Manmarziyan Missing pieces Part 1 – Episode 20

Hiii friends,…There will be hardly few scenes of ardhika and Nesam in this update,…I decided to update whatever I wrote cox I don’t wanna make you all wait like the previous update,… I hope you ppl will like this piece,… As usual Ignore my Grammatical Errors here and there,…

Episode 20 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

In Neil’s Mansion,…

Neil asked Arjun to choose a flavour of cool Milkshake from the tray,…

Neil:Arjun,..Here,I have 3 to 4 flavour cool milkshake man,…I dunno,..Which flavour you like,..So,Choose any of your wish,…Badam,Apple,Chocolate or Orange or Pineapple,…

Arjun:No thanks,…

Neil:Take it yaar,..This is first time,..You are here with me,..SO,Let’s make this occasion much more sweeter by starting with a milkshake,…

Arjun:You know na,I hate sweets and I repeatedly warning you,..I don’t have time for any such nonsense,..So,If you,..

Neil:I knew yaar,..They are sugarless,…And Before starting some hot topic,..We should be cool na,…So,I think,..It is must for you Arjun,…

Hearing this,Arjun selected chocolate milkshake without paying any heed in the flavour,…

Arjun:I think,..It’s must for you than me,..But anyways thanks,…

Neil smirked at him and began,

Neil:Hmmm,..Ya,…you are right,..It’s needed for me too,…

Saying so,Neil grabbed Arjun’s milkshake and began,..

Neil:You know,..This is chasni’s favorite man,…So,I hope you may select another,…

Arjun:Hmmm,…But,Here your chasni is not present right,…

Neil kept the tray and milkshakes on the table and began,…

Neil:Ya,.She is not present here and I don’t like you to come in her way often Arjun,…

Arjun:Means,…

Neil:Means,..Today,I wanna clear some important things,..So,It’s good, if you give heeds to my words,…

Arjun:Go ahead,…

Neil:First,..I sense something brewing between you and chasni..I knew my chasni well yaar,…She will never let any harm to sam,..So,she may do anything to save my sammendher singh,..So,If you try to harm sam or chasni,…I’ll not spare you arjun,…

Arjun:I couldn’t get what you are blabbering?,..

Neil:Oh!,…Accha,…then,I ask you directly,..After Lonovla trip,..Chasni was not happy at most,…Tell me what happened?

Arjun:You may Ask your chasni itself na,..Why are you wasting my time?,…

Neil:I knew Arjun,…She never share her sorrows with anyone,… and I also knew you are the reason,… today morning,In Airport I decided to put an endcard to all these,…That’s why I asked you to drop her in bike,…I sensed some Tension in her face and In beech,I sensed the same tension in your face man,…I knew,She was not the person to ignore the problems,..She might confronted you,…Tell me what’s the matter?,…Where were you the whole day,…I never ask,..You love samaira or not,.. Or Why you break her heart,..Or why you are playing Hide and seek with Chasni,..Or Whether You are trying to flirt with chasni or Sam or whoever…But,…I wont remain cool always Arjun,…Mind it,..They are like my eyes,…If I saw any one of them suffer cox of you,..Then,

Arjun:Then,..Are you mad?,..Why don’t you check some Psychiatrist immediately,…

Neil chuckled at him,…and began,…

Neil:Hmmm,..If needed,I think We both should,…You couldn’t get,..What I mean,Right?,…Wait a minute,…

Saying so,Neil took a photo from his pocket and showed it to Arjun,…

Neil:Arjun,…Then,…Tell me, What it is?,…

Arjun was froze seeing his and Rahika’s intimate photo and grabbed it from neil tensedly to check it once again,…Neil smiled seeing this and began,

Neil:Why,..What happened yaar,…Shall I tell,..Where were you the whole day?,…You are in beech and when I called you to inform about the get together,..That time too,You are in beech with Chasni,..Am I Right?,…I knew,Chasni will never allow anyone to come closer to her and especially you,…So,Now Tell me,..What’s going on btw you and chasni?,…If you love sam,..Then Why are you with chasni,The whole day?,..What you planned to do with her?,..Or with sam,…I din show this photo to anyone cox I don’t want this photo to create any rift between Sam and Chasni,…

