Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part1 – Episode 4

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Friends,…..I wanna convey One thing before starting this episode that I didn’t use any old scenes in this Episode and its purely my imaginary. Dadaji is my favourite in MMz after Radz.So,In this Episode,My Dadaji gonna enter our sweet blossoming Ardhika’s Love life journey,…May be it looks bored and M not sure about it,…I hope u people will like this slow journey of Remodeled Manmarziyan,….As usual,Please Excuse me for many Grammatical Errors here and There,..I hope u never Mind it,…

Episode 4 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Neil: Wohooooo!!!!! Chasni, Here my first surprise for youuuuuuu,….

Saying So,Neil waved his hands towards Dadaji,…Radz was on cloud nine seeing her Dadaji there in Mumbai which she never dreamt,…She was in full of joys of the spring at this moment,…Tears of Happiness rolled down her cheeks was visible to all standing there including Her Hero Arjun sir,…Dadaji walked slowly towards his choti and gave her a warm tight hug which in turn gives his choti, the needed strength after this huge accident,…

Dadaji: Choti,..Are You Fine???You made me cry choti,…
Radz: Dadaji,I am fine and You came na,…See, Now I am not feeling any stress Dadaji,..I miss your talks dadaji,…Really I miss you soooo much,…

Radz hugged back her dadaji and dadaji wipes his choti’s tears,…Dadaji kissed his choti’s forehead affectionately,…Arjun was taken back by the strong emotional bond between Radz and her Dadaji,which he was witnessing for the first time in his life,..Everyone there were amused by this cute convo btw Radz and her Dadaji,…

Neil: yahoooo!!!! Chasniji,…How’s my Surprise yaar???
Sam: stop it idiot,…My surprise is also nice,..Chasni,tell me yaar,..U likes mine ly na,…I accept dadaji’s arrival is a nice surprise,..but who gave that Idea yaar???
Neil: Sammy,U didn’t do anything,You just called Mala Aunty and Dilip Uncle,..I only made all arrangements for Dadaji’s Arrival,…I confirmed his Ticket and everything,..So,…
Dadaji:Harree u both shut for few minutes,…Stop your Fights,…here my choti is crying and you too are go on blabbering,…
Radz:I wont cry Dadaji,…Neil,Thank you so much,…
Neil: I told u na,..In friendship,…No sorry and No thanks,…Wipe your tears,…Or else you will catch Ullu Flu,…
Sam:hey one minute,… what’s this Ullu flu???,…Hmmm,..
Neil: Ask chasni,…Sammy,…what chasni??? ,..am I correct ???

Radz laughed at Neil’s comment and wiped her tears,…Everyone was happy seeing this but Arjun felt a bit irritated by Radz and Neil’s Friendship which he tried to cover by moving away from there,….

Arjun: Sam,I think Its time for me to go,..So,…
Neil: Harreee Arjun,Wait for few minutes yaar,..We have arranged a lunch and a small get together to make chasni happy,…So,I hope u will join us,..
Radz then remembered that she din intro her dadaji to Arjun,…
Radz: And Dadaji,…This is Arjun Sir,…today I am talking with u na,..Its ly cox of Arjun Sir,.. Dadaji,…
Arjun: Namaste,..(smiled lightly from his heart without any faking)
Dadaji: Arjun beta,..Thank you so much for saving my soul…

Saying so Dadaji folded his hands before Arjun in gratitude with tears for saving his choti,…Arjun felt hurt seeing this,.He unfolded Dadaji’s hands as his deeds are not so big and its his duty to save her.For the first time he felt ashamed for his past deeds,…He felt guilty for everything that happened to Radz as the real truth for Radz today’s state was cox of him,which was still unknown to the rest of this world hurts his conscience badly.Neil tried to lighten the present moment called everyone to come inside,..

Neil: dadaji,Mala Aunty and Uncle,…Shall we go inside,…As Chasni was standing here for a long time,…And arjun,..Please join us,..I hope U will,…
Neil noticed Arjun’s worried face for the first time,..But he didn’t pay any attention to it,…
Sam: yes,..Neil is right,…Chasni,..common yaar,…let’s go inside,…

Saying so Neil and Sam went first with their usual amusement,…Mala and dilip followed them and finally Dadaji helped his choti to walk. Radz started talking with her dadaji about her short stories which she left incomplete after her Mumbai Arrival happily,..Arjun,who saw Radz happiness forgot himself as his eyes were glued on Radz,…He smiled unknowingly to Radz and Dadaji’s jokes,..
Neil and sam were busy in arranging lunch for everyone in the Dinning hall,..At the same time,Mala took Radz inside to change her Dress,…

Where Dilip,dadaji and Arjun sat in the hall with arjun alone busy in Fixing something in his new mobile,…
Radz,who dressed in a simple as well as an elegant blue Maxi came to Hall slowly with the help of Mala grabbed Arjun’s full attention towards her,…Arjun,who turned from his new Mobile, His full body,His eyes were so intense, they resembled glowing coals,…He took a look at Radz from bottom to top,…Radz felt the same spark,…She diverted her gaze from arjun indirectly saying him not to look at her as all are watching them,…But Arjun cant take his eyes off from Radz,…Dadaji who called Arjun a few times noticed arjun’s intense Gaze on his choti,….

