Manmarziyan – My Little Queen – (Shot 1)

Hello..Everyone….Its Jessie here….This time with few shots…Do give your reviews…

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My Little Queen (Shot 1)

“By this time she should have been here isn’t..why not she is here yet…”,with questions screaming in my mind,I walked to and fro in my balcony for past 5 minutes..yes…5 mins…but it was like more than 5 years for me…with fingers unconsciously running into those well combed dark locks of mine,I scanned the balcony of that apartment..,exactly opposite to my house..My watch read 5.46pm…!!

Uffff….one more minute had passed…I heard a click sound of a door to open.,and yes!! ..Yes!!! ..YES!!! There she is….!!!
Ah…!! I felt a heavy weight to hit me directly on my chest…Tornado!! Hurricane!! Will those be powerful than this ??!!…I immediately composed my-self and my fast pounding heart…I casually leaned overS the iron rails of my balcony…She was in a silk skirt and blouse…Maroon zari works running throughout the dress..Festive special!! I smiled.. She descended those two steps of her flat,in second floor of that apartment…Placing two earthen lamps in the ends of each steps.,she turned towards balcony and arranged on its handle too..the color of her dress indeed complimented her ivory smooth skin…and her face shone like that of a golden idol,with the brightness of each lit earthen lamp she placed…,I felt my vocal chords to constrict and my breath hitched..,but she dint bother to raise her head to notice the sufferings of this 6 ft poor guy…I couldn’t hold more…

I just dialed to my PA and spoke something really unimportant…She din’t flinch even then…My lips twitched at the realization,My little beauty doll is deliberately doing this…I see…..!!! Am no less then….

I quickly disconnected the call,and stepped back as though leaving and she immediately turned to see my back.,but No!! I stood relaxed,only to watch that..a single streak of shock in her face,when she found me to be still there….

‘yea..dear..this one is for you’

I raised my brows,acknowledging her presence and she smiled a little….Now.,she has no other go…I knew why she is lighting lamps still I gesture asked..and she said..”its Karthigai…We say Thirukarthigai….Festival of lights!!…just like for Diwali,North Indians light diyas isn’t..Like wise.,we do for Karthigai…”..for each of my confused reaction she added a explanation…I nodded at last….She smiled meekly and placed the
lamps over the Rangoli she made there..

“So..you do sweets?”,I asked a idiotic one,only to remind her that she should come home now..Yes.! what if she forgets to visit our home,turning busy, placing all those lamps around her compound..

“Yes…Is Sam at home?”,she stood to her height…

My eyes devoured her whole at that moment…Star neck design blouse with puff sleeves hugging to her figure with flowing long silk skirt….Its hard to believe she is 22 years old..I stood rooted to the spot…

“I asked is she at home…Aunty said you are going for shopping…that’s y”,she bit her lip at that….

Yes..I know..she would be cursing herself for speaking this long to me…

“Yea..she is at home..”,I replied leaning towards the rails locking my gaze with hers.,teasing her more…

C’mon…blush baby..!!..Every cell in my body carved to see a tinge of beet shade on her cheeks…My heart skipped when she looked me unblinking…I realized how much my heart had been yearning for her one look on me…Me!!…the one..who had watched every girl crossing my way, to turn their heads.,now stood before her stooping not only my body..,myself to her…but…wonder., if she understands this or not !!! Not any more!! I was about to turn she called me….

“Mr.Fernandez…Congrats…!! Sam said you won a new deal..”,she smiled radiantly…

I am the only reason she is calling me so…if not I had warned her…!

“Thank you…Thank you Radhika!!!”,I replied with a hearty satisfaction…I stood stupefied at the flicker of surprise her brown orbs unveiled just for a fraction of second..,Only because I spelt her name.!!

Oh..my god!!God!! God?? From when??Yes…from when..did I start to believe him??!!. And she will be the most happiest person on earth,if she gets to know this…

I shook my head and saw her and there she stood with a slightest smile looking me…First time..! I get to see this directly..though most of the times,she would avert her gaze or look somewhere away when I notice….

“So..Radhika…!! Radhika..!!!!”.,I called her with all the love I had for her…

She smiled more..Her gaze shifted down and snapped to me,”Mr.Fernandez..someone at your door”,she said and I noticed our new driver..

“He is acting driver…and Radhika…call me Arjun”,I said and I couldn’t control my smirk when her eyes widened in surprise and her lips parted before smiling in happiness…

Now my confidence level shot up to a new level…I am gonna execute my plan today….not a deal! My life..ok…I am gonna propose her today…
I saw her to giggle at me and then noticed my driver to look me..May be he had been calling me and I was lost looking this giggling beauty…I waved a bye and left the place….

After few mins…

I went to my balcony back only to see her again…with thoughts clouding how to find time to propose her…She was never alone..that’s the biggest problem…and I can’t hold this any more…I saw her to lit those perished flames..perished..! ’cause of sudden swirl of breeze…She did say that too today…Yep..today..She narrated the significance of this day for her.,for them..for South Indians..Umm…Tamilians..and the dishes they do…the reason behind the festive of lighting lamps..and many more…everything about this day..,for an hour.,making me to wonder if she got any inherits from her granny..lengthy explanations…while my family sat listening her intently..

