Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part1 – Episode 7

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…This update will have more Nesam Scenes and next update will be more of our Ardhika,…Hope you guys will enjoy this ride,… Last note,…Sorry guys,This update will be slightly shorter than previous updates,…But Next update will be lengthy as I promised,…As usual, Ignore my Grammatical mistakes here and there,…

Episode 7 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Arjun yelled Sam’s Name loudly made everyone to listen him including Radz and Neil,…Sam asked Arjun, the reason for his loud call with a confused face,…

Sam: Arjun???
Arjun after looking at Sam started,
Arjun: I hope everyone here knows that the purpose of this get together is to complete our Assignment by today,.. (Said angrily eyeing at Radz)
Neil: Ya Arjun,…Of course, We all knew yaar,…In fact, If I am not wrong, We are working on our assignments only.Now what’s your problem in that???

Teji,Zubin and krithika also looked at each other confused,..Sam just saw Radz puzzlingly, who also didn’t catch Arjun’s turbulence at that moment. Arjun, who didn’t want to hear anything from his opponent turned towards Sam and started,

Arjun:I suspect more gossips here rather than work done,…. (said this, while staring Neil with his burning eyes),..
Sam: But Arjun,I couldn’t figure anything like that yaar,…We all are seriously engaged in our assignments,…

Arjun ignored Sam’s sayings turned towards Teji Gang and started assigning works to everyone,..
Arjun: Teji,U come here,…U and neil will work on Themes for the Pamphlets,…Sam,..U,Zubin and Krithika work on outer designs for the pamphlet,…And Radhika,U write Suitable quotes for this Pamphlet just keeping the Ad’s concept alone in your mind,…(Arjun said this in a sarcastic manner),… From now,Work will be according to my commands,…
Neil: But Arjun, Me and chasni already started writing quotes yaar,..& sam too Partially completed her Outward designs,….Teji,Zubin and krithika were already gathered necessary themes to be used for this Pamphlet,..Just we all need a final touch in this,…Nothing Else,..If u just inform us, What changes to be needed in our work,..We will alter the things accordingly,…

Arjun: I don’t wanna hear anything,..Work will be done according to my orders as I am your boss,…I hope if u ppl understand this sooner, It will be good for u all ,… No more questions,..Get back to work,…

Saying so,Arjun seated with an evil smirk on his face poking his mobile silently,…Sam too din like arjun’s attitude towards her friends,..Radz dinn utter anything,…But, Neil was bit annoyed at Arjun’s commands and rude behaviour,…He tried to oppose arjun but remained silent by Sam’s Request,….

Sam: Neil,..Please,Leave this na,…Don’t make it a issue yaar,…We will work according to arjun’s sayings,…Please, for me,…
Neil: How can I? Sammy,…It’s Boss Order,…We have to follow na,…I understood yaar,…Not a big deal,…U don’t worry,…Teji, come yaar,.. lets start our work,…

Saying so,Neil too left sam confused,…The entire gang were working silently as per Arjun’s Instructions,..Radz was busy in writing attractive quotes,…But Arjun was busy in watching his ladylove’s every moments,…After a while,Teji gang came to Arjun and asked his permission to leave as they completed 75% of their work,…Arjun allowed them to leave,…Sam informed arjun that she & neil will complete the remaining work,…Arjun accepted her proposition,…Finally they started leaving biding goodbye to everyone,…Radz,who also went out to bid good bye to them stood silently in the balcony for a few minutes lost somewhere in her own thoughts,…Arjun also came outside in search of Radz,…

At the Same time,Neil was working silently on the themes was interrupted by Sam,…

Sam: Idiot,…One minute,..Turn this side yaar,…
Saying so,Sam turned neils chin towards her,…
Sam: I know u r angry on Arjun,…And U know na,this Arjun is always like this,…But,He is something Neil,..That draws me towards him,…I dunno what it is,…
Neil felt a bit hurt Seeing Love for Arjun in Sam’s Eyes,…But he din showed it to her,… He holds Sam’s cheeks lovingly and started,
Neil: No Sam,I din get angry on Arjun,…Your Happiness is mine’s Dear,…U are happy with Arjun na,..then there will b no problem for me,..So,You don’t worry much about this,…I just over reacted for pineapple’s commands, sammendher singh,…

