Manmarziyan-A new story (Chapter 6-The reverse)

Hi all!! As usual, I’m back again!! Sorry for being late… Festival time!!?? Belated pongal and shankranthi wishes to all of you… Hope you all had fun and enjoyed well ??

Let’s move on…. Please do bear with my typos and grammatical errors…

Happy reading…??

Radhika sat at the doorstep and cried profusely hugging Karthik. He felt bad for her now. It was almost one and a half months.

Radhika then said “omg!! How did I forget? Today is Arjun’s big day!! He’s going to submit his project!! And I didn’t wish him at all.

She then picked up her phone and called Arjun. It kept ringing. She prayed for him to pick up. She had her fingers crossed. She felt relieved when she heard a manly yet gentle voice.

He said “hello.”

She said trying to cover the tension and the fact that she had cried “Arjun, I’m so sorry. I couldn’t wish you in the morning.”

Arjun said “it’s k sweetheart. And now stop crying.”

She said “I’m not crying.”

He asked “then why do you sound so low?”

She said “I didn’t do homework.”
(Lol….. Homework?! ??)

He asked “you cry for that? It’s k. Don’t worry. It happens now and then.”

She said “but….”

He cut her in and said “now wipe your tears and smile. Else, I won’t be able to do the presentation. Please Radhika. Pllllleeeaaaaassseee.”

She pacified herself, wiped her tears and fought the fresh ones that streamed out and took in and let out a few deep breaths.

She said “all the best Arjun. I know you’ll do well. Come home soon.”

He said “thank you so much!! And yes, I’ll come soon” and cut the call.

Radhika kept the phone in her pocket and stared down at the marble floor. Karthik stared at her all the while. At the same time, Arjun too was lost in Radhika’s thoughts.

Arjun thought “homework?! She’s crying for not doing homework?! That can’t be. What is she trying to cover up?!”

Karthik thought staring at her “this is not the Radhu I knew. The one I knew was innocent. She didn’t even know to say a lie. But, this one is all grown up. Mature. I’m so proud of you Radhu.”

She felt bad for lying. Maybe she would have been caught lying if she was in front of him. She suddenly let out a gasp in fright.

She thought “oh lord!! I’ve got just two weeks. What am I going to do? Where did di go? I know she’s not the same. Please help me find her god. Please.”

(God:find her yourself. I’m not going to help you. *sigh*… Ok, fine. I’ll help. Now stop crying.)

Radhika wiped her tears and got up. Karthik too got up. She started to walk, when Karthik said something.

Radhika asked “bhai you said something?”

Her voice bought him out of his thoughts.
He said “huh? Nothing Radhu.”

She said “tell bhai.”

He said “I’m proud of you.”

Radhika said “I know you’ll be” and giggled.

She said “we’ll come after some time. She might be there then.”

He said “OK. Now where do we go?”

She said “I’m hungry. Let’s go eat.”

He chuckled and said “after all this drama. You will be hungry.”

She gave a grumpy look and said “not funny.”

He shot back the next moment. “It is.”

She gave him an annoyed look and started walking. Karthik too went along and they drove off. Just then, there is someone seen. Who was peeking from the window all this time, watching and listening to them. It was….. NANDINI!!??

She was sad. She hated her life. She was all alone. She spent all her life alone only with one hope, that her Arjun was there fire her. Always by her side. Now, even he let go of her. She cried out loud screaming.

She cried “why? Why does this have to happen to me? I lost everything. I’m so alone. God, please forgive me.”

She then said to herself still crying “why Radhika? Why did you come here looking for me? Go back to Arjun and live a happy life. Nothing’s gonna work. What’s the use looking for me? Arjun will never forgive me. Just leave me alone Radhika, just leave me alone.”

Radhika and Karthik went to a restaurant nearby. It was an Indian restaurant. Radhika had annoyed Karthik so much that he had missed the restaurant. It was nearby, but they drive for more than half an hour trying to find the exact location. They went and sat down. Karthik sagged down.

Radhika asked “so soon?”

He opened his eyes and looked at her.

He said “Radhu enough. No more.”

She said “OK ok” looking at the menu card without looking at his face.

They then gave their orders and waited. It was quiet as no one spoke. Karthik was drained out. His mind stopped working. He could think of nothing other than Nandini’s whereabouts. Food arrived. They had their meals quietly. This was the first time it was silent. Radhika would never shut her mouth and Karthik would only listen to her with a smile or reply in monosyllables.

