Manmarziyan Missing pieces Part 1 – Episode 23

Hiii friends,…This is your Renu,..First I gave updates twice in a week and then it became once,…Now,It turned out to be once or twice in a month,…Please Excuse me for long gap btw each updates,…Actually I’m struggling to spend my valid time in writing cox of my personal stuffs and exams nearby,..So please Bear with me guys,…I hope you all will like this as well,,…Asusual Ignore my grammatical mistakes here and there,…

Episode 23 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

“Ring,..Ring,…Ring,…”

Radz phone buzzed insistently in her room as it is eagerly waiting to transfer her voice via wireless signals to the restless heart on the other end after she left Mumbai,…

Dadaji walked in her room and began,

Dadaji:Choti,…Ur Mobile is ringing beta,…

Radz from restroom answered,

Radz:Haaan Dadaji,..It might be Sam’s,…U attend the call na dadaji,..I’ll come in a minute,…

Hearing this,Dadaji attends the call,…

****Telephonic Convo****

Arjun:Radhika,…How are you?,..Are you Fine?,…Nothing wrong right,…Why are you silent?,…Talk something Radhika,…Radhika,..

Dadaji:Haan Arjun beta,..Here all are fine,…Why are you so tensed man?,…

Hearing Dadaji’s voice,Arjun was stumbled for a second hearing dadaji’s laughing sound,…

Dadaji:Why you want to talk with Radhika alone,… not to this old man beta,…Oh,..Now I understood,..You want to talk with Radhika something personal,…Am I right,.. Wait I’ll give it to her,…Is this old man seems to be a hurdle for you,Arjun?,…

Arjun falters for a second hearing this from dadaji,..After taking a deep breath,he cope up with his tactful speech,…

Arjun:Nothing like that Dadaji,…Radhika left office suddenly,…Tomorrow,We have an important assignment,…I’m her Boss na,..So,Its my duty to inquire,…That’s all Dadaji,…Nothing else,..Now, you all fine,…So,I’m ending my call,…

Dadaji:Harre Arjun,…One minute,..Now,I din have water bottle too to explain you again,…

Hearing this from dadaji,A smile glittens arjun’s face remembering his last encounter with Dadaji’s Waterbottle preach,…

Dadaji:What Arjun,…Are you in line beta?,…Arjun,…

Arjun:Haan Dadaji,..I’m hearing,…

Dadaji:Good,…Arjun,Could you do a favour for me,beta?,…

Arjun:Ofcourse Dadaji,…What should I?,…

Dadaji:Tomorrow,…Choti’s Birthday beta,…I don’t want to see her hurt on her birthday Arjun,…Will you guys come here tomorrow,…

Arjun was froze hearing Dadaji’s words,…Right then,Radz came from Restroom while wiping her face with towel began,…

Radz:Dadaji,..who is in line,…Sam,…

Seeing Radz,Dadaji hides his convo with Arjun,..HE kept the mobile on the bed after offing the backlight of the mobile rather cutting the call,…Hearing Radz voice there,Arjun inquisitively prepared himself to know what’s going on there,…

Dadaji:Wooh,…Its your Arjun sir beta,…

Radz was shocked hearing this for a second like arjun,…

Radz:Arjun sir,…What you talked with him dadaji?,…You din say anything about my birthday to Arjun sir na dadaji,…

Dadaji stammered while answering Radz,…

Dadaji:,..Me,…What I can talk with him,…Nooo,..I,…I din,…

Right then,Riddhima came in and began,…

Riddhima:Choti,..u are still awake,…Go,..Go and sleep,…U know na,..tomorrow your devarji planned to give u a big surprise choti,…

Radz smiled with some annoyance began,

Radz:Hmmm,..I knew gunjan di,…U already said this to me ten times,…If its a real surprise,then you shouldn’t say it many times di,…And Now I’m just talking with dadaji,…Will go to bed after few minutes,..

Riddhima:Good,…I’m so exited than you,…

Radz:Di,..one minute,…

Riddhima:Hmmm,..what?,…

Radz:Di,. you could have told all this atleast to me na,..Why you panicked ma and dadaji,…u know na,..Dadaji already had arthritis,…And ma too was tensed,…There’s no need to celebrate my birthday like this Di,…

Riddhima:Oh!,..It means I’m wrong na choti,…

Radz:I din mean that,…But,…

Riddhima:See choti,…This is the last birthday you gonna celebrate here,..you know how we longing to see you after accident,…ma,papa and dadaji ly met you,..If i said about this celebration,like last time you will cook any story to avoid this,..

