Manmarziyan – My Little Queen – Shot 10

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Hello…Everyone!!!! Its Jessie again!!! Thanks a lot for your love and support….Last chap we had Radz Pov as a bonus one.,since many of you asked….From here the story continues as before in Arjun’s Pov….

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My Little Queen (Shot 9)

Throwing my keys away,I was about to sip water,but I got to see her.,there…still there!! Watching me!

“I told you not to throw keys..Arjun..stop this habit”,my dad came from kitchen..,and I saw Sam rushing downstairs,her mouth busy grinding some stuff…

“Sorry”,I ascended only to see her cheeks puffed to its fullest.,her eyes scanning my face…

“Chew well.,don’t swallow the one you have stuffed inside.”,I went to my room..

It must be Sam!! She has this habit of eating like chipmunks…!! And now..she too…why was she still here..sacrificing her moments of tasting her favorite dishes…

“Fer…Arjun”,I heard her call me…My eyebrows raised in surprise…I glanced her figure through that mirror,and she stood glaring me…Glaring !! So daring???!!

“Arjun”,she called a bit high…

I turned to her side,and she took a deep breath.,closing her eyes…Arjun!! So..she knew,how to convince me…Smart!!

She stood with her gaze fixed on me…Her eyes flickered in surprise when I gestured her to get in…She is too innocent…Sam would have already made her place in steps.,to listen her and pull our legs later…She stood next to the door stepping in…

“Here!”,I pointed before my bed and sat relaxed on it….

“I want to speak..with you…”,she said feeble…

“Ok..but come here”,I said again…

“Hmm..No…I am..I will..be here…”,she blinked looking somewhere..

“Why so?”,I chuckled…but she turned uncomfortable…..”Listen…!! You know about Sam…she is too naughty.,would be definitely waiting in stairs.,So.,get in and speak with me…do you want your sweet secret to turn a teaser..?”,I balanced on my left elbow and extended my right to her…

She stood in same place,but took a step back when I got up..”Stay..”,I whispered and peeped outside..and as expected.,Sam stood munching some thing…”Bad manners!!”,I said..

“Everything is…”

“Sam!!”,I called her sharp and she made a face at me..

“Did you argue with Radhu”,Sam asked before I could turn…I turned sideways to my room,and she nodded negative…

“No…!!”,I shrugged..

“Oh..that means..you had…!!! Radhu was upset…Bhai…that’s bad…!”,Sam stood glaring me…

“I will speak with her…if only.you.leave..”,I smiled mockingly and Sam raised her hands surrendering..

“Alright…no fun…”,Sam turned around..

“Am sorry!!”,she mumbled when I stepped inside…I pushed the door wide open…

She gave me a helpless look..,she took a step back,when I was about to touch her shoulders…Reflexes!!..I blocked her way and leaned forward, intertwining my fingers around her neck..Her whole jerked a little at my touch…

“Where are you leaving?”,I asked and she clasped fistful of her fabric,tight…!!

“Are you scared with my presence?”,my voice came out soft surprising me…

She shook her head negatively…okay..!! Now she is back to her form.,its gonna be hard to make her to voice her mind….sh*t ..it was my mistake…!!

“You were upset??”, I tried to get her reply..and she nodded biting her lip…

“Hmm…you dint visit kitchen…”,I leaned close to her and she looked me surprised…”You love to gulp,those food items before it could reach dining table isn’t…I mean…tasting!! Thats how you tag isn’t”,I chuckled and her eyes widened a sec before narrowing at me…

“Radhikaa…!!!”,

She looked straight into me…

“Do you know the purpose of this..”,I asked strumming my finger over her lips…

She tried to move…. ‘not so soon!’

“Speak…!! Speak..”,….She smiled when I continued strumming her lips…..”Your lips aren’t any guitar string…I will use another technique then…”,I said and she blushed ..

Its been secs,she stood with her head down…I need to learn a lot of patience to handle My little darling ….Holding her cheeks,my thumb fingers probed her chin to look me….No!! Her orbs resembled a pool,in tears..

Now..what..!!….I had never been this cool and she cries for something…

“What’s that bothering you…”,I asked in my self….”Stop crying!! Don’t test my patience..”,I dint intend to,but I sounded harsh….only because of her…!! Her tears…!!