On the other side, Arjun submitted his work and presented it well. Everyone seemed to pleased with his work. Nitin smiled seated next to his dad, he too was smiling. Arjun felt relieved.

He thought “Radhika, it’s only because of you I was able to present my work well. Thank you so much!!” He had a smile on his face, seeing which Nitin smiled even more. Arjun was allotted a PA.

(Ok .. A PA for two weeks.. Well who cares… My story.. Lol ??)

He came to Arjun and said “I think you’ve really found peace. Your smile says it all. I’m so happy you dropped that revenge of yours and moved on in life. Thanks to Radhika.”

Arjun felt bad now. He was kinda relieved that he didn’t know that it was Sam, whom he wanted to take revenge on. That Sam, who was his friend. Nitin would really walk away if he found out. And he didn’t want that to happen. He would never let him find out.

Arjun took his car and went on a drive. He was lost in his thoughts driving. Suddenly he saw Radhika and Karthik in the car on the opposite lane. His eyes widened.

He thought “where is she going now during class hours? Let me see.”

He took a U turn and started to follow them. He maintained good distance so that they don’t doubt. Arjun felt his life go upside down. His heart too played along. A lot of things were running in his body. He caught the steering wheel tight and his muscles rippled. His eyes were red, filled with tears and anger.

Just then Radhika said “bhai I feel someone’s following us.”

Karthik stopped the car. Arjun who saw this quickly parked the car in a space nearby. Radhika and Karthik turned around, but saw none. The lane was clear. Radhika got off the car and walked a little to see, she too found no one.

Just then Karthik called “Radhu!! Come, let’s go.”

She turned around and said “coming bhai” and started to walk towards the car.

She got into the car and they drove off again. Arjun didn’t want to take any risk, so he waited for five minutes and then took the car.

Radhika and Karthik came to a park nearby. She sat on a bench and was lost in her thoughts. Karthik was sitting next to her. Just then someone placed their hand on Radhika’s shoulder. Radhika looked up to see who it was. She gasped. She was too shocked to digest it. She binked once, no twice, no thrice and then rubbed her eyes wondering if it was a dream. She saw a woman in track pant and t-shirt smiling at her. Karthik too kept staring.

(Lol looks like everyone were in shock ??) ( and yes she found them… Its the reverse that happened ??)

Radhika who had still come out of shock said “di?!”

Nandini said “yes me.”

She then sat next to Radhika and asked “why are you here? Go back Radhika. It’s no use. “

Radhika said “I’m here for you di. To take you back.”

Nandini said “but, Arjun…”

She said “he’ll forgive you. I’ll make him do it.”

Nandini asked “why are you doing this? Arjun will never forgive me.”

Radhika said “it’s all because of me. I only wanted to expose you. I wanted you to go away too. But then I realized the pain of being separated from a sibling. I shouldn’t have done that. I should have convinced him that time itself. “

She said crying “no Radhika it’s not your fault. I deserve this. To be alone all my life. I fell for a married man, which I shouldn’t have done. What he did was right. I took it in a wrong way. And I spoilt Arjun too. I don’t deserve his forgiveness at all.”

Radhika said “di, you’re a good woman. It was your revenge which made you fall low in everyone’s eyes. Arjun will forgive you. You’ve changed di. Please come back. Talk once to Arjun. He’ll surely forgive you. He still loves you di.”

Karthik said “Miss Nandini, I too thought wrong. You don’t seem to be a bad person. Listen to Radhu. Everything will be fine.”

Nandini smiled and said “I think you’re the sheriff who took all my documents. You’re doing a good job.”

He smiled and said “thank you.”

Arjun who had been driving all long identified Karthik’s car and parked it there. He was walking in the park looking for them. Nandini who was smiling looked up and saw Arjun coming towards them. He hadn’t spotted them.

Nandini got up and said “I need to go Radhika.”

Radhika said “wait di. Now where are you going?”

She indicated in left direction. Radhika turned and saw Arjun. Before she could turn and face Nandini, she had left. Arjun who spotted them, walked fast towards them with angry eyes. Radhika knew there was trouble coming. She froze there.

Arjun caught hold of Radhika’s shoulders and shook her.

He asked “Radhika, what are you doing here? Don’t you have class? For this you came here? To roam with this guy?”

Karthik said “stop it Arjun. You…..”

He bit out “you shut up. Just shut up. This is between me and her. It would be good if you don’t interfere.”

Radhika asked “Arjun!! How can you talk to him like that? Now, ask sorry.”

