Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part1 – Episode 6

Hiiiiiiii Friends,…This Episode may look slightly bored but I hope u all will enjoy another Slow Ride of this Missing Pieces,…As usual Ignore my Grammatical Errors here and there,…I hope u never mind it,…

Episode 6 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Radz:Papa,..I said na,..I am perfectly alright,…So,u don’t be tensed papa,…Doctor said after 2 days,I can walk normally,…I will do whatever you want me to do papa,..U r important to me more than my dreams papa,…But,…
Dilip:Choti,I said my decision already regarding this,..So,U get ready for tomorrow’s journey to Hrishikesh,…

Saying so Dilip went to his room leaving Radz worried,…Dadaji,who saw this sat near his choti and hugged her to give assurance as well as needed strength to his choti,..

Dadaji:choti,Y r u crying now?,…Hearing your father’s decision???,…
Radz: No dadaji,…I felt that today for the first time in my life, I hide truth from Papa dadaji,…& this 6 months are more important to me dadaji,…I have less time to live my dream like a Butterfly dadaji,…
Dadaji:U hide about Arjun from Dilip right???,…

Arjun,who was listening everything at doorsteps watched Radz keenly,…Radz looked at her dadaji with tears hugged him back and started confessing,..

Radz:Dadaji,U know about papa already na,…If he found, I was alone with Arjun Sir in lonovla,..Then,He might have been hurt badly dadaji,…& I don’t want to hurt my papa at any cost Dadaji,…I came to Mumbai to live my dreams and wanna show my achievements to this world in these 6 months Dadaji,…
Dadaji wiping his choti’s tears,..started assuring his choti,…
Dadaji:Choti,Don’t let anyone steal your dreams beta,..Follow your heart,No matter what might happen,….I will handle Dilip,…u r not going anywhere till you achieve your dreams beta,…
Radz:But how Dadaji???
Dadaji:He is father of u but I am father of your father,…

Dadaji laughed out loudly and cuddled his choti in assurance,…Arjun,who looking this silently forgot himself before their strong affectionate bond,…Right then,Teji and his gang entered inside with a bang,…

Teji,zubin and Krithika: We also came to work,…

Was stopped seeing Arjun standing there,…Radz and her Dadaji broke their hug and Radz was happy to see them here,…Neil and Sam too joined them,…

Teji: Chasni,How r u now???
Radz: fine teji,…What, you all are here???,…

Radz looked puzzled and saw sam to get answer for her puzzle,…Sam answered her with a grin,..

Sam: We all gonna work together with you on Maybeline Newyork account here in our flat,…

Hearing this, Radz had a big smile on her face forgetting everything happened before their arrival,…

Neil: And chasni,…I told u na,…I had one surprise for you,…That surprise is,…

Neil took some gift wrapped box from his pocket and hand over it to Dadaji,…Everyone there were puzzled including Dadaji,…

Dadaji: what’s this beta???,…Y r u giving this to me???,…
Neil: wait Dadaji,..Open the gift now and then give this gift to chasni,..there will be a nice surprise in this,…

Dadaji still looked puzzled tries to open the gift wrappers ,…Sam helped dadaji to open the gift,…Finally everyone got answer,…It was a beautiful black silver coated Smart phone,…

Neil:Chasni,You lost your mobile which dadaji gifted to you na,…So,You gonna get back your same no more than that of your old mobile’s love from your dadaji to you thru this mobile with latest features and that too from your Dadaji’s hand,…wohoo!!!

Radz eyes were filled with tears of gratitude for her friend,..Sam too felt somewhat uncomfortable along with our superhero Arjun,…Arjun almost ripped the hanky from his pocket into many pieces seeing this,…He dunno that he had to witness more from now onwards,…(Author’s note:Arjun, please save some pieces of cloth for future, U need a lot)

Later, Dadaji gave the Neil’s New Branded Mobile to his choti and hugged her back,…Further Dadaji who saw the real affection from Neil for his choti was overwhelmed by their Friendship kissed Neil’s forehead in return,…Arjun was hyper tensed seeing this and he decided to leave from there was stopped by MAla,…

Mala:Arjun beta,where are u going?,…I prepared Evening Tiffin for u all,..Have some beta,..

