Manmarziyan Missing Pieces Part 1 – Episode -16

Hiii friends,…This update will be slightly lengthy,…I hope you all will enjoy Ardhika moments ,…On a lighter note,You gonna see Neil -Dadaji little bit Heart to heart convo for the first time like Arjun-dadaji,…I Hope you guys will like it,…As usual Excuse my Grammatical errors here and there,…

Episode 16 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:

In Restaurant

Arjun,who was enjoying his lunch with his lady felt the real taste of the food after a long time in his life,…But his happiness vanished after hearing the ringing of his mobile,..He took his mobile and stared it for few seconds without attending it,…Radz,who saw this began,

Radz:Sir,…your mobile is ringing,…
Arjun:I know,..

Saying so Arjun pulled the tablecloth towards Radz inorder to spill the food on her dress intentionally,…He was succeeded in his attempt,…The food got spilled on Radz Blue Kurti,…She stood from the sofa started cleaning her dress,..Arjun,who saw this began,

Arjun:What Radhika,..You cant do any work properly,…

Radz was irritated hearing arjun and he continues,
Arjun:Go,..Go and wash your stains,…

Arjun smirked,…Radz was furious again but she went to wash her stains in the washbasin without uttering any was stopped again by arjun,..
Arjun:Where are you going??,..Go and wash in restroom Radhika,..
Radz:Sir,..No pblm,..I can wash here itself,..You attend your phone call,…
Arjun:I finished my lunch,..Now,I wanna use the wash basin,..Its Better,If you go and clean your dress in Restroom or else,..

Radz was much annoyed by him started walking towards Rest room behind the inbuilt waterfall at the other end of the room,…After Radz went to restroom,Arjun attends his call walking slowly towards the inbuilt waterfall began,…

***Telephonic Convo***

Arjun:Hello,..Haan,…Tell me,…
Someone:What,you don’t have enough time to attend my call too??
Arjun:No,..Nothing like that,..I was somewhat busy here,…
Someone:I thought you started giving importance to someone other than me,…Is it Sam,…
Arjun:Please stop this crap,…No one in this world will take your place,…You are my world,…I was here outdoor with Sam’s friend,..
Someone:Oh!!!,..Ok,..Listen carefully,…Don’t forget to talk to sam within this week and I already informed everything to Rana Kaka,…
Arjun:Hmmm,…I know,…
Someone:Good,…
Right then Radz who washed her stains opened the restroom door,..Arjun, who heard the sound of opening the door ends his call,…
Arjun:Ok,…I’ll call you later,…Bye,…
Someone: Hmmm, See you, Bye,…

***Telephonic convo***

Meanwhile Radz, who came out of the restroom started thinking about Arjun’s Odd behaviour,…

Radz Innervoice:What happened to Arjun sir,…Why he din attend that phone call before me???,…Who is there at the other end,…Why he wanna hide their talk before me,… It wont be his Business call,..If it’s so,He might have attend the call within a few ring,…What is there to hide,…He said,..He is an orphan na,…Then Who is calling him,…May be its sam,…No,..Then who it is,…

Radz with deep thots walked out of the restroom bumped into Arjun accidentally, Who is talking in the phone standing near the Inbuilt Waterfall,…Due to this sudden encounter,Arjun’s mobile fell into the Inbuilt waterpool accidentally,…Arjun was literally frowning to see his Mobile, which submerged in the waterpool,…Radz,Who holding Arjun’s arms for support also saw his mobile in the waterpool left her hold on him and felt sorry for that,.. She slowly began,

Radz:Sirr,…Sorry Sir,…I din see you,…
Arjun,who was literally burning in anger hold Radz Arms tightly began,
Arjun:How dare you????,..bl**dy Panothi,…I want my mobile back right now,…

Saying so arjun pushed her angrily near Water pool and walked towards dinning table,…Radz after relaxing herself took the mobile from the water pool and wiped it in her dupatta,..She too walked towards dinning table was shocked seeing Arjun holding her mobile,…