Arjun shook her even more hard and asked “why do I have to apologize? Do you know how it feels when you see your wife with another guy? That too this close?! Do you even understand what’s running in me? How I feel? Do you even care?”

Radhika didn’t look at him. She has her eyes fixed to the concrete below her feet. She took up all the strength to answer him. She knew it was going to hurt him, but she had to do it. She fought back her tears.

Karthik couldn’t see this. He didn’t want to see his sister spoil her own life. He stepped forward to tell it out. Blurt it all out. But, Radhika caught hold of his arm softly nodding in a negative.

She bit out “I don’t care for you. Not even an incy wincy bit. And why do I have to care of what’s running in you?”

Arjun let go of her. He couldn’t believe it. He started at Karthik with all the anger in the world. He felt like ripping him apart.

(Ushoooo .. So much anger…Baap re ??)

He then caught hold of Radhika’s arm and started walking. Radhika found it though to pace up with his long strides. She turned around to see Karthik, who was watching them walk away. Nandini who was hidden behind a statue, watched them walk. She cried and at the same time she had a smile on her face. She saw her brother after so long.

She cried and said to herself “it’s all because of me. Radhika, I’m sorry. Arjun please don’t be angry on her. I’m so happy that I got to see you after so long. Thank you God!! Thank you so much!!”

She said “Arjun… Let go. Let go of my arm. It hurts.”

He asked “what about me then? Even I’m hurt. Can’t you see that?”

She said nothing. They then drive off. They reached home. As Jun went into the room and slammed the door. Good that it didn’t break. Radhika sat in the hall crying. Meanwhile, Arjun kept pacing in the room. He didn’t know what to do. He was totally drained. Just then he got Neil’s call.

Arjun picked the call and said “hello.”

Neil in cheerful voice “hey man!! How’s life foing? Totally forgot us huh? This means Chashni confessed?!”

Arjun didn’t say anything. He just didn’t know what to say. Neil sensed something fishy.

He asked “you there? What happened?”

Arjun bit out “that Karthik!! That guy.”

Neil said “woah woah. Wait there. Who’s this Karthik. Tell me we’ve from the beginning.”

Arjun told Neil everything. Neil on the other side, sat on his bed with his eyes wide. He had his palm covering his mouth as he kept listening to Arjun.

As he finished he said “Neil I love Radhika. I love her so much. She’s only mine. I can’t see her with anyone else” and cried.

Neil said “yeah Arjun, I know. Everyone knows. But, Chashni can’t do like that.y Chashni is never like that. Hey, just a minute. I’ll call you back. I’m getting a call.”

Arjun said “OK fine” and cut the call.

Neil thought “what is Chashni upto? I need to talk to her. And these love birds need to get together as soon as possible.”

Neil called Radhika. Radhika on the other side saw Neil’s name flashing on her mobile screen. She wiped her tears and picked up the call.

She said “hi Neil!! How are you? And Sam?”

Neil said “Chashni I’m fine. And everyone else is fine. Tell me something.”

She asked “what?”

He asked “did you confess to Arjun?”

She asked “what happened Neil? Why are you asking this now? Did Arjun say anything?”

He said “that’s not the answer Chashni. And Arjun didn’t say anything. Now tell me why you came to US. Doesn’t seem like you came to study.”

She gasped out.

She asked “what are you saying Neil?”

He said “I know my Chashni can’t lie to me. Please tell me Radhika. I may help you. Tell what it is. Just spit it out.”

She said “nothing Neil.”

He said “no Radhika. There’s something troubling you. Tell me.”

Neil never called her Radhika. If he did so, he was angry. She didn’t wanna trouble him. She felt is better she told him. She told him everything. Neil was shocked.

He thought “why is Chashni screwing up her life?”

He asked “so you met di?”

She said “yes.”

He asked “so Karthik is Ankush’s best friend? Like your brother?”

She said “yes.”

He asked “Arjun doesn’t know a thing about this?”

She said “yes.”

He said “Chashni I’m not gonna talk to you” and cut the call.

He said to himself “sorry Chashni, I can’t help you this time. I need to do something for Arjun. Anyone of you will have to step back. And it’s you who’ll have to do it.”

Radhika on the other hand cried. She lost a friend now. Her only hope. The onke who could help her. The one who always supported her and was always by her side.

Neil called Arjun. Arjun picked up the next moment. It seemed he was eagerly waiting for his call.

He said “yeah Neil.”

Neil said “I have a plan Arjun. To get Chashni back.”

Arjun said “I’m ready to do anything to get her back.”

