Manmarziyan-A new story (Chapter 5- Finding Nandini-Part 1)

Hi all !! I think I’m updating too quick … What to do? So jobless I am.

Please do bear with my typos and grammatical errors.. Please do.. Please…

So let’s go…. Happy reading☺☺

Her phone beeped again after ten minutes. It was Karthik’s message. She ran out of the campus and got into his car.

She asked “bhai what happened? Why you so tensed?!”

He said “Radhu be honest. Don’t hide anything. Is there anything going on between you and Arjun?”

Radhika looked at him in shock.

She thought “why he is asking this now?”

She said “I don’t understand what you’re talking about.”

He said “stop it Radhu!! Don’t lie. You still don’t know how to lie. That’s your biggest drawback. Now tell me what is.”

Radhika said “what bhai?”

He asked “what’s the problem between you and Arjun?”

She asked “why you asking now?”

He said “that’s not the answer. I’m asking because I saw him sitting alone in the park. Crying.”

She gasped. She asked “what? Crying?! Which park bhai?”

He said “the park which is nearby. Tell me now Radhu.”

She said “bhai, we fought last week. And didn’t talk to each other after that.”

He asked “what was the fight about?”

She said “he’s upset that I’m talking you more. And paying less attention on him. I didn’t ask him to come. It was his choice.”

Karthik laughed out and said “Radhu he’s jealous. Does he think that I like you?”

She said “bhai. It’s not funny.”

He said “I didn’t say it’s funny. But yeah it is. You both are like kids. So much love.”

She said “bhai, I wanna see him. Now.”

He asked “you sure?”

She nodded and said “only a glimpse.”

He then asked “does he know I’m Ankush’s friend?”

She said “no.”

He hit his forehead hard. He was annoyed. She was screwing up her life.

He asked “Radhu what’s running in your head? Why you making things complicated?”

She said “bhai I want him to stay away till I find di. If he comes close, I’ll lose confidence. And most of all, I love him.”

He said “I donno what it is. Come now and tell him everything. I’m sure he’ll support you.”

She said “no bhai. He won’t he’s angry on her. It’s all because of me.”

Karthik couldn’t understand anything now. What was it. He had to know it. Police mind.

He then said “tell me what happened. Everything. Right from scratch.”

Radhika told him everything. Karthik kept listening. Very deeply.

He then said “hmmmm. I never Arjun would do such a thing. And Nandini. Mastermind.”

She said “bhai she does deserve a chance. I saw her repent for her mistake.”

He said “hmmmm. But Radhu, there’s nothing for which you need to blame yourself. You did what was right.”

She said “because of me, they’re not together.”

He said “fine. Now stop. We’ll find her.”

They then drove off. Karthik stopped by the park. Radhika saw Arjun still seated on the park bench. He then got up wiping his tears and left. Radhika felt bad. She too cried.

She said “bhai let’s go to the orphanage. We’ll try again.”

He said “ok” and drove off.

They reached after half an hour. The place was beautiful. With kids playing all around. It was a sight worth seeing. Laughter all around. Everywhere. They went in and saw an old woman at the reception desk.

The woman looked up and smiled at them.
She said “good morning. Are you the couple who called last week regarding adoption?”

Both of them said no in unison.

Radhika asked “bhai have we come to the wrong place? You said you came, then how doesn’t she recognise you?”

He said “there was a different woman when I came here.”

She said “Ma’am we’re looking for Nandini. Nandini Pandey.”

The woman asked “why?”

She said “she’s my sister in law.”

The woman said “but she said she has no family.”

Radhika said “Ma’am there’s no time for that. Please tell me where she is.”

She said “she’s changed her location. She works here no more. But, visits now and then.”

Radhika asked “can you tell me where she is now? Please.”

She said “no. It would be better if you leave. Right now.”

Radhika said “please ma’am.”

Karthik said “it’s k. Let’s leave. We’ll find her.”

As they left, the woman immediately called up someone.
She said “she came here. But, don’t worry I didn’t say anything.”

