manmarziyan on mars: chapter 4


Mars 4

Hiii everyone..first of all m very thankful to you for showing interest in sci-fi story. In previous chapter u all asked if I did home work before posting the chapter? M telling u truth, I attended workshops n conferences on space facts at our planetarium when I was doing masters. So that helped me now.

Teleportation is a controversial subject today taken seriously from 1993. It happens in microscopic world ; but if we use quantum mechanics and electrodynamics in subatomic level may be an object or human can be teleported.

Crop circle is a mysterious mark believed to be drawn by aliens.


Azian was very much tensed for Arjun. His fear was Arjun’s aggressiveness and stubborn nature. If he would do something absurd and gone missing like before….Ahhhh

” out of dream, come to reality. I am much more mature now. Don’t worry. I’ll be in contact with u always”, said Arjun mischievously by seeing Azian face who is known for his strength and not so emotional nature. But he care , care only for Arjun.

Azian came to his original ever composed form and ordered to Arjun;” don’t u dare to do something stupid,u will see me. Make sure on the invisible button before you enter planet earth atmosphere . No human should see u”.

Arjun rolled his eyes with a mocking smile;” no human,don’t forget I am going to see a human only who driving me crazy all time. Those humans can’t even touch me with their mere power”. With that he bid his bye and entered their extremely advanced spaceship who held the capacity to travel faster than light . When he crossed near phobeas he saw his satellite RA-07 . A contented big smile appeared on his face.

Arjun ‘s POV
” finally I got chance to see u. I am too much excited. Without ur saying I am doing many stupid invention for u, for ur comfort. If u say me anything to do I don’t know what I will do. The great Arjun,Martian scientist whom Martians regarding as god is wanted to rule by u ,only u. I don’t even know if u recognize me or not. Do u remember me? Its only because of u I came to know what is a family and love of a family. Martian doesn’t have family. I don’t care about anything until I remember u. I am waiting for u to come our home planet some day. I want to feel u , want to hug u, want to laugh with u in real because nobody even make me feel special like u did. Those five days are best days of my life. See u soon my love.”

With that he pressed some keys in air which showed a laser screen in air . He opened the recent location to find radhika was busy with her final submission of thesis along with teji who cracked jokes. Both were giggling. He zoomed out radhika’s form and hugged that air form emotionally.

We often says heart and mind have different opinions. But the science told us about their interconnection even though they differ, still they are intertwined. Radhika was feeling something strange. She couldn’t figure out. Teji told her someone must be missing her badly to which she glared him. Teji gave her a mockery look that he was kidding. After they finished their work they decided to enjoy last day at Harvard university. Next day they will leave for their destination. Both were emotional as they were leaving and hugged each other.

At the same time Neil submitted a rough sketch of HOM mission. He was happy and sad at same time. He thought;” why it’s so hard miss Mishra?? Is Neil Malhotra such a despicable person. M I lacking some where?? Why u never looked at me like I did. I fell for u again after meeting u in ISA work shop, like I did in childhood when I saw u first time with ur dadaji. But I was unaware about such feelings at that time. I joined this mission and put my absurd conditions just to get u near me. Please for god shake accept my request. I am in verge of loosing myself. The mission is about to start. Come back please.”
He opened his phone and caressed radhika’s photo which they took at science conference. A smile appeared on his face.

Sam was pacing like a fierce fire. Suzy was just wishing on her luck. She was very well known to Sam’s crazy behaviour when it comes to Arjun. Sam asked fuming ;” from when did he plan to visit planet earth? I know he doesn’t want anyone to question him . But didn’t he say that he believed me. Why he hide that fact? And i don’t get it why he bear all space sickness just to visit planet earth and very frequently. ”

Suzy said slowly;” if my guess is correct ,either he visit for research purposes or….” She stopped abruptly.

Sam gave her a sharp look and asked;” or…just spill out beans . What do u think?”

Suzy gulped and replied;” or he might have somebody special there, so he visited frequently without caring much about himself also. Today i saw him at the time of leaving . The spark, the glow his face had , I never saw him in such happy mood here.”