Neil said “then listen.”

It was all mute. Neil kept talking, while Arjun listened carefully. A smile crept on his lips.

As Neil finished, Arjun said “right. We’re done. This is good.”

Neil said “but Arjun. This is wrong. Oh, god with what can I hit myself. I hate myself now.”

Arjun said “no Neil. This is perfect.”

He said “OK. But be careful.”

Arjun said “ok” and cut the call.

Neil thought “why did I do this? Oh god!! What if Arjun seriously does it? This is so wrong. I’m so sorry Chashni.”

Arjun gave a smile and said “Radhika Mehra, its time you become mine.”

On the other side Radhika cried out profusely.

Well that’s it for today guys… Hope you all liked it… Please do let me know… I’ll be back soon with another update… Till then love you all loads…. Bear hugs to all of you??


Up next: Chapter-7-The wrong turn

Credit to: Shree

52 comments

    • Shree

      Hey snehahari!! Thank you so much for liking it.. Plan… You’ll find out soon… Will update soon..??

      Love you??

  1. manha

    shreeee madam hw r u???!!! i think some bug has bitten u. u r making fun og ur own story yaar. If u do this what will we do then??!!! plz hamse hamara haq to mat chinooo plzzzz. lol.

    ok ok enough of my P.J’s. superb one. Now neil has joined karthik n beating himself. God any one enters into the life’s our Ardhika defo has to beat themselves for being involved in it even if it is God.sigh. God’s thought was tooooo much . Dear if god also thinks like that how will we suffer. plzzzz shree control urself dear.

    Karthik n Radz scene was tooo gud. she is hungry after all the drama. Now i’m really feeling pity for karthik yaar. Really poor karthik, wife is eating his brain n husband is throwing daggers n if he has change he can kill him too. 😉 plzzz karthik beware of these two.

    I’m not able to stop my laugh now. Now u r again making arjun angry. R u trying get the old arjun back with red eyed anger. oh god plzzz don’t do this. Nandu came n met them. this is quite interesting.

    what is the great idea Neil gave Arjun that he is so happy n here neil is beating himself for giving such a wonderful idea. lagta hai daal me kuch kaala ya phir puri daal hi kaali hai. lol.

    ok ok Don’t cry now. I’m stopping now. Enjoy festival n holidays. Be happy n aise superb updates deti rehna. loveeee u. Bear hug.

    • Shree

      Manhaaaaa!! I’m fine .. Very fine.. And you?! And lol no … No bug has bitten me .. I think so ?? .. No it hasn’t… No no I’m not making fun … And don’t worry.. I won’t take away your right .. Chill ya ??

      And yes, Neil has joined arjun… Lol yah everyone just breks their heads looking at the two ??

      And yeah Karthik radz scene .. Drama ke baad bhook .. ?? … I know both husband and wife are torturing him .. Sad guy … I pity him … Ikr … Karthik beware ??

      And lol I think I did .. I don’t know what I’m doing… I got the old Arjun back!! ??
      Arjun mera katputli hai … Hell dance to my tunes as he’s totally in my control ?? … And yes Nandu ame back!!

      And yes, Neil is beating himself for giving such a stupid yet nice idea(according to Arjun)… Daal pura kaala hai ?? .. Lol lol lol ??… Rotfl .. Lmao ??

      Lol no I’m not crying.. But I think I’ll start to.. I’m laughing so much and I think ters will pop out in no time ??

      And by the way.. College is gonna start.. I’m happy as always.. And yes, I’ll post soon… ??

      Love you toooooo .. Laooaaadddssss …. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Shree

      Lol aastha … That’s me.. I always do things like that ??… Yeah I’ll update soon…??

      Love you loads… Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  2. mittu

    suspence………………. wow……
    why radhu wants nandini in their life she is a devil………… i don’t like her…………poor Arjun…………. u r rocking sree………………………… plss update soon i can’t wait…….

    • Shree

      Hey mittu!! Yes suspense… And nandini has changed… She’s repenting for what she’s done … Thank you so much!! I’ll surely update soon… ??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  3. manju

    nice update
    i m really enjoyed the whole episode especially that homework part

    cant see our love birds like this yaar give some intence scenes between our cuties dear

    take care…………… update next part soon ……………bye

    • Shree

      Hey manju!! Thank you so much for liking it !! And yes the homework ??… They’ll unite soon.. Yes, I’ll post soon ??

      Love you loads… Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  4. Liya

    So neil didnt tel arj abt karthik???
    Nw, wats the plan. . . N wat does “its time you bcum mine” means. . .?
    And nxt chapie. . .THE WRONG TURN??