The person on the other end said “good.” And cut the call.

OK, it was Nandini.

She then thought “why is Radhika here. I knew this would happen. How did she find out? It must be Rana. God, can’t he just keep quiet?”

Radhika asked “what to do bhai?”

He said “phone number.”

“What?!” Radhika exclaimed.

He said “we can trace her number. I’ve already told my men to do it.”

He then got a call.

Karthik asked “what?! How can this happen?! OK fine thanks.”

Radhika saw his tensed face. She didn’t know what it was. Whether it was office or this one.

She asked “what is it bhai? Why so tensed?”

He said “they couldn’t trace her. Her last location was the orphanage. A week back. They said she was in Chicago.”

Radhika exclaimed “Chicago!! Why there?”

He said “no clue. We can do only one thing. Pressurize the orphanage people. Or wait till she comes back. We need to keep a close watch on her house and the orphanage.”

She said “I don’t understand anything bhai. Do something.”

Meanwhile, at office Arjun couldn’t concentrate. He was thinking of Radhika.

One of the staff came by and said “ Mr Mehra, boss wants you in his cabin now.”

He said “OK” and went.

He went inside the cabin. He was shocked to see who it was. It was Nitin. Nitin Sharma, his friend from college. They were very good friends. But, Arjun stopped talking to him, kinda stayed away after Komal’s incident. He was alone after that.

Both the friends had tears in their eyes. They were so happy. They hugged each other.

Nitin said “so this is the Arjun Mehra paa was talking about. It’s so good to see you again.”

Arjun said “yeah. Same here.”

Nitin asked “so you work with Piyali Aunty? You’re a partner in Bird Song? Man you’re so lucky.”

Arjun asked “how do you know Piyali?”

He said “Aunty and paa used to work together in the same ad firm before starting their own firms. Then you must be knowing Sam and Neil too.”

Arjun said “yeah I do. They’re married too.”

Nitin said “I knew this would happen. Sam and Neil were too close.”

Arjun and Nitin laughed out loud. He then asked his PA to get masala tea for both of them. He was so happy to see him happy. This was the first time after Komal’s incident he was laughing.

Arjun asked “you still remember?” Looking at the tea.

Nitin said “how can I forget? It’s your favorite. No ours. It’s so nice to see you this happy. After all that, you’ve moved on. I’m so glad.”

Arjun sat still. Unmoved. The whole incident just ran through his eyes. That horrific incident. He shivered thinking about it. He was sweating. He cried too. The shooting and the voice “why didn’t you save her? Why didn’t you?”

He started crying. He thought of all their moments. Their happy days in London. It didn’t last for long.

Nitin’s voice brought out of his thoughts.

He said “yaar Arjun sorry. I didn’t mean to remind you all that. Sorry dude.”

He said “no no. It’s k. It’s an incident that I can never forget. Which will always stay with me. And I’m so happy that I was able to meet uncle.”

Nitin said “yeah paa. He told me about you and I told him to hire you because of your name. I had hope that it would be you. And it is. I’m so happy. I’m so glad that I can work with you.”

Arjun said “same here.”

They both had tea and discussed about the upcoming project. Both of them were masterminds. They were an unbeatable pair. They were the best in college and even now.

Nitin said “and yeah, paa said there was a girl with you. Who is she?”

Arjun said “my wife. Radhika.”

Nitin was happy. He exclaimed “omg! You got married!! And I’m still bachelor. Shit dude, I couldn’t meet her. But yes, next time will. For sure.”

Arjun laughed and said “yeah sure. It’s been so long since we’ve talked like this.”

Nitin said “yeah. Very long. Eight years.”

Arjun then got up and left to finish his work. He went home early. Radhika too came early. She came in and saw him lying on the sofa in the hall.

She said “why not lie down in the bedroom.”

He saw her and got up.

He asked “came so soon.”

She said “yeah. First day. Nothing much to do.”

He said “fine.”

She wondered “why didn’t he ask me about my day? Is he still angry?”

