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Manmarziyan – Impressed !! (Shot 5)

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Hello Everyone….!! Its Jessie here!!! I was down with fever..cold..and its close relatives…haha….well..the tablets almost turns me drowsy else…I get occupied with something else…well…This one is drafted long back…hahah..yep..pongal one…So..It was little easy to post it now….I may take sometime for next update…Support your Jessie..!! Thanks a lot
for your lovely comments…I will reply sooon…

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Impressed !! (Shot 5)

Arjun POV…

“What did I do…you really imagined my face with horns?”,I feigned a shock….

“Ajju…go back”,she smiled….No! laughed..snickering a little,she burst into fits of laughter within secs,holding her stomach,pushing me a little.,she landed with a thud on our sofa…

“Is it a way to tease your future husband”,I tried to sound stern after a minute of watching her childish Antics…””And..it wasn’t funny,that you rolled all over this sofa.”

“You were tooo stubborn…so…just a random thought crossed my mind…..”,she turned my side…

My mobile’s ringtone disturbed her to continue…She looked me expectant,to know about the call…those brown orbs that spoke volumes of her innocence,drove me even more crazier for her…

“Its getting late..come”,I extended my hand…..

“Hmmmm….Again..Temple..Pooja…people…prasad…”,she pouted boring.,but gasped when I kissed her cheek unexpectedly.,pulling her close…She turned a statue,as I continued the same…That Rose fragnance of my girl cast a spell…”Ajjjjuu…”,she whispered trying to get off from my hold…

“Rattu..don’t”,I hugged her close…”Am sorry dear…you still aren’t comfortable with me…am sorry!!”,I apologized.!! .It was my mistake..wasn’t she too young to grasp my words then.,expecting me to be in contact secretly…..

“Not like that..”,she looked oblivion.,biting her lower lip…

“What’s that..Rattu..”,I asked holding her chin to face me..

“Hmm..I…I love you Ajju..!”,she said hugging me a little.,and raised her head to see me….

This is third time she confesses.,in this 5 yrs..After her nod to my proposal.,I never asked her to…for,I knew she loves me…but she felt the need to express it through words…Last time,after noticing our parents’ cold war she said the same words.,hugging me close….

“Love you so much..my Rattu kutty!!”.,cupping her face in my palms.,I shook her face.,hitting my forehead with hers..she smiled with tears…”Crying?”,

“Noo.”,she retorted fast.,and sniffed her nose….The more we stay here.,she will turn weak…worrying about the past.,the time., we both missed to be together…

“Okay then….Mom will think I scolded you…come…lets go fast…”.,I left my hold and patted her shoulders ushering her…”Rattu…pls..don’t worry…it makes me feel
guilty..”,I said as she stood unmoving…she made a face,before stepping outside to verandah..

Words won’t convince her..only my decisions would!!…I understood…

“Ajju….last year..when I came…that Sarvesh said that he still loves me.,you left me.,and he will speak with my dad…I wanna kick him there…”,she animated a punch
before turning my side..

“Where?”,I chuckled.

“Huh??”,thinning her lips..she glared me..”There…where…sun never shines..”..,she pouted angry…

“Hmm…he will be there in ground…lets tease him..”,I said,sliding my left to her waist…

“Too much Public display…is not good for your image,”she remarked angrily.,and walked ahead.,shoving my hand..

“My cutie is too angry on me….”,I jogged a little after locking the main door….”Hey Rattu…I came for you…!! But you…”.,she was glaring at someone.,then me.. but..why…?..”Rattu…wassup…!!”,I patted her shoulder…

“Show off..!! I told you not to wear dhoti…”,she glared me…oh yes…!! That’s Pavi…Pavitra..!! The other side looking me…Nope..Ogling..

“Do I look that handsome..babbbbyyy!”, I entwined my fingers with hers as we walked towards a temple.,where bulls would have been brought…A walk with her in that mid morning sunny breeze.,admiring her look in my choice of Saree…An Ethereal Beauty she is!!

