Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part1 – Episode 9

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…Hope you all enjoyed last update,…This update will have some family as well as some light Ardhika moments,…I hope u all may enjoy this slow episode,…This update will be lengthy as I promised earlier,… As usual Ignore my grammatical errors here and there,…

Episode 9 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Radz was shocked seeing Sam and her ma,Dadaji,….But her frightened look vanished after hearing their convo,…Sam saw everyone and began,…
Sam: Awww!! Chasni,…U r here,…M searching you everywhere yaar,..Mala Aunty,Dadaji…U all came,How’s Darshan??…and Arjun,U also here???

Dadaji noticed Radz and Arjun’s tensed look,…Arjun smiled slightly to sam’s comments,Radz too felt uncomfortable as well as a bit relaxed…
Arjun, Before giving his explanation to sam was interrupted by Mala,

Mala: Haan Sam Beta,…We have nice darshan,…u all have dinner na???
Sam: No Aunty,…Just now,I was searching chasni for dinner,…& Arjun,From when you have been here??? I didn’t find you inside yaar,…I thought u already went home,…
Dadaji noticed Arjun’s tensed face began,
Dadaji: Harre Sam beta,…Why you all standing here?,..I already had arthritis pain,…I cant stand for long,..Shall we go inside,…
Sam:Oh! Sorry dadaji,…Come lets all have dinner,..Arjun,U too join us na,…
Arjun: No Sam,..I have to go,..Its already late,…
Mala: Arjun beta,…Please,have dinner and go beta,….
Arjun, who sighed no was compelled to have dinner with all by Dadaji,…
Dadaji: Arjun beta,you will accept my words na,…
Arjun: of course dadaji,…(said eyeing Radz,who also looked arjun silently)
Dadaji made arjun to accept his proposition,..
Dadaji: U can go home but ly after having dinner here,…This is dadaji’s order,…Ok Lets all go inside,…No more talks,…
Sam:hmmm Dadaji is correct,…Lets all go inside,…Chasni,Come,lets go,..

Saying so sam holds chasni and mala holds dadaji,…Arjun and Radz had Eyelock inbetween,…No one noticed them except Dadaji,…Everyone went inside and dilip too joined them a bit late,…Mala excused herself for few minutes to prepare dinner for everyone,…

Neil: yahoo!!Dadaji,..U all returned from temple,…
Dadaji: haan My little boy,…U too here,…
Neil began with his grumpy face ,…
Neil:M not little boy dadaji,…
Dadaji:Ya shut,…From now,You ly my little boy,..understand,…
Sam teased Neil along with Dadaji,…Everyone laughed amusingly except Arjun and Radhika,..Dadaji,who noticed their Tension began,

Dadaji: Choti,What happened to you? U r still silent,…
Radz: Dadaji,..Please,M feeling tired,..U ppl continue,..will join u all after few minutes,…

Saying so Radz tried to move was stopped by Sam,…
Sam: chasni,Stop yaar,..Have some food and medicine,…then,u take rest yaar,…Mala aunty already prepared food for you,..Wait,I will take and come,…& u ppl have fun,…I will be back,…

Saying so Sam went to Kitchen to take food for Radz,…Everyone seated and had fun again except Ardhika,…Dadaji broke their eye contact by calling Arjun,..
Dadaji: Arjun beta,What your parents doing???
Radz turned towards arjun and listened him keenly,…
Arjun: I have no parents dadaji,…M all alone in this world,…I was bought up in an Orphanage and did my graduation in London thru scholarship,…
Dilip: Oh! Don’t worry beta,…When U saved my choti na,that day itself U also became one of our family,…We are liable to you for saving our soul beta,…consider us as your family,…
Arjun:thank you uncle,..(arjun smiled hearing this)

Meanwhile Sam asked Radz to eat and she herself feed her chasni which makes everyone there to overwhelm by their friendship,….
Sam:Chasni, common yaar,…Have this,….
Radz: No Sam,..I didn’t like to eat now,..please
Sam: chalo,…I will feed u,…Don’t talk,…just eat or else I wont give your Fav Dairy Milk,…

