Manmarziyan – Hamari Adhuri Kahani Chapter 8


Hiee all im back. Thank you all my lovely friends, for your love and support you guys show for me . Please do comment your views regarding the same and i’m missing some of my friends please comment your views. Thank you all once again.

Enjoy the ride….

Radhika ; Meine kuch nahi dheka
Arjun ; Not a problem you can turn i have changed.
Radhika (Slowly turned) ; Sorry AM Just wanna ask you whether you are alright as the climate is a bit cold here and u were sneezing thats why.
Arjun (with a small smile) ; Rad….. i mean meera dont worry i’m fine just caught cold.
Radhika ; So you said you will say me about your wife??
Arjun ; Life not wife she is my life . Radhika was just blinking at his words. She brushed aside those thoughts and made herself normal.
Radhika ; Ok your life say me about her.
Arjun closed his eyes and thought of Radhika and every cute, little, fight moments came into his mind.(back ground music Jag ghumeya from Sultan one of my fav song and suits the situation). He was thinking about her and the song plays behind and those lines explains our ardhika perfectly .
Na wo akhiyan ruhani kahin
neither there are those soulful eyes anywhere,
Na wo chehra noorani kahin
nor that illuminated face anywhere.
Kahin dil wali baatein bhi na
there are no talks of heart anywhere,
Na wo sajri jawani kahin
nor is that beautiful youth anywhere else.
jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi
I have roamed around the world and there is no one like you.
Na toh rumaani kahin
neither there is that romantic smile anywhere,
Na toh khusboo suhani kahin
nor is there that lovely fragrance anywhere.
Na woh rangli adayein dekhin
there are no such colorful charms anywhere,
Na woh pyari si nadani kahin
nor is there that lovely innocence anywhere.
Jaisi tu hai waisi rehna
remain as you are..

jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi
I have roamed around the world and there is no one like you.
Baarishon ke mausam mein bheegi hariyali tu
you are the wet greenery of the rainy seasons,
Sardiyon mein gaalon pe jo aati hai wo lali tu
you are that redness that comes on the cheeks in winters.
Raaton ka sukoon bhi hai,Subah ki azaan hai
you are the peace of nights and morning prayer
Chaahaton ki chaadaron mein
Maine hai sambhali tu
I have held you in the sheets of affections.
Kahin agg jaisi jalti hai
sometimes you burn like a fire,
Bane barkha ka pani kahin
and sometimes you are rainwater
Kabhi mann jaana chupke se
sometimes you agree with me silently,
Yun hi apni chalani kahin
and sometimes you do only what you wish.
Jaisi tu hai waisi rehna
remain as you are..
jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi
I have roamed around the world and there is no one like you.
Apne naseebon mein yaa,Honsle ki baaton mein
in my fate or in the talks of courage
Sukhon aur dukhon wali,Saari saugaton mein
in all the gifts of joy and sorrows.
Sang tujhe rakhna hai
Sang tujhe rakhna hai
Tune sang rehna
I want to keep you with me, you have to be with me,
Meri duniya mein bhi
Mere jazbaaton mein
in my world, and in my emotions too.
Teri milti nishani kahin
somewhere I find your souvenir,
Jo hai sabko dikhani kahin
which I have to show to everyone.
Tu toh jaanti hai marke bhi
you know that even after dying
Mujhe aati hai nibhani kahin
I know how to fulfil (my promise, my love).
Woh hi karna hai jo hai kehna
what is said is to be done.
jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi
I have roamed around the world and there is no one like you.

Radhika ; AM now speak out how will she be. He opened his eyes and found radhika standing folding her hands and smiled and said “ She will look excatly like you”.
Radhika ; AM pls say me will she be beautiful ?? Tall or short ?? Fair or dark ?? Is she be talkative or silent , speak out AM please.

Arjun thought ; You wanna hear my heart right ?? i will speak my heart to you . When i said that i hate you you believed me but when i’m saying that i love you , you are not trusting me fine i’ll say you whatever i have in my heart . Even after that if you dont trust me then i have only one option to leave the world as i dont know what to do if you are not there for me because i love you so much radhika.

