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Manmarziyan – Never Thought…Love is Magical !! (Shot 1)

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Hello…Helloooo….Its Jessie….Ok now….This one is for our Romance queen aka Sathya…here…Yes…She will be celebrating her birthday tomorrow….Thought of celebrating
her birthday for 2 days…What say….Well..Sathya as a author..always loves to unite Ardhika in her style…be it Etl or My evergreen Favroite My Impossible Love,Must be love or Just two of us…Darkness bends to Light…sweet wala one….She always brings Ardhika in her style…So..this time…I brought her in for Ardhika…New try!! Do share your views….Am not sure about the laptop tomorrow..Thats y am posting now…and my network…its not well…Any one using MTS wifi…they said…server issue…God.! Am trying thro’ hotspot…Why o why…for me why….

I thank TU and shree…coz I got know Satz…exactly 8 months back I was like waiting for her story and reply for my comment…now we pull each other legs like besties….more than them…so..thank you both…

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SATHYAAAAA……Advance Happy Birthday Girl…..Wish the best to happen in your life….Hope you love this gift from my side…Fingers cross..!! A different attempt..As I said.,I had no mind to edit….Sathya….You are one awesome girl.,always wishing sweetness and happiness in every character even in your fiction too….Aww…I forgot to say that ACP story…that too my fav…Wish the same sweetness in your life….Am posting a day before your birthday…coz of lappy…!! heheh….Stay happy girl….Love you Tons…!! Read this…and I will be happy only if you get the correct note I had given for you…Lemme seee…. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ hahahah…Now don’t bang your head in laptop…

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Never Thought…Love is Magical (Shot 1)

“Dad…listen me once…”,the girl in ivory kurta with dark blue Jean hushed in her phone,leaning towards her desk…but,the call got already cut…

Her mobile beeped with one of her friend’s Watsapp msg…a forwarded one…something funny about Marriage…she twisted her lips irritated…this girl who got married a month back is sending this…!! She smirked dialing her..,as she got away from her desk.,walking towards the balcony,she pushed the door open….

“Hey…Razzzii”,she greeted…..

“Hi Satzzz….How r u girl…? You dint call me at all…you forgot me haan???….”,Radz asked hurriedly…

“Doing good…!! And why would I forgot you….see…that’s y I called..”,Satz said..

“Something Fishy…”,Radz said like a detective…….

“No fish.or crab…so…whats with that forwarded msg..you sent….”,Satz asked inquiring….

After a minute of silence,”that’s just fun one….forwarded as u said….why…”,Radz stuttered a little…..

“Hmmm….(she inhaled deep)….Razziii….. ummm…can we meet today….”,Satz asked….

Radika blinked listening that….it has been real long time they met..and Satz is not a person to call her unnecessarily…she readily wanted to say yes.,but…but…her MiL was at home…

“Satzzzz…is it really important…or…”,Radz asked feeble…

“Ok..leave it”,Satz disconnected the call….and stood gazing the IT population of that tech park….

-Ok…I will come…but when and where– her watsapp notified with Radz msg….

Radhika dialed looking Satz status to be online,”before 5….ok…I will manage my MiL…they said they need to go somewhere”,Rads said hasty..

“Ok…I will text you…but where are u going..”,

“I don’t know Satz.”,Radz voice drained…Sathya knew only because she was in a hurry,Rads blurted else would never let a word about her family….

“Means…they won’t inform you”,Satz turned angry,annoyed wondering what sort of family was that..to take their DiL like a kid…ah…even kids asks numerous questions…now a days…”Where is your husband?”….

Radhika sensed her annoyance..”why you are angry Satz….he came back from his trip…a week back…”,

“So…he too won’t say the details to you..”,Satz voice echoed her irritation…

“Hmm..he is..quite…reserved…I won’t ask…”

“Radz…are you happy…”,Satz turned concerned the moment she heard her friend to sound dull….”Is he a rude person?”,she asked…..only if she had attended her marriage,she would have got to know…..”why did you marry when I was on on-site”,she asked …

Radhika giggled listening that…”What to do…I got this fellow at that time…Banda…was looking good….what if I miss,waiting for u…..thats y…”,Radz muffled her laugh,listening her own words….

Even Satz was smiling the other side…trust this girl to turn everything funny…”that’s not funny..say abt…”

“Satz…he is a gem of a person…only drawback…he dint Learn to smile…..and…too workaholic yaar”,Radz sighed….

“Really”

“Promise….”

