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Manmarziyan – My Little Queen (Shot 4)

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Hello….Everyone…So..this time…Little queen comes first…Seasons of love is next….Pls do give your reviews…

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My Little Queen (Shot 4)

“Radhu…Radhu…one more please”, I was brought out of my reverie listening a little kid to plead her…She happily fed something to him…Radhu!..even a little one calls her so…Only if she had accepted my friendship that day.,I wouldn’t be here at this place..

Why the hell she every time addressed me Fernandez sir’….In this one year,it was just her..only her what I see and listen whenever I come here…With each and every time.,she did come close to my heart….I tried my best to be polite with her…even when.,she took my mobile.,to delete her pic…

“You can’t delete it”,I pulled my mobile looming over her…and she stood disappointed with a sad pout.. “If you want to..then….”,I paused and saw her to look me… “Say…I love you Arjun!”,I smirked….

She blinked at me..Must have thought me as a idiot..Of course.,yes!..She turned me into one..I felt like waiting for ages in that six months of time..,while she had finished her course and was preparing for MBA..My god! no more wait!

But she disappeared with no good answer…Next time,when I came I couldn’t find her..May be she shifted her house or cut ties because of my behavior,I thought…and there was no way to enquire about her to my family…That was one hell of time.,I suffered..2 days.!!,I tricked Sam with too many questions,but no use…It was around 3Am, I heard some vehicle noise and saw her to come home with luggage along with her mom…She was out of station!!….My brain failed to catch this simple logical reason….I waited for her,the next day.,but she dint turn out.,and was unusually gloomy when I saw her….Unable to control myself,I inquired throw gestures and she just nodded a nothing…Later.,I got to know it was because of their ritual to commemorate her dad’s death..and it was 13th year!! May be she got remembrances of her father.,yearn for paternal love !!…

My mom pushed a reluctant Sam,who kept chanting that she never opens up to anyone……I quickly hopped to my terrace when Sam left to her house…I happened to see her to cry her heart out clutching Sam’s shoulders….I was in my terrace.,and she saw me once from hers….My Angel was in need of an Angel in her life…I so wanted to hug and comfort,only if she had acknowledged my love!!…

Neither she accepted me as a friend nor she ignored my presence around her…Her fragmented approach confused me more and I eventually turned a mute spectator for all her antics…May be that is her way of rejection….A decent stand-offish!!….I would have left it as such.,if not she hid my drunken drive stunt to my parents…,if not she came to my room,when I met an accident and wished my wellness thinking me to be fast asleep….

She did love me.!. The tinge of pinkish shade that covered her cheeks when I stay around her,cannot be out of fear..only could be because of my effect on her…My presence!!…
Those side eyed looks she gave me.,while I purposely stayed along with her in kitchen,in the name of supervising Sam’s cooking skill….No..!! My instincts can never betray me…..

This time that was the reason I decided to propose it without beating around the bush…It was tough to carry on with a pain….

“Here…Wait”,I saw her to walk down in the side yard of my house.,holding a battery torch…what the!…I saw the watch…Its gonna be 7.40…Almost half an hour passed recalling my past….She was searching something….what was the need to walk in dark…..Idiot girl!

I then heard to climb terrace steps…”Radhu..”,I crooked my head a little and saw the fellow Saral to stand on road,calling her…

“Wait”,she replied and came here..She din’t notice me as I was standing in dark….If only she had the sense to check the place,she could see me..But No!! she was keen to pluck a Rose!’

Rose!!

“Saral..left..you idiot..left..yes….Catch”,she threw the rose guiding him through the call… She wasn’t aware of another person’s presence behind her…Careless girl!

“Now get lost”,she whispered in her mobile and hung the call…

“What are you doing here?”,I asked throatily…

She jerked with a audible gasp.. I did want that…she needs to know about her careless nature…

“Fernandez Sir!! you…dint”,she stammered but scrutinized her look to my right hand.,I quickly turned the bottle..I knew..she might be trying to read the label…

“Sir..you are drinking!”,she said covering her mouth with her palm….

Drinking isn’t that grave sin..! I could only smirk at her antics…..

“I asked…why you are here?”,I asked arrogant…..

