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MANMARZIYAN – MAY BE THIS IS CALLED LOVE….(part-1)

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soo… im back… thank you so much preet , angle,shreya, for commenting… that was really sweet of u…. so this episode is for u two….luv u dears… stay blessed so comming to my episode now…..and point to be noted radhika is a kapoor in this story… and she is an orphan… i know its confusing… but dheere dheere ull come to know…so have patience please….

and… please bear with my grammatical mistakes… and kisiko yeh story yaad ayi toh ill be so happy to know that… so please tell if that happens….

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MAY BE THIS IS CALLED LOVE… episode 1….

2011

first day of college… u know how exciting it is… radhika was excited too…but excited se zyada… she was scared…as every one were a week senior to her….jst kidding … she jst thought she couldnt afford that clg…but she got a free seat over thaer that was pretty strange…any way she was happy…and was walking tom the class….

“naam kya hain..??” a voice came from back…she jst followed the voice and turned back…

a guy who was fair.. tall… was looking at radhika…the RAHUL ARORA…richest guy of the college ofcource ghamand tho hoga hi… he was in first year but he raggs his senior….money is everything..

“radhika..”

“kaunsa group..”he said and moved forward….and came closer…before radhika could move back a hand came in the middle… making both radhika and rahul look at that…

“not her rahul..??”the boy said

” i told u call me before u enter the collge.. tu kain ki sunti nahi hain..” the guy said circled his arms around her and started walking taking her… actually dragging her… radhika was still looking at him with a open mouth…

“neil..”she was about to say his full name..

“malhotra… i know my name… yaad dilane ki zaroorat nahi..” he said…

“but…” radhika was saying something…

“common… eki school sein hain… do teen baar baat bhi karchuke hain… so jst try to help you out… ” he said removed his hand and walked away….she was still in shock… as he was the one who used to ragg every one… but why did he become so silent once….and then radhika went to garden as she needed some air to get out of her shock… and then it was time for her class and she started going there… and once she entered… every one were looking at her as if they were seeing a martian which was jst out of the museum…and for her surprize there was no seat left except the seat beside rahul and neil… she jst settled down beside neil….and thats how they ,met…..and planted a friendship seed and slowly that seed grew into such big as banyan tree…. radhika slowly started liking rahul but couldnt tell that… rahul liked her but dint wanted to accept it… but then something reallly strange happend…which made radhika hate him… what is it…(thoda intezaar karo..)