    • Shree

      Hey liya!! Nope Neil didn’t tell about Karthik… Plan you’ll find out … And you’ll find the answer to your questions soon..??

      Love you ??

  5. nats(NATASHA)

    Pls….update the next epi faster…..OMG ur ff is really gud ……i’m becoming a crazy fan of ur ff…..not only urs but 4 all the ff”s of manmarziyan u guys r awesome……u guyd make me ga head over hells when i read ur ff’s…..shree ur a awesome writer and ur writting skills are just fab….i’m literally in luv with ur ff…….??????

    *note:donot mind my blabering…iam a really crazy fan of mmz…..i miss this serial alot ……..???

    • Shree

      Natasha!! Omg!! Thank you so much!! I’m glad you like my writing…

      No no.. You’re not blabbering.. Everyone misses mmz…. Yes I’ll post soon ??

      Love you ??

  6. Natasha

    Hello guys how r u? Shree ur ff is really very good and on the top of that ur writing skill is very good. So good luck!

    • Shree

      Natasha!! I’m so glad to see you here!! And your comment!! I’m on cloud nine ??… Thank you so much for liking it!!

      I love your stories too .. Plz post soon.. And good luck to you too .. ??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  7. Natasha

    Hey natasha! My name is also natasha.

    Welcome to the jungle of mmz where u will find fans of mmz a lot.

    From where u r? Ur welcomed to my page where is heart there is life.

    • Shree

      Grace !! It’s so nice to see ppl come out and express their views.. Thank you so much!! Thanks again for liking it!! I’ll post soon ??

      Love you ??

  8. Lakshmi

    Shree!!!!Belated Happy Sankranthi to u too.
    And superb update dear… Oh finally nandu met rads.. Arjun was burning with jealousy n as manha said he would have killed him if he was not changed .Why r u making him cru this much…poor arjun..??…don’t make him cry more …Neil gave an idea to help arjun n arjun was happy with that idea ..oh neil was very cute ???..
    Update next part soon …very soon..
    Love u …??….take care…

    • Shree

      Lakshmi!! Thank you so much for liking it !! Yeah as usual..??

      Arjun is my puppet .. Kuch bhi kar sakti hoon uske saat … Lol chill .. I won’t do anything bad ??.. And yeah Neil helped… I’ll post soon ??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

    • Shree

      Alice!! Sorry dear, that’s not possible.. I’m still typing the chappy… I’ll post by tomorrow.. Oh, hostel? Have fun dear… ??

      Love you ??

  9. Advaita

    Nice twist …..Nandini herself came to them….waiting for next update. Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂

    • Shree

      Hey advaitha!! Thanks for liking it!! I’ll post soon ??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  10. Rg

    Hi shree can u update d nxt two episodes soon I can’t bear d wait. By d way is arjun now going to make radhika jealous??

    • Shree

      Hey rg!! Yeah I’ll try posting soon.. College is also gonna start.. So, I’ll try.. It’s something like that.. You’ll see ??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  11. nisha

    hey shree dear todays part is awesome

    I just loved it dear

    Arjun head is burning like hell and I luv the convo of neil and aradhika dear an awesome episode with a fantastic precap I wait eagerly for next

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend

    • Shree

      Nishhuuuu!! How are you?! Thank you so much for liking it !! The convo was a good one … I’ll post soon .. ??

      Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  12. Tanya

    Loved today’s episode.Radhika really hungry after this drama and really homework?Lol…Just loved the episodes of yours.

    • Shree

      Tanya!! It’s so great to see you here!! How are you?! Lol I k iw that part was funny ?? … I myself can’t believe that I added the homework part ??

      Thank a lot for liking it … Please do update your story soon ??

      Love you loads… Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug ??

  13. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode, shree dearrrr it’s superb n interesting. ..rads so disappointed in her mission….poor karthik stuck between these love birds…God’s comments so cool yaar….loved the scene when Nandini di came to meet rads…n arjun veryyyyyyy angryyyyyy….now neil joined arjun, wowwww. ..I’m very excited. ..what’s the idea neil gave arjun? Lol…I’m tooooooooo immersed in this story, loving it sooo muchhhhhh. …keep it up buddyyy… precap is very interesting. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug

    • Shree

      Hey Roma!! I’m glad that you liked it!! And yes Nandu came to meet her … I’ll post soon ??

      Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling…. A warm tight bear hug to you too ??

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