“that…Rose…for sar…but..sir..Aunty thinks you had quit drinking too”,she thinned her lips looking my hand….

When I have one handsome face,why cant she see my face… But…wait! Rose for Saral? for him from my house??

“Rose for saral??How dare…”,I gritted my teeth…and she saw my face…

“Fer…Sir..sir…Pls..Its…love!! you see…and…you don’t get angry…Am sorry..ok?”,she spoke like convincing a whining kid…

Sh*t…what the hell she thinks of me…Am still steady.!..I saw the bottle to be half empty…though its long time.,it din’t turn me that tipsy.!….

She turned to leave…

“Hey wait! I was asking you something..Reply before you leave”,I ordered taking a step closer to her….Her reflex! she took a step behind!

“What were you doing with Saral there?”,I pointed her terrace…

Her eyes widened in shock.,and narrowed at me..Oh really! glaring me?!

“What does it has to do here?”,she asked back in a little high tone…

That’s bad…! I held her wrist and pulled her close…

“Sir..Leave my hand..You are drunken..Leave me”,she whined…

“Stop whining..you little one…I will wring your neck like a chicken if you yell in my ears”,I hissed in full rage twisting her left hand behind her back….

How dare she calls me drunkard…..It was just few sips..!!

“Tell me..”,I pulled her close….

She wriggled from my hold.,as her mobile rang.. “Ah..saral….Will meet tomorrow…bye..bye…”,she cut the call in hurry…

“You lied to us..You neither quit smoking nor this…”,she pointed the bottle…”Why did you lie then”,she turned angry suddenly…

“I said,I will try…and I never said I had quit..and I quit smoking!”,I lied through my teeth with that last sentence..

“Again a lie…I saw you smoking..Last time…”,she gave me a accusing look…..

“Who is that saral to you”,she glared me and turned around to leave…I leaped a little to hold her wrist.,may be little strong this time.,but her mobile and keys flew down kissing the brick tiles beneath our foot…

She looked shocked..,yea!..her mobile was in pieces now..!!

“See…It was not my fault”,I said when she was about to pick those…I tried to help but she shoved my hand…I took another sip leisurely while she knelt down….What!! Did she lose her sense? she wears a low cut one and kneels before me….

“Get up”,I said high,hardly controlling my eyes not to look her precious……She stooped more to collect the scattered pieces,giving a tough challenge for my self-control…I tried to avert my gaze..,but No!…that tempting ivory skin..,I pulled her through her arm…”Are you senseless?”,I asked…….

But her annoyed pout and look was on her palms that held the mobile pieces….I sipped further….She glared me angrily,amused with that I sipped a little more….She was too angry to notice that I hardly consumed…

“Who is that Saral?”I asked again..,this time my bottle hit her palms a little.,and in a blink of a moment.,she pulled and threw it away shocking me….The thick shattering noise raised my temper….

“Why are you bothered…what if I drink or smoke”,my left snaked around her waist and pulled her close raising her a little to my height…

She tried hard to squirm in my hold..,her eyes threatened to pour out at any of the next moment,with my hard grip…

“Leave me…you..are….too…bad…I never thought….”,she stuttered…her every features flaring in anger…

Bad!!

“Radhika…! Is my love that invisible”,I asked defeated..

Her brows drooped.,her features melted with her mouth opened a little….I smiled humorless..,relieving her from my grip…

“Sweetheart…!! Look me…”,I cupped her cheeks and held close to my face.,while her eyes scanned my features afresh….just like a baby!! what does she find anew every time in me??

“What is that! Every time you find something in my face”,I asked with a smile..and she did her signature fish style..,forgetting the minutes before clash….She stepped back a little.,with her gaze on ground…I stepped forward….

“Am I that bad?”I asked with my forehead on hers…pulling her face close to me.,I whispered…”Don’t you love me?”,she nodded in negative…

“Really”I asked surprise..and she nodded in affirmative….

I,now saw her face.,”Say it Radhika”,I said…and I noticed the effect of my stress on her name.,had on her….Her rosy lips devoid of artificial beauty supply,parted a little,and that Elaichi smell in her breath drove me lil crazy…

“Fer..”,I shut close her mouth with mine….She was little shocked to respond back…I knew!….I took the lead with immense pleasure.,devouring her sweetness completely….She stood on her toes in my hold.,trying hard to cope up with my breath and I broke it…only for her!…I lifted her little and pulled her into another liplock.,and this time,she wriggled a little…

“You love me isn’t”,I asked… Open your mouth…and…speak!”,I said….

