Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part1 – Episode 5

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Friends,…I wont blabber anything about this Episode,…I left it in your hands and I hope you people will like this slow ride,…As usual Ignore my Grammatical mistakes here and there,…I hope u never mind it,…

Episode 5 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

The Mobile starts ringing,..Arjun who came out of his Restroom in the morning attends the call with Someone on the other end, makes him to remember his lifetime goal again,….

Arjun:Ya,…I knew,…I didn’t forget anything,….U take care,…hmm,…

Arjun after ending the call, dressed up in a determination to set his mind in his old path after passing a sleepless night yesterday to reach his destination for which he spent his whole life,…He reached Birdsong and entered his cabin after taking a long breath,…But the Irony is His heart didn’t mind his words or his life time goal.It was strong in its decision that it wants what he wants,…Teji, who came inside to get a sign from Arjun distract him from recollecting his deadly past,…Arjun after signing the document go through some files of Maybeline Newyork’s account was lost in thoughts of newly found Ray of Light in his Dark world,…When he turned each page in the file, He remembered each Moments he spent with Radz in lonovla,…It brings smile on his face. In fact, it glitters his face,…

He looked outside of his cabin to have a glimpse of his ladylove, rather he had sight of the empty chair alone which made him highly disappointed,…Then, He tries to divert his profound thoughts by concentrating on his works was again lost to his heart,…He stood up from his chair and walked for a short to make him normal and to divert his gaze from that void space of Radz in the Office,…
After a long struggle between his mind and heart,…He questioned himself that ‘why the heck,did I go caveman?,..What’s distracting me from my goal?,..Why?’,..Though he knew answer for all his question unlike Radz, He was not ready to say it once,…He threw the files from the Table and hit the table strongly by his hands,…His Fists were so tight that he was in the danger of Fracturing his own bones,…He knew his goals and in fact he was free from his so called Roadblock ‘Radz’ in his travel towards his destination now. None of that made any difference for his present restlessness,…

It looks like he had Ice Pick Headache at that moment, Her mere thoughts were so vicious as it has ability to shutdown his consciousness,…Uncurling his fingers with sheer force of will,He watched his blood strains rush back in,…When she risked her life to save him,that moment he found that she is important for him in his life more than himself,..He even made it clear that he’d already crossed too many lines in fact,he forgot everything even his donkey years revenge before her and broken too many rules,..Soon it would be too late to draw back from her thoughts completely,…

His each and every thunderstorms in his heart stops hitting him after the knock of someone’s call,…He turned back to hide his flooding emotions,..Wipes his face,…Felt a bit relaxed to know it’s a sub staff’s call as he informed Arjun that Piyali Mam called him to her cabin,….

Arjun: Ok,..come here,..these files were mistakenly fallen from the table,…So, clean my table before I come,…

Saying so Arjun went out with his mask to face Piyali in her cabin,…

Piyali: Arjun,..Yes comin,…I wanna hear your opinion on this matter,…
Arjun:Yes Piyali,…(acknowledged her with fake smile)
Piyali: U know very well,..these people were working in your team,…& We also knew that Radhika met with an accident,..& u knew, Without her contribution, we might missed this account,..So,Its better if we take Radhika’s opinion into account while making any further move in this Ad,…Every one here wanna discuss some ideas along with Radhika to finalise the pamphlets for Maybeline Newyork ad,…So,Why cant you guys work with her in their flat after completing Noon session in Office,..I didn’t compel you as your decision will be final,…
Sam: Arjun,I myself wanna talk about this in personal but mom started it,…I hope you will agree,…I noticed chasni’s change in her demeanour after accident,..Neil tried so much to make her normal but still I felt she was disturbed somewhere,….I knew about her very well,When we work with her means,she may forgot her pains for a while,…Please Arjun,..

Arjun with a light smile agrees to sam and Piyali’s proposition,…Sam thanked arjun,.. at the same time, neil and Samrat too joined their convo,…Piyali was busy in her call walked outside her cabin called samrat,who engaged in their funny convo,…

Samrat: Yes my love,….

Saying so Samrat excused himself from these buddies funny talks,…

Neil: well Arjun,We didn’t informed chasni about this,..I think it will b a nice surprise for her,…I hope you too will join us,..

