Manmarziyan – My Sweet Mistake – Chapter 17


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Chapter 17

“Arjun..Are you angry on Neil”,Radhika asked from behind.. He smiled and nodded negative..”You are lying..”,she came before him. He locked her in between his arms and said”I will meet him and speak..Don’t worry! we won’t turn enemies..Am not that bad! you seem to worry a lot..”he said leaning on her.. “We are in Prena Maa’s house..Move..”she said.. He starred her with a mischievous smirk and she tried hard not to look his face.

“How is the Mehendi?”,she asked to divert him..

“Beautiful.!”,he said looking her..

“Look this!!.. and I had made it hard for you, to find your intials..”,she said rising her mehandi adorned palms..

“Nothing is hard for Arjun!!…I very well know where my name is”,he replied being in same position..

She smirked sardonically,”Let’s see that!”.

“Arjun Ratan Mehra The name has been deeply inscribed here”,he said pointing her heart..”and the person is crazily in love with his naughty love.!”,he hit her forehead with his and asked,”wanna contradict this?”,in a low deep voice..

She nodded no..”And your love is madly in love with her crazy lover”,she said..

“Mad girl”.

“Crazy boy”.she said..

“Tell fell in love at first sight.,isnt”,he asked still with their foreheads glued.

“Yep..Just like you”,she said and looked into his eyes..She felt goosebumps race over her skin as his hand snaked through her waist pulling her close to him… “chokri”,his husky voice held her gaze to be locked with his…


“Hey stop!”,Neil and Radhika turned around..

“1st year..isn’t..come here.. heard about you both”,a short stout guy among the 5 guys group spoke.. Radhika walked dusting her hands towards them..”Oh..This is a girl!! I thought to be a boy”,a guy scoffed..

“Ragging!! guess its not allowed”,Neil said.

“Yes.. and its not allowed in college..but not restricted in hostel mess.”a guy replied. Prakash who came wiping his hands,intervened noticing this.. “Yaar..relax..ask them to dance..its enough..after all..we belong to same people need to stay in the same hostel”, the short guy said..

Neil and Radhika understood the underlying threat.. “So.. you will not trouble us if we dance”,Neil asked.. Prakash acted neutral.. Radhika gave a carefree nod. “but..she should dance like a guy and you like a girl.”,the guy said..

“ more troubles..Deal!!”.,Radhika said running her left hand in her hair…

“Done!”,they said..

Radhika winked at Neil as she chose a song from her mobile.She knotted her shirt she wore over her sleeveless t-shirt,and Neil folded his shirt above his navel.. “Hua chokra jawaan re,Hua chokra jawaan re,”Neil did sensual girly moves as the song played, Radhika not being less to him shook his hips with her hands and danced around him pulling towards her and caressing his face..Arjun came from the other side saw the guys to stand rooted and 2 people dancing …including Prakash everyone couldn’t take eyes from them in shock.. At one point of the song,she climbed over the table with Neil’s help and continued,he claimed over a guy with his moves and she randomly kicked the arranged tumblers on the table towards them..She pretended to be too engrossed in the song,and guys stepped back to escape from the assault whereas Neil hugged from behind and pushed before her,swaying his hips..The duo turned deaf to their shrieks…Prakash stood amused and unable to contain the mirth Arjun laughed aloud with claps..

He sat holding his stomach with tears in eyes,looking the guys to rub their lower body to ease the pain..Neil stopped his dance and song hearing someone to laugh,and her head snapped at him..She stood astonished looking the young handsome man flashing radiant smile..A smile played in her lips as she saw him laughing heartily like a kid…A thick pang of hairs fell on his forehead as he shook his head ..Unaware of anyone and anything around,her senses got locked in looking him with a pleasant smile.. “So..its over here.!”,She blinked hearing Neil..He moved unfolding his shirt and the guys too left when prakash asked to..

“Neil”,she called extending her hand.. Arjun turned in surprise listening a girl voice…Prakash befriended with Neil..,while Arjun had his eyes only on her..He glanced her from toe to head,he felt something of hers allured him as he was unable to take his eyes from her…She adjusted her dress sensing his intense gaze on her.,her eyes were downcast in unknown embarrassment..She raised her head only to get her brown orbs meet with his deep black ones..

“Hey Am Prakash! 1st year, Masters..political science..”,he said.. “Radhika..”,she shook her hands and turned to see him still starring her.. He smiled and came forward.,”What’s up bro”.Prakash asked Arjun..Neil instantly shook his hand,”Neil..1st year Business studies”.. “Arjun..”,he extended to Radhika who stood in silence..He shook her hands lively which made her to look his eyes again.

“Raddzie…the guy who you fought with,yesterday was Prakash’s batch it seems”,Neil said as they walked back to hostel..

“Radhika,You fight?”,Arjun asked surprised.”and that too with seniors..don’t”

“Yaar..he bullied her in better inform us”,Prakash said..

“Yes..we seniors will handle it”,Arjun said and moved ahead.. Neil made a face at that.. “Senior”,he mumbled in her ears and both laughed silently..As Radhika moved towards girls dorm, Arjun said,”See you tomorrow..Radhika…”

“Okay..Senior!”,she mumbled..

“Did you say anything?”,he asked.. she nodded negative.. “Arjun..not senior”,he said smirking..

“Senior”,she stressed before moving..She turned around the corridor and after a minute she peeped her head biting the corner of her lower lip,only to see him standing there to smile at her..


“You changed a lot for me!”,he asked.. “Delusion!!”,she smiled and wriggled out from his hold.

He saw Sam to feed Radhika as he moved to kitchen.. “Aunty..can I take Radhika for a drive?”,he asked.

