Manmarziyan Missing pieces Part 1 – Episode 24

Hiii friends…How are you all?…Hope you all fine…No more talks…I’m going straightaway to the story…I knew you guys are expert in forgiving your Renu like Radhika…So,I think there’s no need for Renu to apologise each time for giving late updates…Am I Right?…lol…I hope you all will like this update…

Asusual Ignore my Grammatical mistakes here and there…Here we go…

Episode 24 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

In the eve of birthday celebrations, Radz noticed a raging storm in Arjun’s eyes, an Unknown silence in his voice and an oppressiveness in his heart…Here the words were restrained between them but their eyes speaks a lot which no one can hear not even their mind,…

Saral:Ok…Now…Its time for celebration…Hai na Radhu…Cheer up guys…ooohhh…

These words from saral made both of them to stop their silent heart to heart convo by breaking their intense eyelock…

Sam:Sure…Come chasni…

Saying so,Sam tried to take Radz away from Arjun’s eyesight…But Arjun,who couldn’t hold it for any more stopped sam in mid…

Arjun:Sam…One minute…

Sam:Haan… Arjun…Bolo…

Arjun staring Radz uttered…

Sam:I think,…I should leave now…

Radz too gazed Arjun without blinking her eyes…

Sam:Arjun…Please … stay here till bday celebration na…

Arjun:No sam…Please…You ppl carry on…I will wait for you guys in hotel…

Saying so,Arjun walked away from the venue…Sam was clueless whereas Radz felt restlessness seeing Arjun moving out…

Ankush:Choti…Where were you?…Cut the cake na…

Radz smiled lightly hiding her inner turbulence blew the candles off and cuts the cake…All shouted in happiness wishing Radz with claps and songs…

Chorus:Happy Birthday to Radhika…Happy birthday to Radhika Mishra…Happy Birthday to the light of our family…

Arjun,who heard all these while moving out was disturbed to a greater extent…His heart yearns to see Radz cutting the cake atleast once…He reached the entrance of Radz house…just few more steps ahead to leave Radz house completely… In a battle between his mind and heart…Arjun gave up to his heart…He turned back atleast to have a glimpse of Radz…To his bad luck,He couldn’t see her cox of the crowd there…But Arjun’s heart never lost its hope and he jumped a bit to have her darshan…finally he succeded in his mission,got to see Mala feeding cake to radz…It lightens his face too but that doesn’t last long…The next thing which he saw hurts him badly…you all know what it is…Saral…Yes,…Saral feeds cake to Radz forcefully and increased Arjun’s temper to another level…As a result,It makes him to leave Radz’s house without giving any second thought…But He was stopped seeing Dadaji there…First he tries to ignore Dadaji…But,Dadaji is Dadaji…He knew how to push Arjun’s right button…

Dadaji:Arjun beta…Where were you going hurriedly before wishing my choti…Comw with me inside…

Saying so,Dadaji holds Arjun’s hands…Arjun felt helplessness and began…

Arjun:No Dadaji…I have an important work…I have to go…Please…Don’t compel me…Further my wish wont have any impact on Radhika dadaji…

Dadaji noticed Arjun’s disturbed looks,…Dadaji started grinning at him and began…

Dadaji:Ohhh!!!!…But its your duty to wish her atleast once hai na…Cox you are her boss na beta…

Arjun took the chain from his pocket and gave it to Dadaji…

Dadaji:What’s this beta…Why are you giving this to me…

Arjun:Give this to Radhika Dadaji…

Dadaji:your gift for her…So Beautiful beta…but…

While dadaji admiring the gift…Arjun began…

Arjun: And don’t tell her..It was from me…Dadaji…Please…

Dadaji:Why…Why don’t you give this to her beta…What’s there in it to hide Arjun…

Arjun:No Dadaji,the value of this chain with me and you will make much difference…If it’s given from your hand to Radhika,It will become priceless and precious Dadaji…so,Please…you should…

Dadaji noticing an intense pain in his eyes began…

Dadaji: You said your wish have no impact on choti..But giving a costly Golden chain as her birthday gift…And You don’t wanna attend her birthday function but trying hard to see choti from distance…Aisa…What you want beta…Why you punishing yourself?…

