Manmarziyan – Let me live Part 22 (last part)

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Hey all bunny here… this is the last part of the Let me live… Pls read and share me your views…

Enjoy the ride…

Radhika was jumping on the bed when sam entered the room and her mouth was open and her jaw dropped looking at the mess of the room…
Sam ; radhu what is this ?? What have u done to the room ??
Radhika ; sammu mamu u know what this is the best day of my life..
Sam ; may i know what it is ?? saying so she pulled Radhika to sit on the bed..Radhika blushed..
Sam ; oh my sister is seriously blushing some one pls help me… she said and radhika slapped her arms lightly and laughed… Sam pulled her and radhika kept her head over sam’s lap and sam was caressing her head…
Radhika ; sammu Arjun na he said he will take me out for a date and immediately she hid her face in sam’s stomach… Sam was able to feel radhika was blushing..
Sam pulled her face by turning her and radhika was smiling big and hid her face again..
Sam ; radhu u look like a cute kid and she pulled her cheeks…
Radhika twisted her lips and said with a fake anger she said ; U know what he did he made me say that i love him… and narrated what stunts arjun pulled… Sam was looking at Radhika without blinking…
Radhika ; what ??
Sam ; hell with Arjun he needs to treat me for this… i gave the idea to patch up with u and he made this much big drama.. u r so dead u meat… radhika jolted and shouted what so this was not his idea even now he did this with the help of u… hell he is dead…. the sisters were planning against Arjun and were busy punching their palm… few seconds there was silence in the air… the air sensed tension… they both looked at each other and gave one evil winning smile and made hifi with a big laugh and ran to finish their dinner…

Next morning….
Sam came scratching her head to find where radhika was… she was not found in kitchen the spot where she is spends her time at the maximum level… then she yawned and sat next to her dad who was busy reading news paper…
Sam ; Dad where is the JCB food digger… he pulled the paper down and saw Sam who was half sleep…
Samrat ; she said she has some work as arjun texted her to come… Sam nodded and smiled…
Samrat ; what ?? why are you smiling and she acted all weird today and u r smiling…
Sam ; papa she will do that here after like that… she is in dreamland with Arjun… just then Arjun called Sam… samrat nodded his head and continued his paper reading with the smile
… sam picked the phone and spoke…
Sam ; hello romeo seems like ur route is been cleared… she could hear his blushfull smile… wow my friend is blushing… she teased him and he with was not able to do anything other than smile…
Arjun ; Sam… sam enough of teasing me call ur beloved sister she is not picking my call…
Sam was shocked…
Sam ; what ?? Arjun she said she is going to see u and started from here… Arjun was now sweating…
Arjun ; i never spoke to her… i woke up just now… Sam saw Samrat and he was equally panicked.. Piyali who heard the conversation fainted in shock… Sam rushed to catch her mom and samrat immediately informed the police…
Arjun neil teji Jai nandhini and neraj all gathered i khanna’s mansion…
Arjun was lost in his thoughts… he was helpless.. he was sitting after roaming the entire city and also her friend’s house, her house in the outskirts of the city as well… he was so lost in her thought…
Jai was speaking with the police people and then he got a call… he just hummed in response of the call and then without saying anyone he took his car key and started…
Arjun and other boys started to follow him… Neil asked sam to stay back as he will inform her… sam accepted it after thinking of her mom and dad…
Some place far….

Radhika was tied with the rope in her hands and legs… she was crawling looking at the demonic figure infront of her… her breathe got caught when she saw him standing in front of her…
Radhika ; what do u want from me why are u alwaue behind me ??
Dinesh ; i have some unfinished business with u… u represent my failure…. u are my failure… u deserve a something which will make u suffer even in ur death… saying so he sets the place in fire…
He shouts ; I’m doomed but i will make sure that u r coming with me because this is because of u on whom i set my eyes i became this i was made a monster which i kept under control…. u r suffering this death just like
Radhika was just looking at the fire and everything from her past comes in front of her…. her dad his death… his scream the pain was echoing in her ears…
Jai comes to the place and looks at the fire which is gulping the building… jai… some one calls him… he immediately rushes to that person and they find a door and kicks open it and finds radhika tide with ropes… he pulls her and also finds dinesh in the unconscious state… leaving him behind he picks up radhika and comes out in time and the entire building collapses and the fire is eating the entire wooden house… the others reach the place and finds radhika on jai’s hands… arjun rushes and jai nods saying dont worry i was in time to save my little sister… Sam hugged Jai he winced in pain… just then all saw the burn mark on Jai… All takes both Jai and Radhika to the hospital… Jai was giving one victorious smile on his face…

Its been few days the incident happened… Radhika was still getting scared to sleep alone… she hugs sam and sleeps… but she could not sleep properly…. Arjun helps her to come out of her fear by taking her some place far in the car drive and she sleeps when her she herself gets exhausted… Arjun was making all his ways to make her normal and she too starts to come to normal… But Jai was no where found… he after treated in the hospital left them saying he needs to carry on an important thing…But he was found no where… Arjun’s thought was broken when he saw Radhika was mumbling something in the sleep…
Arjun ; where are u Jai ??
Jai ; Do u think u can die that easy dinesh ?? Not so soon my dear boy… i was waiting for this day for 7 years…. 7 full years… Dinesh was found half lump man… face totally bruised… Jai kicking Dinesh pulled his hair and made him sit on the chair from where he fell down…
He turned and saw a young man who was standing behind Jai… He nodded and came and punched Dinesh and he was screaming in pain…