“Ajju…why so much crowd..”,she pointed, few men in left of that temple.,inquiring few,we got know..that few youngsters argued to take their bulls for bull embracing conducted in nearby village…!!..Usually.,Before ban.,our bulls would get driven to next village for Jallikattu.,where an arena is specially arranged with all precautious measures…Our fathers along with few elders were trying to pacify the youth bunch…

“This is why I said….not to bring bulls here…Ajju…last year too same happened…once Pooja was over…they argued…when there is no bull embracing.,why to bring those here”,She huffed annoyed…

“Rattu….don’t…what if someone listens this…it will turn a issue..!!…and how could you speak like this…”,I said.,with my attention on the gathering…

“Oh..why not…it’s harmful for both humans and bulls participating….they hurt bulls you know..”,she looked me irritated…

“Did you see them hurting?..have ever,our bulls got hurt…tell me…!!.that’s a humbug…will any cow keeper or owner would let that to happen?….The bulls we use aren’t for one day show..!!..We have them till its life…then how would someone hurt their bull,for winning in a single competition…even if it happens.,it should have,had a watch,following a law in favor of bulls but not through banning…!! “,I pointed her crisp…but still it hurts when people of same land believe those…

“Rattu..just with the news feed you read,you believed it…?? if once your bull is ill-treated in the event.,will you send it next time??…No isn’t…but here every year people get interested…means.,bulls are safe isn’t…A regulated bull embracing event will have no loss on either sides…!!!”,I saw elders to raise their voice…

She turned thoughtful…..

“Tag it as traditional..cultural event or ancient belief…but just look there…that place is where,every year village elders decide about jallikatu.,and they doesn’t simply take bulls to the ground,we do Pooja here….not only for cows but for bulls..!! they pray the deity.,have Pongal as offering..and take their respective bulls…Every person who participates..holds fasting (vrat) and we tie holy band.,(kaapu) until we finish bull embracing…did you forget me having that 2 years back.,when I Participated?? Its our culture Rattu…If you don’t know.,you should get to know…Few persons who I met back in Malaysia are aware of the rituals and customs we follow for jallikatu….but you aren’t…Why?? Being rooted with your culture doesn’t mean you are out-dated…We believe Jallikattu as a Ritual!! We worship them..we don’t hurt them…”,.I was shocked when I felt someone to pat my shoulder…

“Well said,Arjun!! Radhika…have you seen the place called ‘Vaadivasal’..the arch through which bull comes into the arena.,we do pooja there dear.!! Don’t mock that why to perform pooja everywhere…Every custom here,symbolically denotes that we ought to worship the pivotal lively creature that helps agriculture…Farming is not that cheap like you people think…Its the soul of a country..Our country!!…That’s why we Farmers throughout this country celebrate the harvest festival in same time…Cultivation place differs.,techniques differs.,products differs,but we are widely addressed as ‘Farmers’….!! Sadly..Farmers down here.,face a pitiful situation because of drought…”,…Arunan..Our Village President said nodding his head..

It was clearly evident that he felt offended.,why won’t he be.,while his own son left in search of job…

“Where is Arvind working?”,I asked just for a formality.,but never expected him to lament for next 10 mins…Something hit my back..twice..thrice..I knew its her.,throwing stones…

“We got just 3 days after this 2 years..and you..instead of speaking with me…”.,she looked around and picked a stick….

“Girls are watching…Rattu kuttyma….my image!..”,I stepped back.,not in fear,but to see her in action…Something which I had never experienced in our love..her possessiveness… “Are you possessive or possessed”,I chuckled when she glared a group of girls on our left…

“You are Arjun,isn’t”,Some girl who had a ill luck for the day asked.,and I laughed imagining Rattu’s reaction..

“No..this is his Uncle…That idiot Arjun,is on a world tour to protect bulls”,she ranted approaching me…

“Hey cool..”,I tried to hold her hand..Elders were still in discussio.,and we were bit far from them all…I saw the girls to turn our side…”Baby..they are starring me…”,I pouted annoyed,but that stick.,landed little strong on my thighs.. “Rattu!!”,I grabbed the stick and threw away…

“You din’t have a thought.,when you passed looks at them…2 years back..”,she folded her arms to chest…

How does and why she remembers those?!!…..I just did to rile her up…The gathering before our temple was about to disperse…,she still stood glaring those girls..God!!…”Am gonna pluck her eyes”.,she mumbled… They were more than 10 girls.,and Rattu is one fighter cock..!!

