Manmarziyan Missing Pieces Part 1 – Episode -17

Hiii friends,…I have my exams and Festivals in this week yaar,.,,So,Next update will be probably next week yaar,… I tried to give 2 back to back lengthier updates,…And this one will be another Maha episode,…I hope you people will enjoy this update,…For First time,We gonna see some light Ardhika moments in Beach,… And Again I hope it will be good,…As usual Ignore my Grammatical Errors here and there,…

Episode 17 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

In beach,…

Arjun,Who was tensed seeing an incoming call from an Unknown number in Radhika’s Mobile attends the call hesitatingly,…

***Telephonic convo***

Saral:Hello,…Radhu,…Why are you not talking with me these days,…You know,How I was longing to see you Radhu,…
Arjun felt odd hearing the voice over phone,…Even he don’t know the person at the other end began,
Arjun:Ya,..Hello,…Radhika, left her mobile,…
Saral was annoyed hearing a male voice over the phone began,…
Saral:Oh!,..You,…
Arjun:Me,..I,…am Arjun,…Radhika’s,…
Saral Interrupted,..
Saral:Oh!,…Nice to hear you,..I don’t want to listen anything now,…After giving mobile to Radhu,Don’t forget to inform her about me and Ask her to call me,…Ok,…
Arjun:Hmmm,…Ya,…Of course,…And you,..Radhika’s brother,..
Saral again annoyed hearing Arjun’s words began,
Saral:No,I’m Saral,..And mind your words before guessing someone,…Understand,…

***Telephonic convo***

Saying so Saral ends the call with a grumpy face in Hrishikesh,…But Here Arjun was Disturbed by this phone call,…He dunno why He wants to know,Who is this saral, What he was to Radhika and Why Radhika din tell him about this,Why it affects him much??…His mind for the first time flooded with many questions other than his Revenge,…

After a while,…,He realized that Radz was alone,..He quikly glanced the time in his watch,..It was near to 3.00PM,…He turned back was stunned to notice hardly few people wandering in the beach,…And Remembered Radz words that she had pain in her abdomen,…He felt somewhat guilty for leaving Radz alone in the Beach,..So,He ran back to the place where they ended their Chasing game a few minutes back by yelling her name loudly,…

Arjun:Radhika,…Radhika,…Where are you???,…Radhika,…

He was panic seeing no one at that place,…He don’t have any clue where she gone,…Cox He could just see the vision of Sea with its Dancing waves from there,…He kneels down in fear and took the sand from the beach just to throw it away,…Right then,He saw footsteps of his shoes on the sand,…It strikes his mind and he turned eagerly with an expectation to see Radhika’s,..His Guess never goes in vain,…Yes,He saw Radz footsteps too on the Sand,..It gave him a belief that he will find Radhika,..Without Wasting his time in his guilty feelings,He started following Radz Footsteps on the sand,…If again another marathon race was conducted,There was no doubt that Arjun will be the winner,…He started running tearing the warm noon Sea breaze,…But at one point,He was stopped seeing many footsteps,…Again he was clueless to follow,..He then asked the people nearby about Radz presence there,…

Arjun:Bhai,…Have you seen a girl in Blue kurti with long hair and this much height,..And she used to talk more,…
Someone:No,..I dunnno bhai,…Please ask some other,…

Arjun’s fear increased after hearing this,…Right then a little boy touched Arjun’s hand and began,

Boy:Bhaiya,…Are you asking about that blue kurti Di with long hair na,…She looks beautiful too na,…

