Manmarziyan – My Little Queen – (Shot 7)

Hello Everyone….!!! Its Jessie again…yep….Peeping in for the second time…Don’t forget to share your views and suggestions…And Radz pov..after a chap…but will have a glimpse in next one…

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My Little Queen (Shot 7)

“Arjun.. I can’t get my daughter married to you…hope you won’t let my decision to affect our relationship…Your parents are more like a family for me..! got that!!”,She gave a point blank answer…

Ah..That was what I wanted to hear….Both Mom and daughter hesitate a lot to even spell their retort..!

“Why? May I know the reason..And…I demand the reason.,to be frank!”,I said with my hands in my pockets surprising her with my attitude…!!

“Arjun…don’t you know…wh..”,My dad was about to get up..and I went to his height..crooking myself completely,with a knee pressing down to the floor,.”Dad…I need to know.. Please try to understand me…”,I said clear enough to express my stance..

“Am I not a successful person in my career…a responsible person for my family…”,I asked looking her mom…

“I din’t mean like that…You are one lovely son every mother would love to have….you are your family’s pride..Pls don’t…”,her mom said what I exactly wanted…

“Then what…Is Religion a problem? Just because am a Christian you neglect this lovely son for your daughter?”,I asked to her face….My heart thudded fast anticipating her reply…that’s where I would get the next lead to take my proposal further….I know..It would be yes…If so..I have a living example..My parents..!! Aren’t they happy…Am not like my dad..! So..the separation my parents had can be ruled out…if not also..I should make her to understand… “Aunty…Please reply..”,I repeated after a minute…

The silence from my parents side was much enough to convey that,they have no qualms with this proposal….It’s only her mom now!! I vaguely remember once Sam saying about some of her relatives too…!

“Arjun…Are you sure..My daughter is in love with you….I don’t think so”,her mom replied soft…

That’s one excellent reply to divert me from my purpose…indirectly she gave a hint to her daughter too… but now..Am so sure…her mom has some reason to keep this away other than the religious difference…Cause..she knew,My parents will convince her if Religion was the problem….That’s why she took a different way!! I never thought my to be Mother in law to be this shrewd…..I stood to my height…

My family is on my side..!! that was more enough for me now!! I saw her mom…Shrewdness!! to me?? that’s not good…I saw my parents..Especially my dad!! He was silent..pondering on something…

“Yes..She loves me..Am sure..!”,I said..

“Did she say so?”,her mom gave a enquiry note…

Cornering Arjun Fernandez!?? That’s one worst move…!!

“Yes..she confessed..”,I said aloud… I din’t want to say that..but she gave me no other option..!

“Radhi…Come here…Is it true?..”,she called without turning to her side…

I turned my head to see her coming towards her mom…Slowly….My dad looked her with a smile…My mom with a brighter smile…Sam? I turned and saw her,to sob with a sad pout eyes glued on her Bestie…May be she got some hint I guessed… I so wanted Radhika to look me once..Look up..Look up…Look up…here…My mind screamed…..

“No Mom!”,She said feeble…I saw my sister,to smile humorless..!!

“Then why were you silent till now”,her mom asked further….

.Clever! she wants to clear the air!!

“Am sorry uncle….Its my fault..Fernandez sir..sir..thought…”,she stuttered…

“Radhikaa!!”,I called her…Unable to control anymore…atleast now..she should look me… But No!!

“Fernandez sir…Am sorry!!”,she had her eyes glued on ground.. I saw my parents.,who gave a equally blank look….Well..If only..If only they had said something on my favor…
She wouldn’t have been pushed to face such a situation…,Their silence is the reason…My dad’s mistrust on me….thinking am not confident with my words…that’s one more reason….Now Radhika was questioned!…and this girl…how stupid….Here.,half past 9 at night.,Am pleading for her hand.,and she comes with a ready made apology…and for what…???!

I tried hard to control my anger.. “So you don’t love me??”,I asked a little high… Her mom looked me surprised..

“Arjun!!”,My dad tried to get a upper hand in that situation…

“No !!”,she mumbled….

“Really..!”,I asked with my forefinger raising her chin to face me…Only me!! That’s the last thing I could do to make her look me….Her eyes read guilt….God!! What for !