Arjun smirked hearing this,…

Sam: ok Idiot,..Tell me one thing,…How many surprise you planned for chasni???,…Hmmm,…Is chasni my friend or your friend yaar???
Neil: Sammy,do u smell something burning here???
Sam: where???
Neil: I think its coming from ur side ly yaar,…

Sam chased neil to beat him but arjun who lost himself didn’t do anything other than staring them lifelessly,…

Neil:ok Sammy,..i agree,..just 2 surprise ly yaar,…This surprise was planned by all of us,…So,it wont counted in my account,…Another surprise,..i wont disclose it now,….

Sam: oh!!!,..Ok baba,I wont ask u what it is??? Now happy,…And Arjun,…I forgot to tell u that we planned our assignment in our flat today evening 6.00pm,…So,come sharply at 6.00pm yaar,…

Arjun: ya sure,…

Neil and sam walked past Arjun left a hope for arjun to come out of his prolonged restlessness,…

Its Evening,…Arjun came half- an hour before but hesitated to go inside,…Finally he made up his mind to go,… Radz,who just came from the hospital was seated with the help of her dadaji in the hall,…Mala was busy in her kitchen making some healthy food for radz alone,…Just then Dilip,who went thru Radhika’s reports started questioning his choti about the accident,…

Dilip: choti,…I wanna talk with you some thing important,…
Radz: haan papa,..
Dilip: How did this accident happened choti?,..Now,Tell me the truth as sam also not here,…

Radz stammered for few seconds,..then answered her dad by covering the major truth,…

Radz: I told you already na papa,…I didn’t see while crossing the road and a truck hit me behind,…Arjun sir,who saw me lying on the road fighting with my death saved me,..that’s it papa,…
Dilip:Oh,..then where is Sam and your other friends during this accident?,…Y they didn’t admit you in hospital?,..Y arjun alone saved you???

Radz felt uncomfortable with her Dad’s questions as she didn’t have any truthful answer to give him,…

Dadaji: Harree dilip,…just stop Questioning choti like a criminal,…Our goodwill only saved our choti,..Now she is fine na,…That’s enough,…And Arjun saved our choti on time,..So,we were obliged to him forever,…If someone heard ur questions, it will hurt them badly,…
Dilip:See choti,…Our family has some respect and I trust you more than myself beta but I cant see you facing these pains,..Today after chatting with the doctor,I came to know that this is a major accident and you escaped from this by god’s grace,..Your dream is important for me that’s y I gave you these 6 months,..But not at the cost of your safety beta,…

Radz took his dad’s hand in her and started assuring her papa,..

Radz: Papa,..I knew,…U trust me more than yourself papa,…I swear, I will never do anything against your trust papa,…Believe me papa,…
Dilip: I believe u beta,…Can you do me a favour?,…Please come to Hrishikesh along with us till your wounds get cured completely,…I booked flight tickets for you too beta,…

Arjun,who standing at the doorsteps heard the entire convo between the duo was extremely shocked,…The screen freezes on Arjun’s terrifying face.

Precap:Neil pinches Radz cheeks with a big smile,…Arjun who witnessed this burnt literally in jealousy,…

Credit to: Renu

39 comments

  1. Lakshmi

    Asusual superb ,arjun disturbed with rads thoughts is really nice to imagine and in precap arjun’s jealousy.. Waiting for next update. Renu u r from chennai right, how r u now? Take care.

    • renu

      Fine dear,..But had light fever from yesterday,…Had medicines,…Hope will be fine sooner,…

      Thanx for your concern deary,….

    • renu

      hayathi,..u made me laugh out louder dear,…..

      My friend,…As of now,There will be No saral,…No saral,…No saral,….Ok,…

      I knew dear we all hate saral and nandhini,…But they are needed to bring our love birds together as both Arjun and Radhika are very strong in their decision,…Radhika will never think about Arjun as her life partner cox of Sam and Arjun will only long for radhika but never try to break his promise to his sister,…So,Both are Same,….So,we need some External force to trigger them,…That’s y Saral and Nandhini entered the show,…But Due to some external factors,Cvs gave more space to negativity,…they must be used as a pickle not as main dish,…I think Cvs forgot this,..As a result,It makes us to tolerate that Male Chauvinist Saral and Evil witchcraft Nandhini cox of our Ardhika,…

  2. manha

    Whoa, another superb update. Looks like tdy is my good day. I hope. Arjun can’t stophim from his revenge nor from thoughts of his ladylove. Arjun ko jalaa jalaa kar maar ne ka irada hi kya. Neil agar aise hi chalta raha toh bahut jald kuch hoga jo tumne kabhi socha na hoga. But i love neil n radz. So write as much as u can abt them. Now the big ques will she go with her parents. Well i think it is no. But renu ke dimaag me kya chal raha hi ye jaroori hi. Lol. Loveeee u.

