Manmarziyan Missing pieces Part 1 – Episode 25

Hiii friends…As I promised earlier,I’m trying to complete both the ffs asap…So with this update, my last journey of missing pieces comes to an end…Though it’s a connecting nod of my fictional story to original series – Episode 66 (last part),I tried my level best to do justification…Miss you all lot…you all are my strength to continue this story even after the show end…I’m falling in short for words to express my gratitude…Really,I’m so grateful to you all buddies…This is your Renu’s Final shot of this Missing pieces…I hope you all like it…lemme know in your comments about this episode and overall journey of this missing pieces as well…What you liked and what you detested so far…And it took me few weeks to write ardhika’s misunderstanding here to make it look connected with original series…Even It’s more appropriate to say that I felt some writer’s block at that time yaar…That’s why I couldn’t update earlier…Asusual ignore my grammatical mistakes…

Maha Episode 25 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Arjun heard a voice over and trembled with fear after confirming it was his Radhika’s…Without giving any second thought,He puts down his bag and ran to her assistance…

Arjun:Radhika…Grab my hand…

Arjun let out his hand for Radhika to climb up…Radz too grabbed his hand with much difficulty but the eroded mud there made arjun to slip when he neared Radz to assist her further…This let both to roll down on the other side of the steep…Both rolled down for few meters in the sloppy region and landed somewhere far from their crew…

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Neil-Sam

To love someone is nothing…

To be loved by someone is something…

To be loved by someone you love is everything…

But Nothing…something…Everything…has thin line between them,If you discovered that difference not by searching in terms of their literal meaning though…

Neil:Sammy…how is my surprise?…you like it na…

Sam:stop it Idiot…I will kill you…I love it yaar…simply superb…

Neil had unknown tears in his eyes witnessing sam’s happiness in playing with that small colourful fishes…These tears speaks volumes about his feelings for sam…He wants to see her like this forever for himself..He had nothing to wish except her happiness…He decided to sort out his differences with her and not to bother her about his feelings which she never felt for him according to his theory…

Neil:Sam…one minute…

Sam:What idiot…you seem,…you lost something precious?…What’s the matter…Bolo…May be I can help you finding it…

Neil letting out a soft smile began…

Neil:No need for that Sammy…Yes I lost…But in return…I got your happiness…your smile…your laughter…this is more than enough for me sam…What I lost never matter…But What I got matters me a lot … your happiness…sam

Sam:What yaar..today you are giving more sentiwala speech…something fishy…What is it…Bolo…

Neil turned back and walked few steps ahead began…

Neil:nothing…you are happy na…

Sam:Haan Neil…I’m so happy…you na…last few days tensed me a lot yaar…Actually,I should punish you for that…But…Now I’m happy..you know why…My idiot is back into his normal…and you know…because of this,I din talk with Arjun too properly…Seriously,Arjun is a nice guy Idiot…He took care of chasni…He accepted to shoot this Ad in Hrishikesh for me…He even attended chansi’s birthday party for me…

Neil wiped his tears and faced her…

Neil:ya…He came but went even before wishing chasni…Very Good manners yaar… samendher singh…

Sam:stop it idiot…

Sam patted neil on his shoulder…and continued

Sam:but…you are right…Even I too don’t understand him at times…May be chasni knew him well…We ask about it tonight with chasni…ok…

Neil: What’s about you? sam…

Sam:Means…

Neil:you love him and he loves you right…But you don’t know many things about him sammy…I think…you should know more about Arjun, Sammy…Because I cant see you hurt again in your life sam…

Sam caressed Neil’s cheek and began…

Sam:No Idiot…you knew na…He is like that…Leave this topic na…

Neil:Sam…Tell me…What you know about Arjun?…

Sam:Idiot…what happened to you today…you are after Pineapple?…

Neil:No sam…Apple is checking whether pineapple deserve Orange or not…

Sam:bilkul nahi…orange always deserve apple…But Pineapple deserve orange…Ok…

Neil:Perhaps…Apple fears that Pineapple may hurt orange with its rough odour…

Sam:If it’s so…Orange has apple always by its side…So how come this question arise..orange being hurt by pineapple again…bolo…

