Manmarziyan-A new story (Chapter 58, 59& 60)

Hello!! I hate the weather.. Cold after cold.. Fever fallen in love with me or maybe i have.. Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh….. Cyclone postpones trip to Chennai.. Good that it happened.. I got to surprise maa and I got to eat all she had cooked.. Hehe

I’m trying hard to find ways to update.. Lappys be out of hand.. Phone is like.. Dare you to think of it… too much out of reach.. I be pouting.. From the moment I’m with fever.. My brothers are finding every single way to take gadgets away from me.. Aaaaahhhhh.. I typed to keep myself awake.. Once I sleep it’s impossible to wake me up..

Sorry to every single person who had called me these days.. Amit Swathi.. Naveena… Sheetal.. Raghaa.. Priya.. Aahh I have no clue who all. Sorry to all.. Compensation here.. Call me up on my landline or just barge into my room and screw me up for the tiny mess here.. Haha.. I be sick.. So stay away.. My fever be my shield for now.. Heehhhaaaahhhaaa

BIG WARNING ON TOP

Naveena n Pushpa… I miss you both soooo muuccchhh!! Last benchers we be… vada and coffee.. All the fun we’ve been having.. Bunking.. Hacking library wifi.. Lol.. the most epic thing we’d ever done.. Ghost videos to keep us awake during dry and boring classes.. Scaring Chethana.. Miss them all.. Lol still we managed to score within the first ten.. Lolz.. Miss you both so very much!! I’ll be back next sem.. So you both.. Tell me how this update is.. Majorly for you.. Don’t scream for the typos I’d have done here and there.. b*t*hes you both be at times.. But I love it..

“Even if you can’t find heaven
I walk through hell with you
Love you’re not alone
Cause I’m gonna stand by you”

Hope you remember this one Naveena.. lol

So it’s a triple update..

As usual.. Please please please.. Ignore and bear with my typos and grammatical errors (especially to those two partners of mine)

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Chapter 58- Niti backs off and Arjun confronts.

Arjun ran out of the darkened hall and sped his car towards the Malhotras. He snuck into the house. It was a way which he and Neil and had found out during childhood to sneak in whenever Shika had visited Prerna. He got into Niti’s room and fortunately her laptop was open without a password. He opened her mail. One of that bad habit of hers from which he took advantage. She never signed out of her mail. There was a reply to her mail where she had sent a backing off mail. And they had accepted it too. But.. she would not be able to publish her works for the next three years.

“Why?” he muttered as he cussed under his breath.

“How the hell did you get in here?” he heard a voice.

He turned around to see an angry Niti. She came to him and pulled him up.

“And you opened my mail!! How dare you?” she screamed.

“That’s why you’re supposed to sign out” he said in a cold tone.

“My mail.. my laptop.. my computer.. my wish” she screamed.

“Why did you back out?” he asked.

“I’ll give that a pass” she said casually shrugging her shoulders.

“Chutki..” he gritted his teeth.

“You call me Chutki, that doesn’t mean I have to answer you” she crossed her arms.

“Why?” was the only thing he could ask.

“Enough of me winning. I’ve anyways achieved nothing with it. And by the way Bhai, Bird Song would have been sued. It was a plan. Two nominees from the same company” she sighed.

“Go on” his eyed narrowed at her.

“Samudra” she sighed.

“They tipped them” she shook her head.

“How do you know?” he asked.

“I mailed the Writer’s Association. Like how they tipped, I used my Royal power” she smirked “like I had expected. Samudra” she hissed.

He sighed “they said Samudra had backed off and wanted two nominees from Bird Song” she replied making him angry.

“I mailed as fast as I could before the list reaches the higher ups” she looked up to meet his red bloodshot angry eyes.

“I know bird Song is Piyali aunty’s dream and she has worked hard for it. Uncle too. And you had always wanted Radhika to win. So, it was up to me. To back off. To save Bird Song and to make your wife win. To make you proud” she smiled when his eyes softened.

“You could have told any of us” he sighed as he cupped her cheek.

“I no baby” she pouted.

“That we all know” he said in a sarcastic tone.

“Now go, your dharm patni will be searching for you” she said back in the same tone.

She laughed when his phone rang with Radhika’s name flashing on the screen. He gave her a stare and turned around.

“Give me five minutes. With Chutki” he clipped as he cut the call and slipped his phone in his pocket and pulled Niti with him.

“Bhai I’ve got fever. You go” she said.

“What did you do? He sighed as he checked her forehead.

“Liar” he snapped.

“Please..” she pleaded.

“Why?” he asked.

“I just don’t” she snapped.

“Come” he pulled her.

“Mom knows I’m home” she snapped.

“Why?” he asked.

“I don’t wanna face some people” her voice went low.

“Ankush?” he asked.

“No. Others” she whispered.

“Who?” he asked.

“Samudraians. Some others. It felt so good to see them in shock. My name being out” she laughed like a maniac, wiping her tears “I walking to the front holding the Award.. handing the Award to bhabi” she laughed more coughing in between.

“Chutki..” he rubbed her back.

“They’ll come Bhai. They’ve been planning big from since Bird Song has taken Maybelline contract. That was the biggest bumper project they could bag and in the snap of fingers it was taken away from them” she looked at him to be thinking deeply.

“Leave that to me” he smirked “now come” he pulled her.

“Fine” she huffed as the tagged along.

“Don’t tell anyone” she snapped.

“Okay. Top secret” he smiled as he showed out his pinky finger.

“Deal” she smiled as she linked her pinky finger with his and they laughed like good old times and drove off.

“You told me you were going home” Prerna looked confused when her daughter stood in front of her smiling.

“Oh maa.. bhai told me he’d get me a hot chocolate. So, I stayed. He got me one. That’s why it took time” she smiled and winked at Arjun, who in turn chuckled and ruffled her hair.

“Hot chocolate for meee..?” Radhika whined like a baby.

“Only for Arjun’s Chutki” Niti poked her tongue to looping her arms around Arjun’s forearm.

“Arjuuunn…” Radhika pouted like a baby.

“I’ll get you while going home” Arjun laughed as he pulled his wife’s cheeks.

“You have to get me too” Niti whispered to Arjun as Radhika in front of them.

“Now eat. I’ll deal with my wife first. Then you” he shook his head huffing.

“Why huffing? I asked my right” she said causally as she filled her plate.

“Meri maa.. I’ll get you tomorrow” he folded his hands carefully as he had his plate.

“That’s like a good brother” she grinned “where’s Ankush?’ she asked.

“Why him?” he asked.

“Cause he’s nowhere to be seen” she said.

“Why you asking about him?” he asked.

“Can’t you hear? Didn’t I just say it? His sister has won and he’s not here” she said clearly annoyed.

“He said he was taking Anitha for DINNER” he said stressing on “dinner” to see her reaction.

“Oh. Cool” she said un flinched.

“Niti” someone called out.

“Hey Nasa” she smiled.

“You here” Manasa (Nasa) asked.

“Yep I won last year. It’s important that I have to be here. You?” she asked.

“I work for Samudra” Manasa replied.

“Nice” she said “okay I gotta go. Bye” she pulled Arjun with her putting a forced smile on her face.

The poor girl had no idea what was going on. She was new to the company. Niti too walked away. She wanted help. Wanted to quit. She hated it and found it controversial though she had been working only for a month there. She sighed looking her food loaded plate. She walked away throwing the plate in the bin nearby.

“Samudra? How?” Niti looked suspicious “I don’t care. I hate her” she shrugged her shoulders and walked away.

“Hey baby sister” Neil cooed.

“Hello big brother” she said back.

He looked at his sister in deep thought. She always argued when he called her “baby sister”. He knelt down and cupped her face. Her state pained him. Her eyes spoke a lot. Spoke what she couldn’t say. Which she couldn’t open up about. Pain. Guilt. Fear. A glint of happiness.

What was going on in her head? What was she thinking?

All he knew was.. she was doing something that was both wrong and right at the same time.

His only solution.. Arjun.

He’d know.

“What’s wrong?” he asked.

“I don’t know” she whispered.

“Tell me” he whispered.

“I really don’t know. All I know is… it hurts.. Like really Bad. Here” she said exasperated as she placed her palm over her chest.

“Think why” he whispered as he squeezed his sister’s hand a little.

“I don’t know. I just don’t want to too” she screamed as she got up and walked away.

“You do. You just don’t want to face it” he smiled sadly at his sister’s disappearing form.

“She can do it Neil” Sam placed her hand on his shoulder “come” she smiled as she called him to bed.

“Not much time Sam. Ankush and Anitha are getting married next month” he sighed.

“How do you know?” she asked.

“He told me in the morning” he sighed.

………………………………….

“What does your sister think of herself?” Ankush snapped as he entered Neil’s cabin.

“Calm Ankush. What happened now?” he asked.

“I’m getting married in a month and I don’t want to at all” Ankush sneered.

“What can I do?” he looked confused.

“Tell her it’s either her or no one” he banged his palms on the table.

“I think you can tell her that” he said not knowing how to react “why are you marrying if you’re not interested?” he asked.

“Two reasons. One.. to make your sister realize, which doesn’t seem to be working at all. Two.. my mom” he sighed.

“Go with the marriage. Carry till the end. We’ll see” Neil smiled.

Ankush just walked out leaving an upset Neil.

“Nitii..” he muttered.