Sam lost her patience and banged the gadget on the table. She gave a furious look to Suzy ;” don’t u ever dare to say such kind of absurd things about him. Stop fooling around. And didn’t u only said before that I am the only one for him!! Remember I’ll be the one”. Sam went away.

Suzy inhaled peacefully and looked at the direction where Sam & mumbled ;” I told that in case of mars, not for other planet. And toady i confirmed why Arjun sir never looked at u. I hope he’ll get best in his life.”


Radhika and teji were spending their time happily. But later teji drank sooo much . He started blabbering some butterfly story, alien saviour, new planet discovery ,how he is gonna miss radz etc. Radhika was trying hard to come him out but failed. So she asked she asked manager to take care of him and came out. She was on her way , at a turning point, little bit darker where a group of hunches present. They passed slangs comments towards her in drunken state. She thought better to avoid it. As she moved one of them was trying to grab her hand ; but before that a strong kick on him and he blown away to kiss the ground some meters distance. The whole group moves toward the man in hood for a big fight. Rads stood shocked staring here and there. But she was surprised most when the hood man grab her hand and stared to run.

Radz came out of startled and asked as she was annoyed;” who are u mister? From where did u fall so suddenly?

Hoody man smiled seeing her annoyance;” I am Arjun. Btw u r cute.” He tried to pinch her cheeks.

Radz annoyed more ;” wah…. I have never seen such a jerk. More than Arjun u r behaving like duryodhan”. She was trying to free her hand, but he held her tightly as if his priceless possession.

Arjun asked in that running mode, jealousy clearly covered his voice;” who is he? Is he more handsome and intelligent than me”.

Radz eyes widen hearing him;” don’t u know about our epic? I can’t believe I am trapped by a crazy mad person.”

Arjun did nothing but smiling continuously;” we don’t have any kind of epics like u. Btw why r u so annoyed now?”

Radhika shot an angry glare toward him ;” thanks to u , with hunches police are also behind us. If they will see my face my reputation,career will have a black point.I never involved in such incident in my life. And who told u to jump in-between? I know how to handle them. So I called police.”

Arjun was seems to enjoy her anger,annoyance like a fool. If it was mars and one Martian girl told that much,might be that girl would lost her voice power in the next moments. Immediately Arjun pulled her behind a tree as police crossed them by chasing goons. Radhika sighed in relief and said;” thanks anyway mister. Now lets move”. She was starting to leave noticed Arjun was following her. She stopped;” don’t say u r a stalker or pervert. Why r u following me? Go to ur home?”

Arjun replied;” I can’t. Its very far from ur planet.”

Rads thought what this man is saying. She asked again;” my planet!! Isn’t this ur planet? Did u lost ur mind?”

Arjun was laughing out loud seeing her confused;” yes this is not my planet. I came from other planet. I m not human, an alien”. He was speaking truth genuinely.

Till now radhika was annoyed, angry but hearing this she shot a deep look at Arjun and stood silently thinking something serious. She was asking curiously but in a low stern voice ;” so u r an alien. That’s why ur kick had such power and u run so fast that I couldn’t match u even. And u don’t have a home to return now. Ohk…follow me.”

Arjun was happy that she didn’t create a fuss over him being an alien. He was overwhelmed overjoyed;” so u r accepted me. Let’s be friends. I want to say u many things.”he quietly followed her . He stopped at a place as she stopped. Rads called someone. Arjun looked at her and smiling when his gaze fall at the place name ” MENTAL ASYLUM”.

Radhika told him sounding very concerned;” don’t worry. U will be fine very soon.they will take good care of u. One of my friend is working here.”

