manmarziyan on mars : chapter 1

Mmz on mars 1

Hello friends…m here with my first sci-fi plot…as its first chapter it will be short n pillar to start story..don’t know how much u will find it on track or not…whatever plzz let me know ur views…and i did use some imaginary research agency.. i may not be available for some days …so spare me and don’t forget me πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Year 1965, at International Space Agency,USA

There were mixed emotions passing on their faces..the rate of pulse and nerve was higher ..heart beats like it could explode at anytime with not regular 72 beats per minute..the above mentioned reactions increased by time pass each second..they silently prayed for success this time..after so many failures from years ,this time they were so close to success..finally the moment of placement accurately…..

Tick tick 5….4….3….2….1…bang!!
Mission succeed…everybody congratulate each other..eyes become moist with happiness..for the first time emotions had no bound…why not?? Finally they achieved that what whole world awaiting from eras’…the first ever successful orbitor mission to Mars..

Now the head of the scientists,Mr Thompson called everyone to gather at auditorium..he addressed his note briefly n praised;” today we all make this mission possible together; but the most brilliant idea n theory given by the person gave us the taste of success..we should appreciate our special gratitude n honour goes to Mr Suraj Mishra”..A huge round of applauds welcomed him..he was like got everything…

Suraj Mishra,a great scientist had inborn qualities..with that he reached at top at his young age which was a dream for others..he never witnessed failure in his life..loved science from his heart content..because of him first mars mission got successful..after that he made many successful missions toward space..his interest n knowledge regarding space science amazed people..after sending non living objects to space ; he tried to send animal who possess maximum similar genes with was also with his ,others expectation also increased that human might be go to mars n survive there!! He was so enthusiastic about it,he forgot everything n gave whole time to his research..finally he was on edge of success with all formulas n advanced technology..he went to their chief to relay him the good news; but shocked what he heard before entered his chamber..

Mr Thompson said to someone;” after getting success on human spacecraft mission to mars,we have to check out what is going on there..and we have to conquer mars..mars will be function as a slavery n dominion planet of planet earth,more precisely of USA..but before that we have to acquire that formula n technology from that young idiot n finished his chapter..i felt ashamed when after many attempts of mine I failed on orbitor mission ; but he succeeded at once..this time his work will be recognized on my name only..” both laughed cruelly…

Fortunately Suraj heard everything n came back..he was frustrated and broken..he didn’t know human could stoop so low..he planned something..he was an intelligent person; so he acted wise..slowly he destroyed everything without any doubt arise n replaced the technology with bunch of fake information..later he acted like he got messed up with all this things so much that his brain didn’t working..after some days people thought him gone mad..he was thrown out..but he felt relieved n back to India..he promised that day” if he n his next generations will do something,then it would be for India only”…
Later Mr Thompson somehow found out the fakeness n lies of Suraj,coz of one full fledged gadget which was left by mistaken by suraj …he tried to capture him again ; but failed…….


Two persons laughed harshly; like they got to witness some idiotic dumb audio visual..
” how fool those people of planet earth..they thought to conquer us n make us their slave!!”, said first person

” u r right..they just got success on our orbit n started dreaming..they didn’t even know we already invaded their planet many time”, exclaimed the second person..

” moreover no planet has idea that we are the most developed planet in this solar system in view of science..and our extremely well developed civilization exists underground “, a playful proud smile appeared on face of first person as he told all these..

” so just let them first research for some years and then they will land here..but can’t able to find any sign of living”, said second person annoyingly …
He continued;” if they would have think about peace,we may be help out them; but all they got clumsy narrow let them suffer n rot by themselves” ..he was disgusted with war mentality..

” but few good people are there also,like this man”, said the first person as he pointed to Suraj on their computer systems..a bright smile appeared on their face………

After 51 years, Year 2016,Bangalore

Suraj Mishra( our lovable dadaji) has a loving family now..despite his all efforts his son Dilip Mishra could not even qualify for space engineering..he lost his all hope as his grandchildren choosen different paths..although he left ISA ; but he always dreamt that his next generation will land on mars ,which he left in midway…when ISRO succeeded in its maiden attempt MOM,he thought now India will make a place in the first ever elite group by sending human spacecraft to mars..with the new hope he constantly sitting in front of computer system n saw those space related programs again n again..nowadays only those things gave him peace..but ; destiny wrote something precious for him n his dream, which he was unaware..his happiness coming to him…

A mail poped up in his was for her little grand daughter Radhika…he opened it n jumped with happiness & ran toward living room by shouting…….
Precap: Entries of lead characters

This is my very first time to try sci-fi..suggest me something without throwing rotten tomatoes n eggs..bear for sometime…m scaredπŸ˜‰ ..otherwise no update 😝😝


    • S.v

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      Super awesome dadaji as scientist. Lovely. I want to read more as the next part is important part for us. Entry of the hero Arjun and his love Radhika. Lovely update and love you soo much………..

