Manmarziyan Missing pieces Part 1 – Episode 19

Hiii friends,…I think this was a late update so far in this Missing pieces,…I hope you ppl will like this ride,…We gonna see some strange encounters in this FF,…I hope it will be quite interesting,… As usual Ignore my Grammatical Errors here and there,…NO talking,..Ready to go,…

Episode 19 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

Time passed in such a way that everyone forgot themselves in playing Beach volley ball except Radhika,..She excused herself from playing stating that she had pain at her abdomen,…Dadaji and Neil worried sensing something wrong in her as she was not a girl,who stand away when it comes to playing games with her friends whereas Arjun pretended to be normal indulged himself in playing games by teaming with Teji and co,…On the whole group,Sam only seems to be enjoyed the fun at fullest,…Neil feels so happy seeing his sam enjoying his surprised get together,.. After a while,

Sam:Chaasni,…Atleast you can play Water balloon toss na,…See,I will ping you with this balloons,..Cummon guys,..Aim at chasni,…
Radz:Sam,Please,…
Neil dragged Radz and began,
Neil:No please,…Sam was right,..You are my team,..Sam, you go to Arjun Team yaar,..Me and chasni will be in this team,…What Dadaji,M I right na,…
Sam:Why Idiot?,..You are my team,…Chaasni,You go to Arjun Team yaar,..I think,Then only our team will be balanced,…Arjun,Chaasni will play in your team man…You have no problem na?
Arjun Nodded yes,..At the same time,both Radz and Arjun felt little awkward,…Dadaji noticed this began,
Dadaji:Sam beta,..leave choti to play in our team,…Or else,Shall we do one thing,…Let’s all split into two teams based on gender,… Guys all will be one team and You ladies will be another Team,…And I’m Judge,…Now problem solved na?
Neil:Dadaji,Wow,..Superb Idea,…It’s nice,..Sam,..All the best yaar,..You won the Volley ball match cox of me,…Now,You gonna lose,..Rem,I’m not in your team sammy,…So,Don’t cry after losing Sammendher singh,…
Sam pushed Neil forcefully on his chest hearing this and began,
Sam:We will see that too Idiot,..Who will win and who will lose,…What chasni,…Cummon yaar,We will show our women’s power to them,.. Mala Aunty,Prerna Aunty,Krithika,..you ppl are ready na,…
They sighed yes to sam whereas Neil faced arjun and began,
Neil:Arjun,..You are my key player man and I hope you knew the Rules of this game,…
Arjun:Hmmm,…
Neil:Ok,Guys,I will announce the rules of this game again for both the teams,…Teji,You prepared water balloons na,…
Teji:Haan Neil,..Zubin,Place that Bucket with balloons here yaar,..
Neil:hmmm,…Ok,…Now the rules of this game,…Here,We have a large bucket full of Water balloons,…Each team members have to toss the balloons on opposite team members,…If the balloon Breaks,.Then That team will be out,…I mean Sam’s team will be out,..We knew the result already,…But,sam wants to see,…Am I right Sammy,…
Neil winked at sam and Sam fumes in anger began,
Sam:Idiot,..Game din yet started and So,don’t dream much,..We will be the winner,..You loser,…
Neil:Hmmm,..Let’s see Sammendher singh,…
Sam:Ok yaar,..Be ready and try to grab more balloons and toss at one in opposite team correctly,..And Dont waste your time,…
Dadaji:Ok Now Game starts,…Both teams are ready na,…
Sam:Yes, we all are ready Dadaji,..Let’s go guys,…

All let their hands inside the large bucket to grab balloons as much,..First Sam took her balloon and started tossing it on Neil by chasing him,…Others were busy in taking the balloons from the bucket,…In this process,Radz hand collided with Arjun’s which ignites some spark in both of their nerves,..As a result,their Eyes too collided in an Intense stare and it in addittion ignited a blissfully Intense flame in them,…Almost everyone took the ballon from the bucket and Krithika is the last one to take noticed Arjun’s prolonged stare on Radz and their collided hands,…She chuckled silently and went away from there to toss her balloon on Zubin,..

