Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake – Chapter 2


Helloo.. People of Planet Manmarziyan.. It’s Jessie With the next chapter. I am so happy reading your comments filled with encouraging words. Thanks a Ton.!
And Silent readers do drop your views. I will post the next chapter on Sunday.


Chapter -2

Piyali was already highly irritated when Samrat threw his tie in the air dramatically and walked off signing the cheque. He was neither angry nor worried at Radhika’s aggressive manners. She couldn’t digest Samrat encouraging Radhika’s rude behaviour without a single word of retort. And now, Sam’s kiddish talk added fuel to the fire. ” I shouldn’t encourage this..” she said to herself sternly. Sam came down and pulled Piyali to the entrance ” C’mon, C’mon it’s getting late.. Mom” Over excited sam was rushing towards car and jumped into passenger seat. Sam never liked to be a part of Birdsong in particular anything in business.
It was a herculean task for Piyali to make her agree for being a director in BS.Though she agreed, Piyali knew she has no interest, so everyday she made it as a duty to get ready and take her along with her, but Sam never showed any happiness or excitement being in BS or learning about Business. Today., Its different. Piyali stood there in porch without moving a inch.

Sam opened driver seat door and called ” Mom!!! Mom!!” Piyali came out of her thoughts and sat in car.

While driving she asked ” Kiddo.. Seems u are more interested to reach office before me..”

“Yes mom.. Cin..” she paused “want to meet di, mom. I was late for breakfast so missed her”

“Guess.. U missed your breakfast too.”

“Tats ok,Mom.. We have a client presentation isn’t..Amit said. I made the presentation, Mom” She said to divert the topic. Sam knew her mom. She questioned her excitement. But the point is she realized it just a second before. Neil is right, I have to watch my words, she thought and saw her mom.

“I will have a look” Piyali clipped.

Over!! Sam muttered under her breath and closed her eyes for a while to control her anxiety.

” You have to be more Professional.. Learn your responsibilities soon. No more chit chatting or playing candy crush in office hours.” Piyali said in slow and clear commanding voice.

“Yeah Sure,Mom” she replied with closed eyes. Piyali continued with more such sweet coated commands.

Sam was breaking inside. Her face started to loose its glow it had minutes before. She doesn’t want to cry before Radhika. She took a deep breath and sat straight looking the highly traffic consumed roads. The same roads where they played car race in midnight hours, where they spent jolly rides till past 2 at midnight. Every time Radhika would take the scoldings on behalf of them as a blessing from their mom.

“She is turning a Rebel” ..”She is a True Angel” .. “She is my Princess” Everyone’s words echoed in her ears..

Bird song was nearing.

” We can do anything for our Cinderella di, sammy” his words vibrated.When she recalled those words, she was in lost of breath. Sam opened mouth to breath in some air.

Piyali who was about to park asked”What happened, Sammy”

“Nothing, Mom.”She removed d seat belt to get down.

“Wait. I need to speak”



“Arjunnn.. You Here?!!!” Radhika controlled herself not to shout in excitement. She noticed the coldness in his eyes. Is he still angry with me? I saw him Surprised for a sec.

“What.Are. You.Doing.Here??” Arjun asked in cold and composed tone.

How good Am getting welcomed Everywhere she thought and replied ” Umm.. Job..My work is here” She clipped.

“Oh! I think we need Professionalism to do a job in a company like this.. and you don’t have that.”


“I will do the honor of recommending for your rejection before your interview”

Still the same.. she thought and decided to play a prank

“Seniiiorrrrr..!!” She called with puppy dog eyes.

Arjun was stupefied for a moment. She clearly observed the effect of her words. He stood frozen.This is how she used to call me., ah..Tease me.. make fun around me..

He alone in this world knew how much he missed her, how much her voice.. her naughtiness, her cute antics, she herself has a control on him. She smiled.

“Radhikkaa..Listen..This is not..” he whisper spoke only to get cut off by her in middle

“Please Senior.. I need this job..” She blinked and came a step forward looking into his eyes.

He stood silent. His mind got blank. Love’s effect one should say.

