Manmarziyan- Love you forever (Part 15)

Hey friends….first toh sorry for late update…. I know I have delayed this one…..guyzz m planning to end love has no limits after abt 5 more updates….. I have started ‘this heart of mine still loves you’ so need to end one ff…..so sorry for that….I can’t end Jaanemaan neither love you forever nor devil because now toh story z unfolding….chalo now let’s start….enjoy the ride….do let me know your reviews…..
Arjun parked his car infront of radhika’s building…..as both of them were staring at eachother unknowingly many thoughts were streaming in their minds….arjun averted his gaze and spoke…..radhika actually I have something for you….
After hearing his intense voice she realized that he was uncomfortable by her stares….she spoke in a crumbled voice…. What sir?…
He smiled…. I said I have a gift for you…
Radhika hesitated…. No sir I can’t accept gift from you….I mean you are my boss and….before she could complete her sentence he kept his index finger on her lips……do you ever shut up?….see I wanted to give you this gift long back but never got the opportunity…. radhika it z just a gift…..please don’t say no to this one……his POV…. She z so stubborn but yet so cute…..
He removed a wooden circular shaped box from his jeans pocket….he opened it and showed her….it was a heart shaped pendant with ‘love’ incripted on it….it chain attached to it had small tiny pearls….it was both beautiful and expensive…..
She spoke in a stumbled voice…..I can’t accept this….it z so much expensive….
Arjun fumed…. Radhika I said you have to accept this….his POV…. Soon you will accept my love…
Radhika got scared after hearing his intense voice….. OK sir…
He smiled….thanks radhika….
She took it from his hand….She was struggling to put it on but she was unable to lock it behind her neck….
Arjun was watching her with immense love in his eyes….he was waiting to help her….
He mumbled…. May I help you….
She nodded with a shy smile….he moved closer to her until he could breath in her scent…. He buried his head in her neck and nuzzled his nose on the skin there….all this time she had closed her eyes…..her heart was beating faster with each coming second….As the heart pendant touched her skin….her heart skipped a beat….different sensations were awoken in her body…..he still had his hand on collarbone…..he was living this moment…he was tapping his fingers on her skin…..this was one of the best moments of his life….
He turned her to face him…..he cupped her face and tucked her hair strands behind her ear….you look breathtaking….his POV…. I wish to spend my whole life watching you…
She distanced herself from him and whispered…… I think I should leave now…..thanks for the gift….
He smiled and moved backwards without turning his back to her…..he watched her until she was out of his sight…..he got in his car and drove off….she watched his car and whispered….I want to trust you arjun sir but I cannot hurt Neil…I need to find out the truth before it z too late…
She touched the pendent but suddenly the thought of ranveer crossed her mind…..her POV…. This z wrong I can’t think about arjun sir in that way…..I can’t betray ranveer even though he z not in my life right now…..he has loved me more than his life and I can’t move on now….i never loved him but can’t break the commitment I made…..
She removed the pendent and kept it in her clutch….tomorrow I will return this when I meet sir…..
Again her heart was full of guilt and burden which she forgot in arjun’s presence…..
Suddenly she was dragged by someone….. She tried to struggle but that grip on her wrist was both hard and strong…..it was turning painful….atlast she gathered all her strength and freed herself from that person……Neil what was this…
He spoke in a angry voice….I should be the one asking this question….. What the hell were you doing with arjun….Have you forgotten what he did with sona….
She tried to convince him… Neil I don’t know but I feel arjun sir z innocent….
He grabbed her hand tight and pierced his nails into her soft skin….I never expected this from you….do you even know how hurt I am after hearing this from you….he tightened his grip on her….she winced in pain…..Aaaahhhh….Neil please you are hurting me…
He fumed….No you are hurting me….just think about my sona…. Her tears…her cry for help….her lifeless body….you will understand how bad arjun mehra z….
She struggled to free herself…. Neil please let me go….you are hurting me….
He fumed and grabbed her jaw and starting digging his nails in her cheeks….radhika I don’t want to hurt you…..but you are making this difficult for me…. Believe me arjun z the worst man born on this earth….don’t fall in his trap….he just wants you to quetch his thirst and hunger for you….once he gets what he wants he will dump you….you only trust me….
She was scared but still she mumbled in a low voice…. I trust you Neil more than myself….. her POV…. But I also trust arjun sir….I need proofs to prove him innocent….
He whispered…. Radhika I will never let anything happen to you….I promise to protect you always….just trust me always….
She spoke with confidence in her eyes….I can never lose my trust on you….you are my best friend and this bond we share can never change….
He placed a tender kiss on her forehead…. You are the best person in my life….I am sorry for hurting you didn’t mean to…. but I lost my control when I saw you with arjun…all the haunting memories of sona’s death flashed in front of my eyes….he destroyed sona but I will never let him destroy you…
She nodded…. Her POV… I know you care for me….I can never doubt you but I think there z something which z missing…. which we are not aware of….I don’t think arjun sir z responsible for everything…. God please help me to prove my point to Neil…
He smiled….Are you ready to execute tomorrow’s plan….radhika amrit mehra z very shrewd….are you sure you want to do this….you know there z a chance to get caught…. I can’t risk your life for my revenge…
She smiled and corrected him….our revenge…. Sona was and will always remain my sister…..what amrit did with her was shameful….
he nodded and spoke…. Time to pay for your sins amrit mehra….I will not spare you…
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Radhika entered birdsong rubbing her palms nervously…. She wiped the sweat on her forehead and mumbled…. This not the time to get scared it z time to scare amrit….radhika you have to do this….
She glanced at amrit’s cabin….her POV… you destroyed many lives now I will make you realize the value of someone’s life…
She knew the fact that amrit had a habit to drink black coffee after certain intervals….she glanced at the boy who was carrying amrit’s coffee on his tray….She signalled him….he came to her and mumbled… Do you need something mam…
She whispered… I will give you money which you can’t earn even if you work whole your life….you just need to let me do my work and keep your mouth shut….
His eyes shone with greed….but what I have to do….
She removed a small incline glass bottle from her clutch…. You know what z this…
He stared at the bottle and whispered…. What?
She gave him a evil grin….matenopatria…..one of the strongest and effective poison ever….
He got scared listening to her….you want to kill amrit mam…
Radhika…Not so early…her POV…amrit has to pay for her sins….I won’t let her die so soon….she needs to suffer alot…she can’t get away so easily….
He nodded… Neil z right about you….you are a very good player….no one can guess your intentions after seeing your beautiful face….but you keep my money ready….
She glared him….you do what you are told to do….don’t instruct me and remember if anything goes wrong you don’t know me….if truth comes out arjun will fire you but if you take my name….Neil will kill you….and then your family will be left with nothing…. If you get caught arjun will get you arrested….you will stay for a night after that Neil will help you escape…. We have a backup plan….so don’t panic and concentrate…don’t show up like you are upto something in front of amrit…that woman z hell smart…
He nodded and left to reach amrit’s cabin…
He entered her cabin and kept the cup on her desk and stared at her nervously…. He had mixed the poison in her coffee…. But he covered up his nervousness and left her cabin…
Radhika was watching amrit through the transperant glass bides…her face bloomed with happiness when amrit gulped down the coffee….her POV…. Just half an hour and the game begins,amrit….they don’t know the name of this poison so they won’t find the antidote…..But don’t worry amrit I won’t let you die…
So guyzz this z it….do comment nd let me know your reviews….