“Bhaiya…what are you doing..”

“Diyaa!!”,I said lost myself in watching my love…

“Who is diya?,”,I was brought back to reality at that question from my sister Sam..

Of course how would she connect that instantly…We have no idea what and why does they lit earthen lamps…

“Who is diya”I asked back…she looked quizzical…

“You said….”

“I said..hey ya…anyways come back soon…don’t be chatting with your friend for long time”,I tried to sound strict…but she giggled back…

“Wooo… your hey ya is glowing bright..”,she took my palms in hers…”I know bhai…you like Radhu isn’t..”,she looked my face…

“We never had been in good terms…let alone love…not even friends isn’t…”,I replied and next minute realized my mistake…

Yep…I should have brushed away her words instead….

“So..that’s the problem…lemme do that favor..”,she said and I wondered what to say now…”may be.,we found out of lately but we aren’t fool you See..”,she smiled bright…

“We..??!!!”,I asked surprised…

“Yessss…weee…”,she giggled and ran away…

I got tensed now…what if my mom or dad gets me wrong…They always admire the Young Entrepreneur image of mine and what would they think if I say I had been rooting for my sister’s bestie… I saw Radhika to come inside my home with big hotboxes..and a plate of diyas…I stood confused looking her…she raised her head to see me…

“Shall..I…”,she asked…

I smiled wide..I did long for all these..My girl to adorn my house..In fact everything of mine…I gestured her and she smiled saying,”Thank you sir”..

Within few mins she arranged all the earthen lamps over the compound wall.,she ran and came back with few more…even the new driver wasn’t spared..She gave a sweet to him and made him to place those lamps at the heights she couldn’t reach…I could do or say nothing,other than to stand amused looking her…She smiled wide and clicked a pic of our house…

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I heard her voice to ring like a melody tune…wait..!! Is she singing a jingle…!! My god!! God??? Again!! I stepped a little towards the stairs and saw my dad to play piano and Radhika and Sam to sing Christmas carols…and my mom sat listening them…she will definitely stop singing if she sees me…so I stood in my place watching her…her smile…she closed her eyes a little when singing a note high and smiled when she did it better…

“Uncle…this time too I will decorate the Christmas tree..plzzzz…”,she pleaded…

Whats the need to plead,when my family would readily accept her word…but she was hell cute doing that glaring a view at my sister…I stood amused watching her drama…She squealed a little when my dad accepted and I saw Sam to be in a floor length Anarkali dress…It strike me…she might be going to temple with Radhika’s mom…this had become a habit of her though I never encourage this..

I was about to turn as I took my wallet from my dad’s bed,but fell on my back when something hit on me..No..someone..so soft! I thanked my stars having her on me..!!

“Am sor..sorry..”,she stuttered unable to get up and yelped as her hairs got tangled with my shirt buttons..She profusely apologized while I laid enjoying her on me..Am so not going to leave her today..its from morning she has been teasing me with her beauty..What was the need to run between both the houses..

“I knew.,You never have your legs on earth..now eyes too..”,I said those intentionally…and as expected she reacted..

“That’s rude sir!! I was busy..Its Karthigai..lotssa works..you know..and I wanted to sing carols too..after all I can’t sing in church isn’t..”,she pouted a little,detangling her hairs…

“hmm..too busy to notice who is before you”,I said a little bit hoarse.,though I din’t intend too.,and she felt uneasy at that note..

“Sorry!!”,she said meekly and I saw sweat beads on her forehead..Our proximity was the reason..! I wiped it and she saw me shocked..My eyes locked with hers..She laid without a inch of movement until I held her shoulder….

“Shall we get up?”,I teased her..and she blinked with embarrassment…Its a pleasure to tease her…I had been a stupid,missing this fun all these days…..She stood looking down.,the ground..

“Why are you here?”,I asked and her face lost its color….Gosh! yes..She will now shut herself..I never liked anyone inside my home and she had herself heard me scolding my family for allowing every neighbor in particular her…

“See..I mean…”,I was cut in when she said..

“Uncle…Your dad..asked me..to bring…bring…a bag…and…”,she stammered with her gaze still on the carpets…

Am not that cruel..!!

“Where is Sam?”,I asked and moved aside a little..

“Sorry..she went with my mom to…to…”

“Temple..isn’t..and Radhika…Why did you apologize..? you had been already tired with your festival works isn’t, that why I asked about Sam..I mean..why to trouble you more?giving you works…”,I explained a lengthy one surprising myself.,only to make her understand that I’am not annoyed with her presence…

She looked me surprised..”Am not tired.”,she retorted..

“Okay!! Okay! Energy doll…”,I bit my tongue when she rolled her eyes before looking me…

“Umm..Energy ball..now take that bag”,I sat on my dad’s bed..

“You ..yourself take it..Its in cupboard”,she said..

Yes..this is one more reason..! she still feels to be detached…I had called her stranger once..

