Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part1 – Episode 11

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…This episode will also be slightly an emotional one,…. I hope you all will enjoy this slow ride,Bear me guys,… As usual Excuse my grammatical errors here and there,…

Episode 11 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

In Sam’s Room,
Sam took deep breath after waking up and dialled Neil’s number in her mobile hurriedly,…But,Neil didn’t attend her call,…Sam felt angry on Neil for his unresponsive action,…

Sam:Idiot!,..pick the call,…Or else I will kill you,..

Saying so sam tried Neil 5 to 10 times,..But,Neil didn’t attend her call,…Finally she decided to send a SMS to her idiot for his act of ignoring her,…she send a Text SMS saying,

SAM – You are so busy,..that you didn’t have enough time to attend my call too na,…I wont call you until you call me back idiot,…

After texting, sam went to fresh up,..

In Neil’s home,

Neil was seeing the pictures of Sam and him in his laptop during their happy days had tears in his eyes,…Prema calling Neil repeatedly holding his mobile in her hand came to his room,..

Prema:Neil,..Neil,…

Neil,who wiped his face turned towards his mom dressed with a smile on his face,..But Prema knew her son very well than anyone,..she understood Neil was in pain,…So,she began with sam to divert him from his pain,…

Prema:Neil,..Sam called you more than 10 times,..Why you didn’t pick her call???,…She was happy now seeing you near her na,…
Neil:you dunno mummy,..Yes she was happy but I cant pretend to be happy before her always ma,..Whenever she talks about arjun,I could see her love for him ma,…that hurts me a lot ma,…I cant see love in sam’s eyes for someone ma,…

Saying so Neil cried his heart out brought tears from Prema’s eyes as well,…(Back ground music: Hasoon be garte,..)She cuddled her son affectionately to reassure him,…

Prema:No neil,..You shouldn’t ignore sam like this,…She is your friend,…You must forgot your love for her and try to give your love to some one who born for you in this world,…Please,think about you and me for a second,..I cant see you like this Neil,…

Neil:sorry ma for hurting you too,…Hmmm,I wont ignore sam ma,…I knew,She is my best friend and my soul ma,..I cant imagine any girl in this world in sam’s place ma,…

Prema:Then attend her call Neil,..I want you to be always cool man,…

Neil hugged his mom and began,
Neil:Ok,…Mummy,…I will call sam right now,…Now Kush na,…tell me,what’s my breakfast???,…
Prema:Neil,…Keele ka Bhartha,…..Aloo gajar sabzi,…Khatta meetha mixture,..Sooji Golgopas,…and,…
Neil:Enough,…Enough,… Mummy,If I eat these,I will become stout like you sooner,…So,U eat everything,…Just a sandwich is enough for me,…Its already late,..I have to get ready,.. Bye,…

Saying so Neil took his mobile from his mom’s hand and went to restroom,…

Prema: But Neil,…I prepared these for you,..Neil,…Neil,..
Prema smiled at neil seeing him back to normal and went to Kitchen to make his fav sandwich for his breakfast,…

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In Arjun’s home,…

Arjun,who wake up in the morning saw the burnt ashes of Radz Dupatta in his room,…He called his Kaka to clean the ashes,…While calling him,He saw a piece of burnt Orange Dupatta cloth in the ash,..He bent down slowly and took that piece of radz burnt dupatta which took him back to some old memories of that dupatta,…

xxx Flash Back xxx

Arjun coming out of the Radz ward in Kandla hospital accidentally bumped into Teji,.Teji puts everything in his hands down out of fear …
Asusual,Teji stammered before arjun ,…

Arjun: Hey Teji,…You fool,…

Saying so, Arjun took his scattered parts of his new mobile which fell down cox of Teji’s sudden encounter,,..

Teji: Soorry Sirrr,….I,…I,.. didn’t see you sir,..I will help you sir,…
Arjun: no need,..Just Keep quiet,…Shhhhh!