Just then Arjun’s phone started ringing. It bought her out of her thoughts. He picked it up and went out.

Arjun said “yeah Nitin. Tell.”

Nitin on the other side said “there’s an important meeting tomorrow. Come early.”

Arjun said “OK” and cut the phone.

He went in and saw Radhika lost in some thoughts. She was thinking too deeply. He just let her be and walked off.

The next morning Arjun left early. So, it was Karthik who had to come pick her up.

Radhika asked “bhai where are we going today?”

He said “no clue Radhu.”

She said “you’ll have a lot of work. Why waste time for me?”

He said “no Radhu, it’s not time waste. I’m doing my work along with this also. Don’t worry.”

Just then Karthik’s phone rang. It was Riddhima. Karthik got scared.

Radhika laughed and asked “bhai why you scared of di?”

He said “she asked me to keep giving updates about you. And I didn’t. You know di na, that’s why.”

Radhika laughed and said “tell her I’m fine. Nothing can happen till Arjun’s with me.”

He then picked up the call and spoke to Riddhima. Radhika kept laughing all the while.

At the office, both Nitin and Arjun presented their ideas in the meeting. The authorities loved it.

Nitin’s dad came to Arjun and said “congrats beta. Thank you so much for helping Nitin. Thank you so much for coming back. My son has never been this happy. All these years he kept trying to find you. And finally, the day’s come. Thank you so much beta.”

He said “uncle there’s no need of thanks. It’s my duty to help Nitin. And from now on I promise that I’ll never go away again.”

Nitin’s dad smiled and left. Arjun kept thinking about Radhika. He only wondered what was going on in her head. He had to do something.

So that’s it for today peeps…. Hope you all liked it… I just donno what I did…. Pit something and made something…. Love you all loads ??

Up next : Part 2 of chapter 5

Credit to: Shree


  1. Hayathi

    Hey why u r saying like that dr jobless thats why quick update dont say like that again…. ohhhh if arjun get to know kaethik is radhu brother it will be fun nq

    • Shree

      Lol yeah !! True that hayathi!!

      Thank you so much hayathi!!

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… Bear hug??

  2. manju

    nice and i just loved it dear

    who is this comal dear?????

    i want see jeolousy radhika so make our rads possessive over arjun
    its my request darling
    take care …………………

    • Shree

      Manju!!!! Thank you so much for liking it!!

      You’ll find out.. What’s the hurry?!

      Lol I’ll try … Thanks again..

      Love you??

  3. manha

    Shreee jobless, if u r jobless then what am i i ??!!!!! Superb part. But why r u making arjun cry yaar. Itna bhi mat rulao. Karthik would hav kicked himself after knowing the whole story. Lol. Such a super love story of ardhija. Haha. Oh arjun finally met some person he knows. It was gud. Convo betn nitin n arjun. Friends talk. I liked it. Radz n karthik convo was gud n abt riddhima it was tooo gud. So lovely. Nandu whr r u now. This radhu will not leave unless she finds u. N u r hiding n makings things complicated. Uff. First she was irritating people now she is hiding. Wow. Ok ok. Its enough for nw. Enjoy ur holidays n loveeeeee u.

    • Shree

      Aye Manhaaaaa…. OK I’ll try not to make Arjun upset… Use rulaungi nai

      I think Karthik already kicked himself hard ??.. Thank you thank you for liking every bit of it

      Lol yeah .. She won’t leave without her … She’ll come out soon..

      Aur komal ke baare mein? I’ll let you know soon .. Or a bit later .. But you’ll find out

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug??

  4. manha

    Who is komal nw???!!! Give some clue. I asked this ques in first update itself. But u didnt answer it. What is happening.

  5. Lakshmi

    Shree !!Superb update dear!!.Poor arjun he was sitting alone and crying for our rads.???.So arjun had a friend in London and she died infront of his eyes n he was regretting for not saving her.Detective radhu began to do investigation about Nandini. So u r jobless, do one thing sit n write a story and publish it after completing it start another one n continue this process so on … on ….and on …?????lol..just kidding ok ,don’t say that again and update second part soon….love u shree????.take care….???.