” Senior.. Shall we go back to Planet Earth” She said and fluttered her eyes

His anger flew away in seconds. He fake glared her.. Should I get her a job here?..Can I be normal having her around?

“Give me your file” He said

“Morning, Arjun” Samrat greeted him with a wide smile.

“Good Morning,Sir ” Arjun replied surprised at Samrat’s smile.

Radhika was keen in observing her love. She dint notice Samrat approaching them. Not again! Now Arjun will get angry that she played prank on him.

“Btw.. Arjun.. Meet my Daughter.. Radhika Khanna! The Future Owner of this company” He said in proudly. Radhika closed her eyes cursing her stupidity, when she opened her eyes, it met with a pair of eyes holding surprise and shock together.

“Actually., I want to give a proper introduction,but I couldn’t hold myself when I saw Arjun here “Samrat spoke patting Radhika’s shoulders “Radhika..He is Arjun. Our Senior Head.”

Arjun was starring her with mixed emotions. She made him a fool again.

Radhika was unable to see him like this. She dint expect this. She was about to say, but now he wont believe that too. She looked around and her eyes halted seeing Piyali and Samaria coming there.
Is Sam here to meet me? No.. She isnt happy. she seemed to be lost in thoughts. Piyali was instructing her with a smile in her face.A fake one. Radhika walked past samrat eyes fixated only on Sam.
She is actually scolding my doll. It clicked, she turned around and asked “Pa..Sam has also joined here..Since when?”

“Just a week., and Arjun is training her in management and business dealings.. ”

With that she flipped her eyes on Arjun and gave one good look like examining or understanding things happening around in her absence. Arjun noticed the sudden change in Radhika’s behavior.

Sam was mentally preparing herself not to squeal in office. Piyali was continuously advise scolding her, that Sam forgot she is already before her darling sister.

She blinked and said “Hello..Welcome to Mumbai!! ” Radhika turned listening Sam’s voice so close. Sam was smiling wide.
“Thanks! You are the First to Welcome me! ” Radhika remarked with a expressionless face .Sam knew what she meant ,She just leaped on Radhika and hugged her like a kid who missed her mom on her first day of school. The Embrace got tighter when Radhika reciprocated her hug. Sam started to sob..”I missed u sooo much.Please dont leave me again” Radhika couldn’t control her emotions. She patted her back and said ” I won’t. Now, Don’t spoil my dress”
Sam broke the hug and giggled “Same pinch! You owe me a treat”Pointing her dress. Radhika just rolled her eyes.

“We shall speak the rest in our cabin.”Piyali said and nodded her head to the morning wishes she was receiving.

Sam held Radhika’s hand and said “I’am sorry di. I spoiled ur morning. I was about to receive u.” while walking towards lift with their parents

“That’s ok..Btw why is your car so neat and clean.? I thought I would meet some rats and new species before I meet you all”

“I get that Sarcasm”Sam said twisting her nose and lips in all possible directions.

Arjun was just observing the sister bond, and everyone of Khannas. “Something Fishy” He mumbled before walking towards his cabin.


“I don’t want to be away from you. Its because of you and your adamant nature this happened. I know you will be missing me..But trust me., I miss you more than that.” he spoke to the potrait on wall. It was Radhika and Him. Radhika was side hugging him and flashing one of her best smiles. He like this picture of them and blew it big. Radhika used to say she speaks with his pics and scold him whenever he leaves her alone..He had made fun of it,but today he is doing the same. With that he laughed at himself. His phone beeped with his mom’s number.

“Hello..Mom..Howzz Mumbai?? Any Tsunami or hurricane?”

Prena laughed and continued “She will kill you when she gets to know this”

“Mom.. now don’t scare me with her name”

“Okay..What are you doing there alone? I thought you would come here with her”

“Getting Mad.. Without that Mad girl..”

“Are u missing her,Neil?”