  1. Sammy

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    Rosie di you are a player right ..always teasing us …this was lovely …our dadaji was a scientist .. you know now I am going nuts to see ardhika romance on mars …lol by the way now I am typing something …murder mystery .. for the first time …romance se hatke …don’t know just scratching my head …what to do one shot or three ….a confusion is there …to keep it in one shot or three shots .. but still di pls update this one soon …pls was awesome . .and no rotten egggs πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  2. Brin

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    Awesome episode, dadaji a scientist, is he sending Radhika to mars? Eagerly waiting for the next update. πŸ™‚

  3. Lakshmi05

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    Amazing rossy dear…dadaji is really sweet..he saved mars planet …so now rads going to fulfill his dream… Waiting for next one… Luv

  4. Gianna

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    Am so happy with this sci-fi story but am more happy thatvour cute dadaji was a scientist, waiting eagerly like a minion waiting for a banana for ur next update. Update sooooooooooooon.
    Love uuuuuuuuuuuuu

  5. Dipika

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    Rosie darling m desperately waiting for this ff of urs….i want to beat u for this late posting.. At first chapter i started liking this ff so much…okay okay..ab maaf kr diya tumhe….today’s epi is good.. Cleared the background… Now excited for lead entries….n our dadaji is scientist.. Wow..tht two prsn frm mars i guess arjun’s parents…pls next jaldi u till we go to the

  6. suga

    BANG BANG BANG††††† SUPERBBBBBBBB one unique one awwwwwwww loved it πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ love u πŸ˜€

  7. _Ritu

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    Yipee..finally u posted.. amazing start Rosie Dadaji a scientist…unique and interesting..and how he saved his project was out of the world.. that two person of mars may be Sam and Arjun’s grandparents…and now Radhika would be a scientist too.. πŸ™‚ all excited for nxt one..plz post soon…and where are u going?? not fair ..u showed us chocolate and now not giving no no I want its nxt part soon and also of reincarnation…otherwise get ready to witness a warrior angel.. πŸ™‚ love

  8. Gauri

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    Finally you posted I fely you forgot about the story ….. amazing Rossy you love science fic … guess movies πŸ™‚ waiting for the next loads of love πŸ™‚

  9. Sreee

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    0ohhh di…its a complete shock…dadaji a scientist….woww….so rads is following his foodsteps…great..that too for india…..loved it….di will it be a fully fun package…omg i am waiting to read more….pls do it soon…love u di…muahh

  10. Sweetie

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    Rossy..Who will forget you yaar??First chapter is superb.. πŸ™‚ Yayy!!!Dadaji is a scientist..Lovely.. πŸ˜€ Waiting for next dear..Stay blessed and lots of love.. πŸ™‚

  11. Aasthu

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    wonderful…………………..don’t u ever say its bore………….I’ll kill u……………….bye……………….lub u……………TC…………………do pray 4 me……… internals r up the sleeve………………….

  12. Jessie

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    Rosieeee… we won’t spare u ..we won’t forget uπŸ˜‰πŸ˜› dadaji d scientist… wow!!! Clever of him..n His grand daughter got d chance.. super.. underground civilization in mars.. impressive.. they invaded earth n ppl

    • Jessie

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      (Got posted half way) here don’t know…!! And how they got 2 know wat happened btwn thompson n dadaji.. how dadaji dint notice them landing in space craft.. its so interesting n lovely.. πŸ”Šrotten tomatoes n eggs on demand Rosie.. every writer asking it.. so u ask something else frm nxt time..πŸ˜œπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ˆ TC n loads n loads of love

  13. Roma

    Rosieeeee….muaaaaahhhhhh. …outstanding, marvellous, stupendous, very interesting story. …I just loved it to the coreeeee. ..our lovely dadaji…was space scientist…the way you narrated his past n events, scenario….it’s very intriguing n amazing. …I’m in love with this story already. … plz continue dear. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug. …Happy Friendship Day my sunshineeeeee. …love you loads β™‘β™‘β™‘

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