Arjun kneels down in a hope and holds that boy’s shoulder and began,
Arjun:Haan,,,,Tell me beta,…where You saw that Di,…where beta??
Boy:Haan bhaiya,…I saw her while selling these snacks here,…That di is really brave and courageous,..I saw her beating one bhaiya with her slippers,…Ya,..Right here, she beats him nicely bhaiya,…We all clapped too,…
Arjun,who heard this was slightly proud of his radhika’s spunky nature without knowing the reason and at the same time,He was afraid that she might end up in any problem,…He hurriedly began,
Arjun:After that,…
Boy:After that,Di went this side but that bhaiya angrily shouted that he wont leave her and He will come with his friends,…That’s all bhaiya,..I dinn see anything after that,…
Arjun was shocked hearing this began,
Arjun:Thanx beta,…Thank you,…
Saying so,He started running towards the direction where that little boy pointed as Radz went,…

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Meanwhile In Birdsong,…

Sam was again annoyed hearing busy tone in Radz mobile,…
Sam:Chasni,..With whom you are talking yaar?,…Pick my call na,…Chasni,…
Right then Neil entered Sam’s cabin silently and shouted near her Ear from back,…
Neil:Wohooo!!!!Samendher singh!!!
Sam was shaken by this Sudden Sound of neil started beating him after keeping the mobile on her table,…
Sam: Youuu Idiot!,..Today I wont leave you,…Don’t act like a good boy,…
Neil:Hey,..Sammy,..Enough yaar,…It’s paining,…Stop it na,…
Sam:Nooo,..I told na,..Today I wont listen to you,…Shut your mouth,…
Neil:Ok,..Ok,…Hmmm,…First tell me what I Did?,..Then you can beat me as you wish,…I wont stop you,…
Sam:What you did??,..You are asking me,..first tell me, Why you din attend my calls???
Neil:Oh my Sammendher singh,..You are angry for this,…You know na I’m with Chasni’s mom and her Dadaji,…so,Bit busy hoon yaar,…And I arranged a surprise get together today evening at beach yaar, …

Sam tugging her Hair behind her ears by hiding jealousy on her face began,
Sam:Hmmm,…But why din you inform me that you are planning some surprise for all,…You will do everything with me ly na,…Then why you avoiding me this time alone Idiot,..If you wanna spend time with chasni,…You may tell me directly na,…What’s needed to create such a scene Idiot,…
Neil grinned at sam’s comment and began by holding her shoulders,

Neil:Sammy,..What yaar,…What happened to you?,..why you are behaving like someone to me?,..I thought you may understand and I don’t wanna disturb you cox You may be busy in arranging tomorrow conference na,…Though we completed all our works,..I knew,It Still needed some final touch,..So,I don’t wanna include you in making this plan by wasting your time,…That’s all Sammy,…And One thing I couldn’t understand what makes you to think like that yaar,… How could you think that m avoiding you to spend time with Chasni yaar,…Who is chaasni,..She is our friend na,…No Sammy,Please,…Please,Don’t say anything further to feel sorry for that later yaar,…You know how chasni feels now,..she was already upset Sammy and You know she even din came to my home along with her ma and dadaji,…
Sam felt guilty hearing neil’s words and looked puzzled at neil’s statement about radz began,
Sam:Then,Where is she???

Neil:She is at Flat now,..
Sam:What,She is alone,..Why you leave her to go to flat idiot,…
Neil:No Sammy,..I cant compel her and I knew chasni wont avoid our company without any valid reason,…There might be something bothering her Sammy,…
Sam,who saw her idiot’s concern on her chasni felt some truth in his words,…
Sam:Idiot,..I was calling her only,..She din pick my call too,…First I got busy tone and now it’s ringing,..But she din attend my call yaar,…You are sure na,..She is at flat,…Come let’s go and check her once,…

Neil:Sammy,..Sammy,..Sam please stop yaar,..Nothing to worry,..She was fine,…I think she needs some rest,…Forget about it,…I’ll take care of chasni,…Ok,…
Sam smilingly hugged Neil with tears in her eyes began,
Sam:Thanx idiot and Sorry for hurting you with my stupid questions yaar,…
Neil:It’s ok Sammy,..Leave it yaar,…And what’s this new villain entering btw us,…
Sam patted Neil’s back and after breaking their hug began,
Sam:Who???Pine apple,…
Neil:No,..Thanx and Sorry,…
Sam smilingly beats her idiot with affection and hugged him back,…(Background music:Tere mere dosti)

