Manmarziyan-Missing Pieces Part 1 – Episode 2

Hiiiiiiiii friends,…Before going into this Episode of my Missing pieces part 1,I wanna clarify the meaning of my Title of this FF.Why I have chosen this title is that I gonna write the new series with some good old existing scenes and I will post the Epi number so,that you all can connect with that scene which I remodelled according to my story…And in this episode I used Episode 65 and 66.As usual, Excuse me for grammatical errors and I hope you will enjoy this ride,…

Episode 2 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Arjun who opened the door was irritated on seeing Radz and Neil’s finger bonding.He stared them with anger which occupies his face completely.The sound of arjun’s entry makes Radz and neil to distance their little finger by breaking their cute finger bonding which indicates their flawless Friendship.While distancing,Radz screamed in pain as it’s the same hand where Drips has been injected which makes Neil to chide her friend lovingly ignites fire in my Hero Arjun’s Heart.

Neil:chasni,what yaar just now u promised me u will take care of urself na,…Wait I will help you,…
Saying so Neil hold radz hand and placed her hand slowly on the bed pours oil in already burning fire in Arjun’s Heart.

Radz: Neil,I said na its nothing yaar,..u don’t worry,…

Hearing this confirmation from his chasni,Neil turned towards our angry bird Arjun and thanked him for saving his friend,..

Neil: Harre yaar Arjun,…I never think that you will be such a nice person but you have saved my chasni today,..For that I am liable to you,..Thank you Arjun,..

Arjun who was angry on neil came towards radhika’s bed where he kept his wallet on the side tray beside her bed and intentionally hurt neil by his words while taking his wallet there,..

Arjun:I came here to take my wallet not to hear any nonsense,..And I din like gratitude from the monkeys which escaped from the zoo,…So,its better if you stay away from me,..

Right then,Sam came inside noticing high tension btw Neil and arjun after ending her call with Radz mom who was on the other end enquiring about her choti’s well being,…

Sam:Arjun,…What’s happening here?

Arjun who saw sam dinn utter any words and simply passed her throwing few angry stares at Neil,who already in full angry mode,…And closed the door with a sound ‘thud’,…Even Hospital door also became victim for Arjun’s anger cum jealousy,…Sam then turned towards neil to make him calm after arjun’s exit,…

Sam:Idiot,..Dont be angry yaar,…

Neil ignored her words and turned back at chasni to bid his goodbye just to walk out of the room.Sam who was puzzled by the happenings around her followed her Idiot to calm him was highly disappointed,..Radz who witnessing everything around her was shocked and confused,…

Sam:Idiot,..please don’t be angry yaar,…
Neil: Angry,…How its possible Sammy,…I am monkey right,…So, you better ask your Arjun to be calm,..It will suit him yaar,…& M returning to Mumbai right now Sammy,…U take care of chasni,…

Saying so neil din wait for sam’s reply and walked towards visitor hall where Teji,Zubin and Krithika were chatting among themselves,…Sam who also followed him was disappointed by neil’s Decision,…

Sam: Neil,…stop there yaar,…please,listen my words,….
Neil: Teji,Zubin and Krithika,…I have arranged a Cab for returning to Mumbai now and if you people willing to accompany me,we will move right now as we have to arrange everything in Mumbai na,…Tomorrow chansni will b discharged and her parents were arriving in morning flight,…So,its better if we start now,…

Saying so neil left the visitor hall and puzzled sam,…Teji,Zubin and krithika too informed sam that its better if they join Neil as its difficult for him to arrange everything in Mumbai single handed,…So,they are going now,…Finally all the gang bid goodbye to their friend chasni before starting their return journey towards mumbai,…

Doctor who checked Radz informed Sam to give a light and warm Barley Soup to radz before giving the prescribed medicines to her,…Sam nodded yes to the Doctor and sit beside radz with worried face starts transferring the soup in a bowl and added some Pepper to it to make it eatable,…

Radz: Sam,Is neil still angry???
Sam: Dunno chasni,..you leave it yaar,…I will handle this idiot,…

