Manmarziyan a new bond (Epi 19)


Hiee all im back with my next update. Sry for the late update. Pls comment your views regarding the same and thank you all for the support and love you guys have on me. And also thank you my silent readers, hope i have . Thank you guys.

Enjoy the ride…….

Chapter 19
The hair were white colour like snow, eyes where shrieked , the skin was all old, no teeth and he was calling “ Saaaamm…… with shaken voice saaaammm…. And when sam came he was shell shocked as she was also looking aged because of the age. He found arjun with bald head and radhika with a big specs, Krishna was walking with the help of a walking stick and anjali was all soo aged….. Neil sa his face in the mirror and hhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……………………..
He woke from the big slumber and shouted in his top voice. Sam who was next to him jerked and woke up and all the others too rushed to the room.
Neil ; Sam u were , arjun was like anjali ……… Sam was not able to understand his blabbering but he was just sweating bad. All asked him to relax and sanjana offered him some water.
Neil ; Sanju (sanjana short form) do u have white hairs ??

Sanjana ; Neilu…..(the kids call neil as neilu)
Neil ; I mean do I have white hairs ?? Sanjana nodded negative.
Arjun ; u still look young man don’t worry.
Radhika ; Neil why did shout that loud.
Sam ; might had some dreams. All except neil banged their head with their hand.
Neil ; Don’t tease me guys. I found that all were aged , no teeth eyes can’t see well and had goose bumps while thinking that. All laughed at his horrified face. All went to their rooms to sleep.
Days were going and Jai was taking practice to propose to Sanjana with Akshara.
Jai ; I love u akshara (akshara was angry) sry sry sanjana.
Akshara ; mmmhhmmmm I don’t think so you will pass in this test. Bhai you cant even say her name properly how would you going to propose her. Practice session itself this many mistakes then are you going to say her . She turned and saw Sanjay and apsara eating pop corn and drinking some cool drink and witnessing the act. Akshara took a small stone and threw in the direction of them.
Sanjay ; Oye why are you throwing the stones on me.
Akshara ; Cant u help me ?? coming for helping or romancing. Both saw each other and Sanjay gave his tips to propose his twin sister.

Jai after the work asked sanjana to accompany him to ride home. Sanjana was waiting for Sanjay. Sanjay said he will come late and asked her to start. Sanjana left with Jai and immediately he took his bike and informed the same to Apsara. Apsara, Akshara and Vishnu were making all the setting ready for Jai and sanjana. Once the place was ready Akshara texted jai . He was double happy and drove his car to the spot.
It was beautifully decorated with light pink rose flowers and the scent was flowing over the whole area. Jai stopped his car a bit distant and opened the door and offered his hand to her. She was not able to understand but just smiled and accepted his hand. He turned her and blind folded her and slowly took her to the place at that time he saw all the other 4 hiding themselves and silently wishing him good luck.
Once he took his hands from her eyes, she slowly opened the eyes and saw the settings and she was spell bound , even jai was happy for the work of his young ones.
Sanjana ; did you do this for me ???
Jai ; Yes its for u I…. I myself did this.

Akshara who was hiding herself in the bushes wanted to shout but Vishnu held her hand and she slipped and they were having an intense eye lock. Slowly unknowingly she leaned over him and he wrapped her . Apsara and Sanjay were already in their love saga immediately after jai entered the place and they took a shelter of a tree nearby and enjoying the moon’s view.
Vishnu and Akshara came to sense only after sometime and they pulled themselves from the other.
Jai ; (kneeled down) will you fill my live with your love ashara ??? Sanjana giggled . Akshara banged her head and said not again but cant kick her brother.
Sanjana ; Ooohh this was the practice you were making ?? I thought of some other thing. Jai why is this necessary for all these things . You can just hold my hand and take me. I have fallen for you the day I first saw you. So pls stop this romance and ask our parents’ permission for the same.
Jai ; Are you serious I mean I was practicing for weeks to say this to u.
Sanjana ; But you said this wrong even again. You said Akshara not sanjana.
Jai ; Did I and looked towards the direction where akshara was hiding and she signed punching him. He closed his eyes and gave a stupid smile.
Jai ; Sry sanjana just ………

Sanjana laughed and hugged him. Akshara was holding Vishnu’s hands and was squeezing it and said “ she hugged….. she hugged “ and akshara hugged. Vishnu also hugged her back and they were like this. Jai slowly wrapped his hands over the delicate body of Sanjana and said “ Wish I would have said that before”. She giggled and they were like this for some time.
In between Sanjay and Apsara started from there and slowly akshara and Vishnu too left the place leaving the love birds alone. Jai and sanjana had their dinner and some happy times they went home and did not show much infront of their family went to their room silently which confirmed the feelings of their parents strong.
Neil ; Chashni I guess……
Radhika ; Yup so we are in law people. Super but whom side should I take bride or groom ???
Neil ; diplomatic situation yaar. All were silent for few seconds and laughed out loud and finished their dinner.
The marriage date was approaching so the kids started to execute their plan . First was they need to separate the brides and grooms. They somehow made a story and took arjun sam and Krishna with Akshara, sanjana and vishnu in one car and Neil, Arjun and Anjali in one car with the rest of the kids.