Radz:Sir,…What are you doing???,.. Why are you taking my mobile sir,…
Rather answering to Radz, Arjun snatched his mobile from her,..took the SIM card out of it ,…Then he gave his mobile back to her ,…Radz looked puzzled and began,…
Radz:Sir,..Tell me,.. What are you doing???
Arjun:What,..You are shocked Radhika,…Ofcourse,You will,…Till I get my mobile back in working condition,…I wont give your’s,…Understand,…
Radz:But sir,..It will take sometime to repair it na,…Till then,How can I??,..& its not my mistake alone,…You too Responsible na,…
Arjun:Right,…But,I have no time to hear your nonsense,…If you want your mobile back,…then,Try to repair mine or do whatever,…Got it,…
Saying so Arjun left the room leaving Bewildered Radz alone,..

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In Neil’s House,…

Dadaji and neil were watching TV in the Hall,…Whereas Mala and Prema were preparing the Snacks for evening program in the Kitchen,…Dadaji hold Neil’s shoulder and began,
Dadaji:Little boy,…Little boy,…
Neil:what Dadaji,..You want Snacks,…Wait I’ll,…
Saying so Neil tried to get up from the sofa was stopped by dadaji,…

Dadaji:No beta,…My boy,..Will you answer me truly for my one question,…
Neil with confused face after muting the Tv began,
Neil: What Dadaji,..Anything serious about chasni???,…
Dadaji:No beta,..Its about you,…
Neil:Me,…What you wanna ask Dadaji,..Go Ahead,..I’ll answer you true to my knowledge,…
Dadaji: Tell me something about friendship beta,…You and Sam are bestfriend form childhood na,..choti always talks about you ppl’s friendship,…even its nice to hear about you and your sam’s friendship story,…
Neil:Just this dadaji,…I thought you gonna ask something tricky or interesting question,..Hmmm,…our friendship story,…we knew each other for 20 years,…We share everything in our life,…There is no secret btw me and Sammy,…And about Sammy,…She is My soul,…My sammendher singh,…She do many craziest things in this world like a child,…
Dadaji noticed pure love for Sam in Neil’s eyes more than a friend,…Neil continues,…
Neil:I want to see everlasting smile on Sam’s face till my death dadaji,.. I cant see her hurt,…Her pain is my pain dadaji,…I cant fix all her problems but I wont let her face all her
problems alone Dadaji,…

Dadaji,who pats neil on his back smilingly began,
Dadaji:It looks like you fallen in love with your friend Sam my little boy,…

Neil,who was taken aback by dadaji’s words replied,..
Neil:Daadaji,..You are correct,…I love sam,…But being in love with sam doesn’t mean that we are lovers yaar,…sometimes we just have to be friends too na,..Me and sam’s relationship is our friendship dadaji,…Its pure,..Nothing else dadaji,..
Saying so,Neil,who remembered Sam’s antics smiled himself with unknown tears stood and tried to move away inorder to hide his known tears from Dadaji,… Dadaji,who saw neil’s pain which he hides before all began,
Dadaji:Haan,..You are absolutely correct beta,…But what I meant na the Treasure what you have in your hand my little buy,…
Neil was confused hearing this from dadaji,..He wiped his face and after taking a deep breathe faced Dadaji to know answer for his confusion,…
Dadaji:You understand what Treasure this old man is speaking about,…
Neil:Friendship right,…
Dadaji:No little boy,…Its Time,…You know what this time does,…Its too slow for those who wait, Too swift for those who fear, Too long for those who grief, Too short for those who rejoice, But for those who love… Time is Eternity my boy.,…Before You painfully regret to realize that it is too late to act,..Its better to pour your heart out to your special person at right time beta,…
Neil:But Dadaji,… True Love is all about giving to other person without greed of gaining anything in return na,…So, Its our duty to love the person in our heart truly,..Regarding We are getting the same love from them or not is their part to discuss right,.. and I never feel dejected for anything in my life dadaji.I don’t want my friendship to die at any cost,..And you don’t feel much about these n all dadaji,…Leave everything for a while,…Today,we are heading to beach na,…So, Lot of works to do,…I have to talk to Arjun too,…You take rest Dadaji,…

