Manmarziyan- Love you forever (Part 17)

Hi my dear friends….apologies for late update and thanks for all your love and support through your comments…… So here z the next one…..forgive my mistakes I typed in haste…..do let me know your views…..next on Tuesday….. Till then love you all?
When you make promises don’t forget to check with your heart…..if you don’t then you are sure to break many hearts and that includes yours too…..The real pursuit of happiness lies in satisfaction….
Arjun was turning and tossing sides on his masterbed….his sleepless nights spoke how deep he loved radhika…..Every heartbeat of him had her name….his restless soul enlightened
after her arrival in his life…..
Arjun blinked his eyes with shock and amazement after seeing radhika settled on the couch infront of him…

He spoke in his intense voice, “Are you really here or I am dreaming about you.”
Arjun was bewildered when instead of answering his query,she walked to him and made herself comfortable in his arms….
He tightened his grip on her and pulled her more closer until it was hard to breath without hurting the ribs…
Radhika chirped,”Love stays in dream and reality too.”
He leaned on her and buried his face in the crook of her neck….
Inhaling her scent he spoke,”Till when you will race my heartbeats by awarding me with this fading appearances I want you to stay with me forever.”
Arjun stared at her angelic face and got lost in her brown beautiful orbs….
Arjun,”Why are you so beautiful radhika?I wonder along with me how many others gaze at you…I don’t like anyone treating their eyes with you eavesdropping view….I am waiting for the day when my name will be associated to yours….. No one will dare to eye you after that day because my things are only mine….all rights
reserved to me and only me.”
He smiled with determination when she disappeared in thin air…..
Arjun POV,”I can’t wait anymore….this wait and
distance z killing me…..radhika you will have to marry me soon I get what I want either by will or by force….you are just not my love but now you have become my madness…. my passion….my
reason to live….I will propose you tomorrow and then you will always stay with me.”
He slipped in deep slumber after kissing her photo deeply…
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Radhika was crying vigorously burying her face in her knees…..her tears streaming down her wet cheeks….swollen eyes….trembling hands were screaming out her pain…..she was aware of the fact that the person she loved could never be hers….sometimes ignorance z better to relieve a heart….she felt torn between love and commitment but atlast she made a choice to keep her commitment to ranveer,the man who loved her more than his own life….
Radhika POV,”Arjun sir I am sorry but I can’t fulfill my promise to you I hope someday you understand my situation for now I can only promise to prove you innocent and then I will leave you forever, I will go so far that even my shadow won’t reach you….I wish we would have met before all that happened in my life…I wish could confess how much I love you but I can’t.”
She sobbed burying her head in cusion making it wet by her nonstop tears…..
Radhika knew she had to cry her heart out to remain strong infront of arjun….she didn’t wanted him to suspect her feelings for him…..
She got up with a jerk as if something clicked in her brains….she marched towards her wardrobe and pulled out the rack in which she had captured some good old memories….her eyes started pouring after glancing at ranveer’s image….
Radhika moved her fingers all over his face but her tears escaped her eyes to fall on his face,making his photo wet….she brushed away the wetness and closed her eyes to confess something which she considered a grave sin….
Radhika, “I am sorry ranveer….I had no idea that someday I couldn’t make eyecontact with you….I wish I had never come here…I wish I had never met arjun sir….I know this z wrong but still I got carried away….I also know that one sorry won’t fix anything but I just want you to know that I am guilty….I promise I will remain yours my whole life please just give me a hint you have forgiven me….ranveer just few days more than I will go away from here far from arjun sir…..I know I can never repay your favours but I promise to value them whole my life…..please don’t hate me I can never even think of betraying you.”
She rested her head on her pillow and cried till she got her calm back…..
……………………………………………………………………… Today was the day when Arjun mehra was going to go on his knees and ask commitment in return of his undying love….
Arjun was behaving like a teenager who was going to propose a girl first time in life…..he never knew that a girl could attain a place in his heart away from his bed….he always thought women are only meant to warm up his bed but today he felt that how wrong he was about relationships and commitment…..
Arjun always considered marriage a sham which his parents beared and he lost his childhood in their catty fights…. But today he wanted to marry radhika, the girl whom he loved from the bottom of his heart…..
He pulled his car infront of radhika’s building and gestered radhika to come down…..
Radhika who had never expected him here was happy to see him but controlled her excitement….she made a decision to break his heart even if it means losing her last chance to find happiness….
Dressed in white traditional wear with minimal makeup,she walked towards him igniting courage to tell him the truth…..
Arjun moved his greedy eyes all over her face….he wished the world to stop and freeze…..she was one girl he wished to love all his life….he wanted to make her his for eternity….
She greeted him with a small smile and lowered her gaze to avoid meeting his intense gaze….he smiled seeing nervousness….
Arjun tucked her hair strands and asked her to sit inside the car….he drove off but his eyes not averting their gaze on her even for a second…..
Radhika caught him staring and turned her head in opposite direction disclosing her embarrassment…. He smiled and concentrated on his driving thereafter….
Cool breeze flashed on her face and made her eyelids heavy…. She had not slept whole night so it won’t take time for sleep to overcome her……
Arjun shot a glance at her and stopped the car to admire her beauty….he leaned on her sleeping form and kissed her forehead,cheeks ….he stared at her plush lips but controlled himself…he just rubbed his rough thumb over her delicate lips to know how soft they are….
ArjunPOV,”I won’t do anything till I remove all the fear from your eyes….I know you are hiding something big but I promise however bitter the truth z I won’t let you go away from me at any cost.”
He accelerated the car and drove off in high speed to reach his destination….
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Neil was burning with rage after noticing radhika leaving with arjun….he felt radhika was distracted from the plan and will leave him to start afresh with arjun….
He always had feelings for her but never confessed because he was aware of the fact that radhika was stuck in her past and even he wanted nothing more than his revenge for which he left behind all his dreams, aspirations….his desire to live his own way…..sona’s death broke every positive thing left in his heart but still somewhere he had not forgotten his feelings completely…..Let’s who wins in this,undying love or unspoken feelings….
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So do let me know your reviews friends….
Precap….arjun proposes radhika….radhika’s refusal…..radhika’s past revealed….. Neil’s immense hatred….arjun makes radhika confess her feelings….. Love or commitment who has greater place in her heart?