Neil’s words increased Arjun’s temper inaddition to the Intensity of the photo,..Neil holds his shoulder and continued,…

Neil:Tell me man,…Why you are so silent now?,…You forgot to talk,…

Arjun:You got this from that Foreigners right,…

Neil:Ya,..But,.This is not answer for my question Arjun,…

Arjun:Hmmm,..I knew,..You are right Neil,…Today we are at beech when you called me…I tried some other route to drop Radhika at her place due to heavy traffic,…So,I came this way and We had lunch there in a nearby restaurant cox of your chasni,…Then,Radhika went alone from there,…I’m not responsible for that,..Still,I searched her and I found her in beech,…So,I chided her for her Irresponsible behaviour,..Accidently,A gigantic wave made her fall on me,..Listen,your chasni fell over me,…And those foreigners mistaken us as couple,… And this Photo might be taken by them during that time,…That’s it,.What,Still you doubt me,..Ok,.If you don’t believe me,Then confirm it with your chasni itself,… Show it to anyone,… I have no problem,…

Saying so,Arjun tried to move was stopped by neil again,…

Neil:Wait,..Your Car key Arjun,…

Arjun:Thank you,…

Neil:I believed your words not because Sam loves you or Chasni praises you Arjun,…I believe, cox I trust my chasni,…She will never do anything wrong to anyone even in her dreams,…Good night,…Safe drive,…

Arjun:Hmmm,…Good night,…

Saying so,Arjun took his car from Neil’s residency on drive to his mansion and kept that photo on the front passenger seat next to him,…

In Traffic Signal,Arjun.who casually turned towards the seat was lost himself in that photo, which made him remember his and Radhika’s private moments in beech,..After a while,A sound horn from other vehicles at back cox of signal change, made him come to his sense and to drive to his place,…

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Morning In Radz-Sam Room,…

Radz:Sam,..get up,…It’s 7.30 Am,…sam,…

Saying so,Radz dried her wet hair,…

Radz:Sam,If you din wake up now,I’ll splash water from my hair on you,…

Sam groggily murmured something,…

Sam:I wont leave you,…How dare you come near me,…Tell me, who are you?,…I’ll kill you?,…

Radz shaked sam puzzlingly and began,

Radz:Sam,..Who?,..open your eyes,…See,..It’s morning,…

Sam opened her eyes slowly and began,

Sam:Chasni,..He is challenging me yaar,…

Radz:who sam?

Sam:That idiot,..

Radz:Neil,..

Sam:No yaar,…I din see his face,..He wore mask on his face,..I couldn’t see him,..

Radz worriedly began,

Radz:Then,Arjun sir,..

Sam:No,..Not Arjun,..He never come in my dream,…At first,I too thought Arjun only,…But,that Mysterious guy taunted me badly yaar,… So,I understood,he was never my arjun,…I dunno,who he is yaar?,…I wont leave him next time chasni,…

Radz:It’s ok sam,…now,leave it na,…it might be some bad dream,…you get ready na,…Go,sam,…Please,…

Sam:Hmmm,…Going,…but,If I found him next time,…his death is confirm yaar,…

Radz:Sam,..As What he did, that you are so Angry on him?,…hmmm,…bolo yaar,…

Sam:Wooohh!,…Nothing,…Give my Towel,…

Radz smiled quietly seeing tensed Sam and began,

Radz:Ok,…Ok,..chalo,…Ma prepared breakfast too,…come soon

Sam:Hmmm,..I’m going,…hey, Why you are in bathrobe still?,…you remember na,…today,you are coming in my pink maxi,…

Radz pulled sam inside washroom and began,

Radz:Haan,..I knew,…You come soon,…And sam,Do you see my watch yaar?

Sam from washroom answered,

Sam:No yaar,…It might be somewhere on the wardrobe,..Check properly,…

Radz:Hmmm,..I checked already,…Haan,Now I remember sam,I think,I lost it in the beech,..It’s strip was broken,..So,I put it in my bag to repair it afterwards,…

Sam:It’s ok,..Leave chasni,..I have another pair of watch matching your Dress today,..SO,Don’t worry much,…We will buy a new watch in the evening,Ok,…

Radz:It’s my Bhaiya’s gift Sam,…

Sam:Chasni,…Please yaar,..I not yet started bathing,If you start crying for your watch,..then, We are done,..We will be late today,…Get ready yaar,..