“I want to ask you something..!!”,she said feeble when I wiped her tears…

“Ask…but don’t cry!.”,I patted her cheek, and sat in my bed…

Hesitating for more than a minute,she inhaled deep…God..!! what’s that she gonna ask now..!! My eyes never left her in that one minute,observing her fear..but on what?

“Dont get me wrong….but tell me honestly…what you thought about me when I said about Ram…my engagement..!!”,she sighed…

“Radhika….!! Is that what you wanna ask…?!!”,I smirked at her…

She dint dare to look my face…!! I sagged relaxed on my back…and she looked me shocked…”Sweetheart!!…in which angle,you found me this stupid,to believe it…”,I asked with a smile, and laid facing her…

Her pout spoke her disappointment….

“But…ummm…you dint…”,she bit her lip nervously

“I had no idea that,even I have patience,to this level…”,I exhaled sharp relaxing my neck muscles…

Wetting her lips,she closed her eyes…”You would have thought,bad about me…isn’t…I mean….I kisssss…ed..you…being engaged to someone…I behaved….like…”

“No..!! Don’t say that word…!”,I sat upright and her eyes flew open,with a jerk listening me….

I knew she would blame herself….after all..She did say..’Am too good for her’..!!

“Did you even realize.,what were you about to say”,I asked shocked…

“The more I think..I feel ashamed of my behavior….I was engaged to someone…but I let you to….and…is that why you asked me to get up…”,her face scrunched with confusions and annoyance…

Get up..??? Get up from where…!!??. It took few secs for me.,to understand…

“I should have told it..but….I…I dint expect you to propose me…let alone propose…I never thought, you would love me…then how…I was..I was..”..she stuttered deeply worried…

“But I…”,my words were cut in…

“I thought you teased me…you were annoyed even with my presence and I was madly in love with you…thaaa….”,she blinked before pursing her lips..realizing her words…

“That…..”,I sauntered towards her….it was clear..she had been pondering over,our moments in that past one hour…

“Aa…I…”,she searched words…with her gaze on ground….

“Fernandez!…Fernandez sir!!”,I crooked myself a little to look her face…

Her lips thinned to a line,in irritation..Hmm…she can get irritated…annoyed…I see…All I had seen was only her playful antics…

“Haaan….Ferrnandezzzzz…sirrrr..!!”,she mocked,gritting her teeth….

How dare!,..I twirled her holding her right,and locked it behind her back,”gimme that face again..”,I demanded…her lips parted when I pushed her more to me…

“You felt bad that I asked to leave my lap?…isn’t…Answer me….”,I pulled her close..and she yelped a little…

“It hurts…”,she mumbled…

I just held her little lighter,rather than leaving my hold and she pouted angrily….I sat down pulling her to my lap…

“Is it ok now..!!”,my left coiled around her waist and she quickly got up…

“I dint mean this….please…!! “,she pleaded…

“Why would I think so..tell me…!”,I asked her…

“I..”

“Radhika.!..you indeed held back from accepting your love…you had a reason..I demanded it yesterday night…dint I?…I was angry that,you dint let me know….isn’t that a serious issue dear!!….”,I myself wondered on my politeness ..

“But….I was scared…I was annoyed on myself….for..”

“I don’t like you pointing our moments as a mistake…have that in mind!…”,I said clearly…

“This is why I said…you are too good for me….”,she smiled with tears…

“Why did you cry like that..before your mom?”,

“She believed your words…that I slipped in stairs…dint even doubt us…I felt…am cheating…my mom..,you….!! You weren’t aware of my engagement…but I should have said that in first place….”,she blinked anxiety….

“Yes…your mom is a straight forward person…!! Even I felt bad at that moment…! But you confused us with your tears…”,I said displeased…

“Ram said….they will consider that my mom had embarrassed them once again…”,she spoke fiddling her fingers….

Ah..this is the reason….”So he confused you….”,I asked irritated…She did smile yesterday night.,after I made her wear my chain…

“No…I want your opinion…about ..”

“I said already….I guessed you had some valid reason when you dint accept my love…your tears.!!.I confirmed.,you might be cornered…not a rocket science..obviously religious differences else…some thing related to your mom…!! You are timid…!! I know you…”,I shook my head…

“And….”,she encouraged… “You weren’t angry that I dint reveal about my engagement…yesterday…when you kissed…when we got…”,she dragged her words as slow as she could…

Finally…she said it….