……………………………………………………………………..

“Neil” Sam called out.

“Yeah let’s go” he said as he broke out of the memory.

“Bhai is getting married on 22 of next month” Radhika said as she sagged on the bed.

“What?” Arjun turned around.

“Yes” she sighed.

“Isn’t it too soon?” he asked.

“Anitha’s aunt came with the date” she said “it is too soon” she sighed.

“Arjun, bhai loves Niti too much” she pulled his shirt.

“We’ll do something” he said as he pushed her head to his chest.

“What makes Niti say a no? He is deserving” she groaned against his chest.

“Love takes time. I.. we know she loves him. But what makes he say a no? Let’s give her some time” he said as he lied down with her on top of him, covering themselves with the blanket.

Ankush was looking at his phone. Anitha had sent him some wedding card designs asking for his suggestions. He threw his phone and threw himself over the bed.

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Chapter 59- Radhika’s pregnant

Karthik was busy in a meeting with the other higher ups. His phone kept vibrating. He without seeing the caller turned his phone off. The meeting was interrupted.

“Karthik Verma!! What do you think of me? Dare you to cut me out. I will kill you!!” she screamed as she pulled his collar.

“I think you forgot where you are” Karthik smirked.

Anitha went crimson as she realized. She pulled Karthik out along with her. They could hear roaring laughter behind them as the door went shut. Anitha kept facepalming herself and Karthik kept smiling.

“So what’s up?” he asked as he admired every antic of hers.

“I need to go shopping” she said.

“So?” he asked.

“You’re coming with me” she grinned.

“NOOO!!!!” he screamed.

“Yes you are. Punishment for leaving my engagement party early” she smirked.

“Anitha no” he said.

“If you’re my friend you’re coming” she said as she sat in his SUV.

“You’re more than that” he sighed “you’re my everything” he blew a breath and took the keys from his driver.

“Where?” he asked.

“AZA Fashions. Juhu” she replied.

“What?” he asked.

“Boutique. I need to shop for my wedding” she said.

“There’s time. Why now?” he looked annoyed.

“I’m getting married next month” she dropped the bomb.

“Isn’t it too soon?” he asked shocked.

“I’m fine with it” she shrugged her shoulders.

“Are you happy with this?” he asked as he turned her to his side.

“How can I be?” she said to herself “I am” she replied.

“He can never love you” he said.

“I know. Why do you care?” she asked.

“Because I do” he sighed.

“Can we move? I don’t have a decade” she said as she turned away trying to keep herself composed.

Anitha went on trying and finally decided to buy a magenta embellished lahenga for the wedding. She and Ankush had planned for a late reception. A day or two after the wedding. She picked a mint ombre and mirror work embroidered lehenga set for the mahendi-sangeet. A simple pink embellished lehenga and beige bodysuit for haldi. Teal green and cobalt blue shaded brocade sari gown for the reception. Karthik just kept staring at Anitha happily trying them on. But who knew the pain she was carrying inside though she was smiling outside. Ankush had refused to accompany her. Aunt sick again. She didn’t want to trouble Mala as she was already busy. She picked matching accessories for them all. Mostly jhumkas and jhootis.

She pulled Karthik along with her to men’s section.

“Why here?” he looked confused “shopping for Ankush too?” he tried to lift off the confusion.

“No silly. For you” she smiled.

“I can do for myself” he snapped.

“Please” she pleaded.

“Okay one” he huffed as he could never say a no to her.

She selected a beige and turquoise brocade sherwani. He smiled seeing her happy and pecked her forehead. His lips lingered there for a moment feeling her soft skin under her lips.

“Wear this on my wedding” she said as she gave it to him.

“Deal” he smiled.

“How I wish we get married” was the thought that ran in both their heads at the same time.

Bird Song was busy with projects. Radhika just sat with her hair all over her face and palms covering her face. She had been throwing a lot of tantrums to Arjun. She had no idea why. Petty arguments that turned heated. But Arjun did deal with calmly. Sam came to her cabin and pulled her up.

“What’s wrong?” she asked.

“Had an argument with Arjun” Radhika replied.

“He told. Why so angry?” she asked.

“I don’t know” Radhika replied “I’m late too Sam” she sighed.

Sam smiled “Come with me” she said as she took her to her cabin.

“Why this?” Radhika asked as she saw a digital pregnancy test kit.

“It’s worth trying” Sam smiled.

“Why so many?” she asked.

“Some may not work. Extra careful” Sam smiled.

“What if I’m not pregnant?” she pouted.

“We’ll see what the problem is then” Sam smiled as she pulled her to the washroom.

Radhika kept pacing up and down. Sam was standing rubbing her belly watching a tensed Radhika. Radhika sat down on the tiled floor holding the kit looking at it deeply. She didn’t know how to react. She was happy and scared at the same time.

Happy that she was pregnant.

Scared because she didn’t know if Arjun was ready to take the responsibility of being a father. He wanted a baby, but didn’t know if now.

“Chashni what is it?” asked a worried Sam.

Sam saw the other kits on the table.

“Pregnant” the words displayed.

She knelt down and leapt on Radhika pulling her into a big hug. She was having company now. Food cravings. Tantrums. She felt her baby kick her and she smiled.

“You’re going to have a friend baby” Sam rubbed her belly and smiled when she got a kick in response.

“Radhika what’s wrong?” she asked.

“I don’t know if he is ready” Radhika replied.

“He always wanted one. He will be” she smiled cupping her face.

“I hope he is” Radhika whispered “I just don’t want him to feel burdened with the sudden news” she sighed.

“He will be happy” Sam smiled “come on now smile and give me a hug” she spread her arms out.

“What would I do without you Sam?” Radhika said as she rested her head on Sam’s shoulder.

“Ice cream?” Radhika asked.

“Vanilla” Sam beamed.

“Chocolate” Radhika clapped.

“Almond fudge” Sam poked her tongue.

“Coffee” Radhika smiled.

“Kesar” Sam said.

“Oreo” Radhika smirked.

“Whatever. We’re celebrating!!” Sam squealed as she clapped her hands.

“YEY!!” Radhika screamed as she pulled Sam into a tight hug and Sam too ended up squealing.

The office shook with their happy cries and looked baffled. Arjun, Niti, Ankush and Neil along with Piyali and Samrat who were busy with an important client blinked. Sam pulled radhika with her to the nearest ice cream parlour.

Arjun came home alone as Radhika had left with Sam. He sat on his bed and got himself immersed in work. She looked at his side of bedside table. A cup of coffee.

“Thanks di” he said without looking up.

“Di?” the voice came “I’m sister to you?” she cried.

His head snapped up to see Radhika. From since when did she start making coffee? She hated coffee. He saw her smiling wide and smiled back at her. She placed another cup. He blinked.

Two cups for him?

Or for her?

Did she start drinking coffee too?

He blinked when he saw a baby miniature cup in between both big cups. She frowned at her blinking husband.

Stupid. Idiot. What not?

She placed the pregnancy kit over his laptop. He saw it and kept it aside. He took it again and looked at her.

“What is this?” he asked.

“A pregnancy test kit” she snapped.

“Aaah yes” he said.

“What does it say?” she asked gritting her teeth hard.

“It says pregnant” he replied as he saw the kit.

“So?” she asked impatiently.

“So what? It just says pregnant” he said as he kept it on the table and went back to work.

Radhika stood disappointed. Arjun then again took the kit as realization struck him. He looked at it. Then the three cups and then her. She looked at him with hope. He looked at the kit again.. the cups and then her. He threw his laptop on the bed and picked her up in his arms and twirled her.

“Thank you!! Thank you thank you thank!!” he spun her around.

“I’m feeling dizzy. Put me down” she said annoyed.

“No. I’m not letting you down today” he smiled “I get to have my princess!!” he grinned.

“It can be a prince too” she said as she looped her arms around his neck.

“First my doll, then soldier” he said.

“We’ll see” she pouted.

Ankush saw Niti sitting on a bench alone. She looked lost. He had come for a stroll. He wanted to think again.

Who was benefited with this engagement?

No one.

Just then he saw a kid not more than age of two running towards him.

He smiled crouching down. But the little girl ran past him. He turned around to see Niti smiling wide, crouching down with her arms spread out.

“Mamma” she squealed as she reached Niti.

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Chapter 60- Sam’s baby shower

Ankush felt his head spinning. He saw both of them sharing a long hug. Niti tried pulling away, but the little one wasn’t ready to let go.

She was married and had a daughter. No one knew.

Not a single person.

He gripped his head at the mother-daughter bond. They looked so cute. So much in peace. His mind started running in all possible directions.

Was she really married?

If she was, who was her husband? Where was he?

Or was is it a s*xual one and he let her go knowing that she got pregnant?

Who was the old woman with her?

Did she reject him TWICE only because of this?

Even if it was, that didn’t mean his love for her would decrease or vanish. It was never bound to happen. But… even if Niti ends up falling in love with him and getting married to him, would he able to accept her daughter? A child born to some other man, other than him?

Was he such a good man? Did he have such a big heart?

“Mamma” the little one looked at her innocently.

“Yes baby mamma is right here” she smiled as she pecked her forehead.

Ankush threaded to her. He pulled her up and looked down at the little kid. The kid and the old woman didn’t seem to be pleased with Ankush’s company. The kid held on to Niti’s legs possessively as she glared up at Ankush.