“Of course,Mom. ”

“Then, come to Mumbai”

“I will .. In 10 days.. I need to wind up things,Mom.. No more Delhi. She won’t listen if I say, That’s why am staying back’

“Neil..Are u sure? That’s her first Venture. Radhika will not accept this. Don’t decide hastily”

” I know,Mom.Am planning to handover to one of our friend. Lemme see..What she does staying in Mumbai”

“This is wrong.She doesn’t know you had planned all this. She will be shocked.. Don’t do this” Prena tried to suppress his moves.

“Am sure, She will definitely have a eye on upcoming events,so she will get to know this too.. Wanna see my Bandit Queen in action.” He continued.. ” I want her to be herself.. She is hurting herself staying here. After a long time., I got the chance. I will set things right.. Radhika should be in Mumbai only. I want My Radzzie back” he spoke all emotional.

“Hope she understands. Think twice before deciding.”

“Okay Mom..Bye.Take care”

Neil kept the photo frame aside and made a call

“Hey.. How about meeting today..”


“Yes..I wanna things done soon.. But will sign the deal after 10 days.”


“No..Radhika should not know about this.. Don’t mess it.”


“I will make sure of it. She will sign the document. once things get finalized she wont back off. ”


“Don’t delay.I just have a week’s time. Bye”


He saw the portrait and said ” Am sorry Radzzie”


So Guys., Hope I had cleared few doubts of urs with this chapter. Honest reviews are welcomed. Am Really happy reading ur comments.
Thanks again for sharing ur opinions.. Pls do ignore My Typos and Grammatical errors.. Will Post the next one soon.

Take care and Loads of love to u all..

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  1. Dear…
    Fantastically written. …
    Really enjoying episode. .
    Why…. is Piyali cold towards Radhika…

    1. Jessie

      Thanks a lot Savera.. she isn’t cold..she is angry on Radz coz of her behavior

  2. Sathya

    My doubts got increased jaaaazzzz… Okay I ll ask later…. Now the chapter is amazing. Well narrated one. I just love rads…my love is increasing whenever I read ur chappy…. Ok so arjun is senior to rads in college… N he doesn’t knew about her? Hmm Sam looks so childish…. Now WHT this Neil is upto…. Totally a wonderful episode. Update next soon. Dear ???

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Sathyaaa..yes.. he doesn’t knew about Radz..whats Neil up to?? I had said it..u dint read d convo with prena here? Thanks 4 d lovely words ..Will post soon

  3. Brin

    Awesome episode, what is Arjun Plan for Radhika? Waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Brin.. u got it! Arjun is confused.. will post soon..

  4. Sammy

    Neil and radhika are friends …and sam oh god she is so sweet ..Arjun’s heart melt at that word ‘senoir’ …awesome update jessie dear ..update next one soo?????

    1. Jessie

      Yaar sammy..Thank u so much.!! Next one soon.. I know.. it’s ur turn as u said.. I want ur dead patient update..

  5. Aasthu

    Like Arjun thought there is something amiss…….Y is Rads behaving so formal??? rasam bond was really nyc……..ardhika too…………..

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Aasthu..yep..something.. am happy u liked d bond.

      1. Aasthu

        Jess when r u gonna update the next part????????

    2. Jessie

      Aasthu.. tomo tat okay..

      1. Aasthu

        ok????? double ok??????????? thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much……………u r really sweet………….umma…………..teddy hug…………..

    3. Jessie

      My pleasure Aasthu.. thanks.. teddy hug n loads of love dear..

  6. Jnana

    awesome….. curious to know ardhikas story. relation between raneil…. poor sam….. being food for that piyali…. i dont know how sje is tolerating her…. but kya kare….. ma hai uski…. fate…. and arjun…. that part was soo nice where radhika called him senior….. samrat is sooo carefree unlike piyali…. thats nice….. sam…. she is sooo bubbly….. finally everything awesome….

    1. Jessie

      Thanks a lot Jnana.. ur comment is so lively.. okay..hope next update will give a clear picture. RaNeil are friends. Sam food 4 piyali.. lol.. yes..she u said.. fate.. u will get 2 know why she is so…thanks again dear..