Prena stood thoughtful and said,”we have a small pooja here..around 6..and..”

“We will come before that”,he said.. Prena explained the significance of pooja to be held..”I don’t believe in all this”,he shrugged his shoulders….

“You can’t deny few things.”she retorted soon.. “It may be because of Nandhini you came India..but everytime you met Radhika..isn’t..why?.. Last week,this day she came here with a plan to leave in 10 days..why you met her? why the Great Arjun Mehra should take a childish decision for his sister? Its’s Fate… Believe it or not.. It’s Rata Bhai who used to call Radhu as Princess.. now,see what has happened? Aru..somewhere we all feel bad that we are getting you married simple..but.,we accepted just for you..Only for you.. So..its your turn to give up a part of your stubborrness for us”,Prena said sweet and clear with a smile..

He stood perceiving her words,Its true.!! he recalled the incidents and smiled..

“You are so smart Aunty”,he said smiling..

“Iam”,she said nodding her head..

“Tell me something how come you people are this cool..I mean..”,he stopped when Prena handed him a casserole..

‘Go..keep it in dining table”,she said.. He stood still..” may be ARM for others,for us you are our Aru…and cool..yes.. Do you expect us to be poker faced 24*7 just because we are in business..? Silly.. Aren’t we humans? are junior version of Rata Bhai.,but he is a cool head,solving knotty problems with a smile which is a big amiss here”,she said with her finger drawing circle over his face..

He gave a mock glare saying”,Pls..don’t leave a chance.” “will not..”she said equally mocking..

Prena and Arjun sat to lunch together,she saw the girls watching Tom n Jerry.. “I haven’t been this familiar with anyone”,he said as he served himself..”Aunty aren’t you angry on me?”he asked..

“Definitely yes..but more disappointed.. leave it.”,she said and asked Radhika to remove her mehandi..

“Tom n Jerry the best pair ever”,Sam said aloud as she switched off..

“This Tom is very bad you know,poor Jerry”,Radhika said looking Arjun..

“Its Poor Tom di..Jerry makes Tom to surrender finally..”,Sam said smiling.. Arjun chewed his food narrowing his eyes at Radhika.. “Because Tom is brainless.”,Radhika
continued..Sam laughed wiping Radhika’s mehandi.. “Tom behaves stupid”,Sam said and Arjun stopped eating… Radhika smiled big like a tease wiggling her brows.. “they are like eat.”,Prena said serving him.. “Shall I take her for a drive”,he asked in low voice.. Prena nodded saying,”before 5″..

Radhika denied to go with him while he smiled mischievously…She saw two ladies drawing mehandi designs in Sam’s hands.”Bye di”,she said.. “You will spoil her mehandi else my work,so go”,Prena said and moved..

“To the same resort?”,she asked after a long silence..

“It’s turning lucky you know”,he smiled and raced..

“Arjun.. why should someone spread my pics”she asked in meek voice..

“We will find that…and it has been removed. The access to the particular thread of BS circle has been blocked..”Arjun said calm..

“This looks secluded”,she said as he parked.. “Why were you so silent”,he asked as he got down..

“I like this car Arjun..we should buy one like this..”,she came around patting the bonnet “This car suits you!”,she continued looking the vehicle..”This place is so cool”,she said again and saw him starring her… “Now what did I do?”,she asked..

“You look so beautiful in lehanga choli…Breath taking”,he said as he slid his hands in his pockets..”Why did you bring me here?”,she asked and stepped back..He instantly pulled her and crashed on his chest. “Where do you want to go for our honeymoon.”he asked embracing her…”Say..”he insisted as she stood silent…”Else you are ok with this car itself”.he laughed saying that..She punched him and lifted her head,he saw her looking down..she felt his hands to move slowly towards her shoulder and to cup her cheeks..Her eyes unconsciously closed as her forehead received his love impressions,she felt her senses to wake when his lips traveled planting wet kisses randomly on her face.,her hands held his shoulders tight,her eyes opened when he paused a sec and she saw his lips near hers.,smiling with the realization of what would happen next,her eyes drooped itself..

He saw her lips awaiting for the kiss and she stood with closed lids..He chuckled as he pulled his head back,after few secs her brows furrowed in a doubt and she saw him smirking mischievously…he whispered, “Tease” in her ears..She began to kick and punch him hard with her fists at the same time,which he least expected. “I thought you will blush”,he said trying to hold her fist.. “You are a idiot..Arjun..Devil..”she pushed him hard and stumbled in return..He held her from falling and got in his arms. “Leave me..Don’t touch me..!”,she ranted in anger.. She went silent when he got after her inside the middle seat of the car.. “Arjun..I tell you..”,she said like a threaten.. “Tell”.he mocked her…
“Ah..Idiot.”she huffed and tried to get her mobile..”Don’t forget its just a car.,do you want this to roll”,he asked when she tried to snatch her mobile from him, within minutes of further struggle her dupatta went off “Glamorous”,he said to rile her up.. “you are a Per..”,she stopped recalling his prior warn.. “you are a Prude..”,he said again..She glared him a sec before kissing his lips forcefully.,he kept laughing which rubbed her ego bad,she quickly unbuttoned his shirt,he tried to hold her hand to move further,unable to stop her he gained control on her and her eyes flew open when he untied her dori and unhooked with a force, she pulled back and smiled..looking him confused,”Tit for tat”,she said smirking.