Radz who din satisfied with Sam’s answer also remained in an agitated state,…She took her engagement bangle from the tray and tries to wear it but end up playing with the bangle by her lost thoughts,…Same sam,who also added pepper in the bowl started stirring it continuously by her lost thoughts,…Both were lost in their thoughts thinking why their respective love was angry,…Radz who was lost in arjun’s thoughts remembering arjun’s harsh words towards Neil couldn’t speak anything but just playing with her bangle and Sam who was lost in neil’s thoughts remembering Neil’s words about arjun too couldn’t speak anything but just stir the hot soup continuously,…

Arjun,who was about to enter the room had a sight of Radz from the glass door brings smile on his face to whom he lost himself which he didn’t realize. But his smile vanishes when his eyes met sam beside radz which reminds him his duty to fulfil his donkey years revenge,….Then he entered the room slowly makes radz and sam to come back to their present,…

Radz,who saw arjun entering the room smiled unknowingly in return to Arjun’s smiling gaze,…Sam,who saw radz intense smiling gaze turned back and found arjun’s arrival there,…She stood up and called arjun’s name which breaks arjun and radz intense eyelock ignoring sam’s presence,…Arjun who turned his head towards sam accepted sam’s wish to talk,…

Sam: Arjun,..I wanna talk with you,..
Arjun: sure Sam,..I too wanna talk with you,….

Both went outside the room to talk out their relationship,…

Arjun:Sam,..whatever I did earlier was wrong and these two days brought a big change in me cox of Radhika and I don’t want to remember the hurtful things happened before as I want to start a fresh beginning from now.

Arjun said those things seeing radz from the glass door who lost in her own world playing with her bangle still,…and he turned towards sam hearing sam’s words,…

Sam:Arjun,I agree ,… we will start a fresh from now,..and thanks for saving chasni yaar,..Tell me one thing,… how did you saved chasni from this major accident as I heard from teji that accident happened near kandla hotel,…

Arjun:I hope u understand that it will be good for all of us if something unsaid,…
Saying so arjun smiled sarcastically and both entered the room increasing radz curiosity,…

Sam: Chasni,I said u to distance arjun from me but you,….As usual cleared all the mess,…give me a hug,….

Sam hugged Radz and kissed Radz cheek,…

Radz: I knew Arjun sir will do the things that will be correct,…
Sam:hmmm,..Oh chasni,I wanna talk with this Idiot now or else he will b angry with me for this too,..

Then sam went outside to have a chat with Neil leaving Arjun and Radhika alone,….Arjun saw bowl full of hot soup and asked radz that she had her dinner or not,…& cute banter between the duo.

Arjun:Do you have your dinner,Radhika?

Radz: No sir,..Sam will feed me after her chat with neil on phone sir,…
Arjun: y u r so careless radhika,..Doctor advised u to take your food on time right,…Wait I will feed you,…
Saying so Arjun took the bowl sitting beside radz and tries to feed radz,…Arjun took a spoon full of soup near radz mouth to feed her,…Radz hesitated to eat from arjun’s hand,…

Radz:Sir,…Its ok,..Sam will feed me and you no need to worry,…please sir,…
Arjun: what radhika,..I wont add chilli in your food,…so,don’t worry much,…Have this,…

After this radz had no choice other than eating silently,…Both had eye lock in between this,…(Back ground Music: Kwahishon pe likhi),..while eating radz spilled some due to dry cough,..So,Arjun makes her drink the water from the glass by holding her head softly,…Radz was stunned to see Arjun’s care for her and she lost herself in staring this new arjun,…

Arjun: Are you alright radhika,..
Radz: hmmm,..Enough sir,..I cant eat more than this,…Please,…

Arjun accepted and kept the bowl on the tray and took a cloth to clean radz mouth,…Radz was uncomfortable seeing arjun coming near her to clean her mouth,…

Radz: Sir,…Leave it na,..I will do it myself,..please give it to me,…

Arjun again stared radz and he put his finger on his lips signing radz not to talk,…

Arjun:ushhhhhhh!!!! Keep quiet Radhika,…cant u remain silent for few minutes,…

Saying so Arjun cleaned radz mouth which induces butterflies in radz stomach,..she diverted her gaze when arjun cleaning her mouth and her cheeks using the towel,…Then, Arjun gave her the medicines after food,…Radhika had her medicine looking at her hero Arjun Sir without blinking her eyes lovingly,…The screen freezes on Ardhika’s intense Eyelock,…

Precap: Dadaji and mala welcoming their choti in Mumbai.Radz hug her mom with Dilip patting his choti’s Head affectionately,…

