Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part1 – Episode 3

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…In this Episode,I used Epi 66 & 67 scenes,… I think, this update will be some what emotional episode,… Hope u people will like this slow ride,.. I am not good at writing Romantic scenes but according to the character sketch, I expect these things to happen in the serial.So,Few episodes may look bored as I am not willing to change the main Original story line. As usual, Excuse me for grammatical errors here n there,…

Episode 3 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Radhika finally asked arjun ,the reason for his cold behaviour at neil which makes arjun to remember his hurtful past and he warns radhika not to come closer to him.

Radz:Sir,..This morning ,…Y u behaved rude sir???,…What’s the reason for your change sir??? ,… Now we are friends na,..In friendship you have to say truth,…What’s hidden in your heart that drives you to behave rude again sir???
Arjun: nothing like that radhika,…Don’t think much,…
Radz: No sir,…I am not wrong,…There’s something which you are hiding from me sir,…

Arjun patting radz head slowly started replying to radz ,…

Arjun: I told u na,there is nothing,…Just now u underwent a big operation,…So,Its better if you concentrate on your wellbeing Radhika,…
Radz: But sir,….
Arjun: Leave thinking about me radhika,,..U just think about yourself,…& Its not good to intervene in other’s personal Radhika,….

Saying so Arjun took Radz Engagement bangle and hold her hands to make her wear that bangle,…

Radz: Sir,..I knew that you are upset but suddenly why this rude behaviour sir,..Now we are friends right,…

Arjun tight his hold on radz hand while wearing the bangle to make her feel hurt,…

Arjun: No radhika,…We are not friends,…I hope it will b good for you, if you understand this sooner,..

Radz hold arjun’s hand to release his tight holding,…

Arjun: Don’t interfere in other’s personal matters radhika,…Remember one thing Radhika that I am not a good person now and ever,…

Arjun left Radz hand,.. glared her angrily and went out leaving radz to end up in a confused and a worried state,..
Morning,…Doctor checked Radz and informed sam that she is alright but need complete bed rest for atleast 10 days to become normal,…He suggested a Physician in Mumbai to continue the treatment there after Radz Discharge,…Then he asked radz to be careful and not to do any hard physical work as it will hurt the stitches in the abdomen,…Further asked her to take food and medicines on time as she will be cured earlier with the food she taking,…After advising, Doctor went to the next ward,….

Sam: chasni,I talked with pa,…He asked us to come with Arjun and Arjun also did everything for our departure,… What happened chasni???,..Y u are so dull today??
Radz: Nothing Sam,…I felt something is wrong but cant find what it is,…
Sam: Chasni,…I knew ,…U underwent a big operation and its not easy to b normal,…As it will take some time yaar,…So,Don’t worry much,…I will b there na,…Smile chasni,…

Saying so Sam put a shawl around chasni and helped her to get up from bed to walk,….Both were walking slowly with sam alone talking something continuously but Radz mind was not in the present to hear her Blabbering as Radz was lost in her thoughts,….
Just then,…Arjun came towards them from the other end looking at Radz,…Radz who just saw arjun with millions of unanswered questions lifts her head towards sam and Sam who was talking continuously stopped to have a look at arjun. Arjun who came to both the girls tries to say something was interrupted by the doctor,…

Arjun: Sam,….
Sam: Yes Arjun,…Tell me,,…What’s the matter?
Arjun: I have arranged everything to Depart,…So, if,…
Doctor: Till now Radhika’s Reports were unsigned,…So, Here who gonna complete the formalities?

Radz saw Arjun with an expectation and Arjun lifts his head down signalling that he wont sign,..Sam who observed this saw radz who smiled hiding her unknown pain,..

Sam: Doctor,…I will do,…
Doctor hand over the forms to b signed and asked her to complete other formalities at reception,…
Sam: Arjun,…I will b in few minutes,….U take chasni to parking lot,…I will come there directly,…Arjun, please,.. Hold her na,…As she cant walk perfectly,…

Arjun nodded yes and Sam gave Radz hand to arjun,…Who hold her one hand and wrapped her shoulder with his other hand,..Radz felt awkward but she didn’t say anything,…

Sam: Chasni,…u go with arjun,…I will come to parking lot,…ok,..….