His mobile rang disturbing them,he leaped forward over her to attend the call,and she felt something odd.,”Your pls”,he said before receiving the call..She found her choli to sag and tried to hook it back,he was confused to see her search something,her fingers checked for hooks again,she held her choli with one hand and bend downwards,”Tantalizing View!!”,he remarked and kept his palm on her bare back before kissing her..”What’s my Jerry trying to do?”,he drew patterns on her back and she jerked each time..”You broke the hooks and am searching the safety pins of dupatta”,she said accusing.. He sat amused looking her holding her choli with a confused pout face.. ‘Don’t blame me..!What did I do”,he asked with innocent face irritating her more….”Show me your mehandi”,he said pointing the one holding her blouse. “Why”,she asked annoyed,unaware of his mischief she extended.. “Naughty girl”,he said,closing his eyes with his palm..Her jaw hung in surprise as she quickly held her blouse muttering curses under her breath.. “shall I open my eyes?”,he smiled..

“Do you have ur coat?”,she asked and he nodded negative.. “Arjun please!”,she pleaded..

“Aru..Its Aru..”he said with a wink.. “Prena aunty”,he said before attending another call.. “On the way..aunty.”he lied casually..

“Arjun..what to do?”,she asked thinking deeply.. “Aru..,Aru..what to do”,she mocked..

“Mocking?!!”,he asked searching inside the car.. “Yes..!”.she said..He found a safety pin from her dupatta..”Come..Lemme pin it..”he called her as she extended her hand being on the other end of the seat… “I won’t eat you.”he said and turned her side, As she din’t budge to turn around,with their gazes locked,he tied the dori and smirked saying, ‘Aru..I love you..Say this”., Her eyes widened at that., but before she could speak he pinned her blouse.. “Hope its ok”,he said and pulled a bag from behind…He ruffled the bag and pulled out a jacket. “No should hold.”,he said with his eyes on the jacket.. She kept starring him.. “Did you check that once.. what??..whats on my face now?”,he asked..”Ok. sorry..I din’t intend to..”he said finally.

Few mins later they were still inside the vehicle,Warmly embracing each other,Arjun mumbled,”Promise..Promise”,as he rubbed her back,and she had clutched his shirt hard,starring outside the window..

“Shall we?”,he asked soft.. She nodded no,snuggling more into him.”Then we shall have our marriage here..I guess this car is a perfect place to reside..very much comfortable for us and lucky too”,he saw her to smile a little.. “Aunty will scold,Get down,lets go”,he said as he adjusted himself..”I love you Arjun…love you”,she said looking his face.. “Love you too,Radhika..!”,he said with a peck on her lips…She jerked when he tickled her and he continued it to make her to laugh… “Good!!”,he got down..She stood adjusting her dress and hair,he sat worried when he took the wheel…She slept in half way when they drove back..

Prena glared Radhika seeing her state..”She chased me and got slipped..full of sand..that’s why”,Arjun said for her.

“Both of you come back fast freshening”,she said sharp..Arjun walked fast waving to Sam who sat with Mehandi looking them..

“ rolled on sand??”,she asked surprised. Radhika nodded while moving to her room…She came wearing kurti over her lehanga,while Arjun came drying his hair wearing a carrot orange silk kurta..

“You din’t bath?”,Prena asked her.. Sam moved to Radhika’s room,Prena scolded them for being lethargic and careless.. “Aunty..Am ready !!”,Arjun chimed irritating Radhika..

“Whats happening”,she hissed at him..

“Radhika..don’t scold me..Aunty kept pooja”,he purposely yelled..

“Don’t speak aloud”,she said trying to hold his hand.

“No!! Radhika..Don’t beat..Don’t touch me..Dirty girl..Naughty girl”,he screamed and moved back,while she stood confused..

“Radhu.!”,she jerked listening Prena’s sharp call.. “Go take bath..It’s getting late.”,she said strictly…”Maa..why..”her words trailed off when Prena repeated the same.. Sam came muffling her laughter,”Dirty girl,,naughty girl”,she sing sang..Her eyes widened listening that,and saw to wink at her, she moved as she saw Prena starring her..

She saw a priest to tie a holy thread on Arjun’s wrist and Sam sat on the sofa recording it,while Prena stood with a plate.. As the priest blessed him,he saw her side eyed and asked
something…Her brows furrowed at that.. “What new drama’,she thought..He got up and asked her to sit..She obliged as prena too said that.,after repeating the same,the priest left.. “This is new..why we are doing this?:,Radhika asked Prena following to kitchen..

“Samaira.. why aren’t you coming to office these days?”,Arjun asked her..

“You don’t know Jiju..!! Am working with Prena Maa…Event zone..Event management..From this Monday.”,she said..

“Call me Arjun!”,he said.

“Di will kill me.. Neil too warned that..She hates making fun on you..”,Sam said like a theory…

Neil came tired with bags and slumped on the couch… “Neillll….”,Sam screeched.. “Sammy…control your excitement”,he said with closed eyes..Radhika came rushing and jumped on the arm rest…Their loud banter made Prena to reach there and she saw Arjun looking them silently…”Now the house will turn a Circus”,she said..

“Did you get your mehandi done?”,he asked Sam and kept few bags to her side..”Radzzie,remember last time you asked a bracelet for Sam.,they called and I got that”,he said giving her a pack..

“Do you remember me Mr.Neil?'”,Prena asked..

“Mommy…my manufacturer”,he gave a idiotic reply and girls giggled at that.. “Full on Mental”,Sam remarked..

“Wash your hands sammy..its a peach color dress”,Neil quickly said turning..”WWaiting for you..It’s you who got this done!”,sam came extending her mehandi laid hands..

“Superb”,he said and moved after a formally talk Arjun.. Radhika noticed Neil’s care on Sam..A step ahead of what she received from him..Neil was patiently listening to her talks about her work.,and Sam was explaining with interest..Arjun moved citing a call and Neil came to Radhika, “Wanna talk”..