“Rattu..you aren’t going to speak with them…that was just a fun…”,I tried to move holding her elbow…From where she got the strength,to get me to her height..,She kissed deep on my left cheek,with her hold strong around my neck…Delighted with that.,I held her close and reciprocated.,cupping her face….Blushing cute.,she gave a winning look to them turning a little.,still holding me close to her face…”Happy?”,I asked in her ears..

Radhika’s POV..

“Happy?”,my cheeks heated up a little listening his husky voice…Gosh!!

“Had I got to know your choice of place to kiss..”.,he looked around.,and my hand lost its grip on him…Embarrassed with my act of kissing him on a open ground,I completely turned the other side..”Everyone busy with the happening there…”,his fingers traced the imprint of my kiss…He winked noticing lipstick on his fingers…

Was it that deep?!…,What got into me?!…Jealous..Envy or as he said possessed with my love for him.,fear of losing him.,something or all together might be the reason…”That…”,I dragged..while he gesture asked pointing his cheek.,I wiped his cheek with my saree’s end…

“Now.,you aren’t fighting with them”,he held my wrist and almost dragged me from there…”You bet me with a stick!!”,he saw me as we walked towards my parents…

“I was angry..You..”,my words were cut off when he turned to me completely…

“you dared to beat me..”

“Why not…You leave me behind this time..and….”,I saw my mom to march towards us…

Oh God!! ..I saw Arjun to smirk…boyish smirk.,that would make any girl to swoon…”She bet me Aunty…”.,he faked a disappointed look leaving from there…What nonsense.!.Was he any school going kid to complaint !…

“Why don’t you say..I kissed you!”.,I texted., controlling my hearing sense.,as my mom’s taunts drizzled down… “Good idea though!!”,he texted back.,as he climbed stairs towards the gathering….Huh!! his mind was stuck there….. What am I going to do with him??

Listening keen to everyone there.,he spoke with few youngsters.,while we moved to a ground nearby…It was just 11.30…The ground wasn’t wide, like that we went for bull embracing..,where the year and next of which he proposed me,he embraced more than 2 bulls each time…

“Well..we groom bulls for jallikattu..and you know,breeders rear them to fare well on d day….The virility of an bull increases after it plays active…fast heartbeats.,boosts hormones!!,..hope you know it!!….Especially.,till it crosses that end line in ground,challenging us from holding it…..They say.,that increase inturn helps for the selective breeding of that animal,,Cow keepers do note those bulls and choose them for mating..isn’t…”…I heard Arjun’s voice behind me…The topic din’t let me to turn his side.,as I don’t
know.,to whom he is taking this class…

“From January till march I think, this is conducted in several places,…the season is exclusive for bulls and cows.,so you don’t think of other things…Natural breed of cows is possible only with these bulls….We shouldn’t let them go extinct…Jallikattu is not just like a market place or showcasing one’s bulls.,it helps the animal too…The event will help the breed to stay extant…Look the healthier side that favors them….after all.,we humans have the ability to express our plea…”,I saw Ajju to look our bull,which was ready to walk back to our home….The same one which would jump in excitement looking the arena itself,stood chewing something..,turning into a showpiece…Ajju is right.!!…Even me.,who took biology in my 12th din’t look the way Ajju said…Those creatures void of ability to speak,silently suffer all this…The shield has turned a life threat for their breed….

I was pulled back to the day.,where one of our cow gave birth to a calf….Its cry,still has the power to shook me….After a long suffering of whole night.,it gave birth at dawn and none of them in yard slept that night.,worrying for it…as though expecting a heir in their family….I was a fool as Ajju said..I know the plight.,every person associated with cattle undergo.,be it any time..they do..No.,we do consider them as a family…More than a pet…May be.,thats the reason., half of our cows are named as ‘Lakshmi’.,denoting our love and faith….What if this ban continues.,we will be forced rely on interbreeding and artificial insemination…Oh God!! I know..Thats not good.!! They do serve as secondary mothers to most of the children..feeding with its milk.,when a mother is unable to…Atleast.,for this reason.,their natural breed should be preserved…and for that Jallikatu should happen….For the welfare
of our future gen…As a bio student.,I know a bit about interbreeds…God!! Why din’t I read the article,one of my friend shared about that milk protein…whats that….A2 milk and….