Jai slapped Dinesh and said ; i have taken many cases but never saw any monster who is like u… killed your own daughter Mother and even your son for your money… U did not kill your son but my best friend the only one whom i had as a only relation to claim in the orphanage… Jai was killed and i was half dead…. He was fed up of fighting so he left me… that was the day i want u to make u suffer but when i came to know about what u did to radhika from my jai’s diary i wanted u to feel every pain every one faced because of u…
Ankush… called the guy… Saral good to see u… Pls do the honors… saying so Ankush hugged Saral… Dinesh saw Saral and his eyes widened…
Dinesh ; U… U…. ??
Saral ; yes me me the same guy who got the signed papers to u… those where fake papers just to make u believe that u won… i won… i ultimately won and i am happy to see u like this for what u did to our company… I wont leave u soon Dinesh… saying so saral was making his share of honors…
Ankush pulled saral back and nodded…
Ankush ; thank u so much for the help…
Saral ; i should thank u sir.. many are ruined because of him… never leave him… Ankush nodded and said well he is officially dead…i made those reports and submitted to the department as well… i will take care of him… saying so Ankush shook his hands with Saral…
Dinesh was not able to speak but was terrified when he saw Ankush with the gun pointing at him… He nodded and he crawled when he saw Ankush taking each step towards Dinesh…
Ankush pressed the trigger and the place was shook by the sound of the gun…
Ankush calls his team and his senior officer looks at the lump of Dinesh and nods and he leaves….
He drives back to the place where he and Jai last went… He sat and closed his eyes and tears were pricking his eyes…

He felt some hand over his shoulder…. he turned and saw Jai sitting next to him with a proud smile on his face…
Ankush ; Jai….. he exclaimed…
Jai ; thank u for saving my family from my monster…
Ankush ; but i failed u….
Jai ; its my fate… not ur fault… Ankush was not able to speak any further…
Jai ; u never broke any promises till now…. and now i need one more promise will u do that for me ?? Ankush nods his head in a positive manner…
Jai ; pls stay with my family as Jai… never say that i am dead… let ur lie be the truth to them… Let them be happy with u… i will be happy to see u have the family… u used to long when radhika and sam play with me… now u have a life long time with my sisters to be your sisters…and ankush pls take care of Neha… never say her the truth that the donor of her eyes is the one she loved… Ankush broke down and jai hugged him….
Jai ; im sorry for all the burden…
Ankush ; one more time sorry i’ll kill u… Jai laughed…
Jai ; Pls take care of urself and its ur time to live a happy life… take care of neha… say hiee to my little god daughter Jiya… Ankush saw Jai for one last time…
Jai ; i will now rest in peace… My dear police officer continue ur duty to wipe out the weeds from the society… and i will promise that i will watch all ur progress and be proud of u…

Ankush nodded and saw Jai’s retrieving figure who vanished in the air… Ankush sobbed and composed himself when he saw Neha calling him… He went to his car splashing the water in his face and changing the shirt he went to his house… taking Neha and Jiya he went straight to Khanna’s mansion to introduce Neha to her family…
When he entered all were looking at him with full of love and affection… Sam and radhika ran and hugged him…
Ankush saw up and thanked Jai to give a family to him… All were happy and Jai aka Ankush spoke to samrat saying who he was and Samrat happily welcomed his son to the family…
Teji pouted when Jai came to speak… Neil and Arjun rolled their eyes…
Jai ; ok why is my love so angry with me…
Teji ; u did not say where u went for few days i was worried..
Neil ; he was taking our life… he was acting more of ur girlfriend who seems to be lost in the pool of ur love Jai… He smiled and looped the hands over Teji and said ; i had few works to take care off.. ohh dont worry i will not go here after leaving u… saying so he pulled Teji’s cheeks and all had a fun time deciding about the upcoming wedding

So so so this is how it ends… pls share me your views.. thank u all for the patience u had to read this ff and also encouraged me… love u all… one done next will be 2 states which will be the last part of it as well.. love u all once again…

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13 Comments
  1. Sana1819786

    loved it dear
    dinesh got what he deserves
    ankush is so selfless that he took care of his frnds responsibilities he is a true frnd
    waiting for epilogue
    cont soon
    bye take care

  2. P112111

    Awww…. Amazing….. Again last part

  3. Sema ending akka.favourite story ended.waiting for 2 states.love you take care.

  4. awesome iam going to miss your story

  5. Arti viswanathan

    Sv darling superb, excellent, outstanding, nice, good, awesome, mind-blowing, fabulous, fantastic episode. . . . . I loved it to the core. . . . I liked all the scenes. . . . Tc lots of love to u from me and teddy hugs to you. . . . . . Will be waiting for next episode. …… the happy ending dear……

  6. Awesome …..thank u

  7. Hi sv.. it’s been a long time.. it’s awesome n thank you for the update…

  8. Buddy it was awesome ……..I really lived it n I ll Miss it ………..tq fr giving such a lovely updates ……..I feel sad …….u were amzing writer ………stay in touch in writing…….. Love u n keep going may god bless u n stay happy :-):-):-):-)

  9. Its loved it …… .n stay in touch wth writing

  10. amazing.love this story.

  11. S.v

    thank u all for the comments… u can find all my works in wattpad… i’m there available always there… come there and enjoy all the writers work there… love u all stay blessed

  12. Brin

    Awesome, Jai is dead and Ankush took Jai’s place that was shocker, you nail it, well done. 🙂

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