“Nope…!! Your tears spoke your helplessness….you were stuck between reality and the sweet surprise…”,I smiled and she gave a nod like kid….

“Any thing else??..”,I asked…

“Then why were you angry on me?..”,she asked..

“Because.,you dint say…until I demanded”,I got up….

“Am sorry…!! I dint do it intentionally….”,she took a step close to me…but blushed when I raised my eyebrows in surprise…

“I need a help…”,she said acute..

“Don’t ask me to step back…if that’s what you have in your mind…forget it..”,I said Sharp….

She and her stupid sentiments..!!! Which idiot induced such thoughts of sacrificing one’s love for family…

“No…some thing else…but promise me you will do it”,she extended her right palm…

Promises..!! Those are made only to break…!! And she wants me to do one…

“A proper apology..!! And I will do what you want to..”,I stood with my hands in my pockets…

She thought for a sec and held her ears…”Am so sorry…Fernandez sir…!!”,she said…

She giggled when I pulled her ears….but opened and closed her mouth like a fish when I pointed my cheeks…

“Ready for your apology?”,I asked…I pulled her to my height when she nodded…

“This is for apologizing in a wrong way”,I said when she kissed my left cheek…

“This is for considering yourself bad”,I smiled as her lips traced my right cheek…her lips lingered there for few secs…It was blissful…her soft rosy petals brushing mine.,dazed with what I said…

“Anyone…would think so…but you dint…you are a gem of a person.”,she said gazing my features…

“Thank you…!! It means a lot…when you hear those from your love”,I smiled in response..

She looped her arms around my neck slowly…her fragile ones hardly matched my broad shoulders…yet..She tried to be comfortable…

“Wipe those thoughts Radhika!….self analyzing is good.,only if you don’t drown yourself in it.,in the name of analyzing your every decision and end up demeaning yourself…and I hate it…do you get that”,I said unfriendly and she nodded…

“Let me down”,she mumbled after a minute being in my hold…Her toe digits hit my knees,when she struggled …

“Don’t squeak now!”,I said and she rolled her eyes confused….

“Ah..no…pls…”,she mumbled when I pushed myself comfortably on my bed…

“You hugged me yourself”,I murmured and she saw the door way…”you think..Sam may come??,”I asked..

She saw me….”How will she or anyone….I tell you…you should behave normal…everyone thinks twice to step inside your room”,she looked away…

“Really!! Then why you din’t….how did you sneak into my room often….”,I rubbed my cheeks on hers before lying on my back,with her over me…her whole sagged on me abruptly,with my unexpected move….

“I…never…”,she whispered…

“Speak little louder”,I teased chuckling,but she was keen on examining her position over me…

“Radhika!!”

I caught her eyes the moment she glanced me…those brown orbs…which depicts her liveliness,were devoid of it because of her confusion…She smiled a minute later when I winked to break our eyelock….

“What was that favor?”,I asked…her fingers on my shoulders tried to balance on my bed…

“I won’t leave you”,I locked her legs with mine and she gasped, averting her shocking gaze to my face…”What’s that?”

“That….Ram wants to meet you…”,she squeezed her eyes,later opened a little to get my reaction…

“Why?”,I asked alerted…

She was silent,swallowing her fear..fluttering her eye lashes brooding on something….

“You never hesitate to speak with strangers…but with me…?”, my voice expressed my anger…

“Because…I fear..I may irritate you…with my talks….Sam told you dislike being over talkative…you are a man of few words…”,her lips quirked up in annoyance…

I pecked her lips immediately surprising her….

“Excuses…!! Every time!! Remember..it must be always me..!! Not anyone…!! “,my grip tightened around her waist…

Her forehead creased a little,for a moment to grasp my point…..

“Okay…!! But Ram called me today morning….!”,her eyes wandered over my forehead and hair as she spoke..

“Radhuuuu…”

I signed annoyed hearing Sam’s voice from downstairs….and she jerked shaking me too…

“What are you trying”,I laughed at her antics,to get away from my hold….

“You are convinced..isn’t…leave me..”,she said..

“Not yet”,I smirked…

“Cheating!!”