Mala came inside and began,

Mala:What you two din get ready,…Choti,..Still you are roaming in bathrobe,…Where is sam?

Sam:Aunty,I’m in washroom,..Just 10 minutes,…

Radz:Sam,In your dictionary,…10 minutes means 20 minutes,..Right na,..

Mala:Ok,..Choti,First you change,..Then,We talk about sam,…

Sam:Haan,…Aunty,You are right,..Chasni,You heard na,…Get dressed before I come,..Ok,..

Then, Radz went to change as per her ma and sam’s order,…

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In Arjun’s Room,..

The Sun spreads its golden rays into Arjun’s Room only to see his Worried face,…Yes,Arjun was disturbed after talking with someone in his mobile,…He don’t want to do the task which he was assigned to do,..But,He was helpless,…He made up his mind to concentrate on his mission alone,…He kept the phone on his desk and opened his closet to select an appropriate dress to wear today,… By mistaken,some of his clothes too fell from the cupboard,…He Kept everything again in its place,…While folding,He saw a white shirt with some Red stains on it,..He took that shirt and touched those dark stains slowly remembering his encounter with Radhika in their apartment for the first time,…While touching those stains,He felt Radhika’s touch on his chest again,…

Right then,Ranaji entered Arjun’s room to give something to him,…

Rana:Arjun,…I found this watch in your pocket beta,…

Arjun take that watch from Rana and lost in some thoughts of remembering how he got that watch from beech without Radz knowledge,…It brought a little smile on his worried face,…

Rana:Arjun,..Breakfast ready,…Come soon,…

Arjun:Haan Kaka,…Why these stains are still in this shirt?,…Give it for a dry wash or,..

Rana:I tried all,Arjun,…But,The Red color on this shirt is very hard to remove,..So,I left it beta,…If you want,I’ll wash it again with adding some more vinegar and stain removing detergents by my hands rather using Washing machine,…

Arjun:No need kaka,… You may go now,..I’ll join you after few minutes for breakfast,…

Ranaji nodded yes and left the room leaving Arjun again into some confused state,…He kept that shirt inside the closet and opened the Inner locker of his cupboard to keep that watch,…The locker contains few other things too such as Radz Bracelet and a burnt piece of her Orange dupatta,…Now,This watch also added into it,… Arjun closed his locker and his closet,…He, then talks with himself,…

Arjun’s innervoice:I dunno what to do now? Radhika,..If I care for you,You are always staying in my heart,…And if I try to hate you,You are always coming in my mind,…In both,you are disturbing me radhika,…You are really a strong Raaste ka pattar (roadblock) to me Radhika Mishra,…

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In Birdsong office,…

Krithika was playing with some sketch pens even ignoring zubin,..

Zubin:What yaar,..What are you doing?,..I couldn’t understand any,..Krithika,..Please tell me yaar,…Last 20 minutes,You are rolling these sketch pens,…

Krithika:Zubin,..I’m thinking deeply about something important,..You cant understand,…

Teji:What important yaar?,..Tell to me too na,…

Zubin:She was not telling anything Teji,…And now you too came na,…Ask her itself,…Krithika,…Please stop yaar,…

Krithika:Ok,..Guys,..Come I’ll explain you both,…Zubin,you come on my right and Teji,You on my left,…Ok,…

Teji:Haan,..we came,..Now start yaar,…

Krithika:This Red sketch is me ,..This green sketch is Teji and this Blue sketch is Zubin,…Ok,…

Zubin:Haan Ok,…Now,What,…

Krithika:Wait,…I’ll tell you?,…See,..This Red sketch and Green sketch saying they are in love,…Teji,Move your sketch towards my sketch,…Teji,Now we are pairs,..Ok,…Green sketch was telling everyone that it loves Red sketch,…Ok,…

Zubin:Ok,…But now what happened?,…

Krithika:Here is the twist,…Red sketch din tell that it loves Green sketch,…And zubin,you stay there,…But,Now,Red sketch is coming towards Blue sketch leaving green,…

Teji:But,Red and green is pair na,..Why Red is moving towards Blue?,..I couldn’t understand any yaar,…

Krithika:Yes Red loves Blue,…

Zubin:Ok,..Then make these two pair,..Red and blue,..Problem solved na,…

Krithika:No,Here comes another problem,…

Teji:Now,What problem yaar?,…

Krithika:We dunno Blue loves Red or not and Blue is Green’s Best friend,…

Teji:Whatever it may be,If blue too loves Red means,Then,Red and blue should be pair,…Problem solved

Krithika:Again another two entries here,…Take that white and black sketch Teji,…And Zubin,You keep this black sketch and teji,You keep this white sketch,…

Zubin:Now what yaar?