“Then you teach him how to smile….how not to be workaholic”,Satz bit her lips…saying that…

“Satzzzzzz”,

“Razzzzz….”,she mimicked her and maintained a serious face,when one of her colleague crossed her….

“My…my…romantic queen….I will come and meet you….but…you keep the ideas safe for your life..”,Radz quickly disconnected the call…..

-sharp at 3.– Radz mobiled beeped with a msg……She blushed hard reading various marriage jokes and kissie icons added pics forwarded to her….Everything related to married life…

–How naughty– Radz texted…

–Punishment…for sending naughty wedding jokes to me..– Satz texted back…

—I sent only one– Radz texted…

—I give back with interest ๐Ÿ˜‰ — Satz texted again…

Radhika smiled at that….Satz…Sathya!!…one of her best friend…they neither studied or worked together…still they became friends and turned like besties…

Radz saw her MiL to retire after lunch…..Kitchen works were over….She hopped happily twirling her pallu around her left wrist,humming a romantic number…all the while she climbed those steps…she froze the moment,opening her bedroom door…There her husband,Arjun.,was working in his laptop….When did he come…No…how…dint he say he will be back by 4 o clock….may be he is here,since they wanted to go somewhere….had they changed the time….she stood thinking..

“Why are you still standing there?”,,he asked closing his laptop…

“You…had lunch?,Radhika stammered…

He saw her intent and smiled a second later….”Come here.”,he called her..

“Your lunch..”she asked as she moved towards him…

“I had it…you were asking servants to clean something,so I came here….”,he paused…”without disturbing you”,he said in undertone..,and gestured the empty place next to him…

She saw him wide eyed…Arjun..!! Her husband.,whom she married just before a month..hardly a month..just 27 days..,she know nothing about him…drawback of arranged marriage according to her…..all she knew was he is one short tempered Person…coz…Tats what she witnessed the very first day…screaming at everyone,when she was about to step in to her room for first night….She peeped a little from the stairs but was shocked to hear his yell….and when…

“Radhika…”,she jerked when he pulled her hand…”Sit..” he said…

She took the single cushion seat instead near him….he was surprised a little…”Radhika…come here”,he pointed the empty place next to him…she bit her lips nervous…”why are you…”

“I…I…want to meet my friend”,she felt relaxed after asking it…uff…her MiL is a hard nut to crack…if he is here…why not get his permission…she thought…

“Ok..go…shall I drop you?”,he asked…..

She felt her head.,No..world to spin….Is he this sweet in real….”you are busy”..she said like a statement….

“Yes..I am”,he sing sang and sat relaxed…

Means was he mocking?..saying he will drop….she felt offended…

“I asked your permission only…I will go by myself..”,she stood but felt a pull on her pallu…She gulped,looking her pale yellow net saree’s pallu in his hold….

“Seems you are short tempered…more than me…”,he gestured the seat next to him again…without any other option left,she sat next to him…

“Radhika.!!…First point..,you can call me Arjun…!! …Second..,you needn’t ask permission…third….”,he paused and saw her to look his face….”Don’t stammer…I hate that…and I am busy…still you are new to this city….so lemme drop you…”,he said to her face…

She sighed…’as though I love stammering…it comes automatically,when I see him….the way he yells,like that of villains in movie..’,she thought herself…

“Now what’s up.?…Are you angry that I left for a trip on the second day of our marriage..?”,he asked…

She nodded negatively…

“You aren’t angry…Means…no worries…you dint miss me?,”he asked and she snapped a look to him shocking…
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“When did I say so?”,she asked surprised and he chuckled….

“Sweet voice…you have…but you never speak with me like this”,he shook his head and got up…

Her mobile beeped with Satz msg….Its 3’o clock….Gosh!!…She ran to her wardrobe and picked a orange Salwar,and got ready in next 5 mins…..

“Radhika…wear saree…only if you are comfortable”,she turned hearing her name,and stood in silence listening him…once he finished…

“Am comfortable”,she said hurriedly and turned towards Mirror,combing her hair…

Arjun walked to her,amused….She got ready like a kid running to catch his school bus….”I will ask driver to drop you”,he said….

“Ok..ok”,she took her clutch and checked things…

“Why so hurry”,he asked….he grew curious with her antics…after all he got sometime to watch his wife in her self….well….Friendship is magical.!..Pulls you out of your shell….
She briskly moved here and there,picking clothes and accessories for evening…

“Am late isn’t”,she said hurried…

“Why”,he encouraged her..