Radhika ; AM(in a higher tone to break his thought) Are you gonna say me or what ??
He nodded and asked her to come out with him to the near by garden. She thought for a second . She went out and came back with an umbrella.
Radhika ; Coming ??
Arjun ; Anywhere. Radhika rolled her eyes and they went out and she waved her hand to Rathore as she informed Rathore that she was going out with him.

They went to the garden and sat on a bench near by and both were sitting under the umbrella .
Radhika ; AM is your wife was really like me ?? Arjun nodded and took his phone and opened the gallery and gave that to Radhika.
Arjun ; See this is my radhika . Radhika was looking at those pictures . Her heart stopped by looking at those pictures, he had every picture of hers. He was silently capturing her without her notice and even the last day when she was sleeping. A lone tear came from her eyes and they were travelling through the cheeks. She without making him notice wiped her tears.

Radhika ; Say me how did you guys meet and what happened between you 2 ??
Arjun (took a deep breath) ; She was like a small firefly but she spread her brightness within me like a sun. She was smaller to me like here and he pointed the place where she would reach to his shoulder. But will speak at the level of over my head. Radhika laughed. Arjun too smiled at her and continued.

Arjun ; I didn’t had any one in the name of family . I was an orphan . A lady by the name of sister adopted me. Her name was nandhini . She was my god but she never knew the meaning of the word love. She brainwashed me to go against my own wish. She gave me what a boy should not get. She said she was betrayed by her love. Her only wish was to destroy the one whom she loved. I did as per her wish and she never showed out her face to the world. What so ever happens i would be responsible. Radhika felt pity for Arjun but did not show that out.

Arjun ; Then she came my life . Radhika…… (he closed his eyes and remebered her beautiful face and lovely smile that big brown eyes and long hair everything) Radhika was from Hrishikesh, she had big dreams. Hmmm she wanted to become a writer. She came to Mumbai to fulfil her dream. I was there where she joined. She was like a volcano full of energy. Always have faith in her dadaji’s words.She was a chatter box a nonstop excitement . Loves to help everyone. Does what is right and always fights for others. She destroyed her own life to save her friend. I wanted to destroy her friend in the name of revenge but she stood between us. I call her panoti .
Radhika (in a doubtful manner) ; Panoti ??? and laughed. But why
Arjun ; Yes panoti . She was my panoti because she stopped me from doing what was wrong and tried to save me from the beast who said that she was my sister. I was in the dark she brought me to light. You know we never understand the worth of a person unless we loose them . She once reminded me when i was in deep sleep that i forgot to call her panoti. Radhika laughed again.
Arjun (laughing); One time we got stuck in the balcony of a hilly area called Lonavala because of her stupid argument. She said “ If we shout thief , thief then someone would open the door” and laughed hard
Radhika (who was excited to hear what will Arjun says) ; Then what happened.
Arjun (laughed) ; We stayed the whole night in the balcony and laughed . She too laughed hard.
Radhika ; Then ??
Arjun ; Then what next morning when i woke up i cursed the sun because her sleep was disturbed because of the sun shine as she was sleeping on my shoulders, she was soo close to me . Her fragrance was demanding me to beg to her. I loved her the way she was. Radhika blushed but controlled that.
Radhika ; AM don’t say it in bits and pieces. Say it fully.

