Manmarziyan- A Lot Like Love (Chapter 15)

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Chapter 15
Beeping sound of heart rate machine made Radhika realized she was on hospital bed. Her eyes took couple of minutes to stable to the brightness of sudden light and saw a nurse hovering around her bed.

“ sister………” She whispered in low tone which was enough for nurse to realized Radhika got her consciousness back.. She called doctor to check her up.

“ Radhika now you are completely fine ..No more surgeries…” Doctor who was in his late 50’s and having soothing smile said after checking Radhika’s report.

“Thank you doctor…When I supposed to go home?? Hospital’s medicinal smells making me sicker…” Radhika said smilingly.

Doctor laughed “ Any time soon you can get rid of it..You are absolutely fine now”

After doctor left NeSam, Sonali –Raj, jai and nandini came to Radhika, they asked her about her health. She chitchatted with them smilingly. Arjun was watching her leaning on hospital’s room door.

“Neil I didn’t expected it from you” She said pouting her face

“ Chashini, I know but didn’t get anything better to stop you…we care about you and can’t afford to lose you…I’m sorry…”

“its okay Neil…” Radhika said

Soon after while all left and Arjun came to her

“ Radhika are you still mad at me?? “ arjun asked radhika touching her forehead.

“NO..after all you did this for me…” She said smilingly.

“ Okay…I will be back after completing your discharge formalities….” Arjun said relived and sighed.

“ okay..My phone?”

Arjun handed her phone “ Get ready..”

She nodded happily.

After completing payment and discharge formalities he came to Radhika’s room.

“Radhika..are you rea….” He said entering into her room and found empty bed. He searched if she was in washroom but she was nowhere to be found.

“ Excuse me…You are Arjun Na??Patient’s relative “Nurse said entering into the room.

Arjun nodded and asked about Radhika’s where about to her.
“That Girl….Radhika….Left this note for you…” Nurse handed a chit to Arjun.

He was clueless about note and why Radhika left it for him.He opened the chit with questioning and worried look and got shocked after reading the content.

“ Arjun I am living….I am sorry…Its over….”

Arjun throws the chit and ran to elevator, while waiting for elevator he saw from window glass that Radhika was waving for Taxi. He hurriedly rushed to the downstairs by steps.

Taxi haulted in front of Radhika and she was about step in, she felt a strong grip; got jerk and found Arjun breathing heavily.

“ Radhika, whats that chit means?you forgave me right?? “ arjun asked huffing

“ Don’t touch me…” She jerked his hand from her arm

“You are mad at me Radhika?? You said you are not… ”

“Now you get that very well MR Arjun Mehra how its feel when someone very special stabbed you on your back by speaking sweet words on your face…I too did the same…now why r you questioning me….” Radhika said through gritted teeth.

“ His is my dad Arjun..I don’t know anything about him he okay or just cares about you,your happiness and about your family……but I too have my family through its broken..Still I care about it…”

“ Radhika please..we will get him to you…” Arjun said pleadingly..Neil and Jai were watching them as they just came out from jai’s legs checkup who was on wheel chair.

“ You know I got stabbed and shot for you and your family..but now it’s enough..I just wants to be safe…if I stayed with you then I too will be soon dead..i don’t want to die….”

“ Radhika I did wrong and I’m sorry about it…but come on listen t…” Arjun try to say but Radhika cut him off.

“ Mr Arjun Mehra…I was with you only for your came behind me but I had it all…You and Me are over” Radhika said and got into taxi slamming the door on Arjun’s face , leaving devastated Arjun behind.

As she reached her apartment she bang the door. She already texted Richa that she was coming.
Richa opened the door and Radhika bust inside in anger.

“What happened Radzz???why are looking like angry bird?? Despite you should have look like love bird….where is your Arrr…” Richa stopped abruptly when she saw Radhika’s death glare.

Richa cupped her face and asked her about what happened

“Richa…I broke up with Arjun….”Radhika burst into vigorous cry..She was inconsolable.

Richa tried to pacify her many way…After some time NeSam too came to her and tried to divert her decision of break up. They told her that Arjun locked himself in his room and hurting himself by continuously punching to the punching bag.

