manmarziyan on mars: chapter – 9

After a long time…feeling nice…had some health issues…no more blabber…

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At mars
Some kind of unusual unfamiliar noises shook the ear drums. Brightness of light felt like much more brighter than sun, pricking eyes. Unwanted body ache felt overall in body. What’s it? An enclosed empty dwelling place or some kind of huge vessel. What is happening around? Things happened so fast that mind couldn’t decipher any things. What’s this place exactly? Where they had fallen? Dead or alive; that confusion took samrat walk lazily toward a small glass panel through which outside view was clearly visible.

Some humanoid structure like bodies were doing some constructive works outside of the enclosed area. Shocking thing they were working in air , floating by themselves with just a small square like structures. On the ground those living beings walked, by jumping. Underwater sea activities also seen without any hurdle. Samrat was confused more the more he saw outside view. Suddenly he came to sense realizing the situation. He remembered he was with radhika and neil , mission to mars. If he was here alive, where were they? If they are alive or dead!! Mostly hows radhika. This realization made him sad and helpless, he screamed aloud. A sudden thud , one side of metal vessel opened out of no where from the wall like structure. Azian entered and warmly said,” welcome to mars , humans”!! seeing him samrat was dumbfounded, widely opened his eyes with utter shock.

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Before some moments

Arjun and azian both were present at Sam’s punishment place. Azian tried to realize Arjun to behave good at least till he became 15 according to Martians norms. Arjun didn’t not bother to listen him , rather enjoying Sam and the head’s helplessness. Sudden beep sound broke his amusement. He walked away to some free space and opened his gadget to hear information; but he got biggest shock of his life. Azian looked his pale face, Arjun put a video mode to see the real view. As they saw all radz, neil n samrat fight for life, both realized being involved in such stupidity they forget about their safety. Without wasting a second both went to rescue them, secretly informed Suzy to make sure to prepare some comfortable place. As radz conditions was so serious due to radiation Arjun took her with him.

Suzy was pressing neil’s chest as much power held. Neil lost his consciousness due to lack of oxygen. He was already supplied oxygen and in good condition but couldn’t reciprocate anything other than chanting chasini. She finally opened up a video conversation with azian. Finally as per his instructions Suzy applied some rays treatment which gave the ultimatum shock to cells to function again. After sometime when neil come to senses slowly his vision tried to find radz but is it possible?? He screamed in a pained voice,” it’s my mistake. I couldn’t save u radhika. My chasini, first woman I acknowledged. I should have died”. He again fainted due to stress. Suzy let him recover fully. She injected something that will work faster to cure neil.

Azian’s face flung in air. Suzy told about Neil conditions with his worries about radz.

Azian,” same here. This old human constantly asking about his fellows. But the most important thing..”… He stopped abruptly and was thinking something deeply.

After a pause Suzy gathered some confidence and asked,” sir, if u have any idea about Arjun sir. I am afraid if he did something unbelievable in frustration or anger”.

Azian also tensed.his mind screamed,” where are u Arjun? Why u not contacted us? What happened to the girl, ur queen”.

Both looked tensed. Till that time both Suzy and azian understood the seriousness of situation. If anything happened to radhika Arjun would have ability to smash the whole due to his devastation. So they prayed for radz safety whole heartedly.

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( p.s. I told u in first chapter that mars has its highly developed civilization underground.so that outer planet people won’t get idea about the life on mars. Until n unless they let out to know others)

Near just below the Olympus Mon, the biggest mountain of whole solar system which contained the dirt having some medicinal effects. A few feets away the great crop circle was present, which was being considered as most sacred place of mars having some magical effects. The pale, almost lifeless unconscious form of radhika laid on the ground between holy crop circle one side and medicinal valued Olympus Mon.

Arjun sat near her with a devastation condition. The same great Arjun, top Martian scientist , on whose name Martians stood erect to show respect. It was his last hope. First time he felt helpless, first time he felt his all inventions were useless. If only he could stop the change of genetic code, he will be able to save her, which was nearly impossible. Then azian recommended Arjun this last option. Sometimes more than human invention or treatment, nature helped. Arjun crashed on his knees crying remembering the five years ago meet. He mumbled in between in his sobbing,” please come back. U save me once on planet earth by nature help. I’ll try my best. Don’t leave me my queen. Wake up to punish me, why I was not attentive. Wake up to yell on me for my silly stupid recklessness. Plz I can’t leave without u”…

5years ago as per mars/ 10 years ago as per earth:-
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Year 2006, on planet earth,
india , Ladakh

It was a bright sunny day. Radhika’s 10th grade result out. She topped , so her family kept a small celebration at home. All friends of her invited. One of her friend from boarder area , near Kongka la pass fell ill suddenly. She decided to visit that friend despite her family protest. Dadaji agreed to accompany her as she was his favourite grandchild. It was hilly slippery area so they maintained cautious. Suddenly they see a triangular light went upward vertically with a high speed. Dadaji’s interest doubled up. As a scientist he guessed the extraterritorial activities there. But radz didn’t gave the damn about it and dragged dadaji with her.