Now,None of the hands competing to take the water balloons from the bucket except arjun’s and Radhika’s,…Radz felt odd due to the effect of their intense stare and averted her gaze away from Arjun,..She also takes her hand out of the bucket in a jiffy,..It looks like as if both got electrocuted after touching some Loose conduct wires,…Radz felt awkward,…Arjun noticed this demeanour of her,…And Now,There was only one balloon inside the bucket,…Arjun took that balloon from the bucket and began,

Arjun:What Radhika,…You lose so early,…Now Balloon is with me,…
Hearing this Radz mood swings off into playful mode and she began,
Radz:Till game din end sir,…You have to toss the balloon at me na,…Let’s see,…Who will win then?,…

Arjun smirked and tries to toss the balloon but Radz started running other side,…Arjun chased her and this time he was successful in grabing her dupatta easily,…Radz stopped running to execute her idea,she turned back slowly and started walking towards him boldly,…Arjun was froze seeing Radz coming closer to him,..His breath races faster might be due to chase or their proximity,…He left his hold on her dupattaa and checked the presence of crowd there,..In this mean time,Radz grabbed the water balloon from his hand and distanced herself from Arjun,..Then shouted,

Radz:Arjun Sir,…I said na,…You will never win,…Now its my turn,…
Arjun smiled at her craziness,yelled back,
Arjun:Let’s see that too Radhika Mishra,..
Radz tossed the balloon at him but it was mistakenly hits some other person there,…
Arjun:What Radhika,..I said already na,…You have to check your eyes,…See, M standing here like pillar but You cant toss this balloon on me properly,…I don’t want to play with losers,…If possible try to toss the balloon on me correctly next time,..Good luck Radhika Mishra,…
Saying so,Arjun winked at Radz and walked away from there smilingly,…

Radz fumes in her childish anger and went to take the balloon was surprised to see someone there,..While talking with that person,Neil came there running from other side,…He breathed heavily due to continuous chase,…

Neil:Chasni,..What are you doing here yaar,…
Radz:Neil,..She is caterina from Italy,…We met already here few minutes ago,..Caterina,..This is my friend Neil,…
Caterina:Oh!,..Nice meeting you,…
Neil shakes hand with caterina,…Sam,who saw this felt uncomfortable yelled at him,
Sam:Hey Idiot,… What are you doing there?,…Hmmm,…
Neil:You don’t have to yell,..I can hear you Sammendher singh,…
Radz:Woh,…Sam,…This is Caterina,…she is from Italy,..She came here with her husband to visit Temples and Monments of our country,…
Sam:Oh!,…Hiii Caterina,…I’m Sam,…Oops,,..Samaira,..Samaira khanna,…
Neil:Anyways Caterina gonna pronounce your name wrongly, sammendher singh,…
Sam:Idiot, how are you so confident about it,..She will pronounce my name correctly,…It’s very easy to pronounce even for a child,…M I Right Caterina,…
Neil:Oh,..That’s why you are introducing yourself with your full name,..so you have some plan to get a Job from her in Italy,…Chalo,..Continue,..Why you stopped at name alone yaar,…What you forgot to tell about your family background,Educational details,.bla,..bla,…
Neil turned his gaze towards caterina and continued,
Neil:You will wait right,..What yaar,..Sorry,…You cant understand hindhi na,…I said,..You will wait to hear a detailed Self Intro from this girl,..No problem right,..
Caterina nodded yes made sam angry,…
Whereas Radz chuckled seeing this,…And Sam starts Beating him on his back,..caterina tries to end their fight was stopped by Radz,..
Radz:Caterina,..Leave it,..They used to fight like this,..It’s usual one,..You don’t worry,…And where is your husband,…
Hearing this Caterina remembered something and she searched her Bag hurriedly began,
Caterina:Oh my goodness,…We wanna give one copy of photos to you and your Husband,..Where is he,That tall Handsome Pink shirt guy?