    • Shree

      Lakshmi!! Thank you thank you !!

      Nice guess .. Let’s see if you’re right.. You’ll find out… Yeah detective Radhu!!

      Lol yeah .. Perfect idea.. I’ll keep processing and forget engineering??.. I was joking..

      Yeah I’ll update soon .. Till then.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug??

  6. nisha

    hey shree how r u dear. I don’t think you are jobless. because you are still working in my thinking dear.


    any idea ???

    here dear yes here in Tu being jobless is you doesn’t have any job to work

    but its your interest that you couldn’t sit jobless and then your mind search a new job for urself writing is the reflection of ur heart.

    and you find such a great job to write ur manmarziyaan in Tu and in return get comments also .
    So you get such a fine job congratulation . You have been hired by Tu so much time before for writing ff.

    love u meri jaan. this is toh hu ur baat

    then came on writing dear.

    loving the update fully dear luv the karthik and rads part a lot he must be laughed after all rads call him bhai woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.

    and nitin and arjun convo also very much good I laughed so much in this update who care arjun cries we can laugh on his cry also coz he cry for a thing which doesn’t exist when he get to know about that he also forgive us for laugh on his cry. what say.

    love u dear

    keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend

    helooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ,,my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees roma, manha meri jaanemano, laxmi dear , hayathi, rg devi roshni love u all

    miss u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.

    keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

    • Shree

      Nishhuuuu!!! Hiiiiii!!!!! How are you ?!
      I’m fine here.. Very fine…

      Yes mind running.. So pura ka pura not jobless .. I’m not jobless at all then !!??

      Yes yes .. It’s all cause of you I’m motivated even more to write… Thank you so much for liking it .. Thank you so much!!

      But Arjun didn’t hear her calling bhai.. That’s the eonky problem.. That’ll also happen soon…

      I love you for your motivation.. The way you encourage.. Thank you.. True .. He last part of your comment is so true

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug??

  7. AmeenA

    OK so you are jobless, right? Don’t worry I have a important job for you. Update your story soon. This is the job and if you do it sincerely then you won’t be jobless anymore.

    Shreeeeeeeee yaar what an update… I loved it…arjun/my aham baby crying n sitting alone…wow wow wow….ur imagination rocks…rads is truly a detective when it somes to these things…. now who is this komal??…and how is she related to arjun’s past n nitin?? Well yeah Ik a lot of questions…sorry…but I’m sure u will answer them in comments or next update…. I’m waiting for next update…pls pls pls update sOOn my jobless friend….nd yeah do think about my offer…luv u more than ever…???

    • Shree

      Ammmuuuu baby!! I took up this job long ago .. Thanks for reminding??

      Oh my baby!! Thank you so much for liking it.. Don’t worry your aham/Arjun won’t have to cry for too long .. ??

      Thank you .. For your complement.. Komal ke baare mein you’ll find out .. Not so soon .. Wait wait… Sabr rako .. And sabr ka phal meeta hota hai .. Lol??

      Yeah yeah your jobless friend will update soon .. Offer yeah … Thanks for it ..??

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug..??

  8. nisha

    hey shree and deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees please make on this page for some time please be there for some hours as I have some surprise to give about the current track

    yes shree please be there for some time I want to share something while reading I enjoy something and want u all to enjoy the same

    what say just be there till 5 pm in between I post my comment and you all can enjoy including shree you said ur heart and we all can do some heart warming .

    wait wait wait

    I came dear love u all loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    • Natasha

      Nisha i just saw ur comment in nevis page. Who told u i dont care about u? I also love u too. U know i didnt come because im very depressed due to some personal reason. U know people and their behaviour! But dont worry. Im not leaving u all so easily. Im very depressed now too. When i will feel fine i will come. For coming out of this depression im planning to holidaying in goa or dargiling.

  9. manha

    hey nisha whr r u ??? come now. loveee u dear always.

    nats after long time i’m seeing u. why depression???!!! enjoy holidays…..

