Manmarziyan – Just the two of us !!! (Episode 7)

Thank you guys for the suport and love. So guys how was the surprise. i am sorry for Neil, actually as per the story i have to burnt his face but don’t worry he will be cured soon. So guys, we are nearing the end for this ff, another few episodes, i will finish it off this. Radhika’s past will be revealed soon completely and this episode has little bit of that.

FYI- guys, i have started writing Enemity to love season 2…pls do read that and give ur valuable comments…(this is for the ones who is not aware of it)


Manmarziyan – Just the two of us (Episode 7)

Arjun is shocked to see Neil and his burnt face. He is feeling bad for his state.

Arjun, “Why did you send the warning letter? Who will harm Radhika?”

Neils lifts his eyes and looks at him. Arjun, “I…Mean…Shravani”.

Neils smiles and says, “Let it be Radhika only and that will be good for her. I am her brother Neil Shravan”.

Arjun is now atmost shocked hearing he is Radhika’s brother. Suraj also gets shocked and looks confused. At the same time Manish also comes there and joins with them.

Arjun, “Neil…can u pls tell us exactly what happen to you..your..face…i am sorry for asking this”.

Neil keeps silence.

Arjun,”Neil…its very important to know about radhika’s past, then only we have to plan to save her from the danger. What kind of danger she has. I really can’t understand anything”.

Neil, “I will tell you her past”.

Arjun,Suraj & Manish looks at him.

Neils starts telling about their flash back.

FB starts,

Shravani who is a bubbly and charming college going girl. She always interferes in others matters and try to find solution for their problem. Till now that character gives her a very good name and good type of friends for her and sometimes she used to get scoldings too. But she never cares about the negative and always listens her heart and do as per that. She is not aware that this habit itself will lead her into a problem not only for but for her family too.

Neil Shravan her only lovely brother. Their parents passed away in their school time and from that time they both gained the confidence and decided not to get any help from any of their relatives and started living their own life. Neil is 2 years senior to her but still they both are like a friends.

Neil is in love with Samaira who is radhika’s classmate and best friend. Radhika also knows it and she supports him. Sam also loves him dearly and is ready to spend her lifetime with her two best buddies. These 3 are enjoying their life to the fullest till radhika peeps her nose into a problem.

One fine day, its little late in the night..radhika drives in her scooty to her home. she stopped hearing a scream and try to find it where it is coming. She stops her scooty and parks it somewhere in the hidden area and finds a mini maruthi van standing at the corner. She got to know the screaming is coming from there only. She gets panic hearing the girl’s pleading and decides to help the girl. She looks for help but since it is a one way and outskirts she couldn’t find anyone. Suddenly she takes her mobile and gets the horn piece which used to attach in the autos. She starts palying the police siren sound from her mobile and keeps the horn on top if it and it starts giving loud noise and it seems like police vehicle is coming. she hides near the bunch of trees and watches it.

Suddenly the door is opened and 2 persons comes out and throws her on the road and drives away. While they are doing this, she takes a picture of them and the car number plate. The van drives off and she comes out from the bush and runs to the girl. She finds her brutally harmed by them. She takes her in her lap and gives water to her and makes sure that nothing has happened to her.

She called Neil and asks him to come. Neil and sam takes the car and reaches the place where radhika told. They put the girl in car and Rads & Sam goes in the car and Neil follows them in her scooty.

At hospital, the doctor praises radhika to get that girl admitted in the hospital at right time. The doctors informs her to file a complaint becoz the girl is brutally harmed before they try to rape her. Radhika felt very bad for her and rushes to police station with Neil to file a complaint. Sam stays in hospital to take care of her.

At police station, Radhika and Neil storms into it and urges them to register an FIR on rape attempt. The ACP who is in charge of that station, calms them down and gets the complete information.

ACP, “Calm down madam. I will register an FIR but what is the proof for this. Without proof i cannot take any action.”

Rads, “Sir please…don’t talk like a normal person. That girl is the main proof and she will give statement and more over i am the eyewitness. I saw them throwing her out from the car and they drove away. What proof you want more than this?”

ACP, “I can take her statement but i cannot take yours..anyone from anywhere can say that i saw the incident and all we need is a solid proofs. For now i will take the statement from that girl. Come with me to the hospital”.

Three of them reaches hospital and goes to the ward where she gets admitted. Sam is inside the room with her and doctors are treating her wounds. ACP comes and asks permission from the doctors to have enquiry with the victim.

He records the statement from the victim and informs Radhika and Neil that anytime they can be called for the enquiry. They agreed to come at anytime.

After few hours she gets a call from the police station and asks her to come. Neil & Radz reached station and sees ACP enquiring two guys. Rads gets angry seeing them and rushes to them. She holds the collar of one person and starts slapping him left and right. He stares her angrily and rubs his cheeks.

Radz, “ACP sir…these are the 2 persons who harmed her. I am sure. These are the two persons”.

ACP, “Madam…pls calm down. I am asking them and i will assure you that the culprits will be punished.” He turns to them and threatens them to accept the truth.

One guys is started shivering seeing his angry and another one is still staring Radhika. ACP notices this and gives a hard slap to his face which shocks him and gets more furious.

He tells the constables to put them in the cell and files the FIR. He then gives the copy of FIR to radhika also. Radhika thanks him and goes with Neil. ACP stares her and smiles at her saying, “Brave girl”.

All the way Neil is advising her to reduce her anger and not to involve in this kind of serious matters. Radz got angry and replied, “If i was in that place what would you do? Do you also try to run from the problem?”