“No..!! I never…!

“Only 2 kisses…!”,she shook her head…

“Do you think that’s less…ofc ..yes..!”,I rolled my tongue over my lips…

“No…what’s this…”,she slapped my arm…

“You are lying over me…!!…I love your apologizing style…So., do irritate me a lot”,I winked…

“You demanded…”

“You gave in..”

“You made me to….”

I just shrugged my shoulders…and Sam called us again…. “She will come Sam…”,I replied louder and she pouted saying…”Why did you reply for me…She will tease me..”,

“Then stay like this…”,I grinned…

“She is calling us for lunch…”,

“Lunch or your Fernandez sir…”,I withdrew my hands from her,smiling….

Tilting her chin a little to right,she said..”Lunch!!!”…and laughed at my glare…

“Think again…”

“Not necessary…its Lunch!!”,she turned her face…

I saw her raising herself,supporting her palms on either side of me,over bed…that’s not fair !…choosing Lunch over me!! I shoved her grip on bed…and she landed crashing over my front…She laid still.,at this sudden encounter…I exclaimed teasing her more…unable to hold my mirth,I laughed holding her..she punched my chest hiding her face…

“Why did you do so”,she whined like a kid…

“You are soft…”,I chortled irritating her..

“You are so bad…”,she beat my arm..

“Dare to leave my name behind…”,I slapped her back..and she saw me shocked…Her left palm covered my eyes,noticing my gaze down her neck….

“Radhika….you should have wore…”,her other palm covered my mouth next second….and I laughed at her antics….

“Please..!! “,she mumbled.,before sliding her palms down…

“Get up “,I averted my gaze,and helped her to…

“I…”she glared when I stifled my laughter recalling our moment…

“Okay..say..!”,I shook my head unable to believe myself…giving up Every time for her glare…she indeed look cute,still….I gave up…!!

“Will you listen me or not?”,she asked in a stern voice…

Gosh!…that was even more funny…but she may cry if I tease more…I was amused with her serious antics.,standing before me.,barely reaching my shoulders..

“Okay…Mrs.Arjun Fernandez!!”,I stood straight…

She smiled and continued…”I said about us to Ram…!! He said he will help…and wants meet you….ummm….but…he asked not to inform my mom…or anyone and yesterday.,when we were in pooja room.,Mom had informed about my engagement it seems…Sam told me….So…pls don’t inform to uncle too..”,she said on a serious note…

“May I know.,what you both were planning?”,I asked taming my rising temper…Why cant she discuss with me.!…

“Not me..Its only Ram.!! He said..he can solve the problem..”,she said with a bright face…

“Problem?”,

“Haa…they may again get my mom wrong…so…and..”,she bit her lip hesitating to continue further….

This is not going to be any good….but this little peace maker had already planned with some idiotic goose.!.

“Today…evening…4 o clock..please”,she held my palm…

“Is he here? I mean in Chennai”,I pulled my hand back and she frowned a little….

“Yes..he works here…Why are you angry now?…I said everything…”,she looked deep to my face…

“Then why can’t he come here..to your home?”,I asked further…

“He won’t..!! Hmm..I told you yesterday….They had cut all ties with us…”

“But you got engaged with him”,I tried to make her realize about that fellow…

“Still..he won’t…he said..he will come only after marriage…Rightfully…!! Mom invited him twice..”,she shook her head irritated…

“Hmm..did he call you in this 1 hour…after I left our home”,I asked…I noticed a tinge of spark in her eyes,when I mentioned this as ‘our’ home..of course..it is ours…

“No…he texted…but I din’t reply…I was…”

“Thinking about us?”,I winked only to receive her smile in return…. “I will come with you”,I held her palms..and she jiggled surprising me…

“Thank you..thank you…I thought..you will not..he too said the same…but..I told..you will listen me”,her eyes shone with pride…

A lot has got conversed it seems!…

“You knew..I will listen you”,I asked,holding her by waist.,her soft curves pressing more into me…She pulled back her head and nodded like a doll.,smiling…I claimed her lips the next moment.,claimed my love..!! my girl…!! Her surprised look gradually turned into a drowsy one as she let me to play my way.,relaxing her head in my hold.,her moan alerted me from drowning further in her sweetness….she gasped when I pulled back….I held her close to my chest.,when she was in need of fresh air…

“Apple?”,I asked a second later and her whole vibrated in my hold…”Hey…I want that folder you had?”

