manmarziyan on mars …prologue +character sketch


Hii friends….here I want to present u another crazy stupid story of mine…this time it’s a ss not ff,maximum within 5-8 chapters…like other stories I hope u will bear with me this…and my biggest confession soumya, my little cute dear I got this idea from ur comments that we will go to Pluto n have fun….lol…don’t worry u also can use the same plot…friends its a scientific let’s start …


Indian space research organization

A man at his late 20s looked devastated…all their hard work cost nothing at all…after success of Mars Orbitary mission(MOM); they thought this time their HOM project will be successful … But important thing is they couldn’t able to figure out what’s wrong went so that the spaceship didn’t start…they examined n experimented again n again but fail to know the actual reason…
“what to do??how to overcome the mistake”.. He thought

After MOM they tried to send a human spacecraft to know more about mars…after getting little bit information that mars may have life chances,may be some species are there!!! It is their dream project but; the god damn unknown trouble keep pinching them…it was a failure before it starts…he banged his fist on table with frustration…

His pool of thought broke by some musical voice…there she is standing with her ever soothing beautiful smile…he calm down and smiled…she is one among newly recruited but intelligent one…that’s why he has a little bit soft corner for her ,beauty with brain…

” captain Neil,I think I got the solution how to clear our mistake…if u give me a chance I’ll try to repair it”; she with excitement

Neil looks at her excited yet confident state…many people tried in many ways to clear the trouble…what’s the big deal if she tried once…if she’ll succeeded!!! A ray of light seems to him…

” yes , miss radhika u can proceed; but I’ll be there to supervise u,is that okay with u”;asked Neil with hiding his interest

As radhika nodded positive both exit toward the auditorium…

At a gleaming mysterious place somebody is scanning computer system in air…he closed his eyes n gave a satisfactory mysterious smile…his thought;” so the queen is coming to me,finally the long 5 years waiting of mine will be over…i don’t care we belong to different planets…its only u for me…may be m ruthless,spineless, irrational, proudy but not for u…i hope u will understand me…so my little hint helped u…i should help u to successful in ur mission to here…planet earth should know about ur capacity…I’ll make u famous…promise”…a big brighten smile crept on his face….

A lady is sneaking him from a distance smiled seeing him..she thought,” u gave that smile rarely…yet it’s so beautiful sight…m wondering for whom that smile meant to be…i hope that is for me…coz nobody in this solar system is powerful like u n none of the planet is developed like us”….

she pinched something in air which showed a group photo…she smilingly caressed his air form n said samaira is only for arjun’s…n the image starting to disappear….

So that’s it…it will be a sci- fi story containing alien concept,wow signal mystery,missing time,miracle of sun theory etc. from science back ground which were still a mystery to human world…u can search it….

Character sketch

Radhika Mishra: A young intelligent,beautiful brooding space researcher from planet earth…she is a head strong person despite faced a lot from her family…

Neil Malhotra: A scientist who research on mars…having a soft corner for radhika…most humble n genuine person…

Samaira: Beautiful lady belongs to planet mars…has a crush on Arjun…like other people from mars she has also a power…Very good by heart

Arjun: Most ruthless,spineless, merciless with many less things but very much powerful in this solar system…he took science n technology of mars 10000steps ahead compare to other planet…people from mars respect him n feared him…but; his life changed after the incident happened on planet earth before 5 years ago when he secretly on his mission…madly in love with Radhika…

Here planet mars is very much well developed with many steps ahead of planet earth but not a disastrous disappointing like planet earth…they are powerful yet love to maintain peace…can’t say more…

Credit to: rossy

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  1. Brin

    Very interesting story, waiting for the update. ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thanks brin for liking it…?

  2. Zoya

    nce rossy sprrbbbb intro

    1. Thanks zoya for liking it ?

  3. Jessie

    Rosie… Rosieeeee… soon I read d title mmz on mars.. I know it is u.. coz u went Mars yesterday oly…lol… nw u Hv made Arjun as king of solar system!!! I praise ur love for him??? love triangle??love d sci-fi plot.. bring it on.. don’t kill anyone in Mars..coz Arjun is nt soft like he was in Dark..?am eager 2 know war happened 5 yrs ago… want Ardhika moments.. do we have beach in Mars..?? when is d next update.

    1. Lol..thanks Jessie…u know me well…no triangle n nothing big happened five years ago like u think ??

  4. Shree

    Mamma!! Seeing the title I knew it’d be you.. And it is! Yippie!! I’m so happy!!

    Wow science fiction!! Loved it!! Omg omg omg!! I get to have a tour on outer space now!! Yey!

    Post soon.. Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??

