Manmarziyan- Love you forever (Part 11)

Hey guys this z your supriya……. First sorry for late update….really busy this days….now I m back with part 11….do read and let me know…..
Mystery man was gazing outside the window of his master bedroom…… He had closed his eyes…. but the so called heartless person had tears rolling down his eyes……suddenly he whispered…..sona…why you left me….

Flashback…..
A boy was running ahead of a girl and the girl was literally dragging her feet…..she was dead tired……she was screaming in her chirpy voice….. Neil bhai please wait naa…
She had all her attention on her brother whose image was fading as he went far away……she knew how to bring her brother back…..suddenly she collapsed on the floor…..her brother glanced at her but was taken aback……he ran to her as fast as his legs could take him…..he reached the spot and quick kept her head on his lap and caressing her hair he mumbled……. Sona I m sorry….please open your eyes….you know you are not just my sister…..you are my baby…..I love you the most in this world…..if you want beat me….scold me….punish me in your own desired way but please wake up….he brought her close to his heart….sona please open your eyes…..
She opened her eyes and burst out laughing catching her tummy……bhai anyone can fool you easily….

Neil with a annoyed face…..How many times I have to tell you that I hate such jokes…sona when I saw you like this I thought for that moment my whole world stopped….. sona you are not just my sister….you are my heartbeat….my breath…..my everything….. Stop playing this nasty pranks on me…..
He got up but she clutched his fist and pulled him down…
She grabbed her ears and innocently whispered….sorry bhai….I won’t do it again….promise….. But bhai z it true that you can do anything for my happiness?
Neil looked straight in her eyes….. I can give up my life to keep you happy….. I can kill anyone who will become the reason of your tears….. I mean it baby…..I will destroy everything which comes in the way of your happiness…..
She hugged him tightly and buried her face in his chest……I am sorry for hurting you bhai….
He kept patting her head…..it z kk my doll…..now come let’s go….
She made a puppy face….my legs are hurting bhai….
He lifted her effortlessly….. Clutching her protectively in his arms….he walked towards the majestic house ahead…..
Neil….sona day by day you are becoming naughty…..you don’t fail to take advantage of my undying love and affection for you baby…….

Sona….I can do this only with you because I know I m your world and you never refuse me for anything……I m afraid what if I ask something which you won’t be able to give me….
Neil….. This will never happen….. I can bring the sky down for your happiness…..
Sona…..I love you bhai…
Neil…..love you to the eternity, my doll….
Flashback ended and Neil had opened his eyes…..his face indicating dried tears…..eyes filled with pain and anguish….. Arjun today only because of you….I lost my sister….my family….everything which I loved more than my life…..you will pay for your sins…..I will make sure you will regret living this life…..you will beg for death but I won’t let you die…..I will give you a worst life where you will pray for death every moment……
He was brought out of his stream of thoughts when he felt someone touched his shoulder….
He turned back and found radhika….
Radhika….. Two years have passed Neil…..we both lost our happiness but look what you have become…… When I look at the past I wonder this z the same person who risked his life to
save a unknown person…..who believed in life….but now you yourself are a dead body…..
Neil looked straight in her eyes and answered..
…the Neil you are talking about z dead long back…..this person standing in front of you can hurt anyone for his revenge…..

Radhika in a frustrated voice……why don’t you understand that this revenge z ruining you too….
He gave it back…..when everything you love has been stolen from you then sometimes all you have left z revenge……this revenge z the my reason to live…..I won’t die till I get justice for my sister…. There z vast difference between your and my pain…..I know I have dragged you with me in this revenge but I will release you after some days then you are free to live your life……
Radhika in a pained voice….. Life for me stopped two years back…..I am just passing my days…..
He wiped her tears….Radhika you should move on……you have whole life left ahead….you are just 22 how you will spend it alone….move on radhika….
Radhika…..can you move on Neil?
Neil…I can’t your life stopped but my life ended that day when I saw my sona lying in pool of blood…..

Radhika……maybe the truth z something else…..maybe arjun z innocent….
Neil jerked her hand…..what you mean?my sister was the culprit…. you can believe the person you just met but you are distrusting the person you know since 15 years….I thought you understand my pain but I guess I m wrong…
She cupped his face…..I trust you Neil this z the only reason I am here…..our relationship z transparent this z the reason I spoke freely infront of you…..Neil you are my childhood friend…. I trust you blindly…..even if i am not fine doing this all then too I am doing this all things for you….because I fear to lose your friendship….. I know I am the only person alive for whom you care…..I value this fact….
He gave her a hug and whispered……thanks for being there Radhika…..
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Love z blind,deaf and insane……it does not know any limitations…… When we love someone we love blindly without acknowledging their negatives……it z human nature…..when we know that someone we love z wrong but then too we support them blindly….. z it right?no it z not we are bringing their downfall in our blind love…..think about it…..showing the mistakes of your loved ones won’t take them away from you….but if you support them blindly then you will ruin them….think wisely….