“You are more like a family..no issues..Take yourself”,I replied…of course..I should rectify all my mistakes..before I propose…

She blinked like a doll and smiled mumbling a thanks…Thanks!! I have hurt her to that level..She felt thankful since am not annoyed with her presence..I cursed myself now..

She jerked a little when I helped her in taking the bag from cupboard..though It wasn’t tough,how to leave the chance…

“What’s that shirt for?”,I asked pushing her more inside the cupboard…I knew.,neither my dad nor my mom would come here..Sam is not at home..Golden chance!!

“Ah…uncle’s shirt..for vikram uncle’s..”

I cut her in middle..”Okay..how about this”,I leaned over her completely and chose a black one..I knew she doesn’t like black..She tried to move to her right but I placed my hand there..

“Take this one”,I gave a watch pulling a drawer open..I oved this wooden cupboard,only today..She stood perfectly caught in between my arms..I could feel her fast breaths…

“I..I..”

“Radhika..this one!”,I said crooking my neck to hers..almost inhaling her scent..Now,It was more hard for me,after watching her ivory skin to peep bright from her maroon dress..

” I need to go”,she said finally…

How would I let you baby?…

“Choose a good one for my dad and go..They do trust your choice isn’t…And Vikram uncle is no less to big shot”,I said high and she nodded her head a little…

Minutes passed with her pulling each shirt and me to neglect…Every time when I laid the shirt back,I would lean and she would move in between my arms..We finally finalized a dress…I cudn’t hold myself when she sighed a relief…

“How you got hurt?”,I pulled her hand and she twisted her arm in my hold…

“that..cooking…sir…move”,she said..

“you cook?…I asked with my face on her shoulder tuning her into an uncomfortable mode.. “Chilli chicken isn’t”,I saw to gasp lightly..She did for me.,she wouldn’t have expected me to find that…”Does your mom know that you cook chicken?”,I controlled my laugh asking that…

“No…I did..for..Sam.”,she lied to me…

Oh really!! ll..A typical Brahmin girl cooking chicken..!!. “I think I should say about your culinary skills to your mom”

“sir pls”,she mumbled..

“Arjun!!”,

She saw me surprised…”Hereafter..Its only Arjun!! not Mr.Fernandez or sir”,I saw her face..just inches apart from mine…

“.you did asked me to…”,her voice got its daring a little..

“Now..Its again me who says this..”,I tried to hold her by waist but she turned suddenly facing me..

“Why??you..you..move…I will call uncle…”..she said with a angry pout…”You..always..order..me”,she spoke irritated with the growing proximity between us and I pressed my lips to control my smile…

Why can’t she think before speaking all this..

“Wonder..how to call you a grown up? Think once…”,I stopped abruptly looking her orbs to fill with tears…

Sh*t..she din’t forget any of my scoldings…I cupped her face..wiped her tears and she tried to move from my hold..My palms did live its life having her soft skin in its hold…

“It’s a auspicious day for you isn’t…kar..karth..”,I found little difficult to remember what she said…

“Karthigai…We light..”

“Ok..that…so don’t cry..call me Fernandez itself..”,I gave up at last…

Am I loving a kid..a grown up kid…My mind mocked me.!!

“Err…Radhika!! will this color suit me”,I asked pulling a light green shirt from my dad’s cupboard… “Just a help isn’t”,I said..and she bit her lips..

This is the first time we both are conversing for this long..I had a doubt may be she is tolerating me for my family…fearing that I would ask my family to cut ties with her..especially my dad and my sister….

“Black”,she said a minute later…

“You like black?”,I asked surprised…

“You will look good in black..Vikram uncle function isnt”,she said..

That’s my girl!! she chose something out of her choice just for my sake.!! I moved giving her way…

“Radhika…not for a function..Something more important than that..”,I said…

Her face bloomed with surprise..I knew…I knew…My behavior is a overnight change for her..but I alone knew how long I had been holding this…

“Hmm..then…that color.. do you have that color?”,she asked pointing a light lavender color shirt…

Haa..this is one of her favorite color…

“Will I look good in this?”,I raised a doubt..

“You will look so..so…handsome in this”,she said squeezing her eyes and looking my amused reaction she smiled a little..

“What is that Mr.Fernandez.,you are throwing surprises…you never like me isn’t”,she asked standing near the door…

I really felt bad at that..Never like her?!! what a worst image!!

“I will say to you soon..”,I smiled…

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“Aru…we are going to Vikram uncle’s house…Will return after an hour..”,my mom said when I descended downstairs,before I could nod I heard Radhika’s laughter…

“Aunty…Uncle asks if he looks young…oh god..!! He is dressed to kill..look …look..”,she said and I saw my mom to raise her brows…

Now,when she did come again here else she din’t leave to her home at all??!!… I turned to see her but she hung her head down looking me…may be she still remembers all my taunts…I smiled a little…

“Mrs…Prena Samuel Fernandaz..tell your verdict”,my dad asked with his chin high in air,dressed in black tuxedo…

“Oh..you look so handsome uncle…err…Mr.Samrat Samuel Fernandez”,she said only after I made a move in silence..

“Thank you My child”,my dad bowed his head dramatically ..I sat in dining hall watching their banter to continue for few more minutes….