“Rattu…”.I saw Arjun when he shook my shoulders…”Why are you day dreaming.,standing under the sun.,”,he looked around…

“Ajju…Why don’t they lift the ban”,I asked but he was surprised to listen that from me…”Ajju…what will they do with those bull calves then…’cause..now a days they rarely use….”

“Slaughter…they will slaughter them”,he said before I finished…Why should they face such a day…!! In fact bulls love this game..I have watched it…No farmers or breeders let the boys to harm bulls…As Ajju said.,it should be regularized but not banned.!!…

“Ajju…now aren’t they groomed for jallikattu…”,my gazed fixed on our bull we grow…

“They are…!! we can’t leave that…”

“But..”

“Thats why…they want to have jallikattu here….even last year.,they had it though its banned…Bulls need it…”

I dint want to imagine that..A single word..’necessity for breeding’ is now enough for me…What if our ancestors were illiterate.,they had regularized the life cycle of the animal.,they had in their backyard….

“You over heard my talk with Sundar”,he asked…Oh…so that was Sundar.,one angry lad of our village…well.,a rebel….I couldn’t think anything other than bulls right now..

“Ajju…when will they let it mate?”,I spoke my mind..

“Haaaa….whattt?”,his voice brought me back to reality….”Mating?”,he crooked his neck to see my face… “After harvesting.,they let to…a main reason to choose this period.”,his clear voice with no tinge of mischief,somewhere held me back from looking his eyes…. I saw him to unbutton his shirt.,mentally face palming for asking this…

“Why..”,My voice got caught back,at his piercing look.,with a chuckle.!…Definitely..he isn’t thinking anything good….Averting my gaze.,I noticed the crowd little distant….”Are they going to….”

“Atleast this year..come there..last 2 years you missed the fun..”,one of my relative aunt said as she walked fast…Was she taunting me?

“You din’t”

“I din’t like to…”,I said…Every year I came for him.,with his absence why would I enjoy the fun of playing games…

“Rattu..this time..for me…”,he gave me his white shirt and stood in vest… “Simple games…I would only hit uri”,he said….He got a well toned body in this 2 years…Am too hesitant to let him play..but he loves to…”Jealousy Rattu”,he pulled my ear.,when I got his watch…

He turned more lively and energetic on ground..,playing with the stick….What made him love this village.,traditions..above all everything related to culture…but he was like this…may be I din’t notice…Always he had been a part of one or other thing…I saw.,girls to look him wide eyed.,the 6ft tall handsome with his white vest and folded dhoti,unaware of the havoc he is creating to the female population.,played stepping right and left being blindfolded..

A game to hit the pot being blindfolded…Tilting his head and checking every step with his stick..he proceeded further….He almost missed first time. .,but second time he hit the target…Before I could clap.,he turned my side undoing the fold and smiled wide…but why!! I could see everyone’s glance to shift from him to me…I had no mind,to put my hands together while the crowd applauded him..

He encouraged everyone to participate.,though I hesitated.,he pull me to center…gosh…I would never make it…I know…Still.,he preferred…women weren’t blindfolded.,since the game itself was tough enough…Missing two chances.,I was almost irritated..when he signaled something.,turning me alert….This is gonna be fun…!! I said myself with my eyes on him.,not on pot above…the moment he looked up.,I made a hit straight to the pot…and yes..I did it!! Raghu uncle screamed happily….He continued his talk with guys around,when I got busy playing the next games…If he is happy being like this.,then I should follow this…He will never force me to.,But I want to do,before he retorts… Our parents were enjoying like kids…

He wasn’t there when I walked for tug of war….Those girls were standing the other side.,and me with few ladies here…It was only for women.,and it was equally tough…I couldn’t even match to the hold of middle age women behind me…after a good 5 mins struggle.,we lost.,I almost rolled on sand in that force….

“Your dad will definitely scold me…why did you play that”,mom taunted adjusting my Saree..I couldn’t find Ajju anywhere….

