also you are going behide your sister stupid arjun..and the friends banter to make the situation good was super…neil sisterless brother 🙁 ardika and ppreetis bond was superb..faizal thought to take rads with him..why did arjun didt know abt this in prior..now he is up again…arjun this time save rads from him…now its all upto u arjun…arjun asking sry to neil.. 🙂 neil shud learn dedctive skills from arjun ha ha ha he too is bad in that thought preeti is dead..arneils convo was mindblowing clearly shows their affection towords each of them ..overpossesive arjun…arjun saying neils is more imortant than himin rads life…one whistle for him super arun…what rads is hiding from both…she started to drink..sleeping pilss..poor girl ..she turned attrocious at time.. 🙁 now arjun have many burderns over his shoulders..faizal,rads,piyali,bs,preeti,nandini etc etc how he gonna tackle everything baby he is just married give him some time for romance also poor couple… next what drama is piyali up to uff… en duty overtme ah la irruuku..this may be arjuns MV waiting for next one pls be soon iam waiting cant wait pls pls… take care love you hugs and kisses 🙂 🙂 mass da nee sema sema sema update….

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Geet…..thanks a ton chellam….PK dialogue..yes it has the intensity of their ordeal…u got that..muaaah…..Arjun ..yes…vidatha…..Arjun….elathayum parkamumle…hehe…glad to know ur views on ur likes….yepp…wat a detective this Arjun is…hehe…sema kalai illa….Arneil..aama…innum.ulladhu manna…Arjun ku whistle a….!! Arjun nee jeychutada….Arjun ku burden a….Geet…namma hero en pannuvanu parunga…25th chap 2nd part iruku….romance….oh..I see…eee…there will be…Arjunss MV…😂😂😂sema da chellam….I loved it…..muaahh…as usual unga kalakal thirai vimarsanam….love u loads chellam…TC….

  9. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    OKay…let me first breathe. I am snapping my eyes continuously after reading this…what had happened. Jaaazzzziiiii, what have you written yar? You just revealed a one solid FF plot in one episode…damn girl..it is soooooooooooo wonderful, excellent and brilliant one. You narrated the whole sequence in a spectacular way where in no one can question….YOU ARE EXCEPTIONALLY TALENTED GIRL…i am so sohappy reading this..finally i felt 97% secrets are unfolded.

    The way Neil, prakash, kavin and preeti told Arjun about the incidents and how Vivek manipulated Arjun talking bad about Rads and his anger on rads made two girls life miserable… Faisal who is the root cause of all the problems lured Vivek and he just sold himself for Faisal’s money…yuck.

    The good thing is atlast Vivek saw everything directly how Faisal used him to get Rads and how he tortured Preeti….hope vivek will get in good terms with radhika after coming out of coma..but why u made faisal out of this coma..oh no am so curious to know whether he might me knowing something about Rads and Arjun.

    I felt like he is in revenge mode with Arjun and thus makes him to spoil Rads who is the love interest of Arjun or like coz moving close with faisal and Arjun found him to be a bad one, rads ignorance made him an animal…either way possible but mudiva neenga than edukanum. lol

    okay, i just loved the way Arjun finally understand Raneil bond and his statement sounds little jealous seeing them both …lovely one.

    Okay so now what is happening with Piyali….did she is upto something with Rads, where is Sam went when her car is in home and why i felt like something is wrong and piyali is the reason for that…oh no Faisal came and took sam with him or what? Now what Rads gonna do?

    Jaaaazzzzzi…a cliffhanger it is..pls post next soon dear.LOVE YOU DARLING

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thanks…Thanks…Thanks a ton Satzzz…. Vivek wasn’t aware and yes… he understood about Faizal at last…coma boy! Let him sleep…Mulichu ena pana poran..mudiva naan than edukanuma…already eduthachuma….Arjun jealous.. wooo… ada rama…why to pull sam now…Satz…relax dear…Satz are you like giving ideas for me….Faizal and sam…nooo dear..

      Posted na…Thanks again…Love you loads..TC….Am reading your comment again.. About Piyali from chap 26 or 27 dear

  10. Neha

    Wowww….I was like 😮 …superbbb update…next one post soon… Plzz add some more aradhika scene… Plzz…love you.. God bless you 🙂

  11. bhargavi

    Awesome Di all the parts are. I couldn’t read the updates due to my personal reasons. But am so happy after reading that. But am still confused as why arjun has to hide so much and am too confused as to what will happen next. Unable to bear this suspense please give me the next update soon

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Bhargaviii….love u loads Girl…was missing you…thought you got busy…..am happy you loved it….well…why he hid…that opens along with upcoming chaps.and thanks dear….love u loads..TC