With that Neil made sam smile by his funny comments,….Then he starts to continue his work, was again interrupted by Sam,…And Sam, this time started with an hesitation,…

Sam:Idiot,….
Neil responds her while working,…
Neil: Hmmm tell Sammy,…
Sam: Nothing Neil,….I wanna ask u something,…
Neil: Hmmm proceed,…
Sam:Idiot,…Listen to me na,…
Neil turned towards sam and started,..
Neil: Now what? Sammy,…
Sam asked neil her Doubt hesitatingly,…
Sam: U have to answer me truly,….OK,…
Neil: Ok Yaar,…What’s your doubt?,…& why u r behaving differently yaar???
Sam: Who is your Best friend?
Neil: What’s this stupid question??? U disturbed me to ask this silly question?
Neil again started his work,…
Sam:Idiot, Answer me now,…please, face me yaar,…
Neil:You only my all time Best friend,…Ok,Tell me y r u asking this now???
Sam: Nothing,…Then chasni,…
Neil laughed at sam hearing her words,..
Neil: Sammy,…What happened to you yaar???,….Chasni is our best friend,…
Sam: No,Tell me neil,…Who is your One Best friend?,…Me or chasni,…
Neil:Sammy,I dunno why are u asking these questions suddenly,….U r my Soul,…I will do anything for u Sam,…& chasni is also my Best Friend yaar,…I cant differentiate u both,…U both are like my eyes,…
Sam: Neil,…I know chasni is our Best friend but,…

Neil stopped Sam by putting his fingers on sam’s mouth and started clearing her doubts,…

Neil: Sammy,Please don’t come into any conclusion without knowing about anything completely,..Chasni is really a nice girl sam,…She is so selfless and she will do anything for her loved ones,..She loves u more than I do Sam,..Whatever I Gift her or gave some surprises,…Its very less before her love for you sam,…I saw true affection for you from her eyes Sammy,…Its difficult to get a friend like her Sammy,…I think,We are gifted to get a friend like her sam,….Please,Don’t ask such questions before chasni,…It will hurt her badly,….Already she is in pain,…Don’t cause her much more pain Sammy,…

Saying so Neil stood up to leave,…Sam holds neil’s hand and apologize to neil,

Sam:Idiot,…Sorry,…I didn’t mean to say anything against chasni,….I knew her,…Truly I got my mom back ly after her entry in my life,…U r right,..M really gifted to have a friend like chasni,…I just wanna knew whether chasni is ur Best friend,..& M really sorry to ask such question neil,…U both are my Best friends,…I was stupid neil,…How could I think like that,…Please forgive me idiot,…
Neil: Its ok Sammy,…Don’t be so tensed yaar,…Its nothing,…We three are friends now and ever in our life and no one can separate us even your Pineapple,…

Sam sighed in acknowledgement to Neil’s comment and both had a tight warm hug,…(Background music: Teri meri Dosti )

Precap: Arjun pinned Radz against the wall and their lips were barely an inch apart,….

Credit to: Renu

24 comments

  1. Manha

    Uff. Arjun u r making me laugh with ur jealousy. Itna gussa kis liye. Neil the super cool dude, u r amazing. Sam plz understand his true feelings yaar. Y u always hav to end up at arjun. Nesam convo was gud. Yes i too wish ur trio frndship will be ever without any prob. Neil telling abt radz but i thought it was renu speaking there. Really the writer leaves her presence in her story. I loved it.

    • Roma

      Hey manha dear, my lovely friend, how are you feeling now? Take care sweetie and have a great day. ..love you loads and very tight hug, muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡

    • renu

      Thanx a lot buddy,…

      I didnt like to write sth to make neil hurt,…But,what to do?….I was stuck in Sam’s Original characterization,…So,i made up my mind to cause less pain to neil than we saw in original MMz,….

      Ur words of my presence in this update brought tears in my eyes deary,….Love u sweetheart,…

  2. Roma

    Wowwww, what a blasting episode…arjun’s eyes burning in jealousy n anger, ordering everyone his commands like a strict armyman…wohhh…can’t control his emotions…nesam convo very cute, Sam getting jealous of raneil’s friendship n Neil’s reaction to it n his words mind blowing, you both r my eyes, what a dialogue yaar…bravo…n precap breath taking, very excited for upcoming episodes n missing parts of this epic piece of art…loving it like crazyyyyy…eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads, muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡

  3. Lakshmi

    Amazing episode… Arjun’s jealousy, nesam convo totally very nice and cute.. Eagerly waiting for next update.