Dadaji: Arjun beta,…Arjun,…What you are looking for???,..I asked you what is your hobby???

Arjun murmured something,.. stood straight and informed Dilip,Dadaji,that he had some important work,…So, he has to move now,..He didn’t expect their reply and he went out straightaway leaving every one perplexed,…

Then,Everyone enjoyed their lunch together except Radz who still remained in an agitated state,..Dadaji noticed his choti’s change in behaviour,…After lunch,Neil and Sam went for shopping in a nearby super market,..…

Its Night,.Sam was talking with mala about neil’s antics in the Super market and dilip slept in the hall,…Radz was sitting on the steps alone lost somewhere,…Dadaji came near his choti and asked what’s the reason for her worries,….

Dadaji: Choti,why you are sitting here alone,…What’s bothering you choti???
Radz:Nothing Dadaji,…
Saying so Radz tried to wipe her tears was stopped by dadaji,…
Dadaji: I know you more than you know yourself choti,…Arjun was the reason right,….

Radz hugged dadaji hearing this,…Dadaji wiped her tears and enquired what happened between them,…

Radz: Dadaji,…I dunno,…He saved me and helped me whenever I was in trouble but He was behaving rude dadaji,…I knew he was good at heart,…and he is hiding something from me dadaji,…Sam accepted Arjun sir’s love ly cox of my assurance about him Dadaji,…I wanna become his friend dadaji,..Nothing else,…

Saying so,Radz cried her eyes out,…Dadaji wiped her tears,..cuddled her affectionately narrates a short story,…

Dadaji:choti,…One day a saint asked his Disciple to get him some water from the nearby lake,…Disciple went there and noticed some ppl who were washing clothes in the lake and a bullock cart started crossing through the same lake.As a result,the water was muddy,…So,he came back and told the saint that water is not suitable to drink.After a while,Saint again asked his Disciple to get him some water .The disciple obediently went back to lake.This time he found that the mud had settled down and the water was so clean,..So,he collected some in his pot and brought it to saint.choti,now tell me, what he did to make the water clean?,…

Radz after wiping her eyes and nose answered her dadaji like a child,…

Radz:dadaji,..He let it as it is and the mud settled down on its own,…
Dadaji: Haan,…the same go with the mind and heart too choti,…When it is disturbed, just let it be,..give it a little time and it will settle down on its own,…
Radz who,rest on her dadaji got something new and Clear cut solution for her many unanswered queries,… Screen freezes on Radz cuddling her
Dadaji,…

Precap: Dilip questioned Radz,…how this accident happened??? let Arjun and Radz so Tensed

Credit to: Renu

33 comments

  1. manha

    Renu love u yaaar. Amazing. Finally dadaji entered the scene. Arjun lost in radz. That was a scene to watch. Dadaji ke nuske hamesha kaam aate hi. Renu u r super duper yaar. U analysed each n every character that amazing n it is shown in ur writing too what dadaji can ans choti. Simply superb. Neil n radz really missed their super frndship yaar. Stupid people just ended our show like that. But what can we do now. We can just imagine n enjoy. Thank u sooo much.

    • renu

      thank you deary,…

      & yes dear,…Due to this SP,Now our show was ended abruptly with all amazing characters,….

  2. aastha

    Tanku Renu……dnt wry ur imagination is super………Arjun s irked by niel nn rads friendship.I lvd it……. our Arjun is mermerised seeng rads………..i lvd it tooooo………..finally rads dadaji convo………..

  3. Samiha

    Wow Renu! Another nice episode… Mind blowing. And the thing which I like most is that the story line is heading as it should have been in the show itself… The precap is also very much realistic, in the show I had thought why it didn’t occur to the parents how their daughter got hot by a car? Well, I look forward to having that answer very reasonable on the next episode…

    And I wanted to point out something… In a convo between Radz and Neil, Neil thanked Radz. I think it happened mistakenly, rather it should have been Radz who thanked Neil for bringing Dadaji and surprising her… Please don’t mind if it’s not the way you wanted to describe it…

    Another thing, the ‘Changu-Mangu’ joke was very funny. Similarly the Bangladeshi jokers are ‘Poltu-Boltu’ or ‘Shontu-Montu’.