“Coz….I have to come back here for tea time…already late to meet my friend…then have to go to,that ‘somewhere’.(she air quoted).. and …”,she stopped realizing her banter and looked him blank,while he stood listening her crossing his arms with a smile…

“Suit yourself..”,he said…

Radhika blinked for a moment,and smiled gracefully realizing his words..,biting her lower lip feeling embarrassed,”I..I…”…

“So..this is you…!! Nice…!! Why do you keep yourself…”,he paused when she typed something on mobile…

“Myself???”,she asked feeble…she knew what was coming….she indeed melted when he spoke soft…but the msg from her friend..!!Argh!! -Satz..please..don’t send kissie emoticon- she texted…

“You are late..go…”,he sighed…

“No…you say”,she blurted and bit her tongue….God…!! Here her husband is speaking with her this cool,for the first time..and she…..

Her trance broke feeling something warm….No….Him near her,with his arms covering either side of her…and his face close to her…In this one week.,he neither forced her on bed,nor tried to get intimate…he just let her to be in her space….

“You missed me?”,Arjun asked and she mumbled yes….

“You like me?”,he asked and Radhika nodded with her gaze,on her mobile’s pop up msg….– Razzziii….are you coming —

“You love me?”,he asked husky…. “S” she said typing the alphabet ‘S’ repeatedly in her mobile…..

“Say…I love you..”,he looked her face…

And her next pop up msg was Kissie emoticons from satz…with the word ‘thanks’…..

What made Sathya to say thank her..just for meeting her!….Radz was lost but blinked looking Arjun’s face so close…he leaned close with a smile in his lips…Her handsome husband,in dark grey formal shirt,trying to romance with her for the first time ever after their marriage……

“Say”..he mumbled…

What…her mind screamed…’what should I say….Sathyaaaaa….you bone…!..no…she can’t be.’..another kissie emoticon series popped up in her mobile screen from Satz….
She smiled biting her cheeks at that,which got misunderstood by Arjun…

“Say…or else…I won’t let you to go”,he said hitting her forehead with his…

Her lips parted a little in surprise,when he did that…from when he grew this close….her eyes was on mobile expecting Satz msg…and that girl kept sending the same emoticons for fun….Radhika glanced her mobile and Arjun…and again…next sec…she kissed his cheek surprising him…she escaped from his hold and ran towards the door…Arjun smiled himself,touching his cheek..moving to his balcony,he saw her to get inside a car…

“Come back before 6…ok!…take care”,he said…and she mumbled ok…her eyes rounded in surprise when she heard him kiss in phone….She then realized what she had actually done…..he never did this,even when he was away….other than side hugging her,while leaving to office,he never came close to her….but today….he spoke soft…and in fact….tried to get cozy….when he took steps slowly,she took the lead..kissing him…God!!…She blushed pink at her thought….


“Pink…pink…what’s tat…you blush pink.”,Satz asked when they met..

“No..hi…or Hello or how are u…you have eyes only for this?”,Radz pouted…

After their friendly banter.,Radz asked the reason for satz calling her….”You din’t say your problem,still?”,Satz counter asked…

“Not any prob…am happy…”,Radz smiled…,but Sathya glared her…”Yaar..honestly..he left for a business trip the second day of our marriage.,came last week only…thats it”…

“What”,satz asked aloud…”you din’t go with him?”,she asked and Radhika nodded negative…”He likes you,na”,Satz held Radz chin…

“Guess..yes.,He spoke so soft with me..today”,Radz smiled…

“Radhika..what are you saying..Its a month..and he spoke only now…Something Fishy”,Satz tilted her head a little…..Radhika turned confused…

“Nothing..I guess…He is quite busy….and….”

“He is a good boy na”,Satz smiled mischievous and Radz slapped her hand…

“Very good boy…he…is .good..”,Radz blushed…”Devil..you are.!!.”,she mumbled…and said.,how their marriage happened in a jiffy.,so.,they had no time to converse after engagement and the few phone talks they had.,was also because of his cousin brother..who helped her in getting know about Arjun better…

“Glad he had one cousin brother”,Satz sighed sipping her coffee…”Speak with him”,she said..

“How to.?.Satz…you don’t how much angry he gets…God..!! I was scared when he yelled his staffs on our wedding night..and when he said.,he is tired…I quickly ran to couch.,fearing his wrath”,Radz said wide eyed and Satz spitted her drink laughing…

“You should have pushed him to couch?”Satz said…

“Its good to hear..not to execute….He slapped our helper in anger…So.,I never open my mouth…”

“He married you with his wish isn’t”,Satz kept her mug down..