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2017

A big room is shown … looks like a cabin …. A desk which is fully messed up with files…. A girl is sleeping keeping her head on the desk….
“ utth…” (wake up )
A boy is trying to wake this girl…. But no response she was in deep slumber.
“utth daffer… utth..” ( wake up idiot…wake up..)
“sone de na yaar.. karoon bhi tho kya karoon…” ( let me sleep na .. what should I do now..)
“get upp..!!!” he shouts in her ear..
This girl jerks off and get up…
“idiot… raath bar yeh stupid sa presentation karti rahi…ab yeh rakshas mujhe sone bhi nahi de raha hain…” (Idiot I kept working on this stupid presentation whole night and now this devil is not even letting me to sleep..)
“what .. come again.. kal raat bhi aise hi soti rahi..” (yesterday also u were sleeping lyk this only..)
“shut up..!and let me sleep..”
“You shut up..! abhi presentation hain… wake up..!!”he starts shouting in her ears…
“aa.. idiot im gonna kill u …”
This girl starts running behind him….
“pehle pakad toh sahi..”he winks at that girl
“neil tu toh gaya aaj…” ( u will die in my hands neil.)
They both are running like idiots in the cabin.. this girl tries to catch him but bad luck he escapes every time….! Suddenly a girl enters the cabin
“sir you have…” she stops speaking as soon as she see them
This girl caught the boy by circling her arm around his neck by pulling him down and stars beating him …
“chasni .. chasni.. im sorry yaar.. chod de…” (chasni .. Im sorry leave me…)
They both are radhika and neil
The girl who came in adjusted her throat to bring them to normal world.. they both jerked off and came to normal position and both of them start setting their hair…
“yes tina…any work..??” his voice became stern again…
“yes sir meeting … both of u should be there in 10 min..”
“hmm.. I know .. you can go now..”
“ok sir..”
The girl started to leave
Tinas pov,
Aaj bhi ek naya poster.. I mean both of them will be in weird positions when ever I see them .. but whenever I ask radika the answer she gives is “WE R JST FRNZ..” common yaar Im not a small kid..i can understand . … but if in case they are really friends then they should be in Guinness world record as “BEST FRIENDS FOR EVER AND EVER..” lets see what will happen….
They attend the meeting and it was successful..
Now radhika was fully exhausted… she wanted to run away.. and sleep sleep and only sleep…. Neil noticed this…
“chalo chasni ghar chaltein hain…” (come chasni we will go home)
Radhika face brightened lyk LED light …
“come yaar I thought to run away..”
“I knew it..”
“How..?”
“don’t be so stupid.. no one will believe if they see the radhika mishra sitting silent wit out irritating anyone..”
Chalo lets leave ….. both of them were at the entrance of the office …. They were walking out … a man of 50’s entered … he was the one with whom they had meeting a while back
“so Mr. malhotra it was pleasure meeting you..”
“me too sir..”
“leaving home so early…?”
“why..? he will come with us or what…?”radhika whispered in neils ears…
He gives a glare to radhika
“yaa actually we did over time yesterday so she wanted to have rest..”
“oh.. so you people stay in the same house…?”
“Why is he interviewing you…?” again radhika whispered in his ears…
“well.. yes!”
“that’s great … I think its high time … ill leave take care Mrs.malhotra”
“mrs . malhotra…??” radhika shouted..
“well I jst said in advance..??”
“sir.. you have mistaken “neil
“Oops !sorry guys.. but u people really look like a couple..”
Both radhika and neil gave him a fake smile…
“ok then Mr. Malhotra … ill leave…”he went away
As soon as he moved out both raneil move towards the car and started to leave…
Both raneil were walking towards the car… they enter into black colour audi and started to home….
radhika“har koi humein couple kyun samajhtein hain…” (why do every one think we are couple?)
“mujhe kya pata …?” (what do I know..?)neil
“vaise idea bura nahi hain…?” neil with a smirk on his face
“try karein kya…?” (should we try..?) neil
“Tumhare saath ?? no way…!” (with you no way..)
“Why..??” with a pout face…
“because…”
“because…?’he questions her back with the same face
“because… idont wanna waste my lyf with monkey who have dimples….”
“very funny”neil with frustrated face….
Both watch each other and burst out into laughter…. And they reach home….
A big mansion is shown … “RADHIKA MANSION” it is beautifully written on the name plate…. Prerana suggested that name.. prerana treats radhika as her daughter only… its been jst 6 years they have met each other but bond grew to that extent ki we cant even imagine….!!!
As soon as they reached home radhika jumped on the bed… it was dinner time …
“dinner ready… neil .. radhu … come down…”prerana started calling them..
“thank god mom im feeling so hungry.. chalo serve it fast…”
“radhu …?where is she..?”
“kumbh karn apni room mein so rahi hain..” (kumbh karn is sleeping in her room)
“jaa uthakar le aou… khana thabi milegi…” (go and bring her .. then u casn have ur dinner)
“cheating mom….”
“I don’t know..”with a determined face…
Neil accepted his defeat and and was going towards radhus room…
“jaa beta ur not going to have dinner tonight…”he said to him self and went to her room…
He tried many things but every thing failed… radhika was not ready to get up… after struggling for more tha half an hour she woke up and went down… she was so sleepy so prerana was feeding her and she was eating like a small child…
Neil keeps a pout face seeing them… he also asks prerana to feed him….
“chota bacha hein kya.. chalo eat …” (ur not a small kid..?)
“radhu is studying in L.K.G right…”he said sarcastically….
“shut up finish it fast….”
He keeps a pout face.. radhika takes his plate and starts feeding him… neil smile grows wide… and gives a winning smile to his mom…
Jst then radhika phone starts ringing….
“hello”Both raneil were walking towards the car… they enter into black colour audi and started to home….
radhika“har koi humein couple kyun samajhtein hain…” (why do every one think we are couple?)
“mujhe kya pata …?” (what do I know..?)neil
“vaise idea bura nahi hain…?” neil with a smirk on his face
“try karein kya…?” (should we try..?) neil
“Tumhare saath ?? no way…!” (with you no way..)
“Why..??” with a pout face…
“because…”
“because…?’he questions her back with the same face
“because… idont wanna waste my lyf with monkey who have dimples….”
“very funny”neil with frustrated face….
Both watch each other and burst out into laughter…. And they reach home….
A big mansion is shown … “RADHIKA MANSION” it is beautifully written on the name plate…. Prerana suggested that name.. prerana treats radhika as her daughter only… its been jst 6 years they have met each other but bond grew to that extent ki we cant even imagine….!!!
As soon as they reached home radhika jumped on the bed… it was dinner time …
“dinner ready… neil .. radhu … come down…”prerana started calling them..
“thank god mom im feeling so hungry.. chalo serve it fast…”
“radhu …?where is she..?”
“kumbh karn apni room mein so rahi hain..” (kumbh karn is sleeping in her room)
“jaa uthakar le aou… khana thabi milegi…” (go and bring her .. then u casn have ur dinner)
“cheating mom….”
“I don’t know..”with a determined face…
Neil accepted his defeat and and was going towards radhus room…
“jaa beta ur not going to have dinner tonight…”he said to him self and went to her room…
He tried many things but every thing failed… radhika was not ready to get up… after struggling for more tha half an hour she woke up and went down… she was so sleepy so prerana was feeding her and she was eating like a small child…
Neil keeps a pout face seeing them… he also asks prerana to feed him….
“chota bacha hein kya.. chalo eat …” (ur not a small kid..?)
“radhu is studying in L.K.G right…”he said sarcastically….
“shut up finish it fast….”
He keeps a pout face.. radhika takes his plate and starts feeding him… neil smile grows wide… and gives a winning smile to his mom…
Jst then radhika phone starts ringing….
“hello”