Saying so Neil walked out of the room leaving Dadaji alone,…And Dadaji,who understood something which no one known, started laughing out louder alone,…

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In Birdsong,…

Sam was irritated seeing Neil’s Photo on her table while playing with the paper weight in her hand,…She hate silence in the office,…She din like to accept the fact that her Idiot ignored her for the first time in her life,…She wanna shout at him and even punch him nicely for his act,…Right then,she got an Incoming call,…

***Telephonic convo***

Without noticing the caller Id she again thought that her Idiot only called her and began,

Sam:Idiot,…Where are you now,…I gonna kill you,…Tell me first,..Where you are??,..
Samrat:Hey bacchuu!!,..Wait,..Wait,..What happened to you???
Sam hearing her pa’s voice stammered again,
Sam:Pa,..Woh,..I,..Hey idiot na,…
Samrat:Hmmm,..Ok,…Are you fine bacchuu,…
Sam:Haan pa,..I’m alright,…Why are you asking pa?
Samrat:Nothing your mom said that you had headache,…But I think your headache is cox of your idiot,…
Sam:No pa,…We,…
Samrat:Hmmm,..I know beta,..What happened btw you and Neil???
Sam:Nothing pa,..Idiot din attend my call and today evening he planned to go to beach with all,..But he din say about this to me pa,…
Samrat after hearing this started laughing,…
Sam:Pa,..Why are you laughing???,…I’m serious,…
Samrat:Bacchu,..You are complaining like a school going children,…Neil is your friend na,..Then why you are thinking like he avoided you n all,…It doesn’t matter,..He called you or he informed you,..May be he wanna give you surprise or else you go to beach with your other friends and surprise him,…You are worrying about this silly matter,…
Sam:Hmmm ok pa,…
Samrat:This is my bacchu,…Ok,.How’s radhika’s dadaji?
Sam:Haan fine pa,…They also heading to beach today,…
Samrat:Oh!!,..then enjoy this evening bacchu,..Dont sit alone in the office,..cummon get up,…
Sam:Ya,..I’ll,..Thank you pa,…Bye,…
Samrat:Good,..Bye beta,…Take care,..

***Telephonic convo***

After ending the call,..Sam turned towards Neil’s Photo and began,…

Sam:What idiot,..You gonna give me surprise,..But why din you attend my call,..Whatever pa said may be true but I wont forgive you for ignoring me,…What you think,I always needed you,…You are wrong idiot,…You know what,..Now Arjun is there in my life,..I love him,..So,I don’t need you,..Ok,…DOnt stare at me,..Hey what are you looking,..I said,..I love Arjun,..Mind it,…Wait a minute,..I’ll prove you,..

Saying so Sam took her mobile and dialled Arjun’s Mobile number,…
She heard a recorded telephonic voice over,.”The number you are calling is currently switched off”,…

Sam was irritated hearing this and the smile in Neil’s photo teased her badly,…She annoyingly began,

Sam:Hey why are you laughing??,..Oh you cant stop your laughing na,..See,Arjun might be busy,..So,Don’t think much,.. he is a nice guy not like you understand,…I’m saying don’t laugh and you again ignoring my words,…Stop this idiot,…Or else I’ll kill you in my hands,…
Saying so Sam threw Neil’s photo from her table,…And laid down on the table for few minutes,…After a while she stood up and wiped her face,..After taking a deep breathe with smile on her face took Neil’s photo from the floor and kept it on the table,..Then she started,

Sam:What you finished your laughing,..Now its my turn Idiot,..You are thinking that you won this game na,…No,You cant go anywhere without me,..Neither Beach nor office,…You dinn understand what I’m speaking na,…Wait I’ll explain you ,…What you think,..You go to beach with chasni without my knowledge,…You forgot one thing Idiot,..Chasni is my friend not your’s,…If I asked chasni to cancel the program,She will do it in the next second for me,…So,..How much you wanna laugh,..Laugh now itself cox after that you have to ask more sorry from me na,…

Saying so,Sam took her mobile and dialled Radhika’s Number,…

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Meanwhile In Parking lot outside the Restaurent,…