“Why?”,she looked me confused…

We heard our dad to call us this time…Sam might me irritated..it was almost 2 o clock…!

“Where were you?”,she asked standing in my door way…

“Have you ever seen or heard me answering these questions?”,I counter asked…

She quickly bit her tongue,when I glared she said..”But am special na”,she squeezed her eyes a second with a smile…

“Yes..very special!! So…..I will say only if its necessary”,I chuckled and descended the stairs…I guess..Today was the day I had spoke a lot.,after my elocution competition
during my school days…I honestly wonder,how much should I turn a verbose to handle her…and patience…!! The next trait…!

“Paneer Biryani….Panner tikka masala….yummmmm”,she sing sang uncaring Sam’s angry stares on us…

“My plate?”,I asked and she quickly brought two plates and sat next to me…I muffled my laughter.,when Sam hit her spoon angrily on her plate.

Surprising my family.,she had her food with spoon.,smartly avoiding to look my side…She praised my dad’s culinary skills for every bite…Sam giggled as I controlled my temper… Even those rattling sounds of spoon disturbs me and she??…I tried twice to intervene,but No…she was in her world.,enjoying every mouthful of her favorites,chatting along..

“Uncle…I repeat…Aunty is so lucky…”,she nodded pushing a morsel of Biryani inside her mouth…

“I know!”,my dad wiggled his brows at Sam…

“Can anyone see me…Am I invisible”,Sam asked aloud….”You forgot me in a day”,she made a cry baby face at Radhika..

Her mouth took a halt of its grinding session listening Sam…she noticed her place sitting next to me…I held her hand when she tried to move…”Have your food before jumping here and there”,I said serving myself…”You both…better treat this place as dining table”…I glared both the girls…

She saw me dejected…Ah..She loves to speak with everyone than me…

“Okay…Dont speak while having your food”..I shook my head disappointed on myself…she continued her blabbering…My dad served her more and more….

“This is unfair..Heights of partiality!!….”,Sam said dramatically….and My little darling chewed as fast as she could rolling her eyes…

“Dad…I will say to mom”,Sam threatened and my dad served her now…I laughed at that….He was scared for mom..My god!!

“Uncle…Don’t fear..when Radhu is here…All paneer pieces for me…she cheated last time”,she pulled my dad’s hand…

“Radhu is correct!”,my dad winked at her…

What the…No one is grown up here!! I continued my lunch watching their kiddish banter and my dad enjoying it…May be I should get used to this…

“You left me alone isn’t”,I heard sam’s voice when I cleaned the table…

“Radhika…Sam…Help me cleaning!!”,I called but they dint turn up.,instead I was greeted back with a pin drop silence…

“Bhai will kill you…if he sees this”,I peeped listening Sam..and there.,those grown up kids gorged on icecream from same tub…I closed my eyes unable to tolerate it…Manners!! Manners!!

“Its you…My sweeto…Plus..we both are healthy”,my little scientist said posing her muscles…

“And what about manners”,I asked her sharply and Sam scowled at me..

“Bhai..don’t scare her…”,Sam covered my view…

“Radhika…you had enough…now come here…”,I moved saying…but she came with her ice cream tub… “Here after no more sharing..”,I ate from her spoon… “and..eat this later”,I tried to snatch that tub…

“Pleasse…Fernandezzz sirrrr….”,she giggled running away from me…

“That was mine”,I turned to see Sam running behind her….Aren’t they engaged…I imagined Neil’s situation after marriage….Within 2 months Sam will get married and here she fights for Panneer and Ice cream….I heard Radhika to squeal….”Radhika…!!”…I called out….

“She will come Bhai”,Sam said teasing me…

I saw Sam walking towards my dad’s room.,and she rushed to backyard with a chocolate….

“Mrs..Arjun Fernandez…you will pay for this”,I murmured standing behind her and she jerked a little… “what were you doing”,I asked…

“Ar….that…Ram called me it seems…I din’t notice…Now he had texted…I was reading it..”,she looked me worriedly…

“Text him about our meeting..and fix a place”,I said…

“He is a fool..Listen this..again he is asking about you…”,she pouted punching the keys harder…

I caressed her hair and she smiled back…”Fernandezzz sirrrr….”,she winked ignoring a beep from her mobile..