She thought a sec and pulled her lips in,nodding in negative…

“So..I can marry Christie?”,I asked amused with her antics…She tried to get down from my hold…..”Why so adamant.?..will you love me if I quit smoking”,I smiled to her…

She saw me the next second.,blinking like a doll.,her lips back to its place.,this time little more pinkish….My palm on her soft back caressed her and pushed more towards me…My front synchronizing with her breaths…,I cupped her face…

“I love you sweet heart”,I held her chin to face me…rubbing my nose on hers…my right now guiding her hands to loop my neck and I rolled my thumb on her lips….She was froze in my hold looking me…

Captivated by the moment.,she gave herself when I kissed her again….Her scent or the effect of alcohol or both.,I wasn’t sure what turned me more into her…She moaned high encouraging me….her fingers clutching my dark locks..,her lips tried to follow my prints..she threw her head back to catch breath.,and my eyes just relished her,at that moment… Every feature of hers.!…Her alluring blooming beauty rubbing my front,I lifted her and she balanced my sudden move.,with her palm on my bare chest….I stopped a sec.,while she looked me breathing heavily,I smiled and walked a little.,all the while her gaze locked with mine.,her eyes averted from mine,when her back hit with wall…22 years old….couldn’t be
a naive at all.!…..She looked me little shocked.,when I captured her lips again…..my hands trespassing her fabric above the skirt caught a grip on her waist….

Her lips synced with mine following with every inch of my guidance on her waist….With her soft curves pressing more into mine,I lost my control to be soft on her…I could
feel her fast breaths..her hand on my chest moved deep down my arm making me groan for her,…She pulled back her hand and caught hold of my neck nape covering her over me….and… My face hidden in her bosom…She shivered a little when I kissed…..unable to move my face a inch further,I just played and teased her more.,driving her crazy on me.,enjoying her pleasured moans…she held me close.,with her legs covering my thighs a little….curling up move over me,she gave me access to play with her…I witnessed her fast breath.,sweat and her every response with no retort from her…..She yelped when I gave her a hickey right on her soft precious,and trembled as I soothed her…She din’t make a move though my warm breath fanned her front….

She was too naive to handle a person like me…..I rubbed her thighs feeling her to be stiffen a little…”Radhika honey!!”,I called with my face hitting her bosom…She wasn’t able to get any of my words….I turned and leaned myself against the wall now.,with her clinging on me….her hold was strong..and my face hid inside her front completely… “Baby…Its turning hard for me to control now…”,I kissed her cleavage rubbing her back…..”Radhika Are you ok?”,asked a second later and she nodded affirmative…

Gosh!!She was all sane…clutching me close…My whole vibrated in mirth!….I rubbed my stubble more in her soft bosom and she moaned irritated… “Why?”,I asked and continued it,until she left her hold on my head….Finally I got a chance to breath something other than her feminine scent.,which drove me insane,teasing my manhood…I should be proud on my self control!!…I raised my head to see her face…I had been holding her high in the air.,and she wiped her face with her palms….

“Look me!”,I shook her like a baby and she held my shoulders for balance…

My dream! to hold her in my arms..and there she is looking the sky and everything around,while I stood watching her…

“You din’t love me isn’t!”,I asked laughing to her and she looked down my face with a blank look…I was shocked to see her tears….

Contradicting my opinion of what I saw.,I slid her down.,our clothes squeezing with the effect of our proximity…Her curves rubbing my front and rested down now, in middle and I held her chin to face me…She looked a little dazed..her cheeks bloomed a little more,and lips more alive with my love bite….My thumb rubbed her lower lip a little..Her face glowed like
fresh bloomed lily under full moon light…

“Did you cry?”I asked genuinely surprised…She was the one who gave me access to…She nodded in negative…I kept asking questions,while she responded only through her nod….

“What the F**k…Speak up”,I gritted and she saw me confused… “Ok!..ok!!..For Heaven’s sake..will you speak something”,I asked with the last ounce of patience left in me….

