Manmarziyan – My Little Queen – (Shot 6)

Hello Everyone….Its Jessie here…. “MAY YOUR TROUBLES BE LESS…YOUR BLESSING BE MORE.,AND NOTHING BUT HAPPINESS COME THROUGH YOUR DOOR…….WISH YOU ALL A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR AND MAY EVERY DAY OF THIS YEAR BRING YOU EVER LASTING HAPPINESS,PEACE AND PROSPERITY……”

Hope you all had a sweet time…!! and wish the same forever….well…Its been a week I updated this story….Finally I was able to do today…The longest gap I took for any of the updates…First time!! Saran…you had been repeatedly asking..so…so…before posting my other ff’s I posted this..and Deepzz…Fernandez sir is here…

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My Little Queen (Shot 6)

She smiled and walked backwards looking me…First time.,I felt something wrong with her smile…I wasn’t sure..may be random assumption….may be a gut feeling!! As I opened the lock.,I noticed my bracelet missing…When I tried to lit those lamps,it was there in my wrist…..Puzzled over it,I pulled the door open,and saw a bag on the door way…

“Radhi..Keep that inside…I will come taking those lamps…Its late…why din’t you take the exhausted ones…Always chatting and playing…”,her Mom’s words turned feeble as she descended to the ground floor…..May be hearing the click sound of the door to open.,she guessed it to be Radhika…Obvious!! and who would expect me??..I quickly rushed inside,picking the bag…placing it over the table.,I called her…There was a complete silence.,I peeped inside the room.,and she quickly hid something behind her back…

“I missed my bracelet here…Find it before your Mom gets it..Okay?”,I said hurriedly standing near the door…

But what did she hide….I saw the door way once.,and stepped fast inside…She stood blinking.,with an arm length of distance between us,I pulled her hand only to see a folder….Folder!!… A light lavender color transparent one.,of Mini laptop size…She tried to pull back….I got a glimpse of silver metal shining inside…..Ah!! that;s my bracelet!! ..Now…Am so curious to see what else she has in that folder…. But..but…her mom!!…Why did I ask Sam to return fast…It seems.,this little one is having one good treasure for me to hunt down…!! She neither pulled her hand back.,nor looked me.,but stood looking the ground… Huh!! What’s there in the ground??

“Have it safe”,I whispered in her ear and quickly moved out…

I had kept the main door open….God!!…How am I going to convince her mom about my presence here?… I turned and noticed her disappointed look to me.. “Radhika…Your mom came home”, hissed and moved towards the door…

I waited for her mom to come back….Leaving unnoticed may turn adverse,for our love,when I bring the topic…moreover.,I don’t want to have bad impression about me…!! Her mom halted on her tracks looking me to stand in the middle of their hall…Yet..she managed to smile at this unexpected,unnecessary guest..I have heard from Sam that she is one strict Mom unlike our parents..,she never hesitates to slap Radhika if she does any mischief…Well..My little darling is known for her mischief,still how could someone raise hand even after looking her cute face….

“Sit..!!Please…”,her mom said surprising me….She din’t ask about me….Smart move!!

“Yea..Aunty…I was waiting for you…She was scared!”,I said a simple one based on the input I receivedfrom Sam….She smiled and turned her head but I was shocked looking her expression…Now what went wrong..I turned around…But what..!! She was standing still in the same way….Hair.,dress messed…I expected her mom to glare me…But No!!

“What have you done to yourself?”,her mom asked shocked.,placing the plate she had,over the table before..

I saw Radhika to be in a ‘ready to break down at any moment’ mode….What the heck! I did say her..Still..!! what made her to welcome her mom like this…Her lips pouted for a sad one….I couldn’t get a hint….but Am sure…..If its someone who could handle the situation.,It’s only me!!..

When her mom held her shoulder.,I said,”Aunty.,she slipped in steps…That’s why…”..

Her mom gave a annoyed look to her…”I told you isn’t”,she said…

Now..it’s getting worse.,I should clear things about my presence there, at this hour and move…

“Sam called me to inform about shopping…When I came here.,I saw her to slip down….and Power went off….Sam told she scares to stay alone..Ah…hmm…That’s why…I waited here for you…”,I said not so confident on my story….Her mom turned to my side…

“Thank you Arjun..!”,she smiled….