    1. Lol…thanks baby…how could not u recognize ur

  5. Sathya

    My Dear sister Rosie…u back again with a new concept….i read it and i loved it. This time i amkes sure i have ur updates…So now the next question is ..when is the next update? ๐Ÿ˜›

    1. Thanks sis…glad to see u again in my ff??

  6. Sammy

    Omg omg now I am surely coming to mars Rosie di just abducted arjun and Sam with you while leaving for mars …oh god a love story between 2 planets ….hehe amazing superb …what to say further ….mind blooging and mind blowing concept it some american movie …yeah Rosie ..east or west our Rosie di is best …three cheers for di u a lot di ..come back from mars ..and we all u gauri di….Gianna ..all will go to Pluto for picnic …but one more thing .. all other mmz fans are also allowed to barge in our space shuttle …lol ..waiting for the hot romance on mars ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Lol…somya dear hold on baby…so much excited…we will have our picnic…lol American movie…?? m thinking what to say u

  7. Rhimjhim

    it was amazing… the concept excited me a lot… i have high expectation from this ff and of course from u… hope u read more like this epi soon… keep writing and keep smiling

    1. Thanks dear rimjhim…m scared seeing ur expectations…m not that good writer

  8. Kรฅรฑthรฎ?

    Yaar rossy!!! The concept of your ff is fantastic!!!!! Please update the next one asap!!! Looking forward to read the next episode!!!!

    1. Thanks a lot kanthi for liking it ?

  9. S.v

    Oh my god arjun is like a king of mars. Lovely, sam has a crush in arjun who wont have and neil a softcornered heart for radhika and radhika an intelligent head. Lovely start and why are u making me travel the orbit only for few updates I wanna travel more and for ur info im the one who is riding the jet as I have dismantled the robot which u have made to drive so u cannot escape from me and where is my peace ?? I wanna know what is gonna happen next . Update this one and that one too. Love u lods twin and wanna hug u tight really tight and kiss you too

    1. Awwww twin u r travelling round orbit…lol..but why??? N why u dismantled my Robert…not gud…ur peace..u will get soon

  10. the tym i read indian space research….uffff…i counted it only u….rossy……!!!!!lol.

    1. That’s coz u know me…now I want to chop u off??

  11. Omg..Rossie i just loved it yarrrrr…wow wow wow..its amazingggg..m desperately wanted to read it further..why u stopped there.. Pls post soon..literally m on my toe to know further progress.. How arjun met rads five yr back?? How will they meet in future?? Nesam ?? N science of course.. Space, solar system, orbitory n space crafts its my most believed n fav sub from school.. N this concept based on it..frm first chappy itself. Falled for this ss..come u

    1. Hold on heroine…just sit down else ur toe will be in pain…lol…nothing big happened five years ago…i also like space science

  12. Myra

    Rossy dear its a different concept…lokking foreward to it…please do continue.

    1. Thanks Myra for liking my plot?

  13. Only you can think of such topics bravo ๐Ÿ™‚ waiting for next ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thanks a ton abha..ur comments means a lot..?

  14. Rosie I guess u are planning to keep Arjun on mars only. ๐Ÿ™‚ .lol ..anyways loved it..u r seriously amazing…I wanna check what inside ur Brain coz u always amaze me..jst superb..waiting for the nxt update..plz post soon…and plz update reincarnation also…love u..and send Arjun back on earth..I know he is missing me.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thanks ritu…lol…come here…I’ll open my brain to u like hanumanji opened his heart,so u can check what is there…lol??? ..reincarnation is soon…first I want ur LRD….? ?

  15. Rossy sweety superb one. Love in mars. Ohhh we are advanced now. Lol. Arjun is waiting for radz from 5 years. Ufff sooo long time. Plzzz milwa do dono ko jaldi se. Neil interested in radz. Sam has crush on arjun. Arjun loves radz. Ufff so many complications. Loved the concept. Sooo we r going on mars now. Yippppeeeeee. Waiting for next one. Loveee u.

    1. Aweeeee…m lucky enough today to get ur comments back…need to see my zodiac signs today…love on mars…lol…life on personal interest on mars made me write it…don’t know how to proceed also..still will try. …it looked like complications but actually it’s not..loveeeeee u a lot….thanks a ton for the comment ??

  16. interesting…pls update soon,,,,,,,,,,

    1. Thanks subha for liking this plot?

  17. Sweetie

    Rosie..I knew it was you by reading the title..Nice one dear..Stay blessed and lots of love..โค

    1. Thanks sweetie…omg u knew it would be me??? How???

      1. Sweetie

        Hehe..Because only you can think about making love stories between aliens and humans..First I thought it could be Sammy but by seeing dedication line I ruled out Sammy’s name and fixed your name on the name plate.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ And after that I can visualize myself watching ‘John Carter’ movie..In that movie love story is between John Carter and the Princess of Mars.. ๐Ÿ˜€ John Carter is resident of Earth..Nice movie that is..Stay blessed and keep smiling dear.. ๐Ÿ™‚

      2. Lol…sweetie….it will be wholly different…thanks all for guessing me

  18. Just now got to read this, wow a sci-fi story am up for this. I love sci-fi so much. Pls update soon want to see human and alien interactions. Love u

    1. Thanks giu baby…u like sci-fi story…omg…i didn’t know that…??

  19. Sorry for late comment ๐Ÿ™
    I tot u just kidding abt eloping with arjun but here u r not eloped u kidnapped n kept arjun in Mars ๐Ÿ˜ฎ rossy if any tragedy happens here sure v ll kidnap arjun n all ll enjoy with him in front of ur eyes …. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ arjun fell in love with rads n helping her awwwwwwww dats chooooo chweettttttt ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ Neil as usual awesome ๐Ÿ˜€ Sam in dream land ……. Loved it ๐Ÿ˜€ love u ๐Ÿ˜€

    1. Glad to see u back dear…hope u will all fyn now…lol…take Arjun n do whatever u want….no sorry plz…

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