Manmarziyan…A journey of love and friendship Chapter 1

My Story starts from the party organized by Mr. Samrat Khanna to celebrate Arjun and Radhika’s marriage.
Radhika confronts Nandini and Nandini out of anger blurts out everything which is heard by Arjun , Samaira, Neil, Piyali and Samrat.
Samrat : ‘’So I was right you came back to extract revenge on me by hurting my daughter ..but thanks to Radhika that she foiled your plan to hurt Sam

Piyali little confused asked Samrat..’’What revenge are you talking ….why Nandini wants to hurt Samaira’’…. Samrat shares how Nandini misunderstood his friendship for love and how he apologised for hurting her..yet she never left the grudge against him and wanted to hurt Samaira by getting her married to Arjun .How Radhika had warned him earlier ..yet cloud not prove her point,
Piyali is not able to stand anymore … realises that Radhika not only saved Samaira but also tried saving her relationship with Samrat.
Amid all this Radhika makes a call and says “I am ready to leave please be quick…I don’t want to stay here anymore’’. Radhika handed over an envelope to Teji and tells him to give it to Neil. Radhika reminisces all the moments spend in Bird Song…with Sam Neil and above all Arjun, she hugs Teji and leaves…Teji little confused watches Radhika leaving in a car.

He goes inside and hands over the envelope to Neil …. Neil opens the envelope and finds a letter addressed to him with signed divorce papers and a short message for Arjun and Samaira.

Neil vision blurred he could not hear anything going around in that room…he wanted to hug and pacify his Chashni ,those words in the letter had started eroding his soul…if it was so much pain for him to read it…how much pain would Radhika had suffered to do all this.
Arjun was suddenly again the 5 year old orphan who lost everything just now…his world his family his sister, someone whom he loved so dearly that he even was ready to go against his own conscience… this betrayal was like being stabbed in the heart..he just stood there lifelessly without caring who said what. Nandini walked towards Arjun…but he stepped back, he gave her a questioning look and asked her to leave.

Sam suddenly felt so much of hatred for herself. She always knew her Chashni would do anything for her yet she could not trust her …why was she such a fool ??..Why was she so blind and that she cloud not read the truth written all over Radhika’s face. She just wanted to hug her …and ask for her forgiveness..today she cloud give away anything to have her friend back . Sam turned to face Radhika… but she was gone… Sam called out for Radhika ‘’Chashni..Chashni…where are you’’…but her Chashni was gone..

Sam pleading call for Radhika suddenly brought everyone out of their thoughts… Arjun’s eyes searched the room…Piyali and Samrat were equally surprised not to find Radhika around , after all today she has triumphed …proved her point..she has to be there. Neil was the only one standing like a statue in that room and then he spoke ‘’She’s gone…’’ he looked at Sam and then Arjun… his eyes defined the anger of his heart…. He walked towards Sam …tears were rolling down his eyes yet he smiled sardonically and suddenly he became serious and said ‘’I told you Samaira Khanna … Chashni is not the type who would hurt someone.. but you…’’. Teji meanwhile sensed the growing storm in Neil and interrupted….’’I…I saw Radhika leaving with someone …she just gave an envelope and asked me to give to Neil and Left .’’ ‘’But where ..how can she leave ..she never gave me chance to explain…’’ Sam was all shocked haggard, she lost words…her mind was blank…as if there is some kind of chaos in her head…but was suddenly interrupted by Neil… who sarcastically looked at Sam and Arjun. He smiled clapped and said ‘’Congratulations …! you both are free to marry now…Radhika has signed divorce papers … you are a free bird Arjun Mehra… Samaira Khanna.. be happy now you got love of your life…’’ Neil …! Sam cried painfully ….but there was no stopping for Neil today… he pulled out the divorce papers and handed them to Arjun….he turned to leave but stopped suddenly and said ‘’Oh..! by the way she left both of you a message…

On the road somewhere in Mumbai , Radhika had completely lost the battle against her tears, which seemed have their own will and refused to hear her. ‘’You love him…’’ her thoughts were suddenly interrupted by a male voice…she wiped her face and turned to face her companion on the journey…she looked at him and knew today she was unarmed …he cloud read her in and out , she sighed and answered…’’that’s my mistake…I shouldn’t have ‘’. He smiled and lovingly patted her head and asked her to sleep as would take them some time to move out of Mumbai due to traffic.

Please let me know if I should continue…

Credit to: Gauri

33 comments

    • manha

      Hiiiiiii tanya. Remember me. I’m waiting for ur stories. plzzzz update them. eagerly waiting.
      plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. love u .