“His mom said so…His cousin bro too said…But he…he doesn’t even smile at me”,Radz said.,but wondered why and how she kissed him today…,Was she that courageous..!!
all because of that kissie emojis this girl had sent….She glared Sathya who sat thoughtful…”Heyyyy!!!….Why you called me”,Radz asked high..

“Now what got into you…speak normally…Hmm…Listen…Dad said today some groom family is coming to meet me…But I don’t want to marry..so..help…help..”,Satz finished tapping the table…

“Why…better meet…we will..”

“No..that won’t work..”,Satz snapped her…

“Then you avoid going home…Roam somewhere and go late…”.Radz winked…

“You watched that movie.??..Next idea”,Satz snapped again….

“You meet.. but say..you din’t like him”,Radz said….

“Next..”,

“You fake a accident…and people will call this alliance as unlucky”.Radz wiggled her brows…

“Next”..

“You give his phone number…I will…”

“You will?”,Satz asked alerted…

“I will annoy him…you know isn’t our trouble therapy….else will give it to our gang and make him mad…”,Radz said…”This is the option left…I will fake a girl name.,and call him somewhere..if he survives that…lets get his mother’s number and try the ‘old is gold’ trick…Aunty…your son cheated me…!!”,Radz faked a cry…

“Will it work?”,Satz sounded curious…

“No harm in trying”,Radz winked…The girls giggled and laughed for no good reason.,and ppl around glared them..which only induced their laughter more…

“But I don’t have his number..”Satz said raising her brows….

“Ok..meet..and get it..we will finish his chapter”,Radz animated like a villan…”Btw wats his name”,she asked…

“Who knows..”,Satz said…and winked her…Next sec..,Radhika called Satz’s home and spoke with her dad saying that she is her TL.,”Really uncle..Am so happy…What is he doing…”,Radz winked this side…. “Where is he working..?”,she asked but felt a hot mug over her palm….Disconnecting the call abruptly Radhika yelled..”Why did you keep that hot mug on my palm”…,she blew air on her knuckles…

“Is it important to know his history?…Tell the name..”,Satz sipped her coffee…

“You keep on drinking coffee…His name is..A-R-J-U-N…Arjun!!”,Radz smiled wide…

“Thats a lie….even then..what if he..has..that..name?”,Satz stuttered…

“Yaar..your dad said so…that’s y I inquired further..but you spoiled it…so..Sathya…”,Radz winked…”Meet him..coz…he has your dream boy name”..

“Am gonna kill you”,Satz took a fork…

Radhika gestured her to be silent.,and attended Arjun’s call…”Satz…bye yaar…you meet him…and get his number…don’t worry…don’t avoid meeting him”,Radz spoke as they moved hurriedly…..Satz stood like a statue….Radhika hugged her….”Don’t avoid…we will never know whats written…I met Arjun like that….Just by chance…I did think to say No….but see..today…”

“Experience,huh?”,Satz mocked…but decided to meet him…she moved towards her office…

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“Got ready,so soon?”,Radhika turned listening his voice…

“Am sorry…”,she mumbled sliding bangles on her hands…Arjun came to help her when she wore a necklace…”Mom was angry that it got half an hour late…because of you”,he hooked it..

“But..where are we going?”,she asked to his reflection and he looked her surprised..

“You are kidding”,he smiled back…She smiled faintly and got down the stairs…

“Bhabhi…How are you?”,she turned listening his voice..

“Krishna!!..You too..”,her words trailed off wondering why she wasn’t informed about anything… “Where are we going”,she asked looking the ground beneath…

“To..”

“Means..you weren’t informed”,Arjun came from behind…he recalled her air quoting ‘somewhere’ word….Radhika and Krishna wondered what happened.,that Arjun suddenly started to scold everyone.,in particular his mom and Krishna’s parents…She stayed silent in car travel..,while Krishna tried hard to signal her something…

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“When will she come”,Krishna’s mom asked and Radz took that opportunity to move outside…Krishna followed in suit…”Bhabhi..listen…I love a girl…but mom forced me for this alliance…I don’t even know who she is….Please do something…Tell to Arjun”…Krishna her BiL pleaded, pretending to be in a call…

Radhika felt her throat to dry…”Arjun..!! Do you think he will listen..?”