“Turning naughty..”I hugged her close…

I dint find anything useful in meeting that fellow…!! Still…he knew her weakness…!! Her mom! More over…somehow he made his entry into my life…confusing her…! Poisoning her mind against herself…She will definitely get me wrong though I explain the reality….

“Are you worried..”,she saw me intently…

I smiled back…Let me meet him…but not the way he preferred…!!

I took her to my dad’s room… “Dad….Am going with Radhika to meet her ex-fiance Ram..!!”,I said more like a information…her fingers pressed on mine,though ours were intertwined….

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So…how was it…Am posting it for second time…I posted yesterday ni8 itself…some problem from my side I guess….* sad pout* Anyways….Don’t forget to share your reviews….Pls ignore my Typos and grammatical errors….Take care and love you all loads….

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45 Comments
  1. Kavina

    Loved it

    1. Jessie

      Thanks Kavina…TC

  2. Brin

    Outstanding episode, I wonder what will happen when Arjun and Ram meet, eagerly waiting for the next update, Jessie you nail it, well done. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Brinzee…thanks a lot dear…Arjun will deal in his style…thanks again…TC

  3. Superb Jessie loved it

    1. Jessie

      Hey Meenu…thank you so much dear…TC

  4. What can i say…..u write so well ….i need to learn new languages to appreciate u works….splendid …super …outstanding…brilliant….i was worried how she would convince….but he was not angry for that…..he learning tO be patient and all the best for that…

    1. Jessie

      Hey Kalyani….Thanks a lot dear…new lang…nope…you just say what you liked here…you know..that will make me more happy…am so glad you loved it dear…yes..he was angry that she din’t let him know…plus..its heat of the moment….all the best to him..wow!! he needs to learn..wat say…love you dear..loved your comment…TC.stay happy

  5. really nice jessie..take care dear..

    1. Jessie

      Hey Maddy…thanks a lot yaar…TC..stay happy

  6. Jessie akka no words to explain.I loved it.finally arjun turned soft.radhika as usual cute.sam fighting for paneer and ice cream.lol.Loved it akka and love you take care.waiting for next

    1. Jessie

      Chashu…glad you loved it…finally a…soft a…!! paruda..evalo aasai..haha.. yes she is cute…panner and ice creams…my fav scene too..thanks a ton dear..am so happy with your words…love you too…TC

  7. arti viswanathan

    Jessie darling superb,excellent,marvelous,outstanding,nice,awesome, fantastic episode….. I loved it to the core…. I liked all the scenes……. Tc loads of love to u from me and teddy hug to u…. Will be waiting for next episode….. And howz ur health jessie dear…..

    1. Jessie

      Thank you Arti..am glad you liked this..am doing better dear…thank you..loads of love and TC…Teddy hugs to you too…

  8. Sangee

    Here comes my little queen and her Fernandez sir…. Don’t make me wait for so long j ? comming to the chapter ? ? ? ? ? ? awesome one ? ? ? ? I loved all ardhika moments????
    As usual dialogs stole my heart….
    You demanded…”

    “You gave in..”

    “You made me to… Wah Wah ? ? ? ?
    I want to comment on each dialog each and every dialog.. Iam flat…. Ovvoru dialog um enna attract pannu du ??? simply superb ma… Who is dat stupid fellow ram ? rads ex-fiance adra adra…. Apdiye antha ram ah um adra ? ? ? loved it to the core j waiting for next one ????? take care love u

    1. Jessie

      Hey Geet chellam…. my lil queen and her fernandez sir..*blush* *blush*….thanks a lot dear…am glad you loved it…sema choice of dialogues Geet…enoda fav teriyuma… flat!! adra..adra… attraction…Aahhaaan..!! heheh… thanks a lot ma…stupid fellow than…ex fiance…pudichuta..!! epdi ma ipadi catch panreenga…am happy with your words..thanks Geet…take care..love you too….

  9. Loved it Jessie.

    1. Jessie

      Hey Anji…thank you so much dear…TC

  10. Jessie… Loved it… Superb… Awesome…. Dinning table scene marvelous … Arjun tired to be soft… Loves him….little queen radhika lucky to have him….love this ff very much…. Waiting for next…. Pls post soon… Take care of your health… Stay happy…..