Teji distanced himself from offering help to arjun,..Meanwhile, Arjun saw Scattered things from Teji’s carry bag which contains Radz bag and her orange Dupatta (It made him rem the cloth shop encounter with radz in kandla),… Arjun hold Teji’s collar closer and questioned him angrily,…

Arjun:What’s this???,..how did you get this???,…Tell me now,…

Teji gathered his courage and began,
Teji:Sirrrr,…I went to cloth shop again to call Radhika and inquired about her from shop owner sir,…The cloth shop owner only gave me this carry bag and asked me to give it to Radhika sir,..That’s all sir,..I tried to hand over her things but heard she met with an accident from the nearby people there sir,..So,I informed sam and,….
Arjun: Ok,..Stop,..Give it to me,..I will hand over these things to her,…
Teji: No sir,..Dont worry,..I will give it to radhika,..I informed her already sir,..
Arjun:I told na,..I will give it to her,…
Teji: No sir,…I already informed her sir,..U leave tension sir,…I will give it to her,….

Before Arjun saying something,Sam called him from the corridor,…

Teji: Sir,..Sam is calling you,…It’s ok sir,..I will give it to chasni sir,..

Saying so Teji puts all the things inside the carry bag and Arjun was forced to go away by repeated sam’s yelling,..He turned back thrice before reaching sam,…When Teji took Radz orange dupatta,Arjun felt that it was his belonging,..He himself dunno but He wanna get back that dupatta for himself before it reaches Radz from Teji,…

Sam: Arjun,What you are looking for???

Arjun faced sam and began
Arjun:Nothing Sam,…You tell me,..what’s the matter?
Sam: Arjun,Paa asked us to come by tomorrow after chasni’s discharge,…I will stay along with chasni and I booked a single room for you in Kandla hotel yaar,…
Arjun: Thank you sam,…If you don’t mind,I have an important work now,..Will you excuse me,..Please,..

Saying so,Arjun walked towards Radz room in an hurry leaving sam confused,…But all his efforts went into vain as Teji kept that carry bag in the side tray near Radz Bed,…But one thing which pleased him was seeing sleeping Radz alone in the room,…Arjun entered the ward silently without disturbing Radz sleep,…He took his belonging from the carry bag near Radz,..But the Irony is Radz wake up due to noise caused by the carry bag,…She opened her eyes slowly and began,

Radz: Arjun Sirr,….You,…

Arjun was shocked hearing Radz murmur kept the Dupatta on the tray and turned towards Radz,…

Arjun: You are awake,..I thought, You was sleeping like Kumbkarna,…

Hearing this funny comment from Arjun,Radz was bit angry and began,

Radz: Me sir,….
Arjun,who smirked seeing radz grumpy face began,
Arjun: Haan You only Radhika Mishra,..You know, how you sleep? And what you do in sleep??
Radz: Yes of course,I know how I sleep and I never do anything funny in sleep,..Not me,No Individual in this world would do sth in sleep,..So,You don’t create sir,…

Arjun grinned hearing Radz argument annoyed Radz a lot,..
Arjun:Yes No human would do,..But You are not a human Radhika,..So,You do many thing in sleep Miss.Radhika mishra,…
Radz: Sir,..Stop laughing,…I am a human and how do you are telling that I do something in sleep,..Have you seen me doing sth in sleeping,…Never na,..So,Don’t assume yourself sir,…
Arjun:Oh!You are human,….I forgot it Radhika,…

Saying so, Arjun laughed a lot brought smile on Radz face too,…Radz forgot herself in staring laughing Arjun,…
Arjun: You asked me,When I saw you in sleeping na,…lemme answer,…

Arjun again burst out laughing,…and began,
Arjun: In lonovla hotel,…U wanna hear what you did,Radhika mishra???

Radz began after watching smiling arjun again,
Radz: Sir,I said already na,…You look normal while laughing,…

Both had an Intense Eyelock (Background Music: Kawhishon Pe likhi),…Their Intense Eyelock were Interrupted by Teji’s entry,…

Teji:Chasni,..I kept your belongings in that carry bag yaar,..

Teji after seeing arjun near Radz excused himself,
Teji: Sir,…I gave sir,…I think someone is calling me,…Haan,..Coming,…
Saying so,Teji went out,…

Arjun:Ok, You sleep Radhika,…I will b back after few minutes,…Arjun helped Radz to lie down and she closed her eyes to sleep,..Arjun took his Belonging from the Tray without Radz knowledge from there,…

xxxFlashback xxx

Arjun’s mobile started ringing brought Arjun,who had contented smile on his face while recollecting happiest moment he spent with Radz, back to his sense,…His smile vanishes when he saw Incoming call from Sam,….He put the cloth piece down and stepped on the Burnt ash and the cloth piece which he considered as his belonging,…