Neil chuckled at sam hearing this…Sam continued…

Sam:I have everything with me Idiot…You…Arjun…And Arjun never had problem with our friendship… …I have nothing to worry about Neil… See…I’m really lucky na

Neil’s Innerthought: No sam…He is lucky to have you…And I’m so unlucky in this world…

Sam patted him again…

Sam:Hey…hello…I’m not marrying him today…So…don’t be too senti…Then I will breakup with Arjun again…Ok…

Neil:No yaar…I din mean…

Sam:Idiot…Senti time over yaar…Now its time for dinner…

Neil:Dinner???sam…Its 6.30 pm yaar…

Sam:But…I’m feeling hungry Idiot…So,Its dinner time…lets go…And listen…Our crew members already waiting for us there…And here signal is also weak…Chansi told me that she will show her childhood photos tonight…come yaar…

Saying so sam pulled Neil’s arm towards her…And Both walked holding hand in hand leaving something behind which is their everything …

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Ardhika – Arjun and Radhika

Arjun was laying on top of Radz…Radz was breathing heavily…The reason may be due to Arjun’s weight on her or his intense proximity…She had no words to utter…Arjun examined the place where they landed and averted his gaze towards Radz to check her well being as he protected her from being hurt so far while they rolling down the slope…

He sensed her uneasiness and tried to distance himself from her…But Radz’s golden chain got stuck in his shirt which made Arjun to topple on her again…Both faced a difficult time due to the hotness prevailing between them…Arjun somehow layed sideways to her, thereby shifting his weight totally away from her…Radz averted her gaze from Arjun opposite to the side where he was…Both remained silent for a few seconds…only the birdsong, sound of cool breeze and sound of water course were audible there…

After Few seconds of their inner battle,Radz turned to release the chain from Arjun’s shirt…At the same time Arjun too tried to release it…Again It leds to another awkward moment between them when both their hands met…Which in turn lets to the meeting of their eyes…Arjun signalled her that he will release it from the clutch of his shirt button…Radz acknowledged him positively by taking her hand from the chain and averted her gaze too away from him…And Arjun was merely shocked in surprise finding the same chain,which he bought for her as his Birthday present on Radz’s neck…

Whereas Radz lost her patience as she was confused what makes Arjun to take this much time to release the chain’s knot from his shirt…As she couldnot tolerate the intensity of their proximity for more than a minute…She even started panicking that it may lead to some thing undesirable for both…She made up her mind to release the hook of the chain without Arjun’s help and she hoped it will release her from this persistent encounter…She even executed the same and raised herself from the ground,But her foot has been twisted due to this sudden movement and she was scarcely able to stand…

Radz:ouch!!!!…maa…

Radz moaned in sudden pain…Right then,Arjun realized what’s happening there and stood from the ground to hold Radz before falling…

Arjun:Radhika…What happened???…Are you alright?…

Arjun found that she hurt her ankle…Within a jiffy…He tried to lift her up…But Radz stopped him from doing so, perceiving her modesty that declined what her situation rendered necessary…

Radz:No Sirrr…I can…

But Arjun never care for her permission as he stared her back to silence her… He took her up in his arms without further delay and carried her near the water course…He had seated her slowly on the stone steps nearby without making eye contact with her…But Radz was bemused seeing this Arjun,who takes care of her…

Arjun:Radhika…Is it ok?…

Radz nodded yes…Arjun tried to lift her Right leg to remove her anklet…

Radz:Sir..Noo…

Arjun without listening to her words removed her slipper made Radz to howl in pain holding his shirt tightly…

Arjun:Nothing…Radhika…basss…

Saying so,Arjun removed the anklet too…Then he made her leg to rest on his thigh to wrap the swollen ankle with his Handkerchief…Radz screamed in pain this time clutching Arjun’s collar…

Arjun:Radhika…that’s all…Nothing to worry now…you will be alright…

Saying so He wiped her tears and wrapped that white piece of cloth not so tightly to reduce the swellings in her ankle…After doing so,arjun slowly began…