  12. Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Ok First thing First before I forget ….I wan to kill Faisal and Vivek…will you let me do that pls ..me with puppy eyes ….now what an amazing friend Radhika is she went overboad to save Preeti…just wow…Jess 21 cannon salute for this wonderful and rocking update…u are phenomenal…I read it in one go…and now craving for more and more….why did that update get deleted …Jaldi karo …me waiting madly … love u 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Gauriiiiiiiii……salute!! Imagine me rushing to hug you tight…and now teddy hugs and jumping……then wanna dance with you….fast beats wala song of your choice…..👭Gauri…am speechless reading it yaar…u just pumped more liveliness into.me….Your words mean a lot to me.yaar….puppy eyes for killing someone…Vivek isn’t bad..he was fooled by Faizal…vivek did made the accident happen…..you are my Frangipani Fairy….no violence…!! Teddy hugs yaar…had posted 25 th chap too…love u loads…Stay happy

  13. ana

    I am also…..fyn..Di…nd no it was not bciz of exams….actually ciz of me …woh I by mistake broked my phone….nd bcoz of that…I WS not able to comment…..
    Di…after reading this I am really curious for next….can’t wait…
    Coz many things r happening… BT I don’t get arjun here….y he is being so suspicious…. Don’t kn…
    Nd the way u explained everyone conditions.. In arjun’s absense that was really good….+ radzz devastated state was well written… I really liked it…nd heart touching too….
    Waiting for ur next post…when u will post???

    Nd Di if want to meet me then u HV to come to Gujarat…..so ….wts say will u cm???….if yes….then I am waiting to meet u….finger crossed…
    Bye…see u soon..
    Love u……muaahhhh

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Anaaaaa……so how is your phone now…got the new one….they need to make unbreakable ones…hehe…I too drop my phones freq…Arjun suspicious???? Means…is it because of Nandhini….Arjun is not negative dear….oh wow…thanks for particularly pointing those…am happy…next chaps are posted dear….

      Gujarat…wow..!! Hmmm….I will get a chance…a plate of dhoklas and navrati dance clouds my vision…karba dance isn’t…my friend’s bhabhi is from der…she said about that dance…am like at least once in my life time I should do it…hehehe

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Anaaaaa……so how is your phone now…got the new one….they need to make unbreakable ones…hehe…I too drop my phones freq…Arjun suspicious???? Means…is it because of Nandhini….Arjun is not negative dear….oh wow…thanks for particularly pointing those…am happy…next chaps are posted dear….

      Gujarat…wow..!! Hmmm….I will get a chance…a plate of dhoklas and navrati dance clouds my vision…karba dance isn’t…my friend’s bhabhi is from der…she said about that dance…am like at least once in my life time I should do it…hehehe . Fingers cross…Will say if I come…love u loads…and TC dear

  14. Sree_deeksha

    |Registered Member

    hey angel….remember me… u have full rights to kill me cz im not commenting these days….yaar nno time…ok fyn so please give me permission i will kill that faizel stupid fellow….he is an idiot and manipulating vivek too…and this stupid vivek usko brain nahi hain kya…he turned against them for faizel…any way…bashing episode dear…luvd it…luv u more…byee…..donno when ill msg again…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      My god…judwa angel….how would I kill you…love u dear…is it because of studies..I thought so….ok dear….Faizal..he has more in this story…so finally you say how to kill and.lets execute..
      lol…am.speaking like.a goon…hehe…vivek
      .stupid tha..ab nahi….thanks a ton dear…am.so happy to meet you again..

      Ok.dear…jus come back.when.possible with a story…a os will do..easy na…coz i loved that plot u wrote…was new and different…Take care…study well….loads OV love…..stay happy always

  15. Crazy Girl

    Oh my jaz kutty…. u r amazing writer baby… what a lovely episode!!! U have cleared all my doubts regarding preeti… just amazing… each and evrythng u have explained so steady n clear…

    Radhu n Preeti had faced toughest side wen Arjun was nt thr… really so bad yaar… nw again anthr confusion had raised ovr me.. y dat idiotic faizal wanna take revenge against Radhu???? N atlast vivek came to knw the true colour of Faizal…Bcz of money vivek supported blindly for Faizal… ahh!!! Very bad… n our hero belived watevr thy said abt Radhu n Preeti… its too bad yaar… his heart says to clear it but his mind gt stuck watevr he heard… hmm!!!

    Radhu alwys blindly belivd Arjun n alwys trust him… bt Arjun had failed in ths… enna pa Arjun ipdi panitiyea… nw Radhu will be deep hurt bcz of Arjun act… bt i think these things will gt clear soooon…. i wish Vivek to cme bck frm coma…. waiting for Faizal n Arjun meeting… n moreovr nw Arjun gt struck with his sisy… romba pavam oru prblm mudiradhukula inonu start agudhea… ayo Arjun rmba pavam pa ne… odu odu akka vandhuta lol….