“He will listen you..”,Krishna whispered as his mom called him…

Rads looked shocked when Satz parked her vehicle before that house.,glancing behind.,she pushed Satz back to the road…”Is this your house?”.Radz asked…Satz looked those cars and Radhika dressed traditional and understood…She nodded…”Satz…where is your dad…I saw only your brother there.,so never got an idea its yours house..”.Radz lamented…”Satzz….the groom is my BiL..Say no to him..that fool loves someone..Pls..pls…”

Satz pushed her hand.,she was already raged that her manager din’t let her early…”Do you think us to be fool…if he loves someone ask him to say…I won’t…”,she glared him…

“He will never…He is a goose…God..he said to me just now…Else…”,Radhika tried to hold Satz hand…

“Radhika..move away….already…”,her words were cut in.,when her dad came from back yard…Radz her seen him only in photos…and Satz was in no mood to introduce Radhika…Radz kept texting to her.,but Sathya just switched off her mobile…

“You look tensed”,Arjun asked when Radhika came back…

Radhika nodded negative to Krishna…”She is my friend..Don’t do this Krishna”,Radz words choked when she whispered and Krishna looked her shocked… Arjun saw his mom to glare Radhika…”Whats wrong?”,he asked….but Radz nodded negative…

Listening the reason for her late arrival.,they sat waiting for her.,while Sathya was highly annoyed with the happening…..Krishna walked out quickly to create a bad impression on him….

“You should have informed your manager a day before”,Krishna’s mom said to Sathya..more like a taunt..and Radz grew impatient at that…Arjun leaned to her side…”Do you know her?”,he asked…..

Before she could respond they heard Sathya to give a sharp reply and Arjun’s mom to reply back….Arjun tried to intervene but Sathya said.,”Am sorry…I can’t leave my job..”she went on and on.,and Radz sat holding her head…

Finally.,it happened as they wished….

Citing that she got a call.,Radz moved outside.,she ran to backyard as Satz texted her to come….”Satzzzzz…You got escaped baby”,Radz hugged her in her backyard…

Inside the house,Arjun just apologized on their family’s behalf…he knew his family ladies mentality….Krishna came happy when he saw his parents and Arjun’s mom to leave in another car….

“Leave me Radhika…Don’t you know as a girl…”

“Sssshh..!! Did you see their atrocity…Satz…They are Daily soap Sasuma…Argh..You don’t know…the family is idiotic…”,Radz made a face…

“and your BiL?”,Satz asked…

“He is so good yaar…If not he loved someone..”

“Then too,the family is idiotic isn’t”,Satz glared her sharp…

“Sathya…I said…My husband left for business trip…you know why.?..there was some fire accident in one of their mills….on our wedding day…My MiL said its because of my luck…Krishna’s mom is no less to Arjun’s…I..”,Radz blinked back her tears…

“But Radhika…”

“For you its just for this one day..the worries….but What I suffer is….”,Satz quickly engulfed her in a hug rubbing her back… “Does your husband say so…?”

“No..He is a gem of a person…He never taunts me…even today…he…”

“You keep praising him…so much love?”,Sathya nudged her elbow…

Radhika at once blushed in tears….”Am sorry Sathya…”

“Leave it…But Radhika…His name is also Arjun isnt…”Satz asked…

“Eeekk..Yess…Their grandfather’s name…His mom too kept the same one….This idiot is Arjun Krishna! But sweet…”

“And yours…?”,Satz winked…

“Mine?…Spicy….Pepper like…Archoooon”,Radz hugged her laughing a little..”If your family get to know am your friend then they will think,what sort friend I am..Laughing when…”she paused looking Satz to smirk devilish….

Radhika turned suspicious with her smirk and looked behind only to see Arjun,her husband standing behind them….He left glancing them both….”When he came?..”

“When you cooed his name”.Satz pulled her cheek…

“Ah…Krishna!..Come…Apologize you idiot…My friend helped you…”,Radz slapped his shoulder,when he came after a minute searching Radhika…..”Say thanks atleast..”,she pulled him..and he stood still…

Sathya saw that 5’7 tall handsome guy looking her..in black and dark blue formals…”No need to thank…Get a backbone soon!…Atleast to save your love”,Satz smirked to him….