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Mehra Mansion….
Arjun was lost in radhika’s thoughts……she had turn into his most precious possession….. He loved her more than his life….
Arjun POV…..radhika yesterday was the best day of time I had you in my arms….close to my heart….I could still hear your slow moderate heartbeats…..radhika you are only mine….I will never let you go away from me….I will marry you soon…..I don’t care about my image…about what people think about me…..I only care about you radhika…..I only want you…..
He was brought out of thoughts when he heard the doorbell..
He opened the door to find cops in front of him….
What he heard was…..arjun mehra you are under arrest for brutally murdering sujoy chauhan..or
This was left him crestfallen……arjun’s ego was hurt badly…..this incident had a great effect on him mentally…..

………………………………………………………………………dm was unconsolable after hearing about Arjun ……he was her breath…. She felt as if someone had sucked life out of her…..
But old lady was smart…..she knew what she had to do to save Arjun…..she was aware of the fact that her aru had thrashed sujoy for misbehaving with radhika and radhika was eye witness of this all…..only radhika could save her aru this was not hard to guess for the brainy women…..
She enquired about radhika’s whereabouts and took her car to reach her destination…..
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Here,radhika was watching news on her TV……indeed Neil’s plan had worked…..he was the mastermind of all the events of yesterday…… Just then she heard the knock on the door…..she quickly switched off the TV and marched to open the door…..

The sight shocked her…..the person standing before her was none other than amrit mehra…..the hardcore shrewd business women and arjun’s dm…..the old lady had the ability to smell dangers before they could touch her aru but radhika was no less…..Neil had made her aware of dm’s protectiveness for her aru…..she knew put on a show…..she made a calm posture to make sure that old lady does not detect anything……
Dm…..you are radhika Mishra right?
Radhika…..yes madam……
Dm…..call me Mrs mehra or dadi if you wish to….
Radhika…kk dadi…
Dm….I don’t need to give to reason for my visit as I know you were watching the news before approaching me…..

Radhika was shocked…. This women was more smart than she had expected….. Her ears were damn sharp and had eyesight of a eagle…..no wonder Neil was worried about her being the obstacle in his revenge path….
Dm……I can do anything to save my aru…..you know it very well that he thrashed sujoy for misbehaving with you,don’t you?
Radhika knew that she had to keep calm in front of this lioness….. she was old but was dangerous than arjun himself….
Radhika…. Yes I know it dadi….
Dm….I want you to talk in favour of my aru in front of police…. you need to come with me rightnow….I won’t let my aru stay in jail even for one night….I have called my lawyer….you just need to tell what you saw…..m I clear?
Radhika in a hesitant voice….. Yes dadi….

Indeed old woman was strong and fearless..
Dm…..I had never thought that we will meet like this…..but all this z destiny, I guess….you are exactly like my aru described you……indeed you are very beautiful radhika….. Just remember if you ever think about hurting my aru then I won’t spare you…..amrit mehra can hurt anyone for her aru’s happiness…..remember this….
Radhika was dumbstruck after hearing this…..
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Here Sam had ransacked her room……she was hurt after seeing arjun’s deteriorating image……they had spend years in building his image and today everything was going away…..
Her form was something never expected….. Her messy hair….her eyes filled with tears showed what a effect arjun had on her……

Sam POV……arjun you don’t care for me anymore but I care for you the most…..I won’t let your stupid love ruin your career…..you like it or not I don’t care but I will show that radhika what place I have in your life…….
So guyzzz this z it…..hope you liked it…..plz do comment and give me your reviews…… eagerly waiting for them….

Precap…… Arjun gets Bail…… Neil questions radhika’s consern for arjun……Sam insults radhika…… Aradhika sweet moments……

35 comments

  1. Rg

    Hi supriya so it’s indeed Neil who has done all this with of course radz help. But he was described as rude and threatening towards rads. Am curious abt tat. So d gal who dies was indeed Neil’s sister… How will radz earn arjuns forgiveness? How will they patch up? And hey how is nesam going to meet? I Supriya I understand this one is will take time. Am still curious as to how things r going to unfold. Had radz started feeling for arjun? Fantastic ff. I loved it.

