Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part1 – Episode 8

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Friends,I already told u all that I’m Bad in writing romantic scenes,..But,When,It comes to Ardhika(first Reel pair,whom I fallen in love with),I couldn’t stop myself to write sth about them, So, I tried some Private contending Romantic moments between them,…I hope you guys will enjoy this Ride, As In this Missing Pieces, I felt, We missed Ardhika moments too after Radz accident in lonovla,…Further, I used some flash back (FB) scenes of previous episodes,… As usual, Ignore my Grammatical errors here and there,…

Episode 8 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Radz was standing alone in the front porch of the balcony holding the Parapet reminiscing her papa’s words about accident (FB:Epi 5-Last part) and her situation which makes her to lie to her papa hurts Radz a lot,…She Felt the depth of pain caused by her lie to her papa, which brought tears of guilty from her beautiful eyes,…Arjun,who came out in search of Radz noticed Radz tears,..He became restless seeing her tears continues his banter,…

Arjun:Why you are standing alone radhika,.. leaving your Neil inside?,…

Hearing Arjun’s words, Radz wiped her tears and tries to ignore him by turning her back towards him,…But, Arjun continues his ranting,…
Arjun: Is it Raining,Radhika???

Arjun waved his hands outside to check the rain droplets,…
Arjun: I think,..Its gonna rain,…

Radhika was annoyed much by arjun’s presence tries to avoid him,..turned towards him and starts speaking in a lower tone,..
Radz:Sir,Please,…Leave me alone,…

Arjun: I feel some rain droplets flashing somewhere,…But, dunno from where its coming???,…as sky too looks clearer,… Its time for me to leave from here na,…so, I am worrying,….

Radz:There is no rain here sir,..U can go sir,…
Arjun:No radhika,Its coming from U,…
Radz:from me???Means???
Arjun: I found rain drops from the storm inside u,Radhika,…

Radz wiped her face and tugged her hair behind,…she began,
Radz:Now, There will be no rain sir,…U can go to your home without any worries,…

Arjun holds radz shoulder on one hand and radz chin on his other hand, asked her the reason for her tears,…
Arjun: Radhika,Tell me what’s bothering You??? R u going back to Hrishikesh tomorrow along with your parents???

Radz took away arjun’s hand from her chin and began,
Radz:Why?sir,…Why u wanna know about my worries???,…Whether, I going back to Hrishikesh or staying here, What difference it will make to u?,…Tell me sir,…Don’t bow down ur head sir,…Face me,Sir…U only asked me na,…Now,M ready to answer u,…Before that,U need to answer me Sir,…

Arjun turned sideways and hold the parapet in frustration,…Radz hold Arjun’s shoulder smirkingly and turned him towards her,…She bombards him with her questions,…

Radz:What sir???U dint have any answer for my question,…I din start questioning u sir,..I just asked u a simple question that, Why u need to know about my personal?Sir,…You only told me na,that Its not good to intervene in other’s personal,….Now, Its good if u stick on ur own words Sir,…

Saying so,Radz tried to go inside was stopped by arjun,..Arjun holds Radz arms and pulled her towards him,…Both had Intense eyelock during their entire convo,…Then,He began,

Arjun:Oh!!!It looks like u had someone to share ur personal,…Then, Why u wasting time here??? Go,..Your love might be waiting for u to hear your tears,…

Radz tries to free herself from Arjun’s hold and replied him with her furious Expressive Eyes,

Radz: I don’t need anyone to share anything in personal and if u mind your own business, It will be good for you sir,…Now,Leave me,…
Arjun: I think now you are acting like nothing happened,Radhika,…Oh!!That’s the power of your love,right???,…Where is your love when you are in pain???
Radz:Stop your nonsense sir,…I didn’t love anyone,…Just leave me,sir,…

Radz tried hard to pull arjun’s strong hold on her arms,…Hearing this,Arjun left Radz arms,…Radz,After freeing herself from Arjun tries to go inside was stopped by sudden pain at her Abdomen,…

Radz:Ouch!!!
Radz screamed in pain holding her upper abdomen,…Arjun felt uneasy seeing her in pain,holds her shoulder gently and begin,

Arjun:Is it paining heavily?,…come lets go inside,…& Why u r risking urself Radhika?

Radz, who saw short glimpse of Arjun’s affection was again confused and asked him her doubt straightaway,…,.