I felt so relieved..God..! That was first time she speaks with me..though we have had exchanged few formal nods when we get to meet at times…Then..I realized.,I should have developed a good bond with her long before….I was silly to just nod my head as a response to her smile…. My gaze shifted to Radhika..who clutched her skirt a little.,with her gaze down.,nodding negative for some questions her mom asked…. Being irritated with her nod.,her mom saw me…I was in the same page…Blank!!!

“Ah..You..Sit down..Please…”,she said and moved towards their kitchen…

I was perplexed.,how and why she had no doubts about my presence there at their home with her daughter alone…

“Radhu…you…”,I heard Sam’s voice to stop abruptly… “Bhai..here?”,she asked and I re-played my half-truth story… “Did she get hurt..”,Sam enquired….

“I asked…”,her mom responded as she came with a glass of something…

Grasping the momentary unexpected link.,I said.,”Yea…I too asked..But she din’t reply anything..She stayed silent in her room..”,I heaved a sigh..Good..! Now the story is clear….

“Sorry for the inconvenience….Prena di said.,you,even avoided shopping because of your work..And now..Am…”,her mom earnestly apologized..

“Please don’t be Aunty..!! I just happened to be here”,I said and saw her.,who still had no thought to look me…! Time and again I waited for her one glance sipping the sweet drink her mom offered…but No!!

“Why are you silent..Any prob..”,Sam asked alarmed…

“Have you got hurt…what Radhi…..How many times I told you to be careful in steps…..you never listen me…Look yourself…”,her mom said worried adjusting her hair….She raised her head to see her mom and I too was shocked like others,to find her eyes filled with tears…her face almost drained…..Sam was the first to ask..”What’s wrong…Radhu…”…

“Am sorrry Mom…I….I …never…lis…Listened…you….”,she said broken…

Next few minutes.,I stood watching her to break into fresh tears,Sam to be confused with her tears and her mom in same state….Her mom shook her….but she hugged her mom crying….din’t even bothered to look me….well..!!…If she really needs to convey something….why can’t she?…..Her mom patted her back.,and signaled Sam to look inside that room..where she had been.,minutes before!…Now.,It was like watching a unknown language movie when you are in a bad mood!!…I saw Sam to pull Radhika to face her…Her mom shook her head defeated as she walked towards the sofa….,but My eyes glued on those two….

“That…This is why I never leave her alone…She keeps pondering over the past…Missing her dad!!”,her mom sighed dejected….I looked her mom confused…Reading my confusion she continued..”Hmm..her dad got a sudden cardiac arrest..when she was alone with him at home….She was then 9 yrs old.,until I came home and noticed,she wasn’t aware of the situation..,she was in the same room doing homework…she was unable to digest the fact still..so…she..even..now…. you see…Its been 13 yrs still..”,her mom was unable to continue further being distressed with Radhika’s nature…

But..What does that has to do now? I was here…and how was her mom so sure that she missed her dad…?

“If you keep crying.,I will ask Aunty to lock that folder inside her cupboard”,I heard Sam to say and she stood leaning on her shoulder….

“Sam..Leave it..I will take care…Arjun is waiting for you”,her mom said…

“Bhai..Pls…”,Sam pleaded… I nodded wondering at her behavior…Am Sure..what her mom said has nothing to do with her tears….May be till yesterday….she could have been like that….but not today!!

“Arjun…Why are you still standing…Well…Sam won’t leave this place.,until she convinces Radhika…Such a sweet girl!!”,her mom said and I smiled in response…. “Ah…I guess…you are uncomfortable here…I will come home with Sam…”,she said…

“Not like that Aunty..!! I was….just….”,I stuttered looking Radhika….

“Tats ok..!! Radhi has told about you…! I forgot to congratulate you….Young Entrepreneur Award..!! Isn’t…you made your parents proud…!! “,she said…

I was able to only smile back….my mind stuck with the word…Folder!! Is it the same…! It did have my bracelet….else…I sat confused….when I turned to my right..her mom wasn’t there…

It was 20 mins her mom came home…I got up….I saw her mom to speak something strictly…..may be she would have thought,Radhika’s tears was the reason…I dint respond…”is it away to behave…are you still a kid…”,her mom raised her tone..