“Who is this kid?” he asked all angry.

“She’s my daughter. Riya” she smiled “Riya baby say hi to uncle” Niti pulled her up in her arms.

Riya’s lips twitched and pursed, which clearly showed her displeasure. She turned away and buried her face in Niti’s neck.

“Your daughter? You’re joking right?” he let out a humorless laugh.

“She’s my daughter Ankush” she replied as her grip on the little one turned a little stiff as she felt Riya stiffen.

Seemed like the kid could understand. The old woman behind sighed.

“Did you reject me only because of this?” he gripped her jaw tight.

You can’t behave like that with my grand daughter” the old woman pointed her finger at him.

“I’m sorry daadi ji. But it’d be nice if you don’t come in between us” he said in a low voice.

“One of the reasons I rejected you for is this” she snapped.

“One of the reasons?” he looked confused.

“Yes. Now please leave” she said.

”You can’t do this to me. This cannot happen” he said dejected as he let go of her.

He walked backwards looking at her stumbling here and there. The old lady sighed shaking her head at the happenings. She shouldn’t have listened to Niti. She shouldn’t have bought Riya with her.

“Why did you do that?” the old woman turned Niti to her.

“Why did you leave dada sa?” Niti asked back.

“That was not the answer to my question laado” she sighed.

“Same here daadi sa” Niti sighed.

“You know the reason” she shook her head “Riya has fallen asleep. It only with you she sleeps so soon. Else it’s a milestone” the old lady chuckled.

“My baby she is” Niti kissed her head.

“Niti he loves you. Even you do. Why hold back laado?” she asked.

Niti sighed “look laado tell him everything. There’s no point hiding. Everything will be known soon. He’ll surely be by your side and I can bet on it, a queen’s never wrong with her instincts.. that too a Rajput queen. He loves you too much to let go. Tell him laado” she cupped her cheek.

“He won’t daadi. I have a daughter without marriage. A daughter who has no surname. This is the best way for him to move on. I will use this for my benefit” Niti looked down.

“NO ONE will be. Four lives are being spoilt. Yours, Ankush, Anitha and Karthik. Don’t laado. And Riya is not your daughter” she sighed.

“She is daadi. She is mine and will always be. What if I have not given birth to her, I’m giving her all the love and care I can as much as possible. The only thing, I can’t stay by her side” Niti sighed “she was not an unwanted child. Her fate was unfortunate. Riya died in a car accident and Rajveer died as he had drowned himself into alcohol after her death. Bonnie is not in a state to take care of herself. No one other than me and Bonnie know about them. They had eloped and married. None of them would take her in. This baby was just five days old when all of this happened. Mom and dad both having an unfortunate death. Why can’t I give her the love she deserves daadi? Why can’t I?” she cried as she held Riya possessively in her arms.

“Laado I understand. But you have a life too” daadi said.

“Why did you leave dada sa daadi? Please” she pleaded.

“I knew you’d be all alone after Komal’s death and your dada sa will never take you in. But I’m not so heartless. So, I had to decide. I chose to be by my grand daughter’s side who needed me the most. Do you know how much it pained me? How much this poor old soul pained to see her youngest grand daughter in pain? Not smiling. Zoning herself out” daadi cried as her forehead creased and her wrinkled face showed a lot of pain and guilt “you had to take care of this little marathon too. How could you alone? So, I came” she smiled through tears.

“I love you so much daadi” Niti hugged her tight.

“Love you too my laado. You’re the younger version of Raghuveer, though you’re not his blood. I’m so proud of you” she smiled as she patted her cheek “Now I’ll leave. Before she wakes up” she said as she took Riya in her arms and walked away.

Bird Song employees were given a two day holiday for taking part in the preparations of Sam’s baby shower. Sam was excited. She kept looking at herself in the mirror rubbing her tummy. It felt like it was just yesterday that Niti had confirmed her pregnancy and her belly just grew.

Khanna Mansion was filled with happiness and joy. Decorative lights glowed outside the mansion. People known from everywhere had come. Family, friends, business partners.. Everyone.

The thought that made the Khannas even more happy was that Manya was coming. She was coming back after two years. After she had confessed her obsession for Neil. She didn’t look back after that. She was purely drowned in guilt. She had cut off everything with them. She had given them enough. She just ignored Sam. Didn’t even think of looking back at Neil.

Now she was coming!!

The mother to be was the centre of attraction. Sam was in a red off shoulder full sleeved fitted maternity gown with a white sash that proudly displayed the words in magenta colour in bold italics “MOM TO BE” with a floral headgear that had red roses. Neil was in his black three piece suit. Arjun and Radhika entered. Everyone noticed Radhika as she had the Award recently. Radhika was in a white off shoulder long gown and Arjun in his casuals. Karthik as usual walked in alone in his casuals. Ankush arrived with Anitha. Niti was in a maroon off shoulder Velour Bardot Dress which came above her knees and had a little low neckline. Ankush frowned as he saw her in a low dress. Radhika went off to Sam and greeted her with a hug.

“Congrats Chashni!!” Neil came and pecked her forehead.

“Thank you!!” she smiled.

“Where’s my best friend?” he asked.

“Talking to someone” she rolled her eyes.

“Okay I’ll go” he smiled as he patted her cheek and left.

“Where is Manya?” asked an impatient piyali.

“She’ll come Piyu” Samrat said in a calm tone.

“Hey mom. Hey dad!” they heard a voice behind them.

Piyali turned around in an instant and hugged her tight. Samrat ruffled her hair as he smiled and she too looked at her dad and smiled.

“It’s good to have you back” Piyali smiled.

“I’ll be leaving tomorrow afternoon. Have a conference in Pune” she said.

“Stay baby” Piyali requested.

“I’m sorry mom” she said as she found Sam on a round cushioned bed and walked to her.

“Hey big sister” she greeted as stood in front of her.

“Maany!!” Sam squealed as she hugged her tight.

“Big tummy huh? What’s my champ doing in there?” she patted her sister’s tummy to which she got a kick in response. She smiled “Dude I’m telling you, make use of her tummy. Kick as much as you can. Cause you can’t when you come out” she said as she bent to Sam’s tummy and spoke.

“Are you spoiling my son?” Sam twisted her ear “he’s already kicking a lot” she pouted.

“How do you know you’re carrying a boy?” Manya asked confused.

“I just have this strong feeling” she replied.

“Whatever. I’m the only maasi. So, obviously a spoilt brat baby will be” Manya grinned.

“Me the only bua. So, extra pampering. What say Manya? Bua-maasi teaming up?” Niti put her arm over Manya’s shoulder.

“Tika!!” she hugged her.

“Hello to you too” Niti smiled as she rubbed he back.

“Congrats to you too Radhika. Mom told me” she hugged Radhika.

“Hello sister in law” Neil smiled.

“Hey jiju. I’ll be back” she smiled and ran off.

That’s how she escaped.

Sam was pampered the most as all the women in the hall showered their blessings and love for her and her unborn child. Neil was teased by all the others.

Arjun was standing talking to one of his partner. He kept an eye on Radhika as much as he can. She was at the desert section gulping cakes. He smiled shaking his head.

“Hey beautiful” came a voice.

Radhika turned around “do I know you?” she asked.

“You may not know me. But the world knows you. Who will not know the Radhika Mehra?” he smirked.

“Okay” she said.

“Congrats” he held his hand out.

“Thank you” she said in a low voice as she tried to walk away after shaking hands.

But he wasn’t ready to let go. He tugged her hand and kept walking closer. Arjun who turned around, saw this and his blood boiled. Radhika did seem uncomfortable with the stranger. He saw him passing lewd comments at her too. He threaded towards the guy and punched him hard who went falling crashing a table. He pulled him up again and started punching him.

“Arjun let go” Neil pulled him.

“He misbehaved with Radhika” he sneered.

“I’ll take care you move” he said as he took him away.

“You okay?” he cupped her cheek.

“I am” she smiled.

He let go of her and walked fast. Radhika tried matching his steps but no use. He hit the bar, sitting next to Ankush and Karthik. He went on gulping and the two best friends kept staring at him. Niti too came by. She wanted to stop him, but the other three motioned in a negative. He had had five pegs.

“Bhai that’s enough” Niti snatched.

“Dare you to stop me” he sneered as he took the glass from her.

Niti just took steps back. Ankush had his fists balled. Arjun had had a lot.

“Arjun that’s enough. Please” Radhika pleaded.

“Two more pegs Raaaddhhhiiikkkaaaa” he dragged as he smiled sheepishly pulling her cheeks “pppprrrroooommmiiissssseeee” he poked her nose.

As promised he took two pegs and took the third one. Before he could Niti snatched and hid it. Arjun started to stumble. Radhika supported him a little, but he gained grip and started to walk casually. Radhika looked with her mouth wide open. Ankush nad Karthik shook their heads. Niti poured half of the peg in Ankush and Karthik’s glasses. She didn’t want to be a victim to Ankush’s words. She knew he was already angry for the dress she was wearing.

“Radhu what is he made of?” Karthik gulped.

She gave them a glare and walked off. Neil had arranged for a chauffeur. He knew Arjun was drunk. Radhika was intelligent enough to have dinner. She was glad she did. Arjun stumbled inside the house and made his way inside their room.

“Raaadddhhhiiiikkkkaaaa” he smiled.

“Are you okay?” he asked in a concerned voice as he checked her.