Arjun (nodded) ; Fine fine i’ll say . Our marriage was not arranged .
Radhika ; Then Love ??
Arjun ; What!!! no, no forced marriage.
Radhika ; Aah ?? Forced ?? i am not able to understand
Arjun ; Ya forced. I unknowing forced her to marry me as i was in deep love with her and i did not want to get married to her friend so that somehow i can free myself from revenge as i don’t want to hurt anyone but Nandhini was stubborn to make me do that and finally when there was a party fixed for our marriage celebration Radhika made Nandhini to speak her heart that she used me as a toy to complete her game and i heard that .
Radhika ; So then what did you do after knowing the truth??
Arjun ; I asked her(nandhini) to get out of my life as i don’t want to show my anger on her as what so ever she was she was my sister.
Radhika (with faster beating heart) ; Then ??
Arjun (looked at her eyes) ; Then i asked Radhika to stay. She listened to me and she stayed that night and that night i slept hugging her. I found my mom in her. After i lost my family it was only her who was for me selfless so i loved her from my bottom of my heart. I slept peacefully with her and that was a peaceful sleep i had after i lost my parents.
Radhika (with teary eyes) ; Then what happened ??
Arjun (wiped her tears and took a deep breath) ; The next day morning when i woke up she was not next to me.
Radhika ; Where was she ??
Arjun ; She kept a letter in which she said she is leaving me and she wanted me to marry her friend and lead a happy life as what ever happened was wrong between us and said this panoti will not cross my way hereafter and she left me. Arjun closed his face sobbed. Radhika rubbed his back to console him.
Radhika ; Cant you able to find her ??
Arjun ; (smiled sarcastically) ; I heard from one of her friend who traveled with her that she was dead in a bus accident of the bus which she traveled. But i did not believe .
Radhika ; Why ?? I mean if the friend is saying then how is that possible that she was alive.
Arjun ; Radhika……
Radhika ; Meera
Arjun ; Ya…… Meera see one thing she gave me this life by saving my life from the truck by risking her’s. So obviously we are connected with our souls. So if i’m breathing then it is her scent. She is everywhere in me , so unless until i’m alive she will also be alive.Radhika couldn’t control herself , she hugged him. He too hugged her back. He was so happy as she believed him. He wished that time to stop or his heart to stop as he did not want anything more than that.
Radhika ; I will pray for you to get your radhika back AM.Arjun who was longing for this was now happy that radhika started to believe him. They broke the hug
Arjun ; Will she forgive me ?? looking at her curiously for her answer.
Radhika(spoke her heart diplomatically) ;I guess she never had anything to forgive you AM. I think she too loves you thats why she left you as she wanted your happiness more than her. Arjun was in cloud nine for hearing that she too loves him.
Radhika ; Why cant you marry that friend ??
Arjun (smiled and thought she was testing him) ; How can i marry her friend when i love Radhika , i mean why should i marry her friend ?? I will find her and say her that i want to die only on her lap.
Radhika was just blinking and saw Arjun who was speaking his heart as she was able to see the pain in his face in which she lost her heart.
Radhika (gave her hand) ; All the best AM.
Arjun ;Thank you but one request….. don’t mistake me…… can you just call me once Arjun sir ?? Once
Radhika ; what i mean why ??
Arjun ; Radhika used to call me Arjun sir and i will fight to her and ask her to call me arjun but now i’m missing those words. So if you call me i’ll feel like she called me so that i will get full confident to make her mine. Radhika was just staring him blank and was not able to believe that she was Arjun’s life as she never thought that she would be loved by Arjun deep like this and she felt sorry for leaving him.
Arjun ; Please meera please……. she nodded
Radhika (Stammering) ; Aarrr… Arjun sir ……
Arjun (with tears and happiness held her palm); One more time then i wont ask you again.
Radhika ; Arjun sir….. with teary eyes
Arjun ; Thank you so much Meera thanks a lot. He ran inside the garden and shouted Rrraaadddhhiiiikkkkaaaaaa I love you…………………..
Radhika (silently and smiling) ; I love you too Arjun sir but make me fall for you so that i wont leave you anytimes and make me the most luckiest person of the world sir.