She sniffed her nose…this is first time am seeing her like this…..her mom came to pick something from the shopping bag..

“Radhu…who said so…how will I forget you….idiot girl…!! Thinking too much…when you are alone…!! “,Sam said…

Oh..she had asked something like that.!!…

“Aunty…I will take Radhu with me to Goa…Will ask Neil to find a guy…is it ok”,Sam asked like convincing a crying kid…

“Double Ok!…have this cry baby with you,”her mom fake glared at her…

Are they nuts?? She had been pouring her heart out….and they dint bother to ask the reason….Was she regretting the moment spent with me? ..Why the hell,she can’t look me now??? ….I grew impatient….

“Promise..??”,she asked like kid..and apologized for Some thing….

I couldn’t withstand that anymore…..my mind kept grooving on that folder issue…which folder was Sam talking about?…..As though she had read my mind….she came with that same folder,and Sam stood smiling….she quickly turned around like a kid hiding chocolate and picked one pic,extended that to Sam…!!

Wasn’t she crying minutes before..and now why to smile..just like a kid…but…

“Yay…!! I got my picture…”,Sam squealed dramatically..and said..”deal….I will call you every weekend”..

Oh…when I was seriously thinking..,they had spoken something this silly….still…wait…I read the folder…tagged as Memories…!! Memories???? What does my bracelet has to do there…? Why should it stay as a memory…

“Finally you smiled…ah…poor you Sam..!! “,her mom said…

Sam came smiling to me….my mind…quickly connected all the dots…few…couldn’t solve…few solved… her words..tears…silence…folder…..I saw her…and she looked me once..a painful one…!! Enough to freeze me…!! Her eyes slowly made its way to ground….

“You got late by half an hour because of Radhi..”,her mom said as we stepped near the door…

“I forgot one…”,Sam rushed and rummaged the bag….” Radhu…Christmas star…!! New color….”..

I saw her…her mom and Sam busy with each other…She snapped a look to me…..with tears!….next sec she saw the star with a defeated smirk….Still.,she gave a kiddish smile to Sam…!!

I got that…!! She wasn’t a little one…!! Instead considering all of us so….Sam went to her…

“Aunty…I need to speak with you.”,I said…her mom smiled….and she looked me confused…

“Yes…tell me Arjun”,her mom asked….

Looking our gaze…Sam saw both of us…and She.,nodded her head in negative….Good!! So my guess was correct!!… My sister.,held her left palm as assurance…oh !! That’s great…

“Aunty…I wish..to marry Radhika with your blessings…”,I said clear.,humble and confidant….

Aunty’s forehead creased a little,then she saw radhika who was standing behind…the same place…near that room….She dared to see her mom…

“She doesn’t know a thing…I just…want to…”

“Arjun…don’t take me wrong….pls…leave..”,her mom said…that was equal to a slap….She gave one disgraced look to Radhika….It pricked me!!

“Aunty…please…listen me once…”,I tried to plead…though I myself had no idea of how am going to take the proposal further….I din’t think about it today….but I can’t let her down.,and now after bringing the topic…Definitely Not!!

“What’s all this Radhika…”,her mom asked authoritative surprising me….the girls jerked at that…I dint expect such a bold voice from her…Anyone would expect her to be soft character with her appearance….I heard Radhika sobbing…

“No..pls..she is not at fault…”,I blurted just to save the moment….

“Yes…Fault…it is…Radhika..is this how you behave with your best friends’s family?..”,she admonished..and caught her arm…

Well…that was for both of us…!! I got it…!! I saw Sam to get tears looking her mom!!

“Mom…am sorry…!!”,she said feeble…sobbing a little….and tried to remove her hand from Sam’s hold….My sister was in the verge of crying.,holding her hand..

“Sam…Please don’t say this to Prena di or your dad…Okay?? Arjun you too…Please don’t spoil our friendship…Just a month we will be here..,and you kids don’t bring any embarrassing situations for us….”