    • Supriya

      Thanks Rg for ur comment…..I can feel u r too much curious…..now ur answers….. Neil z r8 from his point of view…..abt Arjun’s forgiveness then here even he committed mistakes in the past…..u will know abt them in upcoming updates….. rads has started liking arjun but she z not aware of it……will try to update soon…. Love u loads….. Tc

  2. mystry man s neil ? ? ? but wat behind sona death???? is loved arjun????? ? armit mehra dhadhi wooooowwwwwww she s too smart n awesome women ? ? ? loved it ? hope soon misunderstand ll cleared ? ? ? but wat about adi in rads life???? ? ? ? love u ? ? ? take care ?

    • Supriya

      Dear suga thanx for the amazing comment….. you will get all your answers in upcoming updates for now just telling that Neil z r8 from his point of view…..love you….tc?

  3. Hope

    I’m gr8
    😛
    i was ryt abt Neil being Mystery man… I’m doing a fist pump in d air ryt now… Hi hi
    😀 😀
    the plot just thickened..and its making me curious…
    I just wanna hi-fi u darling….

    • Supriya

      Thanks hope?if u r curious than m happy…..gud u r sharp dat u could guess it…..loads of love….

  4. Shree

    Wow!! Neil si mystery man!! I had second thoughts that it could be Saral too… Sona is dead?! Sad… Is he blaming Arjun cause he broke her heart?! Is she the one who committed suicide?! Raneil friends?! God!! What is Radhika’s past?! Sam is insane!! Dm is killer dadi!! So smart and sharp.. Precap is a bit confusing…

    Loved the update baby!! Post soon.

    Love you ??

    • Supriya

      Thanks shree dear?i can answer only some questions r8 now……sona z dead….Neil z r8 from his point of view….raneil r frds….abt arjun u will know in upcoming updates……loads of love?

  5. Gauri

    OMG this neil is dark…but I like him….now I am thinking what will happen next…amazing Supriya…you are too good…writing so many stores with different twist…wow hats off girl..keep it going waiting for the next one 🙂 love you stay blessed 🙂

    • Supriya

      Thanks di….if u r curious then m happy….. well after reading ur last sentence m jumping in happiness here…..if the compliment z coming from u then it z no less than an award for me……loads of love…..tc?????

  6. aastha

    finally you revealed that it is Neil who wants to see Arjun broken……..his past with his sis sona was very cute to read…………………. so Rads is his childhood friend……..that’s y she is supporting him for his revenge…………bt was it Neil or sme1 else who slapped her cheeks ??? was it Neil’s plan to make Sujoy misbehave with Rads?????????……………..how is Arjun connected to his sister’s death ??????? Arjun arrested?? oh no……….bt his dm is very intelligent and sharp……………..I loved her questionare with Rads…………..sad that Sam is broke bt happy that she will bring out the truth………………love u………TC………when r u gonna update Jannemaan???????????????

      • Supriya

        My sweety thanx for the lovely comment…..assthu r8 now not revealing everything….. it was Neil who slapped rads he can hurt anyone to take his sis revenge….. but he cares for rads….everything z Neil’s plan…..abt arjun u will know in upcoming updates…..sona z dead….will try to update soon…love you dear……tc

  7. K my Supriya dear, I wanna ask something,I knew itz neil coz u said once but why he hurt her before if they have a 15 year friendship..that’s too torture..i wish all of them to be free from pain soon.. N u also told Arjun is not a culprit on case of sona’s death..even he was at pain that time..when radhika told him it clearly visible on his face..enough of my enquire…be soon dear…post other ff..tc??

    • Supriya

      Thanks di?neil z r8 from his point of view….arjun z not completely r8 in my story will reveal in upcoming updates…. Love u loads….tc

  8. Hey Priya dear….amazing one…omg mystery man is Neil..raneil child hood friends…many twist yaar…arjun’s dm very clever …soon reveal radhu’s past too…story be very interesting…I loved it…precap superb…waiting next one…pls update ur other ff too…love u tc…muaaahhh.,

  9. Gianna

    Good one Supriya so Neil is the mystery man and he are radz are childhood friends wow. DM killed it today wow what a lady. Now I am more intrigued to the story. Loads of love to u. Tc

  10. nita

    Hii nice episode…. I didn’t expected tht Neil wll slap his chasini so sad….hope radhika wll change his revenge nature…eagerly waiting for Nxt one… From Nxt episode plss mention the date whn you wll post your update it’s a request plsss…love you for the loving update

    • Supriya

      Thanks dear….will surely mention the date of next update now onwards….. Love you…tc

  11. Roma

    Awesome, wowww lovely marvellous episode…I knew the mystery man was neil…I was damn sure about it. …n Sona was his lovely sister, so sad for her death….supriya it was really awesome twist….rads helping her childhood friend neil in his revange….arjun madly in love with rads….but sam also determined to bail him out…dm very strong lady…I’m curious how will nesam going to meet…keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. . . .

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