“2 mins we din’t notice you.,and you went there…why Radhu…See…”,Nandu aunt dusted my silk Saree…

My mom was angry that I spoiled the silk saree..yes…It was his gift…!!..how can I be so stupid…when I turned right,I saw him coming along with few elders…huh…!! What this…I did play for him…stupid!…..No…he stood shocked looking me….Noticing those girls to giggle,as they passed me,his eyes narrowed at me…!!

What was my fault in this….this being a regular games in our village for those who stay back attending Jallikatu, is popular among ladies and children..this continues for 2 days too,at times….Village elders distribute gifts for those who wins playing efficient….As he was about to leave,my granny asked me to join him…oh No…!! His scoldings!!…I feared for…But he walked ahead with 2 guys and I followed him…Am so correct to imagine him with horns!!

“You should hold the hump.,in that case,you have no chance to get hurt…only if you approach straight.,you will be hurt…and never try to gain its attention by hurting or disturbing it….U should aim those bulls which gets ready to play…..shouldn’t jump on anew calves,brought to train…!!,”,he continued sharing his knowledge to one young lad..

That was a sweet surprise 2 years back,to watch him in yellow tees,the uniform for jallikatu participants that year…he dint even inform me..,my excitement decreased with time,watching bulls and boys in the ground…..what if my Ajju gets hurt…but No…he held the hump and moved along with it…when someone was about to be harmed,he volunteered in embracing that strong bull…The same girl,passed comments on him….uncaring,he was busy clicking pics with us once he crossed the barricade….”Scary kitten”,he pulled my nose…Drenched with sweat.,he hugged me.,when I was about to fight with Pavi for ogling at him…Every single thing of him fantasizes me!

“We are home”,his voice turned me conscious…My slow walk alerted a aged servant,and she helped to relieve my leg sprain…he was too angry to speak with me..

“Make them understand.!.Sarvesh…its our duty to bring realization….Lets wait.!!..say about Natural breed and necessity of Jallikatu…We.,educated youth should be the backbone of our native”,he came inside after asking them not to go against the rules…

“We don’t even have a place a conduct it…why so much advice”,I asked irritated..

“They need to know…No harm in sharing a piece of advise”,he said calm…

“You will leave in a week…why all this…”

“I am not leaving any soon.”,he said searching something…

“Really!!…then marry me and take me along with you”,I smiled….He turned me helpless to share my wish…I myself wasn’t happy with my words….did I sound helpless?? His palm on my cheeks,made me to look him.,

“I will.!”,he said.,and patted my cheek…

“Ah..Are you serious?…I was kidding…No need to convince.,”,I grinned forcible.,only to conceal my ‘ready to flow’ tears…Am not a kid to convince..I asked my right….Why can’t I be strong like him??

“I meant it Radhika!! Its a promise I made to myself, while I decided to come here”,he stood to his height.,saying those sharp…

My eye lids forgot to blink back tears,and..and…sh*t….Once again.,I embarrassed myself with tears…Why the hell….Noises of people in front yard caught our attention….He moved ahead and continued, sharing his ideas with few guys there….

“You can’t bring change,in a single day”,Raghu uncle laughed patting his shoulders…I still stood in same place…

“I know!! Sometimes.,it demands years to happen”,he saw me from there and looked our fathers….I lost my appetite…!!

Nandu aunty fed me,worrying that I got hurt…Raghu uncle,time and again intervened when my mom scolded me for being kiddish…My dad enjoyed the lunch..No…in fact the time.,conversing with Ajju…Ajju is my dad’s fav since the day he turned as a tutor for my board exams…He used to read his syllabus after helping me…!! My dad drops him every other day in college…His trust on Ajju is priceless..!! What will he think about Ajju if we say our love…and Raghu uncle…he never gave a look of suspect on our friendship….

Every other relationship will be affected if we inform our love…!!! Even a tentative reply or reaction will cost their happiness…

“Wake up”,I blinked when Ajju clapped before my face…. “Day dreamer!!”,he smacked my head and moved away….My dad laughed folding betel leaves…Oh! They are done with Lunch….Nandu aunt still sat opposite to me…”What about another round”,she winked….Sweet!! She din’t have her lunch yet..!!