“I will leave..”she left…
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I got ready soon…I should propose today…I checked the time it read 6.45pm..My mom and dad already left and when I locked my balcony door I saw her bursting crackers with Saral and some other kids…Uff…Crackers! yes..she said she would do that today..She gave lot of explanation but nothing I remember now…

“You din’t go to temple”, a kid asked..

“Nope…wanna burst crackers with you all..you have exams isn’t..so after this shot..go..study”,she said and blasted something…

She indeed scared me throwing few crackers high to my face,this diwali…After my warning.,she stopped it…I had the kheer,she brought….Something different.!! she said the recipe too..I moved outside and saw her running towards the terrace of her apartment…As I locked my gate,I saw my house to have a new look…A Christmas star decor to shine bright in first floor,in my balcony and the ground floor to glow in earthen lamps’ brightness….I want this to happen always..every year…for ever…!!

I love you Radhika..,I wanna make my wish true…My wish ….

I,Arjun Samuel Fernandez,take you,Radhika Viswanathan to be my wife. to have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health.,I promise to be true to you in good times and in bad, in sickness and in health. I will love you and honor you all the days of my life….

I felt afresh at that second.,.I already had taken the vow to myself….Now.,am coming for you..Radhika..My love..!!My little Queen….!

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So….Do say how this was? will help me for next shots…Pls ignore my Typos and grammatical errors…..Don’t forget to give your views….Love you all loads and Take care…..

80 comments

    • Jessie

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      Yesss…you are first..!! Attendance mattum potrukeenga…ungal thiraivimarsanathai jess aavalodu ethirparthu kondirukiral….Geet chellam…come soon

      • Maha016

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        hi akka…nanum chennai illa…nan salem and ennoda inboxla konjam problem irruku so i can only recieve msges ennala yaarukum msg send panna mudiyadhu…actuall a ippo ennoda account la irrundhu laa dhan post pannikitu iruka nan weekly once visit paanren…ungaluku mattum dhan nan cmnt panniiruken and akka “mahaalageson@gmail.com” this is my email id neeng idhuku msg pannunga namma pesalam…

    • Sangee

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      Hey jessi darling… Sry 😞 for the late comment what to do my mobile is in repair.. Poor me 😞 😞 charge nikave maatudu… Always charger la connect panni vachi irruken… New year kulla new mobile vangi duven Apparam paaru comments ah nee vena vena nu solra alavuku panren ok va πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      Comming to the post sema ma… Loved it to the core… Kar…Kar…karthigai πŸ˜›πŸ˜πŸ˜œ..bhramin girl cooking chicken wah wah… Mr. FernΓ‘ndez… Ennaku Albert FernΓ‘ndez comedy nabagam vanthu chi (come na come come nati go πŸ˜πŸ˜œπŸ˜›) Sry adichi datha… Tornado… Hurricane ah… Vardha eppadi irruku πŸ˜πŸ˜› dei Adu ponnu da puyal illa πŸ˜œπŸ˜πŸ˜›…diya… Carols… Christmas tree.. Whoo hoo… Laid enjoying…always naughty… Energy ball.. I love a kid.. Grown up kid.. πŸ˜πŸ˜œπŸ˜›..karthigai so don’t cry πŸ˜›…owed this wooden cupboard.. Ha ha ha… Back… Lavender 😍😍😍😍 you will look so soo handsome 😍😍😍😍…crackers… Vows… Sema sema… Theri baby… I loved it to the core 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
      Waiting for next one… Take care.. Love you…

      • Jessie

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        Geet chellam…vanga ma… vanga…ohok….mobile issue…edhuvum.seiya mudiyadhu…

        Chicken and brahmin…haha idhuku thanya thirai vimarsanatha keten…kuduthutangala….(paapaiya voice,)…Albert Fernandez… Indha peru nalla iruke….note panikuren….varda…hahah nalla than iruku…..avanuku puyal ma..hahah….Energy ball…note paniteengala…ninachen…!!karthigai..dont cry…Geet…enna flat aakiteenga…point point a solli asathiyadharku Nandrigal kodi…..am glad you enjoyed yaa…was expecting you….Vardha poyachu…geet varalaye nu ninachen….Geet..scroll down…you have a request from Arti…salllunu keezha poi padinga….will post dear…love you loads…TC

  1. Gauri

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    Jess this one left me spell bound….wow what a way to glance at each other…..Radhika is a smart girl…but Arjun is smarter….he made her look at him….best who is diya…ladka pagal ho gaya hai… the way he recited his vows….Jess you need help….OMG please help me…after reading this my heart is fluttering and dancing ….this one feels like a fairy tale…. I am too happy after reading this…. love you for writing this one 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

    • Jessie

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      Gauriii…Gauriii…bear hugs….πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
      Thabk you so much……Arjun..πŸ˜‰yess…am so happy reading your likes…thanks a ton dear….help…yes…!! Fairy tale…!! Gauri…my happiness is now beyond the level it could exceed….thank you..thank you….so much….your words made my day….I was so depressed on some thing…now an stuck up with that fairy tale word from you…my lovely magician….My frangipani fairy…love you loads girl….TC

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    • Jessie

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      Hey Ritwika…..thanks a lot dear….and glad you pointed your likes…Fairy tale! Wow..the word means a lot….thanks again…love u loads..TC

  2. Chinmayi

    Jas,my love, kya bath hey yaar… Sooooper shot, Arjun Samuel fernandis loves Radhika vishwanathan… Too cute😍😍😍..wat a combo, critmas tree and diya.. Actually Diwali is celebrated in karthika masa.. We mysureans call it deepavali only, dint knew it’s called karthikeya in TN. I am very very happy after reading this.when will you update next shot my dear.. I am already fantasising about them.. Neil won’t be there ah?