Both Arjun and Radz had an Intense Eyelock which speaks a lot what their mouth failed to speak,..Radz lifts her head down to break their eyelock and asking him thru her eyes to proceed forward without looking at her,…Arjun too din have any words to speak and both walked silently without speaking where arjun holding Radz shoulder in a way it wont hurt radz,…(background music:kwahishon pe likhi),…They reached parking lot and arjun opened the car’s back door for radz and left her hand without uttering anything,…He moved to the front of the car and stood silently,…Radz who was puzzled by arjun’s activities went near him to get answer for her questions,…

Radz: why???,…Everything was fine between us till yesterday right,….But what happened now???,…What I Did?? That you are behaving like this,…tell me why???
Arjun: No radhika,…Nothing is Fine between us,…What you think radhika?,..If I helped you in these two days,It means everything is fine between us,…No radhika,…U r wrong,…

Saying so Arjun turned other side to avoid Radz,…

Radz: No sir,..I cant b wrong,…What I saw yesterday was not a lie sir,…
Arjun: what,…I saved u,..cox u r sam’s friend that’s all,…there’s nothing more than that Radhika,…
Radz: then what about yesterday? u feed me,u helped me to lay down and now u helped me to walk,…What, is that everything is a lie???,…Tell me sir,..Face me and I am damn sure that what I saw in you will never be a lie sir,…

Arjun turned towards radhika holding her arms tightly said,…

Arjun: I think after operation, Ur brain was misplaced that you are talking constant rubbish radhika,…I helped u yesterday as U needed someone’s help there and I might have done that help for anyone in your place radhika,…So don’t imagine much to cook up any new story radhika,..today I helped you as Sam asked me to do so,…that’s all,…Nothing gonna change radhika,…If you think so,then its your fault radhika,…
Saying so,Arjun left Radz hand and distanced himself from her leaving radz in a confused state,… Radz had tears in her eyes while arjun uttering those harsh words to her,…Arjun turned that side again to avoid radz completely this time and radz tried to say something was interrupted by sam,…
Radz: Sir,..But,…
Sam: why you both are standing outside,..R u both not willing to go to Mumbai now???,…

Radz smiled hearing sam,…Arjun asked them to get in,…

Sam: Chasni,Neil told that he gonna give you two surprise ,…I wont disclose it now,…Regarding check up and the medicines,It will be organised by him in Mumbai yaar…So,Don’t worry,…
Arjun: Ok lets go,…Sam: Of course,…Yes,…

Sam helped radz to sit comfortably at the back seat where radz eyes glued on Her Arjun sir,…At the same time,Arjun too staring his ladylove via Rear mirror,…Three Reached Mumbai silently with Sam alone talking with Neil on phone at times,…Sam helped Radz to walk after reaching Mumbai,…Arjun who walk past them turned back to listen their convo silently,…

Sam:Chasni,..I don’t think food and medicine will cure u as Doctor said,…U need special medicine,…Don’t think much,….I will show u the special medicine,..come,…ok,…just stop here,… I will come,…
Arjun and radz who were alone just for few seconds ,…their eyes met hardly,..Radz wanna talk with arjun but failed to do so due to Sam’s call,..

Sam: Chasni,..ur special medicine here,…

Mala and Dilip coming towards Radz brought a huge smile on Radz face,…Mala hugged Radz with Dilip patting his choti’s head affectionately,..Arjun who saw this felt a bit relaxed,…

Radz: Ma,Papa,…This is Arjun sir,…if Arjun Sir was not there,..I wont be here today,…

Mala & Dilip thanked Arjun for saving their choti,…Right then everyone heard a sound from Neil inside which looks Like some surprise is waiting for Radz still,…Screen freezes on Radz puzzling face,…

Precap: Radz asking Dadaji with Tears ,’Why I cant understand him Dadaji,..What’s my mistake in all these’

Credit to: Renu

28 comments

    • renu

      Hey dear,…dont be sorry and all,….Thanks for liking it dear,…

      I used lifted her head down instead bowed down as I dont wanna indicate it ‘as in submission’ dear,…that’s it,…& so i used lifted her head down to mean that she did it purposely and slowly,…

      & thanks for pointing out my mistakes yaar as i typed it in a hurry just like posting analysis with the flow of writing the main theme in my mind,….