“What the hell..Neil do you want me to sign it?”, Radhika asked as she sat cross legged on Neil’s bed… “and why just a day before my marriage?”,she asked doubted..

“Its a coincidence..Uncle called me Tuesday night itself..I just wanna clear things with him first.. and its not only you..Me also in directorship.. and he gave me 20% of shares just to avoid the chances of any discrepancy to”,Neil tried to explain.

“What?”,Prena gasped from door way…”whats the need for shares?I will speak to samrat.”,Prena said only to get stopped by Neil.. “Pls don’t create a issue.. It’s a simple thing..I can return as per my wish..So.. leave that..Sign this Radzzie”,he said.. Radhika sat thoughtful for more than 10 mins..”U too..”,she dragged and he pulled the pen from her hold and signed the documents..”Now!!.”,he said..

“Neil..Promise me..that you will take care of Sam in my absence”,she said after signing the documents..

“Do you think someone will kill you for BS..Stupid!!”, he said and smacked her head irritated..

“No… You should be with her you were with me…even if Mom insults,Even Sam pushes you..You should be with her..There are chances for her to behave rude listening mom.,but the truth is she has no one to care..So..Please Neil..I fear only for Sam.!! She shouldn’t land in any troubles..that’s y I had signed this..”,She poured her worries in one go..

“I will…Even if she doesn’t prefer I will be like a shadow..Enough! Now…Smile!! and you have your Arjun..Don’t forget that..Before Neil it should be Arjun whom you should speak with,here after.”,he said caressing her head..”Radzzzie…I was so happy when I got to know about your marriage.. I don’t know what troubled you..but you should forget all those and move like Radzzie herself with Arjun..will you do that..for my sake”,he asked unable to control the break in his voice..She nodded equally emotional.. “Just one month you will hold this.”,he raised the papers..”So..don’t stress yourself…Don’t take hasty decisions..Plsss”,he said.. She looked him confused…

Prena smiled with tears listening Neil..Radhika went to her room thoughtful..Arjun,who was in Neil’s balcony listened all this…Today., he got to see the other side of Neil..which he failed to realize in all those days.,they spent together.,Neil’s over caring behavior on his girl gained nothing but hatred against him…

The usual Tom and Jerry, hit and miss scenes played aloud in that hall,but it had a unusual mute spectator today..Sam sat trying to decipher the real meaning her di said..

“Hey Peeping Tom”,Neil chimed as he sat in the single couch next to hers.. Her eyes snapped at that.. “Whats with you now? I know you heard us..”he said looking her deeply..

She gulped and asked in a meek voice,”Neil…why did she say so… will something happen just like it happened with….”,her eyes glistened in tears and her words sank with her tight throat ..

“sshh!! Nothing will happen..wipe ur both..!! It’s her wedding tomorrow and she utters nonsense,and you…Sammy..heavens sake!..don’t read too much in between the lines..”he convinced her in low voice.. She sniffed and wiped her tears..” din’t listen further?”,he asked relaxing back leisurely..

“hmm..I know what is right..I will listen to di only..not Mom!!”,her jaw stiffened at that…

“Liar!! we all deep you blind trust your mom..”,he smiled as he got up.. “And about your di..Your Jijaji is enough!! He will make everyone go mad.!! So don’t you worry.!”,he said.. Sam smiled listening about Arjun,”He is actually good..but..I thought him to be khadoos…slightly..”.

“Nope..not slightly..very much..”,he said and both laughed… Neil went to kitchen to speak with Prena..

“I forgot one of my dress at home..will be back”,Arjun said to Sam and left hurriedly..

Prena searched for Arjun during dinner,and Radhika felt irritated hearing sam,”Can’t he inform me before leaving”,she shook her head.. Neil ate in silence watching her annoyance..

“Need to meet Samrat uncle..”,he said and left fast…


“I think you people have exaggerated a small issue…this is gonna turn worse..This Arjun has made everything to go worse”,Neil said in frustration the moment he barged into Samrat’s business suite of that hotel..”Don’t listen to Arjun..Lets speak..I will speak with Radzzie..”,Neil said hurriedly without noticing a tall figure standing to his left side near the large full length windows..

“What will you say? and about whom?”, he asked in equally raised voice and Neil turned to see Arjun standing there.. He stuttered for a moment.,but regained himself and replied back,”About you..Arjun Mehta!”Arjun looked him intensely and Samrat sat leisurely watching both.. “That’s how you prefer to be addressed isn’ fooled the entire college with that name.,tell me how you got certified with original ones..”he vent out his annoyance…

Arjun smiled saying,”Radhika know my name..and listen..I din’t fool anyone..It’s only she doesn’t know about me..I don’t belong here so obviously..”,he shrugged his shoulders.. “And My dad spoke with uni peopleto hide my identity.,to avoid unnecessary rumors..”. The nonchalant reply fueled Neil’s anger..

“Oh! then why don’t you tell her the truth now,with this same cool attitude”,he asked furiously..

“I spoke with uncle..”,Arjun said sharply..

“You need to speak with me too..I know,you don’t like me around Radhika..but remember,unless you spill the beans I will be around her.. because I don’t trust you..what if
vanish again..”,Neil spoke in anger which alerted Samrat..

“Where did I vanish? Don’t you know I went for the course which Radhika said..and am in India for past 8 months..I did see her in Delhi when I came…So mind your words”,Arjun raised a finger at that..