“I’m fine Arjun” she smiled.

“Why did he talk to you?” he asked.

“He wished me for winning” she replied.

“Why do all men eye my wife?” he pouted.

“Because I’m your wife” she smiled.

“Niti didn’t drink right? I remember her snatching my drink” he said annoyed.

“No she didn’t. She poured it into Ankush and karthik bhai’s glasses” she chuckled.

“Good” he smiled.

“Why can’t he see that you’re pregnant?” he pouted again.

“Silly. I just got pregnant. It takes months” she smiled.

“Why can’t the tummy grow big the moment you’re declared pregnant? Why can’t the baby be born the moment you’re pregnant?” he asked like a kid to which Radhika looked puzzled.

“That’s how it is Arjun” she said in the split of a second.

“Let’s change it” he said.

“Life cycle” she said gripping her head.

“Cycle. Oh, like round round?” he asked looking up the ceiling.

“Yes” she snapped.

“Let’s make it square” he said as he snapped his fingers.

“Are you crazy? Go to sleep!!” she screamed.

“Yes I’m crazy. Only for you. Love you” he pecked her forehead and lied down like a good kid listening to his wife, closing his eyes.

“Love you too. Good night” she smiled shaking her her head.

“AAh I forgot. Is it morning or night?” he asked as he opened his eyes again.

“You idiot, it’s night” she screamed.

“Ssshhh.. Don’t scream. Not good for my princess. She’ll be thinking why mamma turned kaali and is scolding papa. Idiot is Neil, not me” he said like an innocent kid.

“Will you sleep or not?” she asked gritting her teeth.

“Good night wifey” he smiled giving her a fly kiss and buried his face in the pillow.

Radhika smiled and got changed into comfortable clothes and got on the on the other side of the bed. She smiled rubbing her tummy and drifted to a peaceful slumber.

That’s it! No more.. I have thought a lot and typed like running for a marathon.. Bye now.. Do let me know of your views.. Tata babaye.. Love you all loads.. Tc.. keep smiling.. Bear hugs to all of you

140 comments

  1. Karteek

    Oyee Dumboshree!! I will kill you for this.. You update only when we have exams.. To torture us.. What did we do to you? Inno treat kotila.. don’t think I forgot.. I did call you.. you come to college.. I’ll take care

    Why do you have to trouble guys with my name? Poor Ankush.. That female Niti filled with attitude like you.. But I love the way you write and carry your story..

    Take care dumbo.. miss you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      wth.. I don’t.. you came here at the wrong time.. you did nothing to me.. yenu? I called u said u went for trip.. I need to be free too.. aiyo leave.. ill see what youll do when I come back to college

      Your name? Fel happy tht I didn’t rope you in.. attitude and me? God!! thanks for liking it!!

      You too take care and do well in exams

  2. Naveena

    Babyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!! I miss you too!! Chaa the vada.. coffee.. i feel so sick to go alone that too without you.. come back da.. so lonely without you.. Pushpa bunks a lot.. You better take care ans rest.. stop tying.. Big hi5 to Dev and Abhi anna for keeping gadgets away.. I know you well enough.. stupid girl
    Haha library wifi.. was supposed to be secret.. that song.. Nandu naa.. that fellow.. he stopped singing.. says he loved annoying you with it.. since you’re not there he’s saved it.. waiting for you to come back
    I LOVED THE UPDATE!! So much!! Niti chhoooo cute!! Sam and Radhika hehe.. Why trouble Ankush and Karthik ya? Arjun lol.. he was blinking… ice cream? Who were you angry on? so many flavors.. you made her mamma also.. Ankush I’m telling you kidnap her.. take her away..
    Now have some mercy on me.. exams.. typos I let go bye.. miss you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Baby!! I’ll be back.. Sorry re.. Pushpas toh well take her class.. aye.. not you.. don’t scold..

      lol wifi.. yes secret.. that fellow toh.. god.. leave it

      thank you so much for loving it!! hehe.. lol I was angry.. on my sister in laws.. I did.. Ankush lol.. look so many suggestions.. take them..

      ok I’ll let you study.. tata.. miss you too.. love you

  3. Jessie

    Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Triple update!! Are you for real?? I mean girl..you did a writing marathon…hahahha…..
    I was like will I be able to finish it today…ok now…..!! enough…and about the first line..I tell you…Fever loves you… 😉

    Anki boy..poor soul…punching tables…Niti comes with new ideas…Queen dadi..oh my..still Niti is pidivadhakari…Karthick… man..open you mouth..say anything other than your bla..bla..bla….Pity the Anitha…and what she chooses all super ones.. Pregnancy check..I did love it…Arjun…enada de nee ivalo makka iruka..unakaga than Bru Ad ellam Radz pota,,,enatha Ad company vela pathu kizhikura…..Uff…Finally…eureka moment..he realized…I loved it…

    Niti backed off for samudra..oh..adhan avaalloooooooo vegama pona chappy le type panala…I thought she types fan fictions..Eeeeeeee,…..Hot choc..enaku…..lol..demands….Sign out…aama evalo mukiyam…ippo puriyudhu da samy…heheheh…, Manya back..nice…I liked mom to be shash..hehe…baby kick..baby you get a friend baby..how cute dialogue… Soldier..oh really Arjun..! and..and…vandutanda…yaaravadhu vandhu radz ta vambu iluthu ivana kapaduethreanga my lord.. paavam boy..7 shots a..ok ok..brand sollale..Rofl…Loved this cute drunk Arjun….square…ohhh…heheh….princess will think radz to be kali..hahahh….Arjun chewwetooo….

    Loved it Shreee…..love you loads…eAt lotssa icecream..good for fever and doctor…TC….

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Jess lol.. marathon I did.. you did finish it.. lol.. ok fever loves me..

      Yes pidivadakari. Karthik aah naa enna panna? blah blah blah.. lol.. Arjun lol.. nalla titu vangitaana unta.. haha.. aama bru ad poyum oraikala.. sariyana maku payan.. aama kadaisiya eureka moment.. realize pannitaaru..

      Niti aama.. lol ffs aah? avaluku avalo time illa.. unnkaum aah? veetuku vaa.. potu taren.. aama la.. sign out pannanum.. me too ned to sign out from now on.. manya cameo.. do ippo odi poyiduva.. hehe thank you.. soldier I don’t tevai.. lol.. evanume tirumbi pakamatan.. all will be like akka akka.. shots achu.. brand confuse achu.. kela paaru.. anna anni ellam discuss panidupaanga… hehe.. kaali maa.. Arjun was cutest today..

      Nandri ponne nandri.. haha I’m eating a lot.. inda situation ku kandipa venum.. love you too di

  4. Vin

    Danny!! I’m gonna kill you if I find you roaming anywhere out in sahakarnagar.. You refused dinner with me went out of city? Not fair.. Girl I’m coming home in the evening and pulling you along.. I came here after Karteek told me..

    What are you typing? Don’t you have mercy? We have exams.. Your female characters are loaded with attitude just like you.. rejecting poor souls like us.. Ankush throw her over your shoulder and run.. Karthik lol.. Karteek it’s Karthik man… not you.. naan karkond gtini nina.. ee hudugi treat kodang illa..

    good that your brothers snatched gadgets.. Serves you right.. Buurrnn in bed.. take care.. And don’t forget.. I’m coming home.. Be ready

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Vin!! Shut up.. just shut up.. Who asked you to read without preparing for workshop? Attoitude aah? poor souls like you? First of all you never approached.. so no way of rejecting.. shut up you dumbo.. all give same suggestions to him.. kidnap.. put in sack.. uufff.. lol eli inda el bandbita.. eli karkond hogtiya neenu? naan kodtay ilva? you guys were not there.. I treated all..

      you’re the devil.. aaahhh.. go away.. burn in bed.. I’ll rip yours.. i’ll se you squeeze in with Vinod

      take care

  5. Pushpa

    Dude what is this? Exam time… But still you do it.. Dhanshree too bad ya.. And you know we will read it.. I don’t bunk so much.. But we do miss you.. A lot.. Chethana is going to kill you for that
    Update was mindblowing!! Niti toh on a mission.. Sad of Ankush and Karthik.. Did you buy the whole store? I know you love ethnic wear.. You are… Arjun mad cap.. can’t he understand? Ooh punch.. Lol no one should mess with him and his wife.. That too she is pregnant now.. Doll and then soldier.. aww.. Sam cute re.. New friend for baby.. Cute… Drunk Arjun was cute.. Niti is mamma? Oh god.. Stop ya.. Ankush put her in a sack and take her with you.. Problem solved
    now let us study.. Update after jan.. bye.. Love you.. And take care.. Don’t use phone and laptops.. Go rest.. We want you healthy

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      I know how much you bunk.. so chupp.. Chethna has already killed me with it..

      Thank you so much!! I didn’t buy.. Anitha did.. Lol I do love ethnics.. Me what? Lol shock me ho jata hai.. lol yeah no one should.. hehe.. they are cute.. sack aah? Yen aaytu ninge?

      Yes I’ll update after exams.. chill.. ok no gadgets.. all the best.. love you too

  6. Chethana

    Ley yenne idhu? Bere kelsa ilva nimge? You people have troubled me enough in class and making fun of me here also? Saysbidutini.. Ninge fever bartay irute.. Yen madtiyo gotila.. odhak bide swalpa.. Uch hudugi..