  4. Rennnnuuu today Neil stole the show…He is such an extra ordinary character… n how beautiful discribe abt chasani was fantastic….n ur precap wow…m eager to read nxt epi..having romance of our love birds….love u dear

  5. DËVGÃ

    Awwww soooo cute neisam moments…. I think while hug , Neil had tears in his eyes ….
    Teriii…. Meriiii ….. Dostiiiii …… Yaarrriyaaan… Manmarziyaaaan ……

    NEISAM MOMENTS ARE THE HEART BEATS OF THIS EPI ……

    Wat a song…. Fab …. Just fab ….

    Oh ho Arjun naughty angry bird ….

    Kadva pineapple with sweetness been mixing slowly …..

    Thank u yaar renu for bringing these names here …… I truly missed these names :
    PiNeApplE. …… AppLe ….. OrAnGe ….. Of course ChAShNi ……

    Wonderful epi …. Specially the
    PRECAP IS THE SOUL OF THIS EPI …..

    kwaishoon ….. Mein ….. Milli …. Thu …. Mujee …. Iss …. Tarah ……. ( dnt knw whether this lyrics is correct 😛 😉 ) .. . ..

    • renu

      Devga,…My friend,…

      U know,I erased those lines what u said about neil,…

      I dinn like Neil crying for Sam always,…I want him to be normal with his cool attitude,…

      & its ‘Navrathon ‘ mein milli,…tu muje iss tarah,…LOL

      & in last episode,U gave tips to create DP na,…then ly,I rem that I used this mail while posting comments in Dtb a few months back,…So,I used the same here,…& this is my fav DP dear,…I hardly change this,…Nearly 5 years,I used same Profile pic for my Email-id,…LOL,….

      • renu

        Deiva,…Its Jhansi Ki rani ‘Lakshmi Bai’

        I admire her a lot right from my childhood,…I used to collect many information about her in my childhood and so this is my fav DP,…

        I had original Rani’s Photo Taken By Sir Huge Rose,…

        I started watching Hindi serial ly cox of Rani lakshmi Bai,…LOL,…I saw Jhansi Ki rani serial Few years back,…After its closure,I didnt pay attention to any daily soaps,…MMz is the one which attracts me especially Ardhika and also made me a crazy fan,..LOL,…

  6. renu

    @Thena,…

    Oh my sweetheart,..So, nice of u dear,….Seriously I had tears while reading ur comment in the previous episode,..U rem what i said few months back,…u touched my heart deary,….

    Love u a lot deary,…My exams over,…It was quite tough,…Dunno,..What’s in my fate,…So,M preparing for next exams in January now dear,..& my ly entertainment is make u all enjoyable by reminiscing wonderful moments and adding some Missing scenes to our original MMz series,….

    & Miss u too dear,…Take care yaar,…

  7. DËVGÃ

    Yup actually I typed nafraton mein mili tu muje iss tarah …. But also I typed kwayishon pe liki dhil ki yeh arziyan …. But some how got mismatched …. Anyways thank u for correcting it ….

  8. nisha

    Hey renuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu dear I loved ur narration a lot dera.

    I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee arjun jealous ooopoooooooppppppppppppppppppppppppps because of neil soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.

    Love u always renu you are seriously lovable dear.

    and yaa dera I love the pic dear Its devi maa on the horse do tell dear I know its god pic but which it is difficult to guess tell us whenever you read.

    • renu

      Nisha,..My sweet heart,…Love u tooooooooo,….Thank u sooooooooo much,….

      I already replied to Devga’s comment,…

      Its Rani Lakshmi bai’s Dp,…Its my default Dp In all my profiles,Email Id,….But in Twitter,I use original Rani’s Pic,…

  9. Shree

    Hi renu!! I loved the update.. Arjun’s getting too jealous .. It’s nice to imagine … And pineapple !! Lol , that moment was just too good … Keep posting … Love you loads.. Tc .. Keep smiling

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