“Really?!!”,I enunciated with a bright smile…

“YESSS”,she said to my face..and I left my hold…

She stood there..,after defeating me and my love…and Everyone else was also silent…I know…Only her mom would be happy now..!! My mom would be worried thinking what if I drown myself in drinking…My dad gave a pitiful look to her…Sam was already like half lost in battle….

“Go..!! Go inside…Close the door..And start your crying session…Keep on crying throughout your life…”,I pushed her shoulder…She staggered a little… “Tell me one thing..What for you cried till now??,,,For the loss you had in past and that you have invited for your future??….For your dad or for me??….You thought I was a fool not to get it??…you…”..I saw her to tremble a little….I never thought to pull her dad’s topic….,but…..I felt irritated that even I too had hurt her Now..,

“Listen..Love is not a sin…Forget this day from your life…Never I asked your hand..and Never you said No to me…But…I want only one thing in return…Never regret that you were in love..!! …May be loving a person like me..,Could be a sin…but a person like you..to fell in love…,couldn’t be..”,I smiled patting her cheek….and she crashed to my chest crying aloud….

Surprisingly I got what I wanted..!! Her reply..! She now confessed with her tears..!! Everyone’s face turned pale listening her sobs..They have to!!…In particular her mom!….She needs to know.,this is what she was about to gift her child, throwing me away from her life…..My mom gestured me to convince her…I saw her mom,but was surprised to see a lone tear to escape from her right eye…she seemed to hold herself from breaking down…I wasn’t sure anyway…

“What for you are crying now….I told you not to cry today..!! Aren’t you tired of crying….”,I asked patting her head a little.. “Somewhere I am imperfect for you”,I shot my last arrow after a minute as I already knew her answer…

“No..you are too good….”,she looked around and I controlled my smirk….

“Really”,I made her to look me…She turned her gaze to her mom..!! Again..she gave her reply…

“Go…Refresh yourself..!”,I gestured Sam to take her…

“Aunty….She is ready to give up her love.,for your sake….She made you proud,throwing me away…She din’t let you down….Ah..well..,she thought this is how,she could prove her love and respect for her mother…Now..,how you will make that love worthy enough for you..”,I sugar coated my anger….

“Aru…Every mom feels the same way!! and You shouldn’t speak…”

“Please mom!! Without Aunty’s consent she won’t accept me….I know that…But..Lemme just share few words.,before I leave… After I leave.,Please don’t scold her for what I spoke and did..!! and…Never doubt your upbringing..Pls..for heaven’s sake….She is such a Angel everyone would wish to have in their life…and Am no exceptional !!…..Being a single parent..you gave her the best…I would say…that she was ready to bring happiness in everyone’s life at any cost….I honestly admire that quality of hers….you have one precious daughter….but…the only drawback…you turned her weak…A weak personality…!! A person who faintly smiles at her own achievement and success…who fakes
a smile for others….that is the reason she still thinks about her dad…Its not missing…!! For you filled that void he made….It’s something else…!! She feels she hasn’t done anything for you…I guess am Correct….. I gave u a sample..This is what you are gonna gift her…! TEARS…Am sorry to say..but that’s true…Even if its not me.,Get her a good guy..who could gift her what her dad could…And I believe……No one else,other than me can do that!”…. I finished and gestured Sam for water.. “And…Will you let me do that”,I asked like a request…

I saw my dad considering my words.,and my mom squeezed her mom’s hand in response…

“Please Say yes Aunty..Please…!!”,Sam extended me a glass of water and sat on the armrest close to her mom…

One lovely sister.,I got…A gem!!….who expressed her support and her wish to have her Bestie in my life.,in silence..,only through her gestures to her friend…Sam din’t look me once,from the moment I proposed.,only after I vocalized that am worth enough for her bestie..,she saw me and now.,she followed me in suit…..From when she got this matured…My baby sister spoke like a elder sibling…

“Will you say something or sit like this”,Sam pouted angrily looking my dad… “Aunty…I will take care of Radhu…We won’t cook non veg…and…and…If bhai scolds her…I won’t leave him”,she said..