Radz was shocked hearing this,..At the same time, she was relaxed seeing Neil and Sam,who still engaged in their fight,… But,She was unaware of another fact that Neil listened their convo slightly while getting beating from Sam,…And Radz don’t want any misunderstanding to arise between her and sam,.. So,She tries to change the topic,

Radz:Caterina,..Leave it,..please,I said na,..We are not couples and Keep those Photos with yourself as our remembrance from India,…I think,Our other friends will be waiting,..We have to go,..Dont mistake me,…
Caterina:It’s Ok,..I understand,…
Sam:What you understand Caterina?,…
Radz:Nothing Sam,..Hold this balloon too na,..See, there Teji is wandering,.. common,..Neil,..What are you looking yaar,…Come let’s go na,…Bye Caterina,…
Saying so,Radz dragged Sam and both chased Teji to Toss the balloon on him,…

After a while,..Dadaji announced the Result,..
Dadaji:And now the winner is Girl’s team,…
Sam hugged Radz,…And all shouted in joy,…
Teji:Dadaji,..You are wrong,…sam and radhika only breaks their balloon but they cheated me and I just tossed the broken balloon,…Zubin also saw this,…Ask him,…
Sam:We dunno that and all,..Finally who broke the balloon will be out and your team was out already,…Where is Idiot,..He talked so much na,…
Krithika:Sam,…See Neil is coming,..
Sam ran towards neil and grasped his arms playfuly began,
Sam:Idiot,..See,We are the winners,…I told you na,..We only win,…
Neil:Sam,…Please,…
Sam holds Neil’s cheeks ad began,
Sam:What yaar,..You became so saddy,…It’s just game na,..My poor little boy,…
Neil yelled at Sam,…
Neil:Wont you remain silent Sam,…I said na,..Please,..You needed this only na,..Congradulation for winning,..Now,Ok,..Guys,Let’s go,…Pack up,…
Sam was shocked and confused at Neil’s sudden changed demeanor,…
Prerna:Neil,..What happened beta?,..Why suddenly?
Neil:Mom,…Just headache,…Sorry sam,…Please yaar,..Tomorrow we have important conference na,..so,We need some rest too,…Try to understand,…Teji,you drop Chasni,Sam,mala aunty,Dadaji at their home,..Then, at last drop mom at my place,…You know to drive Car right,..
Teji:Ya sure neil,…I will,…
Neil:Good,…Arjun,..You come with me man,..Your car is still at my place,…I hope you will,…
Sam:But Neil,How will you two go,…
Arjun:By bike sam,…
Sam was puzzled,…
Sam:Bike???
Dadaji:Ok leave everything,…Let’s pack the things now,…And We all had enough fun,..Now time to return,..choti,…Hold me beta,…
Radz,who was witnessing everything silently nodded yes to dadaji and helped him to move,…Sam and all packed their things without questioning any,..

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In Travel,…

Neil rided the bike silently with Arjun at the passenger seat,…Both tried to maintain some silence for few minutes,…Finally Neil broke that silence and began,

Neil:What Arjun,..It seems you are so tired,…
Arjun:Yes,..lightly,..
Neil:Due to spending more time in beach with us or something else..
Arjun:Means???
Neil:You couldn’t get,What I mean Arjun?,..Please don’t joke yaar,…
Arjun:Jokers only joke,…I’m not in a mood to hear your non sense,…So,Its better if we maintain some silence till you reach your place like before,…
Neil:Oh,…Now,You are not in a mood to listen,…Hmmm,…Then,In what you are interested man,..Spending more time alone or with,…
Arjun:I said na,…I don’t wanna hear any crap,…
Neil chuckled hearing this and began,
Neil:Your words only makes me to remember my last bike ride with chasni yaar,..
Arjun was shocked hearing Neil and radhika went on a bike ride earlier,..
Arjun:What,..Radhika came with you in bike?,…
Neil:Why?,..You have any problem in that,..,..
Arjun:No,..I just asked,…
Neil noticed Arjun’s face in Rear mirror and began,…
Neil:Hmmm,…I cant forget that ride man,..You know,..She din hold my shoulder too in support yaar,…What,She did the same while coming with you too,…
Arjun:I din notice that and all,…
Neil:Oh!,..May be in busy,you might have missed,..M I right Arjun,..
Arjun:Not exactly,…
Neil:Hmmm,…Ok,When you ppl reached home Arjun?,..At 1.30Pm,…or around 2.00Pm or 3.00Pm,..I knew Obviously,It will take around 20 minutes travel from Airport na,..Just for one confirmation man,…
Arjun:I already said,..If we maintain some silence,It will be good for both of us,…
Neil:This is not an answer for my question yaar,…Anyways,I knew You both dinn went to Home,..
Arjun was astonished hearing this from Neil,..
Neil:What yaar,..I’m Right na,…
Neil halted the bike by putting sudden break and began,
Neil:Arjun,.My home came,…Shall we,…
Arjun,who get down from the bike began,…
Arjun:I have some important works neil,..So,If you handover my car key,..Then,..I,..
Neil:Stop yaar,..You came to my house for the first time,..Sorry Second time,…Last time You came here to drop Sam na,…What yaar,.. I’m right na,…
Arjun:I think so,…If it comes to sam,You never forget anything right,…
Neil:Yes,..She is my Best friend,..That’s why I’m asking you,..Where were you with chasni this afternoon?,..
Arjun:I said give my key,…I’m not interested to give heed to your nonsense,…
Neil smirked and began,…
Neil:Oh!,…You are not interested but I’m much more interested to talk with you Arjun,…As few things should be warned earlier or else who knows, it may burst out into a big quake in many lives,…
Arjun turned towards him with a stern smile on his face ,keeping his both hands in pocket firmly began,..
Arjun: means,…
Neil:Means,…Let’s speak inside or here itself,…I’m comfortable with any,..Choice is yours Mr.Arjun Mehra,…
Arjun smirked and signed yes to have a convo with Neil inside his house,…