At mars, before some days

9 years Arjun banged extraterritorial ministry entrance door. Azian looked at him perplexed from behind. He dragged him asked the matter. Arjun said he wanted to visit planet earth this time with the spaceship. Azian’s eyes widen. He knew Arjun was stubborn too much , he would do whatever he wants. But how could he let such a tender guy ,to other planet . So he denied his request. But he got scared when he didn’t find Arjun after spaceship left for planet earth. Then he knew Arjun tricked him and went. He did what he wanted.

Radhika met her friend and gave some sweets to his friend. Radhika saw her friend’s mother treated her friend with some herbs , leaves and flowers. She curiously asked why they didn’t take any latest medication. The lady said natural way always better. She interestingly listen what she said carefully. After some time they returned.

On their way to return they heard some crashing sound. But they couldn’t found anything rather finding the same triangular lights movement rapidly.after going deeper dadaji screamed, followed by radz. Both saw a boy around 18( that’s what they guessed as per earth days) lies in pool of blood, Ashes waiting for his last breathe. He was coiled around by some wild bushes, shurbs. That was Arjun….

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Precap: Arjun’s fondness and madness on radz, samrat and neil being interrogated…and sam😈
God even I think what I wrote?? If my mind is ok or not tell me by ur reviews.

35 comments

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Lal…now come with next one plzzz…..what happened to Radz…gosh…Prince…crashing on knees…oh my….Everyone saved..!!…Flashback…nice…ya….she will save him na….but…genetic code…am.trying hard to guess the upcoming scenario….pity this Jazzy and bring the update na…plz.my lal….love you loads…TC…eat well….stay healthy….

  1. Brin

    Brin

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    Awesome episode, glad your back and healthy, love Arjun’s concern for Radhika, eagerly waiting for the next update. πŸ™‚

  2. Sulbi

    Sulbi

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    Astonish…. u r such a genius… no words to express dear… such a outstanding episode…. i loved it to the core… Neil care for Radhu… wow… am spellbound… Arjun care for Radhika… Every girl wish for that…. u nailed it dear…. update ASAP… tc of ur health… love you πŸ™‚

  3. Dipika

    Dipika

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    My queen i m spellbound… You always makes me mesmerized yarr..m soooo happy when i saw u update mars..i wanted to read at the very moment but i could nt..so i come here in lunch break..finishing my tiffin as fast as i can…thanks for posting it…
    This one of the shocking chapter..this trio are on mars…neil n samra got saved but radz…godd..this chap reminded me of avatar movie whn tht human scientist shot by bullet n allien placed her under tgt sacred tree..pls don’t make radz die yarrr..no.more sad ending… N the way y shows flash back..wow….arjun came to earth n radx was in 10…his spaceship crashes..nw waiting to knw wht radz did to save him…n wht will arjun do now.m so eager to see his madness..n sam..what.. Why u giving tht devilish smile of urs rose…if u hurted radz na..i will punch …samajhi…this soo splendid update..are ha i wanna ask..is tht true Martian n qe have years differnce like u mentioned… Love you loads…tc…my fighter rose is in full form now..

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Lol…heroine u wanted to punch me…lol…dreamy girl…no sad ending nothing..and yes hoping for happy happy happening..i didn’t see avtar yaar…i think if it’s possible to add some romance or to end after some chapter…πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜„ πŸ˜„ which is suitable for me…yuhuuuuu

  4. S.v

    S.v

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    Yoooo hooo my twin is back with the bang fwww after months i can see credit rossy…. what ab update leave it my fav emoji awwwww this one 😈😈😈😈😈 my fav one from u makes me feel happy im jumping like maaaaadddddddd lovely update and arjun started his love when he was 9 man u r supposed to go to school and learn tables not he he he and she is in 10th and he is 9 years but he was looking 18 year old he he he and he was saved by her and so he will save her pakka ….. but i donno what u r upto baba pls update the net part soon pllssssss love u sooo much and as always muhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaa hugs to u πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Twin…even I don’t know what m upto..if heroine will not saved m I allowed to be here??? Lol…yes he I 9 years according Martians time…lol…hai na maze Ki batein…take care

  5. subha

    mind blowing ,awesome,super,amazing,outstanding update ….eagerly waiting next one ..love uuuuuiuuuuuuu tc

  6. Sathya

    Sathya

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    Sissy am so happy u r back in ur writing. But what got into you? You always try to kill ur heroines… :@

    What happened to Radz? I can’t see my Martian crying. I wanna go there and console him πŸ˜›

    Yar Sissy, pls don’t give any negative things…i ll definitely break down…you know what…the concept you have written is absolutely fantastic. Its just mind boggling. I am giving my salute to Azian and Suzy who did their best to save the humans. But What Arjun gonna do now? Make her alive. Let her sleep for sometime but not long time.

