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Home»Fan Fiction»Manmarziyan …..Hold my Hand till the last breath …. (Episode 4)
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Manmarziyan …..Hold my Hand till the last breath …. (Episode 4)

BhabyaBy BhabyaJuly 2, 201624 Comments4 Mins Read
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Chapter 4
Link for episode 3: Episode 3

ME: Arjun was all set to leave for Hong kong . His parents were counting days for his depature. Nandani started feeding him more of his favorite foods as she thought his son won’t get proper food there. Mom’s love is something we all want. Here Arjun’s mom love him a lot , but he thinks she over reacts in all situations. On the other hand Radhika the poor soul, who always starve for mother’s affection. She always want a mom. May god fulfil all her wishes.
She :
RADHIKA was sitting in a big beautiful decorated hall. It showed how reach they were, but they weren’t proud of it. Her life was a lavish one. She was sitting nr. The piano and playing her favorite tune.

“Hey Humnava mujhe apna bana le
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de
hmm.. hoon akela, zara haath badha de
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de
Kab se main dar dar phir raha
Musaafir dil ko panaah de
Tu awaargi ko meri aaj thehra de
Ho sake toh thoda pyaar jataa de
Sookhi padi iss dil ki zameen ko bhiga de”
Radhika :
I stopped in between n said ,”Dad please stop drinking, u know I hate drinkers. Being my dad how can u drink.”Her Dad stopped n said how can you know that I was drinking, I said ,”’dad I am blind but I can smell n your drinks smell is making my head paining.” Ok radhu I will not drink now but please u continue to play the tune it’s a bit pleasant. I smiled n continued playing. I learnt playing piano b my mo when I was 7 . We used to play piano together, the piano belongs to my mom.
After sometime I went to my room. N stood nr, the balcony. The cold breeze collided with my body making me feel fresh. After few mins the rain drop started hitting my face. I enjoyed the rain n came inside my room. After having my dinner I went to sleep.
I can’t sleep , I twisted on the bed . Finally I got up n took my phone. I plugged earphones n commanded my phone to play a song. I slowly went into deep slumber.
I woke up in the morning n after brushing I had my coffee.
A rjun:
My friends n I spend some quality times after that I went to home. I spend my few days at home. I started packing my bag. It contained 3 shirts two pants my important docs . if any body steals my bag then he would conclude that I was a poor. I sighed.
Me and dad started helping mom in kitchen. We would eat all the delicacies before mom could serve it. We like professional chefs will give mom some tips n mom will make faces. Then we would brust out laughing. Mom made my favourite rasgulla . at one go I ate 4-5 rasgullas n mom would say ,” Arj the rasgullas won’t run anywhere , u can eat them slowly n I would simply smile with my mouth full.
ME : Two beautiful and innocent souls will met together, they would understand each other ….

Arjun:
Mom i don’t want to leave u… n i started sobbing like a child. Mom fed my lunch n she also said between her tears, Babu don’t worry u will not go till u want. Dad was pissed of from our drama. He cleared his tone n said , Lets move towards the airport. We went to airport. After reaching airport. I left mom’s hand n she kissed my cheeks she was all emotional . Dad hold her from houlders n rubbed them to support her.I sighed n left n finally waved them from the glass window.All the children in the airport were looking at me. I was a bit embarrassed.

Precap: Arjun’s flight journey to hong kong and funny moments.

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Bhabya

    I AM A STORYTELLER.I LOVE TO DISCOVER ABOUT PEOPLE AND THEIR STORIES. EVERYONE HAS A STORY TO TELL,SOME SHARE AND OTHERS CONFINED IT IN THEIR HEART WITH ITS MEMORIES.

    24 Comments

    1. Gianna on July 3, 2016 1:12 am

      Nice one Bhabhu, post soon pls

      • Bhabya on July 3, 2016 7:44 am

        Thanx gia … Love u loads

    2. Brin on July 3, 2016 4:39 am

      Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂

      • Bhabya on July 3, 2016 7:48 am

        Thanx me in will soon post..

    3. Rossy on July 3, 2016 8:23 am

      Very good bhabu…quite fresh n cute concept…Arjun character mate bahut bhal laguchi…actually mu kinda bore ,tar dominating nature dekhi Ki max ff re…girls can b powerful n dominating…

      • Bhabya on July 3, 2016 8:49 pm

        Thanx Rossy Di actually mu bhi taku sweet n innocent chaHu this. ..?thanx for commenting. ..love u???

    4. Jessie on July 3, 2016 10:14 am

      Bhabhu.. arjun is soo cute n lovely.. he cried tat much to get embarrassed.. waiting 4 next update.. loads of love n TC dear

      • Bhabya on July 3, 2016 5:20 pm

        Thanx Jessie darling ? I always wanted arjun’s character to be a bit sensetive n

    5. S.v on July 3, 2016 12:34 pm

      Superb update subhadha. Radhika is longing for mom’s love and arjun has soo much love of mom . Let radhika get the love of mom and precap is nice . Update soon dear.

      • S.v on July 3, 2016 12:35 pm

        Spelt ur name wrongly sry bhabya

      • Bhabya on July 3, 2016 8:43 pm

        It’s kinda sv n thanx for liking it?

    6. Niku on July 3, 2016 1:52 pm

      Good one Bhabu waiting for your next one.

      • Bhabya on July 3, 2016 8:45 pm

        Thanx Niku ….?

    7. lakshmi05 on July 3, 2016 2:11 pm

      Nice episode dear…waiting for next update …luv u…tc…

      • Bhabya on July 3, 2016 8:46 pm

        Thanx lakshmi 4 commenting ?

    8. Sweetie on July 3, 2016 5:40 pm

      Hi Bhabu..Nice one dear..Waiting for the next..Stay blessed and lots of love..❤

      • Bhabya on July 3, 2016 8:47 pm

        Thanks sweetie love u loads?

    9. Rg2015 on July 3, 2016 8:55 pm

      Hi gud one. Pls update soon.

      • Bhabya on July 4, 2016 3:11 pm

        Thanks 9th…?

    10. subha on July 4, 2016 10:28 am

      awesome episode……..eagerly waiting next one .tc

      • Bhabya on July 4, 2016 3:12 pm

        Thanks Subha….???

    11. priya on July 6, 2016 12:58 am

      nyc one

      • Bhabya on July 6, 2016 11:06 am

        Thanx prints ?

    12. Roma on July 13, 2016 9:11 am

      Very nice, awesome episode. ..love you loads

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