Jai booked a big mandap for Ardhika and Nesam. That was a grand mandap and the work was excellently done. The elders were not able to understand what was going on. Slowly they stepped out of the car and the kids did aarthi to their parents and asked them to step in. Once they steeped insode the mandap, they saw the decoration works.
Arjun ; What function is going to happen here ??
Jai ; Marriage maamu.
Sam ; whose ??

Sanjana ; Yours ofcourse.
All the 6 frowned .
Vishnu ; my dear patents as your 25th wedding anniversary has come , we have planned to give you a surprise celebration, so we as the head of the family ordering the brides to take this room and grooms to take that room.
All the elder 6 shouted ; what?????
Arjun ; I cannot be without Radhika .
Sam ; Only if neil snores I can sleep.
Anjali ; I cannot leave Krishna
The kids said; Nothing doing no excuses you guys are being separately sleeping today . what so ever happens.
Jai ; Now pls ladies pls start with the mehandi ceremony and I as the head of this marriage committee order u guys to listen to me. Ardhika , Nesam and anjali,Krishna knew that their kids so the ladies changed and sat for the mehandi and the mehandi was done by experts which were appointed by Jai.
Once the mehandi was going on all rewinded their life.
Radhika thought how was her mehandi was and unknowingly she had A in her hand. She never thought that her life would be changed from that day. Sam was thinking of her marriage, Anjali thought how nesam and Ardhika filled her life with affection and how neil compelled her to eat and her leg bandage was decorated by the kids and krishna her love. Akshara, apsara and sanjana too were wearing the mehandi . The boys were watching their love ladies and all were happy. Arjun appreciated Jai’s work .

Mehandi was done and the brides and grooms were separately in the rooms. After some time slowly Radhika , Sam and Anjali peeped out and made sure that the kids were not there, slowly tip toed to the boys room.

Grooms room.

The boys were not able to sleep. They were waiting for their wives to come. The girls rushed and hugged them as if they were seperated for years. Without much noise they switched off the light and slept on the floor as the bed was not fair enough for the 6.
Arjun was having Radhika in one and and Anjali in other and and she was facing Krishna and he was having his hand on anjali’s waist and holding sam, Sam was sleeping holding Krishna’s hand and keeping her head on Neil’s chest.The kids knew their parents , so slowly they closed the door and they left them to sleep.

Precap – Ardhika, Nesam marriage honey moon trips etc……

Thats it guys for today . Pls comment your views, hope you all will like it and the next one will be the last part of our new bond journey. we had a fabulous ride i hope you all enjoyed my first try of writing, Thank you all for being a support for me. If not you i wouldn’t have come to this much. from my bottom of my heart im really thankful and grateful to you all. Please do support me with the other 2 fan fictions im writing Manmarzian 2 states and Manmarziyan Let me live.

Credit to: Sv

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  1. Hey Sv………..its superb………he he Jai misspelt it again….the remarriage of all was a good idea……….plzzzzz update ” mmz let me live” sooooooooooon………… u……..

    1. Aastha thank you so much dear. I am updating let me live now. It will come soon. Sry for making you wait. Love u always.

  2. Awesome epi sv 😀 niels dream was terrific 😀 and jai again wrong name i feel sad it is going to end

    1. Emz fasa thank you. Happy that you loved it and pls dont be sad , pls do support with your views for my other 2 ffs too dear.

  3. Hey sv I didn’t understand one thing….
    Sanjay is arjun’s son..and apsara is anjali’s how come Sanjay and apsara paired up when arjun and anjali are siblings by birth…pls make it clear…jai confession was awesome:-) 🙂

    1. In few religions it is accepted we can marry our bua’s and mama’s children

      1. OK nats actually I don’t know that I only that it happens in other religion..but here radhika arjun anjali ..they all live in Mumbai ..and rishikesh…and they are mehra or mishra…so I thought…that how come San Jay and apsara paired .but its OK…may be sv had written it so she must have some reason..thanks nats for the u:-) 🙂

      2. Thsnk you so much natasha for speaking on my behalf. Love you dear

    2. Sammy see even if Arjun and Anjali are siblings she is now to other family, that is she is not anjali mehra but anjali krishna and in my family custome the bua’s daughter has the right to marry her mama’s son. so only i wrote that way. Thank you so much sammy. Love u dear.

      1. Thanks sv for replying actually iam from UP…so our .very distant relations we consider ..our relatives as our cousins …that’s why only asked for that purpose only u a lot:-) 🙂

      2. Ur.welcome sv dear by d way superb epidode its mindblowing w8ing for nxt epi plz update it asap

      3. Natasha thank you soo much dear.

  4. I loved it

    1. Thanks Kavina.

  5. Nice one Sv. Jai’s proposal was good and the new love stories that are emerging also very good. The remarriage is superb. Keep on rocking loved the update

    1. Gianna it is all because of you guys support im able to do this. Thank you . Love u .

  6. nice ………………..