As though I would scold her…God!! These crazy people!!!…

“My son is not like me..Nandhini ji..!! Don’t think he will repeat the same mistake what I did…Radhu…I call her a Angel….We will be so happy if you accept this proposal…After seeing her tears…how could we..,well….yours was also a love marriage like us…isn’t?!…Then why to deprive our children from that happiness….Think yourself”,My dad finally spoke…

Well…Though its late.,he clarified one unexpressed doubt of her mom!! ‘My son not like me’…

“Nandhu…we had no one in our times…But we are there for our children..Isn’t !!…I had never seen Radhu breaking down..!! Somewhere I feel guilty….I was never able to identify her pain…she gave me our family back..but..”,that was my mom…

“Must say…True Business Man!”,her mom smiled a little to my face as I sipped water…..I smiled wide the next sec..

“Well Aunty…In that case…I would say…your to be son in law proved his caliber too”,I laughed a little…

I saw them to chat regarding our marriage…! I should thank my sister for that… “Shall we get them married after this Christmas?”,she asked suddenly…and I smiled to her mom…and turned to see Radhika.,who crossed her room and went somewhere…..What the heck? Wasn’t she supposed to be here?

I made a move to fetch another glass of water.,but silently turned to right of that hall.,and found her to speak…speak with whom??… “Pls..Pls…Mom should say yes”,she prayed so cute,pouting a sad one.,tilting her head like a plead…and turned,but stood stunned looking me there to lean with my left attached to wall,folding my arms..

So much love for me!! Yet..!! If My yearn was for her reply.,hers was for a completely different one…a Difficult one too..!!

“Your mom din’t accept our love”,I glared her..

“Tch…I know…Thats y I said…”

“that you don’t love me.!”,I snapped her..

She tried to move and staggered stepping on her own skirt…

“Hey..how do they do marriage in your culture..”I asked….She turned sullen….why to ask.,when I had watched in bollywood movies….

“Please move”,she tried to walk past.. I bend down a little.,and took a sindoor box…”Sindoor?” I asked..

“Kumkum”,her eyes fixed on that box…

Whatever….I kept it a little on her forehead and handed it back to her… She looked me confused…..I removed my chain and slid down her neck…My first earning.! Platinum one..It looked bit bold to her fragile form..I adjusted it..and winked at her….She glared me as she kept the box down…Somewhere I felt,this is the only way to make her understand that I won’t step back from our love….

“Whats..who…Tell me your lord’s name?”, I pointed one small idol.,that she prayed before… Now she glared me even more…!!

“See..Am honestly not familiar…I know only few..Maa Durga..Dussera fest..and Goddess Lakshmi…hmmm…Ganesh Chathurthi….So…”,I dragged..and found a pic of Lord Ganesh..! Glad I watched movies..Coz..I hardly get into other religious issues…when I was bit afar from my own..!! “Thats..Lord Ganesh I know”,I smiled wide…

“Both are same”,she said feeble with a stern look to me…

Now I scrutinized my eyes to that,less than 2 inch silver idol….Yes..she was right!! I saw her still giving me the same expression….little bit annoyed…From when.,she got this boldness..”He is the witness”,I smiled…

“Its not fun!”,she hissed…

“Did I say so..”

“Don’t insult God..!”.,she looked me annoyed..

I pulled her arm…”When did I…??..Tell me…and…Dare to remove my chain”,I said cold…I had been patient even after her stunts and still….this girl managed to annoy me..!! I saw her face to turn worried…Hitting my forehead to hers.,I whispered…”Still what dear? your mom said Yes…!..Sweetheart….I Love you with all my heart and soul….”…my hands holding her cheeks, now held her shoulder to hug her…

She quickly pulled back…”Pooja room!”,she pouted a little..

“So?”,I asked confused.. “Did I say it to be a Kitchen..”,she pushed me and went..,but stopped exactly before reaching the hall..A step..!we will be visible to them…,

We saw her mom to say something and my family to listen her intent….Aaaahhhhh!!! Now what’s next….?? “Hey I never knew your parents did love marriage”,I coiled my arm to her left shoulder.,and she pushed my hand down,,I again did.,and she again pushed….I again held., but now,when she pushed I gripped her waist hard….I could feel her breath to hitch..her belly sucked in completely… “Breathe out!”,I whispered like a song…and the wonderful part was she immediately did it exactly like the way I sang…..