39 comments

  1. Ritu

    a emotional epi..rads pain was heart touching.. and neil also has feelings for rads..I thought he likes Sam..anyways jst loved it..waiting for the truth to be out…plz post soon..love u..tc

  2. Nandini

    Arjun doesn’t love radhikg it just attraction he just love her outer beauty not inner beauty and this is not a love

    • Supriya

      I won’t critise your thoughts dear I would just say arjun experienced love at first sight for radhika….you will c his love in next one…..

  3. Brin

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    Awesome episode, I thought Neil would have feeling for Sam but I like the direction the story is going, I love the war between Arjun and Neil, eagerly waiting for the next update. Supriya you nail it, well done. πŸ™‚

    • Supriya

      Thanks a ton bring?your comments always make me smile at your curiosity….happy to know that you r happy with the track…..next on Tuesday…. Loads of love?stay blessed?

  4. Sammy

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    Omg love triangle Neil arjun and radhika well done suppu ..pls update a long one next time …just cant wait for arjun’s heart break .

    • Supriya

      Thanks Sammy darling?i always find out very triangles fascinating when its abt a girl…..there z always a curiosity to know who gets the girl…..next on Tuesday….. Loads of love?stay blessed?

  5. Suga

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    Priyaaaaa missed u yaaar….. Feeling sad for rads πŸ™ Neil having feelings for rads ohhhhhh dats superbbbbbbbb πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ arjun part I love D most πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ loved it πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ love u darling πŸ˜€

    • Supriya

      Thanks a ton my sugary sugar?even I missed you guys alot promise won’t disappear for too long…..arjun z hot as hell wish I meet him in real someday…..next on Tuesday…. Love you loads….tc?