Before anybody could approach Arjun again grab radhika’s hand and ran away. She was shouting;” leave my hand. Don’t u know u r a mad now. What?? Alien, that to looking such handsome human kind. M I looking like a fool to believe all these. I saw in movies………………….

this time Arjun cut her off and said with a stern voice;” u think m joking or having some brain problem. Now I came to know why humans are so much behind. They lack in brain consistency. At a time u believe the existence of extraterritorial species and next time think it as a joke. And about ur movies based on aliens, don’t even talk about that. I am really getting hyper seeing those what planet of apes, godzilla, x- file, u.f.o…seriously have they ever been such planet. They even don’t know there are many planets in this galaxy n cosmos having more beautiful creatures than human. And ur scientist founded the existence of aliens looked like serpent, insecticide while they clearly retrieved the information from the people who are abducted that they are looking like humanoid structure wearing space suits.” Annoyance clearly visible in Arjun’s face.

Radhika stood silent hearing him .she was confused now. Arjun was leaving rads said from back;” then come and find me tomorrow evening. Then only I’ll believe u”. Arjun thumbs up her and went away. Rads couldn’t sleep at that night, thinking about Arjun and his words. Arjun could see her restlessness through his screen n mumbled;” u r really something. Very different and difficult person , that’s why I fall for u even more n more.see u tomorrow” he caressed her visual form and went to sleep…

Neil was impatiently pacing inside ISRO office. His chief asked what’s happening with him to which he replied;”I am waiting for my team to join”. But in real he got mail from radhika is coming to join that made him excited and crazy. He was Crushing time why it’s so slow today. Finally all new recruits came. Neil’s eyes were just trying to find radz he saw she is coming behind with her ever soothing smile pestered on her face which gave him solace, happiness wherever he saw her. He rushed to her and said;” thanks miss Mishra for joining here.I am so happy”.. He extended his hand…

Arjun was witnessing this at Ladakh alien base. He banged his fist on wall n mumbled ;” what a crazy scientist? What’s the need to over excited seeing my queen? Isn’t that absurd to look others possession….
His sentence cut in midway as Azian started taking with him through their video signal system which showed his face in air saying ;” there is only you now who is doing absurd things, that man looks fine to me”.

Arjun startled;” what do u mean by that? M doing absurd…

Azian laughed;” do you want me to say what u r upto do yesterday night. After all those drama u created she went to sleep and u…….

Arjun coughed aloud to hide his embarrassment being caught by Azian.he said;” warn samaira never try to trace me. Does she think she could tail me without me unnoticed? This is a last warning from my side”.
They continued their talk…

Sam was observing newly beam ray gun invented by Arjun. But before applying it Arjun left for planet earth. It was consist of beams like powerful alpha rays, gamma rays and infrared radiation by using interchangeable position of electrons n neutrons ; but Arjun made it so strong that it can even hit a target of another planet. If something or someone hit by this rays this can have ability to destroy the object.

Suzy exclaimed;” if it was okay to use that new invention without permission of Arjun sir”.

Sam said with a sarcastic voice;” why not?? In either way he is going to punish me for tailing him, then it would be better if I will do something to get punishment”…

Suzy said with a thoughtful manner;” still we have a chance now. But touching his invention without his permission that to when he didn’t applied it, he won’t leave us”.

Sam threw a dead glare to her and said;” stop talking nonsense and come set the target”.. She ordered Suzy to zoom the screen on planet earth,specifically India.

Radhika was driving to her home after letting their driver go for some was nearly a turning point at cliff area a sudden beam rays hit her car very hard. Car lost its balance and went in wrong direction toward the edge of the cliff. She was afraid to the core screaming on her top notch” save me, please someone help me”. The car was falling from the cliff, some sudden force stop it from front side of edge of the cliff .she lost her consciousness with fear ; but before that she saw Arjun’s face in front who was trying to stop her vehicle. It was a grave mistake for Martians below 15 to use teleportation; but…………….

Precap: Give me some suggestions ??

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  1. In vain let Sam do a mistake n destroy a planet or something like that ……. I m really sorry I know I m bad in suggesting in this matter god ……..I really like it buddy …….love u lots

    1. Rossy

      Thanks dear…don’t worry I’ll use ur suggestions in future update but by bending it slightly ?