Arjun:you stay here radhika…I’ll come…

Radz:Hmmm…

Arjun tried to contact the crew…But due to poor signal…He couldn’t contact them…Then,He found a temple nearby and decided to go there after arranging for bonfire and food for their Dinner as it seems to be dark anytime sooner…

Meantime, while removing her another anklet,Radz dupatta flew away from her…She tried to take it…But failed to get because of continuous breeze…And it even made her to shiver in cold…

Arjun reached Radz and found her shivering in Evening dew… Seeing Arjun there,Radz just crossed her hands near her shoulder…Without asking any,Arjun lifted her up by turning his gaze away from her made Radz to leave her hesitation for a while…She even felt safe with him…

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In the camp…

Saral:Sam…Where is Radhu??…

Neil:means…Chasni is not with you?…

Saral:No…I thought…she is coming with you…

Sam:you tried her mobile…

Saral:yes…But Its not reachable…

Sam:One minute saral…Chasni will be somewhere here…I will call Arjun now to look for her…Don’t worry…

Saying so Sam tried Arjun’s number,which is also not reacheable…

Neil:Sam..What happened?…

Rajesh:sir…We got Arjun sir’s bag on the way…

Saral:that’s why I said…Its not safe for chasni to work here…But she din listen…see if something happened to her..Then what I will answer babuji…

Sam:stop it saral…before that,chasni is our friend…We know how to find chasni…Nothing will happen to her…

Neil:Sam…you don’t take tension yaar…I will call some village people to look for them…you take rest…

Sam nodded yes…Neil went with few members from the crew to look for radz…Saral was frowned in anger and layed down in his tent angrily…

After few hours…

Sam:what… you heard anything about chasni and Arjun…

Neil:No sam…But the village people promised me that they will find them for sure…They suspecting that due to heavy dew here…they might be stayed somewhere else…

Sam:But how do you know chasni and Arjun were together neil…

Neil:Dunno yaar..But I know only this…Nothing will happen to them..you take rest Sammy…We will search them in the morning…Its already past 10.00PM…

Sam nodded yes worriedly…

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Meanwhile In temple…

Both Arjun and Radz sat near the bonfire facing opp to each other…Arjun seems to be busy in his mobile…Whereas Radz seems restless and tried to break the silence prevailing btw them for last few minutes..

Radz:Sirr…

Arjun:What Radhika…you need anything else?…

Radz:Nahi…I mean…Thankyou sir…

Arjun letting out a cute smile began…

Arjun:What…For shawl???…If you wanna thank me for this…then thank your god?…Because,I got this shawl from this temple only and your god only saving you from this cold…Not me…

Radz:Nooo…

Arjun:Then for food?…I din do this for you Radhika…I felt hungry..So,I got water melon for you too…orelse who knew…you will eat my brain in hunger with your nonstop backwass…

Both chuckled at this remark of Arjun..

Arjun:Go to sleep Radhika…Goodnight…

Radz:sirr…

Arjun:what?…you don’t feel sleepy? …

Radz:No sir…I…

Arjun listened attentively to Radz this time…

Arjun:Tell me Radhika…What’s disturbing you?…Is your leg still paining?…Or may I look for any alternative to go down to reach hospital nearby…

Radz:No sir…No need for that…I’m fine…

Arjun:Then?…

Radz:Thank you sir…thank you for saving my life again…

Arjun was amused hearing this…Radz continued…

Radz:Sir…If today you are not there,I dunno what will happen to me?…Today What you did for me is…

Before Radz completing her phrase…Arjun smiled lightly and began…

Arjun:Nothing big Radhika…Take rest…

Radz:But Sirrr…

Arjun:Now what?…

Radz:Sir…you…love sam truly???