  6. Gauri

    Awesome Emotional…Beautiful Supriya πŸ™‚ ok now questions will NeSam be together or not… I want to know more on DM’s role in Sona’s case…. will neil hurt Radhika due to his doubt…. and Also I want to know more on Ranveer πŸ™‚ G8 even I have questions πŸ˜€ this makes me happy waiting for next and devil πŸ™‚ loads of love stay blessed

    • Supriya

      Thanks alot di?omg you are getting questions after knowing this m more happy than you….m having a effect on you nd this z boosting my confidence…..now your answers….no story btw nesam for now….I don’t know abt future…. Dm’s deeds will be revealed after radhika proves arjun’s innocence in sona’s death…..you don’t have to wait for ranveer’s past m revealing in next….devil very soon dear….loads of love?muaaaaaaaah….stay blessed?

  7. Rosie

    Nothing to say except now m getting curious even more…what might happen in past so that all this happens now…amazing supu dear

    • Supriya

      Thanks Rosie di?omg you curious head?m so happy to know that you loved it….di will reveal abt ranveer in next one…..love you loads?stay blessed?

  8. S.v

    |Registered Member

    Supriya where were u yaar ?? Arjun and his dream was cute ans radhika has a feeling for arjun but not showing it out . And neil has a feeling for rads ?? I never thought that. Precap makes me happy finally rads openes her heart to arjun and she too confess her feelings yippiee. Love u soo much darling. Post next one soon wanna know how arjun makes his proposal . Love u lods and bear hugs and kisses. Muuhhhaaa.

    • Supriya

      Thanks my swthrt?sorry to make you wait….won’t disappear next time…..now your answers….yup Neil always loved rads but never confessed…..your comments make me feel on the top of the world…. Next mein you will know rads past nd arjun working hard to get rads confession….. Love you dear…..muaaaaaaaah…. Tc?

  9. Gianna

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    So glad u updated this, missing ur stories so much. Awesome update this was but the precap looks more intriguing. Waiting for the nxt

  10. Jessie

    |Registered Member

    Gosh.. am going mad after reading precap.. its very much intriguing.. its awesome update.. lets see how calm n steady Arjun behaves after Rads refusal n past..waiting 4 nxt update

    • Supriya

      Thanks Jessie dear?no don’t go mad now becoz you will explode after reading next one?next on Tuesday… Loads of love?stay blessed?

  11. Aastha

    awesome baby sis…………….update ” love has no limits” when u r free………..love u……….TC……..keep ur hands off trouble………………

    • Supriya

      Thanks assthu sweety?lhnl very soon dear….I have started it just few touchups left will post by tom morn or afternoon…… Loads of love?stay blessed?

  12. Rg2015

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    Hi supriya it’s nice and lovely. Yet I would like to knw what will happen whn arjun knows d truth of rads. Will Neil b able to let rads go Becos of his love for her?

    • Supriya

      Thanks Rg dear?neil z more conserned abt his revenge he needs rads for his plan….he will back out when rads will prove Arjun’s innocence….loads of love and a big hug for you?

  13. neetz

    Wow supppu nyc epi ..loved the triangle πŸ˜‰ getting more interesting πŸ˜€
    Y r u not updating jaanemaan πŸ™ its been long tym u updated it .i lyke that a lot ..pls update that aswell when u get tym πŸ™‚

  14. dipika

    Supriya Darling it was soooo amazing ki end kab aaya pata hi nahi chala..m so lost in the story..n i like the most starting line…pursuit of happiness lies in satisfaction.. so true lines yarrr…Omg Radz going to break arjun’s heart..no no…n precap has so many things in it..m sooo excited… love you..tc

  15. Roma

    Awesome, marvellous, outstanding episode, supriyaaaaa my sweeeeeetheart….missed you sooooo sooooo much ..i waited very looooooong for this story. …finally u updated this. …episode was really superbbbb. ..arjun s feelings for rads n rads feelings for arjun. ..sooo heart touching. …arjun going to propose rads…but she will refuse….ahhhh…neil also has feelings for rads… .ohhhh…but what’s ranveer’s secret here….keep it up honeyyy. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh πŸ™‚

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