Credit to: Renu

26 comments

  1. Ameena??

    Omg renu…u r truly amazingggg my dear….wow…wow…wow…wow….I totally loved it ….update the next one sOOn….u r making crazyyyyy…..love uuuu ???
    One lovee

  2. Amazing renu…..just fantastic loved arjun jealousy and raneil bond…..bt too sad for Neil,arjun how could u call him monkey its so bad man he s helping ur lady love and U should remain thankful to him yaar….ardhika movements super super what a passionate romance yaar…thanks renu for giving us wonderful updates….love U so.uch buddy….tight hug my deary….renu Ru tamil

  3. Hareem

    Heyyyyyyy Renu dear…marvellously awesooooooooooooooooooome epi
    Loved it..to the core…

    kEEp smiling always

    Love u looooads…

  4. fatarajo

    Hi. Among all the hindi serials I watched this year, my favourite is Manmarziyan even though it was a short one. Miss this show very badly. Am very happy to see a lot of Manmarizyan fans in this website. And I am loving all the fan fiction on Manmarziyan. Well done

  5. manha

    Finally the scenes which we wished for r here.. lovely. Fabulous. Raneil bond just amazing. I just wish more scenes of their flawless frnship bond. Neil this attitude of arjun is not new to u but u hav to get used to these stares man if u r with radz.
    Our hero arjun caring for his radz n becoming jealous. Really too gud. But he has not yet completely changed n forgot his revenge. So we hav to wait for some more time for the super lover boy to come out of him. Eyelocks, glances arjun giving to radz. Totally flat. Now he is joking too. Wah bhai wah. Radz also started thinking abt him. Yeh toh chaar chand lag gaya. Superb. Atlast epi ended with their intense eyelock. That was fantastic. Thank u renu soooooo much. Loveeeee u. Waiting for next one.

  6. Hareem

    Guyyyyyz I would not b able to come here for a long time my preliams r starting..
    Will be missing u all my dear friends..

    Love u looooads my sweeeeeeeeeeeet hearts

    • manha

      Hareem don’t worry my sweet friend. Just concentrate on exams n give ur best. After exams get completed u can come back we will be waiting for u dear.loveeee u.

  7. renu

    Thank you friends for liking it,…I had hesitation that you people will like this flow of story or not,…

    & one assurance from me guys,…there will be no Saral and no nandhini here and their entry will bring our ardhika to tie the knot as in original story ,…I decided to write it till Ardhika’s marriage and that will be the end of this Missing pieces part1,…

    & another thing is their marriage wont happen till radz achieve her dream and there will be more emotional roller caster rides in the upcoming episodes and will try to add some live and passionate romance between our love birds,…

    & Arjun cant change in a single day,.. now he is affected by radhika and radz too affected but there is difference in their extent,…I wanna write more on ardhika with slow and steady transformation in Arjun,…Hope you guys will like this plot,…

    P.S: I cant reply to u all as my exams are nearer to me and i heard that chennai is somewhat back to normal so,Have to return to chennai this week,…It doesnt mean i didnt read your comments as its the ly hope for me to continue with next update,…Love u all dearies,…

  8. Roma

    Hi renu dear, my lovely friend, awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode, I loved it to the core. ..really it was missing from the show n your imagination is completing that missing part…I totally loving your plot and decision for growing this passionate love between these love birds n not bringing saral n nandini, I hate them to the core. ..loved today’s episode very very much. ..arjun jealous of neil n his behavior shows that it affects him n Neil’s reaction to it…raniel bonding was lovely n Sam lost in Neil’s n rads lost in arjun’s thoughts was really amazing. …arjun taking care of rads and their intense eyelocks n convo was totally mind blowing, I wish this actually happened in the show…but I’m enjoying now to the fullest…thx a lotttttt renu for sharing this with us…I looooove youuuuuuuuu soooooooo muchhhhhh…plzzzz continue dear as you planned…I’m blessed to read such a sweeeeeet n heart touching pure love story from you…you’re amazing writer n making my dream come true…eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very very tight warm hug, muaaaaahhhhhh

  9. Shub

    Renu, thanks for writing. You are taking us back to the tv screen with your writing. Could imagine the possibilities eye lock and every frame what you are writing.I am so glad you are back in this forum.keep writing and keep entertaining!!!

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