“You saw her..why din’t you meet her then? you know what she went through..Each and every day she expected you to come in search of her.. She din’t leave me to shift our flats.. what not? You leisurely come after a year,met her a week before you arrange your wedding,that too without our consent..Aren’t you too self centered Arjun?”,Neil asked with piercing gaze. “..And what is this 2 documents..Ask him to accept or just leave..why you listened him?.” he asked Samrat..

Arjun stood in anger listening him.. “Now what’s your problem..”,he asked irritated..

“Simple…Tell her the truth else I won’t let your marriage to happen..”he said coldly shocking both the men..

“Do you think you can stop me?”,Arjun smirked..

“You think I can’t stop her?”,Neil gave back.. After a pause he said,”Promise me you won’t leave her even if she throws you out of her life.That’s enough.!! you have bent everyone with your skills,so..”he paused and saw Samrat… Samrat was in deep thought looking the papers before him..

“you doubt me?”,Arjun asked moving forward.. “I doubt your patience.”Neil said seriously..

Samrat looked both starring each other.,he quickly exchanged the papers with the ones from the cabinet below… “Promise!! I will keep my word.I know I need lot of patience to handle her.,but I don’t want her to struggle alone.”,he said and hugged Neil surprising him… “Weren’t you angry on me?”,Neil asked.. “What’s the use of it..I won’t get what I lost..and…I did listen you speaking with Radhika”,he said as he broke the hug…

“I tell you both.,If it is someone you both could blind trust on., then it could be none other than you both”,Samrat said pointing each other..Arjun understood and nodded,while Neil glared him,”You woke up?”,mocked him..”you din’t bother to stop us..too bad uncle..”.

Arjun smiled as he took the papers.. “Even for signing documents you din’t trust us.,Learn to trust Man!”,Neil said as he sat next to him..

“Radhika read the papers isnt?”,Samrat asked to divert Arjun..

“Since I gave..she din’t read.”,Neil said as he took the water bottle. “That’s trust.!! you need to learn”,Samrat said looking Arjun.. Arjun thought for a moment and signed quickly without reading the papers..Samrat smiled big which made Neil to doubt.. “Arjun..Read it.”,Neil said with his eyes on Samrat and his smile vanished at that..

“I prepared..So..I know”,Arjun said as he slid the papers to Samrat..

Neil stayed back after Arjun left.,”Why do I smell something fishy?”, he asked..

“ gave me the hint”,Samrat said.. “What? when?”,Neil shrieked.. “Now., he won’t and can’t vanish away from my princess”,Samrat nodded his head looking the papers in his hand..

Precap: Ardhika Wedding..


So…hope it was good.. And..Pls do give your reviews..Thanks for the lovely comments Friends..And I wish to hear more..Comments are real boosters you know…So..Silent readers,pls drop in a word.. Pls ignore my Typos and Grammatical errors…

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  1. Brin

    Outstanding episode, Jessie you nail it, well done, eagerly waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Thank u…thank u…Brin u loads..will post soon….TC..

  2. Awsme dear…. i luvd it…. waiting for nxt part.. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Hey ya…!!! Thanks a lot buddy… glad u liked…will post soon…TC …

  3. arti viswanathan

    Outstanding and marvellous episode jessie darling I loved it dear.. Will be waiting for next episode.. It’s interesting now what will happen to arjun and radhika’s wedding….

    1. Jessie

      Artiii…..thank u so much darling….glad u loved it…Ardhika wedding will happen…no doubts…!! Will post soon….love u loads n TC

  4. Jewel

    what is that paper samrat gave to arjun to sign?? why he done that?? is that related to bs ownership?? neil’s care towards rasam, i liked that… prerana and arjun their bonding is nice. i liked prerana a lot, she is a strong, sensible woman. ardhika moments as always, it is beautiful, and the fb also…. u know i always read ur story with a little fear that if there is something to separate ardhika, in this chapter in the last part i thought neil will create any problem, bt that get solved and the precap giving me little relief. but now i am thinking what will happen when rads get to know that arjun hide his identity?? jessie, ur story is really unpredictable, that make this story more beautiful…. waiting for next chapter….

    1. Jessie

      Jewel….!! First of all..thanks a ton dear…you always support me.ur words abt this work..keeps me energized..and….teddy hugs for pointing all ur likes…loved ur view on it..too keen reader!! said in last chappy…Arjun says 2 docs…he writes clauses.that document yaar… Power of Attorney of BS!! That part..well…what samrat did..that will be revealed soon…and…Jewel….Arjun is fear…he isn’t like MMz one.!!! Thanks again for ur lovely appreciation…Am so happy at this moment…love u loads.. TC..will post soon….and don’t worry…marriage will happen!!

  5. Sathya

    Dhool episode. Every conversations are on top gear. Jaaazzzzz i am glaring your magical fingers with my big eyes…lol…give me ur brain and fingers for a day atleast..i ll pay u the rent double. IT IS A MAGICAL EPISODE, Today the show stealer is NEIL ….ONE & ONLY NEIL.

    Late ah vanthaalum latest ah vanthirukan…Vanthathum Arjun kooda kudumi pudi sandai…lol tension arised when they had a word war…and Samrat is clever man and seriously he has something fishy to hold Arjun back.

    Ardhika romance in Car is on Fifth gear Jaaazzz….i was like opening my mouth widely and reading that part…so cool and the epitome of this part. So now we can see more NeSam scenes. Cool..naturally Neil will care Sam more than rads and even she knows it.