“I..you are…?”,he asked…

“Your savior!”,Satz looked away…

He smiled wide…”Got mad.??”,Radz smacked his head…

“Bhabhi..she is…she is…”

“Go away…else….”..Satz turned to her right and Radz,Krishna tried to look at that side…There a German Shepherd dog stood glaring them inside a cage…Now Radz understood.,why her dad came from backyard….

“Am not scared for dogs”,Arjun Krishna (AK) said smirking…

“Oh..only for your mom then”,Satz bit her cheeks saying and Radz laughed holding her stomach…

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Radz kept muffling her laughter all the while thinking about Satz words….She turned when Arjun patted her shoulder…”She is your friend?”,he asked…AK,sitting in front seat.,turned to their side….

“Why she rejected the proposal….I know she had some other reason…but..its a insult for both of our families…..”,Arjun said…

Radz rolled her eyes wondering for an answer….She had seen few love story in his book shelves…”You shouldn’t ask her in person if I say the reason..”,Radz said and continued when Arjun animated zipping his mouth….”She is in love with someone…That’s it…you shouldn’t ask further…And I too won’t say….This is secret!”..,Radz said hurriedly…Krishna slapped his forehead and looked before..

Arjun saw her intent.,and ruffled her hair surprising her…..”Good try”,he whispered in her ears…

“She is a good girl”,Radz said…

“I know…”,he said as he walked inside their hall…

“Bhabhi…does she really love someone?”,AK asked… and she nodded…”God…Bhabhi..she is the girl whom I love…”

“Whatttt?”,Radz screamed and Arjun glared them from stairs…

“Radhika…Come soon…Krishna…Go..Man!! Its enough for the day”,he said…

Krishna held Radhika’s hand…”Listen..am Madly in love with her…I din’t know she was the one…Bhabhi..pls..pls..”..,AK opened his mobile’s gallery where he had few pics of Sathya.,which he had clicked.

“You are the biggest fool…Now even if we say yes..She won’t accept…Idiot.!..”,Radz pushed his hand and walked to the steps…

“Bhabhi..pls….One idea!..”

“Krishna..You need to convince everyone you idiot…This won’t…”

“Bhabhi..don’t say anything inauspicious for my love…you know her…tell me one solution…”,AK looked her sharp…

“Go to her home…and….”,Radz crooked her neck like saying a secret…

Krishna nodded…

“and Fell flat in her feet”,Radz glared him….

(To be Continued)

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41 Comments
  1. Ennada ivvalavu sweeta yeludarenga nu pathen. Tirunelveli halwa illa…….very sweet….too good….u are really gifted…

    1. Jessie

      Kalyani….First comment ye ..sweet.. thanks a ton dear… Halwa…hahhahh…neenga enda ooru…thats my native only..oru vela nativity sweetness otitu iruko…lol…thanks a ton dear…glad you liked and thanks for your encouragement….Love you loads…TC

  2. Sathya

    Don’t know first or not. But thank u so much for the great intro Jaaaazzzziiiiiii.. Love u so. Much girl. Vl read it again n comment big one.

    1. Wish you a very very happy birthday Sathya di…God bless you..have successfully career and your smile never fades away…and do follow your heart…
      ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    2. Jessie

      Hey….Birthday Paapa…intro irukatum..you come back and say about Story…hahah love you tons my dear…ok…Again!! oye…how many times you will…..lol…you are one naughty girl..anyways 2nd one posted…TC…

      Haann…solla marundten….”Happy Birthday Sathya…. ” ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

      1. Sathya

        Jaaaazzzziiiiiii Jaaaazzzziiiiiii Jaaaazzzziiiiiii… I love u darling ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ lol naanum rads um sorry sorry razzi um friends… Lol but enaku Vera yaaro niyabagam varaangale.. Atha last episode la solren…. Ayoo semma story ya… M like ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ full time blushing…. He he he I m sending kissing emojis to rad and she kissed her hubby arjun.. Lol he he he he ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Epudi tempt panom paathiya…. Lol… Ardhika is rocking hot here… Lol enna irunthalum rads enoda friend la konjam romance thookalatha irukum… He he he… Apram vanthaale oruthi… Satz… Here she comes.. I mean I came… Idea kekrena… Groom paakama irukka… I remember this convo in our what’sapp… Athu thaana ithu….