  10. nisha

    hey naty now I understand dear its ok and luv u too . Hey dear I know the time is not good may be but you can make it good . Only you can make it good. Talk to me and ur friends u feel good. and going in depressed side its not at all healthy for u naty . and I don’t want that . Talk as much as u want and when ur mind and heart clear then update poor rads is actually kidnapped and we don’t know who kidnapped and yaa use food dena or else she will loose her life. and she need some positivity to live and u also need it .

    So dear we all love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.

    And think u just wrote good and we talk so much so think u write that much and we write more.

    love u meri jaan.

    well I have some thing for u and for all my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    and yaa naty If u are going in these places then do tell me how’s ur experience and each and every thing make ur mood by searching about these places love u meri jaan my princess always by heart

    keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

    hey ammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu how r u ammu

    meri jaan miss u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooomuch.

    love u dear see at ur page i miss u so much love u

    keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

  11. nisha

    hey deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    well now how much of u have heard

    Tu cheez bade hai mast mast

    Tu cheez badi hai mast

    Its time to heard the new version guys

    Come lets go to experience some thing very interesting

    when karthik get to know about all this

    he said radhu that today he is getting promotion by the seriors and he is throwing a party and he want arjun also to join this with her.

    he tell rads to not tell arjun about our relationship , coz he said I handle everything trust on ur bhai

    By saying rads going to house and tell arjun to came to this party

    arjun denies to came to this party as he want to spend time with rads but rads by ignoring and smiling said we need to go or else karthik felt bad by saying this arjun felt more bad as his wife thinking about how karthik feels but not how his husband how his arjun feels.

    and they entering the party and there karthik came to both the couple and hugged rads and said thanks for coming and then he shake hand with arjun arjun give him a mock smile and goes to other side.

    rads feel bad and said I do all what u say now u need to tell him . I can’t see him like this.

    and karthik says just be patient you are going very much pativrata bhartiya naari

    and then karthik goes in the centre and said I am very much happy today I get promoted and it is all because of my dearest Radhika and I want to thank you for came again in my life

    and he smiles arjun by hearing all this he is going to left the venue and going to go suddenly then karthik came to arjun and stop him and said this is not fair my friend today is my special day and you are going , are’t you happy in my success , I am not going to make u go . He offer him a drink and give him a drink and said enjoy id dude you have ur luckiest wife with you whatelse u need U are so lucky to have her.

    and arjun hold his glass tighter and grinned his teeth by hearing those good words but by his mouth.

    and then suddenly karthik goes on the floor in the centre and the song beginsssssssssssssssssssssss

    and some arabic belly dancers passed by karthik one by one and the music beginssss…………………

    and he start singing by watching rads with his pleasant eyes in front of arjun…………and play…………..

    Dil le dooba dooba mujhko arabic aankhon mein
    Aaj loota loota mujhko farebi baaton ne (x2)

    by saying this he goes in the centre stage and start dancing fully with the belly dancers ..

    Khamkha saa seene mein
    Pyaar ke mahine mein
    Ek hi ishaare pe dil cheez tujhe dedi

    and he
    Dedi dedi de cheez ye dedi
    Dedi dedi dil cheez tujhe dedi
    Dedi haan dedi de cheez ye dedi
    Dedi, dedi dil cheez tujhe dedi

    Mashallah tarif-e-mash’allah
    Badi kambakht hai tu
    Habibi mast hai tu

    Wallah wallah adaayein wallah wallah
    Badi hi sakht hai tu
    Habibi mast hai tu

    Baar baar jo dekha do dafaa naa socha
    Ek hi ishaare pe dil cheez tujhe de di

    Dedi dedi de cheez ye dedi
    Dedi dedi dil cheez tujhe dedi
    Dedi haan dedi de cheez ye dedi
    Dedi dedi dil cheez tujhe dedi