“Aunty…I spoiled your gift…Am sorry…Am sorry for everything!”,I looked my feet…

“Radhu..what is this?”,Raghu uncle asked from behind.,but aunty hugged and kissed my forehead….”Why dear?…Whats wrong..?..”,she pulled my chin…”You both..!! Radhu..lets punish them..okay? Its because of you,my Radhu felt bad”,she glared uncle….

Turning it more into a reprimanding session.,she moved to have lunch.,as I went towards swing….I sat opposite to Ajju.,facing his right profile as he slowed down the swing for me…For my every query about Malaysia and the culture there.,he explained deep…So.,Its his nature to find the liveliness behind everything around us….

“Rattu…Most of the people around the world.,do stick to their tradition,you know….I admired this.,during my stay in China….We..I mean..you me…turn kinda addicted to ‘that’ which rules the moment…”,he said…

Yes…Value of every relationship which I failed to understand…”Ajju..Promise me that you won’t say about our love to them”,I asked finally gathering all my courage….Many philosophical quotes crossed my mind as I had my eyes closed….”I want this to continue…(I gestured his hallway)..I can’t afford their happiness for mine…ours..!! Please for me!! Ajju…”,I exhaled heavy and turned his side.,but he sat froze….”I did sound like a emotional fool…but…I am like this…I won’t take back my words…”..I smiled…

Once I feared he may leave me behind.,but now…I took the lead…His efforts to get our family back together..shouldn’t turn futile..because of me.,my tears…his words…’ sometimes change demands years to happen’.,expressed his yearn,to get our family back together…

“Arjun…Radhu…What’s the serious discussion….About today’s dinner?”,Raghu uncle came mocking…

“I..I was asking about Malaysia..”,I stuttered as I got up….He had stopped the swing sometime back which I noticed only now…

“Ohhh!! You forgot that I had spent half of my lifetime there…You never asked me?”,he fake glared…,but noticed our lifeless faces….”Any argument”,he asked alarmed.. .”Radhu…today evening…”

“Uncle…I feel tired….we will meet tomorrow…sorry”,I said feeble….I badly want to cry now,aloud…I had shut my love with my decision!!…He was still speechless!

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“So that was your….”

“Decision”,I completed for him.,when he stood next to me once we reached my home…. He came with us as our grand dad asked him to…

“No need to conceal your pain and thoughts…I ain’t that weak to give up our love…”,he took a step closer to me.,” My love!!..You don’t want our love to be exposed…Fine!! But.,you have no right,to ask me to drop it…”,his jaw hardened scaring me….

I felt my eyes to turn dry….”Now you are angry for…”

“Radhika!!….”,he shook his head negative….

“Ajju…listen….You want them to accept us half-hearted?”,I almost ran to match his pace…

“Why half -hearted?”,he counter asked turning to our backyard…

“That…we…”,my eyes popped out ,when I saw my grandpa feasting on sugarcane…uff…this old man!! Raghu uncle was there…Ah…When he came!! This do happen …Sugarcane competition..!! Ajju din’t bother to share a single word in that one hour…

“Ajju…Its just a day I will be here…better don’t hurt me more”,I said stern when he played with that little calf on my side…

He gave a mock look and smirked.,as he tied his folded dhoti..

“What the hell….I stay back for Kaanum pongal and I will leave tomorrow evening…Its not funny”,my eyes welled up….Dammit…why this salty water make its way even when am Angry…I took backyard steps to get inside….Both of our families had turned silent…I heard him say something.,when I crossed a room stepping inside…

“You never listen me…I told you not to fight with those girls…See..you rolled in sand like a puppy”, I smiled listening him…be it a taunt…let him!!… but am not a Puppy!! Let me give it back once he finishes…

“I literally made those salesmen go crazy,before selecting this Saree..and not even a day.,you had it good..”,he continued and I felt something to hit my elbow…Ah..Sugar cane!! He was the one who taught me to have it…

“And…not even a hour you can hold my silence…Tell me..Can you live without me? ,my thoughts…?”..he turned me holding my shoulders,to face him….

I bit my lip unable to answer him….So proud of his spell on me!!