Did she really love someone else? or what? why the hell she cried..I was frustrated with weird thoughts accusing myself ….

“Radhika…Little darling…I love you so much…!! “,my palms cupped her cheeks close to my face…Not to kiss again.! I held my head back.,but saw her to mumble something…

“What baby!!”,I tried to listen and she looked my palms….Yea..My hold! I left her cheeks….

“Why little?”,she asked feeble completely knocking my sense down…..

Was it this,she had in her mind?! No..It couldn’t be….

“Why did you cry?”,I asked hurriedly….

“I din’t”,she retorted…

Thats a lie!!…

“Radhika…you get that isn’t…I love you dear..!”,I proposed for the third time in a row…Hours back I was tensed to utter those once and now I said it thrice,only with a worry that ‘did she get me wrong’…

“That’s ok Fernandez sir”,she wiped her cheek..

She took a step back when I was about to hold her wrist…

What kind of reply was that? I was about to speak and my mobile rang with Sam’s ringtone…I checked my watch…8.20.pm…She stood clutching her skirt..I quickly leaped and hugged her close.,with a forehead kiss….She saw my face.,once again grasping every cell of mine through her orbs…Her hair was messed up,she had it braided on either sides..I quickly slid my hands to her back and hooked the top buttons of her blouse…I read the surprise note on her brown orbs,when I pinned it one by one…3 buttons completely undone,that revealed her most to me.!…

I neither smirked nor smiled, just tried to convey my love through my look…I patted her cheek and crooked myself a little to see her…

“You.Are.My.Little.Darling!…Only mine!!”…..My forefinger touching her blouse that covered her hickey…I quickly withdrew my finger back sensing her fast breath…

Sam called me again..!!

I turned around to pick her call.,and as I expected,she ran down holding her skirt a little high…. “Radhika….wait!…listen me!”,she dint pay heed to any of my words…..

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So…how was it? I would love to hear from you all… do share your precious words…..Pls do ignore my Typos and Grammatical errors…..Love you all loads…and Take care…

50 Comments
  1. Shrinithrpooh

    Okay so anybody reading this….can u help me ….can you do me a favour…please i am sorry writing this on your page jessie but i cant help it…i am actually finding kfar aka blue….please help i have not seen her updates in a while….last what i saw grom her was BBATCB ch 13 contd…..now i do not know wat happened to her….were there new updates that hapoened to slip out of my sight or maybe she stopped…..i feel so vulnerable right now….like i want to know wat happened….i am sure nobody likes to be kept waiting …i mean pleaassse do ur sistrr a littkes favour….tell me wat happened to her…THANK U DARLING AND SORRY TOO!!!!😯☺😮😊

    1. Jessie

      Hey shrinithpooh…no need to be sorry yaar…welll..jus like u…even many here including me.,wait for kfar’s updates…she hasn’t stopped I guess… Lets hope she will update soon…Even i too wish.,someone to respond here….lets see…TC

  2. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Jessie

      Hey Kavina…thanks a lot dear….TC…stay happy

  3. Brin

    Awesome episode, love the way Arjun confess his love for Radhika, but what is stopping her from excepting Arjun’s love, eagerly waiting for the next update, Jessie you nail it, well done. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Brinzzeeee….thanks a lot dear….glad you pointed abt Arjun…Radz one..she will say soon…will post yaar…thanks again…TC….loads of love

  4. Superb jessie.radhika romba mosam vaaya thorandhu I love you arjun nu sonna enna.waiting for next.take care dear

    1. Jessie

      Hey Chashni….thanks a lot dear…hahaha..adhana..sonna than enna….Arjun unga sympathy ottu vangitan…ippadi score panrane…!! will post soon dear….TC and keep smiling

  5. Awesome dear

    1. Jessie

      Hey Devika…Thanks dear…TC… stay happy

  6. hot hot hotnesss…jessssss oh my god..lovely update

    1. Jessie

      Hey Neetzz….thanks a lot dear…hot…!! thanks…! TC…stay happy

  7. arti viswanathan

    Awesome, fantastic, excellent , superb and marvelous episode jessie darling…. I loved to the core…. I think arjun has started liking radhika…. And kisses scenes…. And why my pov radhika not responding to arjun if she really likes him then is it because of that bl…dy saral…..tc loads of love and teddy hug to u from me……i will be waiting for next episode….. It’s interesting episode radhika would go and tell arjun’s parent that he was drunken….