    Zarra zarra kahe ye zarra zarra
    Teri gustakh aankhen
    Kare bebaak baatein

    Parda parda hata le parda parda
    Husan ke chand dekhe
    Kayi armaan leke
    Rubaru jo tu aayi
    Dhadkan na sambhal payi
    Ek hi ishaare pe
    Dil cheez tujhe de di

    Dedi dedi de cheez ye dedi
    Dedi dedi dil cheez tujhe dedi
    Dedi haan dedi de cheez ye dedi
    Dedi dedi dil cheez tujhe dedi

    and after watching all this arjun is going from there suddenly then karthik says

    I want to congratulate my sister radhika and his husband Arjun mehra for their newly wedding and

    this performance is for both of u welcome to dubai . Ladies and gentleman please congratulate this pair with all your blessings

    and by saying all this he came near by arjun

    arjun is shocked by hearing all this and he saw radhika face and she said its true arjun bhai tell me not to tell this to u. by saying this she punch karthik

    and karthik came and said sorry arjun but when I heard all this I coouldn’t stop myself. how can u think I love her yes I love her but different love because she is my sister.

    and arjun hugged karthik and the scene ends

    love u all deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

    just could n’t get stopped my steps love u all.

    this song make u remeber the flavour of dubai in arabic style a little

    love u all my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.
    dil cheez tujhe de di

    • Roma

      Ohhh nishuuuuu, my sweeeeeet musical friend, love u soooooooo muchhhhhh yaar…kitne Dino se tumhare iss mood ka intezaar kar rahi thi….missed you jaaneman…n this is very cuteeeee…my sweeeeeetu musical friend plzzzz yaar apni Kahani bhi to update karo…kitna intezaar karwaogi? I’m just stuck in the moment where ardhika’s hands touched to hold ganga jal pot…then what??????? Holding my breath, will they see each other?….why are u testing my patience…u won…I can’t wait anymore yaaar….kya hua tumhe…kya naraaz ho humse jo likhna band kar diya…me very Sad now….give me some smile with your music treat…plzzzzzzzzzz…love you loads and very very tight warm hug. Take care sweetie and upload the next episode sooooooon….muaaaaahhhhhh

  12. nisha

    hey shree doesn’t want to do any change to ur story dear but just that

    badi zor see song aayaa thaa that’s why de diyaa

    plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz don’t get anry dear . nobody even read it from there. you can update ur next part.

    this song is dedicated for ur dubai wali rads arjun story dear luv u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much and ur rads and arjun a lot dear

    keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend

    • Shree

      Omg!!!! Niiisshhhuuuuu!! What are you made of ?! You’re amazing!! Marvelous!! Fantabulous!! Everything in the world !!

      This was amazing!! Belly dancers .. He tells its cause of Radhika… Arjun jealous.. Everything perfect!!

      And then bhai behen confession.. Too good .. Their wedding celebration.. Complete surprise for Arjun!!

      Finally saari galat fehmi door ho gaye .. So happy!!

      No no .. It will be of great help.. Thank you so much nishhuuuu!!

      And I do like that song.. Lovely imagination….??

      No no I’m not angry.. I can never be angry in you … You’re such a sweetheart… Never ever think like that ….

      Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug..??

  13. manha

    nishuuuuuuu after long time my musical friend woke up from her sleep. i’m so happy for u . really missed you n ur songs dearyyyyyy. come soon. u completely changed shree’s story jaaanu. lol. she would be very happpy.
    write ur story with a small update also it is ok. i want to talk to u . plzzzzzzz. mere liye. plzzzzzzzz.

  14. Ameena

    Ohhhhhhh my goddddd…..finally my musical nishu is back with that full music spirit…wow wow wow ur imagination nishu is sooo amazing….actually I’m imagined the story like that but u made these things possible with just a beauiful flow of music….I loved it totally,,,,nd why will shree be amgry..,I’m sure she must be the happiest person….yaar a small request from ur amu…don’t stop ur story…small updates will work but yaar leaving a beautiful story like that is wrong yaar….I know u r busy…but pls…I love u??