    OVerall a Powerpacked episode Jaaazzz….love you soooooo much

    1. Jessie

      Satzzzzz… love u for this big comment… Top gear..!! don’t glare plz..Eeeee… you were the first one to ask my brain.. thanks a lot dear… yep,,,you got the show stealer.. !! he is..!! yes..right abt samrat… Arjun is still a mystery for them isn’t.. fifth gear..!! Range rover le first gear le otunan..thanks… wide opened mouth…success!! Romance queen ko impress kiya maine… NEsam yet to start..why? you will know after marriage… yes..!! loved this review happy….!!! love u loads n TC

  6. omg!!! jess its awesome girl. loved it. ardhika scenes aiyeee mindblowing. car romance. superb. neil entry superb. now somehting going on here. samrat is acting different. everyone behaving very suspicious. whats with the papers. but one thing gud ardhika marraige. im happy for it. tom-jerry tv scene cool. radz mocking arjun speaking with sam. haha. toosmart. loved it.

    1. Jessie

      Manha…. thank you dear… car romance! yeah.. Samrat is not different..!! good one only.. thanks for pointing ur likes..glad to see you here girl… yep…Rads a naughty girl..papers..Neil says..BS directors related…Thanks u …TC

  7. Rossy

    Jazzzzy….tell me one thing??? Do u like that car and that car romance soooo much……hahaha…now m one to pull ur legs….neil…dimple king….he was in protective mode…good…which documents Neil signed by radz??? And what samrat exchanged…..yeh kya Ho raha hai…sam n radz tom jerry talk…lol…very nice…Arjun ??? huh…besaram Banda…btw I loved,totally enjoyed that Last banter between arneil…neil…my boy go n do what u said…don’t let them marry until n unless he spit out truth…zor laga ke haisa??

    1. Jessie

      hahahhah…Lal..I love that car..Infact I have a craze on carz… to be precise SUVS…but car romance..Nope.,..!! you have the rights dear..yep..all protective… said earlier…
      What samrat did..will be revealed later… not so late..after few epis.. you liked tom wala one..super… want him to go ahead..Arjun convinced saw na… ..always behind this… u loads

  8. Starz

    Cutie pie…loved today’s post so so much… ardhikas moments were just amazing….u write romantic genre very well… loved it to the core…no words to describe…no be a cute di and post next one soon…eagerly waiting for ardhika marriage…love you cutie and take care pie

    1. Jessie

      Sweetiee…my lil one..thanks a lot dear… Romance!! Thanks.. am glad listening that.. am so happy girl..yep will post today.. love u loads dear..TC

  9. Aasthu

    One of things I admire in you is you all always reply to all even though only a few has commented….

    Am I missing something here?Why was Rads is tears abt Sam? Why was she reluctant to sign that papers? What’s in those papers? Did Arjun reveal his identity to Rads? ie he being ARM? Did he join BS for Nandini? Why did he leave her(Rads) and then walk back casually in her life after an year? What is the reason for his dislike towards Neil? Is Piyali Samrat’s 2nd wife? What happened to his 1st wife n Rads mom? Does Piyali dislike Rads and if so why? What deal was Neil talking about? Why was Rads worried abt Sam’s safety? What happened to Neil’s dad?

    I enjoyed reading ardhika moments…..thanks for fulfilling my wish……Jess can u type the conversations in another line or can u bracket who said it? I was confused………Neil-Rads talk was really nyc……loved Neil’s care for her……….

    love u………..and tc……………

    1. Jessie

      Aasthu…. yep..Few..but aren’t you all supporting me? how else could I show my gratitude and happiness if not thro’ replies… isi liye…

      U love questions!! yep missed a lot… wahi to kahani..She doesn’t want to be a part of BS..thats y reluctant… okay..Aasthu…the last part of ARNeil do have the answers it…their dialogues.. yes..Piyali is 2nd wife.. deal?? gosh..Neil dad..Neil did say that epis before.. sudden demise…!! Happy that u enjoyed… where u got confused.? tell me here or pm.. I will definitely look into that dear… no worries.. you mean Ardhika part or where? dialogues confusion… Love u too lil sissy..TC

      1. Aasthu

        But yoo still didn’t answer why Rads was worried about Sam’s safety, Piyali’s hatred towards Rads, Arjun’s intention behind joining bs……..Arjun is doing all these willing ri8???????? not out of force by sme1???????????????? ya ardhika part dislogue sme confu was there……….maybe coz I read fast……nw when I re-read it confu was solved………

      2. Jessie

        With story you will know abt Arjun and Piyali read her dialogue for Neil na..she says a elder sis…oh..glad that no confusion..still i looked into that in next chap..have a view

  10. its really outstanding…story remba interesting..eagerly waiting next one …please update da uuu tc

    1. Jessie

      Subhaa…Thanks a lot dear..glad that u like the story.. will post soon..hopefully today…love u too..TC dear..

  11. Sangee

    Hey jessi u always make me spell bound with your epis wah was from today iam gonna call you as princess of romance because we already named sathya di as queen of romance comming to the epi dam dhool damaka ( I don’t know how to express ?) wah wah it’s raining roman
    ce every where… Arjun ratan mehra written your heart ?Arjun you have told her your real name ? ur arjun mehta for her right ? Arjun and pernas conversation super classy..perna asking arjun to do house hold work ha ha ha orruku raja na
    lum veetla edu pudi dan boss ???…perna iam gonna hug her tight she never leave a chance to tease arjun ??? flash back I was laughing at Neil and
    Rads moves… If I
    was in Arjuns place I might be admitted in hospital for stomach pain ?????
    And the Romance part ufff it’s sizzling hot some one pls blow some cool air ???
    ? Arjun you are becoming naughty nowadays.. Asking her to show her mehendi na na na ???? do you have your coat rads dialog.. Ha ha ha En ma Avaru coat rent ka ma vidu raru ???
    iruntha lum nanga kuduka mattome hi5
    Arjun ?he he he ( devil smile)… Sry I didn’t intend to ??? yes this car is comfortable add lucky ??? and poor rads don’t know wat they are hinting abt he he here comes good boy all clean after bath ??? He was the one who did all mischieves… And Neil.. Mommy my manufacturer that’s exactly our Neil here… Rads concern over Sam..? Arneils argument… Both are equall well said sammu… Omg sammu changed the file… Cycle gap la arjun ku Appaaa ??? maapu vachi tan da aapu… thambi nee Dan clause ah eludana ana Adu dan anga irruka nu pathiya matna da… Neil sonna la Ketiya let’s wait and watch Wats cooking up in sammus mind… I missed RRM today Sry it’s going too long so Iam stopping here take care waiting for one love you ???????????????