    1. Jessie

      Arti…Arti…..thank you…thank you…. glad that you liked it….yep…he loves her…nope..not saral….I will post soon…thanks for your view dear….no..she won’t tell to his parents…loads of love….TC…teddy hugs dear….

  8. Really superb Jessie… Awesome episode… Ardhika scene awesome…
    Eagerly wait for next.. Pls update next soon….

    1. Jessie

      Hey Saran…thanks a lot yaar…glad for pointing those…will post soon….TC …stay happy

  9. Jnana

    What is the connection between this saral and radz is all I was thinking….. I guess you are one too romantic types….. Arjun has great self control? Half bottle didn’t turn Jim tipsy….. And radhika…. Is she confused? Or she loves him? Or she loves some one else? Or what else? I don’t know…. Is she falling? Why was she crying? So many questions… Guess I didn’t bother you with questions…… Sorry if I had…… Tc…..

    1. Jessie

      Jnana….!!! Thanks for your views dear…saral n Radz…Next chap has…Romantic..no..!! yep..he thinks he had.. half bottle…lol…he hardly consumed…just few sips..we have words there… Radz…we will know with chaps…She doesn’t love anyone else other than Arjun..!!! Next shot has it…nope you din’t bother me…don’t be my friend…TC …loads of love…

  10. Hey ya JESSSIIEEE….what an update….am short of words….i couldnt express….its wonderful and lovely …with every shot i just wanna read more n more…like endless…from where u got so energy and time….penning beautifully and that also with so much speed….
    Arjun all jealous of kid…calling her Radhu….coz she hasnt accepted his friendship either….finally Arjun confessed….hats off for his patience….their liplock….moments….so romantic…am so drowned into it ….now only wants Radz reply….what’s stopping her. ??….is she thinking their love wont be accepted…religion issue..??…plz post Radz pov for this….am way excited for next and also SOL….loads loads of love dear….take care of your health also…..muahh 🙂 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Hey…Aasthaaaaaaaaaa……..I tell you…Its not because of energy…..I so want to complete this before my lappy gets into any further prob…thats why….!! Am so happy that you liked it to this extent…Thanks dear…..

      HAts off…!!Fernandez sir will be happy now…hahah…Thanks for pointing it so cute dear…well…we have a glimpse of it in shot 5…. We have Radz view..but not as Pov…i had posted both dear…Thanks a ton dear..your words are so lively….You brought your feel thro ‘those…am super happy… love you tons my friends….Thanks dear…like so much….I will take care…!! Muaahh….Stay happy

  11. Amore

    Literally??? she was worried as he called her little??? OK OK fine… but now when will parents play a role huh???

    damn good… keep it upp

    1. Jessie

      Amore!! yep!! Little!! Parents….after shot 5…thanks dear…TC …Loads of love…

  12. Gauri

    Jess first off all a big sorry for not commenting o previous updates….I just read all and now here is the collective comment…Radhika her innocence is additive the way she made his parents understand the plea of children living without the either parent was so beautifully described….Arjun Bhaiya….LOL…that gave him a ear bleed…and me tummy roll…he kept on scaring and simultaneously fell for her….future eggless cakes …wow loved the way you wrote the part of realization of feelings…Sam-Neil cute, and today to was like…I am speechless….I think I should borrow some words from Sathya of some other language to make my comment look more impressive ….. 😀 the way Arjun confessed and kept confessing was WOW in bold and the first kiss…I don’t think anyone could write that so perfectly and make it look that beautiful 🙂 Jess I am your fan…hand ,ceiling, table…and all varieties available 🙂 love you