Radz:Arjun Sir,…Arjun sir,..Please,…Stop na,…

Radz followed arjun outside the Restaurent by continuously yelling his name,..Arjun was much irritated holding Neil’s Bike,…After putting side stand turned back towards Radz annoyingly began,
Arjun:What,..why are you shouting my name,…I already said na,..Dont follow me,…
Radz:But Sir,…I want my mobile back cox ma or papa will call me,..If they found my number switched off,..Then they will be tensed,..I don’t want to make them feel tensed sir,..Please,..sir,..Give me na,..And I swear you sir,..I’ll repair your mobile by today,…So,Please sir,..
Arjun:Oh good,..Then think that its your mobile which fallen in the water and I wont change my decision understand,..Go home safely,..I had lot of works to do,..Dont waste my time,,…

Saying so Arjun tried to put his Sim in Radz mobile,…Radz,who saw this grabbed Arjun’s Sim from his hand and started running on the road began,

Radz:Ok Sir,…I’ll go home,…You want your sim na,..Then,give me my mobile or else this panothi will break this Sim too,…
Arjun keeping the mobile in his pocket warned Radhika from the parking lot,…
Arjun:Radhika stop running,..Give me my sim or else,..I wont leave you,…Don’t play with me,…

Saying so,Arjun too started chasing Radhika,…Radhika smilingly turned back while running and began,…
Radz: Sir…You ly said na I’ll destroy everything,…(showing the sim in her hand to arjun),…Cummon,… Come and catch me before I break your SIM,..
Arjun:Radhika,..You dunno how bad I’m,..If I caught you,..You are gone,…
Radz:Sir,..I always be first in Running Race from my school days,..SO,Its difficult for you to catch me,..So,Stop talking and try to catch me sir,…Cummon,…
Arjun:We will see that also,..

Saying so Arjun too chased Radhika by stretching his hands to grab her dupatta,…And Radz started running towards beach from the road,…
Arjun:Enough is enough,…Radhika,.why are you running towards beach,..Stop it,…Give my sim to me,.
Radzz:No sir,..I wont give you,..If you want,Then catch me na,…common,..You was afraid,…
Arjun:Me,..Never Radhika,…I’ll show you today,..who gonna win,..
Radz:Hmmm,..Let’s see sir,..

Both forgot all their problems for a while and they looked like children,.. then,..Radhika after running 100 to 200 meter from the parking lot,..She felt pain at her abdomen where operation undergone,…So,she ran slowly,..Arjun finally manged to grab Radhika’s Dupatta,…And both stopped running and Radz fell on the sand in tired holding her head on Arjun’s Hands, who also laid down on the sand next to her,…Arjun started laughing like no one in this world eyeing Radhika,…Radhika,who felt pain at her abdomen forgot the pain looking him laughing like a child,…She was infact mesmerized by his smile,…(Background music:Kawhishon pe likhi song)
After laughing,..and after his fast breath became normal,…He began slowly,..

Arjun:I said na,…I’ll win,..What I wonder is How you got first prize in your school,.. by cheating,…

After hearing this from Arjun,Radz stood up from the sand and tapped the sand from her dress began,…

Radz: I never cheat sir,…I got pain in my abdomen,..So,I ran slowly and you caught me,..So,Don’t be proud of yourself sir,,…If I was alright,Then I only win,..You are the one always win by cheating not me,…

Arjun too stood from the ground and began,..

Arjun:Oh,..You tried to start telling lies too Radhika,..
Radz:What me,…I never tell lies,…
Arjun started walking near Radhika began,..
Arjun:Then Prove me,..You din tell lies,..
Radz:sir,..What lie,..What are you taking about?
saying so,…Radz walked behind and Arjun walked towards her,…
Arjun:What Radhika,..Why are you looking so tensed?,..
Radz after swallowing began,
Radz:Sirr,…What are you doing???,..Its beach,…
Arjun:M also saying the same Radhika,…Why,..what’s going on in your mind now??
Radz hesitatingly began,
Radz:Sir,..Nothing,…
Arjun smiled Sarcastically and began,
Arjun:Oh!!,..Nothing,…A big Lie,..Liar,…
Radz:Me liar,…
Arjun:Then who else radhika,…Tell me,What’s in your mind right now?
Radz:Sir,…I said na ,…Nothing means nothing,…