    Update was too good.. I love your writing.. Niti is maa? God poor Ankush!! Atara maad bedve.. Papa avanu.. Karthik open your mouth.. Arjun shock adda.. Muka nod bekitu.. hehe..

    Aayitu.. Aamele update maadu.. Wifi password kotbidu.. tata.. miss you lots

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Yene beku? baytay irutya.. I regret pulling the cockroach from your shoulder.. should have let it roam around.. fever na bitbidu.. odak bidtidini.. neene odtai illa.. naan illa neene uchi

      thank you so much!! naan yenu maadilve.. yaake ishtond tension? Karthik will take his time.. bidu neenu.. howd alwa.. muka nodbek itu.. chaa miss ayitu..

      Wifi password text madtini.. aaytu kanne.. exam aadmele update madtini.. chanagi odu.. all the best.. love you

  7. manha

    deeeeepu atleast have mercy on your friends baby. why are you torturing them at the time of exams and that too with update marathon…. haha.. you are like AIB…. sharing all your secrets in public.. girl… you should take up AIB now…. poor friends… after brothers it is their time….. and who will say no to that offer…. you can barge in my room… lol… what are friends for baby…. all the best.. i think you are already booked for todays dinner….

    update… plzz dont talk about it now… how you are typing updates after updates only you know… here i’m not even updating after one month.,.. and what??? Arjun ki itni sharp memory… ufff.. he remembers secret door. great yaar. lol… niti toh she is uper smart.. i think she should have been an alien.. by mistake became human… and torturing poor ankush… chocolate kaa pyaar…. ufff nahi dekh sakte…. radz pouting for choc and niti fighting… oh my… but i have to remember they are your creation..so this is normal… lol… seee you are hell bent ot make arjun chocolate factory… we will have to find a gud name for him now…

    arjun papa ban gaya… god.. itna dumbo kab se hogaya., i think you make him work so hard and after soo much running and getting slaps naa. his screw got some loose… bru ad superbb use…. radzzz used her mind smartly.. has to agreee award winning writer naa. toh itni smart toh honi chahiye… arjun ab gyaan bhi dene lage.. OMG!!!!! i think he can write a book on love now.. and not to forget his partner in crime, our dimple prince neil.. lol.. dono milke years best book likhenge… loved them…

    ankush… dont have words for you bro… cant help it.. why did you choose niti to falll in love.. its a dialogue… when there are so many girls out in this world why did i have to love that girl… your situation is same.. she has secrets and secrets and you even after being lawyer cant compete with her smartness… ankush dialogues superb… lol.. barging in neil’s room and asking ‘what does your sis think of me??’ lol.. really do you want to know the answer dude… neil making him calm.. poor neil has to suffer now too. like wife and friend was not enough now sister is also eating his little brain and the remaining his future bro-in-law… and the bomb dropped.. to make his already messed up brain to think some more.. niti and a daughter… ahh poor boyy..

    karthik… ahh not to start with this idiot… he is like walking in steps of neil.. not saying anything.. loving.. keeping everything hidden inside your heart.. like the girl should have seventh or eighth sense and she should know hat you are thinking and feeling about her. why are we coming across only these dumbos… okayyy… but i loved the shopping… soo cute… dresses toh..loved them… manya ki entry.. i’m worried for her now.. dont know hwat is deepu thinking of the poor girl.. deeepu plzzzz dont start a story on her. let the poor girl live…

    daadi sa ki entry superb.. riya baby soo cute… i know this is defintely taken from my vidhu baby.. vidhu love you sooo much doll. sleeping only when her aunt is near.. eating.. playingg…..

    arjun drinking was okayyy but eating radz head.. poor girll has to bear another child… lol… and sam’s dialogue you will have new friend now… sorry sammy but that is not friend… she would be his wife naaa. toh congratulations… you already got a bahu…. and competition on icecream taste…. deeepu one question.. why is strawberry not included.????? huh??? lol….. superb update… ufff. finally comment is ending.. i think i wrote gud now… hmmm lets seee when i can give my next comment… byeee deeepu. take care…. and stop torturing amma, appa, and bros… poor souls already has to bear you and now you spcl antics… if you are given gadget then you will forget the outer world.. who will take care of company baby.. so stop worrying abt phone…. and think like niti… haha… keep smiling.. eat healthy…. loveeeee youuuuu lots and lotssssss

  8. arti viswanathan

    Shree darling mind-blowing and outstanding episode…. I liked radhika gave arjun a coffee mug for two… He saw the pregnancy kit again and again and then realising that his wife is pregnant very lucky yaar… And sam’s baby showering and omg niti is also pregnant but who is the baby’s father is it ankush or someone else…..tc loadz of love and teddy hug to u dear….

  9. Brin

    Brin

    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode, finally Radhika is pregnant, will Niti confess her feeling to Ankush or will she let him get married, eagerly waiting for the next update. Shree you nail it, well done. 🙂

  10. Gauri

    Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Thanks for the triple surprise…one suggestion for Ankush Kidnap your girl… or I will Kidnap both of them and get them married … 🙂 loved it Shree 🙂 love u

  11. a-m-i-t-

    DHANASHREE!! Why? Why ya why? Wifi password you know? give now.. You keep falling sick.. Only God can save you.. Heard dinner was great with Vinay.. is it?

    This triple update.. You have this craze of breaking guys hearts.. so mean you are.. Ankush I’ll kill you bro if you don’t throw that girl over your shoulder and run in lightning speed.. You make even shady men go dumb.. all dancing to your tunes.. spare them n us too

    Let us study.. If I hear that you were near Sanjaynagar from Arch I’ll be the worst to face

    Take care

  12. SWatz

    Dhanashree!! Missing you so much.. miss the way they used to call us lambu chotu.. Come back ya.. Vinay ke saat dinner.. hhmmm.. His wait finally ended.. How was it? Lol
    Stop troubling Ankush.. avnge swalpa breathing time kode kannamma.. bide avana.. Kill Karthik.. Dumb chick he be.. Radhika pregnant!! Sam was so cute!! Arjun lol.. I can imagine his blinking state now too.. his drunk state lol.. square.. let’s change cycle.. loliyo.. mamma has turned kaali.. scolding papa.. poor papa.. haha.. Arjun you’re too cute.. Why is Neil being troubled? Papa..
    Now have some mercy on us.. we need to study.. Lol Chethana.. Ee hudugi naaa yen madana? Uch hudugi ne ivlu. bitbidu.. yenu madak agala..
    Bye.. Miss you.. Text me if free

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      My cuteo!! miss you too.. lambu-chotu haha.. lol shut up re.. kodtini kannamma.. swalpa jaasti ne kodbeku… thanks for liking it.. uch hudugi aah? yaake? yen madbeku nan jote? yenu maadbedi.. kootkond odi..

      take cate.. study well.. love you.. yeah ill text.. don’t worry

    • Chethana

      Amma.. Thaks eh Swathi.. ivalna yenu madak agala… ee hudugi odak bidala.. ivaga ee comments.. uch hudugi ge eshtod comments nodu.. barli college ge ivlu.. nodkoltini.. jirle haktini.. dabba hudugi

      Naan hogtini.

      • Shree

        Shree

        |Author

        yene nindu? hog odu.. nee ili bandre.. baydbidbitini.. jirle haktaale ante.. jirle mude hogu first.. aamele matadana.. hoge hogu.. tale tinbeda

  13. Tintin

    Dhanu baby!! Look at you.. You have time to type, but no time for us.. just because you stay at home, don’t think we forgot you.. Aaahh.. Take care you.. We need you healthy.. I’m saying the lines you used to tell me once in third and fourth semester.. came here after I saw a frustrated Vinay and Karthik.. lol you guys.. Treat kodtale.. chinte madbedi.. You mechies are hoggers.. maaaaannnn.. Allahabad?! Did you have samosas? They’re too good
    Triple update.. lol Naavee.. you do miss her a lot.. Nandu singing hat sitting right next to me.. uufff.. A pain he was.. happy to see him not singing now.. It was a beautiful update Dhanu.. I can see our whole gang commenting here.. Gosh!! You did stir them up lol.. Ankush kidnap Niti.. I’m telling you.. Best suggestion bro.. Lol Karthik looks like Chiri.. Struggling.. lol.. Arjun blinking.. Radhika rocked it.. Sam is really very sweet..
    Come back next sem.. bye.. Now I’m going to study.. Miss you

  14. Sandy

    Dhana!! Kill you for this.. Pity me.. Triple update and all.. See how angry all are. You know we all read but never comment.. you pulled us all.. Lol so much scolding.. I’m feeling happy. Serves you right for ditching us.. Aaahh Amit finished commenting before me.. Swatz too.. I’m pissed now.. Chalo it’s ok.. Lol I just peeped into Swatz and Amit’s comments asking you about dinner with Vin.. So I’m keeping quiet.. now Utthi has picked his phone.. Donno if Nance will comment..
    I love the way you write and carry your story.. Keep it up girl.. Ankush nee Niti oda odala naa naane vande una konuduven… stupid you are.. illa mega stupid.. Karthik ino oru mega crack.. Arjun and Radhika proud parents to be!! Most awaited sequence.. Sam is too cute.. Baby a new friend for you.. aww.. Drunk Arjun lol.. square. kaali maa.. lolilol
    Odamba paatuko ma.. Naa aparama varen.. tata.. love you

  15. Utthi

    Dhanya powder I’m going to kill you.. let us study for once and get good marks.. All here are on a typing spree.. Sandy too.. Not all are nerds like you. Sandy Swatz n Amit are mega nerds.. so let them go..
    So much we already have to read and you one more.. Ankush is one of the stupidest person.. being a lawyer.. dude don’t you have brains.. just kidnap her.. so much trouble she is giving you.. Dhanya powder and Niti are no different.. Arjun and Radhika.. aaaahh I just heard Sandy squealing.. You are one unique thing like I always say.. Seems like all Karthik are same..
    Please I beg you.. update after our exams.. bye.. I miss tickling you

    • SWatz

      Dhanya powder! Lol Utthi.. let her live ya.. Tickle chaa.. I too miss her jumping and squealing.. no nerd and all.. you got the easiest in lab.. we struggled

    • Sandy

      you still didn’t stop calling her that? Lol.. And was that squeal too loud? I was happy.. I got the hardest in lab and you were grinning.. poor Tintin.. he almost cried.. So shut up

    • Tintin

      Uttham.. you did get easiest.. though you studied like a pro went on throwing knowledge of computers.. now who is nerd?