    1. Jessie

      Gauriiiiiii…..Teddy bear hugs…collective comment k liye…thanks in spl….Radz part…yaar..
      love you for mentioning it…ear bleed..lol,,,glad you enjoyed his ear bleed…hehe….eggless..yep…vegetarian hone ka asar…lol…feelings realization…thanks again….Your comments are always impressive my Magician….why other lang…I love your words…confession..yipppeeee!!!! thank you…First kiss…yaar….am sharmaoing..lol….Love you Gauri….do you still think you need to look for other lang…No..!! I made it beautiful !…
      You broke the hesitance I had…!! Bear hugs dear friend.. Fan!!!! Gauri..dear…yaar….am already your fan..and you snatch all varieties for you!! Love you tons….Am replying late…but still…I just live this moment reading it…6 mins..am here…reading yours again..!! Magician!! kaha na maine..!! Stay happy dear…

  13. Rossy

    Jazzzzy….what a blow….ooooooowwwww god….Arjun, seriously this mad fell more for her…radz go baby and complain arjun’s mom dad…he is drinking and smoking…uparse kissing u unlimited…lol….rofl…then ur marriage will fix…pakka…wat saral have to do here….m thinking….and still now m in dark if radz loved Arjun ir not…i think she loves but something pulled back her…what is it??? Don’t say saral😈😈 and jazzzy do u liked dark??? If yes see me at WhatsApp…

    1. Jessie

      Mad kaha…Arjun ko!! Argh…lal…No…!! he is so romantic..heheh…banda acha hai..!!
      unlimited kissing…rofl…kya term hai lal….hahhahah,,,Marriage fix k liye idea…..I see….NExt shot you will know..I wont say saral…heheh…Thanks a ton lal….kaise sawal poocha tune…I loved dark..you know that…done! love you loads dear….TC….

  14. Hey super girl…
    Today literally….. I am unable to find words to praise your this masterpiece … Kya likhti ho ….. dear ..
    Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome…
    So … finally Arjun confessed … that too thrice…
    Radhika’s expression… n their intense kisses n finally the assuring hug n soothing forehead kiss….
    Everything was just perfect… I read it so many times…
    Thanks my dear for giving this amazing episode to us … Love you so much…
    Always be HAPPY…… waiting for next
    Your sunshine…

    1. Eagerly waiting to know Radhika’s p.o.v

      1. Jessie

        Sunshine…..Teddy hugs….Am so overwhelmed now..reading your words….I just loved it and you made the moment with your words…Thanks a ton dear…Ah…that ‘assuring hug and soothing forehead kiss’…what a precise observation!!!!! *claps*

        You got the unsaid one…..Am like..completely surprised…!!! thanks…! a real boost for ppl like me…so many times!! Thanks again…that was a intense scene..but you looked in for the emotions conveyed..!! you surprised me dear…!! How to express my happiness..!!what a lovely reader you are!! Yaar…I should thank you actually…I had my fingers crossed you know..!! You made me to feel the worth of my imagination.!! love you tons…..Thanks dear… Take care…stay blessed..!

        Rads POV is something Arjun too looks for..so that will be a bit different presentation….

  15. jessy…girl what r u?? I’m speechless
    arjun’s confessed three times !! I desperatey want to know rads pov now.
    Aradhika romance was hot n intense.loved it.

    1. Jessie

      Hey Swathi….what are u? Pata nahi…may be crazy.. 😉 love you loads dear…Thanks a lot…yep..he did…thanks for sharing your view…TC…stay happy…..

  16. Sulbi

    Mashaallah… Jazz kutty… am dumbstruck… i dnt no what to say… actually collecting words to express my feeling….

    Unbeatable episode… Past was awesme… Saral.. who is he?? Thank god… Atlast Arjun confessed… am sooo happy… am confused y Radhu is not confessing? And y she stil use Fernandez Sir… seekiram love ah solu ma… pavam Arjun evlo dha control panuvan… uffff…. hot kiss melted me…. lol…. i just loved this romance session…. so lovely and i loved it to the core….

    My dear darling jazz kutty… U STOLE MY HEART… I totally fallen for you… oh gosh… whats happening to me… am proposing you jazz… ahhh let it be i dnt mind…. bcz i love you tons for this and will always… bone crushing hug frm my side… oops sorry… muuuuuuaaaahhhh…. tc and anticipating for Season of Love… Stay happy my darling… 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Sulbi jaan…Ah…thanks a ton dear…..am just enjoying reading your comment….adhana..solluva..next shot parunga…hot one melted you!!!!! Eeeee…*Arjun blushes..hahhaha* Thanks for pointing the romance in precise…love you for that….!!
      I will have your heart safe!!Aww….!!! I love you too….My jaan… forever wala love…am lucky!!! SOL done..! Muahhhh…Bear hugs…love you loads…how much you gave your enthusiasm to me…!! you have no idea….Stay smiling forever dear….