Radz:I din cook any story di,..Dadaji has,…

Riddhima:You or dadaji,..It doesn’t matter,…What matter us is you avoided us choti,…

Radz:No di,…I never,…

Riddhima:you know choti,I’m jealous on you seeing devarji’s affection for you,..He always thinking about you,..He did all preparations from last week,…But you are not paying any heeds to him and us as well,…For you,Mumbai is important,..your temporary friends are important,..not us na,…

Dadaji sensing Radz being hurt began,…

Dadaji:stop it Riddhima,…Why are you saying big words to choti?,…

Riddhima:You dunno anything dadaji,…Because of you,she is like this,…I’m also daughter of this family,…What, I went anywhere saying its my dream,…No na,…I’m not enemy for her dadaji,…She is my sister,..She should understand all these are temporary,…Her Sam or friends wont come with her lifelong,…As a girl of this family,she should know how to take care of her family too,…

Saying so,riddhima turned towards radz and began,

Riddhima:Its just a matter of 6 months choti,…But,you are giving more importance to the temporary things leaving your permanent relationships under stake,…How soon you understand this,it will be good for you and our family,…

Saying so,Riddhima left Radz room,… Radz had tears hearing harsh words from her sister,… Whereas Arjun,who was hearing the convo silently in the phone was confused and he layed down on his bed to understand what’s going on there in Radz life,…

Dadaji:Choti,..come here beta,…

Radz layed on dadaji’s lap with tears,…she din notice her mobile near her and still someone is hearing what she is saying,…

Radz:Dadaji,…What mistake I did Dadaji?,..Why di is always accusing me alone?,…I wanna pursue my dreams,..Is it wrong dadaji?,…

Dadaji wiped Radz tears and began,…

Dadaji:Choti,…You know what’s the two most important days in your life?,…

Radz like a child layed straight on dadaji’s lap facing dadaji began,

Radz:One is My Birthday,…and another,…

Dadaji:Correct,…One is the day you born beta and other is the day you find out the reason for it,…The truth is we all are meant to thrive something continuously to figure out our second day in our life choti,… There is nothing worse than living a life somebody else designed for you beta. Enough is enough choti,…I want you to live a life like a butterfly choti not like a worm beta,…Even fireflies life period is too less,but it lives its life freely on its own thru offereing its light to this world beta,…

Radz stood from dadaji’s lap and sits erect with some deep thoughts hearing the real meaning of the words dadaji uttered began,

Radz:Dadaji,…I too want to live like a butterfly but not at the cost of papa’s happiness dadaji,…Papa allowed me to pursue my dreams,…Now,I’m living my dreams dadaji,…Its my duty to repay my owes to him na dadaji,…

Dadaji smilingly began,

Dadaji:If you settled for what your papa,ridhima expects from you,then One day you will regret beta,…It’s not cox of them but cox you are not brave enough to pursue your dreams and live your life for yourself beta,…That day,..this old man also not near you to console you beta,…

Radz:No dadaji,..Life is sometimes holding the memories of our past victory too na dadaji,…I too will cherish these period in my life as a writer,as a true friend to sam,as a butterfly of my dadaji and as choti of our family,…And my dadaji wont go anywhere as he is always with me in my heart na dadaji,…

Hearing this,…Dadaji too had some unknown tears in his eyes,..whereas Arjun was hell shocked hearing this understood Radz was also stuck for her family like he stuck in his revenge for his Di,…But he cant figure out what it is,…

Dadaji:chalo,..close your eyes,…

Saying so dadaji closed her eyes with his fingers,..Radz holds his fingers and began,

Radz:Why dadaji?,…

Dadaji gave her a cover which he kept under cot,a few hours ago…

Radz:What’s this dadaji,…

Dadaji:Wait for 10 seconds,…countown starts,…9,..8,…7,…6,…5,…4,…3…2…Happy Birthday to you,…Happy birthday to my choti,…Happy birthday to the light of this house,… Radhika Mishra,…

Radz:Thank you Dadaji,…

Radz was in cloud nine seeing this surprise from her dadaji,…She thought only her dadaji wouldn’t miss wishing her first at this hour on her every birthday in this world,…But,she dunno the other fact that Arjun is the one who really wished her first silently with some unknown pain in his eyes this time,…

Dadaji:Now open the cover choti,..