  7. Ohhho..kamal kar dida jessii Di

    Mazzzaa aa gya..and so sweet of neel yr…and this Sam is lovable Di ..very innocent
    And Radzzz nothing to say abt hr usual amazing… And ..and arjuuunnn…I really liked his reaction ooowewww..waiting for next episodes.. Post soon..bye
    Love u infinite times

    1. Jessie

      Anaaa.. bear hug.. am happy u enjoyed reading..woohoo..! Maza aa gaya.!! Really.. Now u r passing ur energy thro ur one u too dear

  8. Dipika

    Jazzzz my darling u r awesome writer..why were u hided for this long this awesome talent of urs….really.. Just loved this update…arjun cold behavior…. Rads prank.. This girl nvr gonna change… Sam love for rads…so lovely… Neil..tsunami or hurricane.. Lol….humor.. Wht he is planning.. M so excited for Sunday as ur update is coming… This so funn reading ur words dear…love u darling… Come soon..muhha

    1. Jessie

      Deepz…darling.. am smiling ear 2 ear reading ur comment.. so sweet words.. Thanks a lot..muahhh.. yes..she will not u loads.. will post soon

  9. Jewel

    Rads and Sam’s characters r really different and opposite in this ff rads is angry and Sam is childish wow l loved this. And Arjun is rads senior. Is Arjun in love with rads?? And Neil what he is planning for?? Jessie please update the next soon

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Jewel. Yes.. he was Rads senior. N yes he is in love with her.. Neil.. I thought i made it clear..okay.. nxt update will clear ur doubts.. sure dear.. will post soon

  10. Starz

    Truth is…I was really confused….but this update cleared all confusion….. awesome episode…. loved it…..lots of love and take care Jessie dear?

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Starz.. glad tat this update cleared d confusion.. love u too

  11. Sree_deeksha

    Oh my god yaar Jessie.. u rocked it.. it was jst as awsome..!! But why is dis radhika so stubborn.. and Sam I loved her innocence… so cute… as usual I loved arjun and neil . eagerly waiting for the next one… please update soon…

    1. Jessie

      Deekshu…Thanks a lot dear. Glad tat u liked.. sure dear..will update soon..

  12. Gauri

    Jessie I was jumping like mad after seeing ur update….you nailed it …it was so perfect that I should be looking for another word to describe it …fantastic….ok is Neil interested in Radhika and not in Sam… 🙂 waiting for next post soon 🙂 loads of love stay blessed

    1. Jessie

      Gauri.. omg!! Can I have a bearhug..! Am at loss of words…Thanks a ton for ur wonderful appreciation.. love u loads.. Will post soon

  13. S.v

    baby sorry baby padikka mudiyala munnadiye ippa dhan fullah padichu mudichen, ena dhanya prachana piyalikku ayyayyayoo mudiyala sinapulaya potu tovachu kaya potutaley chai sam soo bubbly enakku avala pudichurukku. Arjun and radhika kulla enna prachanna and senior scene sema po superah irundhuchu neil is setting things right avanukku idhey dhan vela paavam but arjun velila puli ulla pani correctu dhaney. rasam bond was so nice. I love when sisters talk adhu superah irukkumla. Seri seekaram update pannu baby wating for the next part as i want to read more of this ff enakku idhu pudichurukku. Love u so much and take care.

    1. Jessie

      Paravailla baby…bear hugs..sorry solladha..chocs kudu podium..?thochu parthale paniya urugran.ena panna. Kadhal.! Romba santhosam..will update soon..nee adutha padichutu sollu neil sari pannana illayanu.. love u loads baby..

  14. Meen

    hey jessie dear………first of all a big soooooooooooooooooooooooorry for commenting late……..but u surprised me darling with ur writing skills…….what a plot………lovely……& omg neil is interested in radhika & not sam…….curiously waiting for d next dear…………loads of loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…….muuuuuha

    1. Jessie

      Tats ok Meen.. Am soooo happy u commented.. and Thanks dear.. u too have same doubt.. ok will clear tat in next one.. Love u loads .. will post soon.. wanna post tomo ni8

  15. Rossy

    Plzzzzz kill me for my late response but don’t angry on me…after all m ur lal…hehehe…i was too stucked up with many things my mind even stop working sometimes….
    Btw what is Neil planning?? What he is upto.. Piyali teaching Sam how to behave…suits her…and did Arjun and radhika in love or only one in love…so many questions…i liked the portrait of rads n Neil…why Arjun don’t like rads to be in bs..and Arjun is rads senior at college…i think..update soooon??