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In Beach,…

Three guys were teasing Radz badly and tried to scare her,…Radz din scared seeing them began,

Radz:Hey,..You din get enough,..So,you want me to give the same to your friends too,…It’s good for you ppl,If you leave from here silently or else,…
A guy who got slap from Radz began,
Guy:What,..What will you do?,..Tell us na,..Friends, today we have good entertainment yaar,..Ok,Girl,..We are telling you, what we gonna do?,…couldn’t understand,..Now we gonna pull your Dupatta from you,…Lets see how will you save your dignity,..cummon friends,…
Saying so,three guys tried to come near Radz,..Radz slowly bent and took her sandals from her legs and threw it back while 3 of them were concentrated on her sandal,Radz threw Sand in all their eyes within a fraction of second and ran away from there holding her Hand bag,…

***
At the same time,Arjun,who was running with fear saw Radz’s sandals on the way,..He took that sandals and confirmed It as Radz’s after remembering their Bike ride where he saw her wearing that sandals,…It further increases his fear,..He shouted her name loudly,..
Arjun:Radhika,…Radhika,…

***
That three guys after clearing their eyes started chasing Radz,…Radz,who already felt pain at her abdomen couldn’t run faster and bumped into a Man’s back accidently,..She holds his arms from back in support and began,

Radz:Sir,…Some Guys are chasing me,…Please help me na,…I din have my mobile too to call the police sir,…

Right then one of the gang grabbed Radz dupatta,…

Radz:Sir, Please, I already have pain in my stomach,…I cant run,..Please,Help me na,…They came,..

Saying so Radz holds that man’s arms tightly and that man,who heard Radz screams seems to be in some shock and he was none other than our Arjun,…We can clearly smell His anger overtook his guilty sense and He turned back holding Radz Forearm tightly on his one hand after putting her sandals down and punched that guy,who grabbed Radz dupaata with his other hand,…The guy,who fallen on the sand left his hold on Radz dupatta,…Whereas Radz ,Who closed her eyes in fear opened slowly was surprised to see Arjun standing there,…Arjun saw Radz affectionately and distanced her from him by holding her shoulders slowly started punching the other two guys too,…All fell on the Sand pleaded him to forgive them,…But arjun was not in a position to hear anything beating them black and blue,..He let out all his anger on those 3 guys,…Radz,Who saw Arjun’s protectiveness over her was simply froze and some unknown tears started rolling down her cheeks,..One guy even started bleeding holds Arjun’s legs began,…
Guy:Sorry Bhaiya,..We dunno She is your wife,…Please Forgive us Bahiyaa,…From now she is our Bhaabi,..What yaar,…Tell Bhaiya na,…Only m pleasing,…It’s all happened cox of him,..

Saying so,He started beating his other friend,…But Arjun din hear their words, kicked them again,…

Third Guy pleaded Radz this time,..

Third guy:Bhaabi,..Please Forgive us na…Hereafter,We never tease or misbehave with any girls here,…Please ask your Husband to stop na,..Please bhaabi,…

Radz after hearing this began,
Radz:Sir,…Enough,…

Arjun,who heard Radz words stopped beating them and began,
Arjun:Listen,..I close my eyes and will start my counting,..If I saw you ppl again after my 3 counts,I bury you ppl right there,..Understand,…

After hearing this from Arjun,..That guys thanked Radz and ran away from there within a fraction of second,…What wondered na,…Both Radz and Arjun never tried to clear that they are not married couple when those guys repeatedly calling them as such,…After a while,Arjun turned towards Radz,who had some unknown tears on her face eyeing Arjun,…Arjun felt guilty for Radz sufferings walked towards her and began,

Arjun:Are you alright Radhika,…you still have pain in your stomach na,…Come let’s go under some shelter,..