Arjun cant explain his state to anyone, simply nodded yes,…Everyone started enjoying their Evening tiffin except arjun,whose eyes were turned blood red as it has capacity to burn anything at that moment,…It was fixed on Radz and Neil,…He didn’t start eating rather he was busy in throwing deadly stares on Neil,who was busy with his chasni and his love sam,…Radz,who also enjoying her moments with her friends turned towards arjun accidently witnessed arjun’s angry glares,… Those unearthly eyes were so intense, she could see the reflection of her own furious expression in their depths.It was broken by Dilip’s sound call,…

Dilip,who came to Hall informed everyone that Mala,Dadaji and himself gonna attend a Puja In lord siddhivinayak temple as they prayed for choti’s safety,..So,its time for them to start now as Puja will start at 7.00PM,…Arjun offered help,..But Dilip informed him that they already booked Call taxi,..So,Asked all of them to concentrate in their work,…

Mala:Sam beta,..Please take care of choti na,..I think we will come after 9.00PM,..So,After dinner,Don’t forget to give medicines to choti,..She wont take medicines on time by herself,…
Sam: Aunty,..Dont worry,..I will take care of chasni,…PAkka,…And have Nice Darshan,…I think uncle and dadaji are waiting outside,….

Everyone including Radz after biding goodbye to them started their work on Designing pamphlets,…Arjun portrayed himself as busy in his mobile seated opposite to the Radz,who started writing quotes suitable for the pamphlets,…Sam was busy with Teji started drawing the outlines for the pamphlets,….Arjun checked radz every now and then,…

Neil came to radz and both the buddies have some sweet talks after a long time,…

Neil: Chasni,..Do you like this gift na???
Radz: Yes neil,..Infact, I was in cloud nine,..How do you know neil,..that my old mobile was gifted by dadaji,….
Neil: That doesn’t matter now chasni,…U like this mobile na,..that’s enough,…I knew something is bothering you after this accident,..Tell me what it is?
Radz: Nothing Neil,..Just Physical pain due to operation,..Nothing else,…

Saying so,Radz turned other side to avoid facing neil,..As she cant lie to her friend,…

Neil: No chasni,…There are wounds that never show on the body that are deeper and more hurtful than anything that bleeds out,… I wanna know, what’s that stopping you to share from me chasni,…U know one thing Chasni,The worst part of holding the memories is not the pain. It’s the loneliness of it. Those painful Memories need to be shared with someone,…

Radz after wiping her tears started speaking,…
Radz:Papa told me that tomorrow He is taking me back to Hrishikesh till my wounds are cured,..I don’t wanna go to hrishikesh now leaving you all,…
Neil: Oh!! This is your Problem,…Tomorrow U will go with them from here till Airport,…
Radz: After that,…
Neil:My chasni will b back to home with her friends after sending off ,…
Radz: But neil,…
Neil: Ok stop this now,…Leave all your worries for a while and My chasni should always smile like this,…

Saying so,Neil pinched Radz cheeks with a big smile on his face,…Arjun who saw this from Distance literally burnt in jealousy,…A flash of Dark Heat raced through him and he knew himself well enough to identify it as a dose of pure jealousy.

Precap: Sam asking Neil,..Whether she is his Best friend or Chasni is???

Credit to: Renu

45 comments

  1. Rg

    Renu its fantastic. I loved Sam’s and arjuns jealousy. Many wanted arjun to gift her a phone as he broke her phone. But this was icing on d cake as u made Neil gift her a phone tat too through dadaji hands giving it a sentimental value. Lovely update not at all boring. If possible plz give us slightly bigger episodes can’t get enough of it.

  2. aastha

    Glad tat Arjun is burning with jealousy at ne-rads friendship………………..y dd Sam feel uncomfortable wen niel gifted rads a mobile ??????????????????
    …..lovd tat niel hs soooo many values…tat s y he gave rads mobile through dadaji………he s also a gud frnd……………lvd dadaji-rads bond….i lvd tese lines in particular”he s te father f u bt I’m. hs father”……lvd niels confi tat rads ‘ll cme bck wth tem………
    . tanks 4 te update…..i only cme 2 know tat u r frm Chennai yesterday…..so r u all ri8?????hs te flood affected u so badly?????????anyway take care…………

  3. Renu u r doning that which writers also didnt did
    Ur showing awe SDK one friendship chemistry between neil and radz
    Which i waited to happen in serial

  4. Lakshmi

    Hi renu, episode was awesome. Loved Neil and rads friendship bond, his surprise, their convo.. Arjun jealousy and authors note totally nice. Get well soon, take care department.