Arjun:I said..you should sleep now Radhika…don’t talk unneccesary things…Ok…Goodnight…

Radz:Hmmm…

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Its morning…

Arjun wakes up seeing Radz sleeping on his shoulder…He remembered yesterday’s happenings btw them…And how he rest her head on his shoulder without disturbing her sleep..It left a sweet smile on his face…Same way he slid her head slowly near the pole,where they were resting…And left her alone to freshen up…

After few minutes…Arjun’s mobile started ringing aloud made Radz to wake up…

Radz’s innerthoughts: Arjun sir’s mobile ringing…But Where is Arjun sir?…

Radz:Arjun sir…Arjun sir…

Saying so,she took the mobile was confused seeing the caller ID…

Radz:Nandhini Di???who is this NAndhini?…Sir said..He is an orphan na…May be she is his friend??…Or she is that unknown caller which Arjun sir wants to hide from me in the restaurant…

Thinking so,she attends the call…

***Telephonic convo***

Nandhini(lady’s voice over at the other end):Arjun…What are you doing there?…Why you din attend my call last few days…Everything fine??… And listen…Tomorrow I’m waiting for you in Mumbai Airport…

Radz saw Arjun coming near her…Without saying anything…She ends the call…

***Telephonic convo***

Arjun:Radhika…You woke up…How’s your sprain now?…

Radz:Bit Better…

Arjun saw his mobile in Radz hand…Both were suspicious on the other…

Arjun snatched his mobile from Radz hand and began,

Arjun:Sam called?…

Radz smirkingly began…

Radz:No…Nandhini called…

Arjun was shocked hearing this…

Arjun:Who is Nandhini?…Might be wrong call…You get ready…I talked with few village ppl here…they will take you to the hospital…

Radz: sir…It’s the same person,who called you in Restaurant too right?…

Arjun holds Radz arm and began…

Arjun:I already warned you Radhika…Don’t try to mess up with me…Stay away from me and It will be good for you…Think about your life…your fianc will be looking for you now…

Saying so, he left his hold on her angrily made Radz both physically and mentally hurt…

Radz:Sir…Till yesterday,..Everything was fine between us na…

Arjun:No Radhika…As I said before…Nothing is normal between us…Not yesterday and not today…

Radz:Then why you saved me twice sir…Why you took care of me yesterday…why you worried about me…Why you din leave me,when I was in trouble?…Tell me sir…Why?…

Arjun:You wanna hear…Why I favoured you?…then listen…its only for sam…I did all this cox you are sam’s friend…Nothing else…

Saying so he started walking away…

Radz:Sir…Where were you going now?…

Facing his back to radz,Arjun began

Arjun:I think…you don’t need my help from now Radhika?…Its good if you understand this sooner…

Saying so,Arjun left hurt Radz alone without having any guilty conscience…

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In camp…

Neil:Sammy…One good news…

Sam:What?…you found chasni’s whereabouts?…

Neil:Haan..sammendher singh…she was slipped from the sloppy region…Just now some tribal people informed me…they got her mobile and bags too…

Sam:Oh my god!!!…Chasni is teek na Idiot…

Neil:Bilkul perfect…But heard,She got little sprain at her ankle…And now she has been taken to the village hospital for treatment…So Me going there to take chasni…ok

Sam:What…chasni got hurt..just few months before,she faced a big accident in Kandla yaar and again if she gets hurt means…

Neil hugged sam and began,…

Neil:No Sammy…Its just a minor accident…Nothing to worry…she is perfectly fine…I will go there and make her talk with you..Ok…

Sam:I’m also coming with you neil…

Neil:No sammy..you have to be here with the crew… you don’t worry…I said na…I will take chasni with me soon… so,you carryon the location spotting with our team…Ok..We will shoot our Ad in the later noon with Radhika …I promise..Sam…

Sam:Hmmm…But What about Arjun?…Idiot…

Neil:Just now I received his call..He was fine and he will be here soon at any time…Ok I’m going yaar…Its getting late…you take care Sammy…

Sam nodded yes and felt bad for radz…

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In hospital…

Neil:Chasni…What yaar…you seems..you have fallen in love…

Radz:Neil!!!…

Neil:Haan…yaar…But I din expect this from you…

Radz:Neil…what are you talking about?…

Neil:Your love with hospital…chasni…

Radz smiled hearing this…

Neil:I forgot…Sam wants to talk with you…One minute…

Neil dialled sam’s no and gives his mobile back to Radz to talk with her friend,…

Telephonic convo

Sam:Hey…hello…pagal…you are fine na…

Radz:I’m fine sam…But you are not here na…so feeling bored…

Sam:Don’t worry…Neil will take you with him…And I said na…We wont shoot this Ad without you…And tell me…where were you yesterday…you know…how much tensed we are cox of you…