  3. Thena

    RENU!!!!! this is u. its u!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!!!!! i just cant believe me. hey dear, u hv no clue hw much i missed u. i hv many times screamed callin out ur name here. God!!!!! thank u dear. thanks a lot fr again cming here. i just read ur missing pieces from the 1st part n God, u didnt 4get me. i just cried.

    n yaar dear, i hv already said tat who in tis world ll say tat u dont write good. my God, wat a thought. its pure n clean n just coincides wid cv’s. i hope they wud hv gone tis way if nt concentrated on trp’s.

    • renu

      Thena,…Oh my sweatheart,….

      How r u deary????

      Love u soooo much and me too missed you so much deary,….

      You Remembered me,….You know one thing,..Your encouragement ly makes me to write in this site dear,…

      Generally,I used to comment just like ‘I love this episode,..its nice,…’ but never had a thought of posting Episode analysis,… I posted a few but hesitated a lot to write,…You gave me confidence to write deary,…How can I forget U yaar???

  4. Thena

    i liked dadaji-radz covo in the prev part n the cute thoughtful story. it was plainly touchy. u giv us the feel. evn in tdy’s update, Arjun looking fr his ladylove frm his room. OMG, it was deep. u r great. i can nvr forget u my dear friend, as i once entered into cmmnt sec, only cos of ur beautiful review. bt u r telling u r nt gud at writing. i just cudnt resist n entered in2 the page wen our fav show mmz was to end ny sooner. otherwise, i swear, i would hv been a silent reader by now. this ws the 1st show, i mingled in social sites lik tis n its awesomeeeeeee. luv u to the core sweetheart. take care of u.

    • Thena

      hey devga dear, i remember u very well n cant 4get u possibly. bt u know wat, i wonder hw do u remember me buddy. u dont know, hw much i know u. during early days of our sweet serial, i used to read Devga’s sweet cmmnts. na page ah direct ah andha peruku dhan scroll pannuven hahaha. u hd Kristen stewart pic, right dear. i luv u sooooooo much baby. bt am sure, u hv no idea about this. n am doing good dear. hw do u do? hw ur xams going? i saw ur suggestion on matter of copying contents. tats too clever yaar. i just thrilled seeing ur suggestion. hats off dear n luv a lot 😀

      n yaar renu dear, y tis part isnt posted in mmz page. Inform tu dear. they ll make change. otherwise many ought 2 miss this deary. oh, i feel happy talking wid u. u know wat, ur green profile pattern is enough 2 make me happy. tat ws just registered in my mine wen even nt mine haha. luv u sweetheart 😀

      • renu

        I posted about this in TU,…hopefully they may correct this issue sooner,..I think so,…

        & Regarding Green Profile pattern,…I never noticed this dear,…U made me cry deary,…

        Thanx to Manmarziyan,…Cox of this show,I got Friends like u deary,…

  5. renu

    @manha,….

    HAhaha,…

    Manha dear,…u get answer for your question in the next episode,….

    I wanna write all the missing Encounters like

    1.Radhika – Neil

    2.Arjun – Dadaji

    3.Radhika – Dadaji

    4.Arjun – Neil

    5.NEil – Prema

    6.Arjun – Dilip

    7.Radhika – Riddhima,…

    8.Samrat – Sam

    9.Manya – Piyali

    10.Sam-Manya,… and many,..which cvs planned for future but let it as it is due to abrupt ending,…

    & with manya,…I didnt planned anything but its really a superficial negative character,..I started analysing her character in depth from her Pov,.Show end news came,…So,I left that thought,…

    I love positivity,….I want less negativity to oppose,…The battle must b between the same person’s +ve vs -ve,…like

    Arjun – his +ve (radz) against his -ve (Nandhini’s Revenge) (Inside Himself)

    Radz – her +ve (Her values,Her trust on her Arjun,Family and her friends) against her -ve (her blind trust in her friend) (within herself)

    Sam – Her +ve (neil) against her -ve(Avenge against her Bestie Radz) (within herself)

    Neil – His +ve (His Cool Attitude) against his -ve( Remained silent for all mistakes done by his love)(within himself)

    That’s Y i cant get out of Manmarziyan even after closure dear,…I personally think,this story never needs any villain as Each person’s Battle within themselves is nice to watch,…I dont think MMZ season 2 with other leads will justify my expectation and longness for this amazing story as I cant imagine Anyone as Arjun,Radhika,Neil,Sam Except Aham ,Monica,Shravan,Kash,…

    Its a nice memory and such a wonderful plot in Indian Telivision,….