  17. Dipika

    Kessss darling this is soooopppppp Awsomeeeee n beautiful.. You made me speechless… Now i m not ashamed to admit tht m envy you.. Ur such Awsomeeeee writer yarrrrr… This story became my one of most fav story…..

    Arjun’s thought.. Gos this guy is combo of bad n good…. His every visits make him fall in deep with her…. N oue chirpy little Queen always busy doing something…. He proposing her n she went out of station.. N he admiring her every antics… Accident chupaya.. Bandi Awsome hai….
    N what exactly she doing with saral.. M so irritated lik arjun when she didn’t answer… N whn she was keep nodding.. I was like.. Radz pls aj k din to kuch bol do… N tht kissss.. Goddddd.. M sooo out of breath like i wss there in the scene with arjun.. Lol.. I will wanna here from radz.. Her pov… Post it na…

    Judwa behena you r truly splendid writer…. M so in love with this story… Love u lots 😍 😍 😍 😍

    1. Jessie

      Deeepzzzz….teddy hugs…..Envy on me!! That I said to u…and u r giving it back 2 me…..naaaa….Judwa behna…!! Thanks a ton and glad to know…it’s one of ur fav…..

      Bandi awesome hai…thanks !!! Yep…yaar….Arjun had no other choice…lol…chirpy queen…she rocked…!!hehe…. saral..next chap me saral confusion cleared….Rads…pov…we have…but not as pov….then…..What1…..you felt like u were there……Behana….wapas aa ja….😈😉😉😜love u tons yaar….thanks for sharing ur likes…Am.so happy….!! Merry Christmas…!! Stay happy

  18. Tweety

    Awesome episode jessiie akkaa…
    waiting for the next update.

    1. Jessie

      Hey Tweety….thanks a lot ma…post paniten…..Merry christmas…!! TC….stay happy

  19. Oh my my my my my Jesssssiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!! wattttt r u my dear girlllllllllllllllll! Excellent! stupendous! colossal! beyond the sky!!!!!!!!!! awww!!!!!!!!!! am excited like so out of control now. crazzzzzzyyyyyyyy. first a big thanks fr u sweet darling. i’d been out of town fr the past one week n full of people around me even at home. so wanted to read tis amazing thing but so sadly cudnt catch up as I hd got not to sit with phone r lappy. tats so an annoying n I happened to see the quick updates of this adding to my irksomeness. now read all in a go. awwww!!!!!!! tight big hug darling. u inspired me lots n lots n lots. lively, catchy, engrossing, poetic!!!! n wat not!!!! I truly wonder!!!! wah! wah! Wah! every thing, right from the way the cigar btw his teeth, ur casual rolling of dialogues, the way the scene turns over, n thr thr…”love turned u idiot” genius!!!!!!! wat a dialogue relevance u hv brought up with the scene. the way she looks at his face evertime n he wonders wats thr to seek out every time anew. hahahahaaha 😀 hilarious baby darling. ur romance!!!!!!!! Oh me!!!!! I keep a fisted hand on my heart!!!! ur rolling of words aren’t forgiven for god’ sake. killer! killer! klllerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! wen I read tat while he was climbing up the stairs the way her images of climbing tat flashing in his mind…wah, I loved tat so dearly. wat a minuteness n realness!!!! lovely!!!!! n thr the sickness creeping on finding nowhr ur love just fr two days n then comes to know she’d been just out of the town. the tricks that he uses to make sam spill the beans oh!! hw normal n yet speaks the volume intently!!!!! girl!!!! u r nowhere to my reach!!!!!!! just passing my flying kisses alternately with by both hands and am nowhr seeming to get tired. awwwww!!!! LOVE. INSPIRED. ADORATION. big huggggggggggggggggg my darling