  5. ❄ Ameena ❄

    Omg renu….I love this sooòoooooooooòoo much…jealous arjun…..waoooooo…plzzz update soon…..very sOOn…want to know what happens….this story is making me go wild n crazyyyyyyyy…..update soon…loveeeeee uuuuu…..???
    One lovee?

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  6. Hayathi

    Hey renu dr actually we miss all these incidents in our manmarzian…. but u made this buddy ur writting skills are awesome….. thannk u so much dr

  7. Manha

    Renu boring really dear. How can u even say like that. Superb one. Nw even sam started feeling jealous. She took neil for grant n their frndship too. Nw atleast something will change. Aaj kal arjun jitna jalta hi hame utna acha lagta hi. Pata nahi kyun par bahut kushi milti hi. B-)Author’s note was too gud. :-);-). Raneil bond was awesome. I loved it to the core. The gift seg was truly emotional. Are yaar kyun nahi ye sab dikhaya original me. :-(:-(. Loveee u so much. Thank u soo much. Tight hug.

    • renu

      Manha,…What u said about Sam is true dear,…She took everything for granted like Neil’s Friendship,…

      That’s y she couldnt find True love in NEil’s eyes,…

  8. Haha Sam and Arjun both r jealous of neil- radhu friendship. . . . .
    Very nice episode….. Awesome bondings dear ….

    Looking forward for next one

  9. Shree

    Wow !! Renu this is so nice !! Arjun going jealous .. Dada ji is just AWESOME!! We missed this in the telecast .. Loved the update .. Thank you so much !! Keep posting .. Love you loads .. Tc .. Keep smiling

  10. nisha

    Hey renu, how r u dera. Glad to know that you are taking rest and Gel well soon. Jaldi theek ho jao my sweetheart. and mom give u some medicine sounds really interesting Nilavembu hey very keen to know the meaning of this tell me whenever you read.

    I love the part very well arjun jealous wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow . and neil rads bond is awesome I am already in love the way you write since so early time.

    I love the emotions you develop in your story . Love u by heart.

    Keep smiling. Once a friend always a friend.

    • renu

      Nisha,..My sweetheart,….I am fine dear,…

      & ‘nilavembu’ – it means ‘ciraayata’ in hindi or ‘chiretta’ in English,…I think so,….Its a herbal medicine used against Fever,Indigestion and Hiccups,…

      Thank you my friend,..Now feeling better,….U too take care,…

      Love you too Deary

  11. renu

    Thank you friends,…I felt it may look some what bored while writing,…But M glad that you all liked it,..Really guys,…Neil and Radz have pure platonic Friendship between them,…

    This is rarely seen in any Tv serial or movie,…But DYM cvs didnt have enough time to concentrate on this,..They ignored many amazing characters,…

    The main Aim of writing this FF is I wanna show what we really missed in MMz,….If you ppl felt that we missed these things in original serial,…That’s a huge victory for this FF – Manmarziyan Missing Pieces,…

    • ❄ Ameena ❄

      Yup it’s a victory for you n us…..I love ur story nd jealous arjun….I love the scenes when he burns in fire for radz cuz love after all is also a game of jealousy….love u n good luck for exams…I’m sure u will doo welll….after all u r my buddy…love u from all my heart…??
      One lovee?

      ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  12. renu

    Thanx for all your love guys,….

    & sorry guys,…I cant reply to all your comments,….

    I had exam on coming monday friends,…so,Next update will be on or after Monday,….

    • manha

      Best luck for ur exams n wish u get more than expected bcoz u deserve it. Hard work will never fail n with wishesn prayers it is gonna never ever fail. So don’t worry much n write ur exams. U surely will get good resuts.

  13. Renu u r a brilliant yarr…loved evry bit of it…how can i say it might b boaring…definitely its not…its lovely
    …wow i like arjun jealous face…haha…Neil is so sweet having lovely heart….like rads n neil bonding…n top on it most awsome thing is author’s note…hahahahha…i like it very much….renu don’t make our arjun so much jealous…thoda romatic moments b de do use rads k sath….loved ths epi….superb…muhaa

  14. Shub

    Renu,super thrilled to read this episode. Could imagine frame by frame of the scenes. Arjun’s restlessness has been portraid excellently. You are a master in analysing and expressing inner heart feeling. I am so so excited to read further episodes.we are removing manmarzian and thanks a ton for that. Somehow find time and update everyday and keep entertaining. Not a single a second is boring.your flow is very natural and one could easily travel through the underlying emotions. Keep up the good work!!!