Krithika:Black and Blue already engaged and there,White loves green,…

Teji:Krithika,..Please yaar,..Stop this game na,…I was totally confused,…My head is spinning,…

Zubin:I have One solution for your game,Krithika…If we find whom blue loves,…Problem solved,…

Teji:How Zubin,…

Zubin:See,…If blue loves Red means,We break Red & Green pair and Blue & Black,…The final pair is Red & blue and White and Green,…

Krithika:If Blue din love Red means?

Zubin:Then break Red & blue and Green & white,…

Teji:Ya,..Zubin is correct,..In second case,Final pair will be Red & green and Blue & Black,…

Krithika:Ok guys,…Now,If we find Whom Blue loves,Then we get solution for all our problems right,…

Teji:Ya,..Ofcourse,..Now lets go,…

Krithika:Wait Teji,I need your help to find whom blue loves?,…

Zubin:Teji’s help???

Teji:Haan,..What can I do yaar?

Krithika:In this game,Red is Arjun sir,Green is Sam,White is Neil,Black is Radhika’s Fiance and

Zubin:Blue is Radhika,..

Teji:Are you mad yaar?,…You are doubting Arjun sir and Radhika,…

Zubin:What is wrong in her doubt Teji?,…We saw what happened in Lonovla trip na?,…Arjun sir deliberately left us in midway to spend time with Radhika alone,…I think,Krithika was right yaar,…

Teji:But,We saw na, He again taunted our chasni,…

Krithika:Teji,Love starts from hate only,…Please,Teji,…Talk with chasni about this na,..

Teji:I cant do this,..I knew, chasni will never love Arjun sir cox sam loves him,…So,I wont help you guys,…

Zubin:Ok,..You no need to help,..But,You can prove us na ,..Chasni din love Arjun sir,…Please,Teji,…

Krithika:Haan Teji,..Please yaar,…

Teji:Ok,…I will try,…But,You should ask sorry from Chasni after getting your answer,..

Zubin:Yes,..Ofcourse,We will yaar,…

Krithika:Thank you Teji,…

Right then,Neil patted Teji’s shoulder from Back and began,

Neil:What sorry? and What Thank you? guys,…

All three were shocked seeing Neil there,…

Zubin: woooh Neil,…Yesterday,We din complete the outline works for these pamphlets,…So,We asked teji to complete it,…That’why,..

Neil:But,I heard chasni’s name in between,…

Teji:Nothing Neil,…Woooh,…Chasni and Sam came,…Now,It’s 9.30 AM na,…

Neil:No,Not yet,…They are on the way,…Ok,Guys,…Let’s arrange the conference hall before they come,…

Teji:You are right Neil,…Cummon guys,..Let’s go,…

Saying so,Teji and gang went to conference Hall to make arrangements.

Precap:Arjun’s eyes were glued on Radhika, seeing her in a Pink maxi for the first time,…

Credit to: Renu

41 comments

  1. zayn

    Hogaya hey tujh ko toh pyaar sajna lakh karley tooh inkar sajna LOL
    Arjns condition
    As always u ROCK renu
    Love u and TC♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ 🙂

  2. Harani

    wow ..secret locker …arjun is rocking …today no ardhika scenes so sad renu ..awesome episode ..krithika’s game was confusing…green red blue black white 🙂 how manyy colours yaar 🙂 🙂 but luvd it

  3. Lakshmi

    Wow renu …amazing episode dear. Neil confrontation of arjun n his care towards sam n radz ,flavors selection is superb. Arjun’s feelings for radz n he is collecting her things secretly ….wow??…it’s really amazing yaar. Sam’s dream and sam n radz convo is nice n it’s good she’s confident that it’s not arjun unlike in the serial.Trio convo in office is superb,they knew arjun loves radz n they r going to find out radz feelings …wow but even she don’t know exactly about her own feelings.What’s going to be arjun’s condition after seeing her in that dress. Will be waiting for next update. Love u ???…take care….