Radz: Sir,I am seeing your goodness again and again,…Then Why are you pretending yourself as an Impolite person before others,…Why sir???,…Whatever you try hard to hide yourself from this world,..But,My Keen observance will never fail sir,…U cant hide ur trueself from me sir,..
Arjun:No Radhika,…U r wrong again,…I already said na,..I am not a good person,…
Radz:Sir,..Please,Stop saying that you r not a good person repeatedly,..It hurts my Ear more than my pain in abdomen,…Now,you have to change this line,…I will decide afterwards that you are good or bad,…

Saying so,Radz smiled on arjun friendly,…Arjun lost his thoughts completely while looking at Radz Beautiful Eyes,…at that moment,He felt that he saw everything which he needed all his life in Radz Eyes…Even It made him crazy looking down into her beautiful eyes and at her creamy soft skin,Knowing he couldn’t touch her,.. (Background Music: Kawhishon Pe likhi)

Whereas Neil and Sam after breaking their Hug had a sweet talk about their chasni,…

Sam: Idiot,what’s the time now????,…Mala Aunty instructed me to give chasni food and medicines on time,…If we din remember her means,She will never take medicines on her own,…

Neil smiled at sam hearing her concern for her best friend chasni,…
Neil: Its 8.30 PM,…I think so,…Sam,Its nice to see you like this yaar,…

Saying so,Neil caressed Sam’s cheeks lovingly,…
Sam: Ok Idiot,I have to take food and medicine for this pagal,…Or else,she will sleep without having any,…
Neil: When chasni’s parents and dadaji are returning from temple yaar,…its already late Sammy,…
Sam:Mala Aunty informed me that they will come around 9.00 yaar,…U don’t be tensed..& Idiot,..please complete the remaining works yaar,…I wanna call this chasni,…Where is she???
Neil: Dunno sam,…May be she is sleeping,…
Sam:Ok,..U carry on,…I will look for her,…
Saying so,Sam went in search of radz,…

Meanwhile,..Dadaji,Dilip and mala reached home in a cab after a nice seva darshan in Lord Siddhi vinayak Temple,….Dilip was busy in settling money to the Taxi driver,…whereas Mala and dadaji reached near steps,…But,Dadaji had pain in his Articulation joint while climbing the steps,..So,Mala helped him to climb slowly,…

Here at balcony,…

Radz broke her eyelock deliberately signing him to go inside,…Arjun came out of his trance left radz hands rudely,…Radz was perplexed again by his strange behaviour towards her,… Holding her abdomen and began,

Radz:Why sir??? I was bored asking you this same question repeatedly,…Still, I didn’t get proper answer for my question,…Tell me sir,..Why U r behaving with me like this???,…turn this side sir,…Answer me,…

Arjun:what,You need answer from me na???

Saying so,Arjun turned towards Radz,..Pinned her against the wall in a jiffy holding her arms tightly,…A Passionate Intense burning Eyelock follows,…Arjun leans in close to her,…his Eyes followed her lips,…Both could hear other’s breathe but they cant hear the intensity of their Breathe,…Radz couldn’t tolerate the intensity of their proximity, shivered with anticipation closed her eyes and clinches her long Brown Sleeveless Maxi,…Suddenly,they are aware of their physical proximity and intimacy as Arjun’s hands clasped into her’s and Their lips were barely an inch apart,..And at the last minute, Radz in Fear uttered ‘Sir’,…

Radz: Sirrrr,…

Arjun after hearing Radz call, slowly distanced himself from Radz and saw her with his hungry eyes was pulled away by radz strongly made arjun to free his hold on her Arms,…Arjun,who came out of his trances was shocked on his acts,..he cant believe himself that ,what he gonna do a few seconds back, turned his back towards Radz and hold the Parapet tightly to lighten his heavy breathe,… At the same time,Radz opened her eyes slowly had tears filled eyes,..She rest on the wall to gain her lost strength,…This was the second time,she is experiencing the same feeling cox of Arjun which she never felt in her life time before,…

Before making her normal from this unknown feelings which aroused a few minutes back , an extreme shock prevailed her face seeing Sam on her Right and her ma,Dadaji on her left,…

Precap: Dadaji asked Radz,’Choti,Are you hiding anything from me regarding Arjun?’

Credit to: Renu

31 comments

  1. Lakshmi

    Arjun can’t see rads in tears so he will do anything to divert her from that and make her smile either with his banters or any other thing. Ardhika convo is really cute with arjun jealous and rads annoyed. Arjun couldn’t control his feelings for rads and rads couldn’t tolerate his proximity with unknown feelings she didn’t felt in her entire life. Sam caring for rads is really nice. I think they didn’t see them like that and dadaji’s question to rads about arjun really interesting ..U explained every feeling of them very nicely without losing original content of their characters in the serial and continue with ur fabulous work .Eagerly waiting for next update. Take care dear.. Love u renu…

  2. rasha

    Hai renu.ths is gng really nice dear.and ur are updating every episode so fast which is really happy and gu at read.really missing these wonderful scenes.u r dng really well.god bless u.