    • Roma

      Renu dearrrrr, I’ll love to read all these treasures…you believe it or not but it’s true that when I first read your episode review/analysis in mmz comments…I went back again n again to read all your reviews and start loving each n every character as you wrote so much detailed description very beautifully, I felt these actors should read your reviews also so they could understand better their own role in the show and act more natural as playing that character. …love you loads and very very tight warm hug. ..muaaaaahhhhhh, anxiously waiting for all this treasure from you… 🙂

    • manha

      Ya its true renu. No one can replace aham, monica, kasmira n shravan for the roles. They r just super apt. I love the series more bcoz of their super acting. Ya i read some story like new characters with new plots in old serial. N one thing that startles more is people on twitter saying that ardhika were more like siblings or bro n sis. This is just ridiculous. How could they even tell. I don’t just understand.

      I would just love to read all the convo u hav written up. I am very eagerly waiting for it.
      Ya it is true no need of special villian. Bcoz every person is having pos n neg sides n trying to come out.

      • renu

        Roma,…Its my pleasure dear,…M so glad that I helped you someways to love these characters more deary,…Thank you so much sweetheart,…Ya sure I will write all the missing scenes and encounters in this FF deary,…

  6. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode renu, it’s just superbbbb…arjun is missing rads really badly and can’t stop thinking about her even he is trying very hard and angry on himself on his restlessness, yet a sweeeeeet smile comes on his face remembering their moments in lonawla…very lovely narration renu my dearyyyy…nesam convo very good n I can feel jealous in Sam’s words also as neil having so many surprises for his chashni…why rads lied about accident to the family? I also shocked along with arjun…veryyyyyyy marvellous episode. …precap very interesting arjun is burning in jealous seeing rads n niel bonding. ..that’s what exactly we wanted to see here…wowww renu you’re creativity shows in this epic story…I’m blessed to read such a great talent. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very very tight warm hug. ..muaaaaahhhhhh…n yes, I loved the ahem’s picture very much with this update…I can see his eyes filled with restlessness, gr8 job ….. 🙂

    • renu

      Thank you ROma,…M glad that what i felt before writing those Scenes,..I get the same feelings thru your Reply,…SO,Now m feeling good that m going on a right track in driving the same emotions which i felt while writing those updates,….

  7. rasha

    While reading this update im feeling like we really missed this wonderful scenes in the serial right.thanks renu to portrait ths scenes.very nice desr.god bless u

  8. Nisha

    Hey renu dear, I am on leave for some days but now back ,

    loved ur story a lot my jaan, and yaa loved the scene what ??

    Radz and Dilip convo its seriously cute and arjun in rads thoughts wooooooooooooooooooooooow..

    Precap is deliciousl to have oooooooooooooooooooh arjun jealousl coz of neil woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow.

    Meri jaan You had some fever, don’t worry at all. well I am happy that you take medicines along with it cover urself fully and take a ginger tea it such a home remedy and also take some soup it give u strength and releif my dear. Get well soon.

    I also read the last part and loved it totally but what is the thing what makes me love

    Dadaji convo with radz in which he said a story of Saint and its disciple I loved the purity

    Always loving u by heart.

    Its always a pleasure to have u as a friend my dear.

    Keep smiling and iss fever ko jaldi se bhaga do .

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • renu

      Hiiiiiii nisha,…

      How r u Deary???

      Hmmm,…From morning,…I was simply laying on the bed deary,…Mom gave some Natural medicine ‘Nilavembu’ sth in addition to prescribed medicines,..so,Now Feeling better deary,…

      Love you too my friend,….