    • Jessie

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      Hayyyyee….Chinmayi…am blushing…see..I Wil tell.you…that’s how Arjun will propose to her….!! U loved the combo!! Abt diwali..that’s awesome dear…as you said.. Karthigai in TN…we celebrate diwali and this separately…a month long ago will be there….Next shot may be Friday …or Thursday…I will finish this fast…its few shots only….you have no idea how much am giggling in happiness…yippee….Arjun rocked!! Neil has a role here….ardhika is main…Arjun is…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜…thanks in tons my dear…TC and loads of love

  3. Jewel

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    Omg, jezzzz this is amazing yaar, I don’t hav words…. U narrated this story soo beautifully…… Loved it… Their way of looking each other, and he is changing all the harsh words he said to her…. And pure Brahmin girl made chicken for him, wow…. And the last part, star in upstairs and Diya in ground floor, and he want that for whole his life, I loved that part and his vows also…… Neil is there?? I feel some spelling mistake in Sam’s everyday temple visit, that’s why….πŸ˜œπŸ˜ƒ…. Anyway I loved this jez, waiting for next one…. And today is karthigai right?? U people also celebrate like this?? How was it??…

    • Jessie

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      Shonaaaaa…..Teddy hugsss……thanks a lot dear…girl..u brought out the extract… am.so happy….so ri8…star and diya..My fab too….Neil..we have a small role here…Hahah spelling mistake…Shona …I like that…!! But Neil is a Christian here..so no connection with sam’s temple visit…thanks again dear…..yes..Karthigai…! Yes we celebrate the same way…..placing diyas in and outside the house…it went good dear…Thanks again…Will post soon…TC and loads of love

  4. Kalyani

    Too good that too on karthigai day ….waiting eagerly for the next part..felt sorry for arun when he thought he fell for a grown up kid……

    • Jessie

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      Hi Kalyani….glad to get your reviews dear….yes..on karthigai…! You are a tamilian? Else you too celebrate this one…??!! Jus asked…Arjun’s dialogue..well..she will prove she isn’t….will post soon…TC and loads of love…

    • Jessie

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      Hi priti….thanks for liking the concept and mentioning in particular…😘love you loads my dear..thanks again..will post soon…TC…

  5. Dipika

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    Jessssss darling this is sooooo marvelous yarrr.. No words to explain how beautiful it is.. The light festival.. U wrote about it so brilliantly…. God.. I just loved it..
    You shown soooo many colours of arjun’s heart.. I wish u never stopped… Tht hair tugging scene was epic.. She shows shirt fir hin… Now he gonna praposr her.. His last bow.. Wow.. Simply beautiful . Post soon darling.. Love u lots JB
    😘 😘 😘 😘 😘

    • Jessie

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      Deeepzzz….judwa behana….thanks a ton darling….am so happy you liked it…shirt..yes…hair.tugging..hehe…propose…yeaaaaa….banda on the way to propose…hehe…last vow! The one they say in church…! Thank you so much dear…you support me a lot..love you loads…TC

  6. Rossy

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    Don’t know but after reading this ek happy happy wala feeling aa rahi hai….jazzy….u r superbly written everything…the festival and different types of customs …i loved totally

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Lal…mere lal…..happy wala feel…yipeee…
      am so glad on that….got to see you back….love u loads….Thanks a ton…TC…festives and customs!! 😘😘you got it..

  7. Aastha

    Hey ya Jessie…..i loved this shot…the way Arjun expressed his feelings emotions too good n funny….oh my god he felt tornado ?? Hurricane ?? Hahaha …..he waited to get a glimpse of her n 5 mins wait made him restless….lol his trick for her attention ….lol……diya hehehe sam n his quiz on that…!!!
    Arjun wants to see her blush…why to leave golden chance….asking her choices …hehe awesome n his proposal funny like he has by hearted a speech…lol
    eagerly waiting for next … Am loving your stories with different plot n theme

    and thank u for understanding ….yes views matters not first or last…
    Jessie you know i soooo happy reading your views for 2 shots….thats the only happiness i returned that i got after reading shots…..
    Loads of love dear…..take care

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Aastha….thanks a ton dear….!!! Tornado. .haha yea…yep the trick…smart na…diya…I like that too…golden chance..! What to say..!! By hearted speech..hehe…Aastha that’s the way they take vows isn’t…that’s y..he is full on proposal mood…you see…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰thanks a ton for mentioning abt plots dear…I will post with out hesitancy…will post soon….