“Aunty…”,Sam had tears now…

“Look..Radhi…your friend is crying….This is what you want to give her at last??…..”,her mom asked with some earnest hope in her voice….

I was pulled back to our minutes before lovely moments..,that dining table and chair…the place where I twirled her…Just half an hour back…And now..Her mom wants to wipe every moment of ours completely…

I JUST CANT WITHSTAND THIS ANYMORE….My every cell was ready to burst in anger….If they din’t accept for my love…I am so not going to let anyone sleep tonight…I texted my dad to reach her home…’Please’ in bold…Enough!! he will come…!! I knew…. I saw the trio to be in a emotional moment….What nonsense!! I love her.!! I just want to pull her from this place and scold till my heart’s content for crying this much….Heck!! Did she really think I will leave her even after her confession…?

Minutes were passing..What makes my parents this late…Can’t they just lock the door and walk here…My eyes caught her dad’s Portrait…Round face.,captivating eyes.,dark hair.,very handsome he was in that picture..!!

“Why did you call us..?”,I heard my dad’s voice…. “Radhu..why are you crying…”,My mom asked next…

Her mom gave me one glare and asked them to take a seat…Hospitality at its peak! while I was already asked to leave!! I saw her to gulp her tears….

“Ah..Nothing…She slipped in steps it seems….That’s why…I was scolding..and”,her mom stuttered…

“Why do you scold an already hurt child”,My mom spoke in her favor…but I saw my dad to look me.,a stern gaze…!!

“Dad…I love Radhika!! I want to marry her…I asked Aunty’s permission…”,I said exactly like a announcement…I was so miffed maintaining a humble nature….My dad gave a shocked expression which was amiss with my mom…Okay…! now I get the term ‘we’ mentioned by Sam…It’s My mom and sister who noticed this…

“I said…Leave the topic..!”,her mom said steely….. “Prena di…..Am sorry!..”,she saw my mom…

“No..Nandhini…They..he..just..said..what he felt…umm…we won’t force Radhu…”,My mom gave her decision as her reply.. Not bad!!

“What…di….what she knows..and…I never thought..Radhika will embarrass me like this”,her mom said unhappy with the situation….

“Nand…”,my dad’s words were cut in the middle…

“Sorry…! I apologize on my daughter’s behalf….Lets forge…”

“No..! Please..!! She is a responsible child..! Don’t get her wrong..I apologize on my son’s behalf…He took things simple…”,My dad convinced her…

“I know about Arjun..!! She would have said something..he thought like this…playful..she is…I shouldn’t have let her there…Now see..we people are left…”,

“Excuse Me!!”,I said high…. I had been silent only to get to know their views.,but they were on a apology marathon and giving conduct certificates to us…

“I don’t get you all…Dad..!! I din’t do anything wrong that you are apologizing…Am seeking permission for our love…”, I finished with my hands gesturing my feeling… My confusion and irritation..!! They blinked confused…

Her mom!!..Must admit…! Clever..! she quickly got the note…

“Arjun.. I can’t get my daughter married to you….hope you won’t let my decision to affect our relationship….Your parents are more like a family for me..! got that!!”,She gave a point blank answer…

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So…how was it? Don’t scold me…Poor me…I finished all my updates..but couldn’t post…..The next one of this is ready….But its already 11.30..uff…..My eyes are drooping…Cough syrup k wajah se…ok…Pls do ignore my Typos and grammatical errors….Situation troubles me…Bachi samaj kar maaf kijiye….Tons of thanks for waiting for a week…I planned a double update yaar…!! Love you all loads…..Take care..

48 comments

  1. arti viswanathan

    Jessie darling superb,fantastic,Outstanding,excellent and marvelous episode… I loved it…. And happy new year to u as well…..

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Arti….Arti….Thanks a ton darling….First comment in this New year…!! Yay! Happy you liked it…such a lovely support yaa…stay happy forever….TC…loads of love

  2. Gianna

    Gianna

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    Cough syrup? Take care Sweetheart. Health is important.
    Coming to the update, we had a love ride with the last one and here we have so many tears, am confused to be honest, I didn’t expect Arjun to ask for her hand in marrigae like that, he is too dramatic.