Arjun letting out a painful smile began,

Arjun:You don’t understand dadaji…I cant lie to you and at the same time, I don’t have any truthful answer for your questions dadaji…Hmmm..(Arjun chuckled himself and continued)…I don’t deserve to be in light because I born to eat the light by spreading my darkness dadaji…I should go now taking those darkness away from reaching the light dadaji…I forgot my reality Dadaji…Darkness never reach the light…For light to shine brightly,Darkness should always be evaded from the sight of the light Dadaji…

Saying so,Arjun tried to move was stopped again to hear dadaji’s words…

Dadaji:Inorder for the light to shine so brightly,the Darkness must be present beta…you are right… Darkness never reach the light ..It always waits for light to spread it’s rays beta…I dunno whats disturbing you…But Listen to this old man beta…You can stop your eyes from seeing what your heart wants but you cant stop your heart from feeling for it beta…

Arjun:Perhaps…you are right dadaji…Only time should prove it…

Saying so,He smilingly bent down to get dadaji’s blessings…

Dadaji:Kush Rao…beta…

Dadaji, holding Arjun’s gift in his hand felt bad seeing him walking out with a worried face…

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Next Day Morning in Mishra’s house…

Dilip:Sam beta…You said you ppl going for trekking today…This means it will take atleast a week from now to complete this journey hai na…So,Till then…

Sam:No uncle…As we are already running out of time,We just planned it for an Easy trek…I mean, It’s just two days trek uncle… So, no difficult climbing…Even there, We can shoot colorful horizons of a whole series of shilvalik mountain ranges,Waterfall and much more needed for this project. With some Editing effects,We will make it as looks like original difficult trekking…

Radz:Sam…You mean…just 2 days…But We planned it as something innovative,… hai na…

Sam:Haan chasni..But,next week manya is coming India and we should get back to Maybelline newyork ad too na..So,mom told to finish it off within this week…Yesterday cox of your birthday,I forgot to inform you these…

Radz:Its ok Sam…No problem…

Dilip:And Sam beta…If you need any help there,Inform me…Ok…

Sam:Sure uncle…I think,..there’s no need for that…

Saral having Tea joined their convo…

Saral:Oh…then Radhu too coming with you ppl…

Sam:Yes ofcourse…Without chasni,…We cant shoot this Ad itself…

Saral:Papa…Its our area na…shall I go with Radhu…It will be a great help to the crew too…Hai na Radhu…

Radz felt annoyed a bit hearing this from Saral…

Dilip:Haan..But,you should ask sam,saral …Cox It shouldn’t affect their work too,.. hai na…Sam…

Sam:Nothing like that uncle…We have no problem in taking saral with us, …Saral,you can come with us…What chasni?…Is it ok for you na…

Radz posturing a fake smile on her face signalled yes to sam…

Dilip:Hmmm … Choti…come here beta…

Radz:What papa…

Dilip:Take care of yourself beta…

Radz:hmmm…

Saying so radz hugged dilip affectionately made others too feel emotional…

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In shilvalik mountain Range of Rishikesh…

The overcast sky,Moist fresh Air,Sweet singing of birds,Sounds of waterfalls made the entire crew to enjoy the scenario without making much noise…Arjun noticed saral and Radz coming behind him…

And Sam was busy in checking the network in her mobile and tried to seek Neil’s help…

Sam:Idiot..check network in your mobile na…

Neil ignored sam and went ahead alone near a waterfall…And busy in clicking some Rare Photographs of waterfall with his new camera…

Sam was about to follow him was stopped by a crew member Rajesh mukani …

Rajesh:Madam…It seems to be dark soon…Shall we put tent here for our stay tonight…

Sam:You asked Arjun about this,rajesh???…

Rajesh:No mam…Arjun sir is far behind us…

Sam:Its ok…I will inform him…you guys put the tent 100 to 200 meters away from here…

Rajesh:ok mam…

Saying so,he directed the other ppl to build tent for their night stay…In this,Sam missed Neil…She walked alone near the waterfall,where she saw Neil taking photographs few minutes before…

The serenic beauty of nature made sam to forget herself for a minute…She started enjoying it like a child…She kept her things on the ground and started filling her watercan from the clear running stream nearby after dancing and jumping there for a while…And While taking water,some small fishes swimming in the stream brought a big smile on sam’s face seeing its beauty…

Sam:Idiot…see here na…Wow…Its sooo beautiful…Idiot

Saying so,Sam tried to catch that colourful fishes in her Water bottle…But it escaped everytime from sam’s trap…(So smart fishes…)