    • renu

      Thanx Lakshmi,…

      Actually I wonder,..How they din show office gossiping about Ardhika,..Usually,Even if we are not in love also,There will be some idiots in every office to make such gossips,….But,Here they din show any,…I noticed Krithika’s expressions in lonovla trip,…When Arjun asked Teji and Zubin to pull the car from another side and asked krithika to do from back,…But,He made radz to pull on the other side with him,..MAy be its his aim to make her dress dirt,..But,Krithika chuckled at his commands whereas teji and zubin are clueless,….I think Director changed after lonovla trip,…So,new director din give heeds to it rather he was busy in Nandhu and saral drama,…..

  4. Shub

    Renu,

    Fantastic episode. since our precap, i was wondering how arjun could handle neil’s assault. he handled it quite well. the conversation of zubin, teji and kirthiga was too good. you are making this much more razy… it is like watching a real serial. Neil’s care for Radz and Sam is very well written that they both are his eyes. look forward to the next episode very eagerly…

    • renu

      Thank you dear,…

      Arjun is brilliant in handling all his lies,..Even after everything happened before their marriage drama,Arjun knew how to pull Radz button by convincing sam for marriage,…May be he has that impact on others,…

      He was clever in portraying himself like that and also he knew how to make others believe his point through his façade,…But,Radz was the one who saw him without his façade,..So,He failed to handle his Radz alone in this world,….Equal competition from his tigress,….

  5. Shree

    Renu!! Hi di!! Eppadi yiruka?! Seema update di!! ??

    What? Neil confronted?! So much guts ya… And what?! He has been collecting things related to her?! Idhu jaasti… Romba ve…

    And yes, Sam’s dream.. Kritika’s game!! Lol ??… Red, green, black, white,blue.. Semma di… I donno how this is going to work.. I thought Kritika was useless.. But, you made her useful.. Lol di ??.. Waiting for Arjun’s reaction.. When he sees her in maxi!!

    Sari sari.. Romba sollitein nu nenakirein.. I love it di.. Seekrama update pannu

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • renu

      Sree,…I’m fine,….How r you?,…

      Ya,…When it comes to his love and his friend,..Neil will confront anyone,….Such a gem he is,….

      Lol,..Ya,….It’s too much,I know,…But,I wanna make him lover boy before Nandhini comes,….

      Someime some useless creatures also needed for some useful things,….M glad you liked this update sree,….

      Sure Arjun has to suffer a lot by controlling his hormones seeing Radz in Maxi,….LOL,….

      Love you too,…Tc

  6. naomi

    Renu….
    Enna oru imagination. Super ma. Today no ardhika scene:-( neiloda kelvikal super adhula sam & radhuvum enn 2 kangal sollradu romba touchinga irudhadhu. Adhuvida namma aalu radhuvoda porutkala ragasiyama marachi vaigradhu innum touchinga irundhadhu. Edhirparkala ivalo things save pannirubanradhu.
    And renu, tejikku mattum confuse aagla ingey enkkum confusaai thalaiya suthiduthu, apparom yaarelam enna colorunu thericha piragu thirumbavum 1st la (bird song) padikka aarampichen. Really sketch scene super. Arjun choco flavor select panradhu nalla irundhadhu. Actually naa pineapple select pannuvapla neneychen (konjam comedyaga irundhuirukkum). And precap, enna solla, eagera wait pannindu irukken. Raduvoda pink maxi dress pathi konjam describe pannuma yenna blanka irukken eppidi irukkumgradhu enn mindukku suthama varla pls.
    Ok, Bye, Good Night & Sweet Dreams.

    • renu

      Naomi,..Thank you so much deary,…Ya,I doubt how could I write without any ardhika scenes,..I planned to end this update with an ardhika scene,..My lap was not working,….So,I posted whatever I wrote,…

      Ya,I expected this confusion Naomi,…What na,..This was explained by krithika,…So,She already had doubt and wanna make zubin and teji too join her,..So,she was explaining as such,..That both will agree to her,…But,Teji is Radz another true friend,..He will never agree to her but here again she brainwashed him with help of zubin to identify Radz feeling,..Let’s see What these 3 idiots gonna do now,…Radz herself dunno about her feelings,….