Neil entered his house and was seeing Teji and prena were seriously watching tv. He went to them and found they were watching serial.
Neil ; Not again , ma you killed me by watching these things in India now after coming to Canada also u did not leave that.
Teji (without looking at him and watching TV) ; Some times somethings cannot be left behind it will demand our heart. Neil was blinking and thought what Teji said and thought he said right i still cant forget Sam.
Teji ; I used to watch it and now i got a company.
Prena ; Neil shut up important scene is going. Neil’s eyes were widened . He never knew that prena would take Teji’s side.
Neil ; U guys are so impossible.
Prena ; Ok ok . Neil go out and eat we finished the food for us, nothing is balance for you have something outside and come late . We will finish our daily TV course.

Neil jaw dropped. He was starving and now bad news…. no food. He took the wallet and banged the door in an angry manner. Prena and Teji closed their eyes for the sound and saw each other smiled and said “Success”. Teji messaged that Neil left to Luna and they were planning to make Nesam a candle light dinner for them to speak their heart.

Precap – Nesam lands in the same place as per the plan made by Luna and Teji. Will sam speaks her heart out to Neil ??

Thats it guys for today. Was it long enough ?? Did you all like it ?? I knew i did not make an enough space for Nesam today but will surely do it in the next update . Love you all and i love songs thats why i’m adding songs in my update spare me for that.But my friends please do comment your views. Always be strong and always smile and bear my hugs and kisses too. Muhhaaaaa

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  1. Dev

    Hey sv…..a touchy ardika scene wen arjun askd 2 call him sir….n nc plan of luna n teji hihi……

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much Dev.

  2. Shravanrishi

    Sv superb episode such an emotional update and I loved it.

    1. S.v

      Thank you so much Sharavan rishi . Is that ok if i call you sharavan ??

  3. Zoya

    sprbbbb s.v i lkd d way arjun nrrtng d incidnts to radhika nd radhika testing arjun cute

    1. S.v

      Thank you zoya . I’m happy now

  4. Hey svswthrt….sorry for not commenting on your last update… Abt this one you treated me with a emotional ride…..almost you covered everything dear……their cranky bickering everything dear…..I loved that scene when rads spilled water on Arjun’s quilt…..nd then innocently replied that he didn’t called her panoti for many days ….you don’t know how many times I have watched that scene……I love you for refreshing my lovely memories dear……thank you for the beautiful rollercoaster I m in love with this plot……plz next one soon… you swthrt…..muaaaaaaaah… Tc?

    1. S.v

      Supriya my lil one no sry and all . Even i love when she said you forgot to call me panoti these days and he sleeps on the other side of the bed and she pokes him and he says dont you have trust on urself and then next morning hugging and sleeping. Oh my gosh i love that too. Love you lods. Bear hugs and kisses .

  5. Wow its awesome

    1. S.v

      Thanks Sana

  6. amazing episode ……………….. i’m still in tears………. loved the way arjun potrayed his feelings for radhika ………… waiting for nxt episode …………………love you ……………………tc

    1. S.v

      Aww priya thanks a lot and pls dont cry. Surely will update soon. Love you

  7. Brin

    Awesome the way Arjun express his feeling for Radhika, SV you nail it, well done.

    1. S.v

      Brin thank you so much. Thanks a lot.

  8. Omg…it was superb,mind-blowing…everything in it…Arjun expressed how much ge love her…now I don’t wanna end it but it got ended….?? twin u r awesome…all the three plots are amazing…comedy love romance u portrayed in a beautiful way…when will u update other two…m demanding enough…lol…??…be happy…have fun ??

    1. S.v

      Rosie u have full right to demand me coz we love each other so much. Well i am so happy as my elder twin always comes up with a big surprise by complementing me. Love you sissy. Always smile

  9. Hey sv darling hw r u ????? Awesome update & really emotional one d way arjun xplain to radzzz wowww man I luv it……. I had tears while arjun asked her call arjun sir grt…… missed u ponnie bear teddy hug fr u ……….. : )

    1. S.v

      Gayathri…. missed you so much dear. How was the trip ?? Aww thanks for the comment and please dont cry . I’m happy that you loved it.