    1. Thanks priya

  7. Sv twin…remarriage idea is superb…practice part was mindboggling…what after that also jai made mistake…lol…kiddo…update other ffs….??

    1. Rosieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…………. Jai was nervous and we know how we will blabber when we are nervous and about the other ffs, im updating let me live now. Love u my elder twin sis

  8. Woww nice bt u knw I wil miss ds stry badly I luv ds sis&bro bond yarr bg its cumg to end…… its k wil read one mre tme……jai’s proposal is gud I luv all jodi’s………luv u tc

    1. Gayathri im in moon after reading your comment. Never expected that i would receive these big big words, Im so happy now thank you for the support and pls do support me with my other ffs too. Love you so much and take care and bear teddy hugs .

  9. Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂

    1. Thanks brin will update soon

  10. Hi Sv ….I loved Neil’s dream….that was so funny 😀 … good way of proposal practicing… and nice 25th anniversary celebrations 🙂 loved it waiting for next one 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

    1. He he he thanks di and i will update the next art soon. How is your health all fine ?? Hope you are fine . Love you di bear my hugs and kisses

  11. loved cute proposal dear 😀 😀 😀 jai n shanju s really superbbbbbbb 😀 😀 😀 loved neil’s dream 😀 😀 😀 and how girls escape from room s cuteeeeeeeeee 😀 😀 loved it 😀 😀

    1. Suga you always make me smile with your comment. Love you dear and stay blessed and love you too.

  12. Very cute update dear…
    loved it
    thank you 🙂

    1. Raaga no it is me who should say thanks . Love you dear.

  13. So sweet and cute . Feeling nostalgic tat this is going to b over.

    1. Pls dont feel sad . Thank you for the support . Please support me with the other 2 ffs too

  14. amazing episode……….eagerly waiting next one .tc

    1. subha thank you so much

  15. omg….today only i realised tat none of my comments got posted in the last 5 updates….. totally agitated wid tu…. my god…ok…sab ka milake isme comment kar dethi hun…i have to say..the new generation… cutely u started…wid akshara on arjun and jai hugging him and sleeping…and all children wid god parents…i was laughing and laughing and nandinies past…i felt very bad….but chutku gang rocked…lol akshras comment to arjun whn ardhika were romancing that mamu u told iam gorgous…hahaha….the intro and those acts of children with nesam ardhika krishnanjali was awesome….lol..and in the next one the description of their grown up stages and their crush and how they were similar to parents and all were bindblowing…unknowingly smile comes to our face reading tis one…well…how was ur exam…i was badly missing ur ff for many days…i was thinking y were u not replying..but today only whn i checked all new bond updates i got to know none of my comments were posted…. i became angry totally…well….sad tat this one is also going to end….i will miss it…and sv ur new ff is also awesome….do continue… u loads…but now iam irritated coz i missed my comment section in ur ff….take care….

    1. Febs (can i call you that way ??) Main bhi thujse bahoth miss kiya yaar. Par koi bath nahi i know you would have read it . Even i missed you . But thanks to tu even though i was not able to see your comment for other of my update i was able to get a mega feast by your comment dear. Thank you so much dear for checking everything. I can see the love you have on me . Love you dear. Im really in moon to see your comment. Pls do support me for my other ffs too .

      You always make me feel blessed by your comment. Take care and stay blessed and bear hugs and kisses too

      1. lol…febs…tats wat my kerala frnds call me…. hahaha….. and mega feast…u hav seen my convo wid othr othrs…i am a very big chatterbox….u will bcum crazy….lol…love u too…..

      2. then i would love to hear as i thought i was the non stop talker. k then u can surpass me so that i can proudly say that some one can talk more than me. yippiee. love u febs.

      3. hahaha….hangouts me poochke dekho…..sabko paagal bana dethi hun…shree di,manha di,maandey di, roma di,rosie di,etc…..i got a company…. my twin chatterbox…lol…. well…wat r u doing????

      4. Lol but if you claim me as a twin Rosie , myself and you would become a triplet . But you should ask her too lol. I am doing my training. Love you lots.

  16. Its really amazing sv chellam…full n full happy moments ….loved it very much…waiting next one…love u lot …tc…

    1. Susi thank you so much i liked the way you called me chellam lol thanks . Will update soon

  17. Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. …I just loved it to the core. ..You’re amazingly awesoooooome sv …very lovely narration n so heart touching scenes….so sweeeeeet n beautiful lovely couples n your words n emotions made it very effective n expressive. …I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your allll stories. is last episode. ..mmmm…I’ll miss this new bond soooooooo muchhhhhh. …but will be in touch with you in let me live and 2 states….I’ll love u soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeethearttttt. ..keep it up honeyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh

  18. Roma you always make happy with your words. Yup next is the last part of an new bond. I need your support and i know you would do that. Always be there for support. Love you soo much Roma . Stay blessed and always be happy dear. Love you .

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