Saying so Radz tried to turn back was stopped by Arjun,…Arjun holds Radz Arms which create some fear in Radz eyes,..Earlier,She used to it,..But this time when he grabbed her arms,she felt some tingling feeling to rule all over her body,…She dunno why it happened or how it happened or what it will be its effect,…But she knew the relief for that feeling,..i.e.,Distance from Arjun,…She Closed her eyes tightly by turning her gaze away from him,…

Whereas The noon breeze on the beach litter Arjun’s whole body too,…on top of it,Radz hair strands on his face increased his temper,…Arjun,who takes away Radz hair strands from his face opened her closed fingers and took his Sim from her hand and left her,…

After taking the sim,..Now He started walking behind felt hard to swallow and hard to breathe,..The fresh breeze couldn’t help him to recover from his turbulence,… At the same time, Radz was relaxed after Arjun distanced himself from her,..She din notice what she gave him or what he took away from her,..

Arjun turned back and started walking towards road,…This time Radz din try to follow him or stop him,…After taking a long breathe in the fresh breeze,She too started walking towards Road alone in another direction,…

Right then,..Arjun heard ringing of Radz mobile,which brought him back to his sense,…He was shocked seeing the caller Id of the incoming call,…The screen freezes on Arjun’s tensed face,…

Precap:All are playing Anthakshri in the beach except Ardhika and Nesam,…

Credit to: Renu

37 comments

  1. manha

    wow so biggg update . thank u for that. neil n dadaji’s convo rocks. u r too gud yaar. the way u describe each point it is superb. n with some deep thoughts u make us think tooo. so sam’s treatment started nw. lol. i’m happy for it. she will require more time for it.
    Ardhika their fights never end n we can never get enough of those fights. now fighting for mobile phne n sim. beach scene was too gud. yaa i nw remember we hav not seen beach in mmz. they were staying in mumbai n they never shown us beach. what is this. lol. see i realized so late. but renu remembers everythinggg. 😉 they should participate in a marathon nw. they r running like kids on roads. oh god that would hav been fun to watch. asusual u rocked it. n i’m not getting enough of it. waiting for the next update n antakshari. plzzz put some super songs. haha. i know u will do research abt them before putting. thank u. see i’m not wrong u r a writer already just needs some platform. so i wish it would happen some time near.
    loveeee u

    • renu

      Mannha,..My deary,..Thank you so much,…

      Ya they dinn show beach itself yaar,…Even we dinn see arjun in Hrishikesh,….MAny things were left to us for our imagination,…May be that’s y even after show closure,We can imagine our MMZ,…Our imagination has no end yaar,….M glad you liked that running race,..If they showed it on TV means,…It will be delightful to watch yaar,…Our cute babies,….

      Reg Anthatkshri,…Hmmmm,….M planning some songs,…I hope you will like my song selection,…If not please forgive me deary,….

      Oh,…Manha,..What’s this,…No yaar,…I’m not a professional writter n all,…I just used to write my thoughts that’s it,..To be a writer we have to do some course or work on it na,….Please deary,..My sweet heart,….I’m not worth of your appreciation dear,…I just sharing my thots with my friends like you dear and m happy that you all liked or enjoy my crazy thoughts,…..That contented feeling is enough for me deary,…

  2. Ameena

    Renuuuuu!!!….yaar what an episode again….arjun n rads part was amazing …arjun was actually deeply affected by the child in rads…but then he realized it and walked away from there….I’m thinking how cute arjun/aham must be looking while laughing soo hard….he must be the cutest person ever while laughing….and the convo between neil n dadaji was truly amazing….I loved it to the core …. and hahaha sam talking to neil’s photo alone….san is being mean….now she loves arjun so she don’t need neil…well sam u will need neil the most….anyways everything was awesome like u…luv u????