But As Radhika didn’t budge like a stone who would made other’s to change their path.

“ See guys..I have made my decision…I don’t want listen anybody…Please leave me alone for some time….I know you guys care about me but I want to rest…..Please….” Radhika said rudely and went to her bedroom and locked herself.

After some time NeSam left and Richa too went to office.

Radhika took her phone and dialed to Dilip
“ The number you are calling is currently switched off..Please try later….” A robotic girl voice of Network Company added her irritation.She tried calling several times but got the same reply.She then dial to Mala.

“Hello choti, how’s you beta?” She heard a soft soothing voice of her mother from other side.

“ Maa….I am fine….” Radhika replied in sad tone.

“You okay beta? You don’t sound like yourself” Mala asked as she sensed sadness in her daughters voice.

“ No maa. I am all fine. Just got tired..many things are going at once…” Radhika lied as she know there is no point in worrying her mother.

“ Maa..I was calling Dad but couldn’t able connect.You have any idea about him? “ Radhika asked

“ I know choti.He is unconscious now as doctor treating him.Doctor said he is in last stage but by some treatment they can give him some more months.We are in Mumbai in Tata cancer hospital. Some one naming Arjun Mehra providing medical help to cancer dad is lucky that he got Mehra’s sponsorship for his treatment.” Mala gave all the information.

“ What??? Mom you didn’t think once to call me…..” She got shocked

“ I thought you are still angry on you dad and I don’t want to give you trouble beta” mala said

“ Maa I am mad at him..but it’s not means I don’t care about him..” Radhika said angrily

“ Okay I am coming to hospital Maa…” Radhika said and hung up.

She dialed to Arjun.

“ Radhika I know you can’t be mad at me for much time…..” Arjun said as he saw radhika’s name on dialer but Radhika cut him off

“ No Arjun..m still mad at you..and am serious about our brake up..I called you to tell you that there is no need to help me or my family…n I will pay you all the amount…How much did my operation and Dad’s treatment cost? “ She asked

“ Radhika please don’t do this…” Arjun aguishly said

“ How much ???” Radhika said raising her voice

“ Two lackhs and Fiffty thousand “ Arjun said robotic way

“ Okay I will pay it…” radhika said

“ but you don’t hav….” Arjun tried to say but heard beeping sound of dead line.

She hung up on him.

Few days went by this. Radhika engrossed herself in taking care of her father..She used to spend her most of the time in hospital with him.Dilip became fragile and was happy to see his daughter is with him at last stage of his life.

A week later…

Radhika was standing in queue waiting for her number at Tata’s medical store to buy prescribed medicinefor her dad.She noticed a guy hiding his face in his hoodie was following her from long he was standing in queue too behind her.
She quickly grabbed packet of medicine and tried to walk as fast as she can towards the elevator.

That guy too walked behind her.

She was started running and then that guy holds her wrist and dragged her towards the isolated corridor of the hospital and pinned her to the wall.

Radhika tried to get off from his hold and opened her mouth to scream but he placed his palm on her mouth and removed the cap of hoodie from his other hand.

Radhika got startled and gasp happily and hugged the guy tight.

“ Ohhh Arjun..Its you…I thought..You scared shit out of me…” Radhika said leaning her head across his chest.

“Oh sorry babe… but I was dying to see you….you don’t know how much I need to control myself from living without you…you have destroyed me for anyone are in me like very vain….” He said huskily.

“ Arjun I too want to see you badly..I can’t explain how bad I felt when I slammed taxi door on your face and spoke that harsh words to you…” She said a tear escape from her eye.

He cupped her face and wiped that tear and kissed her on forehead.

“BTW You are pretty marvelous actress, should got Oscar for this amazing performance…” Arjun chuckled.

“I am a born talented girl..having multiple talents…and you too were not that bad…” She chuckled back.

They laughed and Arjun leaned his forehead on hers and they stayed like this for more than a minute like inhaling each other’s presence to their soul.