      Actually Arjun want to escape from NEil,..So Inorder to stop him,He choose a flavor and after Neil revealing that it was radz fav,Then only our angry bird listened to him,….

      Don’t worry sweetheart,…I’ll post the image of Radz costume in next update for sure,…

  7. Ameena?

    Renu it was tooo gud…amazing…loved neil and arjun’s convo… neil of course can do anything for both of girls…arjun now get used to put rads stuff in the locker..lol…I think u need a big locker cuz rads gonna make u crazy…don’t worry renu will get u one soon…lol
    Everything was amazing…krithika’s game was bit confusing ..but it’s k…u really gave krithika some brain…to convey a very imp message to us readers…lol me n shree were just discussing about it…
    Anyways thank u so much…now pls update other story…I read it like thousand times…pls update that one soon.. I’m waiting…luv u???

    • Shree

      Haha amu!! I swear!! The way we were discussing.. And amu, I have to confess, I was literally loling on the other side… And I still am ??

      I actually read it like 5 times (only colour part… To understand properly… Though I did in one shot ??)

      Renu!! Idhu ellam unnalla dhaan… Ivalo mulai!! Omg!!

      Keep rocking di..

      Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

      Love you too amu!! ??

    • renu

      Ameena,..My sweet don,….First I updated the next chapter in Tale of Hatred in love after reading your comment,….Couldn’t find suitable time to update deary,….

      You are right,..He needs a big locker,…LOL,….Thanks ameena,….

      Reg Krithika’s game,..What na It was explained by krithika,..So,IT will looks confusing as she wont explain any clearly,..But,She was succeed in making zubin and Teji to agree for her deal of finding Radz feeling,….Let’s see,What she gonna do now?,…

      Love you too,….Tc,…

      @Sree:Lol,…I don’t think It will confuse u all this much,…Naomi too said she was confused like teji,….Seriously lol,…I din have such brain and all as you said,..But I’m glad that you all liked this update,….

  8. manha

    Neil n arjun convo , It was just superb. It actually looked like an interrogation than convo. N neil u really r great. But what to do arjun is super in dealing situations like this. N if it is abt radz then he goes into over drive n becomes more cautious. It will take time to turn arjun completely down. Dont worry radz will soon make it. lol.

    Sam’s dream n radz teasing gud. Like the way sam told that arjun never comes in her dreams. haha. But what sam has to know is abt arjun’s dreams which r completely filled with radz. N like the way arjun was seeing the photo, Red stained shirt which will later become symbol of their love. lol, N arjun has a locker. Yaa i agree with amu here. Arjun will sure need a big locker to keep all the stuff if it goes on in this pace. Now he took radz watch. Looks like someone has gone completely mad. Renu thanks for reminding this yaar. Really i wonder where would he hav kept all the things i.e., Burnt dupatta, anklet n all,. in original series. Liked when he realized that his heart n mind r surrounded with only her thoughts even if he don’t want it to happen. It was a new thing. I liked the dialogue.

    Birdsong oh finally we r here. Kritika sure hav some gud eye sight yaar. She saw what others were ignoring. N she was quite confident that arjun loves radz. Whoa she really needs one award now. She is explaining her point with the help of color sketch to zubin n teji. Zubin seems to agree with this. But teji he is very gud frnd of radz frm beginning n he too hav gud trust in her. Loved to see this. Really missed it in original. I’m happy to see them again n with some brains too. They kind of side tracked everyone in the name of revenge drama n made everyone blind in original. Sketch theory damn gud. It was too awesome. U even involved saral here. I like the way u gav colors to each n every one. Quite apt n seemed so connected with their characters.

    N the precap was awesome. Oh god renu u never leave a chance to torture arjun yaar. Arjun eyes glued on radz. N why won’t he after all his radz n his fav color. What else would he want???!!!! But arjun plzzz be careful. Now all eyes r glued on u. Frm neil to Teji, kritika, zubin, Only sam has to see this. lol. I’m waiting for next one. Hope arjun don’t get caught in his staring.