“hey awesome … so when are u cmng..?”
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“Awesome ill be waiting for u…”
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Acha rakthi hoon bye.. good night.. luv u ….
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Prerana and neil were looking with a question mark on her face….
“kaun tha” (who was that ) neil
“Sammy is cmng to Mumbai… I said n aim asking her from many days to shift here …. Finally she is cmng….”
“oh really that’s awesome….”
“why are you so excited…?”
“your friend mathlab my friend….!roj eki chehra dekke bore ho raha honn… ek naya chehra mil jaayegi dekhne ko…”
“Oh really…?”
“Mr. neil malhotra…. jiske saath baath karne ke liye hi log darthe hain who friendship karega…?”
“bet…?”
“no”
“kyun…?”
“kyun ki use ueh sab pasand nahi…. U don’t flirt with her… and if she wants to do friend ship she will ask… u should not irritate her neil please……”
“I don’t irritate any one…”
“fine… but don’t do any ulta seedha with her please… don’t irritate her im saying you again and again because she is my only best friend after u.. agar who hurt hogai.. tho ill not spoare u…”
“acha fyn… ill not even look at her…:”
“itna attitude bhi math dikhana use…”(don’t show this much attitude also…)
“acha rukho… ill bring board and a marker u teach me what to do…”
“very funny…. But im serious…”
Radhika was still speaking some thing but neil took a big piece of chapatti and put it in her mouth…
“ab bas bhi karo chasni… my head is hurting…..”
Radhu gave a glare to neil… but her anger got down seeing neil smile…. And prerana informed them that she is going to holy trip so she will not be in home for few days…..
Both were going to their rooms…
“chasni….”
“hmmm”
“tumhare friend ka photo hain tumhare pas….”(do u have a photo of ur friend..?)
“nahi hain… aiur hain bhi toh mein nahi dikaungi…”(no .. ill n ot show u….)
“kyun…?”
“kal aarahi hain… tumhe deklo…” (she is coming tomorrow … see her ur self…)
“acha fyn… good nite…”
“I hate u mr. neil malhotra…. U are a cheater… !”
A girl is shouting at neil….
“no …. Im not a cheater…”
Neil jerked off and woke up…