    1. u r out of my reach, I came to say. sorry tat in case it’s been mislead. hehe ‘cos I’m a freak. hv been spinning around the world of ur intoxicating awesomeness. love u girl so so dearly 🙂

      1. Jessie

        Thennaaaaaaaa…….Now….am smiling wide..wondering what to respond…speechless…Thanks for making me to feel such a immense pleasure…!!!! God bless!! you were too busy.,and am happy that I was able to keep your mind glued to our little queen…Yippee!!!!!!!! yayayayayyy!!!!!!!!!!!!! My god!! the cigar scene…My fav!!! *grinning wide* thanks for pointing it in particular…woo!! Thena..must say…you literally drove your excitement to me girl…..The way you brought out…Thanks…Just take a bow!! well…am so overjoyed.,with your words about the writing style…!!! Jessie is happy!! Killer romance!!!! Eeeeeeeeeee…. thank you…!! *saying like a kid.. 😉 * wow…stairs scene..that hop dialogue..yay!! Aww….the missing part…glad that I wrote…!! beautifully analyzed…Thena…a big bone crushing hug…for giving me a new shot of energy…!! catching..catching…I will catch it all.,and have with me…..Thank you…thank you..!! Ur precise mention of your choices..brilliant…and yaar..kya scenes choose kiya…My god!! cigar and stairs..missing…so keen..so engrossed…!! Happy that this one brought you here…I was able to enjoy your views….Thanks a ton…Biggg huggsss dear….TC…stay happy… yep..no issues…I got the note…typos na.!! wat to do…..Am just Fascinated!!! Muaaahhhhh….

  20. Jewel

    Jezzzzzz….. Such a cute story yaar, last chapter, that was awesome…. And this, wow, superb….. His confussion….. As arjun I also thought rads love him then why this ” this ok fernadz sir” and tears?? I am thinking abt that only….. Jez, ur writing style is amazing yaar, I can imagine all the scenes, feels like I am watching a movie…. Really nice…. Waiting for next one…..

    1. Jessie

      Shonaaa…..thanks a lot dear….well I reveal it soon…will post soon yaar….thanks again…glad you enjoyed and imagined too..that gives a true boost for a author who opts this style….so bear hugs..for pointing that in particular…I often get offended on myself that am not able to write crisp…now your words encourage me…love you loads…TC…will post soon

  21. Jess this was fantastic…… amazing ….loved it

    1. Jessie

      Hey likii…thanks a ton dear….Glad that you loved it…do keep supporting….TC and loads of love

  22. wow jessieeee ……. what ya what ta episode ya and I just love it the way u expressed arjun feeling and eagly waiting for next one and plz update soon and en radhika onum sollala and ava Arjuna love panra and plz update pannunga radhika epdi arjun na epdi love pananu .bcz love panalana avala touch pana city iruka matala.and take care ya

  23. wow jessieeee ……. what ya what ta episode ya and I just love it the way u expressed arjun feeling and eagly waiting for next one and plz update soon and en radhika onum sollala and ava Arjuna love panra and plz update pannunga radhika epdi arjun na epdi love pananu .bcz love panalana avala touch pana city iruka matala.and take care ya

  24. wow jessieeee ……. what ya what ta episode ya and I just love it the way u expressed arjun feeling and eagly waiting for next one and plz update soon and en radhika onum sollala and ava Arjuna love panra and plz update pannunga radhika epdi arjun na epdi love pananu .bcz love panalana avala touch pana city iruka matala.and take care ya

    1. Jessie

      Arna..sne….thanks a ton dear….am so glad that you liked it….will post soon…. panuven ma…seekiram podren… nalaiku check pannunga…we have those ya….correct than..ana en thitala…arjun ketpan ava soluva…oops…sollitene… hehe…TC…love you support dear…Thanks a lot again….Stay happy

  25. wow ! u reply I can’t expect and I am so happy for ur reply ya and thank u .and plz ignore my typing errors a bcz of the speed of typing its get mistake ya dry and update soon and take care ya

    1. Jessie

      Hey Sne…It just because of my lappy issue and being bit busy…I was delayed for replying dear…Else…i used to respond the same day I receive comments….am glad you are happy…typos..hota hai…ok dear…shot 5 is updated…TC…stay smiling

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