        Antha paiyan Peru Arjun oh God… Ennama neenga ipdi pandreengale ma… I m flat by name itself… Apram enna ellam koodi vara time la manager kaduppu panitan…. Ithula rads um enoda veetuku than varala… Ennada Kodumai ithu… Lol… She is bestie la so not to hurt me… N she is so sweet like u Jaaaazzzziiiiiii… Lol

        Athu sari Mr. AK en ipdi yaarukitayum love pandratha sollala.. Athu sari love pandra ponnukitaye innum solla… He he he he he he.. M giggling like mad Jaaaazzzziiiiiii when he told o m the one he lives.. Oh God m n flying jet.. Lol… Killaa irakki vidunga… He he he he he ayoo sirrichu sirrichu Vaai ellam valikuthu….

        Hittu kutty epo varuven… M. So excited for next part.. That when AK gonna fell on my feet… Ha ha ha ha love u Jaaaazzzziiiiiii sooooooooooooooooooo much superb superb superb update… M flat ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

      2. Sathya

        Maranthu ten….. U perfectly synced my pov… I can’t leave my job same u told here.. Ithu than purithal ndrathu…. Love u darling…

    3. Sulbi

      Happy birthday sissy ๐Ÿ™‚

      1. Sulbi

        Sissy so busy ki… seems like… enjoy your day sissy… and wish you for all the success and happiness to get in your life… always stay happy… once again happy birthday my sweet sissy… ๐Ÿ™‚

    4. Jessie

      Satzzzzzzzzzzz…………love you too darling…..Appidiya….yaar adhu..padichutu sollungo….glad that I was able to make you blush…tempt..haha…aama…romance queen na summava…lol..idea…aama…adhu illa idhu…AAahha.a…sweet like me…sollave illa…naa sweet nu….AK patri therindhu kolla adhutha epi parkavum..hhaha..idho varen iraki vida…hittu kutty nxt part da…Ak kaal le vizhanumaa…aahaa…glad I was able to bring your pov…am happy that you are flaattttttttt….love you tons….TC..bear hugs….

  3. Brin

    Awesome story for Sathya birthday, waiting for the next update. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Happy Birthday Sathya. ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Jessie

      Brinzeee…thanks a lot dear….next part is posted…TC…loads of love

  4. arti viswanathan

    Jessie darling superb,excellent,fantastic,outstanding episode…. I loved it to the core….. I liked all the scenes…. Tc loads of love to u from me and teddy hug….. Will be waiting for next episode……

    1. Jessie

      Arti…Arti….thank you…Thank you..am happy you liked it…loads of love and teddy hugs…next shot of this is posted…TC..

    1. Jessie

      Thanks aayu…TC

  5. Jnana

    Jessie Sooooper…. I loved it…. Love you loads….. Tc….

    1. Jessie

      Hey Jnana…Thanks a lot dear…glad you loved it…Love you loads…

  6. Roma

    Jessss wowwww awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. …very very beautiful n amazing plot….satz would love it very muchhhhhh. ….I loved it to the coreeeee
    ..you nailed it my honeyyy. …so cuteee n lovely rads, arjun, arjun krishna…n Satz…..very very awesoooooome. …your narration made it alive. …so realistic. ..with humor n cute romance….satz sending emojis to rads…lol….n ak loves satz….so sweeeeeet. …..loved it to the coreeeee. ..keep it up honeyyy. ..love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart jessss…โ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™กโ™ก ๐Ÿ˜‰

    1. Jessie

      Roma di…thanks a lot di…you are a sweet surprise today….thank you so much…am glad you loved the plot…yes..yes…four characters…so keen di…!! I like this..you always point the key one…emoji…thats wat she does na..!! hahahh…happy that you liked the narration…yes..he loves..bear hug..my moral support you are…love you tons..you don’t know how happy I am seeing you here…dinka..chika..dinka chika..hhah..stay happy di…

  7. Rossy

    Gosh…what a in laws….saas were traditional…my god…and satz sissy is awesome…i loved her attitude…aaahhhaaaannnnn

    1. Jessie

      Hey Rossie…thanks dear…happy that you liked sathya here..hahah…attitude…Jessie never leaves that behind…har ek atmi mere kahani me attitude k saath gusarega…lol….TC…

  8. Hey jessi u nailed it.. good .. pls update lil queen or the mam

    1. Jessie

      Hey Anjali…thanks a lot dear…MSM this weekend…lil queen after 3rd shot of this story…stay happy

  9. Gianna

    Awesome Sweetheart, really enjoyed reading it and Sathya must be on cloud 9 after this.

    1. Jessie

      Sweet heart…thanks a ton…am happy you enjoyed…Satz…haha..let her say…hope so…TC..