  1. Rg

    Gauri one word awesome… Pls continue. I really loved it. This is wat I really envisioned had they extended… Pls if possible update daily. If not twice a week. Who is with radhika ??? Next time if possible plz update a bigger part… This part is fantastic…. Thanks for penning this down so beautifully… This is how it should have continued had they given more time. I feel radhika couldn’t have come out of it so unaffected…

  2. Shree

    Yippie!! Another mmz ff… So happy !! Welcome to the jungle of mmz gauri … I loved it!! Please do continue… Waiting for the next one… ??

    Love you ??

  3. jade

    Awesome!! Just awesome!! Loved it! Plz update a lenghtier part soon!! Waiting eagerly!!
    Loads of love!! :-*

  4. nisha

    hey woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

    Gauri dear welcome to manmarziyaan ka jungle dear in Tu . We all are different here and seriously getting shocked like hell as You can say Surprising but what a twist dear

    A different angle of Neil really loved it a lot

    I loved the suspense and drama craeatd by you.

    I just loved it dera

    words are less when it come to say

    just say it awesome

    never say you are stopping

    narratiion emotion are awesome with a seriously different track and awesome story

    luv u meri jaan.

    and do tell do we know each other if yes then luv u dear

    and if not then Its a pleasure to be ur friend .

    Keep smiling always

    Love u by heart

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • Roma

      My nisha my sweeeeeet musical friendddd…kahan gayab ho yaar…tumhari story ka bahut dino se wait kar rahi hoon…kya hua? naraaz ho kya? Yaa phir bahut zyaada busy ho? Love you loads jaanu…missing you soooooooo muchhhhhh, very tight hug. ..

    • aastha

      hey nishu y r u nt updating????????plzzz update sooon or atleast telme wen u ll.plzzz……………..hey roma hw r u??????????hw r ur cutie pies..i ve nvr talkd 2 u…………bt i ve always read ur wrds f lve n wisdom…..actu i nvr hd te courage 2 speak……..coz i dnt know whether u wud b wanting me as a friend……………….ll u b my frnd?plz???

  5. Rg

    Is it ankush who came in d car to pic radhika?? Will she come bac to bs?can’t wait for d story to unfold. Plz update soon.

  6. manha

    yipeeeeeeee…. superb one. Another FF on mmz. I couldn’t ask u more so plzzz continue. N yess nice plot n story u hav made. Neil’s dialogues superb. I loved it.

    welcome gauri to the mad world of manmarziyan. waiting for the next one.

  7. Gauri

    Thank you guys …u all made my day…I am still writing will try and post soon..One clue the person with Radhika is not Ankush..you will know more of him in coming chapters..Love you all

  8. Roma

    Omg gauri dearrrr, it’s superb, mind blowing, you wrote very good…all the characters you involved in the truth revelation scene was terrific…samrat piyali convo was nice, nandini exposed, arjun’s is shattered, sam’s state of mind, neil’s response to rads envelope n handling divorce papers to arjun n his words to Sam n arjun were really heart clenching….rads proved herself n left but in immense pain…
    now the million dollar question…who is the person with rads??? Rana or someone else??? Wowww loved it yaaaaar. ..keep it up, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

  9. aastha

    gauri plzzz cntinue..n try 2 update regurarly plz……..is rads companion niel???????????im waitng 4 ur nxt epi…….

  10. nisha

    hey deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees love u so much meri jaan.

    A truth reveleation my heart ssays not stop my naadan dil ki manmarziyaan and my time keep trying to stop me to write

    But till now I didn’t stop or not intention to stop but lets see what god has plan for me I am trying my best and he try his best

    LOve u so much aasthu manha roma ammu , mansi , naty shree, sree, hareem, meghs, , yes sanyu where are you and where ur story I remember it love u meri jaan and miss ur sotry, hayathi , nemi I don’t know my would be doctor where are you gone really miss u a lot deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    miss u and love u all always by heart.

    I know I am talking like a bore brat but what to do I am trying to came so many times but he played his game very well and I have another obstacle in front of me .

    Love u all .

    But I am trying and still trying to came in the game with my naadan dil ki manmarziyaan very soon.

    LUv u my loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.

    Keep smiling

    Once a friend always a friend.

    • manha

      hi nishuuuuuuu. hw r u?? Really been a long time dearyyyyyy. Kya kare ab aadat sio hogayi hain. kisi se baat hi nahi ho pati yahaaan. Sab busy hain. Mansi toh pata nahi kaha chali gayi . Aur tumne to hame akela chod diya. Lekin ummed abhi baaki hain. so don’t worry jaldi sab theek hoga.

      I wish u all the best n luck my jaan. N hope u will update our story soooon.

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