      Aastha…glad on that note dear….I really live such views and I was happy with your words…Teddy hugs my friend….love you loads…TC..thanks for pointing it…Stay happy

  8. Amore

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    Jessie u r too good… although arjun is shown as a Romeo I’m waiting for the drama after the proposal.. The vow was awesome and I’m damn sure he have to work hard for radhika… I’M SO CURIOUS..

    Will radz agree?
    forget that will he propose her so soon?
    if she agrees will her parents agree???
    what will be her reaction???
    and how will both the parents take it??

    I feel this story is not gonna be as predictable as it seems… ufff I’m being so childish (pout)

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Amore..!! Thank you dear….!! Drama after the proposal..yep..there is…you went till there…glad abt vows…yep..he has to…and will..but in his way..πŸ˜‰

      Amore…as of now…the answer for your 2nd question will come in next shot… will post soon dear…thanks a ton dear…am happy with ur comments…un predictable..thank you…!! You aren’t childish my curious reader.,you already guessed till drama…now wat say..am like…what will Amore say after reading the next part..love u loads girl ..TC…

  9. Meen

    |Registered Member

    Thank u Jess for this superb .. Amazing shot…. I’m really feeling happy happy aftr reading this…..u r amazing…..simply best…….d way both them were stealing glances was damn good……it feels like they r sitting right in front of me…….& Christmas tree & diya…..so good……amazing…..what a narration….u really penned down arjun’s feelings so beautifully……. Now waiting desperately to see Arjun propose radhika……

    U know as soon as I saw d title I thought MY MAFIA KING got his LITTLE QUEEN……hehehe….

    Love u….muuuuuuuuha

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Tesoro Mio……Hows you?…Thanks a ton dear…. am glad that you are happy…thats a success isnt..wowoowo Jolly….!! stealing glances..yess….haiye..front of you..thank you… loved the combo!! woo!! Meen…Hearty thanks dear…Arjun’s feelings..its tough na…writing from guy’s pov..but ye toh acha bachha hai..lol… will post soon dear…check on thursday or friday..awww…mafia king already have his little regina..!! but thats so swweeet Meeen…..
      Mafia king and little queen..nw I notice a thing…Titled as king,there queen speaks about her king..and here the opposite…the king speaks..isn’t.Waiting for Mafioso re’s atrocities..hahha and pasta lang… take care dear..glad to see you here…love you loads….Muahhhh…

  10. Vasuraj

    |Registered Member

    Jessie… Hatss off to u….
    Loved thissss fr
    Oh gosh… Looks like a fairytale love story…
    Arjun Fernandez sounds lik a royal tone
    U Nailed it well in a at most way….
    Superrrrrrr 😊

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Vasuraj…. Thanks a lot yaar… fairytale..my god..am happy with that…hey..thanks for saying abt the name ya…you know..I finalized after a long time…I loved his name a lot…thanks again…TC and stay happy….happy with your support yaa..

  11. swathi

    Extremely cute and sweet shot. Arjun is all romantic in this!!! he is acting like lover boy ..roaming behind her,stealing glances at her,staring at her. And cutest part was Arjun teasing and troubling Rads n making her go uncomfortable.I loved this to infinity.
    wating for the love confession n lot more cute n beautiful things…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hi Swathi….thanks a lot dear….And spl thanks for sharing your likes….lover boy..yes…!teasing.. 😍😍will post soon dear….thanks again..TC and love you loads

  12. Thena

    HILARIOUS! yaar jessie dear, i always have wondered how it wud be if u start writing, for i’ve witnessed how magnificent and to the point ur cmmnts r. n as expected, this is such a marvelous thing. u did it. thank goodness, i gotta get into this! this title whr thr is queen instead of the usual word ‘princess’ drew me in when I glanced here after so long. wow karthigai deepam n her pattu pavada satta with puff sleeves…awww, so good dear. its so so so so so real. every scene. that singing sequence, and lighting diyas wid the help of driver, u know everything was so so real. romance was first class. too tasty a treat and i devoured it heartfeltly. love u girl πŸ™‚ way to girl. ur words n thr he never loved tat drawer inside his wardrobe, wow!!!! awesomeness n naughtiness personified. supremely superb!!!!!!!

      • Thena

        Hey my manha! this is yeah, the same boring me. hw u doing? my dear dear friend, hope u r doing spectacular n rocking πŸ™‚ warm hug yaar. its been too longgggggggggggg deary…

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thenaaaaa……Teddy hugs…..am so glad to get your review dear….its a pleasant surprise….Nandrigal kodi….you like my comments…now that makes me even more happy….!! Thanks dear….Now..now..
      abt1 queen…Ah..you wiped one more doubt of mine….glad it pulled you in…see.I got you!! Karthigai deepam…pattu pavada…aama..aama…!! I was so stuck with that…Thena…now wat to say….that driver part and cupboard dialogue is ma.fav….you said your likes in particular and am overloaded with happiness….Realistic…!! That word means a lot…My god….such a lively boosting comment !!!! Am like that Arjun now…thanks a ton again….love you loads….your words meant a lot….TC…Stay happy….apram…sema.santhosam!!!