    2. Trip was awesome dr I enjy’d a lot wit di’s kid’s bt my bad luck I fall in sick couldn’t able to read any FF properly becz of fever eyes r burning too much nw taking rest & plus my mble tooo …… 🙂

      1. S.v

        Now rest and pls take care of your health gayathri. Take ample rest and pls leave your mob for sometime as that too needs rest . Lol Love you

  10. Suga

    Sv dear aradhika moments ohhhhhhh gooooodddddddd am all emotional 😀 its really superbbbbbbbb dear 😀 arjun feelings really awesome 😀 loved it 😀 love u 😀

    1. S.v

      Suga thanks a ton darling. I’m so happy that you loved it. Love you tons. Muhhaaaa

  11. Sammy

    Nice update sv like ardhika ‘s convoy …pls update ur 2 states 🙂 🙂

    1. S.v

      Sammy meri pyari ladki thank you and thumareliuye i have made it half way through and will update max today evening and you can read it mad max tonight.

  12. sv really superb update dear…….m waiting for next post soon baby

    1. S.v

      thank you so much amita singh . will update soon . Love you

  13. hey…awesome chappy dear…i didnt get time to comment..coz we shifted permenantly to our didnt hav net connection and all…..did awesome dear….story was awesome…..keep going …i missed u and othr authors a lot… u…

    1. S.v

      Febs missed you these days . I’m happy now. Thanks again my candy. Love you lods

  14. loved it dr..aradhika was cute and herat touching…waiting for nxt..plz post

    1. S.v

      Ritu thanks a ton dear. Still yet to start. Will update soon dear. Love you

  15. Sweetie

    Sv sweetheart..Awesome episode..I loved the way Arjun expressed his feelings to HIS Radhika.. 😀 Next up Nesam date..Yayy!!Waiting eagerly for that.. 🙂 Stay blessed and keep smiling.. 🙂

    1. S.v

      Sweetie thank you i’m really happy for your words. Will update soon dear. Love you too bear hugs.

  16. Awesome update, loved Ardhika moments, loved Arjun today, eagerly waiting for Nesam candle light dinner. Love u ??

    1. S.v

      Gianna thank u soo soo much. Will update soon promise.

  17. Awesome 🙂

    1. S.v

      Thank u emz fasa

  18. Rg2015

    I loved it to d core, pls update soon.

    1. S.v

      Rg missed u . Thank u soo much dear. Will update soon dear.

  19. Plss read ff princess

    1. S.v

      Abc sorry but i am unable to understand . Sorry can u say me what did u want to say pls

    2. Can you plss read the fan fiction with title princess


    1. S.v

      Thanks a ton subha. Love u

  21. Jessie

    Sv dear.. it was fabulous yaar.. Arjun.. said his heart out., I liked Rads diplomatic answer..he is not one guy 2 step back..prena. n teji scenes were nice.. Rads is all super good in acting as meera.. waiting 4 day when Arjun will trick her 2 say d truth.. loved it.. eager 4 nxt update..

    1. S.v

      Oh my gosh jessie thanks for your love. Arjun is stubborn this time and Radhika will make him max possible way that she is not radhika and you have to wait for her to reveal as i still did not even think of the next part . Just gave a start of that. Love you lods. Bear hugs and kisses and cute dp happy feet

  22. SV Sorry darling commenting late 🙂 really stuck up about the update it was emotional love Aradhika moments now I want Radhka to fall for Arjun 🙂 loads of love stay blessed 🙂

    1. S.v

      Didi thank you soo much di . Radhika is sure gonna fall for Arjun but he should do that. Love you lods di. Bear hugs and kisses.

  23. My Sv darling. …awesoooooome episode. ..the song was incredible n arjun telling about rads was really very beautiful n outstanding, very heart touching….I just loved it to the coreeeee. …teji n prerna watching dramas.….nesam will meet…wowwww. .can’t wait for the next episode, keep it up honeyyy. you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh 🙂 ♡♡♡

  24. S.v

    Roma my spl you always make me spl with your words. Thanks a ton darling . Love you

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