  2. S.v

    that was terribly awesome all are having love interest on radhika thats not a proble, arjun awww i loved it he is super cute wish i find an alien like arjun lol always an alien is figured bad with their appearance but arjun was nice lol twin u r a super genius im proud of u my sis was the beam made by sam over rads car and teleporting i love that stuffs they are amazing u r my darling u never fail to amaze me with ur words. Dear love u lods and wanna hug u super tight as u made me feel so happy. God what will happen next . Aye aye captain our mission 4 was a huge success waiting for the mission 5 captain till then i love u captain. Copy that…….

    1. S.v

      forgot to mention dp awww no words to say u make me all go mad love u

    2. Rossy

      Hahaha twin m very much irritated with all those stuffs when they said aliens are bad..i mean why u cant think good about it. If they can visit our planet without any trace leaving behind,if they wanted they already destroyed us. But they did some monitoring mission will be late a rocket

  3. Starz

    Rossy genius should I call u I don’t know…oh my really half of this I felt like I am reading my science book?☺….. really awesome…..isorry i can’t compare ur story with my science book as ur story is 100000000000000 time more interesting….. I know I am blabbering so much…..loved ur story to the core….lots of love dear and take care

    1. Rossy

      Thanks dear… M genius…lol…no m not…glad u liked it ..update ur stories soon

  4. Hi.. its awesome.. i was so excited to see u update… its so lovely.. Arjun is being so honest abt his identity… cant wait… pls update soon dear..

    1. Rossy

      Thanks farjana..yes he wanted to be honest with her from first…itz good anyways

  5. wow…….awesome……&interesting

    1. Rossy

      Thanks subha…?

  6. Meen

    hey rossy…..good to c u again….it was awesome dear……i love arjun so much…..u wrote a master piece girl….i love it……loads of love dear……muuuuuha

    1. Rossy

      Thanks dear meena for liking it..update rehnuma plzzzz

  7. Brin

    Outstanding episode, Sam destroys Arjun’s invention without his invention, he is stuck at earth, you nail it Rossy, well done, waiting for the next update. πŸ™‚

    1. Rossy

      Thanks brin..sam just threw beams..she couldn’t destroy..what Arjun will do we will see in next chapter

  8. Gauri

    Rossy i dont find myself fit enough to suggest you something regarding this amazing story…from the begining till the end I ws so engrossed that i forgot everything… is magical…lovely…awesome out of the world….nd yes i hv read abt teleportation….saints in ancient india were capable of that ….yaar pls post soon if u can…love u??????

    1. Rossy

      Thanks abha…plz don’t say like it u don’t fit…it ashamed me…u r superb..m glad u know about ancient saint teleportation..m thinking about queen n knight

  9. Sammy

    This was so amazing di ….really you nailed it …wao ardhika was like soΓ²ooooooooo cuuuuteeee … i was kissing my phone …giving flyinh kissess in air …lol my senior boys were just glaring me …hehe ..too good and he is only 15 ..awww ….i mean according to Mars …so adorable …di you are awesome …mind blowing ???

    1. Rossy

      Ladooo u did such things in front of ur seniors…omg…did ur professor torture u again with specimen drawing?????…Arjun will be 15 soon …lol..thank u dear

  10. Aasthu

    its cute………..I loved it…….well I dnt know anything abt it 2 give suggestion……….

    1. Rossy

      Thanks dear aasthu…itz ok…tc ??

  11. Ohh my god that was fab fab fab and fab dear…pls post soooon

    1. Rossy

      Thanks dear neetz.. Will try ..m thinking about my other story now

  12. Sathya

    Stupendous episode…. U simply nailed it dear. What an episode yar… Sissy u rocked it dear… I just fallen for this arjun THE MARTIAN. I love the way he told the truth to rads n she got him to mental asylum.. Lol… That was really cute…. U r asking suggestions from us…. How dare u…. No one can suggest anything for this story n only u can do the justice

    1. Rossy

      Thanks sissy..i thought that would be obvious reaction if someone said us he is alien…lol…u can give me