    1. Jessie

      Mere lal….!! No worries..I knew how stucked up u are…. Rosie.. dear.. all d answers 4 ur questions in this update itself..”rads busy watching her love” i had said after samrat wishes Arjun..means Radz also in love..yes he is her senior..will update soon

  16. Shubhadha

    Hai…jessie..really loved it..nice track.. crazy radhika and crazy crazy Arjun…Reverse roles for Neil and Sam…love you dear..take care

    1. Jessie

      Thanks a lot subha di .. love u too.. pls update ur ff.. plss

  17. Sweetie

    Senioorrrrr,it’s so beautiful..Haayee!!Wish I could be in Rads’ place to watch Arjun melt with one word*dreamy eyes* Lovely chapter sweet sister,loved sisso’s bonding very much.. 😀 Love you loads and take care.. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Manaasaaa.. wish u wud get a senior like Arjun. Thanks darling u loads

  18. It just keeps getting better n better with every update, yes many things got cleared in this chapter n then u have confused us more on some many other, so much suspense and am loving it. Love u Sweetheart

    1. Jessie

      Thanks swthrt.. did i confuse you? Yay!! I confused our mystery queen..k.. jokes apart..hope ur confusion clears with my next update.. will update soon.. love u too dear

  19. Naaga

    Jessie suprra irundhudhu ma

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Naaga..

  20. Awieee. Loved it jess. Arjun and radz first meeting. Mind blowing. Her pranks lol. Arjun getting affected by her antics. Superb. Sam and radz long lost sisters. Ufff emotional kar diya. Samrat papa came and spoiled radz prank. hehee. Neil talking to radz through pics. Oohhh. loved it. the tsunami or hurricane dialogue. Superb. Prerna n neil convo awesome. Loved the whole. Waiting for next.

  21. Jessie

    Thanks u so much Manha.. Ur comment made my mrng girl.. Muahh.. love u?

  22. Aadia

    Jessie sis…so sorry for this late comment.The chappy was too good…what was that ‘ senior’ thing?? Then Neil’s plan..I have so many queries and so eager… I know you can answer all of them by your awesome writing.pls update sooon..

    1. Jessie

      Aadia.. My lil sis.. tats ok and thanks a lot dear for commenting.. I did expect ur comment.
      Arjun is Rads senior in college. will post soon

  23. Hi Jessie… you are surprising with each update n this update is awesome… what Neil is planning for Radz?? Post soon n tc

    1. Jessie

      Thanks chandana. will post soon

  24. Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. ..soooooooo sorry for being late. ..the episode was awesoooooome. …Sam n rads bond is very interesting…ardhika love story seems very exciting. …n what is neil hiding from his radzzie… many queries. ..very curious to know about these….keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling 🙂 ♡♡♡ 😉

    1. Jessie

      Thank u so much Roma di…Thanks for u lot.. muaahh… bear hugs.. nxt chappy today

  25. Tara

    sorry for the late comment.. idk how i missed it..
    it was amazing.. i can sense something..which i wont tell now..
    bt ur writing skills are fabulous.. u can urge readers to read more and more and more..
    love ya..

    1. Jessie

      Oh.Tara… I was expecting ur comment girl.. ok now.. Really.. am curious 2 know if am gonna sail along with tell ..ok?.Thanks a ton Tara…u lift my spirits up.. next update is check toni8

  26. _Ritu

    Jessie….dear m still wondering what took u so long to start dis amazing nd interesting story… 🙂 lyk seriously where were u hiding ??? If u were in front of me den I would have really punch u hard ? ? 😉 …loving d story so much dear…going to read d nxt one…loads of love. 🙂

    1. Jessie action queen.. why so.. I love this powerful love..haha.. I wasn’t hiding.. aapke1 samne thi.. am so happy reading ur comment…thanks a ton u loads..

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