Radz,who opened the cover was happy seeing a blue lehenga as a birthday gift from her dadaji,…

Radz:Dadaji,…Its my favourite,…thank you so much dadaji,…Really,Thank you dadaji,…

She had tears of happiness seeing the gift given by his dadaji,…

Dadaji:I had another surprise too beta,…

Radz:What Dadaji?,…

Dadaji:You will know tomorrow evening?,…the one who loves you gonna come here from Mumbai for you,…

Radz was puzzled hearing this,…whereas Arjun was confused and remembered what dadaji said earlier to him,…

Radz:Mumbai,…Means,…Is it Sam,..dadaji

Dadaji:I wont say any beta,…you will know tomorrow,…Now,go to sleep,…

Saying so,dadaji left the two confused soul alone who were separated by physical distance and united by the destiny again and again,…

Radz innervoice:who will come?,..May be sam or Neil,..But Dadaji din talk with them na,…Hmmm,..May be Arjun Sir,…No Radhika,..It’s not possible,…Then,who is that special person Dadaji,…

Meanwhile On the other end,Arjun,who ends the call also indulged in some thoughts,..

Arjun’s Innervoice:How I can,Dadaji?,…Why I should do this?,…Radhika’s birthday is nothing special to me,…But,its special for Sam,…Yes,Now No one can stop me from reaching my destination,…Not even you Radhika Mishra,…

Thinking so,Arjun went into a deep sleep like Radz,…

*******

Next day afternoon,In Hrishikesh Hotel,…

Neil was standing alone at the corridor,…Sam with some hesitance came near him and began,…

Sam:Climate is nice na Idiot,…

Neil:Haan,..Bilkul perfect,…You packed Gift for Chasni,…

Sam:Haan,…Its done already,…Today chasni gonna faint seeing my gift,…

Neil:What gift Sammy?,…

Sam:Icecream cake,…

Neil:Sam,..Really,..you gonna present Icecream cake as birthday gift for chasni,…

Sam:Haan,…Idiot,…I knew,she loves eating Icecream cake,…See,today she gonna have full even without sharing,…

Neil smiled seeing sam’s concern for Radz,…And sam continued,…

Sam:This chasni na,..always think something wrong gonna happen,…I told her already,..Nothing wrong will happen,..Her dad and bhaiya will be fine,..See,Now it’s all a prank,.. she na,…really stupid neil,…

Neil:Ok,..shall we go to Radhika’s house now,…

Sam:Hmmm,…

Neil:Sam,…Where is Arjun?,…He too come with us na,…

Sam:Wooh,..Arjun has some important work idiot and he said,he will join us in Radhika’s home,…

Neil:Means,..He knew Radhika’s house already,…Even We dunno right,…

Sam:No,…I said,..I’ll text him the address,..And idiot,…you know na,..Arjun did all these for me,…I love him so much yaar,…I’m really blessed to have him in my life na Idiot,…

Hearing sam’s words and sensing sam’s love for another person,Neil was extremely hurt like a beaten chick,…He was about to leave or else he will end up showing his heart to sam today,…Seeing Neil leaving,Sam stopped him by holding his wrist began,

Sam:One minute Neil,…What happened to you?,..

Neil wiping his unknown tears of known pain began,…

Neil:Nothing Sammy,…Its time for me to leave now yaar,…

Sam:No Idiot,…Its time for us to leave,..Not you alone,…

Neil:Sammy…Please yaar,…you get ready,…I’ll come,…

Saying so Neil tried to move by releasing sam’s hold on his wrist,…Sam stared Neil sensing some tension in his face began,…

Sam:Idiot,…Face me yaar,..I’m watching you from last few days,…What happened to you,…What should I do to prove myself to you,Neil?,…

Neil chuckled hearing this and took sam’s hand from his and began,…

Neil:You have nothing to prove to me Sammy,..