    • renu

      Manha,…My sweet heart,…I agree with Ramya,…I too enjoyed a lot reading your POV,….

      As you said,…Arjun knew how to tackle Neil,..If he din believe his words,Then he might have used Sam between them cox he din like Neil supporting Radz in most situations,….Even When Sam slapped Radz,…Neil tried to defend Radz but stopped by Sam,….Both Sam and Radz needed neil as a friend to guess their doubt on someone,….Sam shared her doubt on Radz with neil after hearing Saral’s accusation against Radz before their slap,.. and Radz shared her doubt on Arjun with neil before ardhika engagement sorry Sam-Arj engagement,…

      Radz as a good friend accepted neil’s words and left her doubt on arjun,..Even asked sorry to him in Dori scene,…This is the reason Radz din share anything about arjun with neil during her marriage drama,….But Sam din followed Neil’s advice rather she believed Nandhu’s words,..That is the reason she slapped her true friend and endup hurting herself again,…See yaar Your comment made me to rem MMz again,….

      But Manha,I doubt sam will see arjun’s dreams for Radz cox she was in bubble,..It’s difficult to burst her bubble world,….But as you all said Arjun needs another big locker for sure,…If he continued at this pace,…LOL,…

      I’m glad you liked this color sketch game Manha,…I agree with you in Revenge track they are sidelined,..But here in this FF,They will get some screen space,…..Hope you will like it,…

      Reg Arjun staring Radz,…Yes it will happen for sure,…But Others finding it,..I dunno yaar,…You have to wait till next update,….Tc,…

  9. Rg

    Hi dear. This episode rocks. Loved it to d bits.. when r u going to update d nxt episode???…. Plz update asap.

  10. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode, renuuuuu my sweeeeeet friend it’s mind blowing and superbbb….loved the way neil confronted arjun with so much concern for sam n rads n arjun played safe game n escaped but can’t escape his own heart n got lost in their intimate picture…wowwww….Sam’s pmdream n rads convo was quite interesting, arjun never comes to Sam’s dream…we want arjun to come in only rads dreams…I’m sure for sam’s dreams its neil only……..arjun totally lost in his panoti’s thought n his heart n mind fighting…wowwww, collection of rads things in the locker…so cool yaar…lovely scene….

    So lovely color sketch pen game from Kritika(actually our renu’s analysis), so deeply observed n described, me too followed step by step and it was real funnnnn my dear friend renuuuuuuu. …I loved it to the core…how do you do this honeyyy…so much dedication and very very lovelyyyyyy narration…

    Kya karen hum sab mmz ki titlian bahut deewani hain…aur jab saath mil jaaye to kya baat hai…kaash hum sab kisi din mil sakein…I wish, I wish, I wish, why don’t you deariiiiiiieeess visit our google+ group “desi aashiqs forever “, I visit it often but nobody is replying me back except amu….I looooooooove youuuuuuuuu amuuuuuu, manhaaaaaa, shreeee,renuuuuu, farhaaaa, thenaaaa, kriti,deepa, deepthi, ananya, arshi, anaya, tanya, mandy, mansi, nishaaaaaaaaaa, bella, princess, sindhu n many more (my memory is very with names, sorry if I missed any of you. ..)and silent readers tooooooooo. ..

    and precap is very very exciting, arjun drooling rads in pink dress…awwwwww, so mesmerizing scene it will be, you gonna kill me with the excitement…can’t wait for it, anxiously waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug, muaaaaahhhhhh, take care sweetie…..lots of hugs n kissesssss ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

    • renu

      Thank you soooooooooooo much Roma,…I’m so glad that you liked this update,…And I’m glad you liked Krithika’s Color sketch drama too,….But,I dunno about Google + group manha,…

      I hope we will get along like MMZ in another series with our Ardhika/ahamica,…Its our wish and desire na,…No one can question us right,..LOl,..Hoping for good,….

      thank you sooooo much sweetheart,….Love you too,….

      Just missing Nisha’s comments,…Hope she is fine,..

  11. renu

    Today I’m so glad after reading all your comments,…Will reply to all,…Just time is problem yaar,….

    But Renu will manage it,….

    THank you so much friends,…..Will join you all shortly

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