“ Now what Arjun? What is our next step? You know people are following me…” Radhika said

“I know that’s why I meet you like this.I have made them fool and came here..” Arjun said lowering his voice and continued “ we should continue this act further until they believed on this fake break up…”

“ You are right…I was mad at you little bit when you made me unconscious but as you texted me the plan I got happy…” She said smilingly.

“ I know being in love with me is quite difficult but I am happy you are with me….” He said

“I am always with you and will be with you till my last breath Arjun” She said. Her eyes filled with love.

He hugged her tight.

“ We are on right track..Neil is working on our next plan..Soon that attacker will do his next mistake…and we are ready to grab that….BTW how many ppl are following you?” Arjun said

“ A lady here she is roaming here being fake nurse..I hav heard her talking to someone on phone about me when I was in washroom….” Radhika said

“ Okay..At my house too there is one servant who is fake..we need to stick to this plan until their next moves….” Arjun said deeply thinking.

“Hmm..okay I need to go or they will suspect something fishy…” She said

“Okay..but need my compensation…a kiss…” He said

Radhika blushed with his words and felt thousand butterflies when he leaned closer and she could feel his hot breath on her face.She closed her eyes.

Their lips coaxed with each other, exploring the pleasure of their love which they are missing. They kissed passionately fiercely like they want each other badly. Arjun realesed her when they were out breath.

“ Radhika…..Go..or I couldn’t able to control myself for more time…” He said smiling..His s*xy smile.

An adrenaline rushed to her spine and she blushed uncontrollably. Radhika quickly pecked his chicks and ran from his grip.

Next chapter : radhika got call from attacker. True face came in front of all.

How’s it darlings? Don’t know it is upto the mark or not.Thank you for your unconditional support and love.Please drop your reviews!!
Stay KHUSH Always!!


  1. Sammy

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    thank god my ardhika are acting mad all of them ..this was so lovely deepu dear ..hehe he wanted kiss too …really arjun is too much ..awesome chappy dear ..but make it looong next time …update next soon

    • dipika

      Thank yoi so much Sammy darling… Yup they all r mad..haha..writer hi crazy hai na..haha…next time surely will give longer one dearryyy…Love you

  2. Emz fasa

    Mindblowing 🙂 i was really scared for arjun when rads broke up with him and how can rads say like this arjun but in the end i was relieved knowing thats thier plan 🙂 thank you for this amazing update

    • dipika

      Emz fasa dearryyy Thank you so much for this lovely words…you knw na our radz..she is dramebaaz…hehe…aradhika never get apart.loads of love to

  3. S.v

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    Dipika that was mind blowing. Fwww i am now happy coz ardhika did this to find the culprit. Thank god dilip is safe and finally radhika is also safe. Lovely one dipika and waitkng for to see who hurted my ardhika. Update soon. Love u

    • dipika

      Sv darling Thanks a ton!! You knw na how can i make them apart….soon the culprit will infront of us!!he will pay for his deeds…Loads of love for your amazing support… N surely will give longer one nxt


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    Its nice …. Radhika
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    • dipika

      Rstheffwriter Thank you dear!! N thanks for sharing ur ffs name..i will surely read

  5. Shree

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    Damn di… You got me so scared with the previous update precap.. I was like what?! How can she breakup for such a thing?! Then as I kept reading I was kinda confused.. then I understood it was a plan… The care she has gir her dad is amazing… Ardhika chupke chupke.. so cute!! Attacker?! Who is that stupid creature?! So eager to know…

    I feel so relieved after knowing it was a fake breakup… The update was MINDBLOWING!!

    Now post soon like a good girl… Love you 😍😘

    • dipika

      Shree darling m all the way smiling whn i read your comment… Thank you sooo much for amazing n lovely words… N you whn the culprit get revealed we will beat him black and blue…haha..of course how can i deny u..m good girl na like soon will post next… Loads of love my cute darling..