    1. Jessie

      Sangeeee…En chellam…. you expressed it so beautiful ya… I was waiting to read ur comments… Princess!! Awwiee..Thank u… Radhika knew his name..Andha engagement ring remember..he calls her..RAdhika Arjun Ratan Mehra..while slipping the ring..She knows from clg.. After marriage a scene is der to clear this point..Reception..! Ooruku raja dialogue super ma..Super!! hahah am laughing..!! FB.!! Thank you!! I did expect anyone to say.. imagine paniteengala..warewah…sizzling hot!! aiyo.. am vekapatufying.. coat rent!! lol… yep,, Aru..!!Yes,,Sangee… Rads pavam,,onum puriyama iruka.. he took the note of freshen up… hey.. neenga ellathayum note panreenga ma note panreenga..hahah am super happy.. am laughing like mad reading this… gosh!!! yep..yep..Aaapu than..I told na… heehe…clause ellam undu..aana visayam than vera… Yep.Neil is Neil.. he warned him..Ena pana maamanara nambitan.. Sammu mind! last line sangee… cant and wont leave my princess…!! adhuku than doc exchange.. RRM…next chappy starting le vararu… no sorry pls..I enjoyed reading..pls do keep supporting like this.. oru litre boost kudichapla iruku… TC..Posting today…Love u loads…

  12. Dipika

    Ohhhhh goddddd meti judwa behena..u left me mesmerized with this update a lot .at every convo or dailouge..m like wow. .kya baat jess…she asked him to found his name in mehndi n he show her name his heart..mad girl n crzy boy…ohhhh..chumeshwari.cutee…fb..chokra jawa re…God i actually imagined them dancing n arjun laughing.. Both fell for each othee at first sight..hehe…tom n jerryyy..cute..i too still watch it..Neil..yartt this guy is cutest…car scene.. Uffff m sweating.. Hottt …he broke aru..hehe…samrat has something with him huhhh..m so eager for u sooo

    1. Jessie

      Deeepzzzz…… Hayye..Mesmerized meri judwa behen..Thanks a lot dear… yep,,cute ..yaar..Chokra jawan..i did think you there..not in dance..for pointing in comment.. me too watch tom n jerry…Desperate lol… banda acha hai na abhi bhi? lolzz…. yeah samrat has something for good.. posted dear…love u too dear..tC

  13. Meen

    My sweet Jess…..what an update sissy.. I mean seriously aradhika scenes were too good…. U really r good with romance……how come….any secrets..?……**

  14. Meen

    Oops…..*wink wink* just joking sissy……u wrote an awesome episode……it was so cute & hot…… yaaaaaaaa

    1. Jessie

      Meen…my lovely sissy…wat secret u are talking about?am not getting it..*puppy dog eyes* 😉
      Thanks a lot dear…teddy hugs to u… love ya…TC

  15. Gauri

    Jess before I forget…I really want to see that chokra Jawan re dance…. you wrote that part too good….every emotion every relationship has a meaning and own depth in your update…sachhi it reaches my heart….Sam-Radhika…Radhika prerna….Arjun Radhika and now Neil….I am in love with your words rocking girl 🙂 loads of love

    1. Jessie

      Don’t forget…I wanna hear from you..!! Yipeeee.!!!! Thanks a lot yaaar….I was expecting that in comments..thanks… Thats a gr8 compliment..and it means a lot…Am feeling like flyin in the air.. Thanks yaar…. loads of love..TC

  16. Sree_deeksha

    hey angel….reading all of the epiosdes now yipppee……..radhika wedding…loved the way u described emotions…..ardhika scens…neil…every one i jst love them…so sorry i was not able to comment bcz no time dear….but promising u ill read when ever i get time and irritate u with my comments bye dear love uuu. soooooo muchhh!!!!

    1. Jessie

      Hey..Judwa Angel…where were u girl? so busy I guess… thanks a ton darling… am glad u liked it…and irritating..!!not at all..I love to read your no issues..whenever u catch share a word…take care dear…loads of love..I want you to write OS or few shots jus like you did earlier…I still remember… !! wo cliff wala scene… bye dear..cme back with a bang..

  17. Aadia

    Jessuu…you know something, I read the first part while travelling in bus..and the dance hard was it to suppress laugh..the aunt who sat near me thrown glared me as Iam reading my boyfriend’s (god knows who it is!!( message poor me..and the romance part also..I loved it Jessu..that Tom n Jerry at first sight… pinning blouse.. Rommance…arrre waah!!
    Manufacturer! Who on the Earth calls his mother manufacturer except that idiot!!waiting for THE WEDDING.. Can’t comment more as In in classroom watching a fim as part of films studies. Bye u…

    1. Aadia

      Forget to tell about the car…seriously.. In gonna agree with Men sis…

      1. Jessie

        lol..Aadiaaa… I will reply the same … 😉 😉 *puppy dog eyes* what u ppl are asking about..heheh

      2. Aadia

        I mean the innovative romantic sequences..