Thanks to her mom..!! The story was interesting I guess..None paid attention to us….She looked me like a kid.,her left trying to push my hand….She sagged unconsciously to my left affected by my grip…..I left her waist and held by shoulder close to me….

“Will you ask me to convert to your religion?”,she asked feeble crooking her neck to my height….I nodded negative…Why on earth I would ask her to…

“Then how?”,she spoke to herself…and I leaned to her height..pretending that am trying to hear from her closed mouth…She glared me…

“Then how to marry..?”,she whispered and I looked her confused…Does she has to think something always…

“You din’t listen to my mom?”,she asked again…

Am I here to listen your mom? what to say? My work is done….When I cornered everyone pointing their mistakes…Failed to notice her pain.,but was ready to oppose our love..!! She turned thoughtful suddenly…..

“What are you thinking sir?”,I mimicked exactly like her.,and she rolled her eyes…

“My dad and mom belong to different caste..belong to same place….they disowned it seems….and…”,she paused and I raised my brows in suspicion….She pointed my forehead.,and tried to touch.,but I pulled back….

I checked with a mirror on my left and found a dot of kumkum to be there…well…May be when I hit hers….It would have got…This isn’t that important…

“Let it be..you continue the story”,I said and tried to coil my arm around her…..but she moved away a little….

“That isn’t story…”,she turned serious…

I looked her fixed…..I had missed to notice that ‘something serious’ which was bothering her..may be her mom too…

“This is why I hesitated…and Radhi…She is still a kid…Prena di…..Am not sure…Pls don’t take me wrong”,I heard her mom saying this…

Is she back to square one!! My mind raised a warning…

“What you aren’t sure about..”,I asked doubted.. “Our marriage?”, I continued…

“No no…your marriage is fixed…This is something else…We elders will solve..”,My dad got up but looked her shocked….why? I saw Sam to glare her..But..But..My little darling unaware of all this was in deep thought.,rolling her eyes cutely…..Every time..,one way or other.,she makes me to feel like a poet..admiring every single move of hers….

“Now what are you thinking about?”,I asked exhausted….and the first one to smile was her mom….Surprise that was!..

Sam gave me a teasing look….and My mom mock glared at me… “What were you both doing?”,Sam sang her inquiry like a granny…

“Why..?”,She asked…I saw her mom to notice my chain…Yes…the reason for this expressions….

“Aunty…I gifted her my chain…”,I said…No…I informed…I still din’t trust any one of them.,except my sister….Until things come to my table…I won’t !!..

“I said not to remove isn’t”,I said to her sharp.,when her fingers touched it..

“I din’t..”,she responded feeble and next minute I was hit with numerous taunts from my own family for raising my voice….Where were they before?!!…I had woke them up.!!

“You don’t worry Nandhini…Take care of your health”,My mom pressed her palm like a assurance….

I guess I missed something important….I was surprised when her mom smiled at me thankfully…Satisfied….I reciprocated the same way though I was unaware of what got transpired in my absence…

“You forgot something I guess”,My dad remarked sarcastic as he neared the door… “And..Radhu…Don’t forget..Tomorrow..Am cooking!! Come for breakfast..No Angry bird excuses…”,he smiled to her…

Angry bird excuses!! I saw her and my family laughed at my shocked reaction….Everyone knew the name??!!!..

“Aunty…I said what I felt..If any…suppose..”,I paused..because I din’t want to apologize.,but still My dad had remarked it in his style…

“No need to apologize…heard that you are leaving tomorrow…Take care!”,she smiled…

Yes..!! Am leaving tomorrow….I saw her to look me shocked listening that…

“Come..Its getting late…Radhu..”,I saw my sister to wait with that Christmas star….I extended my hand but she snatched and got on the stool…

“She won’t let anyone to do…Stubborn!”,I heard her mom saying as she left inside her home… Both the girls clicked selfies with that star…!!

“Why you have Christmas star?”,I asked…

“Why can’t I?”,she retorted surprising me….

“Selfie with me..”,I quickly got on her side and Sam left getting the hint….”Leave your skirt”,I said focusing us in my mobile,and she left her clasp on that silk fabric…Instead looked me…Perfect!!

I clicked a pic….still wasn’t ready to leave her side.,”What’s that troubling you still? Will you let me know or not?”,I asked low with my gaze fixed on her image in my mobile..