Precap:Sam informing Neil,’Idiot,I gonna stay with you in your home till chasni’s return from Hrishikesh yaar’

Credit to: Renu

54 comments

  1. Ananya

    Renu so emotional episode. Poor Neil Felt sad for him. And Arjun struggling to get rads dupatta.. So good.
    I was waiting for TU to post, when u said u already updated it. Thanku for the story… Love you… Take care…

  2. Manha

    Kya epi tha. Like totally amazing. U r just superb renu. I’m nt getting enough words to praise u. The dupatta part was mind blowing. Ur imagination is top of the world. The part which never existed u wrote it so wonderfully. I’m still in imaginary world. And ur dp is just too gud. Matches the epi. Arjun ko joke bhi aate hain aur wo hasaata bhi hi. Wow. Wow. Neil-prema convo was very gud. She is an amazing person like her son. But what was precap. Radz will go to hrishikesh. Nooo. Neil is there why fear. Or it will be arjun. I’m excited. Loveee u so much. Thank u.

    • aastha

      Manha I left a mdg 4 u in Nisha’s horror story……plzz check it n give me a reply….im waiting for ur message…….

    • renu

      Thanx Sweet heart,….

      Felt bad for making neil’s cry but what to do i have to do justification to this story na,…So,made my heart strong while writing dear,…

      Dont call me heartless,..I gonna tell you one thing,…I love arjun crying as well as laughing dear,…I wanna see more pain as well as love from arjun eyes,…I imagined a lot,….But what to do again,…I controlled myself,…Even I scolded myself for thinking like that,….U know he was so strong,…HE want both mangoes yaar,…Radz and his Revenge,…So,He have to face that pain before reaching his light na,…But,Felt pleased seeing Arjun’s guilty face before his love confession in original series,…But it’s not enough for My Arjun baby,…

      I wanna punish my Arjun baby a lot not now may be in the next part of this missing pieces FF,…I wanna give him both his happiness which he longed all over his life (radz) and pain for hurting his soul (Radz) knowingly for his Revenge,…And also wanna give him assurance that Radz also needed him badly and many such things yaar,….

      • Manha

        Haha. I agree with u. I too love him when he cries. Actually his eyes a lot of abt his heart when he is sad n crying. The scene whr he says to radz don’t go. I need u. Ahhh. Just breathtaking it was. N he is crying frm heart for his soul radz. I loved it to the core. Don’t worry i’m with u make him cry more for radz bcoz at the end radz will give him eternal happiness. Thats worth it. I’m becoming really heartless nw. Lol.

  3. aastha

    Felt sad ? 4 niel…..bt Arjun is fighting to gt te dupatta……cool…..arjun-rads convo ws gud…….. n also prema-niel….lvd te mom-child scenes……………

  4. Shree

    Chooooo cuuuttteee!!! I loved it renu!!!
    Lol !! Sleeping like khumbkarna!! I loved the way radz got annoyed and arjun’s laughter!! We missed it in the telecast … Love you so much for bringing all these back!!
    I just feel bad for Neil… Wow and the precap … So radz is going to rishikesh?!

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling…. Bear hug

    • renu

      Shree,…Thank you sooooooooooooo much,….

      M glad you liked that part,….

      You know,I loved their sleeping habits yaar,…Arjun – Naughty Boy,….Radz was sleeping like a good girl,..He ly do sth naughty that made them closer to each other in the morning,….M damn sure about it yaar,…LOL,…

  5. chinni

    Hi renu dear i think u didn’t saw my name in comments because i’m busy in xams nd not able to come to tu page but now i got change to talk to my buddies nd happy to see all the updates nd really loved ur story nd hapy to see ur update daily,really i felt dat i’m seeing d serial infront of my eyes dr.love u buddy nd love ur story.

  6. Renu yena sollrathuney terila ma…..yenama think panra chancey illa great yaar,such a mind blowing episode yaar…arjun is dying to get rads duppata wow wow….sathyama manmarziyan TV le patha mathiri feelings such an realistic episodes hope ve get our manmarziyan back with same cast really missing them like hell wat say guys

    • renu

      Thank you so much dear,….Enaku Tamil la type panna romba kashtama irukkum but un comment and naomi yoda commenta partha piragu,enakkum type panna aasai ya irunthuchu ma,…romba santhoshama irukku,…unakkum intha update pidichirukkunu sollumpothu,….