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In Sam-Radz Room,…

Radz was confused in selecting a suitable dress to wear tomorrow,..Whereas Sam was lost in her world laying down on their bed,…
Radz:Sam,..Sam,…
Sam:Hmmm Bolo chasni,..
Radz:Shall I wear this or this for tomorrow,…See here na,…
Sam:Hmmm,..What yaar,..Wear anything which you like?,..
Radz:Sam,..What happened yaar?,..Why you are so serious?
Sam:No chasni,…Nothing,…
Saying so, Sam gets up from the bed and kneels down before her,..Then selected a dress which she dinn showed her to choose,…
Sam:Haan, This one will be perfect,…Pink Maxi,..It will suit you perfectly yaar,..Sachi,…
Radz:Sam,..No,I cant wear this,…
Sam:Chasni,..See,Tomorrow,You gonna present on behalf of our Birdsong before those Maybelline ppl na,…I heard from mom that they recommend us for another big project too,… So,your dressing should also be apt yaar,…
Radz:Sam,..I agree with you yaar,..But Sorry Sam,. I’m not comfortable with this dress Sam,…Please,Understand me na,…
Sam:Ok,..Stop it yaar,..I’m stupid,..I asked you to wear this na,..Hereafter,Don’t ask me anything like’sam,I wear this or that tomorrow’,..I never listen to you,…
Saying so,Sam lay down by wearing a fake anger on her face and pretends to sleep,…Radz felt bad and agreed to wear that dress tomorrow,…
Radz:Sam,See here,…
Sam:No,..I’m sleeping,..
Radz smiled hearing this by holding that dress in her hand began,
Radz:Oh!,…Ok,..Then I’m saying this to myself,…Tomorrow,I’ll wear this Pink maxi only and it was my best friend’s wish,…
Sam get’s up with smile and hugged Radz lovingly,
Sam:Hmmm,..This is my chasni,…And I forgot to ask you that Doctor said You ran so long today,..That’s why you got little pain at abdomen,…But,I dinn see you running long na,…
Radz:Woh!,..Sam,..while playing Water balloon toss,I ran na,…May be That’s why,…
Sam:Oh!,I forgot that yaar,…But,You should follow Doctor’s advice chasni,…Don’t think you are perfectly alright,..You heard na what he said,..You shouldn’t risk yourself often by engaging in such activities,…
Radz:Ok,..Ok,..Shall you stop giving advice,..It’s Really boring yaar,…
Sam:You pagal,..Boring,…hmmm
Radz:Just kidding sam,…
Sam:Ok Chasni,Tell me What you think about this guy?,..
Saying so, Sam lay down on the bed holding her pillow tightly,…

(Author’s Note:A Cute Miss understanding btw the buddies,…Here Radz talking about Arjun to sam and Sam talking about Neil to Radz,…)