  6. Brin

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    This was too good, the breakup was all a plan to get the culprit, way too awesome, Dipika you nail it, well done. 🙂

    • dipika

      Thank you sooooo much Brin darling for your lovely words..encouraged me alot…Love you

  7. Jewel

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    oh…that was acting… when i start to read this i was continuously thinking about arjun’s reaction after breakup…. after reading that was a fake breakup, i was so happy…. update next chapter soon

    • dipika

      Jewel darling Thank you sooooo much for lovely words.. Thats y kept arjun’s reaction in hide…to make it fake…hehe..surely i will come soon with next.. Love

  8. Jessie

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    Deeeepppzzzz… yay!! Am jumping…! I thought someone threatened her.. but Nooo…. Author made d story Awesome….!!! So relieved.. tat they are acting.. No breakup.! But should appreciate u for d twists.. she spoke all happily n then yelled.. then dilip treatment still fi8. I was like why girl?? Then u gave d surprise. Do u have any idea 2 be a director in future..? Secret meeting n kiss 😍😍 u scared with ur prev precap.. hmm… Does Jai know this plan.. servant in Arjun’s house too.. hmmm.. very curious 4 nxt update..TC n loads of love…

    • dipika

      Ohhhhh my Jessie darling you never fails to mesmerized n amazed me by ur sweet words… Thank you soooo much!! Haha..n m being director.. Haha..koi nahi dekhenga movie….lol…no jai don’t knw abt this plan..only this trio knws it….i will update next one soon…Loads of lovr darling..

  9. suga

    Deepu it’s fabulous 😀 😀 😀 am smiling ear to ear after getting know abt fake break up 😀 😀 😀 both should get Oscar for der acting 😀 😀 😀 superbbbbbbbb deepu 😀 loved it 😀 love u 😀

    • dipika

      Hey suga my darling i missed u soooo much..hows u???m so happy to see u..
      Thanks a ton darling for lovely words…love you too

  10. Gianna

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    U took my breath away with this update Deepu literally, glas to know that ardhika are only pretending to be apart 😉 love in the secret 😊😊😊 am so eager now to know who is their enemy. Will be waiting eagerly for the next one.
    P. S this update for short expecting a bigger one next time 😇
    Love u 😘😘😘😘

    • dipika

      Gia darling Thank you soooo much for shoooo sweet n lovely words..just next chapter our enemy will b in front of us… Ohhh n tht PS note is so cute… Surely next update will be longer..for sure!!Loads of love n kissess to u dearryy..muhha

  11. Sathya

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    Dipu…. Awww my darling u got saved now…. Ha ha ha perfect plan of fake break up. That’s superbbbb…. I m so so happy yeah ardhika’s secret romance… Wow toooooooo good n u know what in this episode every line is unimaginable…. No one can guess it and u simply rocked it my baby….. Love u so much darling 😘😘😍😍😍😍

    • dipika

      Sathya darling u knw i always eager to read your feedback… N its always motivate me a lot…Thank you so much..n you knw na how i can snatch his happiness rads frm our arjun..though we r also his secret happiness.. Hehe…n m sooo happy tht u like the suspense….n m glad tht i got pass in keeping it..Love you loads n tons of kissess..muhha

  12. nitu

    dipika di wat an update srsly day by day ur becuming professional di srsl such an amazing update
    u nailed it di really hats off to u
    shld ask aunty which atta she feeds u
    really i loved ur updae for a second i thought they broke up
    wat an amazing plan to catch the attacker
    today u crossed all the boundaries of writing an ff di u shld maaje a movie out of tis ff di it is romantic , suspense and thriller also .
    arjun and his romance srsly he doesnt leave any chance to raomance wid his radhika .
    luv u di happy raksha bandhan
    once again i am telling u gave an amazing update

    • dipika

      Nitu darling ohhhh my goddddd m dancing n signing n blushing with ur words… Nw pakka m on cloud 9 …professional writer.. Omg..this is such big compliment i ever got..m soooo lucky to hav u my amazing n lovely cute sis..thanks for encouraging n supporting me!! Movie on this ff..hehe..koi nahi dekhenga..n i might b get beaten my rotten eggs n tomatos..haha…thanks for this amazing words…Loads of love

  13. Gauri

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    Dipu…hope you are feeling better now….you know I was on ventilator after reading the Precap of last update….but after this one I guess I feel all hale and hearty 😀 ….fantastic….now you are going all mystery way… loving it…these 2 are brilliant actors and you are an awesome writer… waiting for the next one 🙂 stay blessed 😀

    • dipika

      Omg Gauri darling i kept u on ventilator.. Bad me..haha…m fine now…recovered pretty well….Thank you soooo much for amazing n lovely words…u knw i m always excited to hear frm u…n u made me happy always with ur soothing words..Loads of love n kissess….tc..