Radz was about to explain sam but stopped hearing Arjun’s voice over the mobile…

Arjun:Sam…I need to talk with u…

Sam:Haan Arjun…Where were you yesterday man…You know what happened to chasni?…

Arjun:I don’t wanna hear anything about anyone not important..So…

Sam:Arjun…Why…What I’m wrong…you know chasni got hurt yesterday…Even you were not here…Where were you that time?…

Arjun:I missed the crew and due to heavy fog,I was forced to spend my night some where alone…Is this enough or you need sth else…

Sam:No Arjun…You bolo..What you want to say…

Arjun:I think…I need to meet your parents tomorrow after we reached mumbai..

Sam:Why?

Arjun:If things…If not said is good for all…right…

Sam was overhelmed in happiness thinking that Arjun gonna propose her infront of her family nodded yes to him…Arjun left that place after getting affirmation from Sam…Sam,then remembering her phone call with Radz continued..

Sam:Hello…chasni…you are hearing me na…

Radz,who lost in some thoughts began…

Radz:Haan Sam…

Sam:Chasni..you heard na…what Arjun Said…Tomorrow He gonna propose me infront of mom and pa…I’m so happy chasni…

Radz:Me too sam…

Sam:Ok come soon…I wanna hug you…

Saying so Sam ends the call…

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Next day In Mumbai Airport

Radz watching someone’s back in Dark blue saree talking to Arjun from distance…

Radz’s innervoice:Is that Nandhini?…I should find out what secret Arjun sir is concealing from us…Who is this Nandhini?.

Saral:Radhu…I’m talking with u only…Where are you?

Radz:Oh…I have some important work saral…You and ma go with sam…I will come…

Saral:What is so important for you than me Radhu?…

Radz:Saral please…

Saral:I’m your Fiance Radhu…

Sam came there.. and began

Sam:Who said…you are not Chasni’s fianc…that’s y we r tolerating u…Am I right chasni?

Radz:Sam…

Hearing this Saral went out from there…

Sam:Chasni…you know..saral din care about you..when you are found missing that night in mountain range…We all panicked..But he just accusing you chasni,…Why you said ok to marry this idiot…

Radz:Sam…He is ignorant…but he is really a good friend…

Sam:That you only can say chasni…I cant…Yesterday…you saw na..how he reacted when we shooting the Mountain’s Dew Ad…I’m just remaining silent because of you…Orelse I would broke his tooth…

Radz:Sam…We completed shooting the Ad na and even piyali mam told that they liked our Ad…then Why you fretting unnecessarily…I promise…Saral wont do anything wrong again..Ok..

Sam:Hmmm…But still…

Mala:choti…you are not coming with us…

Sam:Mala Aunty…you…And Thankyou so much for coming to mumbai to attend my party…

Mala:you also like my choti…sam…How we cant come…

Sam: If dadaji and dilip uncle also come with us..then it will be so nice…Hai na chasni…But Anyways,I’m so happy and excited that Arjun gonna propose me tonight…

Radz was bit restless hearing this from sam…Later While all indulged busy in talking…Radz used that time to check on Arjun and Nandhini…

Arjun-Radhika

Arjun turned back after ending his conversation with someone in his mobile was stopped seeing Radz there…

Arjun:What r u doing here,Radhika?…Searching for your fianc?..

Radz:No sir…Searching for Nandhini?

Arjun:Who is nandhini?…What r u blabbering?…

Radz:same lady whom you are talking with..a few minutes ago sir…

Arjun holds Radz hand and began

Arjun:I already warned you about this many times…don’t interfere in others matters…Radhika

Seeing neil at distance..Arjun distanced himself from Radz…

Radz:Sir…

Arjun raised his forefinger in anger towards Radz to stop her form asking further…And turned back to move was stopped again by Radz voice…

Radz:My Gold Chain is with you…

Hearing this,Arjun with some lost thoughts took the chain from his shirt Pocket and gave it back to Radz…

Arjun:Then…That’s all…right…from now,I have nothing to give you Radhika…And even I don’t have time to answer your nonsense…Understand…

