Manmarziyan …..Hold my Hand till the last breath …. (Episode 1)

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ME: A guy wearing specs was lost in a novel by hennery jog n he was engraving his fav c haracter n author’s name by a compass . It was his favourite hobby. He was none other than Arjun.
NOW GUYS AT SOME POINTS I WILL COME BUT NOW ARJUN WILL TELL HIS STORY TO U….
Hennery jog Ah! What a writer I love his book and I love books. I can spend my days reading books. I don’t need people around me pass my days. Books are my best friends I can spend my days reading books as they give me better understanding of peoples. Suddenly I felt a tap on my shoulder I found its dad I was ashamed of my deed. I mumbled sorry dad. He spoke softly don’t worry nobody comes to this area except the boys n girls when… he stopped midway seeing I was blushing. He said let it be So lets go to home I have to go to factory also. I nodded positively and we left the library. After college I spend my days reading books here. Its is one of my favourite spot. If books were girls I would have easily dated them.Yay I know how boring I am let it be. Now coming to Auto haunting. I shouted 4 an auto , Dad reluctantly asked are u sure 4 ur decision . I sighed then continued yes dad u know na it’s a once in a lifetime opportunity. Dad said I can understand but ur mom can’t. By the way …. Just then an auto halted infront of us n we jumped into it. So dad continued ur mom has made Doi mach n aaloo postho . I said she can’t bribe me by making my favorite food. We reached home.

(Scene at or dining room)
ME: like every melodramatic mom arjun’s mom nandani was also one of the type. She loved his son more than his life. She looks so young that she sometimes look like Arjun’s sister.
Now coming to track:
The room was filled with the voice of Bengali serials . Mom ‘s eye filled with tears looking angrily at me n asking can’t u stay. U may get lost in that foreign land. I sighed it was not easy to convince mom but I said ma U know it will help me to make a career. Mom’s answer was ready she said u can make a great career here in Delhi itself . I said I’m going to change n said to serve food in my plate. Mom also understood that it was not easy to convince me ofcourse I m his son afterall a lil stubborn… hehe…
I came changing into half black pants n a loose shirt a newspaper spread over the bed had our food served on it . I sat facing mom n baba sat facing both of us laughing as if he was looking a comedy series. Mom was so angry that she did not fed me a bite from her hand. I know its hard for a mom to accept the fact that his child has to stay away from them for sometime. After dinner we went to respective rooms . I could not sleep for two hours as I was chatting with my gf (of course my books). How time passed I didn’t knew n slipped into sleep.
Me: All the best Arjun convince ur mom soon.

HI GUYS DIDN’T KNEW U WILL GIVE SUCH SUPPORT . I WAS OVERWHLEMED BY UR COMMENTS N PLEASE DEAR SILENT READERS DO COMMENT WITH LOVE URS BHABYA. Nxt epi will be on Friday. Hope to meet soon.

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30 Comments
  1. Superb start.. loved it bhabya.. waiting 4 ur nxt update

    1. Bhabya

      Thank u. Thank for the encouragement

    2. Bhabya

      Thank u di feeling lucky that u liked it

  2. Bhabya 🙂 darling this was amazing …waiting for the next one I love the narration 🙂 stay blessed

    1. Bhabya

      Gauri di thanks a ton for reading. By the wayy sis was asking me about how much ur story is finished?

      1. If ur asking about mmz i have posted it …

  3. Sweetie

    Well Bhabu..That was an awesome episode.. 🙂 Keep smiling dear.. 🙂

    1. Bhabya

      Thank u sweetie u r sweet like ur name

  4. Awesome episode, brillently well done. 🙂

    1. Bhabya

      Thank brin feeling overwhelmed by ur comments

  5. nyc…………..plzzzzzzz update soooooooon………….I particularly liked the title……………

    1. Bhabya

      Thank u aastha for liking the title n thanx for commenting

  6. Meghna shanti

    Nice update dear

    1. Bhabya

      Thank meghna

  7. Suga

    Its really superbbbbbbbb 🙂 arjun n his gf s awesome 🙂

    1. Bhabya

      Thanx suga dear for commenting

  8. Awesome, wowwww bhabu…loved the episode. ..so lovely narration. ..arjun’s gf…books…lol….nandini sad for arjun leaving…..loved it to the core. …keep it up honeyyy. ..will wait for the next episode, love you loads….muaaaaahhhhhh. … 🙂 ….

    1. Bhabya

      Thank u So so so much Roma for liking it dis much. Thank for the valuable support it means a lot.

  9. Its really nice…superb….very different kind of Arjun…waiting to read a different story in a new angle…bahut bhala…

    1. Bhabya

      Thank u rosie di

  10. bhabya you did a great work ………… it was really awesome ………….. eagerly waiting for radhika’s entry ……….. love you ……………tc

    1. Bhabya

      thanx for commenting but u have to wait for few epi please

  11. Its too cool bhabya dear… MMS creates so many good writers… Its really fabulous dear.. Keep continue… All d very best. ?????

    1. Bhabya

      thanx sathya di… love u bear tight hugs

  12. Its nice bhabya dear. When will radhika been seen and how will Arjun convince his mom ?? Update soon dear.

    1. Bhabya

      sure sv di love u

  13. amazing start dr..waiting for nxt..post soon..love u..tc

    1. Bhabya

      thanx ritu for the comment

  14. awesome episode….eagerly waiting next one…..tc

    1. Bhabya

      thanx subha

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