  3. Manha

    I’m cmpltly flat. U r genius. Mmz is the only show i hav seen where every dialogue steals my heart. Whenever i see them i feel to see more n more. And u chose 2 fav scenes n u attached them with one another so well. Cv’s n writers hats off. I loved them so much. Actually i cannot say more abt them as one is deep intense eyelock with proximity n the other one heart touching caring scene where the dialogue was just amazing. And arjun’s jealousy adds more spice to it. Superb. Superb. Superb. I’m seeing old scene to new scene transformation. N i’m more excited. Renu with this u raised my enthusiasm to another level. N i know u r the best. So i am just waiting for next epi.

    • renu

      thank you Manha dear,…

      Actually,i changed many plots in the original series without changing the original story line,…so,some of good old scenes may be missed,…So,i added them in some episodes according to my plot dear,..m glad it worked well,…

  4. Manha

    And now song of the day.

    Nafraton mein mili
    tu mujhe iss tarah
    dil yeh sambhal na sakaa
    Teri baaton mein hai
    ajab sa nasha
    badli yeh manmarziyan

    daastaan ek nayi….

    Khwaaishon pe likhi
    dil ki yeh arziyaan
    kaisi yeh manmarziyaan
    Daastaan ek nayi
    khwaabon pe saji
    bekaid manmarziyaan

    daastaan ek nayi….

    Enjoy the superhit song of the year for me atleast.

  5. nisha

    I always love u renu and this scene is marvelous dera. wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.

    I love arjun and radz convo and with the old essence of the scene and the characters itself you make it perfect dear.

    love u a lot keep updating

    waiting for next epi eagerly.

    Keep smiling

    once a friend always a friend.

  6. Shree

    Renu!! Cute update dear….. Arjun sooo jealous?! He just can’t see er in tears.. Precap seems to be interesting. Update soon.. Love you loads … Tc.. Keep smiling….. Bear hug

  7. Roma

    O my renu dearrrrr, awesoooooome, marvellous, outstanding episode…I’m loving this love ride very very much…arjun’s jealousy, his taunts n rads heated questions as she can clearly see his goodness even he is trying hard to hide it…uffff their intense eyelock…rads can’t handle his proximity n arjun can’t see her in tears…can’t control himself to get lost in her beautiful eyes…I’m totally addicted to it…n the image of ardhika you uploaded with this part is my favorite one(the lift scene)…adding more spice in this sizzling chemistry…nesam were very cute n caring for our chashni…precap is very interesting…dadaji is awesome as always…keep it up buddyyy, I’m enjoying this ride very much n appreciate your time and energy you’re putting into create it just for us…thx honeyyy for these missing parts which are the soul of this marvellous story…anxiously waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug, muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂 🙂 🙂 ♡♡♡ ☆☆☆

    • renu

      Thank you soooooooooo much Roma deary,…

      Actually I love all your comments in each episodes,..You know y,…Sometimes,I have some doubts whether my imaginary thots are put up well in the narration,the same way i feel,..I.e.,whether,U guys feel the same thing which i felt,…

      I will be pleased ly after reading your comments dear,..Ur words resembles my thots and clears my doubts deary,..

      Love u a lot,..

      • Roma

        Hi renu dearrrry, we all love our lovey dovey ardhika soooooooo muchhhhhh…n I also have a huge gut feeling that each one us mad for this couple…n feel exactly same as you do for their passionate love…so plzzzz do your manmarzian n keep writing your heart out via beautiful scenes between this couple and others as well…I love you loads for your hard work, thx my sweeeeeet friend, eagerly waiting for the next episode, take care sweetie, muaaaaahhhhhh

  8. aastha

    Oh I lvd it………..ardhika ws cute………..
    did dadaji,mala n sam see anything tat hppnd btw ardhika??????????lvd dadaji ‘s question…..

  9. wow…ita marvlous yarrr
    ..Renu how would u say that ur not good at writing romantic scene….its suvh beautifully written…10 out of 10….m such immerse in ths epi that could feel there heat…..n m too crazy abt this couple yarrrr…..Renu u having an amazing talent to just stitches the missing part in manmarziyan….for this epi…lots of kissesss for u….

    • renu

      Dipika,…Deary,…thanx a lot dear,…

      Love u too,…I doubted a lot,whether i could put up all in words,…As its my first FF and first romantic narration,…

      M glad deary,…U liked it,…

  10. Shub

    Renu,fantastic episode. Loved the scene where arjun queries about rain. Good script. Waiting for moment radz will realise this under current!! Fabulous update!! We are reliving manmarzian!!

  11. roshini

    Renu I really like your idea about Neil and Radhika’ s friendship… coz he is actually a sensible soul who does not believe anything blindly…I guess writers shd have thought about what you are writing here.

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