  13. Sweetie

    Di,are you really asking us suggestions??We don’t know anything yaar,how can we even suggest to such a fabulous writer like you..I’m so glad to read this story,Arjun,mera bandha aa hi gaya finally to his queen,haayeee,what a introduction of Ardhika,I’m so in love with this.. πŸ˜€ Godzilla is my all time fav movie,I used to have an eraser too,lol.. πŸ˜‰ John Carter is another movie in which earth person enters Mars,did you watch that movie??I guess you will love that movie too.. πŸ™‚ Love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

    1. Rossy

      Thanks sweetie geethu…why can’t u suggest?? U all are fab dear…nope I didn’t see any Hollywood alien movie…their violent theories scares me…i prefer to watch harry potter,babies day out,home alone…lol…cute na??

      1. Sweetie

        Cute kya super cute hai Di.. πŸ˜€ All are my fav movies.. πŸ˜€ Baby’s day out is out of the world,I laughed my heart out while watching that movie,haha.. πŸ˜€

      2. Rossy

        Yup…that was funny…baby…awww…soooo cute…and r u busy…say something about my next queen n knight story…it’s updated??

  14. Omg Rosie this is breath taking…u r awesome baby….don’t dare to stop Me from praising this beautiful n splendid writer.. Seriously girl..i need to ask aunty now wht she ate the time whn u were in aunty’s womb n got this extraordinary n brilliant brain..reall..some director should contact u for this stories n i bet he will became millioner by filming on ur stories….Sam lost her only god can save her from Arjun’s wrath… N arjun answer is so awesome.. Yeah we contradict our statements… Crazy human being.. Main to Mars pe shift hone wali hu..tumhe to rasts pata h…love u..nxt one soon.. Don’t hang us on cliff with rads for longer time…muhha

    1. Rossy

      Ayeeee heroine that dishes were secret…what if u will try?????? lol..m gone crazy..millions not trillions…awwww..I’ll not give my script them…m greedy?? lol…when it’s u n me ,we can joke on everything…lol…yes I know way to mars. Just hang on there in cliffs with a knowledge that Arjun will not leave Sam!!!

  15. Jessie

    Rosie.. mere lal.. kya kahun me?!! I was reading with mouth1 hung open..giggling at Arjun’s antics..mental…did sam hit rads purposely? Wats d need 2 use? Azian n Arjun part is fun.. wats gonna1 happen.? Teleportation! Wat will Arjun teleport…? Scared for Radz.. loved Crazy loved Arjun..!!! ??? pls update next one soon..

    Suggestions.. Tell me.. Azian isnt aware of sam’s doings. Neil’s hom mission.. will radz recognize Arjun.. what happened 5 yrs back.will dadaji come into picture..last one.will Arjun get hurt??? TC n loads of love…

    1. Rossy

      Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho Jessie…well why Sam hit on rads we will see in next thing will must happen that is Arjun will not leave Sam…thank u very much dear for those suggestions..I’ll clear all that ??

  16. Am commenting after reading this twice and feel like reading it again, amazing my dear. Arjun asking if duryodhan is more handsome and intelligent than him, LOL that was too funny. And do u really need us to suggest u something, don’t be silly u are good at this am sure ur next update will be even better, waiting for it eagerly.
    Love u

    1. Rossy

      Thanks giu baby…i asked suggestions coz all awesome writers are here…u feel like read it again, awwww my heart feel contented…jealousy is such an amazingly unattractive yet beautiful thing, what can we do??? lol…lots of love ❀ dear

  17. Shubhadha

    Very intrestig…..

    1. Rossy

      Thanks shubhada….