    Eagerly waiting for the next one.

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Sweethearttttttttt…..Teddy hugs….cough! Yes…I kept singing to irritate others and ended up coughing….lemme blame the weather as well…hehe…how s u?…and am sorry…am irregular in catching updates…but will clear my debts soon…

      Ok….tears..!! Yes..! Only Radz…!the reason we will get in her pov…after 2 chaps…Arjun…dramatic…!!!! Nopeeee..!! His pov…”was she regretting the moments spent with me?”…..reason for his sudden decision to ask her hand…I should have added the word why? There…I guess..may be it would have helped….and chap 2 and 3 had his character sketch…

      And I left one more line to add …well.I read this chap now after your comment….I will add in next one…!! Sweetheart…..tons of thanks….now am eager for ur comments in next one…coz…he has done a lot der. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I finished next 2 chaps of this story….love u loads…will post once I snatch my bro’s lappy….TC….

  3. Amore

    Amore

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    So the drama is on the full swing… Arjun took the initiative which is commendable…

    Nanduz reaction was not so surprising but the reaction others (including Sam) gave left me flabbergasted…

    It has to b seen how Arjun proves himself worth to Radz… I’m still feeling hard to digest parent’s reaction in fact Sam too behaved oddly…

    All I can say for now is it is a test for ardhika and challenge for Arjun and Jess.. will never make Arjun lose any challenge when it comes to Ardhika…

    But the questions are “why did parents react like that??”

    Why radz behaved such??

    Any involvement of past is responsible for nanduz behavior towards radz??

    Are both families interlinked with each other in the past???

    Is the issue due to CASTE???

    And the MOST IMPORTANT ONE…

    “When will we see a ROMEO ARJUN???

    Wow! I have become a question bank… that too without answers (*pout*) post soon…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Amore…!! Drama …..lol!! Wow…as usual…..rock star Comment!! You know I always feel you like a batsman…Hitting forcefully and I need to either duck or catch the ball..not for score..to save my head…hahahahaπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ love you tons for your comments…

      I logged in…u too ask abt Sam…!! Yay1!! I scored…..okay…dear…Sam knew Arjun like a her…First chap..!! She says…we may be late but we know.. her dialogue…and Arjun asks..we???….so…now..its syncs I guess…it’s only Nandhini and samrat…who dint expect this…

      And..they doesn’t want this proposal topic to affect their relationship…tats y…such a reaction….romeo Arjun…from next chap…no connection btwn families…Rads south Indian Brahmin…. caste..!!! We have the answer how that will be tackled…if Nandu says…Arjun’s parents too belong to different religions…2nd chap..!! Radz nd Nandu behavior…in her pov after 2 chaps…

      Hope.I did my exam well…any more ques….and Amore…next one will be soon…TC and loads of love….what will Amore say for next chap..*confused pout*
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      • Amore

        Amore

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        If its due to Caste then…. oookkkaaayy (still)

        and really making question paper is my best job… obviously that is why Teaching was the job that started my career 4 years back hahaha…

        Even my teachers warn me not to ask any questions if he has to teach hehehe…

        And now when you have attempted the paper πŸ˜‰ you deserve marks don’t you?? so its…
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        X out of 100 πŸ˜‰ come on if you can keep suspense i even can πŸ˜‰

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Teacher!!!!! Thats why…questions…I see….!! and your still has the point..Chalo..you wont leave me..until I give it….Now…having my marks secretive is not good…how will I be boosted if am not allowed to know my progress!!….heheh….TC…lemme wait for my exam result…next chap..Fernandez sir will help me…lol….