      Naanum romba miss panren MMz ah,….Oru chinna santhosham enna na,Moni lead role la act panna la,…short period role like shravan(Neil),…So,Happy for that and I hope our wish will come true a day dear,…

      My mom used to say if we wish for sth and believe that wish will become true means,Surely It will become true,…So,Our wish also will come true a day dear and that day is not so long,…Just we hope for good and Good will happen to us after all we all are good na,,….

      Sorry for blabbering,…LOL,…

  7. simply amazing epi renu…..wht an emotional epi…Neil’s condition btought tears in my eyes….our two lover boyies r struggling with there emotion n hidding there love from resp lady love…wow u hav brilliant writting skills renu….m Diwani of ur stories…love u dearyyyyy…

    • renu

      Thank you so much dipika,My friend,….

      Hmmm,…What to do,they have to cry a bit now dear,…M helpless yaar,…

      M glad you liked this dear,….Love u too sweetheart,…

  8. nisha

    hey renu dear I enjoy today episode a lot dear Kumbhakarna wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow I love it dear yeah ,

    and rads and arjun argue dear about lonavla and all about the sleep she do I love it totally woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow . I love u yaar such a heart warming story u make I really love ur missing pieces dear.
    hey I didn’t ask u anything till now If u permit me I just want to ask something just If u r comfortable or else its ok yaar hey are you married dear. Just a normal query dear plz if u don;t comfortable to answer it don’t give it I have no problem for sure we are here to meet u meri jaan and always love u by heart totally .

    Hey one more thing dera Merry christmass dear I can’t may be came on tomorrow so I want to wish u today dear wish u a merry christmass dear may god bless u and ur whole family and give u so much happiness and wealthiness dear love u always by heart dear . Keep smiling always

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • renu

      Hey Nisha deary,….

      Thank you soooooooo much dear,….

      Merry Christmas to you and your family too deary,….Hope this Xmas will bring all your wishes come true in your life dear,…

      & I dunno,Why you asked such question,…But I never mind in answering you dear as you are my friend na,….M single dear,….MAy be next year,I shall marry someone whom my parents wished,…Dunno what’s in my destiny only My lord Rama knows,…Till then,I love making others happy and working towards my dream like Radhika Mishra,…She didnt achieve it in the serial but I wanna achieve it before my marriage,…That’s all about me yaar,….

  9. renu

    Hiiiiii friends,….

    1.My Maybelline Girl Scene:

    Already I typed a lot about Ardhika’s First ever Meeting cum Eyelock during MMz end and in this FF (Last update),…So,dont wanna say the same thing again and again,…But this time,I gonna write sth deeper than usual,…Just a brief note on the same scene for you guys,….Our Ardhika has that power to discuss them numerous times as each time when we saw their scene,It looks afresh yaar,…

    When Sam replied Arjun that he should face many people for his comment of she is much talented girl na,…Right then,Arjun starts his presentation with ‘My Maybeline girl is’ —My Radz entered,….Indirectly said Radz gonna enter in Arjun’s life by sam,… (Funny Note: She is Future predictor yaar)

    And Neil,who noticed Arjun’s prolonged stare on Radz made him suspect Arjun’s feelings,…His comment of ‘What an entry chasni’,…Indirectly said Radz entered in Arjun’s life by Neil,…(Funny note:He is Present Suspector)

    Nesam started Ardhika ‘s lovelife journey with sam showing Yellow flag and Neil showing Green Flag yaar,….

    Guys I love writing on Dark and light a lot,…May be that’s why I loved ardhika’s Dark and light convo,…Not sure cox I loved all their scenes.So,No partiality,…I just wanna threw some light on ‘My Mabeline girl is’

    Arjun saw Radz for the first time in his life got a hope that some light gonna enter in his dark world,,..He was living in his Dark Right from his childhood,..He didnt saw light till the day he faces Radz for the first time in his life which made him forgot himself for a while as his inner sense got coolness from the vision his eyes captured,…It didnt allow him to turn his gaze away from Radz,…

    After hearing Neil’s comment,His mind got its attention back wanna decide sth to get back his old stuff which he lost for a second his Eyes met those Innocent pair of Beautiful Eyes of Radz,…

    He always wanna get answer for all his unanswered questions which he longed,..But,He didnt get a chance to find answer from his motherly figure Sister(Nandhu) whom He considered as his light in the dark world but she is not the light rather she is Lightening which he never knew in his life till he met his original light (Radz),…Its a simple fact that we will believe the light from the temporary source as permanent light until we find the permanent source of light,….Same thing happened for Arjun too,..When he met Radz for the first time,…His Heart felt happy seeing the original light in his life.Which,his mind fail to understand as it is busy in executing its mission of First step in his Revenge for his Sister,….