Precap…. Amrit rushed to the hospital…. Her condition critical….. Radhika’s plan B….

37 comments

  1. sammy

    Aww suppu radhika attacked amrit …oh god she will really regret it later . …and pls update other ffs too..nice chappy πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    • Supriya

      Sammy amrit or arjun’s dm z grey shaded character….only gud aspect z that she loves arjun alot….you will know more…. will update soon….loads of love?

  2. Supu dear after ur first bomb that u r going to end lhnl….m just read this…but don’t know what I read….u r going to end up ur ff…m saddy…

    • Supriya

      Di m so sorry to make you sad but it had to end one day nd now managing 5 ffs z becoming difficult for me…. chalo I promise 7 more updates of lhnl….r you happy now???di do reply me….love you?

  3. Niharika

    Di at last you updated this ff now I feel you should end Janneman not this ff . I don’t know but now I feel this has some more thrril compared to your other ff . So please don’t end it so soon .Please Supriya di .

    • Supriya

      Thanks darling for your comment?dear you have a misconception….m ending love has no limits not this one…..this one has a long way to go….dear I can’t end Jaanemaan so soon but m ending love has no limits….will update soon….loads of love

  4. Awesome episode, I think Radhika is going to regret it later when she find out Amrit has cancer, for Radhika sake I hope nothing happen to Amrit, waiting eagerly for the next update. πŸ™‚

    • Supriya

      Thanks alot brin?abt amrit she won’t die becoz rads has different plans with her….you will know more….will update soon….loads of love?

  5. Gianna

    Awesome update Supriya loved it very much. Looks like the games have started waiting to know who will win in the end. Si eager to know rads plan b. Post soon. Stay blessed ???

  6. priya

    awesome episode ……………………..looking forward for nxt one ………..update soon …luv ya …tc

  7. Rg

    Hi supriya gud one. I loved it. So sad abt love has no limits. I must say for me it had it’s own charm m But all d other ffs too were gud and fantastic … I miss all ur ffs. By d way tell me has rads started having feelings for arjun? Pls. And also do give us d past of rads and ranveer. Thanks.