Sam:Then,Why are you like this Idiot?,…

Neil:I just want you to understand yourself,..what you need the most in your life Sammy,…

Sam:Idiot,…You doubt Arjun,…

Neil again giggled hearing this and began,…

Neil:No Sammy,…I doubt you only,…

Sam was puzzled and shocked hearing this and began,

Sam:Me,…Means,…

Neil:Means,..You are confused between our friendship and your love Sammy,…you are my best friend Sammendher singh,..My human diary,…My other half,…You mean the world to me Sammy,…I don’t want to lose you,our friendship in your love Sam,…Get Ready soon,…Chasni will be waiting for us,…

Saying so Neil patted sam’s cheek affectionately and left bewildered sam alone,…

******************

At evening,In Radz House,…

Arjun walked in with some hesitation and glared the decorations done for the birthday celebration and the people wandering in the house,…He stood near a pillar and slowly took a thin Gold chain from his pocket and looked at it desirously,…After a while,he came out of his submerged thoughts by dadaji’s hold on his shoulder,…

Dadaji:Arjun beta,..What are you doing here?,…Come inside,…

Seeing Dadaji there,..Arjun kept his gift,which he bought for a precious soul in his pocket hurriedly,.

Arjun:Sure,Dadaji,…

**********

Saral announced Radz arrival in the hall made everyone there to listen him,…

Saral:Everyone here,..Listen please,…Now,…My gordgeous girl gonna come here to cut this wonderful costly cake of mine,…Here she is,…

Saying so,Saral fingered towards Radz coming from a Room in an elegant,Beautiful Blue Lehanga with simple Hair style along with Sam,Riddhima and mala,…

Arjun turned towards Radz was stunned seeing her in a Lehenga for the first time,..His eyes were glued on her but No one there has time to notice this crave in his eyes for Radz,… Before Radz reach the place to cut the cake,Dilip went towards Arjun and took him near Radz,..

Dilip:One minute choti,…Arjun,…You,..Come here Beta,..you are our special person,..

Arjun:No Uncle,…I,..

Dilip:That day you din save our choti means,…today we cant celebrate her birthday like this,…

Sam smiled seeing them,…whereas,Radz felt restless while staring him,…

Ankush:Choti,..you wont introduce your Arjun sir to us,…

Hearing this,everyone including dilip,sam,Neil,Dadaji burst out into a big smile except Arjun and Radz,…

Radz:Nothing like that Bhaiya,..This is Arjun Sir,…And Arjun sir,..This is my Brother Ankush Mishra,…

Arjun greeted him,…

Arjun:Hai,…

Ankush:Hello,…

Saral was expecting for his turn and Radz fulfilled his expectation,…

Radz:And… This is my Fiance,… Saral,…

The smile on Arjun’s face vanished suddenly hearing this from Radz,..Instead of greeting saral,..Arjun’s eyes burned in Rage while staring Radz for answer and he even crushed the chain in his pocket which he bought for her with some anguish,…All were looking at Arjun for the moment to see him greeting Saral,…But,here Arjun only knew his thundering of emotions and anger on Radz hearing she was engaged already,…Whereas Radz,who understood the situation signalled him to greet Saral thru her beautiful brown eyes,…Finally he made up his mind to face Saral like nothing affects him and also to have a look at her fianc,who gonna marry her,…

Saral:Hai,…

Saying so,He offered handshake to the burning Angry bird Arjun,…And Hiding his rage,Arjun accepted his handshake with fake smile…

Arjun:Hai,…

And Radz looked on both while they shaking their hands with some unknown restlessness,…

Precap:Sam told Dilip that they are going for a Trekking with Radz to shoot their New Ad for Mountain Dew,…

Credit to: Renu

18 comments

  1. Awesome episode so Arjun finally know about Saral and Radhika engagement, I wonder what he’ll do next.

    Renu when will you post hatred to love anxiously waiting for it .

  2. Hey renu.. New here. but i will make sure that I read all your previous updates cause I am really eager to read a very good story and here I got it.. It was really amazing and very long.thanksm

  3. Can anyone tell me sny site where I can watch the show again. Actually I truly became a fan of mmz after reading so many ffs and your craze for it. Before that I used to watch it but skipped sometime though I loved it that time also. i cant get videos on youtube so Pz do inform if anyone knows? Thank you

    • aastha

      hey roshini you can go to hotstar.com .in that u’ll b able to watch all the serials aired in star plus……….and not to mention manmarziyan…………….im sure u can……I watch frm it everyday….

  4. mannu

    you can watch it at hotstar complete epis…..yar manmarziyan season 2 ni start hoskta m die hard fan ….plz do smthng..so it could start again….

  5. Gauri

    Renu…I missed your ff like mad…thanks dear for posting it…amazing episode…loads of love ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. aastha

    renu u did a wonderful job……….so arjun finally came to know that rads is engaged and poor guy not being able to tolerate the shock broke the beautiful chain he bought for her…..renu when r u gonna update hatred to love??????????im dying to read it………….