  18. _Ritu

    ???????????????? Rosieeeeeeeeeee …m still blinking my eyes on ur knowledge dear… πŸ™‚ U r a complete encyclopedia…. Having knowledge on each nd every field… πŸ™‚ I really underestimated u πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ Had u every tried for UPSC exams… U r fit for dat in every sense dear… πŸ™‚ about d episode..I don’t deserve to complement u… U r jst amazing… πŸ™‚ so sorry for dis very late comment dear…lyf is really frustrating dese days…preparing for AIPGMEE exam nd not even qualifying in a single practice test….totally irritated wid myself….anyways waiting for nxt…will comment on d other ffs after reading….loads of love πŸ™‚

    1. Rossy

      Rituuuuuuuuuuuuuu…..its like m blinking my eyes continuously seeing u…can’t believe u r here?? lol don’t underestimate the power of rossy…lol…i didn’t give upsc but I gave opsc which is equal to upsc..just difference is that was central government n its state government..n I qualified also…waiting for interview only…? ? ? ? ? howz ur exams?? Come soon back…

  19. This is just awesome Rossy… eager to know when and how Arjun seen Radz n made him fall head over heels for her and how Azian sent him to earth earlier also i.e, only after turning 15 they are sent right?

  20. Rossy

    Thanks chandana…it will disclose in next chapter or next….? ?

  21. Rosieeeee my sunshineeee. …wowwww….awesoooooome episode. …u r giving very outstanding narration n mind blowing background to this marvellous story….I’m so amazed at your knowledge…..the projects/research u did in your college, u r using it very brilliantly here…….Azian n arjun bonding is very unique. ..both know each other very clearly…Azian knows arjun’s possession for rads…but he cares for him too πŸ™‚ ……rads n teji is bond so cute…..ardhika encounter was mind blowing. …rads not believing arjun being alien n shows mental asylum. …lol….but lost her sleep remembering arjun’s words about human’s lack of knowledge of other planets in galaxy…….wowwww. …..neil very desperately waited for rads n glad to see her in his team but arjun didn’t like his closeness with rads…lol…..these two- arjun n Neil very impossible in their own self……ahhhh…..but what sam did in her stupidity…ufff…she shot beams to rads car!!!….I hope rads is ok……but I’m glad that arjun reached there on instantly using his powers…..plzzz rosie my honeyyy, do something so arjun be able to show his love n concern care for his ladylove…so rads can develop feelings for arjun also….or does she remember arjun when he met her 5 years back
    ….need to see the flashback of their first meet…….if so, then she could believe him to be an alien n also that he loves her immensely πŸ™‚ …. my darling sissyyyy…I’m very curious to know what will happen next. u all kinds of ideas….lol…maybe I’m thinking totally opposite what u thought to write next in this amazing story…but I’m totally immersed into this story. …can’t control my mind to not to think about it…..plzzzz continue dear as u plan for this story…..I’m just getting very desperate here….now I stop my blabbering….u r doing phenomenal job. …remarkable n splendid……keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart sunshine. …lotssssss of hugsssssss n kissesssss. .β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

    1. Rossy

      Appi di its me who got speechless now…what should I reply to u ,really let me think…i loved ur comments more than my story…it soothes me…awwww…so lovely and i can clearly see how much u love this story n love me…self flattering myself…lol…only I can say this moment that u r the biggest courage for me and I love u till infinity my soul sissy….stay well…get well soon…take care ?

  22. Oh My dear Rossy you are such a great writer…… I really like your ff…. I think Radhika should remember Arjun saving her and she should fire train of questions… He should confess his love and show her what he had done in madness of her love… Then intergalactic war and Radhika getting super natural power she became saviour of Earth….. And then Aradhika union and new generation of of Aradhika kids… This is my suggestion I hope you would like it….. Love u ? and take care ?… With Lots of love ❀ and best wishes… . ……. Update soon….

  23. Oh My dear Rossy you are such a great writer…… I really like your ff…. I think Radhika should remember Arjun saving her and she should fire train of questions… He should confess his love and show her what he had done in madness of her love… Then intergalactic war and Radhika getting super natural power she became saviour of Earth….. And then Aradhika union and new generation of of Aradhika kids… This is my suggestion I hope you would like it….. Love u ? and take care ?… With Lots of love ❀ and best wishes… . ……. Update soon.

    1. Rossy

      Thanks dear Sam…glad u liked it…as of now I don’t think about war…but yes I’ll use ur suggestions in other ways..thank u very much dear for ur suggestions

  24. Rossy

    Thank u very much dear..

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