Radz:Me,..Hmmm,..I too cant understand him completely sam,..I think,I should do a Master degree to understand him,…You know sam,Sometimes I dunno why I feel He had some motive behind everything he does,…
Sam:Motive,..I don’t think he has,..But,Today his activities sound different chasni,..He avoided me and dinn take my calls too yaar,..and you saw na,..What he did in beach,…Its strange chasni,…
Radz:Sam, that’s why I felt he had some motive,…
Sam:Really,…
Saying so sam gets up and sat in curiousity cuddling her pillow to listen what Radz utter,…
Radz:Haan Sam,…But at the same time, He was too good sam,..I never see such a person in this world sam,…You know,He respects other’s dignity,wishes and,..
Sam:I know him very well than you, understand,…and also listen,I knew him before you,..Ok,…
Radz:Ok,..Ok,..dont be angry again,…
Sam:Hmmm,..,.What he did to you that you are describing him so intensely yaar,..
Radz:What he did,..Seriously sam, I owed to him huge for his all deeds,…I dunno how to repay him,… He did many sam,…If he was not present,..I dunno how I will,…I cant imagine too yaar,…Really,He was so selfless in helping others,Saving others from their danger and He
Sam:Leave yaar,..I know He will but He dinn tell me what he did for you to me…Nowadays,I felt he was hiding something from me chasni,..I dunno why,…I’m his first in everything he does,..So,What’s forcing him to ignore me at times yaar,…,..
Radz:Sam,..Dont take it wrong,..It was his nature to help sam,…He might have did this for any one yaar,…And I too couldn’t get What is disturbing him that he was forced to indulge in things which he never wants to do Sam,…
Sam:I don’t think so,..But,I couldn’t imagine my world without him chasni,..God gave me a good would be partner to understand this …And Today,I dinn expect that he will give me such a big surprise yaar,…I really enjoyed a lot chasni,…
Radz:Surprise,..He,..Never,…He knew only to fight and taunt, sam,…Nothing else,…Such a strange person,…One minute,He will act so good and next minute,He will turn out to be a Rakshas,…But,He has good heart sam,…I admire him for that,…
Sam:Hey,..Stop it yaar,…You forgot,He surprised you too na,..If he dinn surprised you today means,you will call him as Rakshas,..Wait I’ll tell this to that Idiot,…And also listen,Don’t be jealous Ok,..You know these days,He always take you in our speech,..And Remember another thing,he is our friend,…
Radz:Really,He talks about me,..,I wonder Sam,..He talks about me,..
Radz laughed continuously puzzled sam,..
Sam:Hey,..What’s there to laugh in it?,..Haan,…
Radz:He talks about me with you,…Then tell me,What he talks about me?
Sam:Nothing leave it,…
Radz:Sam,Now you seems to be jealous yaar,…
Sam:Me Jealous,..Never,…Why I will become jealous?,…
Radz:Sam,I could smell something burning here,…I think,..Its from you only,..Am I right na,…you are jealous,…
Sam:No nothing like that,…Switch off the light,..Tomorrow,We have to wake up early,…
Radz:Sam,don’t change the topic,…Tell me you felt jealous na,…
Sam:Chasni,..I will beat you,..If you continued this,…Seriously,I feel sleepy yaar,…Goodnight,…
Saying so,Sam lay down on her side of bed to sleep,…whereas big smile on Radz face while teasing sam was vanished from her face within few seconds after their convo,…

Radz’s innervoice:I know sam,..You love Arjun sir so much,..And I also Knew,He dinn love you as much as you love him Sam,…Hey Bhagwan,..Please don’t take this Happiness away from Sam forever,…Please,…

Radz:Goodnight sam,…
Saying so, Radz too went on a deep sleep hoping everything will be fine,…

Precap:Neil showed A Photo to Arjun angrily,which made Arjun freeze,…

Credit to: Renu

26 comments

  1. Lakshmi

    Superb n fabulous update dear.Arjun n radz convo n radz trick to get balloon from arjun was awesome. Neil n arjun’s convo n Neil’s protectiveness for Sam was superb. Radz n Sam’s convo n sam’s jealousy was amazing . Eagerly awaiting for next episode and Neil n arjun’s confrontation. Love u ???..take care…

  2. LAVANYA

    Thankyou so much maam for this awesome update…Hope it would be possible for you to update long episodes like this..Really happy to read a wonderful long story..And the play mood and the mistaken identity conversation between radz and sam was beautiful…Please do continue..you might be busy,, but please try to give the episodes whenever you are free.I hope just like me , many are waiting for you story..I have a request, if you dont mind,,please can you make either arjun or radz to confess or atleast realize their felings..Am sorry..Its your story.I know I dont have any right to ask you change your story..Am sorry…But whatever you write I know it will be the best…far better than my imagination..