Radz smiled hearing sam’s words and agrees to eat,..Neil was happy seeing both the girls affection,..Arjun also had unknown smile on his face seeing Radz,..Dadaji noticed both Neil and Arjun,…Meantime, Mala prepared dinner for all ,…Parata and sabsi,…Neil offered help to mala to arrange dinner,…All were set to have dinner like a whole family,…Radz,who had her dinner went to her room to take rest,…Sam also joined Neil in helping mala,..While helping mala,sam accidently poured sabsi on Arjun cox of neil’s antics,…

Dilip: Harrre Arjun beta,…Ur shirt,….
Sam: Idiot, You cant do single work properly,….See,Cox of you I poured Hot Gravy on Arjun,….
Neil: What I did?Its all your fault Sammy,..Ask Arjun itself,…Arjun,U tell me yaar,..
Arjun: Its ok,..Leave It,..I will wash and come,..U all carry on,…& sam, Where is washroom ?
Sam: There Arjun,…Sorry Arjun,…
Arjun: Its ok,…

Saying so Arjun walked towards Wash Room inside Sam-Radz Bedroom to clean the strains on his shirt,…Whereas Radz,who dressed in Her Maroon Tops and Pyjamas tried to apply ointment on her abdomen puts it down by mistake,…She slowly kneels down and tries to take it which was under the cot,…Arjun,who didn’t noticed this entered the room and closed it with a thud,…Radz felt relaxed hearing the footsteps as she thot sam ly came inside was highly disappointed to see Arjun entering the washroom,… Seeing Arjun there,Radz was shocked and decided to go out of the room before he comes out,..She stood suddenly in an hurry which caused severe pain in her abdomen,…She couldn’t stop herself from screaming due to the pain,…Arjun,who came out of the washroom saw Radz screaming in pain holding the Bed rushed towards her to help her,…
He gently hold Radz shoulder and lifts her up to stand and began,

Arjun:Radhika,…What Happened???,…

Radz,who rested her head on Arjun’s chest with support didn’t have any words to answer him,…Arjun gently made her sit on Bed by holding her waist,…They had an Intense eyelock in between,…(Background Music:Kawhishon pe likhi),…After seating Radz on bed,Arjun began

Arjun: Radhika,How’s it now? Shall I call Doctor??

Saying so,Arjun took his mobile to call doctor,…Radz hold arjun’s hand and started speaking slowly,…

Radz:Nothing sir,…I put my ointment down by mistake,…I tried to take it by myself and it hurts me,..I think,I ll b alright after taking rest,…So, no need to call doc,…
Arjun:Are you mad Radhika?,…I know you have little brain,…but cant you think,it will hurt your abdomen,…just 3 days before, your operation was done and you are behaving like an athlete,…Have you applied ointment on your wounds,…
Radz: No sir,…Its ok,I had medicines,..
Arjun:Where you put your ointment? Radhika,…
Radz:Under the cot, sir,….

Arjun bent down and took the ointment under the cot,…Then,He started reading the ointment’s name and opened the ointment cap,…Radz looked puzzled seeing this,…

Radz: Sir,What are you doing???
Arjun:Shhhhhh!!! You lay down Radhika,…
Radz:But Sir,…Why???