    • renu

      Thanx ameena,…My sweet don,….You are right seeing Arjun/Aham laughing like a kid is really a heart warming scene and we missed it,…I wanna see these types of scenes,..since we dinn get enough of it,..We just can imagine na,…

      Ya,..Sam needs treatment,..But making her realize her feelings and differenciation btw her attraction and love,..It needs time deary,…So,without changing original track,I;m trying to give some sort of inklings to sam,…

      Thanx a lot deary,…Love you too,..

  3. Shree

    Hay hay!! Super update di!! And thank you so much for the long update !!

    Ammadi siripu ivalo dhaan varanum nu illa… Sirichikute yirukein … I loves the ardhika moments … Sam so angry … Finally Neil opened up before Dada ji. Omg!! And arjun laughin his heart out !! This is the best part!! It was beautiful di … Seekrama update pannu

    Love you loads.. Tc… Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    • renu

      Thank you so much shree,…

      M glad you like Arjun’s laughing part and Neil-dadaji scene,…

      Love you too,…

  4. Lakshmi

    Wow renu amazing update as usual.Neil n dadaji convo superb.Ardhika moments also nice yaar.so they r enjoying in beach now???. Totally loved the update.manha is right u just need one platform after that u will rock with ur stories. And do inform us about that book we will definitely read.love u renu???…..take care dear……

    • renu

      Thank you so much lakshmi,…M gald you liked Neil-Dadaji convo and Ardhika moments yaar,..

      Reg writting books,..no dear,…I dinn develop my skills enough to write a book,…Now just sharing my thots with you all and happy that you liked it,…

      Thank you sweetheart,…

      • Lakshmi

        It’s ok renu …I just said that because ur writings r worth being published. U r explaining everyone’s thoughts and feelings in ur story wonderfully.Keep writing n keep smiling n love u dear???.

  5. advaita

    Ty for such a long update . Good to see Sam jealous . Make her realise her feelings for Neil soon, plzzz.And Ardhika moments were just mind blowing!!! Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂

    • renu

      Thanx Advaita,…M glad you liked Sam jealous part too,..Will try to make her feel some inklings of love dear cox I have to keep one thing in my mind na that this FF is Missing pieces,..So,…But dont worry,…I’ll try my level best,…

  6. NISHA

    hey renu heloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo dear how r u really miss u a lot derr and woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. what an episode such a lovely long one I loved it dear.
    I just love so much each and every aradhika scene. its very much interesting .
    I love their restaurant convo its actually so much cute their convo each and every very much like it dear. I just love the convo of neil and rads dadaji none of anyone can imagine that their convo will be that much interesting. I just love it dadaji is always awesome. dear. ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh arjun think that radz lies no rads doesn’t lies at all and love the scene when he hold her and their sweet convo dear.

    thanx for giving such a long part dear. very much love it

    love u renu always by heart. Todays scene is such a perfect scene

    luv u dear

    keep smiling
    Once a friend always a friend.

    • renu

      Nisha,..My sweet Heart,…Love you too,..

      Thank you so much deary,…What i liked most is that you enjoyed Dadaji and Neil’s part cox I thought it may be look bored but you failed my guess,..Thanx deary,…Actually Writting Dadaji-Neil part only eats my time deary cox I knew dadaji as well Neil,..Their encounter should be heart to heart and not so in depth like Arjun-Dadaji,…So,I tried to show diff btw both the convo,…M glad it worked well,…And you liked it,…

      Ya,.. Actually nisha after writting Dadaji-Neil convo,..I forgot myself in my flooded imaginary thots and finally end up crossing 5 pages in Word file,…So,I tried hard to cut short it after distancing Ardhika in beach,…
      Love you toooooo nisha,…Keep smiling always like Arjun only in this Update yaar,…lol,…

    • Roma

      Hi nisha dear, my sweeeeeet musical friend, I missed you sooooo muchhhh yaaaar… I was very behind on these ff, then the comments section were closed, so I couldn’t reply any of youuuuuuuuu deariyouuuuuu…holidays ki wajah se mera sara routine kharaab ho gayaa…ghar ke kaamo se fursat nahi milti thi aur main bahut peeche reh gayi, sorry yaaaar…maaf kar do…ab sab normal hai…thank God…how are you honeyyy, happy new year my sweeeeeet musical friend…aur hamari deewangi bhari Kahani kahan hai??? Did you stop it….plzzzz yaar aisa nahi karo…jaldi se upload karo plzzzzz…missing you soooooooo muchhhhhh my sweeeeeet musical friend…..love you loads and very very tight warm looooooong hug, muaaaaahhhhhh

    • renu

      sure dear,..