      • Thena

        Jessie dear sach me, i felt it so real. i mean u seldom find a thing which sounds realistic n engrossing as well. n this is it. ‘My Little Queen’ Thr whr god! Oh god! wen arjun happens to hear radhika singing…tat feeling oh, me, simply superb illa. at first wen she lights diya without looking at the poor soul who had been at the end of the tether waiting for her and he makes phone call just for the sake haha…its like taylor swift’ the story of us. just the gender difference lol

        ‘…See me nervously pulling at my clothes and trying to look busy,
        and you’re doing your best to avoid me.’

        its good n thanks fr this sweet reply dear.u r amazing at ur point n am sooooo excited. just told wat i felt. teddy hugssssssssss back dear. love u. byeeeeeeee

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Thenaa…..now..now…Am even more happy….why..you pointed your likes…Actually I love such reviews…singing and lighting lamps…..cute wa scenes…poor soul..yaar..you said it even more interesting…end of the tether…! wah!
      Taylor swift..will go for it now…ippo parkonume…hehe…gender diff a..paavam ponnu..ena correct thana..loved the lines…i will catch the song… Thanks a lot dear…!! felt so encouraged..love you loads…TC…teddy hugs..bye…

  13. Sulbi

    |Registered Member

    Jazz kutty…. Simply superb…. So cute anticts by Radhika… and Arjun so smart…each and every line u made me amused… i loved it to the core… u nailed it baby… seriously cant wait for next shot… pls update soon my baby… love you jazzzzzzzzz…… tc….

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Sulbi jaan…..thanks a lot. Dear…..every line…thanks…Aiyo…am so happy you enjoyed this much….will post dear…on Thursday….love you loads jaan…TC

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Delfy….. thanks a lot dear…your compliment meant a lot…I tell you…today am so happy…thanks again…crazily super…the term itself is energetic..TC and love you loads…Stay happy

  14. Arti viswanathan

    Jessie darling superb year… Day by day u are writing is interesting year…. I loved it…. The arjunkidnapped Radhika Khanna and he says he is Arjun Mehta I liked it… Loads of love Jessie darling…. I will wait for ur written update dear…

    • arti viswanathan

      I am so sorry i read some another episode and commented on ur page… And jessie i liked the way arjun was waiting radhika to come to balcony and she lighted diya’s was so awesome jessie dear… Sorry i am commenting late because I was slightly busy….tc loadz of love and ur teddy hug darling…. And keep writing all of u… And sangee darling where’s ur next episode dear… I will be waiting for next episode…

      • Jessie

        |Author

        Arti..Arti….thank you…thank you….that’s ok…I understood ya…diya scene…ok dear….!! Thanks for saying your like…Arti…don’t be sorry for being late dear…it happens isn’t…am glad that you shared your view though you were busy…love u loads and teddy bear hug…TC…Sangee..!! Will catch her tomo and inform your words…she is busy.,may be…TC Arti

      • Sangee

        |Registered Member

        hai arti sry yar my mobiles is on repair …its getting heated up if we uses for 5 mins also…battery also draining very fast…so unable to type …will try to post soon dear…once again sry for the delay πŸ™ iam very happy that u still remember…thank yo sooooooooo much

  15. manha

    jess what are you???? ufff…. Girl awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. seee how much i liked it…. just mindblowing… few shots.. first shot and i’m shot dead….. arjun ka naya roop.. OMG!!!! already vows over…. now only proposal baaki hi…. that cup board scene… mauke pe chauka… diyaaaa. every word is tooo good. i just flowed with the words..loll.. i wish i would be that light weight…. but realllyyyy i’m trying hard to pick words now…. but i think this update really is beyond words….. i loved it…….. once i get from this trance na.. i will tell you what i’m thinking about it????? jesss loveeeee youuuuuuu.

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Manhaaaaaa….Teddy bear hug…..am glad dear…shot dead!! Nahi..utho…mauke pe chauka..Hahah…smart you see..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰light weight…hehe…love you girl…thanks for saying your likes….am honestly overwhelmed reading your comment….oh ok…come out of the trance sooonnn..Manha….Arjun’s trance naπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰love you loads dear…You proposed me again….Love you too🌹TC and thanks for dropping in…

  16. neetz

    oh god jesssieee i loved it sooo much…my heart was beating hard while reading this…it was like a breeeze …just flawless…ooops m running short of words now u help me plsss… uuuf i cant wait to read the next part..post sooon

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Neetz….thanks a lot dear….,breeze…
      wow!!you made me speechless saying all those…love you tons dear….so lovely words …thanks again…will post on Thursday….TC and loads of love…

  17. _Ritu

    |Registered Member

    Jessie .. πŸ™‚ dear its fantabulous…dese days u r very smartly calming ur punch queen wid ur updates πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ totally wow …waiting for nxt…post soon else πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š 😈😈 loads of love πŸ™‚

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hahahah Ritu….even.now you found a reason to punch me….but girl…you are clever…first you said I calmed you.and next line I was shocked at those emoji…lolzzz….thanks a ton yaaa…will post soon my dear punch queen…love you ….TC
      ..