    • Supriya

      Thanks Rg dear?now your answer…yes rads feels for arjun but won’t commit to him for two reasons first her past nd second Neil’s hatred for him….will update soon….loads of love?

  8. Gauri

    Hi Supriya πŸ™‚ this Radhika is really dangerous ….she attacked the old lady….I want to know what Amrit did with Sona…and where has Sam gone…will there be anything between Neil and Sam? well there is more but will wait for the next one πŸ™‚ stay blessed πŸ™‚ lov u

    • Supriya

      Thanks alot di?rads z both smart nd dangerous here…..yup will reveal what amrit did with sona….she won’t die….rads has different plans…..abt nesam than I never gave it a thought becoz here Neil z clouded by his revenge…. will update soon…loads of love and million hugs for you?

  9. lavanya

    it was awesome….happy that radhika is trusting her heart….hope she finds that arjun didn’t intentionally kill sona…and feeling bad for dm…because she is the only person whom arjun has by his side…and without her arjun might be left broken hearted….and please do continue…

    • Supriya

      Thanks lavanya….don’t worry amrit won’t die rads nd Neil will make her pay for her sins….abt arjun yes he will be devastated…. will update soon…..stay blessed?

  10. Jessie

    She finally attacked Amrit.. God.. when she finds everything how will.she face Arjun.. he won’t forgive her for hurting his granny.. I thought she will try to clear abt sons when Arjun is calm n sweet with her.. when her still trusts Arjun why she attacked d old lady.. Guess..Sam will make her entry now..

    U are gonna end siyappa queen n sadu story.. hmm… I thought it wud be jaaneman.,ok .bt plz give lotssa ardhika moments ..

      • Supriya

        Dear Jessie thanks for your comment?…..DM z grey shaded in my story will reveal more in upcoming updates… abt arjun he z innocent rads will find out soon….will reveal past soon….loads of love?

  11. Aastha

    Hello cutie pie……how are u??? Sad ? that you r gonna stop ” love you forever”………but happy that others ate still going on……….ardhika moments were really cute…….so Arjun in one way proposed Radhika………Neil’s anger OMG……..and his display of anger…..what wad that ????? so Rads took her move to execute Amrit………..will she be all right??????? or will she die a painful and slow death.????????? When will you make Sam enter with enough proofs to make Arjun realize the truth about Rads ??????? Please reveal all the past………and do update ” love that lasts forever”…………bye……love u…..myah……?

      • Supriya

        Dear assthu thanks for your comment…..abt love has no limit 7 more updates left….now your answers…..dm won’t die rads has planned to torture her not to kill so that she confess her deeds…..arjun will be devastated rads will feel guilty to hurt him…..he won’t believe Sam he loves rads too much….will update soon…love you…muaaah… Tc?

  12. Ritu

    nice..Feeling bad for Arjun..waiting for his reaction after knowing about dm..post nxt soon..

  13. As usual amazing dear…..ardhika scenes were superb……but feeling sad for arjun….oh my gosh!!!! Radhu attacked dm…she is very dangerous yaar…. she trust arjun…even she wants find out d real truth…prove to Neil arjun is innocent ….but why not DM…..if she dought on her????… pls reveal soon rads past n sona’s death mystreys….waiting for next one…love u lot….. tc…

    • Supriya

      Thanks janu for this lovely comment?dm z grey shaded only gud aspect z dat she loves arjun a lot……loads of love…. Tc?

  14. Roma

    Awesome, wowwww supriya dearyyy. ..superrrrrrbbbb episode…ardhika moments were veryyyyyyy awesoooooome. ..loved it soooo muchhhhhh. .. feeling bad for arjun, his love for rads is very pure n deep. …don’t know what will be his rxn when raneil truth will come out….rads giving slow poison to dm….whoa…precap is very interesting. …supriya my sweeeeeet friend. …very lovely narration n awesoooooome dialogues. ..loved it to the coreeeee. …keep it up honeyyy. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh β™‘β™‘β™‘

    • Supriya

      Thanks Roma di?no actually I don’t have words to thank you….you always make me feel so special….you are such a darling….. Loads of love…. muaaah…. Tc?

      • Roma

        Thx a lotttttttttt honeyyy. …muaaaaahhhhhh….your hard work deserve appreciation. ….I wanna chat u my dearrrr. ….tell me how can I connect with u……or tell abha/gauri…im connected to her she will tell me….love you loads. …muaaaaahhhhhh πŸ™‚

    • Supriya

      Thanks gayu darling?no sorry baby you enjoy with your relatives…. Have fun dear…..loads of love?

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