  1. Samiha

    Wo hoo! Nice episode, it was fantastic actually… Just loving it… Good that you didn’t make Saral’s entry, at least till now… And I am a little curious, is Nandini alive in your story line? Please answer if it’s okay… Once again, faboulous episode, a tight big hug…

    🙂

    • renu

      hiiiiiiiii Samiha,…How r u dear???

      Dont worry,…if there is no saral ,then there will be no nandhini,….I wont change original plot so,they wont come now,…I gave this assurance yesterday itself dear,…i hope now you will be happy,…I started this FF cox i dinn like saral and nandhini’s entry after accident,…I felt they changed the original story line that’s y i heard pushkar sir left the show,…But whatever it may b,..as some friend said here,…we paid more by losing our beautiful show,….

      & u asked me meaning for ‘changu – mangu’ na,…Its meaning LOL,…Jokers deary,…

      Have u didnt heard changu- mangu jokes,…K,M posting here a changu-mangu joke for u,…

      Changu- I bought a car thru bank loan before 6 months,…

      MAngu – So,now what happened to bank?

      Changu – Nothing,..they took my car as i didnt pay my installments regularly,..

      Mangu – Oh,..Its nice,…Then,I will take loan on my marriage

      Changu – Why???

      Mangu – Cox they will take my wife after 6 months na,….

  2. Ameena

    Wowwwww renu….u showed us what we wanted to see exactly ….awesome…amazinggg…loved it from my heart…??
    One lovee?

  3. manha

    Wow.wow.wow. so full story is going to change. Yeahhhhh. I am so happy. N don’t say sorry renu i loved it. Ya we can understand it is not so easy to get arjun’s feelings all of a sudden. So time to lagega. In meanwhile we can see ardhika’s friendship n their unconditional love too. N sam will also get time with neil n understand her feelings. So slow n steady wins the race. And talking abt romance there is actually some spark in them ke u don’t need any special scenes for that only their eyes can talk more. N ya wr like silent romance too. So don’t worry abt it at all. Just write as u imagined. Actually i’m very happy, see after that big accident radz obviously needs so much of bed rest but as time lacking n other things she got ready for her friends engagement which was just 2 days after accident. So make all changes what u feel should be there. Grammar doesn’t matter at all. We see emotions so take lite. Thank u once again. Loveeee u.

    • renu

      Thanks dear,….I will try to move it slowly but not at Snail’s Speed,…I am glad that you liked it,..

  4. Roma

    O my renu dearrrrr, it’s superb, awesome, marvellous episode, loved it to the core…the missing part which you’re showing here are really taking me to your wonderful manmarzian…ardhika’s convo n Sam’s surprise is going with track but now Neil’s surprise will be your addition to the story to make it more affective. ..I’m totally addicted to it dear…keep it up with your amazing manmarzian. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very very tight warm hug to you

    • renu

      Thanks dear,…planned to return back to chennai by tomorrow,…

      & yes after starting this Manmarziyan FF,…I felt a bit relaxed dear,…..

  5. Saran

    Renu keep it up….going on dear…. Wait for next episode soon….. Pls update daily ya…. Its my request….

    • renu

      i will try to post regularly saran,…

      But cant give you assurance,…But I am sure that i will update atleast thrice in a week dear

  6. ahana

    nice…I miss mamarzia…
    i dont like saral n nandini after their entry in serial….
    serial become irritating as they were main hardles of aradhika …
    but after unexpected marriage of aradhika stry was becoming intersting that tym it aired off …
    I really miss it..
    ur ff was nice…

  7. ahana

    nice…I miss manmarzia…
    i dont like saral n nandini after their entry in serial….
    serial become irritating as they were main hardles of aradhika …
    but after unexpected marriage of aradhika stry was becoming intersting that tym it aired off …
    I really miss it..
    ur ff was nice…

  8. Nisha

    Hey renu loved the part dear loved it to the core of my heart.

    and yes I heard changu mangu jokes just the names changed tom jerry or whatever but really interesting to read the story.

    Love u by heart.

    keep expressing ur heart.

    love u always.

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