Saying so,Arjun walked past her made Radz to worry a lot…She don’t realize that she is worrying for sam or Arjun…

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Connection point:

Friends…The next scene is from last part of episode 66-Arjun’s long stare on Radz(orange saree scene Party night)..TheRemaining parts are continued from this episode.As I promised,I completed Missing pieces between Accident Kandala episode to Sam’s party night…

Few things should b altered in the original series…

1.Radz confronting Arjun in the balcony before samrat comes…She used “I met nandhini in hospital”..Here imagine her saying she met in Airport…And in the same scene btw Radz and nandhini repeated in the Airport instead of hospital…

2.Arjun burning Radz dupatta…It was the dupatta used in lonovla in the original series…Here imagine it was the dupatta lost by Radz in this update,which Arjun got in the next day morning…

P.S.:I hope you guys will like this missing pieces journey so far…Lemme know in your comments…Sorry for the late…Your Renu don’t wanna ask excuses repeatedly…But Time made me a victim…And regarding starting the next Part after ardhika marriage…I will let you all know after 2 months yaar…Only If you ppl interested in me continuing this journey once again..I loved many of your comments….Rg(Ramya),Naaga,Sree,Ameena,Roma and many friends…I’m running out of time..so couldn’t type all your names yaar…I cant come online often till next month…

And regarding Tale of hatred into love…Just few more updates remaining to reach a cherishable End…Will post its next update in September Mid or end…Again sorry for the late…Will miss you all buddies…Love you all a lot…

27 comments

  1. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Omg … Renu..thanks 4 updating.. I had been missing this n hatred into love story a long time.. I had never commented in any story if urs.. its just yesterday I was scrolling old pages n wondered y many writers stopped it.. gosh.. am so happy u updated.. will read n comment.. I love Ansh in hatred into love..! Thanks dear

    • Jessie

      |Registered Member

      This is superb…loved it..!saral d dumbo.. its has been a year d show went off air.. but with ur mention any connection epi… the scenes got refreshed… will be eagerly waiting 4 hatred into love story update..pls bring it soon… at least short updates… plzzzzz..
      I loved this missing pieces..coz the show was kinda rushing after lonavala trip n few things vanished..lol .. but here we had enough of everything…dadaji with Arjun is something which I wished on screen..a slow and steady pace.. loved it..! TC n loads of love..may u get lotssa free time 2 update d story..😉😉

      • Renu.

        |Author

        thank you so much Jessie…

        Its my pleasure to know..u liked both the story…And sure will try to update dear…But cant promise…

  2. Lakshmi05

    |Registered Member

    How r u renu?? Thanks for the update renu..It’s really amazing..Really ur this missing pieces r perfect fit for original story dear.Loved ardhika n nesam convo’s n cute moments.Every episode of this story is superb. You gave justification to some scenes n their emotions of MMZ. You have narrated every emotion n everyone’s confusion n feelings very nicely..u r amazing dear. If u have time then plz write missing pieces part 2 which starts after ardhika’s marraige. May god bless u with all happiness n success dear..luv u ..tc.. 🙂 🙂 🙂 .

    • Renu.

      |Author

      lakshmi…thanks a lot yaar…

      I’m so glad you liked this last shot…And thank you so much sweetheart,…

      sure will try to write..but not sooner…only after 2 months dear..

      But will update you guys in the Tale of hatred into love about starting part 2 of thmissing pieces

  3. Gianna

    |Registered Member

    How r u Renu, hope u are okay. Loved this maha episode. U have connected the dots perfectly n I would love to read ur version of the story after Ardhika marriage. Stay blessed

    • Renu.

      |Author

      I’m fine dear….

      Hope u too fine….

      And thank you so much deary …Nice to hear from you dear…Sure will try to write next part too..

  4. Shree

    |Registered Member

    Renu kanne!! Epdi iruka? I missed you so much!! I thought nee elarayum maranduta.. writing vituta nu.. happy to see you here and remember us all.. unnaku enna inno gnyabagam iruku.. aww.. love you so much..