    1. Jessie

      Saran..saran…am happy….thank you so much…dining table..wow!! She is lucky..yes she is..he is trying to be soft…haha..difficult na…Thank you saran… will do…TC..Stay happy

  11. Anu-Annie

    awee jess pie.

    do i need to repeat myself all over again about how fab u r.

    Ardhika sweet cute,

    and gee why does Ram have to come b/w.

    god, so many questions and forgive me if i don’t find a suitable word to tell u how u rocked this one, yet again. ’cause everything u do is magic and everything u do is magic’

    geez, i am doing hell lotsa 1D references lately.

    u have my permission to eat the bestest choco lava for this one chappy.

    weird? ha. i am turning that weird lately, with all shit and bullshit.

    lord, i am cussing a lot more than required but it calms me down. what do i say, i am one hell lotsa devil’s incarnate.

    lol..

    take care, don’t get hyped about my weirdness, just pull urself up and keep on posting shit yummies like this.

    [hehe shit yummies in my dictionary means truck loads yummy]

    gorilla hugs. mama bear love.. apeload drools over ARJUN FERNANDEZ. f**king freaking frizzing freezing choco icec cream

    my treats for u.. love..

    1. Jessie

      Hey ya dolll…how are you…and Thank you..thank you…thank you so much…Ram is not a big villan ..so relax…woo..permission…! thank you..*take a lil bow* choco lava one of my fav…

      hahahah…devil’s incarnate…lol…nope..no hype…shit yumimies!!! and what a dictionary you have…lol….bear hugs…awwie…thank you…drools on Fernandez…have to protect him it seems..Jess runs to save him…lol….love you loads my doll…Take care…woo..woo…choc ice cream..I see..now Jess drools…lol…thanks a lot darling…love you again…Eat well…muahhh

  12. Jess Jess Jess… my super girl…
    What a fantastic episode dear…
    I loved every bit of it… Aradhika scene… Sam n Radhika….
    Let’s hope meeting with Ram… fine..
    Thanks my dear for giving your sunshine this amazing episode…
    Stay HAPPY always n spread happiness…

    1. Jessie

      Hey My Sunshine…how are you….thank you so so much…thanks for sharing your like…RAm meeting…as decided by Arjun.. 😉 woo…My sunshine deserves more…and am happy you loved it…yayaayya….stay happy dear…love you tons…thanks again…teddy bear hugs…

  13. Sulbi

    Jazz kutty…. am so happy for u… really u are such a outstanding and talented girl… what a clear POV… and so worthy of it… i loved it to the core… Arjun for the first time he was talking much after school days that too only for his lady love… such a lovable person…

    In ur ff Arjun always have some unique character… how cooly he handled the situation… Radhu she is a kiddo… and Sam matched her perfectly…. so lovely bond… Manners haha… i loved that… and Radhu turning naughty… she is teasing Arjun awwe so cute… Arjun’s dad wow such a lovely and understanding person… i loved it to the core darling… i enjoyed it… such a awsme and lovely episode… love you aloads… hug u… tc dear… stay healthy and happy darling… 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Sulbi jaan….teddy hugs…naa odi varen una thedi…Thank you so much…Arjun..yes..yes…to make her understand…..

      Aaha…pudichuta point a…hehe…unique a…sari..!! EEEEEEE…see am smiling wide…. cool..yes..am so happy with your review…you said everything here..Rasam…too..wow…Samrat also…thank you..so much…RAdz..aama lil naughty… am happy you enjoyed…sema santhosam….Nandrigal pala….love you loads…TC…bear hugs…stay happy

  14. Fantastic jessu. …fab. …..u r an amazing writer. …ardhika’s convo was awesome. …n the apology toooo good. …love you loads

    1. Jessie

      Hey Likii..thanks a lot dear….thanks for your compliment and sharing your likes…love you loads…TC

  15. Dipika

    Goddddd jbbbbbbbb..i wannaaa hugggg u sooo tight for thos sooooo beautiful update.. You made my day.. I m actually smiling soooo wide.. N i got so much laughter attacks.. Lol.. Little peace maker n idiotic goose.. Lollolllllll…. N grown up kids.. Fighting for ice-cream n panner.. M soooo fallen hard for Fernández sir now.. No any chances to get over.. Lol… Pls post soon.. Love u lots ? ? ? ?