Sam:Idiot…Help me to catch this fishes na…Idiot…I’m shouting here and thum…

Saying so,Sam turned back was shocked seeing no one there…she checked almost everywhere for neil by rotating her eyes almost in all direction…

Sam:Idiot…Kahan ho thum…Neil…

After few minutes,A sudden pain gulped her throat and she left the water bottle in the stream in this tension…Her heart was no more in a position to enjoy the nature’s beauty or anything present there…the waterfall sound which she liked a few minutes before seems to irritate her now a lot… cox she has been already warned by the local people and dilip uncle about the dangers in the Mountain Ranges…First sam din loss her hyper but as time passes…She started panicking…

Sam:Idiot…Where were you?…Idiot…Please come outside…Dont play like this…If I found you,I will beat you black and blue…

While yelling this louder,Sam saw Neil’s bag near the bark of a tree…It gave her a temporary relaxation…Sam ran towards it to scold her Idiot for panicking her like this…

Sam:Idiot…How dare you?…You made me feel tensed yaar… you know One second, My heart stops beating yaar…How you know…you don’t listen to me..Hai na…Today I wont leave you for this…

Saying so,Sam turned the bag was fully disappointed finding Neil’s Bag alone there…It increased her fear more…Tears started rolling down her cheeks,which sam failed to notice that she is crying for her idiot for the first time in her life…

Sam:No…Idiot is fine…Why I’m thinking like this…I’m really a stupid hoon yaar…Your bag is here…It means..You also somewhere here right…I knew…My neil will come…

Saying so,Sam wiped her face and took Neil’s bag from the tree’s bark… kept it near her things… the loneliness there dinn affect sam,…but something disturbs her…She sat on the mud with a sad face…A few minutes later,Seeing a kookoo bird there,Sam began…

Sam:Why… you stopped singing??…You know…My idiot na…will make you too to dance…see then,you too will fell in love with him…Truly…He is something…He will do anything for my happiness…He don’t have anything for his own…I’m his world…He is the World’s best friend hoon…

Saying so,Sam reminisced Lonovla moments(where neil surprised her with fireflies) which brought smile on her face…

Sam:Idiot…See…I’m talking alone…Come soon yaar…I feel bored neil…Where are you?…Come soon…

Saying so, Sam hugged her bag by placing her head on it with some lovely memories of her Idiot…

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Radz was lost in some deep thoughts whereas Arjun,who is walking in front of them was busy in listening saral and Radz convo…

Saral:Radhu…Climate is so nice hai na…

Hearing saral’s words,Radz just let out a fake smile in reply…

Saral:Radhu…I forgot to ask…How’s my gift?…

Radz:What gift saral?…

Saral was angry, hearing this from Radz began with a grumpy face,

Saral: Your birthday gift…Which I bought it for you…you know it’s worth…I told you yesterday itself na..to check the gift before you go to bed…

Radz:Oh…I forgot saral…No problem…After the trek,I will check it…

Saral in angry holds Radz arms made Arjun to fume,…He stopped moving and watched Saral’s misbehaviour with Radz…A rage of intense fire was clearly visible in Arjun’s reddened eyes…

Saral:You saying.. you forgot.. simply…Try to learn something from your sister Riddhima Radhu…

Radz noticed Arjun’s angry stare…began in a low voice…

Radz:Saral…please…I came here to do my work…So please…

Saral left his hold and began…

Saral:Work..work..work…you forgot yourself in these temporary things Radhu…You should learn how to take care of your family too…

In reply to this,A voice over from Saral’s back makes saral irritated and Arjun to leave that place in angry…

Neil:No way saral…What you think of my chasni…She knew how to balance her career and her family…such a sweet girl man…Infact you are lucky to get chasni like girl as your would be…

Saying so,Neil side hugs saral made saral angry and he left the place without saying anything in reply to Neil…

Neil:Harree Saral…Where are you going man,…I din yet start telling about chasni and you started running away…Too bad yaar..Stop yaar…saral…

Radz smilingly holds Neil’s hand and began…

Radz:Neil…Neil…

Neil:Chasni..your mangetar is too stubborn yaar…Now he has to join some classes to learn how to behave yaar…