Saying so,Radz struggled due to pain,…Arjun lifted her suddenly with Ointment on his one hand made Radz shocked,…She clinches his shirt collar in pain and began

Radz: Sirrr,What you are doing??? Leave me down,…

As usual, Arjun ignored her words and put her slowly on the bed,…Radz swallowed in fear repeatedly uttered the same phrase, ’Sir, Leave me’ and turned her gaze away from arjun,…But,Here Arjun,who made her head rest on pillow slowly, even it’s for a few seconds, was literally couldn’t breathe ,His mind drew a blank, His throat, then tightened up like a coiled rope gripping around a suffocating neck,…He distanced himself from Radz by sitting beside her on the bed and slightly shakes his head in embracement,…After a few seconds break,He began,…

Arjun: Where is your wounds???Radhika,..
Radz : Means???
Arjun: Tell me where it is???Radhika,.Dont make me to shout,….
Radz: In my left abdomen,….
Arjun: Lift your Tops there, Radhika,…

Saying so Arjun turned other side holding the ointment in his hand,…Radz who understand what gonna happen next was extremely shocked and began

Radz: Sir,..What you gonna do?,…Please,I can apply it myself or Ma will apply,…Thanx for helping me,…
Arjun who faced Radz again began,
Arjun: Radhika, everyone outside were busy in eating,…So,its better if u Show your wounds,…I wont see anything,…
Radz: Sir,Please u go away from here,…I will do it myself,…Don’t argue with me sir,…
Arjun: Its ok,If You don’t show it then,I have to look it myself,…
Radz: But Sir,…I cant,…

Arjun tried to lift her tops was stopped by radz and radz tried to get up to stop arjun was again screamed in pain,…She was helpless and simply lie down on the bed due to severe pain and left Arjun’s hands too,…Arjun,who saw radz screaming in pain literally felt her pain and tried to put ointment on her wounds to make his ladylove free from her pain,…He made up his heart strongly not to divert in any thoughts slowly lifted her Maroon top,…His heart was racing faster seeing radhika’s waist slightly and he understood that he can’t do this,…He simply stood up closing her tops, kept the ointment on the bed near Radz and went out silently without uttering anything made Radz relieved,…She closed her eyes in a relief,…But Tears roll down from her eyes automatically,…

Here in Dinning Hall,Mala asked Sam about Arjun was interrupted by dadaji,…
Mala:Sam Beta,Where is Arjun?
Sam: Arjun went to washroom to wash the strains on his shirt Aunty,…
Mala:But,Choti is inside the room na and,..
Dadaji: Harre,..Mala,I need one more Paratha and also a glass of milk,…
Mala:haan Babuji,..Here all parathas over,…Wait a minute babuji,….

Saying so,Mala went inside to bring a glass of milk and parathas for dadaji,..At the same time, Sam,who was listening to Mala was distracted by neil,…

Neil: Sammy,Give me that sweet yaar,…You alone eating,Not Fair Sammy…I didn’t taste it till now yaar,…
Sam: Idiot,..I wont give you,…Its mine and mala aunty did it specially for me not for you stupid,…

Meanwhile Dadaji who was seated opposite to them saw Arjun coming out of Radz room with a tensed face,..He understood something is brewing between Arjun and his choti,…Arjun,who came to hall excused himself that he have to go now as its already late without expecting anyone’s reply left from there in a jiffy leaving everyone perplexed,…

After few hours,Mala went to give milk to her choti applied ointment on her wounds,… Dadaji asked sam and mala that today he wanna sleep in his choti’s room,..Sam and mala agreed for dadaji’s request and they slept in another room,… Radz lie down on the bed simply without sleeping wakeup hearing Dadaji’s voice over there,…Dadaji closed the door, switched on the lights and slowly came near his choti to clear all his doubts,…

Radz: Dadaji,What happened???
Dadaji: Choti,First you have to tell me all the truth,…
Radz: Truth??? Dadaji,…what you mean?I cant understand dadaji,..
Dadaji: Choti,Are you hiding anything from me about Arjun???
Radz: Dadaji,..Why are you asking this now suddenly at this hour??
Dadaji: Choti,Answer my question beta,..Tell me everything what you know about arjun,…

Radz was confused hearing dadaji’s non stop inquiries about arjun,…Screen freezes on Radz bewildered face,…

Precap: Arjun talking with someone on mobile, ’nothing like that, I had light headache now,…will talk to you later’

Credit to: Renu

31 comments

    • renu

      I think we all are sailing in the same boat dear,…

      Our wish will be fulfilled sooner by our almighty,….