    • Amore

      Amore

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      Good trick though… But dear girl I’ll disclose the marks on the result day…

      You didn’t gave a thought that you can improve till the time it is declared as once its declared it’s all over… So keep doing good in your exams and who knows you might score distinction…

  4. Chashni

    Aiyoo.ennama neenga eppadi panreengale ma.arjun romba paavam.radhika voda mom ippadi oru blast kuduthutanga.but Jessie please don’t separate them.I have tears.but this was nice asusual dear.love you take care

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Chashni…..Arjun paavama…!! No…nalla vaasichu parunga… avan kavalaiye padala…he wants to clear the doubt…apram…memories nu parthatum..tension ayitan…!! Oruthara thoonga vidamaten nu dialogue…aanalum Arjun pavam nu sona epidi…Arjun kaatle mazhai….pls don’t have tears…!! I will never separate yaar…!! You can have that as my word…!! I so love Ardhika…!!…neenga vera oru naal muzhuka i love you solluvenu sonnenga…!! Chashni…do u think this Arjun Fernandez will listen Nandhini…!

      Ippadiye ena kathaiya solla vachutiye ma…! Jess running…!! Love you loads…thanks again….I so love to chat like this…Next chaps is done…so do check tomo…sariya….TC dear…

  5. Kalyani

    Yeduthen kavuthen……is this the waya guytalks to his future in law that toomarriage proposal…..he should have learnt nicities….just kidding ….however u potray u r the best

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hi Kalyani….Adane…ippadi ya irupan..oru porupu venam…adhutha epi le parunga..unga to be dialogue solluvan….hehe..to be son in law..he calls him self…..I finished ya…i will post…am glad you pointed it…that shows his character illaya…adhan..!! thanks a lot dear…love you loads…TC..best.! Ah..am overwhelmed now…! Thanks again

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hey Neetz…thanks a lot yaar…glad u loved…her mom…! who cares..we have Arjun to tackle na… TC…love you loads…

  6. Saran

    Jessie… Thanks for update… Wow sad Ardhika separated… Omg god….Arjun want to marry his love within proposing radhika an hour… Wait for next….. Update next soon… Take care… Stay happy. .

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Saran!!….hey…happy!! but you are sad..no…they aren’t separated…You know Arjun’s character here…so..he will get her…well..he had no other choice other than to propose for marriage..after looking his bracelet in memories folder…! will post soon…Thanks a lot yaar.. TC…keep smiling…

  7. Jnana

    Jnana

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    Awesome…… He exclaimed good! At his moms words…. That was a look to watch….. Arjun’s bold step was good….. What’s her problem in getting her daughter married to arjun. Waiting for the next…..

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Hey Jnana….thanks a lot dear…for sharing your likes too..bold step…yesss…. well..her prob..next chaps…will post soon…TC…loads of love

  8. Jewel

    Jewel

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    jez, since i read last chapter, i was waiting for this chapter, and i thought this will be of complete romance, i was imagining ardhika’s romance, hiding from their parents and sam,…. bt what just happened, the scene become very serious…. rads, she is feeling guilty for doing this and hiding from her mom… and arjun he fears that she will go away from him for the happiness of her mom and to avoid problems between their families, and he will be a memory to her…. i liked his thoughts when their parents talk and apologize…. and prerana she took her stand in better way… rads, she is not a littile one, she cares for every one and think about everything, really matured….u wrote everything beautifully jez. i like that part where arjun get tensed and his thoughts when their parents talk, i liked that a lot…..

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Awwwwww…..Shonaaaaaaaaa….I named you shona..and you made me proud..!! Teddy hugs…
      Romance…! Thanks for sharing your guess…actually…This was something I framed in beginning itself…So.,shona..I wasn’t able to change..yep..I do know…Ardhika romance is what as a reader i too would have expected…Thanks for such a honest share..! Story demands…But we will have clarification in shot 8 and 9..dear..Exactly you are correct about Ardhika….you made me happy..!! you got it!! shona..!! Now imagine me giving you a bone crushing hug..SUCCESS!! It reached…woohoo…am dancing…you are absolutely coreectt about everyone…Brilliant Shona..!! extract of the update.!! Love you tons…And Unlimited Thanks dear..for this precious comment…..Now..next one will be soon..,.your like…wow!! thats the best part of his character here…I just adore the way you had read this write up….Teddy bear hugs…TC..stay happy