  14. Sweetie

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    Deepu sweetheart..Bach gayi ho tum or else I was coming for you to give you good share of beatings..Wah!!They are acting,really both Arjun and Radhika should be nominated for Oscars.. 😀 Finally culprit will be revealed in the next update,eagerly waiting.. 🙂 Love you loads sweetheart..Take care.. 🙂

    • dipika

      My sweetie swtheart m really took sigh of relief now..our else m scared of u giving me share of beating.. Haha..kidding.. Thank you soooo much baby!!n yess m going to give aradhika’s name to oscar committee.. Haha..loads of love n teddy bear hug to u…tc..muhhha

  15. Rossy

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    Yaar heroine…itna chota 😠😠…but chota packet bada dhamaka..lets we both eloped somewhere to mountain ranges for peace…lol…break up ke baad…side effects…Arjun wanted kiss that tooo in hospital…seriously…aaaauch…waiting to see the face of real culprit..who might be?? Somebody known…update soon as now there is many holidays for u…

  16. manha

    Not upto mark!!!! It was awesome piku. Loved it. OMG!! Born talent. Planning. Oscar award toh pakka hain. It is difficilt to be in love with me, but im glad u stayed. superb dialogue. I loved it. Superb update but ended soon. Waiting for next eagerly.

    • dipika

      Rossy darling i was scared of your punch so dekho maine patakha laya..haha…i knw u hav pretty guessed who mighy b the culprit… My lil jasus..haha..n yess let go to himalayas..we will njoy n will bcum cool saints.. Hehe…n yess i will definitely use my holidays.. Love you loads my darling… Tc..

    • dipika

      Manhu darling m soooo happy u loved the epi..u r very good motivator…u inspired me always….Thank you sooo much for ur amazing support n pushing to complete the update..n yess oscar k liye nomination dene k liye main tumhe sath le jaungi..haha…n nxt time i will give longer one…for sure… Love you dearyy n huggs n kissess to

  17. Jnana

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    I really thought that you made a crack between ardhika…. I love your story….. And this epi is no exception…. It was awesome…..

  18. KK

    it was awesome chappy….wow…it was like surprise break up story::loved it…my guess is Jai or his relative…who make him do it…just my guessing…may be wrong…anyways…eagerly waiting on your next update my dear…till than take care…and have a happy Rakshabandhan to you…

    • dipika

      Kk darling thank you soooo much for lovely words of urs..u made me smile…n yeah u r pretty close…thank u for guessing.. M so happy tht u hav so much intrest in story’s flow… Love

  19. Lakshmi05

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    Awesome dipu dear…It’s good ..their breakup is fake..Arjun n rads will definitely get oscar rads she had to bear a lot with all those attacks n now arjun too scaring her…great.Who’s real culprit?? Eagerly Waiting for next update…n where’s nandhini??
    Update soon…luv u…tc..

    • dipika

      Lakshmi darling Thank you soooo much!! M on moon!! N i love ur dp..aradhika r so cute in it…unmm abt yhe attacker.. Lil lit suspense..hahaha…in next update culprit will b out…Love you loads baby…

  20. _Ritu

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    Dipika.. Dear it was a fabulous happy u got saved from me 😉 coz I was ready wid my punch 👊 if u had given pain to Arjun 😉 bt I loved ur twist dear..fake breakup…wow… 😉 Jai… have a strong doubt on him…ArDhika scenes were fab…loved it to the core plz plz plz update asap as I can barely wait…love 🙂

    • Dipika


      Ritu darling Thank you so much for this awsome words…n yess i did this change elae i knw i hav to bear ur punches…lol…you r pretty near to culprit… Now wht abt my suspense….hehe…yup i will come soon..but whn u r updating urs ff…waiting… Love…muhha

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