    1. Jessie

      Jb…Teddy hugs dear….thank you so much…hahah…you got it…see..I need you to bring this…lil peace maker..lol….as usual you rocked with your likes…loved it ji…..Fernandez sir…!! lol chance less….Happy you know..you stay here…am coming to loot my personal trainer..lol….love you loads…TC,,thanks a lot dear

  16. Brilliant Jessie… was waiting for it for a Long time… finally they talked things out n I like the cute sizzling chemistry they have… rasam r awsm… pls update sn

  17. Jewel

    jez, this is superb, i loved each and every scenes in this chapter…. i can even imagin each and every actions of arjun and rads…. this is amazing yaar, u wrote beautifully…… ardhika moments and family scenes everything is superb….. and why that ram wants to see arjun?? as arjun i also don’t like him and his plan….. waiting for next one jez….. how r u now?? take care of ur health…..

  18. Sushie

    Fernandes sir vanthutaaru!! Desperately waited fr this little queen Ahhhhh wt an apology sweet one… Possessive arjun.. Who would talk to him if he s always on his khadoos mode?????? choosing fernandes sir ovr lunch.. Lol ???obviously lunch thaan.. We should nvr betray food paavam la athu. I too wanna knw wat s thr in tat folder. Sam n rads fight for food.. leaving arjun n having ice cream… were superb I thnk this ram s gonna create sme problems. Arjun himself s capable of solving all the problems thn wt this idiot s gonna do. Love you.. Tc..

  19. Roma

    Wowwww awesome, marvellous, lovely episode. …so arjun is not angry on rads….but little disappointed that she didn’t share with him before….their lovely antics were so cuteeeee. …..I loved ardhika’s convo meeting ram…he confused rads…but I think arjun will make ram straight. …lol…..the dining table fun was so lovely. ..rads is so adorable and bubly……I’m loving this story very much. ….jesss my SuperGirl. …u writing all your stories so perfectly…very lovely narration beautiful narration….keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hugssss my sweeeeeetheart darling sissyyyy ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ ;* 😉

    1. Jessie

      didi…thanks a lot di..yes he isn’t….yep correct…Fernandez hai to aise..heheh…dining table..thank you di…am glad you loved this…thank you di…love you loads …bear hugs di…TC

  20. Jessy kutty..
    Ardhika moments were lovely,rads trying convince Arjun,his understanding n calmness , that cute apology n confession,light teasing moments then Sam n rads fighting for paneer n icecream.aww!!so cute.Now why does this Ram wanna meet Arjun??that to without anyone’s knowledge.! smelling something fishy.
    Lots of love♥

    1. Jessie

      Swathiiiiii…..hayye…am reading the second line..cute apology…ahhann..my fav too..!!you brought the entire epi here…am happy,,,thank you..thank you….paneer n icecream..yes… Ram…! yes you are right with the smell…! Thanks a lot dear…TC…loads of love

  21. So beautiful Jess…I loved Arjun and Radhika’s little banter… Sam was cute….and this Ram hope hie isnt a trouble or I will kill him.. loads of love stay blessed

    1. Jessie

      Thanks a lot Gauri…Loved your fav parts…woo…no angry…pleej..we have our Fernandez…Thanks dear…loads of love…TC

  22. Jessie………..how r u ya and epdi irukinga ……fever sariaiducha..…and this epi is awosome ya and I love it…….neenga epdi irukinganu solunga …bye and TC……sne

    1. Jessie

      Hey Snega..paravailla ma…yes…thanks a lot da…solliten…am glad you loved it…TC…stay happy

  23. Amazing Di. Happy valentines day.

    1. Jessie

      Thanks a lot Niku..for your wishes too…TC

  24. Meen

    My little queen….my God I’m reading after so many days…it feels like I’m alive again….I missed u & others like anything…..God d moment I opened…. I saw urs……love u jessssss.. ..missed my little queen like anything

    1. Jessie

      Tesoro Mio….howzzz you…girl…missing you and your mafioso re….am happy with your words Meen…come back soon girl…Missing your stories like a lot…Rehnuma n mafia one…Loads of love…TC

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