  9. sne

    Hai!jezzzzzzzzzz…… Wow thanks for this update ya……thank u soo much ….and come to my little queen and neenga ena panittinga ya enaku romba kashttama pochu ……full la padichappo …and most importantant I have lot of confusion in this chapter and I can’t concentrate anything and ananywork also ya,….u know I like arjun boldness….namma atjun rock na …..enaku onu puriyala radhika en azharanu……kandippa avan dad memories ilanu mattum enaku theriyum bcz arjun Donna mathiri yesterday venum nallum irukala ana today hahi…. Bcz she is have arjun with her naa…
    But ,my point is radhika nenacha marachirukala avanga amma kitta normal a iruka mathiri….but few minutes before ,she is happy with him ,she assure him what he wants to do with her na suddenly wht happen to her and I am soo confused ya….
    Arjun role pΓ aaaa…..na ena solrathu ……”Did she really thik I will leave her even after her confession……stupid girl how dare to think about …
    Semma boldna arjun ….apram eNA nadakka pothunu nenacha tension na iruku dear…….na eyarayum dear nu sonnathe ila nenga ena solum pothu happy ya iruku and athu special thanks and important sekram update panunga enala patiences oda iruka mudiyala……
    Na romba pesaranu enake therithu but na ena panrathu enalla end feeling share pannama iruka mudila and dry for that ……TC ya and love to loads ya….bye……by snega…..

    • Jessie

      Jessie

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      Snegaaaaaaaa……My pleasure dear….thanks a lot dear….Acho..ena achu….you are right about RAdz….Adha shot 8 le varum…Correct a kelvi…Arjun kum athe doubt than…dont get confused..it will come in 8th shot..as i said….

      Arjun…..!! naan ready padika..hahha… yes..sema bold..correct…Ah…dialogue quoting..super.! thanks again…no fear..when Arjun Fernandez is here…Hint ok thana..bold nu neenga le solitenga.apram ena…story is in ur hand….Thanks dear..happy that you liked..done dona done..I will update…Dont be sorry….NEenga romba ellam pesala…curious a irukeenga…I too behave the same way..i will comment lengthy….hahah..so chill…I will update…TC…Loads of love…stay happy

  10. Swathi

    Jessie dea…awesomeeeeeee update ya
    Arjun…he is not the one to let thing go..sudden proposal..didn’t expected it…he is struggling to convey his love…but no one is understanding..they r ignoring his feelings..either due to religious issue or are they thinking they don’t have enough maturity to take the decession??Even rads is confusing him with her behaviour..may be she is crushing her love thinking she won’t get consent for their love from their family due to religious issue..some many questions in my mind..and that folder secret..this is turning more and more interesting.
    Belated new year…have an amazing year n be awesome like u r ..loads of loveβ™‘

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Swathiiiii….Thanks a lot dear…Yes..Yes..Yes…so correct about Arjun and Radhika…but Radhika has one more reason too…Religious issue is also a major problem here….And yes..you said it..so correct about the leads pov…dear…claps..and teddy hugs…Am glad to get such reviews..thanks again…yes..is the reply for all your questions… folder secret..you alone asked it…super..well..no big secrets..!!..am happy that you liked it to this extent and shared your views…thanks dear…and wish you the same…sweet wish..!! loads of love…stay happy

  11. Farjana

    Hi Jessie.. was waiting for it… y radhika behaving oddly? Is der any problem? Anyways it was amazing but would like to see y she is behaving such way? Eagerly waiting for next update…

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Farju…Glad ya…you are here…thanks a lot…her pov we have after 2 chaps..but the reason will be revealed in shot 8..next is for Arjun only…thanks for sharing your views…will post soon….TC…Loads of love

  12. Rossy

    Rossy

    |Registered Member

    I was seriously thinking πŸ˜”…what Arjun did n why so sudden attack…gosh I thought radz might be faint…sam…clever girl , caught everything…but…nandini is smartest among all…how could she suddenly changed the marriage topic into apologies contest….and why she doesn’t want Arjun Marr to radz…well who want to let Marr her daughter, who smokes n drinks…lol….apart from jokes…it should not be religion….