    FB is interesting yar…pls post next soon. baby and Arts & Sculpture too?

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Lol…sissy I wanted my heroines to be strong yet fearless..they can win death even after died or alive…lol…rofl…now don’t kill me..I’ll book a tkt for u to mars…go n console him…lol…don’t worry she will woke up I next chapter πŸ˜πŸ˜‰ next is arts…😊

  7. _Ritu

    _Ritu

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    Again my eyes πŸ‘€ πŸ‘€ are peeking inside ur brain… Gosh…dat much imagination power .. 😊 bio , physics , chemistry, mechanics , geography , geology , psychology all fitted so well inside ur brain…kash..inme se ek subject v mere brain me fit hoti…😝😝 loved d epi…hope Rads is all Fyn…cant wait for nxt..plz post soon..nd update Art nd almighty soon too else 😈😈 ..Beware 😈

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Lol…ritu…seeing u in main page is so blissful…and i have nothing inside my brain except cow dung…lol..and update ldr if u wanna safe😈😈😈

  8. Gauri

    Gauri

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    Rossy good to see you back πŸ™‚ be happy and healthy … and about ur story as usual fantastic….ur should be a scientist doing some kind of research on starts or UFO….seriuosly you would rock πŸ™‚ love u πŸ™‚

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Thanks abha…ur words boosts me always…if I will research on UFO..lol…our scientists will definitely run away seeing my madness…lol…lov u too…tcπŸ˜ƒ

  9. Shree

    Shree

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    Mamma!! Happy to see you back!! Muuuaaah to you

    Loved the update so much!! Why aren’t you a scientist? Me running late for meeting.. tata

    Love you so much!!

    • Rossy

      Rossy

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      Thanks baby…m scientist…god then isro will become mad…wait will u let me stay in ur home if i become scientist??πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

  10. Meen

    Meen

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    Marvellous rossy….like really I was scratching my head…..I’m mesmerized by ur writing girl…..amazing….loved & enjoyed every bit of it……lovely….muuuha….love u

  11. Jewel

    Jewel

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    U r back….. The chapter is really nice rossy…. Rads, hope that nothing will happen to her….. Waiting for next…. Waiting for arts and sculptures also…….

  12. Roma

    My Sunshine. ..it’s really superbbbb episode…it’s very awesoooooome feeling to see ur writing again…I missed it soooooooo muchhhhhh. …but u came back with a baaaanggg. ….thanks to Almighty :)…..the episode was very heart touching..very beautiful. …samrat woke up….n neil tooo…arjun saved both of them…but rads…she is still unconscious…..n arjun’s devastated state reminded me lonawla accident of rads…her wounded body in he taking her to hospital in his arms…. . ..then praying for her in temple. …..ahhhhhh…very heart wrenching scene…I could watch all this…in this situation. ..where a Martian king is helpless…n taking help of mother nature to cure his queen…..plzzz…cure rads soon…..rads is everyone’s heartbeat. ..n I want to see ardhika together on mars n on earth…this is yet to be coming. ….n lso…I think Sam should see neil…..n forget about arjun….lol….the fb scene were good showing arjun’s stubbornness n spaceship crash…ohhhh…rads saved him
    ….wow…now he wants to save her at any cost….very interesting n crucial situation …..keep it up honeyyy. . Precap is very interesting. ..love you till infinity. …muaaaaahhhhhh…bear hug…..β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰

  13. Rossy

    Rossy

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    Yay…my sister…di…u r my everything…lol…u wanna see ardhika in mars n earth…hahaha and sam to see Neil and forget Arjun…well this will be a mixture…think she is an aggressive Martian…she won’t back up easily…but no plots and ploys…yup radz will be ok in next chapter…and Arjun’s happiness u can imagine…there is some more…ardhika will be together in mars which will continue in earth also…..i Sai many things to u…lol…u r my elder sister na so I didn’t say noπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

  14. Pankh

    Pankh

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    Rossy me back again .. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ rocking story sweetheart…Ardhika on mars in lala land .. Superb.. Will be waiting for ur next update..

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