    His mind wanna get answer for his heart’s question when Radz stood simply without entering into the conference room,…’Either come inside or go outside,…Whatever you decide,…Decide it today itself’na,…

    Now its a straight forward Yes or no question,…

    ‘Come in’ means Enter my life and spread your light rays in my dark world,…

    Or ‘go out’ means Dont come in my life,..I am happy in spreading my darkness to achieve my lifetime mission of destroying one’s life(sam) for my light(Nandhu),…

    ‘Whatever you decide,Decide by today’ means He dont wanna wait for Radz answer like he waited for his many unanswered questions right from his childhood,..He already decided to move forward in his mission,…So,He dont want any obstacle in his mission that makes him long for another unanswered question in his pocket,….

    Radz(Light) saw Dark for the first time in her life really felt him as her future light when she gonna be under Eclipse in future like Sun under Solar Eclipse,…She wanna give her Light rays to the Dark Knight as she believed unknowingly that Dark knight will save her from the Eclipse which she gonna face sooner in her mere future,…She was shocked as she was aware of everyone’s staring on her not ly her dark knight,…That hesitate her to take a decision to either come in or GO out,…

    Arjun’s question infact helped her to take a correct decision in her life and she decided to come in and As the result, she entered Arjun’s life and also she started evading her future darkness which gonna eat her Light rays,….

    P.S.: I dunno What I typed as I typed it in a flow guys,..So,Didnt checked it once,…Hope you all may understand my blabbering,…

  10. naomi

    Hai renu, supera modify panirunthey storiya & organe duppatta pinnadi ippadi oru storiya really super.
    Naa onu unnoda share panannum nenechirudhen. Serial pathithan. In orginal mmz la enthene peru notice pannanga engrathu theriala naa notice pannadhu ennana. After arjun engagement, arjun & nandhuvum
    sammy peakup panrathugu radhu veetuku povanga appo arjunnoda kaila kaayam irukkuum. Appo radu bandage sariyaga kattuva andha timela radhuvoda engagement Banglum &
    arjunnoda engagement ring same timela katuvanga. That means radu vandh arjunnoda kaiya pidippa appa irrendu peroddadhum ore timela kamippanga. Anda scene enagu romba piddikum. And arjun 1st time oru ponno parthu impress aghra scene (liftla). Andha scenela avan pesana varthaigal ( Tumaere moth mere aath mey) ennagu romba pidicha dialogue. Andha varrigal first kovamaagavum second time sollumpothu vathaiye sariyaga varadhu. Supero super andha scenla irendu peroda actingum especially arjun. Innum irukku next cake pieces la sollren. Bye… have a nice evening.

    • renu

      Naomi,…

      Thank you so much dear,…

      In Bandage scene la,I was lost in Ardhika’s convo and I saw the same scene after reading your comment,…I noticed it after the Band aid cloth slipped from his hand and she hold his hands,…Then,They showed both Arjun and radz hands ,….I didnt thought about Engagement bangle and Ring yaar,…Really I was impressed dear,…This is the power of Ardhika dear,…

      & Reg Lift scene,…Really Radhika too affected by Arjun for the first time,…whereas Arjun lost himself in that scene,…I too liked that scene dear,……Will share my POV on that scene later dear,…

      Ennoda Fav scene nu ethuvum sollamudiyathu enna ella Ardhika scenesum en fav than,…. ethavathu onna ippo sollanum na,…

      Arjun – Radz eyelock with sam giving Radz hand to arjun after Accident,…Arjun and radz expression were priceless yaar,…

      That’s y i dinn change that scene in this FF dear,…

  11. nandhini

    Hi renu
    This part brought our original manmarzian come before us..
    You did great job yaar.well done.

    @all
    My exams are over and I am free and I wrote one paper very bad.
    Please pray for me yaar.at least one time in your prayers…

    • renu

      Thanx Nandhini,…

      Dont worry You will clear that Paper,….I will Pray to the almighty for you deary,…Just believe that you will clear,….It will make difference deary,….