“Don’t try to glare me…you look as cute as a puppy…”,he pulled my cheeks.,and held me by waist…

“Hey..”,I shoved his hand…

“Retort !!….Always a retort…When will you listen me….”,he stepped close with my every step away from him…Had he lost it??…I tried to peep to that backyard door way…

“Rattu kutty!! How about a sugary..juicy kiss…”,his words made my throat dry…I snapped my look to him,and he gestured his right…Ah…Sugarcane piece and kiss…Again!!!

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* well…Feed about Jallikatu is what I received and analyzed to a level before typing here…. I believe It isn’t exaggerated or understated up-to my knowledge…** Honestly I never expected the protest on this when I started this story….what to say…!! Co incidence…!! I just thought Ardhika and the 4 days pongal celebration….Due to my fever…My Republic day shot is pending…Someone remind me after a month…heheh…plzzzz******

So…How was it…Don’t forget to share your precious reviews….For thats my Boost and Horlicks!! it’s almost 1 at night….I had lost my sweet mistake draft…Kindly bear with me….Impressed will be done with next chapter….!! Next update may be Lil queen or Sweet mistake…Pls ignore my Typos and Grammatical errors…Take Care and Love you all loads….Stay happy and healthy !!!

30 Comments
  1. Brin

    Outstanding shot, take good care of your self, update when you are feeling better, love you and I’ll wait for your next update. 🙂

    1. Jessie

      Brinzee….thanks a lot dear…will do…thanks again…love you loads…sure dear…TC

  2. Sushie

    Amazing update jessie!! got to knw xtra info on jallikattu arjun’s veiw on the cultures n customs was superb rads imagination of arjun was awesome 😂😂😂 lol rads possessiveness.. Hitting arjun.. reply to that grl n arjun taunting rads were osum eagerly waiting fr nxt update tc..

    1. Sushie

      Woooooooooh I’m the frst to comment

      1. Sushie

        Sry nope😅😅

      2. Jessie

        Sushie….wooo…am happy with your excitement…really I too tried all this for few stories here..thanks a lot dear…glad you liked the episode….arjun..lol..hitting..yaa…one more to go….awwie…cute scene that was…glad that you shared your likes….thanks again…will do…TC…stay happy…

  3. Superb Jessie loved it take care of ur health get well soon

    1. Jessie

      Meenu…thanks a lot dear…thanks for the wishes dear…TC..stay happy

  4. Shree

    Adi sakka!! God!! This is mind blowing!! Sorry.. first time I’m commenting on this post and it be the second last update.. naa azhuren.. *waah waah waah*

    Choo cute ardhika.. aajjuu.. rattu kutty!! Awwwieeee… Haha.. Sarvesh.. kick.. lol… Yen maa inda Veri? Yara pati nenachiktrunda? Wow.. jalikatu pati.. lol she hit him… Avalo lovesu.. hehe.. the games.. rolling.. cute.. her thoughts keep disturbing.. paavum… Last epic… Made salesman crazy.. idu engeyo kelvi pata madri iruke 😉😉… Hehe.. too cute.. cute cute cute..

    Love you so much 😍😘

    1. Jessie

      Hey Shree…vaangooo!!! thanks a lot dear….haan…don’t cry….yaarum ninaikala….yep..over lovesu….happy that you liked the characters….salesman..enga kelvi pata…me too thinking…lol….thank you..thank you….cute endral inimai…love you tons girl…Stay happy

  5. get well soon dear.thanks for the update.

    1. Jessie

      Hey Maddy…thank you….TC.

  6. Rossy

    U wrote about whole process…thanks jazzzy…..that line I loved most is being rooted with your culture won’t make you out dated….awesome…superb…fantastic…waiting for next

    1. Jessie

      Hey Rossy…thanks a lot dear…glad you liked it……wow..!! Nice one you chose…thanks gaing…TC…stay happy

  7. Amaaaaaggggginnnnnnggggggggg update dear…loved it as always.Take care.

    1. Jessie

      Hey Swathi…thank you so much dear….glad you loved…TC..