  15. Roma

    Awesome episode shree dearrrr, loved it very much…awww arjun so jealous of karthik that he’s crying..poor baby…rads you’re so tough yaar plzzz don’t do this to your lovely hubby…karthik n ridhima convo n rads reaction was very funny…arjun nitin best friends, wowwww n who is this komal? U mentioned her before too in one of the previous episode…is she arjun’s ex-gf?…loved the friendship bond between arjun n nitin…now where is nandu hiding from rads…she has so many mysterious…but I’m sure rads n karthik will find her soon…keep it up buddyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug

    • Shree

      Romaaa!! Thank you so much!!

      Thank you so much for liking it!! About komal .. You’ll find out… Soon enough.. This description is enough for now I think… I’ll explain everything in detail… Don’t worry..??

      And about Nandini… They’ll find her soon… Or maybe they’ll come across each other.. Who knows.. Well see…??

      Yes I’ll update soon.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling… A warm tight bear hug….??

  16. Roma

    Hi manha, ameena, shree, Natasha, thena, farha, kirti, nisha, anaika, anaya,nive,tanya, pooja, sindhu ksv,mansi (mandy), mandy,ruby, bhgi, deepa, deepthi, ananya, arshi, ishu, kalai,and many more deariiiiiiieeess sorry if I forgot any of you…how are you alllllllllll deariiiiiiieeess???? I’m missing you a lotttttttttt….sorry couldn’t reply any of your comments, first I got behind due to holidays break then the comments section get closed for most of the stories….so sorryyyyyyy sweeeeeet friends and belated Happy New Year to alllllllllll my sweeeeeet deariiiiiiieeess…. love u soooooooo muchhhhhh…plzzzz forgive me…love you all deariiiiiiieeess from the bottom of my heart, muaaaaahhhhhh, take care deariiiiiiieeess ♡♡♡

    • manha

      hiiiiii roma. its ok. first HAPPY NEW YEAR belated. so hw r u . Really we missed u a lot. forgive u for what. Don’t ask such things. loveeee u . and bear hug.

  17. nisha

    hey deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees love u all.

    I know life is heavy on me these days , just want to came but time very much heavy guys.

    yes do try so much to came but till then I want you all to go further . just save this manmarziyaan page to go stop yes

    guys manmarziyaan stories if gone end then readers may go somewhere else .

    so writers ammu shree and all writers community update ur part if u get time and save this manmarziyaan page.

    as there is so much less manmarziyaan stories these days.

    really missing old days guys .

    but seriously miss u all.

    my darling saviour manhu , my sweetheart jaanemann roma, my lovely hayathi, my awesome showsome shree dear , my hone waali better half ammu, and my sweetu laxmi harisha
    really missing naty mansi, nemi, and many more guys

    luv u alll I couldn’t forget any of you. You all are special guys .

    luv u all misss u all.

    keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

  18. manha

    nishuuuuuuuu meri sweet friend. i will always be here only waiting for u . i too can’t forget. but now a days we r getting time to talk. actually this is all ur fault. if u hav posted story then we would hav talked daily. but i understand ur problem. just waiting n wishing ke hamari musical friend apni jaadooo ki chadi chala yegi aur apni story ke saath wapas aayegi. waiting for it. misssssssss u sooooooooo much. loveeeeeeeee u. take care.

    yaaa don’t forget ONCE A FRIEND ALWAYS A FRIEND.

  19. Ameena

    O my beautiful princess, my love nishuuuu…yaar I guess u r really busy…so it’s ok dear….I guess someday (donno when) u will update ur story….I’m being very hopefull…dear ur wish is my command…we will all together save our manmarziyan….our manmarziyan is what connected our hearts…so a request to all manmarziyan writers…

    Natasha, Shree, Kirti, Sanyu, Anna, Me, kfar, thena, Amy, Subhadha, Deepa, Deepthi, Shakthi,Nisha, Yuktha, Renu, Tanya…(sorry if I forgot any names)…plzz do anything in ur life…but never stop writing…neverrrrr…

    Anyways bye….luv u????

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