    N most imprtnt i left abt Neil… wow such a awsme man… he alwys supports for his buddy… he never give up anyone… aww!!! Dats so cute… Damn man i am gng crazy for neil… i wish i too wana buddy like him… so cute of u Neil…

    N jaz kutty i wish fr ur lappy to be nrml soon… u need a big aplause dear evnthough u lap gt prblm u hav given a awsme epi… a tight teddy hug for u n bear me for ths long n lengthy comment i knw it was boring too bt am so sry fr dat… luv u alot baby… tc…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Sulbhi jaan…..your jaz kutty is smiling wide at 1 o clock.reading this big comment…I love big ones…coz…its your review isn’t…thanks a ton dear…faizal.issue after few chaps…I will bring…hahah..Arjun…avan pavama…hmmm…sympathy vote alluran…

      Illa…Arjun also enquired…he says he was confused with death certificate…he dint believe but couldn’t ask to radz1 also……Neil..enoda buddy le…adhan..hehe…I love his character here…thanks for the wishes sulbhi jaan…aama…lappy illama kashtam…the thing is am.in my relatives house..oru trip mathiri….so am getting one or others lappy to post…but at ni8…then.I will delete all that cookies and brownies…hehe..apram ena kandupichutangana…I love long comments…nalla kudunga…tight teddy hugs….yaar boring sonna….namma sulbhi ya…ena panalam…hmmm…love u loads dear….TC…am jumping in happiness reading your comments…thanks for lifting my spirits up

  16. Fanficoholic

    |Registered Member

    Hello jesssie akka. Finalllyyyyy i got time and read all the epsiodes in apone gi. So intruging and amazingggggg ur story was. Fullllllllll of suspense. I jst loved ur atory. Even this epi. I am like happy that some of the mystery got cleared. And di i want veryyyyyyyyy biggggggggggg punishment for vivek and mainlyyyyyy faizal. Exhibit utmost cruelty wth them. And is it u who tld silent readers to comment? U r the one whi wrote the article. If so well said di. Even i feel the same. I am having no mood to write beacuse if the disappointing responses. Do we need to tell them everytym that their comments encourage us very much? Y dnt they jnderstand that we r taking tym off our bust schedules and writing thsez? Well i jst regret starting my ff. I sometyms want to end it abruptly. Anyways enough of my blabber. Have a good day di. Amaizngggggg excellent episode this is. Post siin

    Love u
    ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Vaishuuuu…..all.chaps in a go….my god…girl…that’s amazing….thanks a ton dear…and yep…will do that…silent readers note…yea dear…I wrote it…oh…pls don’t stop..am a fan of locked story..u are one among the unique writers we have…don’t end abruptly..think.about the readers who follow your updates… I used to get only 13 or 14 comments…but at one point I thought I should continue only for those 14 readers…coz..they did encourage me….so don’t worry..
      be happy…have a great day…and never regret…your plot is one of my fav here…so bring it my sweeto

  17. farjana

    Hi Jessie… some confusions r cleared.. i hope aradikha can blind trust each other but there is seem to be a long way for tt.. too gd… pls update sn.

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Farjana…thanks a ton dear…for dropping in…and conveying your views…yes…they could…it won’t take a long way dear …I say that…TC and loads of love…next one updated dear

  18. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    Soo Faizal is the reason for all the trouble……….Vivek….stupid…..is he the same way even now???????? Faizal was obsessed with Rads….isn’t that why he did all this??? What has it gotta do with his issue with Arjun???????????? Nandini issue is in no way related to this…right?? Arjun’s POV was good and necessary……nw my anger towards him washed away…..I too want him to find out what’s bothering Rads other than this……..y did Rads think that Arjun is a puzzle????

    Jess do read my comment in the prev update……….love u…….tc………

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Yes..Aasthu…he is the reason…vivek…its said..he realized at the last part where faizal threatens…faizal..Arjun…Radz…after few chaps…no dear…Nandu is not related to this…glad on ur view about Arjun’s part… well..she was always kept away from everything related to him isnt…that’s y…oh ok dear…Will catch that one…love u loads Chinnu…..TC

  19. Roma

    My dearyyy Jessss…..what should I say. ..I’m out of words. ..this very very interesting n so mysterious. …n u left us with another cliffhanger. ..where is sam now?….all the mystery behind preeti’s accident n fake death is cleared now..but there is still lots of things unclear….n more things coming up when faizal will be there….he is already out of Coma n discharged from hospital…..the past revelation was very heart wrenching. …preeti n rads had to go through very tough time……n situation made everything worse…well done my sweeeeeetheart darling. ..u r so dedicated. ……keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug♡♡♡♡♡♡♡☆☆☆☆☆ 😉

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Heeyyya di…. thanks di…Sam is safe..I din’t trouble her still…hhee… yes di…Preeti’s is cleared…yes..Faizal will bring few things…thanks di,…Past was something I had my fingers crossed..am happy at the reviews…. yes situation is the villan here…Dedicated!! It means a lot di…you made me to jump with that….love you loads…TC and bear hugs…Muahhh

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