Saying so,Arjun hold Radz waist,…Radzz felt uncomfortable on Arjun’s touch began Hesitatingly by holding his wrist,

Radz:Sir,..Please,…I’ll walk myself na,..Just few minutes Rest is enough,..You don’t be tensed sir,…Please,…

Arjun,who saw radz began,

Arjun:Shhh! Don’t open your mouth,..Wear this sandals first,…

Radz did what arjun said and While wearing the sandals both forgot themselves in their Eye contact,…It looks like that they were in a separate world,…Even after wearing the sandals,Radz din ask Arjun to Release his hold on her waist or Tried to break their Eye contact,…Whereas arjun too lost himself completely in those dark brown eyes,…He couldn’t help himself at that moment,…Even the mobile ringing in his pocket became soundless,… (Background music:Kawhishon pe likhi)
Right then Little boy,who helped arjun to find Radz hold Arjun’s shirt and began,

Boy:Bhaiyaa,..Bhaiyaa,..

His sound this time helped both of them to come out of their trance,…Radz signed him to leave her thru her eyes and Arjun too maintained some distance from Radz and turned towards that boy smilingly began,

Arjun:Oh!,..You too came here,…What’s your name,…
Boy:My name is pintu,…Finally you found Di na,..

Arjun felt some what uneasy and he deliberately wanna hide the fact that he searched for Radz by wandering all over the beach from her,…So,He try to change the topic,..He kneels down by holding Pintu’s shoulder and pinching his cheeks began,
Arjun:Oh!Pintu,…Could you give me a Water bottle??

Radz was happy seeing Arjun behaving normal with pintu,…

Pintu: Haan bhaiya,…Its just Rs.20,…

Saying so,He gave a Water bottle to Arjun,… while Arjun stood up searching Change from his wallet,..Radz went near Pintu and patiing his head affectionately began,

Radz:Nice boy,..How old are you?
Pintu:I was 8 years di,…And Didi,…You look so beautiful,..

Radz smiled at his complement whereas Arjun felt a little jealous cox Pintu complemented her beauty with him too na,…He watched the duo silently even after he took the money from his wallet,…

Radz:Thanx Pintu,…You din have school Today?
Pintu:.No di,…Exam holidays,…I got bored in home,..So,I came here to help my papa,…My papa selling on other side,…I saw you beating that Bhaiya di,…Its superb,…
Radz too felt uneasy hearing pintu’s complement this time,…She too tried to change the topic before Arjun could hear began,…
Radz:So,Cute,…You have some popcorns na,…Give me two packets,…Pintu,…

After giving 2 packets to Radz,..Radz hugged Pintu affectionately and Pintu kissed Radz cheek in affection began,..

Pintu:Di,You are so sweet,…
Radz smilingly patted that little boy,..Arjun this time Really jealous on pintu began,…
Arjun:Hey pintu,..M giving money and you are complementing your Di,…
Radz:Sir,…He was a child,…
Pintu:Bhaiya,…Cox of Di ly today I sold Rs.50 worth things na,…My papa will buy some toys for me in that money,…
Radz:Pintu,..One minute,…

Saying so,Radz searched her Hand bag and took one Chota beam doll made in candle and few small cars,…And gave them to pintu,…While searching, her broken Watch fell on the sand,which she failed to notice,…

Radz:Ok,..Pintu,…These are my favorite and keep this with you na,…Its your sis’s gift,…
Pintu:Thank you di,…Its mine favourite too,..I like chutki,jaggu,Raju too,..
Radz:Hmmm,..Same pinch pintu,…Even I like Kalia’s stupidity,…Tolu,Bolu,…and you remember,…

Arjun interrupted them by holding Radz hand and began,
Arjun:Ok,..Pintu,…We have to go now,…Bye,…Radhika,Let’s move,..I know you wont stop your talking,..So,its better,If we move right now,…

Saying so,Arjun dragged Radz from pintu and Radz too bidden goodbye to him,..