  15. DËVGÃ

    THENA HOPE U SEE THIS COMMENT …..
    I DEDICATE THIS PIC ….FOR U ….

    and in early days of mmz I did not have Kristen Stewart’s pic but it was Sanjeeda Sheikh’s pic ,…..

    But now it’s Kristen for u …. Love u my fan come lovly frnd

  16. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode, why you said it’ll be boring…my dearrrr sweeeeeet friend it’s mind blowing episode…loved each n every bit of it…uffff arjun’s eyes filled with anger n jealousy, very hard to hide his feelings…dadaji is awesome, rads n dadaji’s convo very sweeeeeet n emotional….n our neil, the rockstar was really outstanding, his surprise n that also gifted to rads by dadaji’s hands so sweet of him…true friend of rads…raniel bonding is marvellous…can’t wait for the next episode, let’s see what he is planning to do to stop rads from going…eagerly waiting…love you loads my sweeeeeet Renu…very tight hug to you my sweeeeeetheart,♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

    • Roma

      Renu dearrrrr, loved raneil picture with this update, you captured the perfect image of raneil’s pure friendship…my sweeeeeetu renu you’re awesomeeeeee…. 🙂

  17. Thena

    hi RENU dear, u r exceptionally perfect in analysing the characters to the deep. Hats off to u fr tat chellam. here tdy, Oh, Neil radz friendship n the way u r using it 2 makin our hero arj jealous is xtraodinary. cos, i always wished 2 c tat. the cv’s just cudnt giv enough space fr Neil which ws supposed to b in a great need. n u r doing it so perfectly n the way so amazingly. n i admit it here, i cant review the story cos the way u do ll always b the BEST. <3

    Oh, i saw ur msg in ur previous update n tat ws sooooo generous of u sweetheart. cos, i hv nothin 2 do wid ur gud writing. its ur own possessed talent dear. u r pure in ur thoughts n differ ny other in tat. i can feel tat simply 4m tis story of urs. really am lucky n feelin proud 2 hv u friend in my life n tat too u r my 1st ever friend here as i interacted wid u 1st here n nywer. thanks a lot fr ur words n love cos i luv u soooooo much dear. well, 2mrow, classes r again 2 b started here fr us. n ur economic survey of India is waiting fr u, right dear? do well. All the best fr ur exams from heart my sweetheart. 😀

    Hey DEVGA dear, would u believe tat i feel a lot elated talking wid u?!?!? cos, i hv nvr thot of tis once i ws a silent reader n evn then too, cos, u just didnt cross in2 my line. bt dear, i nw surprised 2 the core tat u hv got the msg tat i left 4 u in mmz cmmnt sec. n haha tat wsnt kristen stewart's pic ah????? sema bulb illa. bt in tat pic Sanjeedha resembled hr a lot. tis is called samalification sweety. nyhw bt u r greatly great dear. thanks a lot fr changing the pic n i dont evn know wat 2 say more fr tis. it just touches me dear. cant xpress my feelings thru words. btw, the selection of pic is soooooooo much adorable. hey dear, u know wat, i just startrd liking u fr the way u wer too straight n matured. tis is tru 4m my heart dear. i just like ur tat personality. tas a bliss sweety. sorry fr talking much. just felt like telling u this. dont mind me dear. luv u my luvely friend too. all the best fr ur xams. do well 😀

  18. aastha

    Guys an exitng news : In pol zone tey ‘ve askd our opinion f sirng mini future series of hit tracks…..iskknd is already being aired in hotstar twice a week…….tey askd abt mmz…so far only 3((myself included ‘ve askd 4 mmz)so guys plzzzzzx vote for mmz……may b our dreams wud cme true………

  19. Hareem

    Heyyyyy my dear friend Renu…this epi is tooooo awesooooooome loved it to d core..and its not at all boring…jst enjoyed while reading

    Keep it up my sweeeeeeewt friend…
    Will be waiting for nxt one ..

    Love u loooooads

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