    2. Jessie

      Aadiaaaaa…. oh god!! in Bus… haha..I know..I too had faced it…sometimes at home too..heeheh..Aunty… god knows!! he knows us 😉 Thanks a ton dear…Glad that u pointed ur likes… and… Thanks again..I got ur note of likes.. Neil ho to aise… its next… wedding.. classroom…!! girl..Risking ya.. film watching..enjoy… bye dear..TC and love u loads..I want Togetherness update…

  18. Jesssiiii !!! U killed me today …. u seriously killed me today with ur awwwww chappy…
    huhhh !!! Finding words to describe…. but not getting anything… haaa i have been a silent reader of ur FF since fee days… but today i couldnt hold on my feeling…
    omggggg !!! It’s awesome dear…
    Cute, Sweet,, lovely ,, beautiful as well as funny… huhuhuhuhu !!! Dhamakedar episode containing all d emotions…

    haaah !!! Still having butterflies,, crickets,, grass hopers,, ants seeing Aradhika’s car romance…..that was superbly breath taking… *mad me…

    ohhh God… i wish i could pull ur cheeks n twist ur nose once…. *bang m head with coconut…

    now all i can say i LOVED IT LIVED IT ENJOYED IT thoroughly….

    ready with popcorn for next part…
    soooo update sooon… okkkk !!!
    Thnk u… ;-* :0

    1. Jessie

      Hey Kakali…. Thanks a ton dear..Tell me why were u silent…*sad pout*.. I was eager to get more reviews you know..As I booster…! Am glad this chappy brought you….Thank you..Thank u..Thank u so much… Glad that u said ur like..Will have a eye on it… Range rover pulled you… banging with coconut ?why? you are sweet..dont do… Am so happy… you made my day dear.. why you kept me away from ur view.. now i will pull ur… we both!! ohk done,,, will post today..may be night… Thanks a lot support..Love u loads… TC

      1. Kakali

        Sorry dear… actually i was silent coz i have few days in my hand … as m leaving from this site …. soooo ,,,
        thinking u’ll feel bad as i comment on ur 1/2 part n suddenly disappeared….. huhuhuhuhu !!!!
        hope u understand dear…
        Bang with ur FF Jessi !!!
        God bless u…
        Bye TC… :* 🙂

      2. Jessie

        Hey..why are you leaving??..anyways..if possible try to stay back.. I will miss a friend na…but try to share a word if you prefer to…and yes..even as a guest u can enjoy the site…Thanks dear..TC..loads of love..Glad that I had a chat wit u..don’t worry dear..comment whenever u prefer to…Stay happy and Goodluck!

      3. Actually my final exams r gonna start soon … sooo have to leave …. n will back in April…
        then if u want or not i’ll go to ur post n gonna read ur rest part which i missed… okkkkk !!!

        I wish i could stay back…. hahhh !!!
        but time u know..infect i myself trying to complete my SS asap…
        me2 glad n happy that i get a frnd like u…
        Stay bless dear…
        Love u…
        Take care… ;-*

    2. Jessie

      Oh ok dear..All the best in advance..and why will I don’t want…I want ur review na…Will wait for April….you will get one more story by then…good luck for ur SS too .. tell me the name of ur story…if u.dnt mind…. I will catch na…glad at that note ..stay happy..loads of love…TC…

      1. Gd Mrng dear !!! waa why will i mind !!! *pinch ur nose
        “A DREAM” … it’s based on my SWASAN… ;-*
        have a beautiful day ahead dear !!!!

  19. S.v

    adraaa sakka nnaaannanaaa super sema ayaaayoo neethiki aarambichi inniku dhan mudichen mavaney enna update enna update summa kizhi kizhi kizhinnu kizhichita baby pinnita gongango enna update anga amaidhiya pesina neil arjun kita kathinaan paaru yappa sema samrat periya aapu vechurukarunnu mattum een kannukku kannadi madhiri crystal clearah theriyudhu een ??

    sam is so fragile illa ava amma kaga enna vena pannuvanu irukku aana indha dhadava ava radhika side irupalha ?? adhenna prenava neil mommy my manufacturer lol super comedy he he he sema spontaneous kalai and sam and neil lol avan ava solra ellathayum amaidhiya kekaran super baby super kalakita baby kalakita ayyoo semaya irukku seri adutha part eppo epdiyavadhu seekarama padichururen love u sooooooooooo soooooooooo much muhhhhhaaaa super baby

    1. Jessie

      Babyyyyyy….Thanks a lot…yay!! am super happy… Samrat,,lol…Neil..more to go… everyone thinks abt sam so.,,Radhika le irundhu all have that doubt.. parpom…Thank u baby…update paniten baby., u too loaaddssssssssss…. ena solane theriyala,.am so so happy reading ur comment..

  20. Roma

    Jesss. lovely sweeeeeetheart sissy. …what a mind blowing episode. …loved it from the bottom of my heart. …ardhika romantic moments. ..n their cute fights. ..very interesting….lovelyyyyyy. …neil also came…wowwww…loved his entry….n those man to man talk between neil n arjun….my goodness…I could feel the heat n see their challenging eyes…….you nailed it my honeyyy. …it was n epic. …eagerly waiting for ardhika wedding. …keep it up honeyyy. . Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ 😉 😀

    1. Jessie

      Thanks you so much Roma di….glad u brought ur likes here…men talk..yea…!! Thanks a again…am so happy to read those precious words for me…Muahhhh…my energy tonic…love u loads…TC…

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