Radz:Bye Pintu,…See you later,…Bye,…

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In Birdsong,…

Sam:Neil,…I wanna talk with Chasni yaar,..Without chasni,This get together wont be fun na,…Please,..
Neil:Hmmm,..Ok,..Then inform about this Get together to Pine apple too,..I have no objection,..
Sam:Hey hello,…Who will consider your objection?,…Arjun’s mobile is Switched off,..I already tried him many times,..
Neil was tensed hearing this,..
Neil:What!!,..Why din you tell me about this?,…Wait I’ll try him,..
Sam:Hey,…Even I din get tensed,…Suddenly why are you behaving like this Idiot,..Tell me what happened??
Neil:Sam,…I have no time to explain yaar,…You call chasni first,…
Sam noticed something fishy and nodded yes started dialing Radz number,…

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In beach,…

Arjun and Radhika were seated next to each other on the beach sand witnessing serene view of the whole sea in the fresh breeze silently,..Even the Waves were quite nearer to touch their feet,…Radz felt awkward cox of the prevailing silence btw them for a few minutes as they could hear only the sound of waves,..She tried to break the silence and turned towards Arjun,..Whereas arjun,who hold Radz mobile in his hand also began,..

Arjun:Radhika,..
Radz:Sir,…

Both felt odd again cox of their speaking at the same time,…Both turned towards sea and this time Arjun waited for Radz to start,…

Radz:Sir,…Thank you sir,…
Arjun smiled lightly and began,
Arjun:Hmmm,…For Sandals and these popcorns,…
Radz:No sir,..For What you did for me today,…I couldnt imagine what might happen,If you are not there,…Thank you sir,…Thank you so much,…
Arjun: No need Radhika,…If I was not there,Nothing will happen,…May be you just needed another pair of sandals Right,…
Radz smiled at arjun’s comment began,
Radz:Sir,…
Arjun gave her mobile back to her began,
Arjun:Radhika,..Hold your mobile,..
Radz:But sir,..
Arjun:Its ok,…Hold it,..
Radz after getting her mobile back took Arjun’s mobile from her bag and wrapped the battery in the hot sand and asked him to give the sim,..
Radz:Sir,..Give me your Sim na,..
Arjun was quite confused watching her acts began,..
Arjun:Hey What are you doing?,..There’s no need of doing anything,..I’ll give my mobile to service,…You no need to worry,..
Radz:Sir,..Please,Give me the sim,…

Arjun who took the Sim from his pocket with bewildered face,…Radz grabbed the sim from his Hand,put it in his mobile and mantled his mobile back with its parts,..She switched on his mobile,…It works perfectly,…Arjun was surprised and Rad began,
Radz:Sir,…I said na,..I’ll give your mobile back in working condition,..See,…I repaired it,…You wanna know how I repaired na,…Its quite simple sir,..One time,My bhaiya’s mobile too dropped in water accidentally,…I learnt this from my bhaiya ly,…We should dry the battery for few hours before switch on the mobile,..And here, Its already dried in my bag,..I just dried it further by wrapping it in sand,..That’s all,..Take your mobile sir,..This PAnothi made everything normal like before na,…And sir,Sometime You look good in Angry too,…
Saying so,Radz gave him his mobile back by winking her eyes smilingly,…

Right then,Both mobiles started ringing made both of them to burst out in laughter,..(Back ground music: KAwhishon pe likhi song)

***First Telephonic convo btw Radz and Sam***

Radz:Hello,..
Sam:Chasni,…Where are you?,..Why you din pick my call?,..Are you alright pagal,…You know,How we are tensed?,…
Radz:Sam,…slowly,slowly,,..How many questions sam,…And Nothing to worry,..I’m fine,..Just felt bit tired,…Now I’m alright,…Ok,…
Sam:Pakka,..
Radz:Hmmm,…Pakka,…I’m fine,…And sorry sam for not attending your calls,…
Radz said this eyeing Arjun,who also busy in speaking with someone in his mobile,…
Sam:Its ok,..But I’ll forgive you ly in Beach,..
Radz,who heard this got hiccups,..
Sam:Chasni,…What happened yaar,…Are you alright na,..
Radz,who was about to say that she was in beach was again interrupted by sam,…
Radz:Hmmm Sam,..Nothing Just Hiccups,…And Beach,…Are you coming to beach,…
Sam:Haan chasni,..We all,…I mean Dadaji,Mala aunty,Prerna Aunty,Teji,Zubin, Krithika,Me and Our Idiot,…