“Will you give me your Goa number..?”,she asked hesitant…

I exhaled displeased…I conveyed my stance this clear..yet..yet!! she is….”You have rights to ask..no need to be hesitant….and I had already added that your contacts.”,I said as I slid my hand to her waist…

“Your mom got retired..”,I asked….

“VRS”.she mumbled faintly…

“You had plans to leave chennai…”,I asked and she nodded… “When?”…

“Next month…January end…!! When will you come back?”,she asked looking me hopefully…

“Next week..”

“Shall I…umm..I will call you tomorrow evening…”,She said clear this time…

“Good…but..I will call you tonight”,I stepped aside to leave as we cant stand this close in that balcony for long time…

“Ok..Now..Don’t hop in those steps…and don’t dive yourself into chat foods..and fat..”,I paused looking her mom.. “Good night Aunty.!”,I signed her off.,and she nodded in response..

I skipped the steps fast and once reaching the bend,10 more steps before me,turning back,I looked her from head to toe…winking a little,I called her down.,with my left finger gesturing her to….She descended just 4 steps from her place…Safe zone!!!….heading over one.,I pulled her for a warm hug,kissing her temple.,I said.,”Be confident..Am there for you!!…Little…”

“Am not little”,she mumbled pushing my shoulder…

“Ok..S**y”,I whispered,kissing her cheek…her eyes went round like that of a Jamun listening that.,amusing me..!!..”Good night Radhika Fernandez”,I said as she climbed those 4 steps…

“Arrr…Ferr,….”,she giggled…

“Hey once!”,I lifted my mobile to click one full length pic of hers….She peeped to check her mom and smiled…I snapped my look from the screen to her.,as I watched her to pose different….with her right palm supporting her hip.,she turned her right profile to face me,winking a little she smiled a s**y one.,and my eyes widened with ultimate surprise….She giggled looking my reaction….her whole vibrated….I chuckled and now she fully turned facing me… “See you next week…Good night….Fernandezz Sirrrrr”,she sounded sweet as usual…

I have decided !! Tomorrow..Am not going to leave for Goa!!

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So…how was it…Do share your words…and Pls ignore the grammatical errors….Take care and love you all loads….

60 comments

  1. Chashni

    Aiyoo jessie I loved it.this gonna be my favourite ff.re I know that you will unite them but ennamo therila en sympathy side arjun pakkam pothu.his dialogues awesome.he made radhika to confess nice superb love you take care.

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Chashni….thank you so much dear…..hahah…Arjun raasi appidi..illla…nan kooda Arjun ku thana importance kuduthureken…ena panna..namellam ore katchi…wow..!! Thanks for sharing your likes dear…Love you loads…TC

  2. Brin

    Brin

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    Outstanding episode, everything worked out perfectly, love it to the core, eagerly waiting for the next update, Jessie you nail it, well done. πŸ™‚

  3. Farjana

    Hi Jessie… its awesome n finally we can see radhika to be in a lighter mood n comfortable with arrr ferrr… I like the way she calls him… so cute… pls post soon

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hey Farju…thanks a lot dear…haha..yess…Radz is happy to a extent….oh wow!! Thanks for sharing it..Ar…Frr..lol..yep..cute..love you loads..will do dear…TC…

  4. anushka shetty

    Fantastic… Amazing….. Lovely…..wonderful…..magical…..plzz givd the next update soon

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hi Anushka…Thanks a lot dear…. so sweet lovely words…Do keep supporting dear…TC..will post soon…Love you loads

  5. Saran

    Jessie really superb…. Loved it… Ardhika scene awesome….. Arjun finally confessed radhika feelings… Waiting for next…. Update next soon…. Take care… Stay happy…

  6. Gianna

    Gianna

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    Three cheers for Arjun for fighting for his love, and three cheers for you my Sweetheart for making Arjun this amazing. Glad that Arjun made Rads grow a spine, pyaar kiya to darna kya, I hope I said that right. His srubborness and her tears finally paid off and I can’t be more happy, just loved it but loved Arjun more in this one. And the last part, I laughed Arjun didn’t know his little queen’s hidden talents.