    Ponne the update was awesome.. in imagination ku alave illa.. it’s awesome.. both of them missing.. Neil’s hidden pain.. that’s masked with a smile… Sam us usual buddu.. aparam… Temple scene.. hospital.. airport..

    Loved it so much!! September varaikum wait pannanuma? Please di kannamma seekrama vaa.. waiting for part two… I love both the stories from the bottom of my heart..

    Seekrama update pannu.. love you 😍😘

    • Renu.

      |Author

      Romba nalla iruken sree,,,,

      how could you think that I will forget you you all dear…

      Me too missed you all so much….

      thanks deary…what to do yaar…i can post next update around mid of the sep ly….but will try for you deary

      Love you too sweetheart..

  5. Savera

    Dear Renu ….
    Thank you very much. ..
    I was waiting for. ….it..
    You are simply superb writer. ..
    Awesome episode. …
    I just loved it..

  6. Naaga

    Renuuuuu How r u ? After a long gape……miss u sooooo much ma.

    Asusual superaaaaà 👌👌👌👌 irundhadhu.

    …Missing pieces inni romba miss pannuven ninaikiren.

    And pls story writing i mean writing skills waste panidaadhey, yellorukkum idhu kidaikkadhu, u blessed one, pls continue in future also. I wish unnoda yellla wishes niraiveranumnu _👍 adhula oru wish ah kandipa writing carrier irukkum ninaikiren.

    All the Best for Ur Future ma 💐

    • Renu.

      |Author

      Naomi….How r you dear?

      I’m fine….just cold for last few days.. and Asusual enjoyed reading your tamil comments but this time its most about me right…..

      Thanks dear…I have no words to express my gratitude dear…..I have a diff thought about a story line few days before…this is not from Ardhika…A new character not yet telecasted in any tv show.

      So after completing ardhika stories and if i find free time,will try to write that story….Mean time will develop the characters in that story.

      May b next year….I will update that story…But dunno where to update…cox its completely new na..not related to any fictional characters we knew already….

      I will let you know about that once I started penning down my thoughts of that story

      Thank you again deary

      Miss you too….

  7. Rossy

    |Registered Member

    This is awesome..first part of missing piece was awesome,brilliantly written…waiting for ur second half of missing piece…thanks dear for ur story..

  8. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding renuuuuuuu. …my sweeeeeetu sissy. …I missed you sooooo sooooo soooooooo muchhhhhh….u know I was worried for you…finding ways find you somewhere. ….how r u my sweeeeeetheart? I hope you r doing well. …keep loving us the way you always did…. we r alwaysssss here for u….coming to today’s episode….it was really superbbbb n outstanding. …ardhika nok jhok n cute moments, nesam convo n saral’s annoyance….it was really very interesting n exciting journey of mmz missing pieces part 1….I enjoyed this roller coster ride veryyyyyyy muchhhhhh….specially your added parts made it very very beautiful…..and now I’m waiting for the next one….I know u r busy but still took the time to create this master piece n shared with us….I really appreciate your efforts n determination….I love you soooooooo muchhhhhh my darling renu for your humble n friendly nature. …I made so many friends here only coz of this show mmz….all of you guys have very special place in my heart. …n I adore you soooooooo muchhhhhh. …you r my solace….thx for being there for me….keep it up honeyyy…. I love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug. ..lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss 🙂 ♡♡♡ 😉

    • Renu.

      |Author

      romaaaaaaaa….My sweetypieeeeee…I’m fine dear…..Hope you are fine tooooooooo……Sorry deary for making you wait for a long time….Situations made me difficult to write…..ORelse I would have posted it sooner….

      I’m always love reading your comment dear….your encouragement,friendly bonding with me made me emotional few times….

      thanks a lot for that dear….I know…i shouldnt thank you cox u r my friend..but still I have no option in expressing my gratitude deary….

      Love you toooooooo….sweetheart…..

  9. Jnana

    |Registered Member

    Hey!!! I’m new to your comment section not for your story….. I have read it from the starting and was waiting for your update finally you updated…… Your writing is awesome….. Post the next soon….tc….

    • Renu.

      |Author

      thanks a lot dear for taking your time to read and comment

      I’m glad you read this ff from the beginning..Again thanks dear….

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