    • renu

      First of all,..Thank you so much for taking out time to read this FF Lavanya,….And You are free to say anything about the story,..Your suggestions are welcome dear,…You can call me Renu,.. No need to give more respect to this crazy girl,….If you insist,…I’ll accept it,..No problem,..But dont expect me to call you madam,…It ll look so professional,..Then Renu wont talk except the word Madam,..LOL,…

      Ya,These days somewhat busy with personal work dear,…Even I couldnt get enough time to scribble too,…That’s why I tried to give long updates every week,…If possible will update soon yaar,…This update has very little Ardhika scenes,..I doubt,..How it will be,..But,Wanna cope up with the story,..SO,Dinn tried to had any,….M glad you liked this piece,…

      Regarding Confession,…Lavanya,..Dont be sorry and all,..Be free to say whatever you like as a friend,…My positive is My friends,…And I dunno you Read the first episode of this FF,..I started this FF after Lonovla accident and planned to end with Saral and Nandhin’s entry as in original series,….But,To your gosh,Who knows,..Who gonna realize the love for whom in the 4,..By now only 1 out of 4 realized Love,….And in Part 2,We gonna see more painful yet sensual love story btw ardhika after marriage,..As of now,…I cant say anything dear,….Just one thing,..Keep Reading,…May be Who knows,..Ardhika might end up in Another Sensual scene like Dori scene before engagement,…

      Thank you so much dear

  3. manha

    Renu madam what an epi. superb. Neil n arjun convo. oh god u r really filling all the missing pieces yaar. This is tooo gud. sam n radz misunderstand about the person. U reminded me the scene after pet shop where sam n radz r taunting neil n arjun. haha. That was a complete fun.

    The beach games , family, friends, neil n sam convo n their taunts, arjun n radz tricks for the game. everything was beautiful n lovely.

    • renu

      HEllo,..What yaar,…M soooooooooooo angry,…All of sudden my manha calling me madam n all,…What madamji,…Sth wrong,…Is this comment was posted by manha or someone faking Manha’s Id,…

      See,Manha,..COx of ur one word Renu doing Research ,….LOL,…

      Ok,..just Kidding,…Thanks a lot deary,….M glad you liked this piece,…

      Manha,..you know,..Radz and sam friendship built on Miss understanding,..Their Frist meeting itself quite hilarious,..But,I too rem their cake scene while writhing this,…Galath femi,…So,Cute and funny scene it was,..Afte to that Missunderstanding,..They never try to clear their missunderstanding,..That’s the reason,Radz got slap from Sam and Sam slapped Radz,…Even at last too after Ardhika dance in their Reception party(just glimpse,..We cant say it Dance,..But still loved it )Radz talks about love thinking Arjun and Sam hearing her thinking Neil,..so,their Missunderstanding present in their friendship till last,..But the impact it create is to be noted,…

      Here,I made Sam jealous and Radz feeling for her,….

      • manha

        oh my renuuuuuuu seee there is no madam. U dont have to worry only i write here, no other person can write with my name. lol. What doing research now. plzzzz dont take so much strain.Already u hav two stories to write. N i dont want my sweet friend to think abt another thing.

        Yes their misunderstandings were never cleared but they seemed to take no heed for it. what if sam has confronted after the sangeet incident. Or just atleast try to think in radz pov. Then we could hav got another story here. But here is big but, We cant change anything now. But our small head doesnt get tired for think over the possibilities. i’m again blabbering. i’m stopping now. Waiitng for the next update. loveeeeee u dearyyyyy.

  4. Shree

    Renu!! Yippie!! You updated finally!! Evalo sandhoshama iruku teriyuma?! Sooper update di.. The games .. Nesam ardhika scenes .. Awesome… Neil Arjun bike ride… Semma … Precap seems to be interesting… Seekrama update pannu… Please do please…

    Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • renu

      Sree,…I knew,..I made you all wait for long,…What to do,..

      But M glad you liked this piece deary,…Sure,will try to update bit earlier but cant promise sree,…

      Where is my sweet don,..I cant find her these days,..If you met her in any other thread,…Convey my well wishes to her,…

      • Shree

        Renu!!