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      I hate you.. I hate you.. I hate you.. I hate you.. I hate you so freaking much!! Stop calling me that.. tickling me.. wth.. me no nerd.. shut up.. yes they are.. n u r too.. who asked u to come her without studying?

      Ankush let go.. wth.. we be no different? we are you dumb head.. she wanted this sequence.. she will be happy.. hehe.. thank you so much!! lol all Karthiks same..

      I’ll update after exams.. take care.. I’ll never let you tickle me

  16. Nanda

    Ayee.. Hello you want I can sing those lines now too.. Just pick up your phone.. Naveena I’ll kill you.. you know the wifi password.. We have exams.. sitting in a circle our phones are having your update in front of us.. Let us read.. Uttham is punching his keypad hard.. damn girl..
    Sandy squealing was epic.. I think it was because of the new parents to be in line.. Kill Ankush and karthik… No one can be as dumb as them
    Bye… Take care

    • Sandy

      Nance.. NOOOOO… Please don’t sing.. I have a life.. Yep Utthi was punching his keypad.. Squealing was epic?! You chashmish.. shut up

    • Chethana

      I was searching for your comment and I got it.. haha.. you told you wont comment.. but ended up commenting.. hahahaha

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      No no no.. we all have a life and want to live happily.. so please don’t sing.. lol.. all of you.. Utthi lol..

      Epic.. that girl is going to kill you.. thanks..

      you too take care

  17. neetz

    seriously speakin not liking niti any.more..what does she think she is… apart from.niti and her show off loved the update to the core 🙂

  18. Sathya

    Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Dhanu 🙂 triple update…girl wht yr fingers made up offf….again u r torturing all ur friends haan? ha ha ha i just loved it everything..everything and specially ankush reaction on niti 🙂 😛

    but the show stealer is Arjun yar….lol he is giving masth reactions after having 7 pegs…and asking why he did not see as pregnant…why the tummy did not grow big immediately and change the life cycle to square…sathiyamma unnala matum than ipdi yosikka mudiyum ma…hilarious it was..i just loved it thouruoghly …i am wating for JOC? epo varum epo varum epo varum ….love u 🙂

  19. Meen

    Meen

    |Registered Member

    Wow shree……triple update girl…..simply wow…..thanks for this amazing blast ……amazing……loved every bit of it…..ankush….come on get ur girl dude…& Arjun well he really was a show stealer today…..I loved his dialogues……lovely
    Again a big thanks & hats off to u for this amazing triple blast

  20. Sooryan

    Teddyyyyy! Wow!! Just wow!! Your fingers are magical.. Loved it… everything was beautiful.. came here after Moon told me.. Now I’m going to study..

    Take care

  21. Mohana

    D!! Wow!! Loved It to the core!! Lol the comments are more entertaining.. hehe.. Take care re.. Soo keeps worrying about you.. Arjun bane papa.. ab aur entertainment.. I’m keeping popcorn ready.. Tell me whens next.. Text me soon

    Love you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Moon!! Thanks a lot babe!! your Soo is supposed to worry about you and not me.. I’ll take care.. lol entertainment.. popcorn lolol

      ill text you.. love you too

  22. Guji

    Lol Dhanshree!! What have you done to everyone here? All so angry.. but it’s entertaining.. Akash is rolling reading comments sitting next to me..

    Loved the update.. Take care.. Miss you.. yep don’t forget to treat Amit.. he is angry.. he may ask more than 10 burgers..

    Love you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Guji lol.. I didn’t do a thing.. Akash always be rolling..

      Thanks ya.. I’m not treating anyone.. miss you too.. love you too

  23. Akash James

    ShreeDee! Oh God! Lol.. This is one master blaster update.. LOL the comments toh.. bwahahaha.. lovin em.. I’ll beatbox for ya.. Take care Dee..

    This was awesome.. love the way you write.. you gotta be head of the literature club..

    Now let me study.. the comments be epic.. bye.. stay happy

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      James!! lol thanks.. beatbox for me? thanks

      thanks a lot dude.. no.. me not that good..

      ok study.. bye.. take care.. you too stay happy

  24. Sheetal

    Shree maaa!! Miss you loads.. Raaghhaaa is super annoyed.. Love the update.. lol the comments.. I’ll join now .. you be spammed.. bburrrnnnn.. Arjun be so cute.. All were cute..

    Now I’m running to study.. come back my bestie.. love you .. mmuaaahh.. teddy hugs to you.. tight ones..

  25. Omkar

    Wohohoho!! Dhanshree!! Gunjan just sent me this and behold.. Hahahaha.. this is entertaining.. these comments.. you did boil up everyone.. I haven’t read this story but will catch up soon..

    You girl are so awesome!! I really mean it.. I do agree with Akash, you need to be our college literature club head.. Haha Ankush go get your woman man.. don’t be like me.. with the wrong woman.. Karthik be the joker.. The proud parents to be.. wow.. it was cute to see these

    I apologise for the misunderstanding.. take care girl.. you go too sick

    Take care.. miss you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Ok.. Thanks..

      Thanks.. No thanks I’d be better off without it.. Ankush can do it.. wrong? thanks again..

      Can you make things public? It’d be good.. One year.. let’s not talk about it

      take care

  26. Sheetal Shinde

    Dash!! Look at you.. full on being trolled.. hehe… baby I loved it to the core

    I won’t trouble you like them.. Take care. Love you

  27. PRI

    Dee!! look at you.. God crazy you and your friends.. Lol

    This triple blast was amazing.. I hope jiju too comments.. he’ll be rolling reading this

    Love you for this.. take care

  28. Jatin

    Bacchaaa!! Kya hai ye? Lol Priya.. So right I was rolling reading it.. It’s only her who can come with such cute ways of writing.. Bacchu why make all unmarried guys in your story suffer? Le them live.. Let your friends live too

    Any problem tell big brother.. I will take care of them.. Take care of yourself.. Love you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Bhai! update hai.. aur kya.. hehe.. aww.. thank you so much bhai! nahi bhai.. sab teek ho jaayega

      I know you’re always there.. you too take care.. love you too bhai

  29. Architha

    D!!! Wow!! Insane update!! All throwing punches at you!! LOL.. I’ll take care of Amit.. You come to Sanjaynagar..

    Take care.. love you

  30. Gummiebear

    Gummiebear

    |Registered Member

    Helloooooooo mamma….apologies for late comment….typed like running a marathon….lol…who told u to stress urself stupid mommy?!….oh I think I was the one among who were pestering u for the update…So we all r bunch of idiots to trouble a sick person who z obsessed to fever.

    Coming to the update….it was Longgggggggg….ur brain was working like freight train I guess….it was too good….loved it and very happy for ardhika….well I was the one who kept eating ur brains for this special moment of ardhika…Right mommy?!

    Feeling sad for ankush….itna dard kyun unko?!…I know you’ll do something for him….waiting for manhu di ka entry….

    Now I know when you’ll update so I won’t ask u the question…

    Love u…muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah…tc

  31. Abhi

    Diya!! Do we look jobless to you? we saw you typing and we know what it was.. but making us comment is not fair.. lol the comments be the show stealer!! And we are taking part to make it more highlighted.. lol we did do a good thing snatching gadgets.. but we did waste a lot on buying you a lot of pastries and chocolates.. Aaahhhh..

    Stop troubling us and your friends.. I think it’s only amma who has not commented.. And I know she won’t.. forget appa.. he is too busy.. Riya seems to be more like my daughter.. stop torturing guys.. you’ve given a lot of guys rejections in real life.. atleast let it be happy here.. Arjun lol.. dad and drunk in the same update.. papa Arjun I know from where you picked up.. blinking one.. lol.. that be the most epic moment.. Dev!! Oh God!! He sat still for 20 minutes and Niha stood frozen.. haha.. thanks for recreating the moment Diya!! So many ice cream flavors.. I know you were angry on Anitha and Niha for leaving you behind and you did have an ice cream cake.. without sharing.. ALL BY YOURSELF!! So mean!!

    Everything about the update was amazing!! Now I have no more patience to comment.. Dev is till looking up the ceiling thinking what more to add.. And I finished!! I’m first.. Yes!!