Radz:But Sam,..I was already in bea,..
Sam:Hey chasni,..Listen,…I don’t have time,..We will come to beach sharply at 5.00pm,…ok,…
Radz:Hmmm,…Sam,…You called Arjun Sir???
Sam:No chasni,…I din talk with him,…Lastly,I talked with him in Airport,I think so,..Further his mobile was switched off yaar,…And now Idiot is trying his number only yaar,…You leave it and listen Come soon na,..Just 20 to 30 minutes left,..Ok,…Don’t say any excuses,..Ok,..Bye,..Take care,…
Radz:Hmmm,..
Saying so,Sam Ends the call leaving Radz with mixed feelings,…At the same tiime,She was happy hearing that they all gonna have fun at Beach,…

***First Telephonic convo Btw Radz and Sam***

At the same time Arjun also attends his call fixing his gaze on Radz,…

***Second Telephonic convo Btw Arjun and Neil***

Arjun:Hello,…
Neil:Hello,..Arjun,..where are you man?,..Where is chasni?,..Its been half a day yaar,…You guys left Airport,I think so,…Is chasni Fine??
Arjun:Haan,…Ofcourse she is fine,..If you wanna Ask about her,Then you might have called her na,..Why are you disturbing me,…
Neil:No,..Nothing yaar,..I heard your mobile switched off and Chasni was not picking her calls too,…Just confirmed you man,…Nothing else,…
Arjun:Oh!,…Now If you confirmed means,I may end my call na,…
Neil:Hey Arjun,…Wait yaar,…I called you to inform you another thing too,.
Arjun:What,…I don’t have time to waste,…Tell me Fast,…
Neil:Woh!,..Arjun,Today Evening at 5.00 Pm ,we planned a get together at Beach,…I hope you will come,…
Arjun,who watched the time in his watch began,
Arjun:No,I’m not interested in these,…You ppl enjoy,…
Neil:No,Arjun,..It’s Sam’s wish,…she already called you many times,..I said already na,..Your mobile switched off,…So,…
Arjun:It’s Ok,..I will try,…
Neil:Thanx yaar,…And Till now,you din tell me where you are?,…And I hope you din forget Your car,which is still in my home Arjun,…
Arjun:Ya,I know,…I’ll take my car tonight,…Thank you,…
Neil:It’s Ok,…Drive safely Man,..Sometimes,My bike will struggle cox It dunno who is riding it na,…
Arjun:I know, how to handle it,…So,You don’t worry,..Ok,…
Neil:Ok,..Ok,…Just joking man,…Come soon,..Bye,…
Saying so Neil ends the call,…But,Neil felt something fishy after talking with Arjun in mobile,…

***Second Telephonic convo Btw Arjun and Neil***

Precap:All are having fun playing Anthakshri at beach,…

P.S.:Friends,..Gang get together at beach will be in Next episode,… I hope you all will enjoy this update and Happy magarasankranthi to all south Indian friends,…

Credit to: Renu

23 comments

  1. Advaita

    Very nice. Haha …radz beating boys. Loved Radz n pintu convo and arjun’s jealousy. Happy makarsankranti to u too dear . I’m not a South Indian but we also celebrate this festival. Enjoy and take care. 🙂 🙂

  2. Shree

    Ayeee renu!! Super update di!! Enamaa kalakura nee…. Beach scene super… Arjun searching for… Radz slapping the guy… The gang teasing her… Arjun beating them up… Calling them husband and wife… Bhabi.. Lol di??.. Idhu semma.. That kutti boy pintu!!! Omg!!! Cccchhhhooooo ccccuuuuttteee??…. Their convo was so cute… And Arjun jealous.. Oof.. Nesam fight .. Never ending… Telephonic conversation was nice…. Something fishy!! Both sides.. Nejama… Ore samayatla? Arjun Saral convo superb… Radz brother… Lol??… He deserves it … Precap sooopppper??