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Radz faint…lol..no..hehe… thanks a ton Rosie dear….super dooper review from you..I just loved reading it…lol smoke and drink..tu bi na…nahi chodegi…!! Religion is one of the reason…Love you loads…TC

  13. Gauri

    Gauri

    |Registered Member

    Jess I am going on a mission to kill Arjun’s sasu ma…..but before that I want to hug you for writing such a real update…yes marriage in such cases is complicated …now I am waiting to see what happens next …loved it to the core πŸ˜€ stay blessed Jess and keep smiling

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Hey..Gauri…lol..killing mission…aww…Teddy bear hugs dear… thanks a ton dear…am glad you loved it..and thanks again…..TC…loads of love

  14. Dipika

    Dipika

    |Registered Member

    Jb sorrryyyy for being this late.. But it was worth coming late n reading peacefully.. U just rocked it.. U knw i love arjun’s sarcastic remarks… Hospitality at its pick.. Lol…. N he cooking all the story while she was sobbing.. I was lik my FernΓ‘ndez sir hv to go thru this alone.. M so feeling bad n happy tht he stood for his love.. But wht happened with nandini to b this stubborn.. M waiting.. Post soon.. Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

    • Jessie

      Jessie

      |Author

      Judwa behana..pls dont be..am too late in catching wos….thanks a ton dear…sarcastic ones..thanks….so happy with your review girl..alone..!! is ke liye ek dialogue hai,,.will do…TC..loads of love dear

  15. Crazy Girl

    Hey jazz kutty… am soooo sry i am late… seriously i was waiting for this chapter baby… bt to my bad luck i am late…

    Episode was brilliant baby… u moved it so carefully… even i was so curious about radhika smile which he felt first time for something wrong… i eagerly wanna know about that folder and Radhika POV…

    Arjun was so worried about his lady love… but i dint expect his marriage proposal so quick… just now he confessed it and only little romance… but he proposed for marriage so quick… but i loved it… he cant see his love in pain… he wants her to get rid from it… so lovely…

    Regarding Nandhini she is perfect mother… even though she is rude but she cent percent correct… she was caring for her daughter thats why she is not accepting it… she doesnt wants her daughter to taunt by society… i think caste problem and other one is taunting from society… i guess so… lets see in future chapter…

    Now so curious to know about Arjuns parents reaction when Nandhini said this wont happen… and how Radhika gonna handle it… and how Arjun gonna get his love lady… he is so stubborn and he wants what he needs… so what steps he gonna take it and abt Sam how she gonna help her bro and her sweet frnd… so curious dear… splendid one… loved it… its was lively environment episode… love you aloads my jazz kutty… teddy hugs… :-*

    Happy new year darling πŸ™‚

      • Jessie

        Jessie

        |Author

        Sulbi jaan..am too late in responding…dont be sorry ya..,ah..no bad luck…you arent that late..folder and pov after next one..nothing much big..Now am like am reading such a super comment this late..wow!! you said it so well….especially about Arjun…yes..yes..thats the reason he proposed…NAndu..wow!! again..you rocked ya…exactly..you brought all those points she had s hesitation…super…..wow..so lively comment..am like am again gonna read this chap..am jumping reading your comment..Thanks a ton dear..wish you too a very happy new year…TC..loads of love…Stay happy…Teddy hugs…Seasons of love..aww…girl you always make me happy…love you tons

  16. Aastha

    Jessie…
    Loved Arjun…he openly stated his love and straight forward proposal…he took the first step… loved his determination knowing her feelings….
    but Radz in tears..!!!! She still fears…her respect and love for her mom..won’t allow her to go against her….but Nandini should have faith in Radz.. should understand her feelings…due her strict nature Radz isn’t so open… and would definitely make Arjun future flashes true….. Nandini should support her…..
    That memories folder !!!!… she preserves all the sweet memories… that’sso lovely….she is an innocent pure soul…
    Jessie..next is ready…then go snatch bros lappy… what are u waiting for..??
    Do take care of cough…😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Jessie I have registered here…but don’t know what to do next…???

  17. Roma

    Jessss…..very lovely n beautiful narration. ..awesoooooome..rads smiled n then crying…made me confused…arjun put marriage proposal. ..wowwww. ..but why nandini not accepting it….so sorry for late comment my dear darling sis….I’m so glad that I can comment now…reading in fast speed. …lol…keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug πŸ˜‰ β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ πŸ˜‰

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