Both smiled seeing Saral’s stupid behavior…

Radz:Its ok…Leave Neil…He is always like this…And haan…thum yahan kaise???…

Neil:Oh! I just came here to take the water bottle and…

Radz:Water bottle???…What water bottle Neil…And you got?…

Neil:No…Not yet yaar…Ok…You carry on…I’ll join you all soon…

Saying so,Neil was about to go was stopped by Radz’s hold…

Radz:Neil…Sam is with you only na…

Neil:Haan chasni…you don’t worry about any…Go soon…Its getting dark yaar…

Saying so,Neil patted Radz head affectionately and left her alone to carry out his mission…

Radz was puzzled to think about any cox of the happenings around her…While lost in some thinking,she stepped on a slope mistakenly and it lets her to slip…By God’s grace,She managed to hold the rock nearby…All happened within a few seconds…Now Radz was hanging at the cliff of that rock…she yelled for help…

Radz:Neil…Neil…I slipped here under the rock…Saral… some one save me…Please…Neil…Saral…

Her Hands were reddened in pain…She couldn’t hold the rock for long because of her Bag too…It too weighs more…Radz checked underneath was shocked seeing the stream and dense trees below…

Precap:Neil surprised sam by showing her bottle full of small colorful fishes

Credit to: Renu

17 comments

  1. Aastha

    superb !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! will say rest in the mrng……………plzzzzzzzz update the other one……..

  2. I miss your story a lot please try to post it soon, and congrats I saw your name on Monica Sehgal twitter, your one lucky girl. Stay bless. πŸ™‚

    Renu I also wrote a ff it is called rectify: Manmarziyan please read and comment. πŸ™‚

  3. Renuuuuuu my Sweet Heart ? i miss u alot, hru ma ? Today’s piece ws so so Tasty ?

    Today Ardhika portion ws little less. I think radhu aware abt the chain, it ws presented by her boss.

    Oru chinna varutham yennana arjun radhuva wish panni irundhriklam ???
    Saral arambichitaana po inni arjun kanla ratha kaneer ah parkkalam ???
    Apppppa radhu slip aagitaa anga vera namma aala thavara yaarum illa, appidiavadhu rendu per um thaniya irukkatumey, next piece la Ardhika scenes adhigama irukkumnu nineikkiren. Pls Renu, try to post soon. Plsssssss
    OK ma Bye, gud nite ? & sweet dreams ?????

  4. Loved it dear πŸ™‚ I think saral should get tight slap….. Idiot always hurting rads….. Stupid …. Rads hanging on clips ohhhhhhh goooooodddddd….. If arjun helps her oh god DAT ll b superbbbbbbbb πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ loved it dear

  5. Gianna

    Awesome update I just recently read all ur episodes in one go and I love this story. This Saral is getting more and more unbearable each time. Stay blessed

  6. Jessie

    Nice update Renu.. precap looks awesome… loved dadaji-Arjun.. Ah.. this saral is a pain.. waiting 4 nxt one dear

  7. subha

    mind blowing episode…..renu…..really missed u r ff……eagerly waiting next one………pls pls pls pls pls update next one soon…..tc

  8. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode. ..renuuuuuuu my lovely sis…you nailed it again my sweeeeeetheart. …finally you updated this series. ….u r 1000% correct…we can’t be angry on you…you don’t need to sorry for anything….in friends – ‘No Sorry No Thankyou’ πŸ˜‰ … as soon I see ur update my face get big smile…n today’s update made my day…dadaji n arjun convo was mind blowing. …arjun so longingly wants to see his ladylove but fighting hard with his heart n mind…saral jerk..so annoying, Neil gave very good reply to him…Sam desperately missing neil in jungle as she lost path n only calling for neil n reminishing her moments with him….awww…rads slipped!!!…cliffhanger. ..I hope arjun will save her…fingers crossed. ..precap is very interesting n exciting. …keep it up honeyyy. ..eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜€ ….β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘

  9. nita

    Nice one renu…..if you have time plss update regularly…. Update your other ff also……waiting for Nxt one

  10. Renu

    Hiiiiii friends

    Thanks a lot guys….

    I’m owed to you all for this yaar….

    So,I will try my level best to update asap not taking long gaps…

    Miss you all buddies…

    A short sneak peak of ardhika

    Radz:Sir truly, I’m not doing any to stop your engagement…

    Arjun:Pakka…

    Radz:Pakka….(letting out a smile)…Finally your engagement gonna happen…How do you feel now???

    Arjun:Same…as Like your engagement day…

    Regards

    Renu

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