    Inniya pongal nalvazhtukal in advance… Exam ku nalla padi … All the best.. Nalla pannu… Mudinja alavuku update pannu..

    Love you loads… Tc… Keep smiling…. Bear hug??

  3. manha

    Renu it was one superb epi yaar. I don’t have understand where to start now.

    ok first starting with saral. Arjun n saral convo too gud. saral is radz brother. God i’m unable control my laugh. ARjun is toooo intelligent yaar. But when he will know who saral is then i dont hav idea what he will do???!!!

    Arjun running for radz n radz started fighting now n beating too. Jhansi ki Rani n allll. Arjun beat them black n blue. If radz didn’t stop him then those guys would hav gone to hospital directly. lol. Bhabhi n bhaiyya. Are they ok with that. lets see.

    Arjun’s jealousy has no bounds now. He is even jealous on pintu. Really. Arjun asks them to stop n get going . He knows his radhika will now start discuss the whole chota bheem story if he left her like that.

    First time Neil n Arjun r talking calmly n thanks to renu for atleast a telephone one. Neil never leaves arjun taunting. Neil seems to enjoy arjun’s annoying behaviour a lot.

    sam n radz asusual super friends talk. if they don’t cut the call they can talk n talk like that for hours. sam felt jealousy n neil’s explanation superb.

    waiting for the next one. N not to forget Antakshari. loveeeeee u renu. Thank u .
    ur overview was super se upar.

      • Roma

        Thx for this link…I totally missed this overview…thx manha dearrr.. now I’m going to read n comment it…love u soooooooo muchhhhhh yaar….you’re such a sweetheart, cutie pie. … 🙂 😉 🙂

  4. Aru

    Renu,superb.can imagine each n every scene…felt like i’m watching it in tv..if it was for true,wooow!!but wat to do,its not possible..liked it to the core..tq.all the best for ur exam
    happy makara sankranthi to all south indians..
    Yellu bella thindu,olle maathadona

  5. manha

    hiiiiiii my dear lovelieeeeesssss. i hope all hav u read MANMARZIYAN- AN OVER VIEW
    written by our very own sweet heart renu.
    Actually it is like a discussion thread or else like a chat session. whatever u deariessss chose to.
    so please share ur views n feelings on our superb lovely awesome show which kept us bounded
    to each other like a glueeeee. DOSTI YAARIYAAN MANMARZIYAN
    here is the link to it
    http://www.tellyupdates.com/manmarziyan-an-overview/comment-page-1/#comment-783253
    plz do come n comment.
    u can say anything like fav scenes, explanations, ur views abt the show, abt the characters,
    …………………………………………………….

  6. mittu

    wow…………………………….. superb…….. wat a thought yar………. hartzzz of 2 u renu…. thank u 4 entertaining us like tis…. lov u….. eppadima solrath…… pinnittinga…… keep updating and also perform well 4 exams……. all d best…..

  7. daizy

    Wow renu dear…..superb episode….. Wat to say….I m so happy after Reading this update…. I m loving this arjun-rads yaar…..our hero saved his love from bad boys…. That was very nice……. Are he is curious to know about saral…..how will he react when he will get to know the truth that saral I’d rads fiance…….n our rads i s so brave…. She beat those boys…..I think every girl should be brave like her…..we should not fear anyone…..and this arjun
    get jealous even with that little kid….ahh he is so much possessive….hey dear I m just loving your story very much….