    Bye.. Take care.. Just because we let you stay home doesn’t mean you can go around singing and dancing.. work.. Love you baby sister

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Not you here.. please.. who told u r jobless.. u made yourself jobless.. yeah yeah.. like it was less n dull.. u r taking part.. suffer.. you took them away

      you know they won’t.. right your daughter.. oh so u say I need to accept all.. dare you to come and punch guys who come to me.. haha.. exactly that.. blinking.. we can never forget that.. yes I was angry.. yes I ate.. yes I’m mean..

      thanks for liking it… like I said you have patience.. yey!! get me a chocolate while coming as treat.. lol ceiling.. whats there?

      I will sing .. dance.. my wish.. I will work.. not work.. my wish.. go.. bye.. love you too my lambu

  32. Dev

    Diya!! Wooohhhooooohhhooooo!! Kanne enna da panna? You never do spare anyone is it.. I thought it was only me and Abhi..

    Lol this update!! I knew what you typed as I was sitting right next to you.. You got the ice cream idea after eating that whole ice cream cake.. See this is the first and last time I’ll be commenting.. so let it be fun.. lol you made lawyer and his wife comment too.. not to forget Priya.. lol.. look at the comments.. buurrnn.. you’re being spammed and trolled.. So we’ll help in uplifting a little.. I’ll tell some more people too comment too.. we’ll make it your highest comments post..

    Arjun and Radhika were epic.. not to forget two version of Arjuns you showed here.. one daddy Arjun and drunk Arjun.. daddy one I think what you did.. why ya why? I think I need to stop taking you to parties.. You observe a lot.. the square one lol.. I know where you got it from.. square.. cube.. raised to four and all.. Why are you torturing Ankush and Karthik? Isn’t it enough that you have tortured enough guys in reality that here too you are doing it and we brothers have to keep babysitting you.. stupid baby sister… Anitha even Ankush knows you love Karthik.. why can’t you go or why can’t Karthik do it? He knows to get fake admission and all… but can’t confess love.. Diya let them unite.. why are you torturing them all? Ankush toh one more heartbreak.. Niti is a mom to a kid now.. Why does Riya resemble Vidhi and my daughter? both of them seem to be your daughters more than ours.. they’re your nieces.. you rule them.. This is insane.. ice cream.. anger on peaks huh? Sam was cute.. new friend.. I think it’s her future daughter in law.. and the kid inside be so telepathic that he gave a happy squeal from inside..

    All was perfect.. except for Niti.. go send her to Ankush or I will twist your ears to it.. Aahh Abhi finished before me.. It’s k

    Work.. Don’t dance and sing.. let the neighbours live.. Love you

  33. Niharika

    Anu baby!! Look at you.. Gosh!! Spammed… Jatin commented.. wow.. I can see where this is going on now.. will see if “they” comment.. lol.. fingers crossed..

    Wow!! Triple sixer!! Adra saka.. Idha dhan naan edir paten.. omg that pregnancy thing.. It was recreated beautifully.. love you for this sister in law.. you made Arjun dumb just like your brother.. I can read this forever.. Than you so much lilliput.. Samudra to be nothing.. and I know what you have in mind.. Bridal shower was cute.. Arjun drunk lol.. that bickering.. uuufff.. kaali maa.. yes princes will be scared.. but papa is not poor.. he is equally responsible.. Ankush nd karthik.. stupids.. go get your women.. I’ll request Anu to help you.. don’t worry

    Semma update Anu!! I’m going to ask Dev to bring a copy of this.. Love you nathanaare

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      My anni!! yes bhai did.. they did.. look below..

      lol di.. hehe ok anni.. lol dumb.. he is.. n u know it more than anyone.. Lilliput aah? dog you.. Samudra lol.. papa nee.. haha.. Anu will think if to help them or not..

      Nandri. lol.. ok.. love you too

  34. Anitha

    Anu!! buurrrrrnnn.. look at this place.. wohohoho.. you made my husband jump here too.. thanks to you I use your story as bedtime story for my daughter.. or should I say your daughter?

    Triple magic!! Love your dp.. beautiful eyes!! Niti backed out for this.. you and her both on a typing spree.. hehe.. Want Samudra to be brought to dust and I know you can do it well.. Ankush throwing fits at Neil.. What does you sister think of herself?.. best one.. Papa Arjun.. lol… I could see Dev in this.. epic.. awesome recreation.. I can read that part again and again.. drunk Arjun lol.. that was like Nikhil no? square square.. raised to four and all? Arjun ku Jhonny Walker ooti utiya? semma effect adhu.. lol.. kaali maa.. aana appa innocent illa.. he made her scream… Sam best line.. new friend for you baby.. haha.. ava future la wife aah varuva.. right la Anu? ice cream.. ahh.. sorry for ditching you that day.. hot chocolate? idhu over ya.. nathanaare anniya ivalo torture pannakudadu.. nee nalla nathanaar dhaane?

    Sari I’m going now.. tata.. nathanaare odamba paatuko… love you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Enna di unnaku? yes your husband too here.. shes our daughter.. not yours or mine only..

      nandri anni.. aama maa.. yes we both.. yes I will.. hehe.. Dev lol.. unforgettable.. yes Nikhil only.. that fellow.. teriliye.. edu ooti uten nu.. bartender ta ketu soldren.. aama aama.. appa innocent illa.. lol.. summa irukiya maa.. aama ice ceam.. unnaku kedaya ve kedayadu.. I’m devil nathanaar.. I will torture you..

      bye anni.. love you too. take care of yourself and Vidhi

  35. AS

    DEEEEEPPPPPPUUUUU!! yeh kya kiya tune? Arjun ki izat utar rahi ho? Angry khadoos ko chocolate boy bana di.. Did you clone Neil and give him Arjun Mehra face?

    Lol look at the comments.. Dev too? Niha Abhi and Anitha too? Jatin too.. I forgot.. Wohohoho.. wait… more coming..

    Arjun itne sweet kab se? You made him dad too.. next grandpa with grey hairs and walking stick.. why will a man be so dumb to not realise his being pregnant? Niti toh is insane.. why is she running away when she loves him? Deeeppuu I know you have a lot more coming.. But don’t Ankush so much.. Karthik too.. all men in reality have to struggle with you.. now even fictional characters too.. kyun beta kyun? I think now zombies and vampires were better.. Why did I keep that bet? You did win, but all unmarried manmarziyan males are paying the price of it.. Deeeppuu will this hit a century at the time of epilogue? drunk one.. Anitha lol.. Jhonny Walker nahi she would have given him Glenfiddich.. lol.. Nikhil lol.. I still have that video.. haha… square cube.. raised to four.. pull cheeks.. haha.. everything was amazing… too good..

    Take care bacha.. stop falling ill.. Love you loads

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Bhjai? kuch nahi kya maine.. is it? toh aap boliye.. I’ll follow that way.. nahi.. no cloning.. woh toh illegal hai.. yes all here..

      Arjun turned sweet because I’m here.. yes I’ll do that too.. grandpa with walking stick and toothless.. happy? You know it all bhai.. then why ask? yes a lot more.. ok I won’t trouble them.. my story.. my wish.. oh yeah? thanks a lot.. I’ll start them soon.. yes mistake is yours.. let them pay.. don’t worry… I’ll see to what level this goes. you want epilogue now? I can put it now too..

      Lol brand discussions.. I have no clue.. like I said.. I’ll ask bartender.. hehe.. that was Nikhil Bhai.. have the video.. good good

      Thank you so much!! It does mean a lot..

      Ill take care.. Love you too bhai

      • jiya

        epilogue ke plans????… i’m going to kill you now. chup chap write.. i dont care century hits.. i want entire story… dont think to cut anything in it… and after this update dont even think about stopping or ending abruptly….. arjun bane grandpa lol…. first start sequel where he will be papa. ahh pity the two kids. over protective papa ko jhel na hogaa…and baby let it hit century we will put a grand party then… okayy vaaa. now start writing next update. waiting eagerly… muahhhh. love youuuu…..

        lol…. and pity vampires and devils… they too have love stories…forget about fearing people they will be singing love songs… hahha. waiting for vampire story baby… AS bhai you should have really left her… now seee she forgot horror…. next in line is vampire ka pyaar… then she will write on zombies… seriously i’m waiting for those love stories…

      • Shree

        Shree

        |Author

        lol jiya.. ok no cutting.. will write till end.. sequel lol.. ill be killed the way I portray.. ik overprotective husband se overprotective papa.. sad kids.. lol ill start once this one is done

        lol now devils are being sympathised.. hehe.. sab pyaar me.. ill post them soon too

        love you loads

  36. Shilpa

    Champu!! AS sent me link.. Lo.. Look at this.. so damn entertaining.. comments ko deko.. even your brothers are here.. AS will comment.. SR too.. when the link circulates then it means comments are going to pour in… it happened.. update during exams.. all your friends are on fire.. I have always loved this.. will see when I’ll get the chance to comment again..

    Triple masterpiece!! Muah to you.. Arjun bane chocolate papa.. so cute.. blinking.. Radz be pouting.. Niti I’m not able to understand her.. Let Ankush and Karthik live baby.. torture mat karo.. baby kick.. aww.. babies be telepathic too. cute.. too cute.. your love for kids and understanding them is amazing.. lol drunk Arjun.. did you give him scotch or whiskey? no one should mess with what belongs to Arjun Mehra.. Oh God!! Samudra to be nameless now..