        Ava konjum busy… Daralama soldrein… Kavala pada vendam… ??

        Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

  5. naomi

    Hai Renu……. really, this was missing one. Water Balloon scene superoooo super. Radhu nalla oru tactic use pani arjun idam irundhu balloon vaangitaa. Good.
    Neiloda saramaariyaana questions arjuney erichal varavachudhu. Naa personal feel panninen neil yean ippadipannraanu. Paavam arjun avanukku piditha ponnoda villayaada guda vidamaatrangaley.
    ” Enna kodumma renu idhu”.
    Ennalla mudiyala, naa virubuna character adhu, yaar thappa sonallum, kelvi kettallum konja kashtamairukku.
    But enakku theriyum oru nalla friend ippadi thaan pannuvaan. Radhu really a lucky girl Neil poley oru friend kidachdharkku.
    Ok, byee… sweet heart.

    • renu

      Naomi,…Thanx dear,…

      Naomi,..I like torturing Arjun,..You can even call me heartless too,…This Renu’s evilness never end,..I think some horns grown on my forehead while writing this,…LOl,…

      But,Dont worry,…Who is he,..Arjun Mehra,…HE can handle anyone except our Tigress Radhika,…So,Let’s see,How neil gonna handle our Angry bird in the next episode,…Pavam parkanumna Neilku than ne parkanum baby,…Poor neil,…What he will do,..If Arjun became pure devil,….Lol,…

      Hmmm,..That’s why I wanna maintain essence of Neil-Rad friendship in the two stories,..

      But,Naomi Here In missing pieces,..He may escape from this Evil Renu,..But In Tale of Hatred into love,..No chance,..Poor Arjun gonna plead me,..I enjoy torturing him,…HeHehheee,….

      • naomi

        Chey.. Renuva poi naanga heartless nu sollamudiyuma. Ethaney peru heart la irukka valiya nee un story moolama sari seidhirukka unna poi chanceilla. U r really such a Sweet Heart.

  6. aastha

    Finally u updated……….I lkd everything in it…..i admire niel…..he HS lot f courage to stir up Arjun like tat……sam rads xonvo ws funny coz bth were tinking f diff persons……i tot niel aarjun convo wud ve been tere…..i mean full convo……im eagerly waiting for te precap n plzzz update missing parts and journey of hatred to lve sooooooooin…..

    • renu

      Aastha,..How’s your exam,….

      Thanx for liking,…You are my girl got my point,….Let’s See,..How neil gonna hold this Tiger,….

      I tried to update it in this piece itself but felt bit tired dear,…So,I thought to continue it in next piece,…And it was already a lengthy one,….finally,I completed this Beach track,….I felt i was stuck in Beach at one point of time,…..Hope next piece will be interesting,….

      • aastha

        All My exams except phy practical went superb……..

        Its all ri8 renu u cn update in te nxt epi….after all u ve a very busy schedule……..so take ur time n update dear……n u need nt ask whether it ll b interesting ciz all ur epis r wonderful!!!!!!!!

  7. renu

    Aastha,…I read your comment in Tale of Hatred into love thread,…

    I loved your comment,…Half of the credit should go to my friend too,…Its ok,…I understand your eagerness,….Will try to update earlier dear,…..Hope You will like that story too,…

  8. Advaita

    It was superb !! Loved the antakshari part very much. Arjun and Neil’s convo was fab. Waiting for next update. Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂 🙂

  9. Roma

    Awesomeeeeee, lovely, marvellous episode my renuuuuuuu dearyyyyyy it’s amazingly superbbbb. …enjoying this ride very much. ..the water balloon game n ardhika’s intense eyelock n effects of their own feelings…ardhika balloon fight n teasing. …wowwww awesome. ….caterina, nesam n rads convo was really cute one n Neil knows something now…rads n sam convo n sweet misunderstanding was very cute….neil bike ride convo n later confrontation was quite interesting. ..let’s see how arjun convince Neil about the situation….what a cool n heated convo between them. …I’m just imagining it…precap very exciting. …it’s getting more n more exciting with each update my dearrrrr renuuuu…love you soooooooo muchhhhhh for these beautiful stories. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, plzzzz upload soooooooon when you get time. ..muaaaaahhhhhh

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