  10. S.v

    baby idhu bongu epdi ipdi posukkunu niruthina aama adhenna khadoos romba amaidhiya irukaney seri illaye adhenna arjun krishna uun kusumbukku oru level illeley….. avan enna loosa ?? ivala love pandravan ivaley venanu sollitaney,,,, idhu epdi theriyuma irukku unnaye kaanumnu solli eengitta complaint kuduppa daaa. apdi dhn irukku aama unnala andha kurthava vida mudiyalela ?? ha ha ha i know i know he he he seri enna plan pannirukanga avanga ?? kuttu sadhi lol he heh e lovely baby muhhhaa waiting for ur next part and queen also love u so much muhhhaa

    1. Jessie

      Kurta !! ada…Sathya oda dress…ena ma nee….Arjun ku potalum..sathya ku potalum…edhavadhu solra…unnaaa….onum pana mudiyadhu…he dint see her.isnt…..RAdhika asked and Arjun krishna left the place…apram ena…why to scold him…you ppl…next one posted…kootu sadhi…haahh..aama..yes…love you tons dear….Muah…Queen after 2 days..

  11. Hey ya Jessie… sorry haven’t read but … actually I have registered in TU but don’t know where to find you all so….
    My username is Aasthag…if you find then ..help please..

  12. Aasthag

    Hello Jessie… sorry I haven’t read … actually I have registered in TU but don’t know where to find all…so please help..mu username is Aasthag…

    1. Jessie

      Ok..Aastha….just click my name here…in my profile page..u will find a tab..posts…click it..it will show the recent posts of mine..you can try the same for every author to check the updates….hope this helps…dont b sorry my friend…there will a tab as messages..you can send private msgs too…

  13. Sathya akka attitude superb ana also ardhika romance kooda sema.jessie akka.I will call you akka hereafter.becoz you are calling me vanga ponga making me to feel aged.lol.love you keep smiling.

    1. Jessie

      Chashu….thanks da chellam…no aged….inmae..’nga cut…ok thana…satz ok va..thanks ya…ena oru miratal enaku..akka nu koopiduven nu..hhahah…love you too dear..stay happy..am so happy you liked it….

  14. Dipika

    Ohhhhhh jesssss my cute n lovely jb.. U rocked it darling.. AK version foe satz… Kya baat.. You just rocked ir.. Amazing yarrrrr…. Radz sending naughty msgs to satz.. N arjun’s soft behaviour.. Satz muhha emicon.. Her kissing him.. Lol. So naturally written.. So our AK is going to hook up with satz.. But how he gonna do tht… Post soon darling.. Love u lots ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜

    1. Jessie

      JB…thanks a ton dear…next shot posted..loved your comment…hahh..am glad you loved it…
      Deepzz…thanks again…yep he willl…love you loads…TC

  15. Sreee

    Akka.. wooooow…kalakiteenga ponga……god, am laughing hard… wooow, arjun sweeeeet anger bird…awwwwww.. rads bold act…wooow… satz akka, rockedddd in her role… AK..gosh he is dead man… sweeet akka..chooo chweeeeeet… their first moment was awesomeeeeeee…. that fighting scene was super…god these ladies….uffff.. that sending emoji’s part.. i was lauging hardd.. u write sooo awesome akkka.. muahhhh.. love u soo much.. next part soon…๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Jessie

      Hey Vaalu….una yengayo parthurukene…heheheh….sathya kaga vandhiya…super po…chella thank you so much dear….inga enga ma angry bird…avan olunga thana irukran…lol….satz rocked…ok…appada!! emoji a..thanks…these ladies..aaaa…appo…paapa yaaru!!! thanks a ton dear….am so happy you laughed and enjoyed….muahhh…love you too..next part posted..stay happy

  16. Sulbi

    Jazzzzz kutty…. this one was so unique and astonish…. loved it… OMG… Radz and Satz are so naughty and cripy…. They both were amazing…. Satz oh girl she played so cool…. AK for Satz… so lovely… Radhika’s Arjun angry man… haha… but gem of a person…. loved it dear… this one was so intresting and funny too… in shot 2 AK is gonna peep in Satz huz for falling in her feet to make him accept his proposal… wah wah… love to watch it… update soon baby… love you and tc ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Jessie

      Sulbi jaan…thanks a lot dear….glad you liked satz and radz combo…loved your sweet review….gem of a person..yea..he is….love you tons…TC…

    1. Jessie

      Thanks a lot Hema…TC…

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