  1. Todays epi is really very emotional…Both r strugge with their own emotions….. really nice…n dadajis move is to save his choti was excellent… simply great epi…liked aradhika moments…Thanks renu for such cute n sweet update..

  2. Manha

    What!!!what!what! Was it our arjun. Yaar i couldn’t believe my eyes. Really he is transforming into lover boy slowly. Oh god hw will i wait till then. Hmmm. U have to what else can be done. Today was just amazing. Everyone was just too gud. And our ardhika breathtaking. Itne saare eyelocks dekho dadaji ko shak hogaya na. Neil-dadaji-sam convo was very gud. Little boy. Radz plz apna dhyaan rakho warna arjun sir aa jayenge help karne ke liye. Haha. Sam n radz bond that is so special. It just enlightens. Renu u said u r nt gud in romantic scene. That was really a joke. Romantic scenes of ardhika. U stole my heart. Uff. Really superb.

    • renu

      thank you so much Manha,….

      Yes dear,…After cloth shop scene,…Ardhika started their convo thru eyes,….Wat i really like is what their eyes spoke which their mouth failed to speak at times,…

      They are good at their dialogues as well their silent convo (their Eyelocks),…

      & M glad you liked this update sweet heart,….

  3. renu

    Guys,…

    A small mistake,…

    Its ‘Right Abdomen’ and I mentioned it as ‘Left abdomen’ by mistake yaar,….

  4. Shree

    Cute update renu … That’s k left or right … It’s the abdomen ….

    Dada ji being such a detective!! Cute !! Update soon

    Love you loads … Tc .. Keep smiling ..

  5. Lakshmi

    Awesome episode renu.Arjun n radhika eyelocks .Arjun caring for rads and his struggling to hide his feelings for rads and rads confusion totally nice.Asusual amazing with ur writings renu .tc …

  6. Manha

    Yes renu u said it right. Their eyes spoke more than their words. It was a treat to watch them yaar. Just want ahamica back. U remember the scene before marriage. Arjun in his car n radz came to balcony sensing him. It was just fab. He watched her until she went in n she searched for him. N many more. Oh i badly need them to cme back together. Wish it could be true in anymeans.

    • aastha

      In poll zone tey askd abt our opinion f cntinung finshd serials……tey mentioned mmz …….if we want……ipkknd is already being aired twice a week in hotstar……..bt I dnt know hw 2 watch it…….

  7. Hareem

    Heyyyy Renu dear …fantaaaaaastic epi
    Loved it to d core…

    Loved dadaji part…behaving like a detective…

    Love u loadz

  8. ameena

    renu….it’s amazing….I’m totally loving it…aradhika scenes r just amazing…loved it to the core….update the next part soon…love u 4ever…

    One loveeeeeeee

  9. daizy

    hey renu…..i m loving ur story very much…….i really wish the story would have gone the way u write……arjun-rads are alive still in ur minds…..and hey why u said u r not good at describing romantic scenes…..but u write it so well……arjun turned into a lover boy…getting jealous,possessive…..loving neil-sam and neil-rads bond too….eagerly waiting for what u going to write next……come soon dear with next update……

  10. renu

    Thank you friends for taking out time to read this FF,..

    M glad that this update made most of u ppl wanting for MMz 2,…Really I too want MMz badly guys,…

    Though this series ends in just 4 months and Ardhika for ly 2 months but Our longing for it never fades and it increases day by day,…

    I hope that this FF Missing pieces will justify our longing for a while,…

    Thank you guys for all your Encouraging,…

  11. manha

    renu we hav to say thanks to u dear. u r showing the real mmz which we missed. like really atleast now they realize our craziness n start the show again. then i will be on cloud nine. just wishing n praying. i hope one day this dream will come true. ufffffffff. no boundaries for my dreams.

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