      First i have to complete this part na,….then will concentrate on part 2 cox in part 2 there is more emotions to be handled as sam n radz breakup,..rad developing feelings for arjun and arjun couldnt control his feelings despite nandhibi’s torture and sam realizing her feelings for neil,…and so many,….

  7. rasha

    Hai renu.i love ur missing pieces dear.really u r doing well. Ur imagination and way u taking the story line is great.again I m saying that v missed really these wounderful scenes in our serial.thanks to u dear.to make us imagine these scenes. Welldone.keep writing I m eagerly waiying fr more ardhika scenes especially romance wala.

    • renu

      ofcourse,…..will pray deary,…All the best,…You will rock,…

      & reg dadaji laughing,…I wont explain u sweetheart,…For what reason he laughed on Radz confession about arjun,…The same reason for neil,….I hope u rem Radz-dadaji confession about arjun in the previous episode,…

  8. Roma

    Awesome episode, renuuuuu my sweeeeeet friend it’s mind blowing and superbbb…ardhika moments at restaurant very cute…loved neil dadaji’s convo n Sam’s jealous n talking to neil’s photo very cute scene…ardhika at beach getting a new feeling of each other was really mesmerizing…im still lost in that moment…renu my dearyyyy you’re amazingly awesoooooome writer…you’re creating all those moments which we were dying to see…I’m blessed to read n feel alllllllllll these missing moments by youuuuuu…be happy always my dearyyy n make us smile like this foreverrrrrr….eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very very tight hug..muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡

  9. Rg

    Hi renu thanx for d long update. Reading ur updates makes my day real special… So it’s d truth when I say u make my day. By d way if possible with regards to discussing ardhika scenes like d one u explained previously ( radhika arjun intro green dress and coffee mug) can u write a synopsis for few other scenes as well? Like d lift and Dori scenes. Ardhikas marriage scene. The biggest question being y dint arjun back off from d mandap. Plus d bathroom scene had radhika witnessed it. I know u need write d story. But still if possible and u have time pl do try a few of them. No matter how many time I revisit I can’t have enough… Pls update asap. Tc

  10. naomi

    Renu….. 2days piece was suuuuper. And radhuvidam irrukkum mobile neiloda preseent illa adhuvum pocha. Avvaney kovakkaran avanoda simey uruvitu odraley & naa payandhuten ennga avala thallivitruvaano illa adichidivaano nenachen, appaada appadi yedhvum nadakkley adhu romanceley poi mudinchidhu. Ist time ardhika vuku beach scene . Im happy.

    • renu

      Thanx naomi,..

      Ya,…Ardhika’s First Beech scene,….M glad you liked this piece deary,….I think you will like next update too,…

  11. renu

    Thank you sooooooo much deary,…

    Ya ramya,…I dinn forget dear,…

    Just time is the pblm,…Though i already imagined scenes but it takes me some time to give proper shape for it in my writing na…And We have festival in this week,…So,lot of works to do in home as puja is my dept,…

    As a surprise, M planning to write ssth on mmz other than this FF,…just started yday,..Let you know after completing dear,..Will write my pov on all the scenes deary,…Till then,Please excuse me na,..

  12. Renu!!! what to say yarrr…every time i jst unable to describe review abt story bcos fant get the superest word…. u always rocked buddy….all incident i like so much!! dadaji neil convo was brilliant….. dadaji id real gem….sam talking to neil’s photi ..haha…she to love neil bt still dont knw herself ….n our aradhika always bcome child wuth ech other…sim wala incident is superb…m laughing on there chitchat so much…..over all its not lenthy its mindblowing…..love u dear!!

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