  7. Roma

    Renuuuuuuu dearyyyyyy, here u r….missed you soooooooo muchhhhhh n were finding you everywhere….finally you updated this story. ….n as usual dynamite episode. ….arjun n dadaji’s convo very interesting n phone convo heard by arjun really superbbbb. …dadaji always very intelligent n adorable. ….renu your stories n narration very impressive. ….nesam convo was heart touching, Neil very hurt but his words to sam were very true…….arjun mesmerized by rads beauty…omg finally he knows about saral n rads engagement…arjun our angry bird, what will he gonna do now???….really missed you sooooo muchhhh renu but your update compensate the wait…r you going to post your other story hatred to love soon?…all the best for your exams….keep it up….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. ..muaaaaahhhhhh. …โ™กโ™กโ™ก

  8. Hi Renu dear how r u? I really miss ur story, episode as usual amazing dear…pls update ur another story too soon….love u ..tc..

  9. Naan kanbhadhu kanava alla ninaivaa.

    Renuuuuuu unnoda ff MP romba romba miss panninen. And todays epi suppppper espy arju & saral encounter adhuvum nama radhu kannala saigai kamikradhu innum super. Org mmz la, orange saree wear pannindu varum podhum arjukku kannala saiga kaamippa ennku rombbbba piditha scene, andha scene adikadi paapen hotstarla. And unnoda storila aduthu ennavaga podhunu theriyala wait paneren mudindha alavukku sikkirama update pannu renu. Pls.

  10. subha

    hi renu eppadi irrukirai? unnoda ff rombave miss pannukirean……..this episode as usual awesome yaar…dadaji part super……. plz plz plz plz plz plz unnoda hatered love ff sikirama post pannu eagerly waiting yaar…….& all the best for u exam…..tc

  11. Ohhh myyy goddd,… finally you post it .thanks for giving such an amazing update. Really I badly missed our “missing pieces”. After last update I was too much wait for next update but couldn’t find… I think u stop writing … but you return with your magical thinking skill. Really renu you are magician. something magic is in your writing which attract me to read ur story with full of energy and curiosity …you does know very well how to handle our one side Romeo in delicate scenario ๐Ÿ˜‰ and today’s radz and dada g’s convo. extremely touched my heart.yes dear I agree wid u one side radz want to persue her dreams and other side happiness of her family is must for her to persists, true prospers love regarding towards her family,in between she has to make an unbreakable bond with her friends. Its not so easy to do.A women is in place of struggle. eager to know how radz handle everything!!!!
    Ahh but from where this saral come in between… by the way renu is this necessary condition that villains should enter in every story to make things complicating ๐Ÿ˜‰ lol sorry for this… and really I enjoyed ur plot… plzz next plot update soon …. and what about hatred into love. We r missing that one too. Till then waiting waiting waiting… love u our Jhansi ki Rani ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ wid lots of hugggz….

  12. Ohhh myyy goddd,…
    ” RENU thnx 4 cmng back ”
    finally you post it .thanks for giving such an amazing update. Really I badly missed our “missing pieces”. After last update I was too much wait for next update but couldn’t find… I think u stop writing … but you return with your magical thinking skill. Really renu you are magician… something magic is in your writing which attract me to read your story with full of energy and curiosity.
    you does know very well how to handle our one side Romeo in delicate scenario ๐Ÿ˜‰ and today’s radz and dada g’s convo. extremely touched my heart.yes dear I agree wid u one side radz want to persue her dreams and other side happiness of her family is must for her to persists, true prospers love regarding towards her family,in between she has to make an unbreakable bond with her friends. Its not so easy to do.A women is in place of struggle. eager to know how radz handle everything!!!!
    Ahh but from where this saral come in between… by the way renu is this necessary condition that villains should enter in every story to make things complicating ๐Ÿ˜‰ lol sorry for this… and really I enjoyed ur plot… plzz next plot update soon …. and what about hatred into love. We r missing that one too. Till then waiting waiting waiting… love u jhansi ki rani ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ wid lots of hugggz…

  13. Shree

    Renu!! How are you?! After a very long time!! I missed you so much!! Super update di!! The conversation…. It made everyone restless… Too good di!! Neil and Sam tho.. Donno… Arjun realize your feelings soon.. Please.. You too Radhika!! His anger and frustration.. Semma di!! Everything was perfect… Seekrama update pannu

    Love you loads… Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

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