    Sweetheart, this one was just amazing as usual and I loved it. Stay blessedπŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Awww…Sweet heart…Three cheers…YAY!!!! you said right..and caught the plot !! super yaa…you loved him more..!!Wow!! sweetheart..am so happy with your review… hahaa..hidden talents..yeeeesssssss…lol..am happy dear you loved it..and thanks a ton for this energy supplement…love you loads…TC

  7. Amore

    Amore

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    Hahaha you made him pass with full marks Jess… Nandu was not sure about arjun and his lead took her off guard.. The way he understood Radz stole the limelight…

    Was nanduz hubby a Christian??? (here comes my questions hehehe)

    Sam was desperate to unite them but hats off she showed maturity… she proved to b a really good friend and a perfect sister as well… The way she stood by for both was awesome. She didn’t support arjun previously to make sure about his seriousness for radhika which showed us THE RASAM bond. And later on when arjun made radz spill her tears and pain and gathered her by giving his shoulder to her and proved himself worthy to radz she stood for him as well as a perfect sister…

    Fernandez family were adorable from the beginning till end and the way Samrat stood for His son was not only awesome but rooting… He indirectly accepted his mistakes, redemption was clearly seen and this step shows how much the family admired radz… Piyali also made me feel to fly as she expressed how much they want radz for arjun…

    Kitchen scene was beautiful… The chain made nandini feel better and then the way arjun was ready for apology although he was *worst at it* made me go flat on your presentation… hahaha

    Still there are insecurities between and I’ll wait for you to clear the air… Hope this distance clears all the insecurities…

    good going… waiting for next… like said ROMEO ARJUN is making me feel curious…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Amore!!! Full marks…!! Thank you teacher *sing sang*..hehe..wow! Lime light..hmm..wah Arjun!

      No dear..Radz dad isn’t a christian…I truly adore the way you brought out Sam’s character..wow!! thanks a lot dear…That was the reason Arjun kept a look on her reactions..you clearly noticed it…Its Prena..!! so right abt Samrat..But next chap has some father son convos…before that you got the note…smart one you are!!..Pooja room yaa.!! haaha apology..!! am glad I made you to..and that too with his worst part.!Wah Jessie.!!

      Yes..you are ri8…will be cleared soon..thanks a ton for this fantastic review….I was like what you are gonna point this time..And you said about Sam..thats awesome dear..!! will bring soon…Romeo Arjun!! hmmmm.!! yaar…thats one good name.! Teddy hugs dear..TC..stay happy forever…

    • Amore

      Amore

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      hahah sorry pooja room… I was actually Imagining it as a kitchen… so it got jumbled… Thanks dear…I’m glad that I could make you feel so curious… keep it up nd bear me coz you have no option than that πŸ˜‰ hehehehe

  8. Jewel

    Jewel

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    Jez, this is awesome…. Arjun he know how to get what he need. The way he made rads confess infront of their parents, smart guy…. His mind voices that is beautifully written. At last he convinced nandini… Bt what is that point he missed?? I am curious to know that. Is it any big thing?? Will that affect ardhika relationship?? Now I am eagerly waiting for next one…. Post soon….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Shonaaa…Thanks a ton dear….yess..Arjun hai…Missing point..we will know soon…nothing big…Shona..do you think will Arjun let anything affect his love…will post yaar…loved your review and your points..wow..Mind voice point out kiya..us k liye spl thanks…TC…loads of love

  9. Rossy

    Rossy

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    Yes ….if u don’t want to go Goa…then don’t go Arjun…like someone force u….still there something, I think radz n nandini are hiding…what’s it….i wm thinking πŸ˜” πŸ˜”πŸ™‡…hmmmm….this is not as simple as looks…waiting for the next…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hey Rosie…..lol..don’t do Arjun!! he wont go Rosie…. yep..he is forced..yes..something hai…woo..think..think..mere lal…its simple only re…will finish soon…. will post…TC..and thanks a ton my dear…Loads of love

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hey Vahini…glad to meet you..Arshi dp..!! woo…!! thanks a lot dear..am glad you shared your views..do support…TC…love you loads

  10. Jnana

    Jnana

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    Aahhh…. Here you go….. Finally…. But what’s the left out part that love birds are unaware of? Or arjun maybe? Now? Good boy…. Cancelled his trip…. Don’t you think…. Somewhere he’s being cheesy….. Okay…. Next one soon…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Jnana… thanks dear…left out part..yet to come…hahah..cheesy..where ??? lets see..hope he isn’t….because he is not..!! lol…okay…dear..done..only if my lappy permits…TC