  12. Manha

    Renu u r just awesome. Even i thought the same abt ‘come in or go out decide tdy’. But ur thoughts r sooo deep. N u explain them just awesome. I just get awestruck by ur explanations. I wanna cry out loud PLZ ANY ONE MAKE OUR RENU CV HEAD PLZ . I just hope this wish also become true.
    Each time when i see ardhika scene it gives a new n fresh feel n i crave more for seeing it. N i again watch it repeatedly. Everytime a new thing cmes in mind. I think this is some kind of magic or so.
    I feel whenever ardhika meet may be happy. Sad or angry they always end with eyelock or leave each other confused with their feelings n thoughts n mainly arjun. He always end up thinking abt radz more than sam. Why he has no reason for it.
    Lovee u so much n wish all ur dreams cme true.

    • renu

      Thank You so much Manha,…

      What you said about Ardhika is cent percent true dear,….Bcox of their magic,We lost ourselves in their magic world,… even after show closure,Their memories still live in our heart,…

      Merry christmas to you and your family dear,….

      HOpe this Xmas will bring all your wishes and desires true in your life deary,…

      P.s.: You said you ll share your mmz experience,…M still waiting yaar,….

      • manha

        actually renu after reading this epi i was so in trance n imagination that i forgot my experience. lol. so couldn’t write. i will write it dear only in ur page may be in next update. plz dont get angry. plzzzzz

  13. nisha

    hey renu dear love u so much yaar thanx for sharing lovely point of view of aradhika My maybelline girl scene and thanx for telling me dear something about u . The reason is you understand some feelings so well . That is the reason I ask But reallly feeling very good u feel to share it dear Me too a non experienced now u understand what I said in past ex or non ex. My story (Naadan Dil Ki Manmarziyaan) epi 9 all the friends share it ex-married non-ex non married . And so many answered me too non ex answered . I told u but may be you didn’t read it well dear love u so much for sharing it . and ya the second thing is sharing your name on google baba love u dear . We all played this game and enjoy it fully love to u dear.

    so this is your name mean I find it for u dear
    Your name of Renu has made you systematic and practical in all you do.

    You enjoy the feeling of accomplishment from working diligently at a task.

    Particular about your material possessions, you keep everything you own in a good state of repair, and you budget your personal finances very carefully.

    You are clever in mathematics and have great patience with work of a detailed nature, such as bookkeeping or accounting.

    Systematic and practical in all you do, you enjoy the feeling of accomplishment from working diligently at a task.

    You budget your personal finances very carefully.

    Particular about your material possessions, you keep everything you own in a good state of repair.

    This name limits imagination, flexibility, responsiveness, and spontaneity in your nature.

    It also limits your sense of humour and any real empathy of the problems of others.

    Those close to you do not appreciate that you may forget the thoughtful expressions of affection toward them.

    Your very practical nature does not allow you the appreciation you might have for life’s more aesthetic values as it keeps your mind mostly concerned with facts and figures.

    Weaknesses in the health could affect the intestinal tract with constipation and related difficulties such as rheumatism or arthritis.

    hey renu to bolo Google baba ji ki jai ho and make ur life successful this new year and reach to the heights of success dear. Love u loads

    Merry christmass renu Keep smiling dear always May god give u and ur family lots of happiness in ur life.

    Once a friend always a friend.

  14. aastha

    Happy Christmas to all my mmz friends ……..lvr u all…..im innative place…..nw I’m gonna ho 4 outing with cusns……

  15. Hey renu dr !!
    I m really sorry dr !!
    I dinn no dat u r still der but wen I started reading stories then I saw ur name !!
    Buddy I jus missed u dr n I love ur maybelline yaar !!
    Hey from today I will b reading ur story !!!
    So hw r u??
    N hws life going ??

    Ok dr take care !! Hope u will b writing !!!
    Pls reply renu !!

    • renu

      Mandy,…

      Omg,…After a long time,….I saw your comment dear,…

      How r You?????

      I came here after chennai flood dear,…I started this Ff with a view to fill some gaps between Post Radz accident and Sam arjun Proposal party night(Radzz-Orange saree),..started this FF,…Hope you will like it,..M glad seeing your comment mandy,…..

      Dont be sorry n all yaar,..

      Whenever You have time You read thisMissing pieces and tell me your suggestion and point out mistakes in this fictional epissodes dear,…It means me a lot,….This is my first ever trial of writting a Fan fiction dear,….

      Advnce HAppy New year dear,…

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