Neil kept quiet and after he did not utter a single word. They both reached hospital and stays there whole night. Next day is saturday and they are not in pressure of their college and all. They 3 decided to go home alternatively instead of going together. To their surprise, they see ACP in the hospital in mufty. All are surprised to see him and wishes him.

ACP, “Hello Hello…stop it. I came here not as a police a normal person. And my name is not ACP… I am Prakash”.

He greets everyone and when he greets radhika, he becomes more pleased and that is find by Sam & Neil and they sign to each other.

Radhika did not notice all this.

Radhika decided to go home and come back. Since 4 ppl are here, she decided to take Sam with her. But Prakash interrupts saying he will drop her. Initially she refuses it but later Neil convinces her that is safety also to go with him. She accepts it and goes with him.

All the way they both had a nice talks and now he is much more impressed on her character. Coz she told him all her list of bravery actions, Few makes him to laugh and few makes him to appreciate her. He drops her and tells her that he will wait outside for her. She also gets a good impression on him. After few mins she comes back and gets into his jeep. They spent a nice time with each other till they reaches hospital.

@Police station, Suddenly more than 10 people starts entering into the police station and goes to the cell and one person calls out a name, “Vaibhav beta”. The guy who got slap comes infront with red eyes and stares him angrily and says, “Now only u remember me is it?”

Person, “No beta…i came today morning only and once i get the news i am coming here directly. what happened?”

Vaibhav, “Dont’ ask me anything. And do what i want”.

Person, “Tell me what you want?”

Vaibhav, “I like one girl and i want to marry her”.

Person, “Who is that girl tell me ,i will talk to her and i will see who will reject my son?”

Vaibhav smirks and says, “Definitely she will reject me coz she is the reason, where i am standing now”

The person is shocked.

FB is paused…..

Neil is breathing heavily and feels suffocating. Manish comes to him and calms him down. Soon he fainted and Arjun, Suraj and Manish looks each other. They get some idea and for now they plan to take him to hospital.

After the first aid, Neil becomes normal. Arjun decides to take him to his home and Neil will feel good to see his sister. Everyone agrees for it.

Arjun and Neil reaches his home and they enter inside. He gets shocked seeing his Mom Anjali with Radhika and more than that is they are talking nicely to each other. Anjali looks at Arjun and raises her eyebrows as if asking as “what is this?”

Arjun is numb and speechless seeing them. Radhika also feels awkward seeing a new person with Arjun.

Precap: Anjali treats Radhika nicely and tells what is Arjun’s likes and dislikes and about his childhood incidents. Radhika laughs heartfully hearing all these. Neil hides himself and gets happy seeing her sister.

Guys, how is this episode and i hope you find it interesting. Pls let me know if you like it or not and provide your valuable comments. You can imagine the persons for ACP character and for Vaibhav characters. My choice is Suraj from Udaan is for ACP Prakash (I like him a lot and he is fit for police char, for Vaibhav i chose Chirag from Matsh..he really looks like a spoiled brat)…you can choose your fav actors for this…enjoy reading it

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  1. Jeya


    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??

      1. Jeya

        When will you upload next episode 🙂

    2. Sathya

      Tomorrow dear… For sure.. ?…. N pls read my Enemity to love season 2… ???

      1. Jeya

        Yeah sure… 🙂

  2. Satzzzzz darling tanku sooooooo much for curing Neil 🙂 🙂 🙂 lots n lots of hugs am all happy 😀 rads always adventures 😀 loved it 😀 love u 😀

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??

  3. Sathya amazing episode

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??

  4. S.v

    Arjun sry yaar counld not comment on your last update. I guess the problem is not a small one , spare no one who had hurt me (radhika). The plot is now getting more interesting . Wanna know more update soon. Love you lods.

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??yeah it is not a small pbm… And it will turn their lives upside down

  5. amazing epi dr..eagerly waiting for nxt one..plz post

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??

  6. Outstanding episode, I have a question did Neil get acid attack that was meant for Radhika? And Satya you nail it, well done. 🙂

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ?? he got attacked while saving her

  7. awesome episode …………………..

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??

  8. Satz darling it was marvous epi..flash back hits my heart yar..i m eager to knw further but epi ended so excited for nxt one..its really awesome selection for Acp role..i too like Vijendra from shastri sister..n other hero don’t knw who is he
    .ovet all fab you

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??… Yeah this past hits mine too… I too like Rajat a lot…

  9. Amazing update…i love it…feeling bad for neil….but happy for redhika ..arjun is with her 🙂
    whr is sam..plzzz next one update soon… tc 🙂

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??

  10. Rg2015

    Gud one satya

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ??

  11. Sathya awesome 🙂 Radz Neil past made me cry 🙁 hope everything turns fine soon … waiting for culprits to get punished and also for ur new ff 🙂 loads of love

    1. Sathya

      Thank u so much dear ?? sure that will happen soon and it will be done by our hero…

    2. Sathya

      Gauri dear… I already posted 2 episodes in enemity… Expecting ur comments

  12. Awesome marvelous episode loved it so much, eager to see everything unfold. Stay blessed

  13. awesome episode………….

  14. Shree

    Akka super!! Radhika is a brave girl… Sad past .. Love Neil… happened to Sam?

    Post soon ka… love you ??

  15. Sooooo sorryyyy my sweeeeeetheart for late comment. …was Lil busy …now only I could read this lovely episode. …neil’s fb was really very heart touching. …rads brave girl…but got into trouble coz of her helping n caring nature….ahhh…vaibhav n ACP cast choice is good…keep it up honeyyy. …please don’t be angryyy….again sorry for late comment. …eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads. Muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂

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