    Yesterday I read your review about the original series…. I was speechless…….even when the series was going on…I didn’t find anyone giving such a deep analysis on the serial…..seriously when I read it I felt the whole serial came like a flashback in my mind……thanks for that….I could never ever forget manmarziyan…… When it used to air on TV , I would finish all my work before 10.30 and sit in front of TV ….not to miss it evev a single minute part of it…..I have loved so many serial s till now…but manmarziyan was the best……no one can replace it….we got to see very very less no. Of scenes of our arjun-rads together, no story after their marriage, no romance,their cute fights,their pure love…..still the couple won many hearts……arjun-rads is my most favorite onscreen couple…. Whom I would like to see again n again on TV together….. I really wish this would happen someday…..after manmarziyan went off air,I really lost interest in watching TV…… Happy bcoz of all this fan fictions you all guys are writing….. It was the shortest running serial on starplus, but after that other 3 shows went off air early than it….n I was really happy to see starplus losing its shows….they ended my favorite one……

    Anyways,if manmarziyan comes back,I will. Dance with joy…….even if it doesn’t, then you guys are there to keep it alive in our minds with your fan-fics…..love u dear…keep smiling…..n keep updating…. Bcoz I always keep waiting for it……

  8. Roma

    O my sweeeeeet renuuuuuuu, what a blasting episode, ardhika beach moments are very very marvellous…saral’s call n arjun’s convo was quite hilarious, arjun looking for rads everywhere same description of rads as he gave to tea shop erson in lonawla trip when he lost her…so cute…n pintu told how she beaten a guy..arjun feeling proud n also worried and saved her from goons…wowww…bhaiya bhaabi…lol…now he is even jealous of pintu…lol…nesam convo was really cute, Sam jealous, loved neil comment new villain between them is sorry n thanks….very cute….rads is multi-talented fixed arjuns phone ….precap is very exciting…I wonder if during the beach picnic those goons n also pintu come there n talk about previous encounter n also say as bhaiya bhaabi that will be totally hilaaaaaaarious. ..keep it up buddyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. ..work hard for your exams and get very good grades, and very happy festivals to alllllllllll my sweeeeeet deariiiiiiieeess so many names for this festival…keep smiling. ..muaaaaahhhhhh

  9. nisha

    hey renu how r u meri jaan such a long time last time data pack is finish but its ok dear Its enough for us to talk in whichever way at least you can read. We are friends and no need any justifications Luv u always no matter you will be able to reply or not. I came here to meet u always and to read ur awesome story too. this is our manmarziyaan dear and till I am on tu I try always to meet u no matter just on ur page I will reach to you . Luv u by heart dear
    coz Once a friend always a friend.
    and yes what an awesome update I like this rads who can know to fight when it needs and I love the convo of arjun and saral and the goons pleading arjun bhaiya please leave us we never do this to bhabhi again awesome and the convo of neil and arjun is just super awesome dear

    lvoe the update fully . Love u meri jaan waiting for next eagerly.

    Keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

    • Roma

      Hi nisha my sweeeeeet musical friend, how are you honeyyy, missed you sooooo muchhhh. ..stay blessed. ..take care jaanu…

  10. nisha

    hey roma dear love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much

    3 much 4 much so much much I think Its so much but love u dear a lot

    really missing a lot dear you and old days always rememberable our talks and our manmarziyaan.

    Soon the days will going to come we all make our manmarziyaan fly again

    luv u dear by heart
    keep smiliing

    Once a friend always a friend.

  11. Its really superb n fantastic…..like fighting scene….goons call radz bhabhi..hehe…great dear…n hey renu best of luck for exams….happy makar sankranti….update soon…love u

  12. Lakshmi

    Hi renu …Belated Happy Sankranthi to u…
    Awesome update…arjun fight with goons n goons misunderstanding them as a couple… wow…
    Arjun was jealous with that boy ..lol.. Sam n Neil’s convo and Arjun n Rads convo was just superb…Totally amazing update.
    Will be waiting for next update… Love u …take care…

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