Neils pov…..
Same dream again….this is not leaving me at all…. I HATE YOU… I.. HATE…. YOU…..i was sweating very badly though my room temperature was in 16… but then I noticed some one was about to open the door….i know its radhu… because it’s a deal between us who ever wakes first will wake the second person…she will be worried if she will come to know I had that dream again… so I composed my self and slept as if I was in the deep slumber….
Radhika’s pov
Asusual I woke up first and went to wake him up….but may be he got the dream again… he was shouting I HATE YOU…. Who the hell is this girl… I hate her for making my neil like this… I still donno the full reason but I know he needs his space… time aanepe who khud mujhe batayega…. And he thinks the walls are sound proof so I donno about his dreams… but obviously… when I open the door little I can hear every thing… and apne app ko over smart samjtha hain.. budhu kaheeka…. I slowly opened the door….he was sleeping… my neil looks so cute while sleeping… actually so cute while acting…..i know he is disturbed.. so I took a glass of water and splashed on his face…..
“good morning….”
Neil woke up with a jerk…
“I really wish u have a splash day… lyk this only…”
“really…?” with a fake anger on his face… actually he enjoys my antics a lot….
I gave a peck on his cheeks and ran out of the room for jogging befor he could catch me…..
Pov ends….
It was time for radhika to come back from jogging… neil was walking here and there checking the main door atleast twice in 5 seconds.and finally there was sound of opening gate….

Neil’s pov
Thank god she entered… I was woriied.. vaise neil stick to your plan… don’t shift ur mind and please don’t see her face…. He was telling to him self….because neil know he cant irritate radhika by watching her cute face….
He slowly went beside the dorr hid himself behind it cathching a bucket full of water in his hands….a soon as she entered neil splashed whole water on her….
“ab aaya maza….” Neil said… and realized she is not radhika as he saw radhika coming from back so busy listening songs…
Neil’s pov
Oh my god… chasni is coming from back… then who is the girl I threw water….
“O SHITTTT”
Screen freezes on neils shocked face…..

TO BE CONTIMNUED….

i know u all are disapointed as arjun is not here yet… but u know he is going to cm with a bang… keep waiting… thank you sdo much for bearing me till now… so bye for noww guys … bohoth paka chukein hoon… take rest till ill be back again….

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10 Comments
  1. Hi , Can you please share the name of the book whose picture you have kept as the dp of this story……Actually i saw that cover once in a book store but could not recollect the name, so it would be really helpful if you can share the name

    1. Sree_deeksha

      im really sorry i dont know…i actually downloaded this pic from google…..which could my story… im glad this picture increased the view rate…. lol…thanks for commenting though it is not regarded to my story… hope u read it… any way thanks again… stay blessed… : )

  2. Hey,i read this part but unfortunatly it was not complete after this part.but i m glad for u that u restart it.thank u so much dear.i m waiting for the next part.

    1. Sree_deeksha

      so read this…. wow ya… that is so good for me… i mean u still remember it …. thank you so much yaar angle u really made my day…

  3. DramaQueen1004

    Lovely… really nice
    Pls post soon

    1. Sree_deeksha

      thank you so much drama queen … vaise can i know ur name please…

  4. Nice episode.

    1. Sree_deeksha

      thank you preet… stay blessed

  5. Its really amazing work honey ……..specially raneil frdship :-):-)waiting fr arjun get him soon with ur next chapter…… That to soon ……stay blessed n happy :-);-)

    1. Sree_deeksha

      Thank you so much shreya…😊😊

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