  9. renu

    @manha,…

    Manha,….Those tweets in Twitter were by some Kashmira’s Fans,…U may find those tweets written by Same no of people,…While MMz aired,…there were many wars between Kash’s fans and Moni’s fans dear,…I am really proud of Moni,..cox she was same like Radhika in personal,…She simply ignored and gave positive reply to them,….M really impressed by her in personal,…Actually,this story was about Radhika and her Friend Sam,…But After Arjun’s Intro,there were many couple wars as Many called Moni as Behenji,XXXX,…I wonder how ppl ignore arjun’s mistakes as because Arjun was played by aham,..It doesnt mean Arjun playing with two girl’s lives is correct,..Despite actors done their job well in portraying these amazing characters and in fact they lived in those characters,….I remembered,..in a live interview,A Fan asked Moni,..HOw could you romance with your Best friend’s Love interest,…Wont you feel ashame???,.Tweets like How could you romance with married man Aham???..It shows ppl’s lack of maturity,…they cant differentiate fictional and real character,…there I love moni’s Positive reply to that fan,….May be both the female leads were friends,…But ppl created some unwanted mess,…Its really awful to read those comments yaar,…See,today Moni became insta queen in the top 10 Tv artists,…I too learnt that Even Lord Krishna was not exception to these Criticism,..These were part and parcel of our life…..And finally after Ardhika marriage, Aham & Monica answered those fellows by stealing everyone’s heart thru their incredible chemistry,…Even now after 3 months of closure,Ardhika fans were requesting for Ardhika/Ahamica comeback on TV again yaar,…They hardly shared screen space for 2 months but stole numerous fan’s hearts by their stupendous acts,…

    • manha

      Yes i truly agree with u. May be i wouldn’t hav watched that regularly if ardhika were not there. They hardly shared screen space n that too after marriage. It was barely 1 month i think n they stoled my heart completely that i’m not in a position to see any other show in t.v. really tge impact was so high. I wonder sometimes that can really happen. I just wish they comeback soon n with a bang n make us more crazy for them. Hope it will happen one day n that too very soon.
      Hav u read GLITZVISION article on the show n our couple. It was just outstanding. I truly loved it. Hope one day our fan’s wishes come true.

  10. ❄ Ameena ❄

    Heyyyy renu….wow….superb….amazingly amazing….awesome….totally loved it….what yaar….what’s this….u stole my heart…just like that….that’s not fair….u stole everyone’s heart….nd now I’m heartless cuz of u…..arjun burning in fire….that’s great….and yup I like monica sehgal….nd she spreads positive vibes everywhere….I love her…nd her acting is OMG…love uuuu…keep updating nd good luck for exams….????????
    One lovee?

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • aastha

      Ameena,do u know Monica sehgal’s nw serials name n in wich channel it is being aired or gonna b aired??????n ahem Sharma’s too????????I heard abt tese in frm my friends here……bt I cud NT find any sch nws on wikki.

    • ❄ Ameena ❄

      Heyyy aastha….I dunno about monica sehgal…but she said not yet but soon….in a interview….umm about aham sharma….it’s not serial…it’s a movie…”ARUNACHAL 1962″….there were pics on facebook also….

    • renu

      thank you so much ameena,…..M glad You liked this Episode Deary,….

      &thanx for your wishes too deary,….

      Love u too sweatheart,….

  11. jade

    OMG.. Renu.. you are making my dreams come true.. Arjun jealous of Neil and Radhika’s friendship… Arjun lost in Radhika’s thoughts.. and so on.. this is what i wanted… you are Awesome yaar… :-* Love ya..

  12. aastha

    Oh no I dnt want rads 2 go away.lvd tat Arjun s feeling jealous at ne-rads friendship…………….n he s fully distracted by te tit f rads……..
    . hw r u???????

  13. Hmm renu me too feeling better with tht ‘nilavembu kashayam ‘ dear … It’s been recommended by all these days…
    Get well soon

    @thena for u I WIL now change my pic to Kristen Stewart …..
    I knw u dear u have said this earlier itself to me … On mmz page …
    Nee dhan en mudhal mmz silent fan …
    Rombo urugiten dear , nee sonna vidham avlo azlaga irundhudhu… Unna maraka mudiyadhu …. Valkaiyil

  14. Renuuuuu u r amazing yar…jst the word thank u is not enough to say cos u bring the missing happiness of manmarzian…till date i can’t forget mmz nt evn a single day..frm that day i stopped watchng all those sas bahu dramas….really yarr what u r writing nw badly wanted to see it on screen with our aradhika….its really hilarious!! i just thanking god for giving me such sweet friends here sharing same bond of manmarzian…update is such cute n nice yar…n by ur superb skill we will get encounter of character whch u mentioned.. mmz writers can’t do that bt u r giving such awsum parts to us…..wish for a longer update…bt can’t wait to see atjun jealous face again seeing rads neil friendship…haha…love u dear!!

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