    I won’t torture you.. You seem to have lost your head for now.. lol.. Jiju says mindblowing update..

    Love you Champu.. take care

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Di!! Champu nahi.. ab aap bhi nahi.. haha well see

      hehe chocolate papa.. teek hai di.. will set things right.. hehe I do love kids.. Whiskey di.. hehe forgot do mention.. yes Samudra to be out

      haan di.. thank you so much!! Tell Jiju I told him a big thanks

      Love you too di

  37. SR

    Piyyyuuuuuu! my cutiepie! now I’m telling.. nannu peli chesko.. and I’m serious .. look at this place.. people have taken the lead.. this link will be flying here and there

    Why re why? Why torture guys? That too poor Neil.. he’s so cute and because of his sister he has to suffer.. Ankush and Karthik are so dumb? God!! Arjun too in the dumbo list now? blinking.. Neil’s always better.. now don’t bring him in the list too..

    I won’t say more.. Loved everything.. take care.. stop falling sick.. Love you

    • Jiya

      Lol.. Pelli chesukuntundi.. but i think you have to first save yourself from dev, abhi , AS. Right?? Sure dev will be ready to throw punch at you now.. all the best bro… 😆😆😆😆 neil better aa?? Ye kab se… neil toh list me top place pe hi na…

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      You here? oh god.. not here..

      Neil.. I will torture.. what will you do? they are dumb.. yes Arjun too.. I’ll add Neil soon too…

      thank you..

      take care.. stay happy

  38. Nikhil

    D!! I’m going too kill you for this.. Why did you have to do this? I’ll take care of you later.. did you have to pass that video to everyone? Ab mere biwi bi comment karegi.. Dayum..

    This triple blast was amazing! Every part.. I’m not going to eat you up.. but only that drinking part.. why baby? I toh am big brother no? Delete that video please.. I’ll take you on world tour.. please..

    Take care.. don’t use gadgets.. love you

    • Jiya

      Nikhil bhaiyya… ye kya bribing.. lol.. soooo sweet of youu.. square., cube… hmmm hav to ask creator now… u hav more brains than einstein… Meenal bhabhi ka revenge lagta hi ye… no?? For irritating her… lol..

    • Jiya

      Dhanu babyyy. You made all come here.. TU is flooding now.. all thanks to you.. hahaa. Now i want vidhu baby to comment. Ahhh how i wish she can type… uff. Kk.. but save this and show her how crazy her parents n uncle and aunt are… I know she will eventually know but paper proof jarrori hi na.. lol… and pitying you now.. my poor baby.. like friends were eating less all the gang and bros came here… dont worry you have me.. hahaa. They are taking my place now… only i can eat your brain no?? Loll.. hahaa.. AS.. zombie n vampire… hahaa.. I really thank him for the bet else how would have we got you.. super romance writer.. arjun ko chocolate factory.. baby i know how mych you like chocolate but itnaaa.. arjun ko itna sweet dekhke ladkiyon ka haal behaal ho jaayegaa.. lol.. kk. Byee… this is called royal troll. All the best.. and stay away from diseases.. i know how much you looooooovvveee hospitals… 😂😂😂😆😆😆 hahaa. Icecream aur long drives jo milenge.😉😉😉😉 but plzzz dont get sick.. now waiting for amma’s comment.. appa will be okayy he is scientist.. so we cant expect crazy from him. He is the intelligent here not like us… one more question.. Strawberry kyun nahiii hiii?? Lol.. all r telling to kidnap niti.. lol.. they forgott she knows to fight.. one punch in anger and ankush willl forget past n present both… Hahaaa. Okayyy now i had enough.. from morning like laughing.. cheeks are asking for pity from smiling tooo much.. all r eyeing me like i hav gone mad for laughing out loud..

      • Shree

        Shree

        |Author

        Jiya lol.. too much flooding.. lol why Vidhi now? yeah I will.. I’ll show Diya too lol.. thanks ya.. someone understands me.. yes.. your place.. haha.. sit n thank everyone.. lol it just happened.. Arjun ko I made sweet.. lol.. sorry.. behal lol.. not you too.. royal troll.. I’ll stay fine.. but I do need long drives and ice creams.. amma wont.. appa lol.. strawberry bhool gayi.. next time I’ll remember.. Niti lol.. Ankush papa.. lol.. so much laughing? it’s k.. enjoy.. lol you are mad..

        love you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Kya bhai? I didn’t do a thing.. let her come..

      thank you!! eat me up? were you drunk typing? yes you are big brother.. video mere paas nahi hai.. hoga toh bhi I’m not deleting.. yeh nahi chalega.. this is corruption.

      I’ll take care.. love you too

  39. Meenal

    Debhi!!! Love you for this! lol.. this was one masterpiece!! One heel of a recreation.. lol the whole gang is here.. Anitha.. Dev.. Abhi.. Niha.. AS too.. wohoho.. now this is epic..

    My husband’s drunk act recreated!! This was too good.. Arjun is too cute.. Papa Arjun! So it was Dev? Lol.. Never knew Dev was so dumb.. Niti why trouble them? You and Niti are no different.. Loved Sam and Radz.. Ice cream!! Now my baby is kicking.. I too want.. why didn’t you use strawberry? You should have naa.. All are in linw.. pitch perfect.. Bas.. Ankush aur Niti ko ek hone do.. Karthik and Anitha too..

    Now I’m running to my freezer for ice cream.. take care ya.. Love you loads.. and baby too loves you

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Bhabi! I love you too!! hehe yes.. all here..

      YEs I did it.. yes it was him.. wth.. we are different.. ice cream.. aww.. go have.. don’t leave y baby hungry.. I’ll do soon ya..

      go go .. careful.. don’t run.. love you too.. bua loves you too baby

  40. K

    Anshu!! Look at this place!! Flooding! And the peeps here!! Oh god!! Champu! Di bhi aa gayi.. I’m waiting for Mo now.. I won’t take much time

    Sam is so cute.. ice cream!! me too want.. Radhika lol.. Arjun is so dumb? hahaha.. sad re.. I’m totally loving this!! Niti toh I want to punch her.. Ankush and Karthik!! Oh god!! Everything was cute!! Just like you.

    Love your dp!! Muuaaahh to it.. your so beautiful!!

    Love you lambu

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      K!! Ik ik.. all here.. Mo too gave her piece of cake..

      Thanks!! lol go buy and eat.. Arjun is .. lol.. hehe punch..

      Cute? Like me? Am I cute? OK OK thanks..

      Love you too

  41. Mo

    Reesh! Oh God!! Triple delicacy! Wow!! This place is flooded.. haha.. You’re being trolled and spammed! The peeps here rock! God AS and SR here too.. bag on

    Too cute re!! Radz is mamma now.. papa Arjun happy and got little screw loose.. now I want to see mommy Radhika on toes troubling papa Arjun.. Lot of food craving!! Please re… Niti is one stubborn head.. sad of Ankush bhai.. now she is mom too.. Ankush cornering Neil.. amazing.. Karthik lol.. What does he want? the girl to fall in his arms? drunk Arjun lol.. AS kis video ke bare me baat kar rahe ho? Why no strawberry included in ice cream? SR lol… look at you.. Piiyyuuu!! haha.. calm dude.. Arjun drunk part was amazing.. should have given him more.. why did you stop? he tortured Radz with champagne..

    Lol but I loved everything.. all going smooth.. bye now.. take care.. don’t go around stressing yourself.. rest.. Love you Reesh!!

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Mo!! lol.. ik I’m.. yes AS n SR are here.. delicacy aah? you keep thinking of eating..

      Hehe k re.. I’ll do.. she is stubborn.. Karthik you leave.. strawberry bholl gayi. next time I’ll do it.. not you too.. stop.. I’ll make him drink a whole cellar next time.. ok? hapy?

      thanks a lot girl!! ok I won’t stress up.. love you too

  42. Achu

    Dhanu!! Look at this place…. Yaake kanda? All on fire.. Oh god!! Who proposed you on the internet? Damn.. I’m going to kill that guy.. so much guys he has..

    Loved it Dhanu!! Papa Arjun and mommy Radhika!! So good.. waiting for more.. Ankush and Karthik.. kill them.. chaaaa..

    Bye.. I don’t want to tire you.. tata

    Love you

  43. Raghaa

    Bunny!! This is too much.. I came all the way from Canada to meet you all. And I go back without meeting you.. I hate you for this hun.. look at this place.. Amit on fire.. And a lot others too.. Why is Tintin so decent?

    This is one banging story!! Just unite the love birds it’ll all fall in place..

    Miss you my Honey Bunny.. take care

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Raghaa I’m so sorry!! Bunny says sorry.. Tintin is always decent.. lol

      thank you so much! yeah I’ll do that soon..

      Miss you to.. you too take care

  44. Chiru

    Dhana I’ll kill you!! So much only at the time of exams!! Tinitin I’ll kill you.. what struggle like me? I had no idea why this link was forwarded.. now I understand

    Dhana I have not read this.. But will catch up after exams.. love the way you write..

    Dp change made.. koti tara idya..

    Take care

    • Shree

      Shree

      |Author

      Chiri you too? lol let go of Tinitin.. papa..

      Ok take your time.. Thanks a lot..

      Neene koti.. change madala.. yen madtiya? neenge kobu jasti aagbitide

      You too take care

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