  11. Gauri

    Gauri

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    Jess I am dancing …yay yay yay….marriage …Arjun ke Tanshan ne ghayal kar diya….you rocked it …πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€ you can imagine how happy I am looking at my dancing teeth ….stay blessed and write more and more …love u

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hey Gauri..thanks a lot dear…dance..!! yay!! am happy dear….passing your enthu to me..thanks again…love you loads…TC…stay happy

  12. Sulbi

    Sulbi

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    Jazzzzzzz…. am sooooo happy… my face is shining in my smile… oops… konjam over ah poiduchula… but serioysly u made my day… miracle dear…

    Arjun never gives up… and he made it and geniuenly he sayisfied her mom that he will be perfect buisness man, lovely and caring husband ofcrz perfect husband and SIL… Not SIL like a Son to her… the best… the way Arjun made Radhika to confess infront of everyone was awsme… even i expected that Radhika ans will be No if her mom enquires… but Arjun love you man… he played his part well…

    Atlast whole family was happy and so wats that mystery part that Arjun had missed it… so curious… and chain part was missing… it was a gift but in deep it was kind of a marriage… Arjun haf made her wear a chain infront of a god and applied Kumkum… Aww!!! Wow man… the day u proposed… u asked her mom for her hand… and fought for your love… and u married her and that too the chain was his first earning… really you are luck Radhika you are so special to him… he presented first earning to you and only you…

    Haan… after marriage discussion Radhika face has brightened and this what Arjun needs… the pose Radhika had given for him… he was surprised haha… s**y pose… lol… so radhu asked goa number… thats sweet… so now Arjun gonna cancel the trip thats really amazing and so excited whats gonna happen now… so jazz kutty am demanding you post soon baby… i loved it to the core… and wanna know about mystery part… love you aaaaloooooaaaadddssss baby…. teddy hugs to you… tons of kisses…. muuuuuuuyaaaaaahhh… tc darling… πŸ™‚

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Sulbi Jaannn….Teddy hugs…..over a illa…I loved your smile….Sulbi…yes..yes…how beautifull you had said…he proposed and indeed married her…kinda marriage..yes..am glad you loved his style here…yess..Radz is so special to him….you noticed change in Radz too…jaan..now am dumbstruck wondering how to reply…you brought the update alive again to me…am so thankful to you…one fav plot of mine…and you…girl..your support is always a different kind of feel which I cant express…I only wish that pls stay with me and support me till I finish all my ff’s….you make me feel happy…love you loads….loved your likess…and cancel the trip,…cancelled…..teddy hugs dear…flying kisses..TC stay happy forever

  13. likii

    Fantastic Jessie. ….loved it to the core. ….arjun convincing her mom was too good. …u r an awesome writer Jess. …

  14. Swathi

    Jessie darling….again this was rocking…Finally families agreed fr the marriage..but still there something….The way n style Arjun convinced…you have made him too awesome….his orders to rads..not to hop on steps…to avoid junk food….telling her not to remove chain n getting taunts frm all…lol….n rads is too cute…she don’t like to be called as little….even whn he proposed her she asked him…why little?lol..and at last…she made arjun surprise wid her hidden talent…arjun still need to know a lot about his little queen…loved it.

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Swathi…..thanks a ton dear…yes..something there…am glad you loved his style…wow…!! Girl…you made me smile wide pointing those of Arjun’s dialogues…yess…little …she doesn’t like….hidden talent…yep….he needs to know…Thanks again for this sweeeeeet review…I so loved it Swathi…TC