    Anyways, thanking you again for REFINING Manmarziyan stories… I also appreciate it very much of you replying to my comments. So, no more blabbers and Good Night…

    • renu

      Thank you deary,…

      & its,..Radzz thanking Neil for his surprise dear,…& Y you are requesting me,…M your friend ly na,..so,you can point out any mistakes without any hesitation dear,…It will helpful for me dear,..I said the same yesterday too on Rishi’s comment,…Next time no formalities,..Ok,…

      & Poltu-Boltu,…Shontu-Montu,…LOl,…nice deary,…

  4. Ananya

    Renu it was wonderful. I loved every part of it. Every relation were so beautifully shown. Thank u for bring manmarziya back…

  5. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode very emotional when rads met dadaji…tears were I my eyes as well…neil’s surprise was awesome…arjun feeling rads attachment to her family was amazing…arjun lost seeing rads n then left suddenly failed to control his emotions. ..n rads in the same boat can’t hide anything from her dadaji…it was really beautiful narration and dialogues superb. ..
    renu my dearrrr you’re doing marvellous job to bring all these your imagination in this story…I’m speechless and overwhelmed reading dadaji’s nuskha (short story)…it was totally heart melting n amazing how you compared and solved rads state of mind for arjun hiding sth from her…truly you’re magician renu…taking us in your mmz world n fulfilling our dream story….I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and Your story….keep it up buddyyy, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very very tight warm hug to you my sweeeeeetheart. …

    • renu

      Thank you Roma,…M glad that you liked this episode deary,….Love you too,….

      I think We are sailing in the same boat,…But the difference is I love my Nani so much,…She is no more,..But I always Remember her sayings yaar,…

  6. Roma

    Omg renu the thumbnail picture of dadaji n rads you used for this update is adorable. …such a great effort from you y sweeeeeetu. ..love you loads and very very tight warm hug to you….it reminds me my nanaji n my bonding always ..he is no more now but his memories and his nuskhe always be with me, muaaaaahhhhhh

  7. Shub

    Renu, fantastic narrative. Loved the mud water scene!!! Way to go. This is your style,right from the heart!!! Keep up the good work!!

  8. hey Renuuuu dearrryyy loved this epi yarrr…simply beautiful….. nt hot bored any more…actually i want dadaji in ths story to support aradhika…n u did that great job yarrr…how could u say that u cant write a story..u r amazing writer…thanks for the fast update dearryyy…love uuuuu….n hey i want to see arjun is asking rads y she put herself in danger for him…save his life…that would be an amazing epi..pls write on that too…small suggestion…love u..waiting for nxt epi..

    • renu

      hiiiiiiii DIpika,…

      So nice of u dear,…& Ya,..I will take your suggestion of Arjun questioning radz,…I too Planed it already but it will be after few episodes dear,…

  9. Renu!!!! This update is so cute !! Dada ji is an angel in disguise, his nuske always come to the rescue. Ghosh Arjun just couldn’t control his emotions.
    Loved the way you narrated it. We had dreamt for all of these to be telecasted,but we can only imagine it now.
    Loved your update. Plz keep posting. Love you loads. Tc

  10. ?Ameena?

    Ohhh my renu….wow yaar….amazingg…awesome….cool….fabulous…I love dadaji sooo much…yup that’s true that he was not shown in the show a lottt…btw he sooo cute….my dada is also like him…nd I pull his cheeks….keeeeppp updating my sweetheart…love uuuu…??
    One lovee?

    ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

    • renu

      Thanx deary,…

      I too love dadaji so much,…I felt dadaji was missed in original mmz,…I think he is very important person in radz life,…

  11. ahana

    superb … dadaji is rocking yar…
    he telling stry to rads was awsome..
    i liked to see arjun jealousy

    • renu

      U gonna see jealous arjun in the upcoming episodes,..So,dont worry,…

      & i too like no love jealous arjun soooooo much yaat,….Its a treat to watch dear,…

      I will try my level best to justify it in my FF dear,…

  12. Nisha

    Hey renu loved this part dear , Awesome radz and dadaji convo over the saints and its disciple.

    Love u always Keep smling .

    Once a friend always a friend.

  13. Nisha

    Hey samiha dear , how r u dear missing u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.

    Love u always by heart. Keep smiling .

    Alwyas smile whenever see ur name

    Love u by heart.

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