  8. Aiyoo akka it took long to read.I loved it this will be my favourite part.about jallikattu arjun’s definition was awesome.I loved when arjun calls rattu kutty.thanks for such a long part.and take care of your health.nalla pullaya injections,tablets eduthukonga.don’t strain yourself.keep on smiling and rocking.love you

    1. Jessie

      Chahsu….so long…ena pana….!! Nxt time I will try working with length….Thanks a lot dear….glad u liked….nalla pillai…yes Iam….Thanks for ur wishes too….Ok dear…TC….stay happy

  9. Arti Viswanathan

    Jessie kutty superb, excellent, outstanding, mind-blowing episode….. I loved it to the core. I liked all the scenes…. I liked Radhika thinks horns with in the arjun’s head…. I laughted throughout reading it…. And take care of ur health Jessie kutty……. Tc loads of love to I from me and teddy hug to u…..

    1. Jessie

      Arti….Arti…Thanks a lot dear….glad u liked.horns…haha…will do…TC….loads of love……stay happy

  10. Gianna

    I’m so mesmerized with this update, so much was happening in this shot and I loved it all. Are you possessive or possessed? This still rings in my head making me smile, Rads jealousy, the games, Ardhika’s moments and finally Rads drops the bomb and Mr. Arjun Stubborn like I expected him to thinks about having a kiss with sugarcane, LOL this sounds so funny when am writing it now.
    Loved this update and love you Sweetheart

    1. Jessie

      Sweetheart…..Thanks a lot….!!Am happy u liked it…Thanks for sharing ur fav line.and ur likes…..kiss with sugarcane…hahah…!! U expected him stubborn…!! 😉love ur support dear.. love u loads sweetheart

  11. Anu-Annie

    hey jess akka, finally came back. Just finished reading all the parts i missed. God, i am lagging behind.

    Radhika, our sweet chasni is worried about their families. Aw. Don’t know whether to be proud of her or to face palm myself. This girl is gonna make me mad. So confused, she is.

    And Ajju, teasing female population, more like teasing Radhika. And i loved it when he said, he wouldn’t give up on their love. Proud of you, dude.

    actually i don’t know about jallikatu. so no comments about that. But God, i laughed when she beat him with the stick. Possessed, possessive or jealous?

    ah, u end it on a cliffhanger. not fair.

    but sweet mistake or li’l queen is next, have to check for their updates too.

    Bubye jess pi,

    i have missed u soooooooooooooo much, y’know.

    love you, take care.

    1. Jessie

      Heyya doll….how r u???? Glad to have u back….lol…feel proud…it happens…!! Yep…many may not know…!! The way the event is actually considered…that’s the reason I shared abt Jallikatu… cliffhanger…!! Ajju said his decision….sweet mistake posted….love u too doll…missed u too….tell me when u post ur next update….TC..stay happy

  12. Kavina

    Loved it, Take care. How are you feeling

    1. Jessie

      Hey kavi…Thanks a lot dear…TC….am feeling better…!! Thank u so much…Stay happy

  13. Jessie…how abt ur health.. Superb.. Loved it…. Loves all the scene…. Liked arjun character very much…
    Sorry for late comment…. Waiting for next… Pls update next soon…
    Take care… Stay happy..

    1. Jessie

      Hey Saran…..lil better…!! Am glad that u liked Arjun …don’t be sorry…!! Posted….!! Take care…thanks a lot my friend…. keep smiling

  14. Roma

    Wowwww. ..awesoooooome. …it’s really superbbbb update. …jesss..my SuperGirl…u wrote marvellously flawlessly beautiful. ..I’m speechless and overwhelmed. …can’t find the words to praise your amazingly awesoooooome talent. ..your knowledge for jallikattu, Pongal, bull embracing. ..wowwww so beautiful. …arjun’s words to rads had so much care for his land and culture. ..so sweeeeeet n beautiful narration. ..keep it up honeyyy. . . Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh Bear hug my sweeeeeetheart darling ♡♡♡♡♡♡ ;* 😉

    1. Jessie

      Roma di…bear hugs….!!! Tight wala…..aap itne sweet ho….ur comments for this story…u know…I was too happy that I even yelled aloud in happiness…first time..I got to reply u for this story….I read all ur comments for 4 shots so far…!!! My god…~! I was honestly impressed…when u said ur views abt Arjun…! Yep…tat he is…that’s what I want to convey…..

      You always get the extract of what I want to say…!! That boosts me di….!! Thanks a ton di….!! Am happy U loved the characters here…love u loads… bear hugs….Take care

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