  15. Aastha

    Jessie Jessie Jessie….. How’s your cough..???
    Wowww !!! Wowww!!!….. what to say..
    Oh!! Arjun… I just love him here…. really he is and he is the only ever.. right for Radz…who can complete her….his love..what to compliment ..
    ..he doesn’t need words…. just knows to such right extent… what she wants… what she feels…. now I could say he knows her more than her mom….
    When he was saying Nandini where she failed… fighting for his love…l totally agree…for that moment I felt my voice got your words…sooooooo loved that part…
    When children have parents support ….trust … when parents become their strength not weakness… then only wonders happen….
    True businessman..!!! Nandini shrewdness …. Radz prayers..sindoor..chain..Angry bird excuses… their selfies.. Radz being herself….sooo lovely…
    Be confident …. that’s second time..I loved Arjun today…..
    Oh..!!! Arjun not going Goa ….and how can he leave chance …..when he can openly romance with his queen….
    Now only …DIWALE DULHANIYA LE JAENGE LE JAENGE …he he he…
    And Jessie let’s both… sneak to their wedding… am a big foodie and also I haven’t witnessed Christian marriage…what say..??
    Teddy hugs…😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Now I want next soooon….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Hey ya Aastha….I was n’t able to reply to you in prev chap…glad to know you registered here….and am ok now…the climate you know isn’t…Feeling happy with your concern..now..am feeling like i had drunk litres of boost reading your comment…like really….i read it again and again..how beautifully you said about Arjun….

      ”When children have parents support ….trust … when parents become their strength not weakness… then only wonders happen….””

      This one is fabulous dear…Believe me…I felt so happy for writing this chap reading this…this story had the major shade based on their parents…Be it arjun or Radhika…both….Arjun had this and made a wonder to happen..lets wait for Radz to do..and be his queen…chalo…I said the story…what else is left…The msg which I tried to convey got its reach…girl..Teddyhugs…..Loved your likes….Arjun is best for Radhika.!!! Wow…!! the write up got its worth is what I could say…am so happy.,…Thanks a ton…stay blessed…wedding…dear….I din’t plan wedding here..am sorry…

      Diwale dulhaniya le jayenge..yess..it suits isn’t…super ya….me too foodie……Teddy hugs my dear….TC loads of love…and tons of thanks

  16. Dipika

    Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Judwa behena wowwwww.. Mere FernΓ‘ndez sir ne to mera dil chura liya.. Dialogue pe dialogue.. Sasu ma to puri impress ho gyi.. Lol..
    BUt honestly jb u rocked.. U knw i was just drawn in ur writing.. U write breathtaking darling.. Seriously.. M so in love witg this story .. Her mom played well.. But arjun ka answer ekdam showstopper.. N how radz reacted.. Tht so cute.. Her praying to ganesha..chain exchange.. Kumkum.. Lovely.. Finally marrige fix ho gyi.. M do eager for mxt post soon.. Love u lots 😍 😍

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      lol…Tere Fernandez…ye kab hua..hahhahah..JB..tu bi na yaar…..chalo.,Fernandez ko ye baat pata nahi na k wo tera hai…kyun ki wo to radz k hone ka bahut mehanat kar raha hi..banda is hard working you see…rofl….am happy u loved it to this extent…thanks a ton dear…show stopper..wow…am so glad reading your review….Thanks for sharing your likes…I know you will say this Ganesha part…EEeee….Pata hai..mujhe…am screaming….love you tons…TC…thanks a lot dear

  17. Sweetie

    Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Jessiee…what a beautiful story yaaarrr…I was dying to read this from yesterday and didn’t get time,so here I am after finishing off the chapters… πŸ˜€ I was smiling the entire time reading this story…My mom was asking ki what were you reading with so much concentration?And I said story written by my friend,you should have seen her expression,haha.. πŸ˜‰ And Hossana song is my all-time fav darling..I remember we that is me and my friends memorized all the lyrics and used to sing it in class,lol,we were in 12th then,who are going to stop us,no? πŸ˜‰ God!!You refreshed many memories sweetheart.. πŸ™‚ First Arjun snapping at her for interfering in his matters,then gradually falling in love with her,haayeee… *imagine me with dreamy eyes* Finally all agreed to marriage and Arjun sahab is not going to leave to Goa the next day,hmm,interesting.. πŸ˜€ Waiting for next dear..Love you loads and take care.. πŸ™‚

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Manasssa…..Thanks a ton dear….am glad you liked it….wow…!! cute…..smiling Manasa,,!! love you yaar…yes…Hosana me that rap kinda part..’.everybody wanna know’….I too memorized it..It was fun like to sing in same note…am glad i did it….loved you review darling siss…thanks a a ton….dreamy eyes…..I got it…love you loads…TC…Stay happy

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