  18. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Waaaaa Jesieeeee !!! See m here again to tickle u with my land sliding kinda comment.. !!! uhhh lemme take a breath first… !!!
    Radhikaaa ..awww u too smart… proud of u … seee we r girlz… !!! let’s rock d world…

    Jessie… !! U KILLED ME N U BECAME AN ILLEGAL SERIAL KILLER….. !!!
    Arjunnnn u double smart handsome… do u take almonds everyday.. hmmm i guess sooo… u tricked soo well… !!!
    D vows r like.. urghhh let it b.. sometimes we don’t get d appropriate word to appreciate naa.. same haal mera hai…
    still thinking deeply as i don’t have any memory loss na coz feeling soo new n fresh.. different from other one’s i have read..Ardhika’s intense gaze… Arjun’s smirk…uncontrollable happiness…restlessness..overloaded feelings,,, smile…hayy ramm deeply ghayal..
    Radhika’s those beautiful rosy pink lips lefting apart to give a breath taking smile… omgggg this kinda scene make me froze..
    i was like wowwwww !!! well i have some questions regarding their family reactions n all n all… but m sure u r ready with an onother beautiful part to nail againnnn…rit? i know that…*tapp my shoulder…
    it’s kinda refreshment.. waaa love it soooo much.. it’s Cutee.. (my mind always revolves around this word CUTE) huhuhu… Love u a lott Jessie… God bless u dear..
    Thnk u… ;-*
    ohh haa i forget to ask u.. !!! what u doing in study? huyaa !!! tata. !!! will meet soon with a great proposal.. !!! TC.. !! ;-&

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Kakali….My surprise friend…Proud of RAdz…wow!! and land sliding comment..hehe..I love this sliding then…Illegal serial killer..kakali…kyun yaar..haha… I can’t kill my friend you see..we have Arjun for that..lol..see..what I am saying…lol almonds…!! Kakali..what a question to Arjun..smart boy..! Appropriate…do you doubt that..you do appreciate me in a new way which I love to read…..you know am reading your comment for fifth time….so lively and enthusiastic..Love you kakali…for giving your best words for me…Pink lips..we have dialogue from arjun for that…..nail again..you need to say..but next one is up…will post soon…may be today…I too will tap your shoulder…*tap..tap*

      Refreshment..that word means a lot dear…cute to chahiye mujhe bi aur tune keh diya..wah..Jess ho gayi khush..!! thanks a ton my dear…love you loads…Stay happy forever…TC… I had finished my ug…done dona done…..great proposal…gonna be treat..but thoda………..suspense..heheh…don’t kill me…TC dear…

  19. Aadia

    |Registered Member

    Jesssuu……..😘😘😘😘😘😘let me give you a lot of teddy hugs…I have no words to praise your writing. I loved it from the very beginning.. Its just awesome.. 2 days back it was Karthika here also and ,I wished if I was able to write something related to this on Ardhika.especially a. balcony part.And now I find this,you have no idea how happy Iam.so realistic, so romantic… im so so proud of my big siss.Arjun’s POV,how beautifully u have written his emotions, love for her….and Radz..cute Tamil girl .and his vow,WOW!!I love you a lot my dear Jessie akka…waiting for more Jessian Romantic shots… And please sent me a private msg when you update next part…next week is full of xams. .so Lil busy.

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Aaddiaaaaaaaaaaaa………Glad to see you..and you got me here…You know I was like when Aadia comes back, should send this link to her…and what..you are here already..surprising me…!!

      thanks dear…thats a real surprise..thinking alike..!!wow…Ammu….balcony..hehe..I love it…Am still not done with it…thanks dear….Am at loss of words reading yours…Teddy hug…realistic..!! wow! I did root for that… His pov..quite challenging…thats y I expected you…you had said me once…Ammu…you made the moment by saying those in precise my dear…love you loads Ammu…Jessian..! Thank you..All the best dear..and I will send you..no issues…study well lil sissy…TC stay happy…

  20. Sathya

    |Registered Member

    Jaaaazzzziiiii…semma chapter po. First class shot. Arjun Fernandez and Radhika Viswanathan… so cute yar… how u got this kind of ideas? superb yar…Karthigai and Christmas…semma link and the way arjun wished that to be forever is toooooooooooooo good. HIs VOWS are the best thing on the whole. I just loved it dear…post next shot soon πŸ™‚ love you πŸ™‚

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Satzzzzzzzzzz…….Teddy hugs…andha dp ulla mathiri odi vanga…ena solla…Tamil ponna Rads a pota udane.,namma makkal anaivariyum edhir parthu irunden…Nalla vela vandhuteenga….Thanks a ton dear…eppadi ideas…ellam indha Arjunala varadhu than satz..ungaluku theriyada πŸ˜‰ forever..adi saka….sema point ma… satz na chuma va…thanks a ton dear…will post ya…love you loads..

    • Jessie

      |Author

      Hey Chashni…thats ok dear…yep..which place you are in? Glad you are safe…Take care dear..thanks a ton…and again…stay safe dear…!!

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